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#1: Jan 5th 2013 at 7:34:03 AM

Inspired by Sf Debris, my brain thinking has been working again:

Setting: In the late 21st century, an alien ship was discovered on Europa. Re-verse engineered, in the 22nd, humanity expands outward. A large centralized Earth-run Federation controls many colonies (on planets and large space stations).

Well of course the good times can't last. The colonies revolt, war was beginning.

  • cue theme music*
In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory

the 'verse: In character, it's a science-fiction 'verse that is a tribute to the early "suck" of Season 1&2 Star Trek TNG, but after Growing the Beard, the genre savvy 'verse inhabitants end "Season One" on a positive note (getting more late season TNG/Good TOS Trek and Babylon 5). Think Trek, Evangelion, Babylon 5, Blade Runner and plenty of anime tropes and history put into a blender with the Rule of Cool button pushed.

Out of character:

It's the Show Within a Show of another'verse, above with the "writers" trying to comment on "current events" using the "show". Several of the main characters are cyborg/artificial humans who's place in society is used for social commentary. ((the "year" the show is set, in and out of character, is up for grabs).

I'm recycling some of my older ideas, but the Show Within a Show has a political and historical Does This Remind You of Anything? overtones. Yes it's a biting tribute to the early suck of TNG AND two science fiction writer/produces we all know and love. The "real world" is an urban fantasy type world with mutant powers and some magic.

Yes the studio is an "anime" studio in Texas. A dysfunction junction that's a Affectionate Parody of sci-fi fans, otaku, tropers, actors and producers. The studio employs mutants, espers, a Gumiho, a medium, a cosplaying witch and a wizard who needs to lose some weight and a Mormon.

And I'd love to open the 'verse up to others so the "studio" can have "guest writers" and "spec scripts".

edited 5th Jan '13 7:41:33 AM by TairaMai

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#2: Jan 18th 2013 at 6:54:27 PM

The setting for the "show" Victory:

'Droids, Dee-Bees, Biobots, Sierras (for synthetic), Synths, “Synners” (an insult), plastic polly (pussy), toasters, blenders, robots= In 2137, AI and robotic research and genetic engineering were advanced enough that some scientists had created living organisms and cyborgs. Andrea Fleming and Mohan Singh designed a “living machine” that would adapt to its environment, program itself and be able to replace robots and humans for many tasks. They had several prototypes, but no interest in the United Earth Government nor the corporations on or off Earth.

Then several star systems seceded from the UEG. Most were agricultural worlds but some had a heavy industrial base. Earth was in the process of “de-industrailzation”, removing most heavy industry and turning Earth into a “paradise”. Heavy losses and several defeats forced Earth Defense Forces to try anything to turn the tide. The cyborg “supersoldier” program failed when several defected to the separatist forces. Others were sabotaged or were defeated by separatists forces using power armor. The cyborgs became a fallback, many soldiers sent back to the front lines, their bodies rebuilt, but their minds no longer whole.

The Southern Cross and it's allied movements (Alliance of Independent Social Democrats, Stellar Union and Alliance of Independent Colonies, collectively the “Secessio Plebis”) waged a guerrilla campaign and a successful naval campaign. The EDF's Space Forces were holding the line and promised a victory after destroying the main Southern Cross shipyard. However Earth Intelligence reported the existence of several “stay behind” cells. The Secessio Plebis Liberation Army continued to harass Earth's ground forces. Piracy from several alien races (armed with weapons taken from both sides) stretched the Space Forces thin. A disastrous first contact with the Cay Union started a war that threatened the existence of humanity.

Enter the bio-droids. A CPU based on the human brain inside a synthetic body powered by a fusion battery. They could eat, grow and most importantly think like a human. However they are tougher, faster and stronger than any human. Even the cyborg supersoldiers couldn't fly fighters or fight as long as the bio-droids.

SPLA was defeated as their ground forces were unable to hurt the morale of soldiers programmed to fight. The bio-droids were able to successfully interpret and implement the Rules of Engagement the EDF had set fourth. With one glaring exception, most of the ground forces found many of the “troops” fighting alongside the bio-droids. Aerospace fighters, gunners on starships, bomb disposal crews, and other dangerous jobs had humans augmented or replaced with bio-droids.

Most humans on Earth view them as tools. Most colonists view them as tools of oppression. Even the super soldiers had a morals. Many of ''borgs defected to the Southern Cross (those that stayed were given the choice of “retirement” or staying on with the EDF).

Rossum Research Development Corporation (RRDC) now commands a huge share of defense contracts. The bio-droids serve as troops, pilots, navigators on starships (some are even the CPU of the larger ships), mechanics, support troops and most recently, medics for ground force units. There are still human soldiers and starship crews, but they frequently serve alongside many bio-droids.

Despite their advances, the UEG forced an armistice with the SPLA. The Southern Cross Mustered Citizenry took in the SPLA, deserting Cay troops and dissidents along with many aliens fleeing the war. Many alines and human settlements are neutral. They claim they want to chart their own course. There is a thaw in the cold war with Earth, the Southern Cross making peace overtures to the UEG. Realpolitik or another bluff? Earth wants to know.

Many colonies object to bio-droids in their space, others have purchased a few older models for their defense forces.

Bio-droids can serve as “enlisted”, and after of the Battle of The Painted Hills, they can command only in the EDF's Ground Forces. The Space Forces have nuclear weapons and most humans are very uncomfortable with giving an AI authority to launch nukes. Bio-droids are not property however. After that battle and the investigation, it was found that human error had compounded the bio-droids mistakes. Conflicting orders, the chaotic battlefield and the choice to withhold information from a unit of the 7th Ca

There are silicon based AI's that have become self aware, however they are limited to research, commercial robots and the civilian starships. Bio-droids can think and process information much like a human would, or so RRDC claims. Some AI “Purists” claim that the bio-droids are cheating since their brains are modeled (they say outright copied) from the human brain.

The cyborgs are still there, cheaper than the bio-androids, but not under direct UEG control. Many are veterans who's bodies were shattered during the war. Others had diseases that were difficult to treat or wanted cybernetic upgrades but could not afford them. They are not as tough or as loyal as the bio-androids.

However bio-droids are very much dependent on RRDC and human help for reproduction and development.

It's now 2371

...*cue theme music* “In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory

The ESS Victory is home to the main characters, it's the newest multi-mission ship of the fleet. A capital ship with fighter squadrons and an infantry battalion, it's a [[Military Mashup Machine do-anything ship]] the shows writers hope has lots of possibilities for drama and action. And the ASMR studio execs hope will sell model kits and action figures.

Aside from the main charaters, EnsignNewbies, and MauveShirts there are the aliens, politics and the scope for a good sci'fi verse.

edited 31st May '14 6:44:29 PM by TairaMai

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#3: Jan 31st 2013 at 6:18:29 PM

Since this is a show within a show, has the setting in which this show is filmed been developed yet?

I think that in order for the audience to really appreciate that style of humor they would have to be somewhat familiar with the kind of place and people this show is meant to appeal to.

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#4: Feb 1st 2013 at 1:10:56 AM

As someone once said "Welcome to the real world": After the 1960's, some parapsychologists started to find evidence of psychic powers. At the same time people appeared that had abilities most would call superhuman. This being the 1960's and early 70's, gas was poured on the fires of history. From the oil crisis to the fall of the wall, history ran a very familiar course to our world. There was a Cuban missile crisis, an actor became president, AIDS was a tragedy and the Cubs still haven't won the world series.

However, laws had to adapt to the new powers of the mind. Heroes patrol the skies and supervillains rob banks and plan mega-heists. There is a space station in orbit that houses 1,00 astronauts. Supersonic flights are common and Bill Clinton was impeached. Bush won Flordia after locking in the Esper vote. Despite the Esper Guild's leadership endorsement, Mc Cain would lose to a Senator from Illinois. Mutants and espers tired of a decade of war in the Middle East.

Humans fear mutants and have pitted espers against them. The espers remember the bitter fight for civil rights and view humans as greedy and mutants as unable to control their powers. Mutants are tired of being blamed for a few criminals and try to remind espers We ARE Struggling Together. They haven't forgiven the Esper Guild for Clinton's impeachment.

Superhero comics are fast becoming deader than disco, fantasy wanes a bit, but with people who's powers far outclass Hollywood SFX, some legends and fantasy works get the big screen treatment. Westerns are popular, reality TV follows espers and mutants. However depending on who'd bankrolling the series, espers, mutants, or both get exploited by their detractors.

Science Fiction is the odd duck. Stories of strange new worlds, time travel, robots and discovery inspire. Star Trek and Star Wars still got produced. The use of Sci-fi to comment on current events (and inspire trends) wasn't lost on esper and mutant rights groups. In fact Science Fiction conventions are an informal "neutral ground". Just don't ask if Han Shot First, it gets ugly quick...

Enter a medically retired Army officer and his desire to be the Gene Roddenberry of the 21st century. He opens a studio that hires mutants deemed "not pretty" enough, espers who wish to inspire hope, writers who want to dazzle the audience.

If Hollywood won't take on the issues, if the mass media wants to stay silent, he'd work around them. Instead of live action he chose anime. Using science fiction like Rodenberry, Asimov, JMS and others, he'd spread a message of hope, take on the powerful, take down the bigots and try to get lot's of google hits.

Now if he can just meet those deadlines he's sweating.

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#5: Feb 1st 2013 at 7:15:16 AM

Okay, this is a two part about the urban fantasy world's efforts to make movies and the events of the movie itself? (I stand by the idea of a separate story to first flesh out the world where the production is shot but you do not have to agree)

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#6: Feb 23rd 2013 at 10:06:43 PM

Arrrg!

Hard Drive Crash!

just bugs mejust bugs mejust bugs me

But I still have my notes and stuff.. T_T

I'm gonna be back, thanks for all your help but I have to move back to the states.

It's like computer bugs know when to get me...

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#7: Apr 21st 2013 at 12:05:23 AM

In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory

  • cue theme music*

Name: ESS Victory

Age: Built 5 years before the series takes place

Personality: Cool Ship on the outside, Dysfunction Junction on the inside, but she's got it where it counts.

Abilities: It's a warship, a Pintsized Powerhouse, The Battlestar only smaller than a capital ship.

Weaknesses:

  • What a Piece of Junk / Awesome, but Impractical: Victory's main problem is that the class was intended to be the Jack of All Trades, a multi-role ship capable of serving multiple needs and multiple missions, but ends up being a Master of None. The ESS Bernard Law Montgomery was “shrunk” down to make the Victory-class. They are supposed to be a bridge between a cruiser and a capital ship. Many detractors say Victory has the all flaws and none of the armor.
    • Too small for her engines, they nearly shook the ship apart at full power.
    • Glass Cannon: the main gun take up a lot of space in her bow, armor was removed to make way.
    • Lacks a proper autoloader due to the weapons and artificial gravity. The weapons took up space and the gravity system takes the power needed for an autoloader. The guns are“manually assisted” instead, that means crew have to move the ammo by hand to the guns.
    • Not enough room for heavy bombers/frigates, she has the smaller fighter/destroyers and scout fighters instead. Naval analysts think that this leaves the ship vulnerable without an escort.
    • The ship's sensors can be blinded by the exhaust plume of the engines. Her “baffels” are a huge blind spot at full power. The ship's sensors are powerful but again, armor was skimped on so that Victory has sensors twice the size of ships in her weight class.
    • The troop compliment is several times the size of a cruiser, again armor was “deleted” to save weight.
    • The compromise was to add more point-defense, however these systems are also manualy loaded.

Goals/Motivation: See the Tropes of the Crew

Role in the story: The titular ship of the series.

Backstory: The Victory-class are of medium-sized vessels intended for operations in orbit (and as orbital support to ground troops) by the Earth Defense Force. They are"envisioned to be a networked, agile, stealthy combatants capable of defeating anti-access and asymmetric threats in high and low orbit. After the last Cay Union-Earth war, the Ground Forces clamored for a ship to support small “Special Operations Capable” units to police the border worlds. The Space Forces wanted ships smaller than a capital ship (so many could be built) that could still be a threat to the Cay Union's Vengeance-class heavy cruisers. Those ships frequently outweighed and out-ran Earth ships; having artificial gravity they could outlast Earth ships on patrol too. The Office of Applied Sciences reverse engineered the artificial gravity decades ago, but the power requirements meant that only the larger ships could use it. They figured out how to use the newer antimatter reactors coupled with tweaks to the ship's engines that booted power output for sensors, weapons and the gravity system. At least according to the EDF press release. The reality is that the ships are described as too much: the engines are too big (maintenance nightmares), the armor too light, the weapons too large, crew spaces too cramped and the cost too high. Given the problems with the lead ship, it was seen as a career ender for any officer. What was once a plum assignment became a dumping ground for flag officers close to retirement. For the longest time the Joint Security Area was dormant. The latest Captain, Harmon Ross, is a mild-mannered man, sent to prepare the ship and crew for a five-year assignment patrolling the JSA. Ross says that he will retire after a year. Commander Alexandra Sima hopes to take his place, she's the current executive officer. The rest of the crew look forward to an easy cruise, Ross and the Strike Force commander, said this would be a “peaceful tour”

Relevant Tropes: For the ship:

The Captain: the first one is Capt. Harmon Ross, he gets sent back to Earth and the next Captain is Eugene Joseph Burke

Name:Chief Data Systems Technician Eliza Rai Strauss ZY-730

Age: 45 years old, the Bio-Androids created for the United Earth Government have a 200 year life-cycle so she's very young.

Personality: The Perky Goth, the chick, spaceship girl, she's the CPU of the ESS Victory.

Abilities:

Weaknesses: EMP: if it gets past the ship's armor, she's screwed Blessed with Suck/ Cursed with Awesome: plugged into the Victory, she is the heart of the ship, running all shipwide functions.

The Chick: as the heart of the crew she cares for them, but her efforts to mediate crew squabbles and balance out the tempers of the crew can fall on deaf ears since she's the ship's computer.

Goals/Motivation: She runs the ship. She wants to become the best ship in the fleet and complete her mission. No one gets left behind.

Role in the story: she delivers the sensor and ship related Techno Babble, she's Gwen DiMarco, only she IS the computer. She is a friend to Mae Craft AE-359, they were classmates at the Academy.

Backstory: The child of Master Chief Richard Strauss XT-923 and Major Gloria Whateley ZX-715. She was “born” at the RRDC labs on Mars. Her line-siblings work in combat engineering, naval construction and a few are CPUs. Her “uncle” Master Chief Zachary Whateley ZX-710 is the CPU of the ESS Essex. At the Academy she passed the pilot's exam and the screening to be selected as the CPU of the ESS Invincible. The ship was damaged and needed a new computer. She was with the ship for years, until it was decommissioned. Eliza was at the Office of Naval Research, helping them develop new systems. Her work landed her the job as the CPU of the new Victory-class. She got the lead ship, Victory. However the design compromises and rush to get the ship launched on schedule led the ship to have many teething problems. She's named after the song “Eliza Lee”, the r in “Rai” is five letters off of “Mai”, Gloria was in the 5th Battalion, 55th Infantry Regiment, the“Triple Nickle” with COL Mai Craft TA-347 when they were just Troopers. Eliza's unaware of this.

Eliza's Relevant Tropes:

Tropes For the crew:

  • Dysfunction Junction: the crew, some are sent to the “Icky Vicky” to get them away from their current posts.

  • ArsonMurderAndLifeSaving/SavedByTheAwesome: thanks to Mae and Gloria (and Commander Sima) they improve the ship's reputation, but it's still a warship in a bad area of space with a Military Maverick as Captain.

  • Crouching Moron, Hidden Badass: as seen by the Southern Cross, they make sure to assign their best Captain to counter the Victory.

  • My Country, Right or Wrong: The United Earth Government doesn't have a good track record with independent settlements or alien governments, but at least they don't shelter pirates like the Southern Cross or are AbsoluteXenophobes like the Cay Union...

  • What the Hell, Hero?: they get this a lot...

  • George Jetson Job Security: how the EDF sees the ship (and it's crew)

  • Ultimate Job Security: the truth, the crew may be screwups, but any other crew wouldn't last long in the situations they were placed in...the crew starts to suspect that someone made sure of that...

  • Bunny-Ears Lawyer: Dr. Harkon, Rebecca Song, Averil Craft, Mae Craft, Eliza, many of the NCO's Petty Officers and the gang in the engine room...

  • Mildly Military: discipline is lax in many departments, with the engine room and the strike force being the “worst” in the eyes of the EDF. The Replacement Department fixes that.

  • Nepotism: Mae gets accused of this since her mother Col Craft is an assistant director in the MIA

  • Vetinari Job Security: when the ship/crew is pulled from it's mission

  • Boarding Party: the MP bio-androids who guard the bridge are a defense against this.

  • You Had Us Worried There: everyone piloting, fixing or defending the ship has a moment of this...

  • Space Marines : the Ground Forces detachment, 507th Mobile Infanty Battalion,
    • Stay Frosty: their version is “Down to Earth”, the pilots use “Stay Frosty” the engine room uses “let the blugine run”

edited 13th Mar '14 6:43:46 PM by TairaMai

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#8: May 28th 2013 at 10:38:08 PM

I would read or watch this. Sounds interesting in general.

Who watches the watchmen?
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#9: Jun 29th 2013 at 7:56:06 PM

Some further ideas I've had (thank you MattStriker for the Rising Wave Stance) And Poisonarrow for "Schwitterling":

In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory ” *cue theme music*

Modern Cybernetic Combatives: The Earth Defense Force's term for the martial arts used by cyborgs, Power Armor pilots and their bio-andriods. The EDF's attempts to make a combative style to match troopers who moved faster and hit harder than a normal human fell into three major schools:

Panzer Kunst and variant for Powered Armor users Panzerschreck:

Panzer Kunst (“armor art”) was developed for Earth's cybernetic “Super Soldiers”. Using limbs that were harder and stronger, they used a form of grappling style with quick strikes to disable an oppent. The “Panzerschreck” (“armor fright”) form consists only of deadly strikes. Power Armor pilots, large cyborgs or the larger bio-andriods use quick powerful blows and strikes to kill enemy soldiers or disable vehicles. It is banned for use on unarmed targets. All users are known as Künstlers

Common moves and techniques:

  • Betäubungsangriffe (“stunning attacks”): quick strikes to stun or knock out an oppent.
  • Armverschluß (also written Armverschluss “Arm Lock“) : arm bars or other restraining moves.
  • Bodenkontrolle (“Ground Control”): positioning and restraing someone on the ground
  • Elbogen-Blatt ("Elbow Blade"): the first super-soldiers were given arm blades and the term stuck to refer to all arm and limb mounted weapons.
  • Äußere Grenzen (also written Ausser Grenzen , "Outer Limts"): to torque the body and/or limbs to face an opponent, make an attack or defect an attack
  • Schwitterling- a method of ambush attack, spreading out the body to act as a parachute when dropping from helicopters/roofs/ceilings. Upon reaching the target, the limbs are extended and whipped around the target's, stripping away weapons and locking joints.
  • Panzerschreck adds the use of weapons and can be practised as part of a live fire exercise. All strikes are lethal.

Bastone Meccanica:

(lit. “mechanical stick”) was developed by RRDC's Euro branch with help from the Carabinieri of EDF's European Command. It focuses on crowd control and disarming techniques. Strikes are made with an open palm mostly to nerve clusters. Lethal strikes are done as a last resort.

Common moves and techniques:

  • Pazzini block/strike = blocking or hitting with a blunt blade to stun or disable an opponent.
    • Arma Rotto (“weapon broken”, from a notation made during testing): hitting a weapon to take it or destroy it but spare the attacker.
  • Gladius: a lethal strike with a pointed arm, finger or other appendage. Done to take an attacker down.
  • Folgore: A varation of the “ Rising Wave Stance”, the attacker lands on a vehicle and either crushes the engine of a soft skinned vehicle or smashes the turrent of an armored one using mass and momentum to do the most damage to moving parts.

Amaha Style:

a development by the JSDF and RRDC Tokyo, this style focuses on tournament and training in addition to fighting. It was a refinement of Bastone Meccanica so that RRDC can both showcase their flagship product and train bio-andriods.

Common moves and techniques:

  • Rising Wave Stance: Shifting extra mass to your hands or feet at the moment of impact, effectively adding the strength of the shift to the strike. Likewise, shifting mass away from incoming hostile strikes.
  • Receding Wave Stance: Shifting mass away from an area to protect it or to flow into a Rising Wave Stance.
  • Taiho jutsu (“arresting art”): throwing, trapping, joint locks, holds, gouging, disengagements, striking, and kicking. When used in a tournament setting, all blades are blunt and the moves are graded in terms of effectiveness.

In contrast, Southern Cross uses a modified Jeet Kun Do called Espada and Panzer Kunst taught by EDF defectors. The Cay Union simply uses ranged combat.

Edited by TairaMai on Feb 18th 2022 at 11:43:26 AM

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#10: Jun 29th 2013 at 9:20:14 PM

Panzer Kunst also makes a showing in Battle Angel Alita.

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#11: Jun 30th 2013 at 7:50:28 AM

[up][up] There were three Shout Outs in my post.

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#12: Jul 1st 2013 at 6:15:15 PM

I saw that after the fact. I forgot Gunnm is Battle Angel Alita.

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#13: Jul 1st 2013 at 6:23:30 PM

Next up will be a breakdown of the Earth Defense Force, the Southern Cross Mustered Citizenry and the Cay Union's War Fleet: the major combatants of the 'verse.

For now enjoy these descriptions of two of the alien races...

edited 1st Jul '13 6:25:53 PM by TairaMai

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#14: Jul 1st 2013 at 6:25:09 PM

In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory ” *cue theme music*

Okay, here's one species from my setting, the Martissans:

Green-Skinned Space Babe: A Deconstruction, they are beautiful by human standards, looking lithe with wiry muscles and very pale skin. An entire race that was Made a Slave by another species they call “The Masters”. When the Cay Empire invaded, they killed all the masters and tried to take their place. The Empire failed and then humans showed up to free the Martissans for good.

Their eyes appear to be a solid black or blue, in reality the iris and sclera are almost the same color, if they are close a human can see the iris and pupil. This gives them what appears to be Black Eyes of Evil. Their skin is ''very'' pale, when they tan they turn bluish with exposure to ultraviolet light. It quickly reverts back to pale. Their resting body temperature is five degrees colder than a humans and they can become cold-blooded (end-thermic) at night. Martissans have a shorter lifespan than humans, their max lifespan is ~70 years, with average life expectancy ~50-55. Needless to say, human-martissan marriages have problems. Their Bizarre Alien Biology and short lifespans seem to have been limitations put in by the “Masters”.

Due to their biology and social nature, they have promiscuity, Polyamory, Open Relationships, and Friends with Benefits. Marrages can have 3-5 spouses of either sex, both genders raise children.

Due to cultural differences, biology (no human has had offspring with a Martissan) and legal issues (in UEG space mostly), there are few human-Martissan marriages.

The Cay Union (the successor to the Cay Empire ) still uses them as cheap labor and oppresses them. The United Earth Government treats them about as well as most minority groups have been on Earth. Many live in Martissan only communities or other “Alien Sectors” on Earth controlled planets. Southern Cross grants them equal rights along with humans, Cay and other aliens living on their worlds. Martissans still face discrimination there, but at least in the SC the laws and the courts are not stacked against them.

When the Martissans were found, most were in a technology level roughly that of 1930's Earth: they used animals as beasts of burden. The "Masters" and their alien slavers used vehicles, starships and Powered Armor. Cay and Human scientists think that the Masters just enjoyed having slaves.

The Cay Empire continued that tradition, restricting technology (including medicine) until the Martissans (and some of the slavers) revolted. Having killed off the Masters, the Cay Empire (and the Union) didn't know how to "control" the Martissans.

Those Martissans in human space (The UEG and the Southern Cross) are eager to learn as much as they can. Some of the younger generations tend to spend money on trinkets and entertainment, but the older Martissans are quick to remind them of the price their people paid for not learning how to use technology.

"The Masters" are all gone, killed off by the Cay. What techniques did they use to enslave an entire people for thousands of years? No one knows.

edited 1st Jul '13 6:34:44 PM by TairaMai

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#15: Jul 1st 2013 at 6:25:28 PM

In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory ” *cue theme music*

Okay, here's one species from my setting, the Cay:

A species with three hats: Proud Warrior Race Proud Scholar Race and Proud Merchant Race.

The Cay are humanoid aliens in that they have a human shape. They are Heavyworlders who are the descendants of a pangolin/porcupine-esque mammaliod. This gives them permanent anime hair. Their skin ranges from a deep reddish brown to purple to black due to their sun and the worlds they have colonized. Their skin is very tough, the scale-like plates have softened to skin but the outlines can still be seen. Some have quills in their hair, the tips blunt. Those raised on the homeworld are shorter than the human norm, those raised in space or on lower gravity colony worlds are as tall as the average human.

Their homeworld was a death world, poisonous plants, fierce predators, their dinosaurs didn't quite die out. They have quite a few large birds (some with teeth) that figure in their mythology and culture. Because of this, they have a membrane that seals off punctures to their chest. They clot much faster and their immune response is quicker, they have a lower risk for gangrene. They have a high tolerance for certain poisons due to the plants of their homeworld. In fact their natural skin oils can cause a human to break out in hives if he or she touches a Cay.

Their rough world led to a focus on fighting for resources. Their are social creatures. Unlike the other species humans have encountered, they quickly establish who's boss. They crave order. Klingon Promotion is a common theme in their culture.

As they expanded, those Cay further from Homeworld became more liberal. Contact with other races cause those Cay living abroad to question the rulers of their colonies and the Emperor of their homeworld. Taking their off-world conquests was one thing, running a star spanning empire something else. Their warriors were drawn from the three castes: workers the lower ranking soldiers, merchants the technicians and the scholars the officers and religious leaders.

After several Emperors were either overthrown, assassinated or proved unable to run the Empire, a group of merchants and scholars banded together units under their command. Backed by the workers who saw their labor going to waste in the Empire’s decline, they overthrew the Emperor. The Cay Union would have an elected council that rotated among the various families, worlds and the three castes.

The Cay off-world were enjoyed the lack of Imperial control. Many families and minority groups flourished far from the persecution of the Empire. They didn't want the Union's Guardians kicking down their doors and dragging them away to the secret courts the Union was setting up.

The Cay are now divided into two groups:

The Cay Union is located on the world the CU simply called “Homeworld”. In their language , Cay means “People”, the title of the state means “Union of the People”. It's a People's Republic of Tyranny, Red China by way of Nazi Germany to the tune of NineteenEightyFour. All government is run by the Ruling Council who in turn controls the Synod (a house of representatives) who in turn controls the military. In reality, the Merchants set economic policy, the Military sets foreign policy and the rest of the people sing the praises of the Union. Large industry is owned by the Synod (and by extension the Union) but most small business are privately held. Merchants trade with other races freely, knowing that the Union's War Fleet will not only protect them but make sure the customer pays the bills. The Union's Committee to Advance Virtue and Eliminate Vice controls all Cay living in the Union. Family sizes, art, culture, all regimented and strictly regulated. A member of the CU will be born, grow up and die with every waking moment planned, outlined and scripted by the Union's scholars. Union culture and society is tightly controlled, “Peace and Unity through conformity” as the Union scholars put it. There is a police force and the Guardians who handle all “political crime” and intelligence. Outside of research into military technology and medicine, scholarship is stagnant.

Thanks to their fantastic immune response, the Cay Union uses cybernetics on their soldiers. From drug implants to full exoskeletons, the options are only limited to what the Union's military needs. Of course no soldier or crewman can refuse cybernetics. Rumors abound that some of the implants are rigged to explode to prevent capture or mutiny.

Their high tolerance for toxins has backfired. Rampant unchecked heavy industry has led to terrible pollution. Fertility rates for the factory worlds in the Union are dipping down. The Union has instituted mandatory motherhood as a result. Not that it's fixing the problem. No one in the Union dares criticize the industry that fuels the Union's war machine and brings in hard currency from interstellar trade.

Cay living in the Southern Cross:

Those Cay living in the Southern Cross may hate their foul smelling human neighbors, but at least they have freedom. LGBT Cay know that they won't be dragged to a Committee firing squad, since the Union is made up of violent Heteronormative Crusaders. Unlike the Union, Cay artists are free to pursue their craft in the SC. Scholars can truly study knowledge for its own sake, unshackled by politics. Workers may strike (something they learned from the humans and Martissans in the SC), bargain with management or change jobs. Many free Cay even have human friends, but they will never marry a human. Many serve in the Southern Cross Mustered Citizenry. Several high ranking SCMC officers are Cay with various species under their command.

While they may crave order and discipline, concepts like democracy and freedom were quickly embraced. Living outside the iron fist of the Union and being allowed to think for themselves has expanded their lives and even their vocabulary. Most of the Cay in the Southern Cross are taller, healthier and speak a different dialect than those Cay in the Union.

The Cay are one of five species that the United Earth Government bans from it's colonies.

edited 1st Jul '13 6:36:34 PM by TairaMai

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#16: Jul 3rd 2013 at 7:38:28 PM

In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory ” *cue theme music*

United Earth Government: The Earth Defense Force

In 2078 something was discovered under the ice of Europa. Jupiter Station was mostly a science outpost run by various governments that was on the verge of being shut down. What the probes found was a starship of alien design. With some work Earth's scientists were able to get working. Humanity was united at the prospect of faster than light travel and that there was intelligent life in the universe.

In the centuries that followed, the United Nations took more and more control of Earth's affairs. Resources were collected, corporations expanded to meet the needs of an expanding humanity. All was not well in the heavens. Many colonies were founded by those wishing to leave Earth and it's problems. The new United Earth Government made attempts at reform. However several star systems seceded from the UEG. Most were agricultural worlds but some had a heavy industrial base. Earth was in the process of “de-industrialization”, removing most heavy industry and turning Earth into a “paradise”. Heavy losses and several defeats forced Earth Defense Forces to try anything to turn the tide. The cyborg “supersoldier” program failed when several defected to the separatist forces. Others were sabotaged or were defeated by separatists forces using power armor. The cyborgs became a fallback, many soldiers sent back to the front lines, their bodies rebuilt, but their minds no longer whole.

The Southern Cross and it's allied movements (Alliance of Independent Social Democrats, Stellar Union and Alliance of Independent Colonies, collectively the “Secessio Plebis”) waged a guerrilla campaign and a successful naval campaign. The EDF's Space Forces were holding the line and promised a victory after destroying the main Southern Cross shipyard. However Earth Intelligence reported the existence of several “stay behind” cells. The Secessio Plebis Liberation Army continued to harass Earth's ground forces. And then it happened.

Piracy from several alien races (armed with weapons taken from both sides) stretched the Space Forces thin. A disastrous first contact with the Cay Union started a war that threatened the existence of humanity. Humanity first met the Cay Union as the Cay Empire collapsed and they lost control of their colonies and their Martissan “workers”. The Cay Union quickly turned on Earth, renouncing the treaty signed by the Empire. The Cay Union's massive war fleet was stopped at Io.

The Earth Defense Forces are the military command charged with the defense of Earth and it's colonies. They are split into the Ground Forces Command and Space Forces Command. The Colonial Defense Forces Command is the reserve, charged with the colonies and on some worlds, runs all law enforcement and public health.

What sets the EDF apart from other militares are the bio-andriods. Transhuman, CyborgRobot Drones”. A CPU based on the human brain inside a synthetic body powered by a fusion battery. They could eat, grow and most importantly think like a human. However they are tougher, faster and stronger than any human. Even the cyborg supersoldiers couldn't fly fighters or fight as long as the bio-droids. Bio-droids can serve as “enlisted” or pilots in the space forces, they can command only in the EDF's Ground Forces. The Space Forces have nuclear weapons and most humans are very uncomfortable with giving an AI authority to launch nukes.

Humans, cybernetic “super soldiers”,bio-andriods and those aliens living in UEG controlled space can serve in the EDF.

Relevant Tropes:

  • Earth Is a Battlefield: Happened twice, both time the Cay Union War Fleet was stopped by an all out attack.

  • Interservice Rivalry: The Space Forces say the Ground Forces are too large, the Ground Forces complain that the Space Forces don't give them enough support. The Marines and Special Forces Command say that the regular ground troops count on them too much. The CDF is told to sit in the corner until the adults are done talking...

  • Ace Pilot: Large fighters and small warships are interchangeable, many ship captains got their start as pilots, bio-androids are stuck as pilots however and can't be promoted to Captain of a warship.

  • Consummate Professional: The EDF's image in recruiting vids. The Southern Cross views them as a blood thirsty army of oppression.

  • Do-Anything Soldier/ Super-Soldier : Bio-androids are built on this trope.

  • Powered Armor: various versions exist and are used along with:

  • The Political Officer: Undercover operatives of the Military Intelligence Agency protect EDF units from theft, sabotage and “subversive actions”.

  • Space Marine: The Ground Forces Command is the “Army” of the EDF, but they can serve in space. Most are brigade sized units that ride in large Space Forces transport ships. There are “Special Operations Capable” Battalion sized units, but they are just rapid reaction forces. On the larger space stations, the Ground Forces (or the EDF Marines) provide the security.
    • The EDF Marine Corps is a smaller force that is both a legacy of Earth's past and plays a vital role. EDF Marines are elite shock troops. They are in battalion sized formations that can operate independently. Unlike the Special Operations Capable Ground Forces units, they can operate in space and on the ground. They are tasked with securing drop zones for EDF units and seizing space stations.
    • The EDF's Joint Special Operations Command is made up of Space and Ground Forces Units that are small elite units. Many teams are made up entirely of bio-androids and cybernetic soldiers.

  • "Join the Army," They Said: “Join the EDF and see the Universe.”
    • “Just remember that most of it hates you.”
    • “I joined and all I saw was a bulkhead.”
    • “Meet new life and blow large holes in it.”
    • "And All I Got Was This Lousy T-Shirt."

  • Home Guard / Red Shirt Army: Colonial Defense Forces, the “speed bump”. They are to hold the line until EDF units get there. The CDF gets older equipment, has older members or in some cases what ever personnel are on hand.

  • Attack Drone: there are the standard robots, legally the bio-androids are considered drones.
  • Drop Ship: most double as cargo ships and medivac
  • Mobile Base: Some space stations are just large slow starships.
  • Standard Sci-Fi Army: The Ground Forces
  • Standard Sci-Fi Fleet: Mostly, there are a few “battleships” lots of cruisers and many multi-mission ships
    • Fighters and small ships have merged: if it's crewed by machines or bio-androids it's a fighter, if it can carry shuttles and land on a planet it's a frigate. Bomber and Destroyer are almost interchangeable (bombers are “missile/torpedo” boats).
  • Military Salute: Depending on the history of the unit or ship this can vary. The Colonial Defense Forces are famous for their Mildly Military protocol.

  • Kinetic Weapons Are Just Better: The EDF's stanard infantry rifles somewhat similar to the 20th and 21st century assault rifles. However the EDF adds mini-computers for "smart rounds" and DNA-locks on pistols.
    • Heavy weapons include lasers, "smart" missiles and magnetic rifles along with machine guns.
    • Bio-Androids and Power Armor use assault rifles like pistols, a LMG is their standard assault rifle. Many carry vehicle mounted weapons or use them as sniper rifles.

  • Remember the Alamo: “The Battle of Europa”, when the Earth almost fell, “The Battle of the Painted Hills”, where a landmark case granted bio-androids civil rights.

  • Fantastic Racism: A serious problem in the EDF. Some humans "don't mix with the aliens", others don't like aliens serving in the EDF at all.
    • Others don't like the bio-androids.

edited 24th Jul '13 9:34:17 PM by TairaMai

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#17: Jul 4th 2013 at 4:27:18 PM

In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory ” *cue theme music*

The Southern Cross

As the nations of Earth sent colonists to the stars, many people sought freedom. Others wanted a new start. Eventually old tensions flared. Companies exploited their workers, corruption ran rampant as Earth appointed “ruling councils” mismanaged colonies. As humanity met with other alien species, the new United Earth Government began to take steps to “secure the borders”.

The colonies rebelled. Many were tired of paying taxes to a distant Earth, others wanted self government. The Southern Cross and it's allied movements (Alliance of Independent Social Democrats, Stellar Union and Alliance of Independent Colonies, collectively the “Secessio Plebis”) waged a guerrilla campaign and a successful naval campaign. The EDF's Space Forces were holding the line and promised a victory after destroying the main Southern Cross shipyard. However Earth Intelligence reported the existence of several “stay behind” cells. The Secessio Plebis Liberation Army continued to harass Earth's ground forces.

The Cay Empire, and latter the Cay Union, supported the Southern Cross. Ships, material and war supplies poured in. The Southern Cross and the Cay pushed Earth back. The Cay Union continued on and tried to invade Earth. The Edf pushed them back and then attempted to “punish” the Southern Cross. Officially the Southern Cross was “neutral”, unofficially opinion was divided. Some though that Earth got what it deserved. The Cay Union never forgot however. Relations between the Southern Cross and the Union have cooled.

Currently The Southern Cross Mustered Citizenry (SCMC) consists of the Army and Navy. They are tasked with keeping the EDF away and keeping an eye on their “allies” in the Cay Union. All sentient beings living in the Southern Cross are able to serve in the military.

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edited 5th Jul '13 12:23:18 PM by TairaMai

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#18: Jul 4th 2013 at 5:01:39 PM

I saw Eearth Defense Force. All i could think of was fighting giant bugs. The troops shouting EDF! EDF! EDF!

Who watches the watchmen?
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#19: Jul 4th 2013 at 10:18:17 PM

[up]Giant bugs? Oh they might show up...waii

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#20: Jul 5th 2013 at 6:18:45 AM

In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory ” *cue theme music*

Not quite an alien species but an "offshoot" of humanity:

The bio-andriods were created by RRDC because the cybernetic "Super Soldiers" proved to be just as human as Earth's regular soldiers. Many defected to the Southern Cross, others suffered from PTSD. Robots and AI's proved to be unable to adapt to the modern battlefield.

So a synthetic organism was developed that was programmable yet adaptable A CPU based on the human brain inside a synthetic body powered by either a fusion battery or biochemical processes. They could eat, grow and most importantly think like a human. However they are tougher, faster and stronger than any human. Even the cyborg supersoldiers couldn't fly fighters or fight as long as the bio-droids. Bio-droids can think and process information much like a human would, or so RRDC claims. Some AI “Purists” claim that the bio-droids are cheating since their brains are modeled (they say outright copied) from the human brain.

They range from large metal and composite battle 'droids to more human looking models the latest models are shapeshifting scouts. Most are "grown" rather than assembled. Their "lines" are made by genetic engineering and combing successful models since they are living machines. One line is the result of a "marriage" of a human and her bio-android wife.

RRDC has recently introduced a line of "Mass Production" units that all look and act the same. However their losses in combat has seen a return to the "custom" approach, even if they are more "emotional" than the MP bio-androids.

edited 5th Jul '13 6:19:21 AM by TairaMai

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#21: Jul 5th 2013 at 6:22:59 AM

Out of curiosity, do the Southern Cross have any "answer" to the bio-androids? Admittedly it might just be because I was reading the thread last night, but it sounded like they were really getting their asses kicked.

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#22: Jul 5th 2013 at 6:36:37 AM

[up]Lot's of firepower. Powered Armor and tanks. The shapeshiting scouts are the boogyman to the SCMC, one in particular keeps their High Command up at night and is an Urban Legend / Nightmarefuel. She's also the mother of one of the main characters.

edited 5th Jul '13 6:37:18 AM by TairaMai

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#23: Jul 5th 2013 at 6:43:10 AM

Alright, sweet.

Interesting setting you've got here.

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#24: Jul 6th 2013 at 5:20:23 PM

In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory ” *cue theme music*

The Cay Union

The Cay are humanoid aliens in that they have a human shape. They are Heavyworlders who are the descendants of a pangolin/porcupine-esque mammaliod. This gives them permanent anime hair. Their skin ranges from a deep reddish brown to purple to black due to their sun and the worlds they have colonized. Their skin is very tough, the scale-like plates have softened to skin but the outlines can still be seen. Some have quills in their hair, the tips blunt. Those raised on the homeworld are shorter than the human norm, those raised in space or on lower gravity colony worlds are as tall as the average human. Their homeworld was a death world, poisonous plants, fierce predators, their dinosaurs didn't quite die out. They have quite a few large birds (some with teeth) that figure in their mythology and culture. Because of this, they have a membrane that seals off punctures to their chest. They clot much faster and their immune response is quicker, they have a lower risk for gangrene. They have a high tolerance for certain poisons due to the plants of their homeworld. In fact their natural skin oils can cause a human to break out in hives if he or she touches a Cay.

Their rough world led to a focus on fighting for resources. Their are social creatures. Unlike the other species humans have encountered, they quickly establish who's boss. They crave order. Klingon Promotion is a common theme in their culture.

As they expanded, those Cay further from Homeworld became more liberal. Contact with other races cause those Cay living abroad to question the rulers of their colonies and the Emperor of their homeworld. Taking their off-world conquests was one thing, running a star spanning empire something else. Their warriors were drawn from the three castes: workers the lower ranking soldiers, merchants the technicians and the scholars the officers and religious leaders. After several Emperors were either overthrown, assassinated or proved unable to run the Empire, a group of merchants and scholars banded together units under their command. Backed by the workers who saw their labor going to waste in the Empire’s decline, they overthrew the Emperor. The Cay Union would have an elected council that rotated among the various families, worlds and the three castes. The Cay off-world were enjoyed the lack of Imperial control. Many families and minority groups flourished far from the persecution of the Empire. They didn't want the Union's Guardians kicking down their doors and dragging them away to the secret courts the Union was setting up. They fled to the “Southern Cross” and the “huu-maan” settlements.

The Cay Union is located on the world the CU simply called “Homeworld”. In their language , Cay means “People”, the title of the state means “Union of the People”. It's a People's Republic of Tyranny, Red China by way of Nazi Germany to the tune of NineteenEightyFour.

Their military reflects this. The War Fleet is their “navy”. The former “Imperial Grand Army” is now the “People's Grand Army”. There is a police force and the Guardians who handle all “political crime” and intelligence. Thanks to their fantastic immune response, the Cay Union uses cybernetics on their soldiers. From drug implants to full exoskeletons, the options are only limited to what the Union's military needs. Of course no soldier or crewman can refuse cybernetics. Rumors abound that some of the implants are rigged to explode to prevent capture or mutiny.

Their high tolerance for toxins has backfired. Rampant unchecked heavy industry has led to terrible pollution. Fertility rates for the factory worlds in the Union are dipping down. The Union has instituted mandatory motherhood as a result. Not that it's fixing the problem. No one in the Union dares criticize the industry that fuels the Union's war machine and brings in hard currency from interstellar trade.

The Evil Counterpart to The Cay Empire. Not quite a Vestigial Empire. The Union has held onto a good portion of the Empire's holdings.

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edited 6th Jul '13 11:06:52 PM by TairaMai

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#25: Jul 7th 2013 at 1:57:25 PM

In a galaxy, where the United Earth Government has fought a civil war, losing several worlds to the Southern Cross and had a war with the Alien Cay Union, hope rides in a ship called Victory ” *cue theme music*

Here's some more characters:

Names : Trooper Second Class EV-1026 Matthew Song, Trooper Second Class EV-1027 Mark Song, Trooper EV-1028 Luke Song, Corporal EV-1029 John Song

Age: Eleven

Personality / Role in the story:

Abilities:

Weaknesses:

  • Jackof All Trades: The “MP” bio-androids can alter their limbs and merge with electronics like the TA series, but they can't change shape. They wear “armor” that attaches to points on their bodies, but it restricts their movement.
  • Animal Motifs: Their appearance was a massive PR backfire outside of combat.
  • Exact Words: “Linear Thinking” is how RRDC put it, they tend to miss things in combat and had problems with “nuance”
    • Super-Powered Robot Meter Maids: averted mostly, they were build for combat, some were “re-purposed” after the software upgrade and serve in other jobs besides infantry.

Backstory: RRDC has recently introduced a line of "Mass Production" units that all look and act the same. This was an effort to make a product closer to what the Joint Chiefs wanted: a mass-production line that would fill all the lower enlisted positions and could be rushed into the field. Unlike the regular bio-androids, they could be “pre-programed” with technical data and even the memories of other bio-androids. When most bio-android detractors picture a Robot War, the MP's are what they see. The EV-1020 series is a bit of a PR problem for RRDC. While some units excelled, many were lost in the various “police actions” on the border. Those losses have seen a return to the "custom" approach, even if they are more "emotional" than the MP bio-androids. The staff at RRDC's Academy predicted this. Except for a few examples, most MP units lagged behind in problem solving and adapting to “field conditions”. Someone at the RRDC staff gave the series “Biblical” first names. While that employee was fired, having “killer robots” named “Cain, Able, Adam, Noah” etc. was a PR disaster. Software “updates” and more training fixed most of the problems halfway through the production run.

Goals/ Motivation: “The MP is the standard combat model created as a mass-production bio-android to fill infantry roles in the MTO&E of the Ground Forces.”

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edited 16th Jan '15 4:51:35 PM by TairaMai

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