Complete Monster Proposal Thread

to Thomas!

@Yorkobe Shounen I kept Demise's write-up brief since the manga is so short, and I pretty much covered everything.

Agent: Maybe it's just semantics, but I always considered a serial rapist one with many victims, not one with a single victim over years.

queen of the black puddle and Thomas.

I feel that you could still do more then summarize, a writeup needs some flake to emphasize how evil they are especially specific moments

The writeup feels very matter of fact

Edited by YorkobeShounen on Feb 4th 2024 at 11:26:09 AM

• Five Nights at Freddy's Fan Works
• Marvel Fan Works
• Phoenix Wright's Turnabout Goodbyes & Investigations 2's The Inherited Turnabout: Manfred von Karma is an amoral prosecutor who uses underhanded tactics to maintain his perfect win streak. Manfred is desperate enough to preserve his winning streak that he takes to subjecting Jeffrey Master to a whole year of psychological torment to break him into confessing, finally coercing him after spitefully threatening to get his beloved daughter convicted instead. When defense attorney Gregory Edgeworth gets him penalized in a trial by exposing his illegal tactics, Manfred becomes enraged despite still winning said trial, taking the chance given by an earthquake striking the courtroom to catch up with Gregory and his son Miles in an elevator and murdering Gregory, leading to Miles having nightmares about the fact he might have killed his father every day for 15 years. Taking Miles under his wing, Manfred raises him to become a cold, ruthless prosecutor who cares for nothing but always winning a guilty verdict. Setting up a second murder, Manfred plans to frame Miles for both it and his own father's death, intending to see his adoptive son convicted for murder as the final act of his revenge against Gregory.
• Midnight Madness (link): The Joker is Batman's Arch-Enemy who plots to kick off the new year with a big crime. Breaking out of Arkham Asylum, the Joker takes the guests at a New Year party hostage and kills them all, beginning with the woman who interrupted his monologue. The Joker disguises himself as a construction worker for a New Year's Eve party at Gotham Square, before using Joker Toxin to kill all the workers when the construction chief recognises him. The Joker fills the giant ball meant to commemorate the coming of a New Year with Joker Toxin, planning to drop it on the Square just as the clock strikes midnight and potentially kill the whole city. When The Question tries to distract him, the Joker shoots him and reveals he has a back-up plan to just the drop ball on the crowd of people if Batman stops the release of the toxin, before attempting to kill the Question with the toxin.
• Oliver & Company: Bill Sykes is a strikingly dark villain in an otherwise lighthearted story. Running a dock shipping company as a front, Sykes is in truth a vicious gangster and Loan Shark who indebts downtrodden people to him and then forces them to pay him back, with interest, under threat of torture and murder. Sykes casually orders a man's death be dragged out and then to have him killed with Cement Shoes in one scene to intimidate his current debtee Fagin, whose life and those of his beloved dogs Sykes regularly threatens. When Fagin comes up with the idea of selling the kitten Oliver back to his owner, young Jenny, to pay back his debt, Sykes uses the opportunity to instead kidnap Jenny and hold her hostage to extort her parents, threatening to have the girl Eaten Alive by his ravenous Dobermans. When Fagin and his dogs try to save the girl, Sykes attempts to kill Jenny's would-be rescuers and retrieve her to either finish ransoming, or kill as well.
• Treasure Planet: Scroop is the most bloodthirsty member of John Silver's mutineers. Completely lacking in his boss's standards and redeeming qualities, Scroop introduces himself nearly killing fifteen-year-old cabin boy Jim Hawkins for mouthing off to him. When first mate Mr. Arrow reins Scroop in, Scroop pays him back later by sadistically cutting the lifeline keeping Arrow from falling into a black hole, then pins the blame on Jim just to hurt him even more. Scroop constantly seeks to undermine Silver's authority over him so he can kill off the crew of the R.L.S. Legacy, and meets his end attempting to doom Jim to a slow death in the vacuum of the Etherium: "Do say hello to Mr. Arrow!"
• 101 Dalmatian Street: Cruella de Vil, the one and only Devil Woman, returns in this series to seek revenge on the descendants of Pongo and Perdita. The decades since the original movie have turned Cruella into a harridan by harridan's standards who now acts with full regard to the Dalmatians' sapience. Cruella plans to mince all 99 of the puppies in her very own skinning machine, intending to force their parents Doug and Delilah to watch the entire macabre process before turning them into "matching luggage". Cruella is also hideously abusive to her grand-nephew Hunter, at one point leaving him locked in a shipping container for six months with only dog food to eat, resulting in the poor kid undergoing Sanity Slippage. When he finally snaps under her abuse, Cruella callously orders him caged up with the puppies.
• Wawanakwa Massacre (2014) (link): Chris McLean and Mildred "Blaineley" Stacey Andrews O'Halloran are the two masterminds behind the Wawanakwa Massacre. Wishing to get back their fame and fortune, McLean and Blainely plan on bringing the contestants back to the island so they can be murdered, so Chris can act like the hero while Blainely writes a book off her survival. Roping Chef Hatchet, Josh, and Courtney into the plot, the two cause the brutal deaths of 9 of the contestants. When they escaped to the Casa De Losers, the duo continues slaughtering the contestants until only Geoff, Izzy, and Lindsay are left, with Chris and Blainely betraying and killing both Josh and Courtney to frame them. After killing Bridget and tying up the remaining survivors, Blainely betrays and kills Chris and attempts to finish off the cast, and despite being killed by Izzy, manages to still ruin their lives as she frames Izzy for the murders and causes her to go to an institution, while leaving lifelong trauma for both Lindsay and Geoff.
• Natural Selection: Ragyo Kiryuin is the CEO of REVOCS and the monstrous matriarch of the Kiryuin family. Seeking to research the effects Life Fibers have on humans, Ragyo manipulates Soichiro Matoi into falling for and marrying her, using their two daughters Satsuki and Ryuko as the first test subjects, almost killing the latter. Throughout the years, Ragyo would order separate hits on both Soichiro and Satsuki; drills a Humans Are Insects mindset into her younger daughters Ryuko and Nui; subjects Ryuko to an Amnesia Loop with Mind Stitching; and rapes and molests all three daughters, sometimes coercing Ryuko and Nui into molesting Satsuki. When Ryuko confronts her about Satsuki running away, Ragyo viciously beats her and subjects her to Mind Stitching so brutal, it leaves her an Empty Shell until Junketsu's botched attempt to fix her leaves her violent and unstable. Eventually, it's revealed that Ragyo's ultimate plan is to betray the Life Fibers during their plot and rule over all as a goddess, subjecting countless beings to an awful fate. Ragyo's actions, from the abuse of her daughters to her apocalyptic endgame, disgusts everyone, even the Life Fibers she supposedly worships.
• Hellaverse fanfic Revelation: Alastor, The Radio Demon, is portrayed as a sadistic and deranged tyrant. Murdering Lucifer and arresting Charlie Morningstar, Alastor turns Hell into an even worse dictatorship, where he punishes all crime, regardless of severity. Alastor massacres anyone for even trying to question him, sending prisoners into the Pit of Fire, where their spirits are broken through torture before being thrown into a fire pit to burn to death. Enraged over a minor criticism Moxxie made, Alastor massacres Imp City out of spite. Capturing Moxxie, Blitzo, and Stolas, Alastor subjects them to intense torture and orders their execution date to draw out fugitives, torturing Moxxie to force him to stop the revolution against him and proceeding to order all rebels to be executed when Moxxie refuses, even murdering his right-hand man Edrich for conspiring against him. When the prison goes down in flames, Alastor abandons Vox and Valentino to die as he turns into a giant monster to try and kill the resistance in one final attempt to keep his power that he believes he rightfully earns.
• Obsession (link): Norman Derringer is the abusive ex-husband of Maya DiMartino and the one responsible for all her trauma. Initially seeming like the perfect man, Norman showed his true colors after they got married, physically abusing her to the point where she had a miscarriage. After she was able to work up the courage to leave him, Norman became a Serial Killer and Serial Rapist known as the L.A. Ripper, preying on women who resembled Maya. Initially only refraining from going after her because he doesn't want her to think he cares, Norman's obsession gets the better of him, and he tracks down and brutally tortures Maya's older sister Elena to get Maya's location, killing Elena after he gets this information. Arriving in Royal Woods, Norman breaks into Maya's house and attempts to rape and murder her, and attempts to kill Lincoln when he intervenes to try to save Maya from Norman.
• How I Became A Superhero: Mathias "Naja" Najarovski is a childish man who is making the drugs that gives people superpowers. Once a child whose parents had his powers removed, Naja killed them in retaliation and became obsessed with trying to recreate having powers. For this, Naja has superhumans abducted so he can slowly drains all of their blood out of them until they die to create the super drug. Naja then sells the drugs on the streets, causing a wave of violent crimes. When he learns Lieutenant Moreau has powers, Naja orders his men to capture him to drain him as well, and also abducts the 15-year-old Lily to drain her.
• Lift (2024): Lars Jorgensen is a wealthy businessman who became a feared terrorist mastermind, financing terrorist attacks around the world for his own monetary gain, including staging an attack on a New Zealand plane that killed 183 people. Jorgensen then starts planning with the hacker group Leviathan on staging a massive global flooding that would kill millions of innocent people. When Arthur Tigue rats him out, Jorgensen has his right-hand Cormac kidnap and torture him before having Arthur Eaten Alive by Cormac's attack dog. To have proof of Leviathan's abilities, Jorgensen has them flood Madrid, resulting in many deaths. Jorgensen then has his men board a commercial airliner going to Zurich that contains the gold with which Jorgensen will pay Leviathan, and Cormac takes Cyrus and his thieves with him, along with the gold, to Jorgensen's estate in Italy. When the plane crash lands on his estate and the Leviathan leader finds out one of the thieves is Interpol, Jorgensen shoots and kills her when she attempts to back out of the deal, and attempts to kill the rest of the thieves.
• Island of the Lizard King: The Lizard King, once a chieftain of the lizard men of Fire Island, took over the island's penal colony and converts it into a slave camp, forcing hundreds of prisoners to toil away in the island's gold mines, resulting in their deaths. Eager to ensure his dominance, the Lizard King bonds with a powerful Gonchong to make himself invincible and immortal, and launches raids across numerous islands around Fire Island over the course of several years, abducting more slaves when his current batch runs out and leaving numerous coastal villages in ruins, as well as conducting inhumane experiments on prisoners and even his own lizard men servants to ensure total control over his subjects and his eternal dominance.
• Season 2:
  • Shane Langston is the chief of security for New Age, who seeks to use his position to exploit the company's new technology for profit, no matter how many lives are lost. Langston plans to sell 650 "Little Wing" missile microchips to the weapons dealer A.M., indifferent that the tech will be used by terrorists to bring down civilian airplanes and kill thousands. When members of Reacher's old unit, the 110th, accidentally stumble across the scheme, Langston has them kidnapped, brutally tortured, then murdered by being thrown out of a helicopter, threatening the woman who hired them with a similar fate for herself and her young daughter. Langston dispatches a variety of trigger-happy thugs to kill the rest of the 110th with no concern for the collateral body count they rack up, and after a failed attempt to torture and kill the rest of his enemies, Langston ditches his allies to die to save his own skin, and promises to later target the loved ones of the 110th to finish them off.
  • A.M. is the middleman in Langston's plan to sell Little Wing to terrorists, uncaring about the amount of lives they'll take. An infamous arms dealer and complete blank wanted by Homeland Security for selling weapons to terrorist organizations, A.M. makes a habit of killing people to ensure zero traces of his identity are left behind. This includes killing two men he bought fake passports from; murdering a plastic surgeon to steal his identity, then killing his secretary for good measure; and murdering a cop for giving him a warning ticket.
• Skyward Sword: Demon King Demise rises from beneath the Surface to Take Over the World. Seeking the Triforce, Demise leads his army of monsters across the land, slaughtering as many humans as possible and burning entire villages to the ground, even killing Link himself in the process while mocking the hero's courage. After facing the Goddess Hylia in a final battle and being defeated, Demise spitefully vows to return as he is sealed away.
• Vol. 3: The Unhappiest Place on Earth:
  • "Miss Bliss" is a sadist out to dominate others. Working with Fantasy Funland owner Dalton Trayer to secure funding for his theme park, Bliss establishes a human trafficking operation underneath the park, kidnapping young girls to be eventually sold as sex slaves. Bliss also tortures women for sexual pleasure, doing so to Madison Wynter with hopes of mentally breaking her to the point of becoming her latest pet.
  • Sven is Bliss's perverted henchman. Assisting Bliss in securing the right women for her sex trafficking operation, Sven decides to have some fun once Bliss is away by attempting to rape the women under their captivity as a way to test the merchandise before selling them, with the implication that this isn't his first time.
• William Afton was a notorious Serial Killer who murdered several children at Freddy Fazbear's Pizza by dressing up as an Accessory-Wearing Cartoon Animal to gain their trust. Eventually, Afton would be horrifically burnt in a fire, only kept alive by Andrew, one of his victims torturing him for revenge. Afton would then trick Arthur Blyth and the hospital staff into bringing him to a Fazbear Distribution Center to free him of Andrew, spreading Agony across the city to infect and corrupt countless toys, mascots, and animatronics, indirectly causing many incidents where the corrupted mascots would attack people. Afton himself would end up possessing the Stitchwraith with Andrew and Jake, discretely using the animatronic to kill several people and pinning it on Andrew. When Jake tries to help Andrew ascend to the afterlife, Afton tries to stop them out of spite, and when that fails, proceeds to viciously maul Jake in rage. Leaving Jake for dead, Afton, empowered by Eleanor, would then fuse all the corrupted toys and mascots with him, to create Afton's Amalgamation, with the fusion causing the sapient toys and mascots constant pain. Afton's rampage would have eventually endangered the entire city, where he intended to kill even more children to [satisfy his neverending need to inflict pain and suffering onto others.
• This Storm: Salvador "Salvy" Abascal, head of the Mexican Sinarquista party, poses as a fascist to profit off of World War II. Once having participated in a gold heist, Salvy comes to his current office with the proceeds and radicalizes hopeful operatives by demanding they each commit three murders. With thousands enslaved in his plants, Salvy allies with Dudley Smith in a plot to run Mexican and Japanese slaves to America, along with heroin, to continue lining his pockets. Betraying Dudley, Salvy uses the opportunity to run saboteurs along with their slaves, plotting to eradicate rival fascist factions and violently rob Americans to line his own pockets.
• Reign of the Seven Spellblades Vol. 10: The Patriarch of the Sherwood Clan is the grandfather of Chloe Halford and great-grandfather of Gwyn and Shannon Sherwood and Oliver Horn. Only present in an extended flashback sequence, Mr. Sherwood took in Chloe's widower Edgar Groves and their young son Oliver after her murder, dismissing Edgar as a "stud horse" and used Oliver to play back the Ghost Memory of his mother's Rasputinian Death, forcing him to relive the agony in first person. Sherwood then pushed Edgar to repeatedly train his son to the point of death in order to enable him to perform a Merger of Souls to get the power to avenge his mother, but really only wanted to see how far one could take the Sherwoods' family magic before dying of it. When Oliver hit puberty, in order to keep the soul merge magic "in the family", Sherwood commanded Oliver to sire a child with Shannon, and when Oliver refused, immediately injected him with a near-lethal dose of psychoactive drugs and unleashed him on his cousin to impregnate her by force; when the pregnancy ended in stillbirth, Sherwood jovially promised to keep trying until she carried one to term. A controlling sociopath who ruled over his family with an iron fist, Sherwood went to his grave convinced that everything he'd done had been for the good of the family, heedless of the lasting harm he'd done to his own flesh and blood well into the series' present day.
• Season 5: Roy Tillman, third-generation owner of the Tillman Ranch and Sheriff of Stark County, Minnesota, is the dirtiest cop Fargo has ever produced. A particularly nasty breed of constitutional sheriff, Tillman runs Stark County like his own medieval fiefdom, disposing of the casualties of his criminal business in a dedicated mass grave on the ranch. After murdering his long-abused first wife, Linda, Roy moved onto a teenage runaway named Nadine Bump, grooming her, marrying her, then raping and abusing her for the next two years before Nadine ran away. Roy obsessively hounds Nadine, now named "Dot" in the present day after remarrying, to place her back under his thumb as he feels is his right; at one point, Roy dispatches minions to capture Dot's innocent husband Wayne so he can torture him, and when his men capture the wrong person by accident, Roy irritably blows his brains out. After federal pressure comes down on him after he impulsively kills the lawyer of Dot's wealthy mother-in-law, Roy whips up a right-wing militia to kill as many cops as possible. Roy has no loyalty to anyone but himself in the end; he abandons his oldest son Gator after the latter is blinded, attempts to murder his third wife Karen after killing her dad—his own father-in-law—and abandons all of his own men to die in a suicidal last stand while he sneaks off through a secret escape tunnel. Hypocritical in every quality he calls virtuous, Roy is nothing but a despicable coward beneath his macho John Wayne image, a bully and a "baby" who steps on others to make himself feel big.
• Murder is Easy (2023 series): Honoria Waynflete, despite presenting herself as a friendly, unassuming local spinster, is truthfully a smug, selfish, sadistic, and bitter woman driven by an all-consuming hatred for her former friend Lord Witfield. Not content with anything but his utter destruction, Honoria murders anyone who slights or even insults Witfield, casually causing eight innocent people to die in often elaborate and painful manners, such as swapping Amy Gibbs's medicine with hair dye or drowning Harry Carter, all to frame Witfield and ensure he's hanged in disgrace. To complete her plan, Honoria lures Witfield's fiancée, Bridget Conway, into the woods, intending to stab her to death with Witfield's dagger, and when foiled, flat-out attempts to strangle Bridget with her bare hands.
• 1994 series: "The Dark Man", Randall Flagg, is a diabolical emissary of evil who helps orchestrate the unleashing of the Captain Trips virus and its subsequent decimation of humanity. Causing suffering everywhere he goes, Flagg establishes his own fiefdom in Las Vegas where he encourages utter depravity while torturing and executing anyone who opposes his rule. Flagg arranged the bombing of the town hall of peaceful, rival community Boulder, and he plans to use nuclear weapons to wipe out all life in Boulder, then hold any other pockets of humanity hostage under similar threat if they don't cow to him. Willing to cripple, mutilate, and murder his own minions for the pettiest reasoning, Flagg oversees the cruel deaths of multiple lead characters, and personally rapes Nadine so viciously that she becomes an Empty Shell whom Flagg hopes to use as nothing but a broodmare.
• Legion's "Chapter 14": In one of the Alternate Universes the episode focuses on, Amahl Farouk—the Shadow King—succeeds in his goal to utterly corrupt David. Having tormented David since youth, Farouk sways him into using his powers to get ahead in the corporate world, reading minds and manipulating those around him. Eventually becoming the richest man on Earth and "uniting" all of humanity under him as subservients whom he keeps under constant psychic surveillance, Farouk has David keep his old boss around as an assistant just to mistreat her; tortures his sister Amy's mind until her nose bleeds in a petty show of power; and keeps a posse around him of men and women implied to be a psychically enslaved harem.
• Hector Magdelena himself was a violent drug dealer who informed to Wilhite in return for the LAPD turning a blind eye as he flooded the streets with poison. Also horribly abusive to his family, Hector regularly beat his wife and two children and even groomed his daughter Lucille to sleep with his criminal allies, Wilhite in particular using her for years.
• Battlefront II (2005): Emperor Palpatine's evil casts a shadow over all of the game's events:
  • "Rise of the Empire": After creating the 501st Legion to serve his personal interests, Palpatine begins preparing for his Empire by having them steal the power core for the Death Star. After General Grievous's death, Palpatine executes Order 66, having Vader and the 501st kill every Knight, Master, guard, and child aligned with the Jedi. With full power secured, Palpatine crushes any attempt at rebellion, including massacring the Queen of his home planet of Naboo and her security force and forcing the 501st to kill an army of rival Clones alongside the Kamino leadership. After having the 501st put down a Death Star prison riot by killing every prisoner involved, Palpatine works to crush the Rebellion through the Death Star; when the Death Star is destroyed, Palpatine responds by having the Rebel forces on Yavin IV massacred, then tracks the Rebellion to Hoth to crush them once and for all.
  • "Galactic Conquest"'s "The Confederate Uprising" & "Dark Reign of the Empire": If the Confederacy wins the game, Darth Sidious leads his forces in killing everyone associated with the Republic, including his loyal Clone army, the Jedi, and Anakin Skywalker, to take power with his Empire. If the Empire wins the game, Palpatine's Empire crushes the Rebellion, with his army destroying Endor and its population while Palpatine forces Luke Skywalker to kneel before him.
• Grand Theft Auto V: Peter Dreyfuss is a seemingly eccentric but egotistical retired Vinewood director, and a twisted "artist" obsessed with the suffering of others. The culprit of Leonora Johnson's infamous murder, Dreyfuss had tortured and raped Leonora for an extended period, mutilating her both physically and sexually while she was still alive, before decapitating her. Years after the fact, Dreyfuss torments her surviving family with taunting phone calls and messages, regularly sending them Leonora's belongings and severed body parts. In a confession letter to his "friend", Dreyfuss subtly belittles him for not understanding why he did it, comparing it to other instances of torturing hitchhikers; sleeping with young girls; and paying two prostitutes to stab each other. Confronted by Franklin, Dreyfuss cowardly tries to flee, attempting to justify himself by claiming he "immortalized" Leonora through his art.
• The Life and Suffering of Sir Brante: Dorius Otton, the military commander of the province of Magra, is corrupt even by the depthless standards of the Arknian nobility. Before Brante even reaches adulthood, Dorius is a rapist and abuser who first meets the player attempting to reclaim his runaway slave, a young commoner named Sophia. Age only refines Dorius's cruelty; as military commander of Magra, Dorius goes from village to village collecting an exorbitant tax from the commoners, pillaging and razing at his own merriment while brutally putting down any resistance. Should Brante's Justice rating fall too low, Dorius will order a mob of hundreds of disaffected villagers put down by force, leading to a horrible massacre should Brante be unable to or unwilling to stop it. Dorius's endgame for Magra is the "Night of the Serpents", where on behalf of his benefactor Archduke Milanidas, Dorius will purge the province of any political rivals and their innocent families. Dorius also has a tendency to force people—mostly his own men—to participate in lopsided duels to the death, often repeatedly challenging them after their resurrection until they meet their True Death. Reviled not just by the peasantry but by almost all of his own Arknian allies, if convicted both sides will find Dorius Otton equally guilty of unremitting evil.
• The Lost Crown: Jahandar, "Guardian of the Citadel", is a vile Manticore. Hunting men for both food and to satisfy his bloodlust, Jahandar previously roamed the Hyrcanian Forest devouring its villagers, including a child, while dooming said village to famine after killing their livestock. Terrorizing the Citadel for fun, Jahandar slayed all 500 warriors sent to stop him, before losing to King Darius. Forced to guard the Citadel by Darius, Jahandar spent many more years feasting on humans, their bones littering his arena.
• A ROBLOX Quest series: The Phantom Orb is a shadowy entity seeking to claim the elements of Robloxia to Take Over the World. Debuting in Quest to the Guest, Phantom Orb brainwashes Guest into attacking his bullies and conquering Robloxia. When the player manages to stop his plans, he tries to kill both them and Guest by exploding himself. Returning in Bloxxy-Tooie, Phantom Orb possesses Graciela and transforms her into Grantilda. As Grantilda, the Phantom Orb attacks the Mayahem Temple on the Isle 'O Jiggs, shattering the sacred Jiggy before being expelled by the player. In his final appearance, Phantom Orb uses the elements stolen in the previous game to attack Roblox HQ, killing Shedletsky during the attack, and builds the OmeDarkTron. After his plans are foiled for the third time, Phantom Orb instead decides to destroy the world and steals the souls of the element guardians to empower himself before being defeated in the final battle.
• The Sniper 2:
  • Senator Belini is the true mastermind behind the Tacklmacain conspiracy. Hoping to spread Tacklmacain across the entire world in order to sell vaccines, Belini partners with the Bernaldi Family to acquire the Tacklmacain and kill anybody who stands in their way, with his greed resulting in numerous deaths. Once Bernaldi bites it, Belini arrives to put an end to protagonist Harry Spencer.
  • Robert Bernaldi is the head of the Bernaldi Family who joined Belini's conspiracy for money. Forcing CIA Agent Gabriel Armitage to act as his attack dog by threatening the life of his girlfriend Cindy Miller, Bernaldi had Gabriel kill countless people and betray all his friends for fun, even using him to steal the Tacklmacain from the CIA. Using Cindy as a mole to ensure his opponents don't get in his way, Bernaldi gives Belini warheads to further spread Tacklmacain across the entire world, and once they've been disarmed, Bernaldi attempts to hold C.A. hostage while bragging to Gabriel how he's won again.

I did that. I described him slaughtering villages, killing Link, and mocking him.

@ACW I’d request removing the Beneath the Earth pothole and putting back the Kick the Dog one, as the latter is more important in terms of what makes Demise so evil.

Edited by Remnant43 on Feb 4th 2024 at 2:41:42 PM

Yes to the Black Puddle Queen and Thomas! Also thank you Crow for talking this one over with me/inspiring me via your own. Silent Hill: Downpour starts with the main character's son's tragic death at the hands of a mundane monster... the disgusting Patrick Napier.

Who is Napier? What has he done?

A revolting convicted child molester, Napier manages to dodge justice after kidnapping, assaulting and killing protagonist Murphy Pendleton's young son Charlie. Although he isn't caught for the crime, he is arrested after doing the same to an eight-year-old boy and to sentenced life imprisonment, where he's kept in isolation at Ryall State Prison. For revenge, Murphy gets himself arrested and makes a deal with the crooked Corrections officer George Sewell to be allowed access to Napier, brutally beating him and—in canon—stabbing the deserving bastard to death as he pleads for his life.

Heinousness?

While child abuse is aplenty in this horror series, sexual abuse is not and while Thomas Orosco has the incestuous, prolonged attacks on Angela under his belt, Napier is a multiple child rapist (and killer) who horribly drowns poor Charlie after assaulting the boy. Even beyond the two he explicitly raped and killed, he's already a convicted child molester, so at the very least a third attack can be inferred.

He's completely unrelated to the Order and like Thomas, for a common criminal type villain it's something utterly grotesque that he does.

Mitigating factors?

His character is that of a cowardly pedophile, what do you think?

Verdict?

Keep.

Edited by 43110 on Feb 4th 2024 at 2:43:28 PM

Ew. to Napier.

Napier

Napier

Napier

for Patrick Napier.

to Napier, who for some reason looks exactly like Philip Seymour Hoffman.

I've made that change.

Yes to Napier.

Napier

Got a fairy tale keeper here

The work

From the anthology book English Fairy Tales by Joseph Jacobs comes Mr. Fox, a story about a young woman named Mary. Mary has had many lovers until she met a man named Mr. Fox, who seduced Mary and the 2 get engaged.

Only we learn Mr. Fox has a dark secret.

Who is Mr. Fox and what has he done

Only known as Mr. Fox, nobody knows who he is except that he's brave and rich, wooing Mary until she agrees to marry him.

Now Mr. Fox has a castle, but for some reason never showed it off to Mary, so a few days before the wedding Mary decides to go check it out while Mr. Fox is out on business.

When Mary finds the castle it has these strange writings on it "Be bold, be bold, as Mary goes deeper she finds more "Be bold, be bold, but not too bold", until she finds a doorway saying

Be bold, be bold, but not too bold,

Lest that your heart's blood should run cold.

Mary opens the door anyway and finds many skeletons and blood-soaked bodies of young women. Mr. Fox then comes in, dragging another woman's body while Mary barely manages to hide in time. Mr. Fox then tries to pull a ring off the woman's finger, only for it to be on too tight, so he cuts her hand, causing the ring to land in Mary's lap. Mr. Fox doesn't find though and just drags the body into the room.

Mary flees, and soon the day of the wedding arrives, with Mary and Mr. Fox having a big celebratory breakfast. Mr. Fox comments that Mary looks unwell, so she describing a strange dream she had, of her sneaking into his castle and finding the bodies. Mr. Fox tries to deny it until Mary pulls out the ring, so Mary's brothers and friends pull out swords and hack Mr. Fox to pieces.

Mitigating qualities

First, while the story is very short, it does a plot, of Mary being engaged to Mr. Fox, her investigating his castle and finding out he's a Serial Killer and exposing him.

As for Mr. Fox himself, nothing, he might've wooed Mary but he's a serial killer targeting young rich women like Mary herself, so I think Mary was fortunate to have found him out before they got married.

Heinousness

Only bad guy in the story, and he's a Serial Killer with a room full of women he's killed, with it being indicated that's it's quite a number too

Conclusion

Easy for the not so fantastic Mr. Fox

mr Fox

to Mr Fox

Yes to Mr. Fox!

Sure to Fox. Is this an adaptation of Bluebeard, since it's a fairy tale compilation?

Foxy

Sure to Fox.

Napier and Mr. Fox

Napier & Fox

to Thomas. I was thinking of proposing him but the game made him too enigmatic to really count, so finding a novel that clarifies things makes him an easy qualifier Patrick and The Fox as well.

Edited by Orangutans on Feb 4th 2024 at 4:45:59 AM