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You have a cool/sexy/sweet/etc. original character you want to put in a story, whether it's a Fan Fiction or an original story. But you aren't sure whether your character rises to the level of a Mary Sue or not. Perhaps you have written other characters this way, or you're concerned that you might have put too much Wish-Fulfillment into the character. Well, we are here to help.

The Intentional Sue vs. the Accidental Sue

First, we need to establish a distinction between an intentional Mary Sue and an accidental one. Characters like Jenna Silverblade, for example, are very clearly Mary Sues, but that's what the author wants. Oh, nobody wants the criticism of the character being called a Mary Sue, but it is clear that the author has written one. We call this type of Mary Sue a "Creator's Pet", and there's nothing wrong with some Wish-Fulfillment as long as you know that's what you're doing. This guide is not intended to deal with Creator's Pets.

The second thing you need to understand is what a Mary Sue is. A Mary Sue occurs when the audience believes that the author is unduly favoring a character by changing something in the story to avoid making the character suffer. When the audience calls "Mary Sue" on a character, it means the author has shattered their Willing Suspension of Disbeliefnote . There are a number of subjective points here, which naturally means that everyone's Mary Sue threshold is different, and that's what can make dodging the Mary Sue accusation rather tricky at times. But we do suggest some places to look.

Essentially, there are two basic faults that lead to the accidental Sue:

  1. Any form of author/audience dissonance.note 
  2. The author hitting some form of trigger for her audience.note 

These sound similar, but they are different. The former is caused by the author not properly communicating. The latter is caused by something that is somewhat out of the author's control. That's not to say that the latter cannot be avoided. There are ways to dodge certain popular Mary Sue triggers.

Mary Sue Fear

Before we go too far, you need to honestly answer this question: Why are you here? Maybe you're just here on a Wiki Walk. But if you're reading this page for advice, then you probably think you already have a problem. What exactly is this problem?

If you're just trying to exercise due diligence in making sure that your character is fine, that's one thing (and perfectly fine, too). But there is a general sense of "Mary Sue fear". This is caused by people looking at a number of Mary Sue tests and thinking that because their characters ring certain bells, they've written Mary Sues.

In general, if you're reasonably old enough to have consumed enough books/movies/TV/other media, you probably have an idea about how a story and characters get put together. The intentional Mary Sue is generally caused by obvious character worship. If you're reasonably mature and versed in storytelling, you can tell when you're clearly reaching into a story and running interference for characters. And if you aren't, then no advice page can help you.


One of the biggest creators of the accidental Sue is the Informed Attribute. It is very easy for an author to simply fail to realize that the character that they envision is not the character that they wrote. Fridge Logic also gives birth to Mary Sues.

These are the hardest things to avoid. Avoiding them requires looking at one's work dispassionately and considering the implications of what is written, without regard to the characters. Beta readers (people you get to read your story for you to check for mistakes) are a good help for this.


Triggers are more important to Fan Fiction than to original works. Most fanfic readers have developed finely honed Mary Sue detectors. Many of these detectors are tuned to specific fandoms. An original character behaving in one way might not be a problem for one fandom, but in another, it would instantly drive a reader away, screaming, "Mary Sue!" the whole while.

However, there is also trust. If an author can get a reader past the first few chapters (assuming the work is that long), then they may be able to start doing these kinds of things. Once a reader trusts the author, the reader is more likely to accept unusual things from her.

The kinds of triggers are wide and varied across fandoms. But there are certain almost universal triggers.

  • The Big One: A lot of examples on this page can be summed up as "Your character must fit within the established world." Don't create a special character to your personal liking and just corkscrew her into a story; you must cultivate her out of the world you're writing. It is possible to do both at once, but you should never ask yourself, "What would be a cool character?" before you ask yourself, "What would be a plausible character?" If you are, for example, writing a Friendship is Magic OC that isn't a very powerful unicorn/alicorn, but knows and can perform age spells (some of the hardest-to-do magic in that canon), this breaks plausibility. Same goes for things that outright don't fit in the setting, such as a Physical God in Criminal Minds, which also breaks plausibility because it doesn't fit the genre altogether.
  • Entitlements: If your original character starts getting things, whether actual possessions or just respect, from actual canon characters too soon after his or her introduction, this will have readers leaving in droves. Even if there is some explanation. Avoid this until some level of trust is formed.
  • Violations of canon: Every canon has rules. If a character starts breaking the rules, readers are going to call Mary Sue very fast, unless there's a really good explanation that is given immediately. Original villains might be able to get away with it so that they are more of a threat, but a new hero has a much lower threshold for this.
  • Backstorying in an original character: This is always suspicious to the cynical fanfic reader, especially if it's a romantic relationship. Speaking of which...
  • Romancing canon characters: If the story is all about an original character romancing a canon character, people are generally going to call Mary Sue on that. And those who don't certainly will if a canon (or widely-accepted Fanon) relationship is broken up to do it. If any romance is going to take place, it needs to be relevant to the overall plot and contribute to character development, and it can't overwhelm the rest of the narrative. Don't say your OC is married with three children to a canon character right off the bat of the story; that only raises more questions that you may or may not want to bother with for the story.
  • Overtly flowery descriptions of original characters, as opposed to rather bland descriptions of the canon characters: This is definitely not a problem in and of itself; if you're writing fanfiction, the audience will already know what the canon characters look like, but won't know the same about your original characters, so the latter will naturally require more description than the former. But most poorly written, Mary Sue-based fanfiction takes this to too much of an extreme, and thus will contain lavish descriptions of original characters with substantially less than that done for the canon characters. Avoid doing this early on in a story; either lavishly describe all of the characters in a story (this will help signal to your audience that you don't care solely for your original characters to the detriment of the canon ones), or none of them. Don't split that (unless the writing is in a specific point-of-view that would entail such lavish description, and even then, you should be cautious; see also the Presentation folder below).
  • Being better than canon characters: If this is not in everything your character does, but only in a few things that the canon character doesn't land top-class in, this is generally not a Sue thing. But if your super-amazing OC can run faster than Sonic, fly for longer than Tails, is stronger than Knuckles, is smarter than Dr. Eggman, can use Chaos Control like Shadow, comes with psychokinesis like Silver, and has pyrokinesis like Blaze, that will ring a lot of alarm bells with your readers. If somebody is canonically the best at what they do, your audience will be hard-pressed to accept anybody being better than them.

Original fiction triggers.

While triggers are primarily a fanfic problem, there are some for original fiction as well. Politics is a huge one. Generally, people are willing to accept that people behave according to different political views. But if the author starts running interference, erecting strawmen for the main character to fight, then a certain section of the audience is going to cry foul.

The problem is generally when the story proposes to take sides. And even if the story takes sides, things are made worse when one side is treated unfairly. Unless that side is an acceptable target to mock (and possibly even then), even fair-minded people who agree with that side may call it out.

This means the author needs to be able to recognize the difference between the Strawman version of an argument and the real thing. If she can't, then she probably shouldn't be getting this political in her work, unless of course, the work is intended primarily to promote that political viewpoint and will be sold primarily to that audience.

Mary Sue causes

Remember that a Mary Sue comes from a series of incidents. There are a number of incidents that can happen in a story that forge another link in the Mary Sue chain. Doing one of these might trigger some people, but it is not in and of itself a problem. Doing a lot of them, however, can and will. Above all, remember that Tropes Are Tools, and it's how you use them, not the tropes themselves, that matter most.

Unearned rewards.

One of the leading indicators of certain forms of Mary Sues is one or more characters getting something that she has not yet earned. This could be the respect of her peers, some magical bauble, the love of an amazing person, or something else that we would expect somebody to work hard for, but for the Sue... it just comes.

The Informed Attribute is a particularly difficult enemy here. The author can have a character idea in her head that truly says that the character has that attribute. But if it isn't on the paper, then as far as the audience is concerned, it doesn't exist. Sometimes we see the attribute mentioned but it doesn't really show up or affect anything, so we forget about it. That includes informed abilities and informed flaws.

When a character gets something, make sure that she deserves it (unless she's supposed to be undeserving in-universe, but in these cases, it needs to be clearly shown to the audience). Treat extras as characters in their own rights.

Forcing the issue.

Many Mary Sues are born from attempting to force something to happen. That is, the author wants a particular plot point or character interaction to happen a certain way. Or more subtly, she needs to build a scene that shows that a character has property X.

The best way to do this is to try to develop circumstances in which the character interaction will naturally lead to what the author wants to happen. Build a scenario in which property X is naturally revealed by the characters themselves. If one tries to force things to happen against the will of characters, the invasive hand of the author can be seen.

The best way to guard against this is to have a clear character arc for each character. Know how each one responds to certain situations. And make sure that any extras or secondary characters are behaving properly. Sometimes, this means reconstructing whole scenes to make sure that the right character traits are showing through; to help with this, try to "storyboard" the plot before actually writing it. Make rough ideas of what the arc should/will entail, and use those to help write the characters to suit the plot without hamfisting them in.

As an analogy, picture yourself playing chess against yourself (like Geri) with all your characters, heroes and villains alike, as the pieces. Rather than just arbitrarily dropping pieces wherever you please and capturing them in blatantly illegal ways, see how you can come to the arrangements you need while adhering to the rules of how each one should move and behave. This is something of a learned skill, on top of fictional characters obviously being more complicated than chess pieces, but with practice, it will become easier.

The easiest example to show how forcing creates Mary Sues is with a Villain Sue. Accidental Villain Sues are commonly created by well-intentioned attempts to show that certain villains are credible threats to the heroes. The audience may accept one or two contrived circumstances or instances of hyper-competent behavior that allow the villain to pose a threat. But if it happens repeatedly, in different ways and circumstances, a Villain Sue results.

Attempting to make a Xanatos Gambit, for example. A Xanatos Gambit seems quite simple: there are a limited number of outcomes and all of them are desirable to the planner. But the more possible outcomes there are, the more contrived a gambit becomes, the more the author's hand is seen, and the more likely the audience is to see the character as a Mary Tzu.

Falling In Love (You, not the Sue)

The author should care about her characters to some degree. But Mary Sues are fundamentally about authorial favoritism. If the author falls in love with one of her characters over the others (particularly for a story about a group), then she's skating on thin ice.

It is very easy for an author to subconsciously push a character into Mary Sue territory when she loves her too much. Think of it like if you had three children: if you loved one of them the most, then the other two would feel pretty terrible. You don't have to remove her... but you should give her parts the most savage of goings over. Writing good stories means giving everyone in the story their due attention and development.

For now, the points are laid out in the format of Common Mary Sue Traits.

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  • First and foremost, remember that writing is more than just creating cool characters. Some people like Worldbuilding, others like to explore relationships, others prefer exploring a certain genre, others prefer to create something that comes from the deepest corners of their soul, while others prefer to make the audience cry, cower, feel happy, laugh, or pump their fists and cheer. Remember that while cool characters can help a story grow, they don't make good stories; it's good writers, plots, and worlds that make good stories.
  • You are writing a story, not building a shrine. And the story should not be a part of your character; your character should be a part of the story.
  • Don't assume that both the Mary Sue and the Anti-Sue are completely wrong in what they do. If your character is average or non-notable, the audience will come to detest her in a new way - she has no right being at the center (or even side) of a cast of fantastic people, unless she's an Unfazed Everyman. Make a character unique and interesting, but not a black hole that sucks attention from anything else around it. Don't fear making the character eccentric in some way, as long as that way isn't the "Special Snowflake" route.
  • Don't care about only this character. Care about them all (even if the villains of the story are cared about in a different way).
  • Obey the Law of Conservation of Detail . Any details about the character are for either the plot, Character Development, or building the character or world.
  • Also, if the story is a fanfic, make sure to reference canon, too; it will serve as a form of showing your work. Many times, you can even turn such a reference into a Call-Back that helps to move your story's plot forward.
  • When describing the character, it should never come across as the author telling the audience to like the character. Unless it's through the viewpoint of a character and in a way consistent with their characterization, avoid using purely subjective terms or comparisons. For example, if the character has long blonde hair, just simply say she has long blonde hair with maybe an added detail or two if it's important. Don't say "she has the most magnificent flowing golden hair since Sandro Botticelli painted Aphrodite on a clamshell," unless said by a character with a fondness for flowery descriptions, for the purpose of showcasing that trait as part of the character doing it, not making the character he/she is describing look good. Telling the audience to like your character usually just ends with the exact opposite reaction. In general, follow the "Show, Don't Tell" rule.
    • It is equally important to avoid editorials when discussing the world's reaction to the character. Saying, "Everybody always picked on her, but this was because they were jealous of her" is a surefire red flag that one is not only writing an autobiography, but laboring with a self-imposed delusion.
  • Figure out everything that could even remotely be considered "special" about your character before you start writing. Never give your character special skills, relationships to existing characters, (unless it's an original work, and not fan fiction) or exotic backstory elements as you go along.
  • When giving your character special traits, remember that traits must exist for a reason more plausible than just being awesome. When coming up with your character's history, start with the single most interesting thing about your character - the reason you want to write about this person in the first placenote  - and then work backwards, building on that core. Create a history for your character that can be described in terms of relatively boring causes and effects of that one interesting thing. Come up with both negative and positive experiences your character has had and personality traits he or she has developed as a result of that one interesting thing, rather than just listing a bunch of awesome but unrelated abilities or character quirks.
  • Your character should not be able to solve the main conflict simply by his/her mere presence. Stories are about conflict, and a lopsided conflict in the heroes' favor makes them an Invincible Hero, and an original character will make that even worse. A character with just the right skills to meet all the challenges the story throws his/her way makes for a boring story, and will draw resentment from the audience.
    • As a counter-point, don't make her fail at everything as well. A Failure Hero is just as frustrating as an Invincible Hero, if not more so. As the backlash against the Damsel in Distress, Faux Action Girl, and other similar tropes show, the audience doesn't sympathize with characters who mostly cause problems. She should have some level of success to go with her failures, or if she always wins, she should have at least enough difficulties in doing so; find a middle ground that works for the story. If you happen to be going for a From Zero to Hero plot, this is acceptable for early chapters; but when the character has been physically trained for years and still has trouble fighting a mere imp, that is not a good story.
  • Do not let your character's perceptions and judgments always correlate with reality. You as a writer will know what's going to happen, but your character does not. Letting her always 'sense' something's true nature, always guess correctly, or somehow know things she shouldn't, means that you're practically allowing your character to break the fourth wall and have a peek at the script. A character is meant to be a person in her own world, not a player-character armed with a cheat-sheet.
    • One exception is when you're writing a highly cynical or paranoid character who suspects a secretly evil character - they will expect the worst of everybody, but remember that these are character flaws and their suspicions turning out right is just a coincidence. Heck, because they're so cynical and paranoid, it's possible nobody will even believe them.
    • Also know that, if the character has the ability to "see" the auras of others, allowing them to see the morality of others is a possible idea; just don't overuse that trope to make every fight the character has a Curb-Stomp Battle.
    • Another exception might be if the character has some form of Psychic Powers, such as being able to read emotions or tell if somebody's lying. However, don't use these as an excuse to make your character solve the plot too quickly, and if she's a fanfic character, make sure that the source material contains characters with said powers unless you're deliberately writing an Alternate Universe Fic.
  • All of your characters must suffer trials and tribulations, and often the main character suffers most of all just to show what an awesome person they are. Sure, you have a favourite; that's why they're the main character. But using Plot Armor or an Ass Pull to shield them just makes it obvious and annoying.
    • This is doubly so seeing as killing a character doesn't mean they weren't a Mary Sue... and even their memory can plague the story if you're not careful.
  • A number of Common Mary Sue Traits could be used properly if they are defining elements of the character. (Tropes Are Tools, after all.) Friend to All Living Things, for instance, could be done as a take on The Beastmaster. What makes them Mary Sue tropes is when they aren't important to the character, that character's role in the story, or the plot in general.
  • Making them a Parody Sue, pointing it out and snickering at it will mitigate their Mary Sue problems, but to a point. While a deliberately over-the-top Sue will likely get a pass if only showing up for quick gags or kept to the background, the more they appear and go without consequences for their Sue traits, the quicker the Parody will wear out leaving them seen as a straight Mary Sue.
  • When writing what a character is like or can do it is important to know the standards of the universe he/she is in. What may be absurdly impossible in one universe may be common and acceptable in another. Play it safe, do the research and follow precedence of the setting and its characters; canon characters acting wildly Out of Character (especially in relation to an original character) is a large Sue trigger.

  • While a Mary Sue is frequently described as an Author Insert, inserting yourself into a fic is not a bad idea. By being aware that you are a human and thus have flaws and positive traits just like anyone else, accepting them, and inserting them into your fic, you can create a fully fleshed out character that no one would ever describe as a Mary Sue.
  • Don't intentionally design your character to be the soul mate of an existing character. Also, don't just make her the female version of a male character. She can be similar to an existing character in some ways, but, since no two people are exactly alike, she shouldn't be his equivalent in every way. Also, her being similar to a male character doesn't necessarily mean that he will like her. Sometimes when people are too similar or similar in the wrong ways (e.g. they are both very stubborn, very temperamental or very egotistical), it can cause them to grate on each other.
    • But don't go in the opposite direction and write a Relationship Sue who makes up for all of the existing character's shortcomings, tolerates (or fixes) all of his flaws, and always knows just the right way to respond to his behavior and bring out the best in him. That’s just boring. Relationships are flawed at times. Even those in love will verbally fight at times.
  • "Who is your character when she's alone?" Don't define her solely by other characters, their reactions to her, or her reactions to them. Picture your character alone in a room. What is she thinking?
  • Make sure your character has a personality. You're writing a character, not just having a person do cool things. What does your character like or dislike? What does your character want in life? What is your character afraid of? How does your character feel about the other characters?
  • Don't just make this character's personality one you think is awesome. Even the coolest characters in fiction have some depth to them. There are often some flaws to overcome. Just go for a personality you think would make a great story, and that others might enjoy. This goes double when writing a fanfiction — it's fanfiction, after all.
  • Don't make everyone agree with your character about everything. Unless your character has some kind of mind control, characters are going to have their own opinions. It's the disagreement that makes them different, even the heroes. Conflict is one of the most important elements in fiction, and even your character needs some.
    • Corollary: Don't make every character who disagrees with your character turn out to be wrong. The protagonist isn't always infallible.
    • Corollary II: Neither should you have them all turn out to be right, either. A character can be fallible, but don't make them so constantly wrong that most logical people would have long abandoned trust in them, yet the characters still trust them.
  • Your character can be cheerful or sad. Just don't make your character so happy or depressed that she doesn't have any other depth. Your happy character could be naïve (or wrongly thought to be by other people). Your sad character could be happy about some things, but they don't show up a lot, and that's what makes your character sad. If a character loves another character, maybe they have to deal with that love interest being away a lot.
  • Is your character incorruptible? There had better be a good reason. Perhaps your character gave in to temptation in the past, and this hard lesson made your character now know better.
  • Mary Sues often have flaws, but those flaws don't matter. Your character must have personality traits that affect her day-to-day living negatively. That's what makes it a flaw and not some sort of neat quirk that just adds to her badass-ness.
    • If you're up to the task, try making a Deconstruction of your character's strengths. Someone with a lot of emotional stamina may be able to push themselves further or fight harder, but she may also be stubborn or short-tempered. Someone who is a great planner may also be a perfectionist and never satisfied with anything until it's absolutely perfect. Take her strengths to their logical extreme and make them a double-edged sword.
    • Additionally, flaws are often made or broken by how the other characters react to them. A character can be as objectively flawed as all get-out, but if the people around her ignore her faults (or even admire her for them), then they don't really count as flaws. The classic example of this is having a clumsy character's, well, clumsiness come across as endearing rather than impeding what she's trying to do. Depending on how you handle broken flaws, this can radically change a well-rounded idea into a Sue (or even vice-versa, if you can catch and correct your handling).
  • If your character has particular abilities or personality traits - good or bad - then demonstrate them clearly and logically within the plot.
  • Go light on the snark. It's okay to make your character a Jerk with a Heart of Gold, but do remember the "with a Heart Of Gold" part. She must have some redeeming qualities that make the other characters tolerate her; don't make her an absolute ass to other characters just because. Consider making your character a Snark Knight who is as much of a jerkass to herself as she is to others, if not even more so.
  • While there's nothing wrong with writing yourself as a character (see the first item on the list), if you're not deliberately writing yourself as a character, try not to make the character resemble you too much. If you admit you're writing yourself, the readers will be more accepting than if you claim your character is not a self-insert but she seems like one.

Every strength has the potential to become a weakness. If your character has an enhanced ability, don't just consider the ways that that ability could help them, also consider all the ways that that ability could become a hindrance or be turned against them by their enemies. That one-shot magic beam of awesome your character can make should probably drain the character's energy dry when used, as an example.
  • Also, in terms of skills, one thing that you can do to bestow more realism to a character and edge them away from Sue territory is give them fringe powers and weaknesses as well (in other words, Required Secondary Powers/Weaknesses). Let's say the character has an unnaturally or magically high empathy. One fringe benefit is they may become an Omniglot and be able to speak to anybody in their native tongue. The issue could be that they can't fight - or worse, they can't fight back - because it hurts them just as much as the enemy. Maybe knowing how other people feel kind of sucks because you instantly know people's bad traits as well as their good. Also remember to build around the ability's weaknesses and strengths. The character might be illiterate in the setting because nobody uses the writing system they use. Maybe the character is wonderful at dodging because they can sense their attacker's next move. Show how each ability that the character has can be both harmful and helpful. A Sue whose abilities are only harmful to them as well as only helpful is still a Sue.
  • Don't talk about skills that your character has that aren't important to the story just because you think they are cool. Even if they don't show up in the story, they are meant to help flesh out a character, not to make her look better. To expand slightly:
    • Cake-baking skills in a story about a cake-baking competition fit.
    • Cake-baking skills that are used to cheer up another character or poison an enemy (or a friend or stranger by accident) also fit.
    • Cake-baking skills in a story where cake is irrelevant and/or absent (by itself or via circumstances such as the world having no means to make one) do not fit, and should be either replaced with another foodstuff that isn't irrelevant or absent (thus making it fit), or dropped entirely.
  • Don't make your character better at everything the canon characters can do, because then you don't have a character. You have The Munchkin. If you have to, choose one skill from a canon character (but not one he/she is canonically the best at) that your character is better at, and make sure this character has a good reason to be more skilled. Let's say the canon character is a swordfighter. If this character has only been training for a few years, and your character has been training since childhood, you have a good reason. But this doesn't mean your character replaces that main character, only that your character has more experience in that skill. If used right, this can actually be beneficial to the character. Giving him/her somebody to act as The Rival to them can kickstart Character Development, if capitalized upon.
    • Also realize that the higher up you go in education, sports, or any creative field, the more you will hear the saying "Talent is cheap." To be the best of the best at something, you need to literally dedicate yourself to it body and soul, and you need to be working at it every single day. There is a reason not everyone is immensely skilled at even one thing, never mind the two handfuls The Munchkin is going for.
  • Few abilities translate as well as you'd think. Driving a car doesn't mean you can fly a plane. It doesn't even mean you can drive a motorcycle. Fencing with a foil doesn't mean you can engage in combat with a katana. Michael Jordan was an awesome basketball player, but he kind of sucked at baseball. One skill may aid in learning another, but it doesn't equal it. Knowing how to play the piano means you can read sheet music and keep time. It doesn't mean you can pick up a violin and turn out a concerto, though you would probably require a little less practice than someone who doesn't play any instrument at all.
  • In general, it's best for an amateur author to avoid writing about sex. This is not to say it can't be done, but it takes a ton of verisimilitude and a lot of allusion to make it work. One of the pitfalls of many writers with little to no sexual experience is to make major errors through extrapolation on what constitutes "good" sex.
    • Even if one feels she can do it well, it's also worth noting that the vast majority of stories don't have any real business with a sex scene. If nothing particularly unusual, shocking, or (emotionally) revealing occurs during one, then the author might as well let her readers imagine it for themselves if they're so interested.
    • Most readers looking for mature fanfics want things with substance; if they wanted porn of a canon character, there's plenty of sites offering it that aren't bogged down by awful writing.
    • If your character happens to be a virgin, that's fine; we all are or were once virgins. But if your character is a virgin, then she/he probably should not instinctively know how to fuck like a porn star or Sex God. And if the character's virginity isn't really relevant (i.e. this is not a universe where Virgin Power is a thing, and it's not an instance of Sex as Rite-of-Passage or something like that), don't go out of your way to mention that your character is a virgin, and especially don't put down non-virgin characters simply for not being virgins.
  • Make sure that the skills your character has fit the world she lives in. A medieval girl who knows how to play a lute is plausible. A medieval girl who knows how to play a magical electric guitar, African drums, or the didgeridoo is not. Similarly, if your character has no real reason to know a skill, don't give it to her. For example, resist the urge to give your thoroughly non-Japanese character a katana, even if Katanas Are Just Better. Stretching the story to fit in a convenient swordmaster will not help.
    • As a corollary to this, don't give your character skills that his or her gender, social class, race, age, species, physical ability, culture, what have you, would prevent him or her from having, unless you can give a really good reason for why he or she would have that skill. For instance, an upper-class girl in the 18th century would most likely not know how to command or sail large ships. Also, if canon characters with similar limitations couldn't do it/learn it, your character can't.
    • Similarly, keep an eye on the skills of the characters and respect the responsibilities they can take because of their skills. If a character is Too Dumb to Live, it just comes off as coincidental that he suddenly managed to achieve things that are normally reserved for people with intelligence in that field. Likewise it will come off as unsympathetic if a character is very intelligent but uses none of the intelligence given to her.

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  • So Beautiful, It's a Curse is largely a Discredited Trope in normal fiction, and that goes double for fanfiction. Don't do it. That doesn't mean your character can't be attractive. Just don't try to make your character stand out by being excessively more beautiful (or more ugly). Try to make your character's appearance distinct in the details.
    • If you want your character to be notably beautiful, make sure it makes sense for her station in life, access to cosmetics, and dedication to regular exercise. Those gorgeous models you see—male and female—spend hours working out and have to closely monitor their diets because being beautiful is literally their job.
  • If you think shimmering, violet hair would be cool for your character, but hair like that doesn't show up in the setting, leave it out. If you write the character well, then exotic hair and eye colors (for the setting) will not be needed.
  • Body figures that are atypical to the setting are best left out as well. If you want a slim, but attractive character, go ahead. Just make them reasonably slim and attractive.
  • One of the most important facts of life (and fiction in most cases) to take into consideration is that what one person may view as "beautiful" may be different from what another person thinks. Love is blind, and beauty is in the eye of the beholder. An average-looking character may well look, to their love interest, like the most beautiful person in the world.
    • It could be used as part of the plot, for example: The character believes in said viewpoint about personal preference when it comes to beauty, but may also have low self-esteem about her own appearance. The villain can be a Manipulative Bastard and convince her otherwise by praising her beauty, in an attempt to gain her trust, spur her to make a Face–Heel Turn, and/or use her as an Unwitting Pawn.
  • Fancy, ultra detailed costumes had best fit in the setting. A lot of RPGs would allow costumes like that, but Harry Potter would not. Keep the clothing reasonable to the setting. If you want a minor costume quirk, that can often work far better than a bunch of extra frills.
    • If you are going to spout Costume Porn about the character, make sure this character is not the only one. Although many would like this trope kept to a minimum overall, reserving it for one character is another way to almost instantly make the character look like a Sue.
    • Odd costumes might make sense if your character is a Cloudcuckoolander, but in that case, people might find it strange instead of exceptionally attractive. You should also be prepared to mention why your character continues to dress in a stand-outish way. Does she have a lot of cultural pride? Has she not had sufficient time to adopt more local manners of dress? Or is she compelled or required to dress in the exotic fashion for some reason - perhaps due to being part of some kind of cultural exchange or diplomatic mission, in which case dressing in a foreign style could be seen as "waving the flag," so to speak.
  • Colors should be kept tasteful and plausible with the setting and its culture. If a culture really only has access to dark red cloth, a character wearing a bright green outfit breaks suspension of disbelief pretty quickly unless there's an in-world reason (i.e., they spent time abroad, or were raised in the manner of another country, or belong to a mercantile family that has access to foreign cloth/dye and styles). A peasant girl in Ancient Grome or the Middle Ages wearing a blue or purple gown would be highly implausible. If the motif is unspecified, odd, intense colors like bright pink, magenta, purple, and such tend to be noticeably unusual. The exception would be if the character's lack of taste is an actual character trait instead of an unintended side effect.
  • Do the research. That's what the Internet is for. Making an Ass Pull about things you don't know is going to get you called out by fans.
  • Realize that there is a drawback to having a Pimped-Out Dress, wearing a corset, and putting on anything overly flashy in general. The upper classes were able to get away with that sort of stuff because they had the money and the time for it, and didn't have to do manual labor. The flashiness was used to signify class and to intimidate others - not for being useful. If you are aiming for realism, don't expect your heroine to be able to fight with a sword when wearing a ball gownnote , run away from pursuers through a thick forest with her long hair flowing free behind her, or pass as a peasant without taking her huge bling and showy makeup off first, because stunts like that are just plain unrealistic, and should get her killed. If your character's running around in an outfit that draws attention, it's very likely to draw the wrong kind of attention... unless that's what you're going for (like a sheltered princess who doesn't realize that going alone in the marketplace, while wearing a lacy silk dress and a cape lined with fur, will make her a target).
    • If you're unsure about what might be plausible in a story and it's not too extremely dangerous, try it out. Want to know what type of heels are best to run in without breaking? Try a brisk walk or jog in your favorite pair. Think your girl can run a marathon in a properly-tied corset? Find someone who sells them and ask if you can try one on, with them helping you tie it. Or, if you can't do it yourself, ask someone who has. The internet isn't the only place you can do research, though the answers could easily be there.
  • Let your characters get hot, sweaty, dirty, messy and pasty if the situation calls for it. (Remember how dirty John McClane was after Hans Gruber's attack on Nakatomi Plaza?) A person should not have a 'light sheen' of sweat after running a marathon, unless they were really light on the jogging. Watch some sports (triathlon coverage is good) and see what people really look like after exertion.
    • Also let the characters bleed; a bloody character in a very close fight helps make the reader more engaged in the story, and also has them root for the protagonist if they are written well enough.
  • It's important to note that writing isn't a visual media, and that anything the reader pictures she has to make up on her own, no matter how much detail you have in the writing. Because of this, it's remarkably easy to get away with only a single short sentence of what the character looks like and still have the reader accept her presence without any raised eyebrows. Just don't get carried away with hiding things excessively, or using this as a way to Ass Pull something you didn't see fit to mention the first time around.
  • Always remember, when describing a character: do we really need to know that her eyes are emerald green? Would the character be so fundamentally changed if she had brown eyes, or a slightly harder chin, or heavier eyebrows than you envision? Admittedly, sometimes the answer is yes. But remember that a story isn't about what the character already is so much as the deeds she does and emotions she feels, and what she looks like is a very small part of what she is.
    • That said, one or two distinctive details can help make a character real in the reader's mind, as well as give some foundation to attach a name and actions. Names alone can get jumbled up - especially if you start adding many characters - but it's a lot easier to keep track of them when you picture them as "Julia, the green-eyed girl with the freckles," "Timothy, the shaggy-haired guy with the perpetually deadpan expression," or "Robert, the lanky guy with the crooked teeth." But what you should avoid at all costs is something like: "She had thick rimmed emerald eyes that seemed to have a ring of deeper, verdant green in the center, brown hair that gleamed a thousand different colors of autumn and a tiny, porcelain nose dotted with wide-spaced light brown freckles." You should also describe the character only about once - people aren't going to forget what she looks like halfway through.
    • Note that oftentimes, characteristic actions can be just as evocative, more interesting, and possibly even more relevant to the story than distinctive appearances. If a girl has a peculiar habit of quietly appearing in a scene without anybody noticing her arrival, or a guy tends to scratch his beard when he's thinking, that alone can give a solid foundation for the reader's imagination to build upon, without ever having to mention hairstyle, clothing, the occasional scar, etc.
    • Being specific about character descriptions can also help with building romance; just don't go overboard on it. For example, this description:
      He stared into her lavender eyes, which seemed to shimmer and dance with the moonlight reflecting off of them."
    will read a lot better than this one:
    He stared into her bright lavender eyes, which shimmered and danced in the pale white light illuminating from the moon. Her dark hair flowed from her head and shimmered in the night, and the man couldn't help but feel enthralled by her beauty. His own maroon eyes danced and glimmered in the pale light of the moon, as well. His black hair danced and shimmered in the moonlight, and the woman felt entrapped by his stunning looks.

    Physical Attributes 
  • If your character is a non-human with drawbacks, such as a vampire, don't allow her to circumvent or ignore them unless the series makes it possible. Introducing a plot-device like a magic amulet so she can go out during the day is also very risky, especially when the canon stipulates that no such thing can exist. Even if it can, it could still leave a bad taste in readers' mouths if no one else has such a thingnote .
    • If they explicitly do something to avoid said drawback (e.g. wearing a large cloak to conceal their bodies from sunlight), this can be justified and excused.
  • Make sure your character is physically capable of performing her skills. A normal teenage girl would not be able to snap a grown man's neck with one hand, defeat everyone in a bar brawl, or dodge a bullet. Obviously justified in a series with superpowers or magic.
    • A telepath may be able to read someone's mind from across the planet, but he's not likely to survive being flung against a cliff by the opposing team's muscle unless someone intercepts him or it's just a low-reality story.
  • Always be aware of your character's physical limitations. A character should not be 'just fine' after a days-long trek through the desert, nor should an unenhanced warrior, no matter how hardened, be able to fight for hours without getting tired (unless they're some sort of nonhuman or superhuman that doesn't get tired, but in these cases, you need to be careful and make sure they're not overpowered). Again, televised sports (boxing, Olympic wrestling, or mixed martial arts) are a good way to see what the results of physical exertion look like.
  • If you give your character a physical flaw, make sure that it's relevant enough to be brought up. A character being prone to asthma attacks after lots of physical exertion is definitely important. A character having a wonky tooth is not, unless it has a major drawback. Maybe missing a fang causes others of his kind to consider him an outcast or coward, or lacking the tooth means that her beast-form is at a disadvantage due to loss of a tusk/fang/the power said tooth might grant if whole. Make sure the flaw is important to what the character is. A chipped nail on an upper-class woman is a minor inconvenience, but a broken claw to an animal is an important physical flaw.
  • Be aware of what scars actually look like and the medical attention they receive. A lack of timely or competent medical attention causes ugly, colored scars, meaning that a pirate should not have a thin, delicate scar over his eye after being attacked with a rusty old sword. If someone is injured during a flight and said injury never gets proper medical attention (beyond binding it up), it'll heal badly and should definitely impede the characters through sheer pain and potential bleeding up to infection and even amputation if it's bad enough. Small pink lines on a character =/= scars, unless said scars are recent enough to not have turned purple, but old enough to not still be red and bleeding.
  • If there's a Big Bad who always kicks the canon heroes' butts (often until the finale, if not The Bad Guy Wins), your original character cannot beat them by herself. She just can't, okay?
    • Additive: If there is a reason the Big Bad is so strong, but he or she might have a weakness that's uncommon in the area it takes place in, it would be more believable. However, even with this excuse, remember to put limits on it. Why would the character be carrying around/know how to use the weakness? A foreign healer who somehow knows how to summon elementals which the Big Bad would be weak to is just as much a Sue issue as if the Sue was from the area.

  • Magic jewelry is okay if it is common in the setting. If it's rare, or is hardly ever worn as jewelry, you might want to reconsider.
  • Having a cool vehicle or a Humongous Mecha should also fit in the setting. If the main characters don't have their own individual rides, your character shouldn't either. And even if everyone has his or her own ride, your character's should simply be unique, not better (As a basic example, think about the karts in Mario Kart Wii. They would be styled aesthetically to fit the racer's personality and color scheme, and the racer him/herself would bring minor changes to some stats, but any given kart on its own is functionally identical no matter who drives it).
  • No laptops with wireless unless they actually exist in the setting. Same with any other gadget. No iPod exists in The '80s. Your character may have something like a Sony Walkman.
  • Give your character only one weapon, a pair of weapons that are often paired together (pistols, daggers, etc), or a primary weapon and a plain backup weapon (an ordinary short sword for the archer to defend himself with in close combat, for example). A character with a magic sword, a pair of Abnormal Ammo guns and a magic whip is implausible and going too far. The exception is if the setting has everyone armed to the teeth, as in a combat-centric story centered around the military, mercenaries, or large-scale battles.
  • If your character is in a world where most swords have special powers, be very careful about giving the character's sword the same power as the main character(s). This is especially true when the main character's sword is supposed to be unique, like Excalibur; in this case, make sure the character's sword has unique powers if other people have swords with powers. If you have the rival character wielding a sword with dark magic properties, maybe give your character's sword light magic properties.
  • If your character is a time traveller, anachronistic accessories are acceptable. At the same time, always remember the limitations of the era the character is visiting: An analog-capable cellular telephone might work, though not without problems, in the 1950s, and will work in the mid 1970s, but not the 1920s. A gun will work anywhere, in any time, but replacement ammunition could be hard to come by. Technology Marches On in all fields. Even so simple-seeming a thing as a dry cell battery changes over time.

    Canon Character Relationships 
  • It's fine for your OC to have a significant connection to an existing character, but make sure it's a plausible one and that it doesn't interfere with that character's previously established personality, image, and backstory (e.g. if a character is established as a misanthropic loner who's never experienced real companionship, don't make your OC his beloved best friend from back-in-the-day that he just happened to never mention before) and don't make your OC solely responsible for everything that fans like about the existing character (don't make her the girl who got Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart into music or the first person to ever suggest that Sherlock Holmes get into the detective business.)
  • If you want your character to date a main character you like, okay, but be careful. Remember a lot of fans out there want the same thing for their characters, too.
  • Being related to a main character should be done carefully as well.
    • If your character is a child of a main character, it had better be done in a way that makes sense. Being the child of two same-sex characters just isn't going to cut it unless it involves surrogates, adoption, being the child of one of them from their Last Het Romance, IVF, the setting allows that with some sort of Phlebotinum or you explain/find out that sort of magic exists in the canon.
    • Being a long-lost relative should also be plausible. If the main character is an orphan, you have plenty of opportunities. But even then don't just have the character pop up and announce the relation. What allowed this character to discover the main character? Why does it matter? Most people don't go around seeking out long-lost relatives, and even orphans don't always go looking for their surviving relatives.
    • If your character is the long-lost orphan child of a relative of one of the canon characters, consider how they know that they're related. How did they find out? Why do they believe it? Also consider how the rest of the family feels/felt about the character's parent. This may well affect how they react to that person's child showing up out of the blue.
    • Also, you don't even have to bother with being a long lost relative if a main character is known to have a large family, or the series is legendary for having new relatives just drop in out of the blue. Just be one of the many cousins/cloned siblings/etc. that character is likely to have.
    • Just be careful about having your OC be a Kid from the Future.
    • Giving characters no known parents or only one known parent doesn't automatically mean the parent that isn't seen is Killed Off for Real. Think of other possible explanations for their absence before using death as the reason.
    • If a canon character has stated that they don't want children, don't have them suddenly change their mind and get pregnant/knock someone up just so you can introduce an OC in the form of their child. If the character seems like the type who might have had unprotected sex and (if a woman) not gotten an abortion, this might help justify the idea, but don't have them explicitly change their mind and start wanting kids.
    • If your original character is the child of an existing one, and the existing character is already at the top of their field (or worse, a grown-up child prodigy), your original character should never be better or more accomplished at what their parent does than they are. It's unlikely that your reader is going to find it cute that your made-up daughter of Sherlock Holmes is able to crack cases faster than him.
  • If a canon character is noted as being the last of his or her race/species, especially if this is a major plot point, don't introduce a previously-unheard of family member who is the real last one standing. If you want to write a character like this, consider making your story a Prequel, set before all the other of the canon character's kind died (though this will limit your story options: you likely won't be able to use other canon characters that weren't encountered until the present timeline, for example, and going this route means by definition that your character will have to die at some point).
  • Don't have characters act differently around your character. Character Derailment is another discredited trope, so that also goes double for fanfiction. Characters should react to your character in a way that fits their personalities.

    Story Elements 
  • Spotlight-Stealing Squad is another no-no. Even Canon characters are often considered Sues for this (like Wolverine), and it goes double for fan fiction. The main characters are where the focus should be. Keep it on them as much as possible. That way, where there are scenes that need to focus on your character (the introduction of your character, any Character Development scenes), they will make sense.note 
  • If another character is The Chosen One, that character stays The Chosen One. Your character doesn't become the new Chosen One instead (unless a story has that happen all the time, like Slayers on Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Avatars on Avatar: The Last Airbender). Now, if your character is chosen for something else, preferably a lot less significant than a main character, you could get away with that. Or your character could be destined to play support staff, like Taking the Bullet or something similar.
  • Keep your character's age appropriate to what fits in the setting, regardless of how old you are. It is just unnatural to see a kid that has had two kids, drives a car, and is the CEO of an entire billion-dollar company. Likewise, it is unnatural to see an old man that is still studying in Elementary School and can't even get simple math questions right.
  • Tragedy in the Back Story is common even for Canon characters. Just don't have your character's tragedies outweigh those of the main character - considering all the tragedies main characters go through, it shouldn't be that hard. And remember, if it's not going to play a part in the story, omit it completely. Don't just pile on a mountain of travesty to ramp up the angst or show how strong they are. If your character was orphaned at a young age, tormented by classmates, beaten and/or raped by a drunken foster father, then forced to run away from home and turn tricks to survive at 12 years old, you are most definitely laying it on too thick. Any one of these can add the necessary angst without going overboard.
    • Whatever your character has been through, please be respectful to real life trauma survivors and do the actual research of how people respond to such abuses. Someone who experienced any one of the above may carry that trauma with them for the rest of their lives. A little knowledge of PTSD and anxiety may enhance your story and give your character a much-needed human flaw.
  • Similarly, if your character is still affected by her tragic backstory, make sure you properly demonstrate why she still hurts:
    • It's a recent enough event that your character hasn't had time to fully process it.
    • It has something to do with The Power of Trust, which can last a long time.
    • It's an old wound reopened recently.
    • The small town/organization has a long memory and won't let the character forget. Having a character angst over small slights, imaginary persecution, or things that happened long ago just makes the sorrow look cheap, unless she has a condition like clinical depression (which will only go so far in justifying it) or you're intentionally portraying her persecuters as taking things way too seriously (in which case either she or a third party should probably notice and hang a lampshade on why they're acting thus).
    • Maybe your character just refuses to let the past go (especially if it was a big deal when it happened). But remember that if this is the case, this can be a serious mental issue in Real Life and should be an integral part of your character's personality.
  • Make sure that your character reacts in an appropriate manner to her tragic backstory, particularly in comparison to other characters; if your character has less reason to angst (either vocally or internally) than the other characters and yet angsts more than they do, it won't make the reader feel more sorry for your character. Of course, if it's your intention to make her out to be a whiny little bitch, that's fine.
    • If you want her to feel guilty, it should be for something she did, so there's a logical reason for her to feel guilty. Perhaps she was off playing around in the forest, rather than standing guard at her village, when the Big Bad came and killed everyone. Maybe she insulted her parents just before they died. Angst can make a character compelling, but there'd better be a good reason for it.
    • Alternatively, she may angst with a need for vengeance. This can make canon characters very cool and badass, but there's also the risk of making them whiny little bitches who just never shut up about all that vengeance they're going to have, turning angst into Wangst.
  • Avoid having the other characters excuse everything your character does solely because of her angsty backstory, because then you've got a Jerk Sue. Just because a character has a traumatic Freudian Excuse doesn't mean that gives her a blank cheque to be a complete Jerkass to everyone around her, and the other characters shouldn't have to walk on eggshells around your character because of it. Some characters would not find it in their personalities to feel sorry for your character anyway (Digimon Adventure tri. is an official example of what happens when characters become too angsty and get the guilt-free card over said angst).
    • Also avoid having other characters be attracted to your character precisely because of all the angsting and brooding she does. Contrary to what you may believe, self-obsession and self-pity are not attractive personality traits.
  • Don't have your character save an entire society; play it safe and leave that to the main characters (although your character can still play support staff).
  • Choose your character's heritage carefully. Don't just choose a race because you think it would make your character beautiful, cute, or awesome. Choose one that you think would make your character fit in the setting best.
  • Redeeming the villain is not out of the question, but don't use Easy Evangelism or Redemption Equals Sex. Try to keep it within how it would fit in the story. Perhaps your character just incidentally, or accidentally, does the things that could help the villain when the other characters didn't in the canon story. Perhaps your character sees some good in the villain and makes it a mission to save him or her. Your character's arc could revolve around this idea, but make sure the villain's portrayal has grounding in the canon... and that a canon character didn't already do it. Luke saved Vader; your character doesn't need to do it again.
    • On a similar tangent, please don't try to redeem established Complete Monsters like Albert Wesker or Johan Liebert and get away with it scot-free. You just don't, and your OC can't. They will bite your character in the back and we mean it. Same goes for Always Chaotic Evil or Made of Evil characters — it goes without saying that, if your character redeems goblins and successfully integrates them into society in a Goblin Slayer setting, it's a very bad idea.
  • A princess, a CEO, or other kind of authoriarian positions, could work as an Original Character so long as such a position fits in the setting.
    • Keep in mind the ranks of the setting, as well. It's a dumb idea to make your OC the Wizard King of Black Clover (the Big Good of the setting) and make them your protagonist. Characters like these should be on the support lines or a Hidden Villain unless you're very confident in what you're doing.
  • Your character should still obey Magic A Is Magic A if the main characters do.
    • If the other characters master an ability said to be very rarely mastered, don't let your character have this ability. Just... don't. It's easier that way. If she is trying to learn it, do not give her instant success. Rather, you may wish to show minimal success. Summoning, for example: let her pull an obedient canary out of thin air instead of some grand monster. Something like this can make for a good Chekhov's Gun later down the road. For example: Character is in a prison cell, the keys are in another room, she can just send the bird after them (but for your character's sake, do not abuse it and have this happen on the very next page). But, give her more failures then anything else (canary comes out with razor sharp talons, three heads, and a thirst for human blood) to show that she is far from perfectly skilled at it. You want her to master it? Save it for the sequel, if you get that far.
      • If you really want to show the potential of the character, have the first use of this very-rarely mastered ability be completely random, and make sure they need to train to learn. Ash's Gible had this happen when it was trying to learn Draco Meteor; it successfully pulled off the move exactly once in its debut episode, and it took 29 more episodes before it mastered the move.
  • If your character screws something up, don't just wave it off (this doesn't mean mistakes the show treats as minor with the main characters). How your character reacts can be an important way to build your character. Does your character realize this was wrong? Is the character in denial? Does your character even care? But either way, the main characters should react as they would in the story. They should not easily forgive your character if they don't normally do that, unless they have a plot-relevant reason for doing so. Tread carefully.
  • If you are having your character trying to atone for (or angst over) a past misdeed in her life, make sure she has actually done something wrong. Having your character grieve over something minor or something that wasn't really her fault is cheap. Moreover, don't let other characters gloss over past actions with a pep talk to grant cheap resolution; your character must atone for or get over her past through her own character development.
  • Phobias vary in their intensity, but they're still there. They don't vanish because somebody just forgot about them for a while. They don't vanish even when a character has to overcome them; most phobics are afraid for a long time afterwards. But they know they can do it now. Similarly, if the phobia never actually does anything - not even deepen your character - don't even bother to introduce it. For instance, there's no point in you saying she's got a phobia of spiders when spiders will never show up in the story.
  • If you happen to have a plot that contains a Doppelgänger or Evil Counterpart, make sure characters that know them notice minor details that are off and become suspicious. Make sure the characters that are not suspicious are then genuinely surprised when the villain reveals themselves. Having The Reveal without the response is bad.
  • If your character is a fanfiction character and the source material doesn't "do" dark backstories, avoid giving her one unless you're deliberately writing a Dark Fic.


  • Make sure to give your characters names that are easy to spell and pronounce.
  • If you want to name a character after yourself, don't try to hide it; just do it. Be honest. Just make sure such a character has a minor role in the grand scheme of things, and that such a name will still fit in the setting.
  • In some fandoms, everybody has a Meaningful Name. In others, names are typically ordinary. In some settings, characters have very strange names, or their names are jokes. Sometimes, it's a combination. As usual with such things, you should go with the flow.
    • There's no real need for a "Blind Idiot" Translation - Hanzi Smatter shows just how common this is. A character unwittingly named something like "Chronic Nasal Congestion" will immediately send you into Narm territory.
  • Use names involving gemstones, flowers, and colors with discretion. Stick with those already commonly established as names, like "Ruby", "Lily", and "Violet", respectively.
  • If you want a name from any other language than your own default language, make sure the setting allows it... and that it's an actual name. People making up 'Japanese-sounding' names are the greatest offenders here; adding "-ko" to the end of a few vaguely Asian-sounding syllables is right out.
    • There is no excuse for making up names in an existing language. If you think a foreign name will improve your character, you can find a genuine one on any number of baby name dictionaries on the Internet. There are even extensive lists of common foreign surnames and their meanings, so you don't need to make up those either.
      • Using foreign words as names (ex: "Kyoryu", the Japanese word for "dinosaur") should make sense in the story. Using a Spanish or Mexican name in a setting with no equivalent to Spain or Mexico is nonsense. Using a Swahili name in a setting with an Africa equivalent is acceptable.
    • This said, there are ways an exotic name could be justified. If the character is religious, she might have taken a new name – possibly as an initiation practice. Her parents might have given her an Embarrassing First Name, which would be why she goes by a first initial. In general, though, there are three major acceptable explanations for a person bearing a name from outside her culture of rearing: (1) She has been assimilated into the relevant culture (good backstory potential), (2) she was saddled with it by her parent(s), or (3) she chose it for herself for some reason, such as being transgender.
  • Do not give your character a name with a 'creative' alternate spelling just to make her seem more special or unique. "Jennifer" is no less special or interesting than a "Jynnifyr". This includes excessive punctuation, such as "Jy'n'ff'er" or "J'yn-i-Ffer". It's much more likely to pull your readers out of your world and into one where they laugh or gag (depending on the reader) at your poor sense in namingnote .
  • An entirely made-up name is a very unwise choice in any more or less realistic universe. If it's an exotic, magical-medieval setting where everyone's names are fancy, you're safe. The big exception is if the character's backstory includes the sort of parents who would hang a made-up name on their kid. This generally means that they're members of some non-conformist counterculture, they're poseurs, or they're oblivious to what effect being named Tiphane Starshadow D'leci'a Jones is going to have on the poor kid. However, this is often Played for Laughs.
    • If the character comes from a fictional culture where everyone's names are similarly made-up, you are also safe. If the character is an alien or otherwise nonhuman, a real name would be less realistic. If, however, the fictional culture has an established language or naming convention, follow the naming conventions rather than picking sounds at random.
    • You might want to dump it in a search engine before you use it, to verify whether it just happens to have a meaning. You can get some ugly coincidences.note 
  • Historically, almost every name at some point in its history was a Meaningful Name. In some cultures, this is still true; it's either given by hopeful parents, earned by one's own deeds or attributes, or indicates family status or place of origin. In other cases, instead of considering the meaning, a parent might name a child after a friend or relative, or just pick a name that sounds nice. If you're going to make a point of giving your character an unusual or meaningful name, think about who chose it, and why. Because seriously, nobody is going to name their child "dark blood" in any language unless they're either horrible parents or genuinely ignorant (or are part of a culture that names offspring names like "garbage", "stench" or such other things to ward off spirits).
    • That said, be careful with overly fitting Meaningful Names. Parents cannot see into the future of their child (unless they're explicitly psychic), so if they call them Dragonslayer and the grown-up kid indeed ends up killing dragons for a living, it's plain unrealistic. It can be made more believable if there is a sound prospect that the name might be true one day; for example, said child is born into a warrior elite and the dragons abound in the setting. On the contrary, an overly fitting surname will almost always stick out. Such things are better kept as a Character Name Alias or a nickname, but keep in mind that usually, nicknames are used only within a certain group, clique or subculture.
      • The exception to the above rule on surnames is if either a) the surname is related to a family business (e.g. if your surname is "Dragonslayer", then your parents slay dragons, and their parents before them slew dragons, and so on; a Real Life example is the surname "Smith" and its equivalents) or b) the surname relates to an much older relative (e.g. everyone in the Dragonslayer Clan can trace their lineage back to Jack the Dragonslayer; someone named Smith is probably not a metalworker, nor is either of their parents, but someone in their lineage all but certainly was). Thus, in the first example it is reasonable that the character can slay dragons, as they were probably trained for it by their family for years.

  • In general, don't do things just for your character that you aren't willing to do for other characters. Don't lavishly describe only your character and leave everybody else as a vague entity. Don't make up new words only to describe your character. Don't decide that your character's walk across the room warrants four paragraphs while another character's heroic rescue of somebody else gets a single sentence. Balance is everything, after all. Not all of your readers will like one character, nor will they all hate another. You want to give them all something they might find interesting.
  • With some experience it is simple to construct the Rolling Description - rather than a chunk of description, the character is described, feature by feature, gradually over multiple chapters. In the first chapter, she's just a young woman with auburn hair. In the second, you know she has green eyes. In the third, you find out she has long fingers. And so on.
  • No Purple Prose unless the whole story is that. Getting most of the description is akin to stealing the spotlight. Your character should get descriptions no more detailed than the main characters'.
    • You can get fancy in your descriptions, like in moments that are important for character building, but only if the main characters also have fancy descriptions in such moments.
  • If it's a visual story, only make your character the focus when needed. Even if the story is told from the point of view of your character, the main character should still be "in frame" most of the time.
  • If your character still gets criticism, look at the kind of criticism it is. If it's insulting and not really getting at what the problem with the character is, and just a problem with you, it may be Trolling. If it's Constructive Criticism, you don't have to follow it, but at least consider their points.
  • The saying goes that every character must have a reason to be in a scene. Otherwise you end up with The Load, or a smaller version of Trapped by Mountain Lions. Make sure your character has an actual reason to be there, rather than just because you want them to be. From this standpoint, even The Millstone would be a better way to go than either trope above, because then your character is at least affecting the story in some noticeable way. And unlike if she were The Load and Trapped by Mountain Lions, you can also use your character's Millstone status to kickstart some Character Development if she notices she's making things worse and makes an effort to better herself.
  • Introduce your character to the story when it's necessary to do so, and make sure she doesn't disrupt the narrative. Your character should seamlessly work her way into the story without fanfare or attention - it's a well-written character that gets noticed, not a red-carpet introduction.
  • Don't introduce your character in the first sentence, especially in the manner of
    "Hi, I'm [name], and I have [insert physical description]."
    • Also don't have your character look in a mirror just to "justify" sentences and sentences worth of physical description.
      • Unless they are going to a formal occasion, and even then you focus on the clothes and accessories, not how muscular the character is.
  • Don't spend entire paragraphs describing your characters' clothing unless that particular clothing is for some reason very important to the overall story or if the description of the clothing is meant to convey something about the character other than her fashion sense (e.g. you might convey how a bride feels about her impending marriage by giving a detailed description of her wedding dress from her perspective.)

Extra Credits

Watch Terrible Writing Advice. One of its earlier episodes deals with the Mary Sue writing, and watching the episode may give you further advices on what to avoid so you don't end up writing a Mary Sue.