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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#92751: Aug 20th 2017 at 3:45:19 PM

For Filitt, besides the fact that he may be a WIE, the work page makes it seem like the Colony Drop that destroyed the planet may have been unintentional. Did Filitt know the planet would be destroyed?

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#92752: Aug 20th 2017 at 3:57:44 PM

  • Cage of Eden: Takashi Nishikiori is a sociopath with a sadistic love for tormenting and torturing others. Once crash-landing on an island with hundreds of other passengers, Nishikiori establishes himself a power base by blackmailing a large group of people into serving him in exchange for him giving them the antidote to a lethal plague they have contracted, claiming to be a doctor. When the group's leader tries to swear allegiance to save his young daughter's life, Nishikiori refuses to cure the duo to ensure no threats to his power, laughing over them as they die in agony. As leader of his group, Nishikiori encourages whistleblowing and betrayal amongst his followers, brutally beating and torturing any who try to stand against him, all while having zero problems sacrificing the lives of those loyal to him. When confronted by Akira Sengoku's group of teenagers, Nishikiori tortures them, sends them on a suicide mission, then attempts to burn the dozens of teens alive one by one, forcing the others to watch and cackling at their misery. In his worst scheme, Nishikiori captures all the females in Akira's group, then forces the males to try to rescue the girls, planning to execute one girl for every failed rescue attempt. Nishikiori then tries to force the girls themselves to sentence one of their own to die, secretly promising his men the chance to gang-rape all of the girls left alive once their "game" is done. Even when beaten, Nishikiori takes sick glee in revealing he's not even a real doctor who can cure a dying student's ailment, and makes one last attempt at screwing everyone over by taking a little girl hostage to make his getaway and leave everyone else to die. Nishikiori's presence on an island filled with monsters and mutations solidified the idea that sometimes, man is far crueler than any beast.
  • Heavy Metal L-Gaim: Emperor Oldna Poseidal built the forces of the Poseidal Empire until he launched a brutal campaign of conquest and extermination to enslave or destroy all in his path. Exterminating his old enemies the Yaman Clan, save for a few members, Poseidal sets up a brutal dictatorship, using his former lover as a proxy Poseidal by brainwashing her and having her commit atrocities in his name, with torture, murder and extermination being commonplace. Taking the identity of Arms Dealer Amandara Kamandara, Poseidal supplies weapons to both sides to keep the conflict going, making it even bloodier, so he can remain in power. When he reveals himself at the end, Poseidal gleefully attempts to annihilate all rebel forces, uncaring that this will kill many of his own soldiers as well.
  • Kaitou Joker (anime version): Professor Clover, introduced as a mere treasure-hunting burglar, reveals himself to be insatiable greed personified in his second appearance. Kidnapping and posing as a kingdom’s general to manipulate the land’s princess, he seeks to activate a weapon which would destroy the city, just to get an orb to power up his staff. To gain a rare treasure, Clover murdered the parents of two main characters, leading to both going through horrific childhoods following being orphaned. Previously working as the agent of an unknown federation, Clover again worked to steal another treasure, hoping to use its power to threaten the citizens of the nation containing it to submit to them lest he wipe them from the face of the earth. Manipulative and cruel, Clover corrupts a girl with time-bending powers, using her to steal more treasure and cause more havoc. When the heroes try to save her from his clutches, Clover threatens to murder her with acid, rather than lose her. Clover stands out in a usually-lighthearted series.
  • Keyman: The Hand of Judgement: Lazlo is a twisted sadist who is first introduced as a prime partaker in a Beastman trafficking ring, where Beastmen are tortured, abused, and raped for the pleasure of the wealthy, with Lazlo personally seen whipping a Beastman bloody before he is stopped by police officer Pete. After being granted an escape by Butler, Lazlo organizes a prison riot, slaughtering any guards who stand in his way to freedom. Once allying with Butler and becoming the super-powered Black Keyman, Lazlo first uses his abilities to seek vengeance on Pete for arresting him, leaving his current boss Franck to die in the process. As the seemingly sole super-powered being in Lockville City following this, Lazlo uses his powers to satisfy his disturbing and deviant tastes, kidnapping, raping, and butchering dozens upon dozens of women, defiling their corpses and using them as a throne. Capturing Pete's girlfriend Flora, and murdering his own henchmen when they fail him, Lazlo uses her as a hostage to torture Pete, proclaiming his plans to rape and torture her to death while Pete watches. In his final duel with Pete, Lazlo gleefully targets dozens of innocents to torment Pete, brutally executing several of them before being stopped, and spends his final moments whining that he doesn't deserve to be punished.
  • Ninja Gaiden: In the anime movie based on the original NES trilogy, Professor Bucky-Wise is a seemingly-nice man who was really the hidden villain pulling the strings. Bucky-Wise recorded a power surge when Ryu Hayabusa defeated a powerful demon, managing to capture some of its power. He forces his colleague Ned Friedman to help him perform bizarre experiments by kidnapping his daughter Katherine, using the demon's power to create an army of genetically altered creatures. Bucky-Wise is experimenting on humans, as Ryu and his friends discover that one of his labs has babies in jars and a twisted, mutilated dead creature on the ground. Bucky-Wise has his monsters attack Ryu and, when they fail to kill him, he kidnaps Ryu's girlfriend, Irene Lew. Ryu goes to Ned Friedman's corporation, believing he kidnapped her. Ryu confronts Ned, but Bucky-Wise kills him, stating he is no longer useful to him. Bucky-Wise then tells Ryu he plans to release the same demon Ryu defeated on the world,not caring that this demon has the power to destroy humanity. Ryu kills Bucky-Wise and frees Katherine, but not before Bucky-Wise transferred some of the demon's power to her, making her a vessel for the demon.
  • Spider-Man works:
    • Spider-Man: The Manga (1970-1971, illustrated by Ryoichi Ikegami): Kangaroo, from issues 7-9, is a bloodthirsty, brutish American wrestler with super strength that he abuses with absolute glee. After being blacklisted by his home country's wrestling association for the way he'd horrifically brutalize his opponents, Kangaroo travels to Japan to extend his special brand of cruelty to the locals. Landing on Spider-Man's radar by brutalizing four Japanese wrestlers, Kangaroo proceeds to cause chaos all over the city by assaulting people, stealing, and inciting panic among the masses. After stealing a canister of highly lethal bacteria with the power to kill thousands of innocent people should it go airborne, Kangaroo uses it as a shield to gain an edge over Spider-Man in combat. Once bested by Spidey, a smug Kangaroo decides to fling the canister to the ground which, had it not been for Spider-Man's intervention, would have condemned thousands to die, purely out of rage and spite towards the masses for hating him. Despite appearing before the comic's infamous Darker and Edgier tone shift, Kangaroo stands out as being among the most heinous foes that this incarnation of Spider-Man has fought, even causing Spidey to temporarily quit crime-fighting out of fear of becoming as bad as Kangaroo.
    • Spider-Man J (2004-2005; by Yamanaka Akira): General Wasperus is the vicious, arrogant second-in-command of the mysterious Lord Beastius's forces. Tasked with enslaving millions of Tokyo's citizens, Wasperus uses creations of his own, called Stealth Bees, which latch on to their hosts and turn them into prisoners of their own mind, aware and helpless while Wasperus is free to use them as soldiers and as slaves to carry out his bidding. He demonstrates this on Detective Flynn, a friend of Spider-Man's who he forces to fight to the death, smugly mocking Spider-Man about his predicament while stating that he picked this method of fighting Spider-Man solely for the sake of the look on his face when forced to kill a close ally. When Spidey hesitates to hurt Flynn, a bored Wasperus tries to butcher Spider-Man's young friends Harold and Jean-Marie before threatening to hurt other innocent civilians as well. After freeing Flynn from Wasperus's control and chasing him to his lair, the general fights the heroes himself and states that he intends to keep Spidey alive just long enough to live with the guilt of not saving millions of innocents from enslavement before squashing him like a bug. A dark, serious foe in an otherwise-lighthearted and funny comic, Wasperus proves to be this continuity's nastiest villain by far.
  • Sorcerer Stabber Orphen: Escalena from Revenge, the second season of the anime, is a sorcerous beast sealed away by the Heavenly Beings countless years ago for the havoc she wreaked upon the world. Escalena makes a bargain with the sorcerer McGregor Nielsen, saving his daughters from a deathly illness and resurrecting one of them in exchange for McGregor sacrificing five sorcerers to her to free her. Escalena erases the memory of McGregor's youngest daughter Lycoris and forces her sister Esperanza to constantly edit her memory to use her as a pawn, dispersing her to lure Orphen himself into her clutches. Once she's finally outed as the mastermind behind the plot, Escalena murders Esperanza right in front of the rest of her family and cruelly gloats she never intended on keeping either of McGregor's daughters alive, her true goal simply being to break from her seal and destroy the world for nothing more than her own amusement, even managing to spitefully kill McGregor himself in the throes of her own death after Orphen defeats her. By far the most evil of Orphen's usually-sympathetic enemies, Escalena is a deceitful monster, both literally and figuratively.
  • Ys: Dalles/Dares, in the OVA adaptations, is a sociopathic sorcerer who serves first Dark Fact, then Lord Darm, in his quest for power and cruelty. While serving Dark Fact, Dalles organizes the raiding of several villages by their monsters, and personally turns Sarah to stone while having his apprentice murder several villagers. As The Dragon to Darm, Dalles works to free his master from his imprisonment by forcing several villages to regular choose one of their own to sacrifice to Dalles's forces, men, women, and children alike, and, when confronted in the end by Adol Christin, Dalles gleefully turns dozens of villagers to stone solely to spite the boy. Dalles's ultimate goal is to release Darm then sit back and watch as he leads the total annihilation of the modern world.
  • Bushido: Way of the Warrior, by Rob Levin, Jessada Sutthi, et al.: The unnamed vampire lord is the leader of a clan of ravenous vampires who attack Japan. Initiating bloody massacres all over the island and ordering the attempted assassination of the Shogun through his right-hand Raven, the vampire lord attacks the wedding between the Shogun's daughter Mitsuko and Orochi, aiming to slaughter everyone there. After turning Orochi into a vampire, the vampire lord seduces Orochi into embracing his hunger and bringing Mitsuko to him to barter with her life in exchange for Japan. The vampire lord's ultimate goal, after reducing the population of Japan into cattle for him and his clan to hunt to their heart's content, is to sail out and devour all humanity, establishing an immortal vampiric empire with himself as its epicenter.
  • Scooby Apocalypse: Rufus T. Dinkley is one of "the Four," Velma Dinkley's four older brothers who sabotage Project Elysium in an attempt to take control of the minds of every human on earth, and is easily the worst seen thus far. Having funded Project Elysium solely to gain a horde of mindless slaves once it succeeded, Rufus hides out in his security building with his wife and several scientists when Elysium goes awry and mutates nearly all of humanity into monsters, spending his time there shooting the mutated humans for sport, abusing Daisy, and beating his scientists to death one by one as they fail him. When Velma and the Scooby Gang show up for his help, Rufus tries to blow Velma's head off, then reveals that he is planning on thwarting any attempts at a cure for the plague infecting humanity, instead wanting to take control of the monsters and rule over them as a god. As a final ploy, Rufus shuts down the security in his building to allow a monster horde to enter and maul his sister, her friends, and even his own wife to death as punishment for them not seeing his "greatness."
  • Burning Paradise (1994): Lord Kung is the bloodthirsty warden of the Red Lotus Temple. A former general of the Emperor, Kung willingly transferred to the temple to turn the place into his own pit of debauchery. Kung runs the Red Lotus as a dungeon of torture, lethal traps, and hard labor, executing people for as little as working too slow, and decorates the exterior of the Red Lotus with their maimed body parts, tossing any who can't work into the Red Lotus' underground cave to slowly perish—a cave bloated with hundreds of festering corpses by the time the hero Fong is taken into the Red Lotus. From his personal hobbies, Kung paints with the blood of his victims, conducts battles to the death between prisoners in the Red Lotus, and has a variety of concubines he rapes and abuses at his own leisure, murdering and bleeding out any who no longer fancy him and setting them up as mummified trophies. Even Kung's apparent sense of honor is revealed to be little more than deception to weaken his concubines of choice, a fact Kung admits to before beating his most recent victim Tou Tou into a bloody pulp under the reasoning that it's no fun for him if a woman doesn't resist his advances, ripping the head off of a servant and raping Tou Tou after he's beaten her into a terrified wreck. At the end of the film during the prisoners' rebellion, Kung promises to rape Tou Tou once more before handing her off to his servants to be gang-raped until she's no longer of value, before setting out to slaughter every rebelling prisoner himself. Kung is a sadist and a horrific hedonist more monster than man, who considers everyone as a plaything for him to torture and eventually throw away.
  • The Dark Tower (2017): Walter o' Dim, real name Walter Padick and known as The Man in Black, is an Evil Sorcerer who abducts multiple "special" children to use their psychic energy to try to annihilate the Dark Tower which protects existence from the hungry monstrosities that dwell outside reality. This is a process that leaves the children "burnt out" by the end, where Walter discards them. Having a dark enmity with the Gunslinger Roland Deschain, Walter destroys Roland's home, killing all his fellow Gunslingers, the last being Roland's own father who Walter murders in front of him. When 11-year-old Jake Chambers escapes Walter's men, Walter punishes them by forcing them to kill each other and sends soldiers to destroy an entire village Roland and Jake have taken refuge at. Murdering the local seer to get their location, Walter ambushes Jake's stepfather and mother, murdering both—the latter by burning her alive—and draws a smiley face and taunting message from her ashes for Jake to find. When Jake is captured, Walter attempts to use him to bring down the Dark Tower and start the apocalypse while facing Roland in a final battle.
  • Valerian and the City of a Thousand Planets: Commander Arün Filitt is a brutal General Ripper who, years ago, launched doomsday weapons to win a battle despite knowing it could destroy a planet with a sentient, albeit primitive. species known as the Pearls. Filitt sealed the records, fearing embarrassment, while murdering those who might know the truth personally. Years later, when the survivors of the species attempt to bring him to justice, Filitt has one captured and brutally tortured, before ordering him disposed of. When called to account for his actions, Filitt instructs his personal robot guard to murder even other humans and attempts to use a bomb to annihilate the remaining Pearls, caring nothing for those he's tried to destroy in his quest for glory.
  • The manga version of Father lacks the Alas, Poor Villain moment of his Brotherhood counterpart. Father is a being from beyond the Gate given form in a small flask and named Homunculus by the nameless slave who would become van Hohenheim in the Xerxes empire. Desiring to escape the flask, Homunculus would trick the king of Xerxes into a ritual that slaughtered multiple people to initiate an alchemy ritual that killed everyone in Xerxes and split their souls between Hohenheim and Homunculus, to the latter's horror. Later founding the nation of Amestris and creating the Homunculi, he took the name of "Father", guiding Amestris to become a military dictatorship that initiated military conflicts to provide bloodshed for an even greater ritual, including the genocide of the Ishvalan people. Intending to kill and steal the souls of tens of millions so that he could devour God, or Truth itself, Father demonstrates cold sadism when he faces Hohenheim and his children again, mentally torturing them as he also abandons or tries to absorb his own Homunculi children. While he sees himself as an existence above humans, this is simply a reflection of Father's arrogance and pride, desiring to ascend ever higher, no matter who or what he has to destroy to gain ultimate knowledge and power.
  • Deptford Mice series:
    • Jupiter is a powerful sorcerer and the Big Bad for the original trilogy. Born as a deformed kitten named Leech, he grew envious of his older brother and hated him for possessing magical powers he longed to have. After he lets his brother die in a fire, he gains control of his body and later becomes a malicious god-like entity. With hundreds of rats at his disposal, Jupiter forced his army to dig underground so he could unleash the Plague onto the world, and allowed his rats to slaughter dozens of innocents. When his plans to unleash the Plague fail and his spirit is trapped in limbo, he cajoles Madame Akkikuyu to try and resurrect him, and even convinces her to bring a corn dolly to life, which later went on and murdered two Fennywolder mouselets. Once his spirit was released, Jupiter quickly took control of a power station and started to freeze the city. After gaining more power, he brainwashes Morgan into bringing his horde of rats to the station so he can kill them all and use their spirits as his new soldiers. He then attacks Audrey Brown's friends and family, killing several of them all while he attempts to destroy the sun and start a new ice age. A savage, bloodthirsty cat who demanded to be worshipped by all, Jupiter only cared about killing his brother and destroying the world, no matter how many innocent lives were lost or how many loved ones he chose to neglect.
    • Deptford Histories:
      • The Oaken Throne:
        • Lady Morwenna is the traitorous handmaiden for the Starwife and the High Priestess for the Hobbers. After years of planning, Morwenna betrays and kills the Starwife before ordering Rohgar and his legion of bats to destroy Greenreach; anyone who survived was fed to her pet toads. Seeking the Silver Acorn, Morwenna also has the bats bomb Ysabelle's hometown of Coll Regalis, before ordering the Hobbers to hunt her and her friends down and kill anyone who gets in their way. After the Hobbers and bats fail, Morwenna finds Ysabelle herself while posing as a good Samaritan, and later steals the Acorn from her and tries to feed her to her toads. With the Acorn in her possession, she wastes no time betraying and killing Rohgar, and once Hobb is resurrected, she immediately tries to use him to kill Ysabelle. A cunning squirrel who enjoyed hearing her victims scream, Morwenna stands out as being one of the few villains in the series who resurrected a demon and nearly used him to Take Over the World.
        • Wendel Maculatum is a traitor in disguise and the High Priest for the Hobbers. Posing as a comical jester, he traveled alongside Ysabelle and her group in hopes of acquiring the Silver Acorn. After separating from her group, he and his Hobbers kidnap or kill her and her friends before he uses the Acorn and the blood of three dead squirrels to summon Hobb. He and his Hobbers constantly stalk and taunt Ysabelle's group as they travel through the woods, even going as far as throwing a mouse's head at them just to scare them. When his true identity is discovered by Tysle Symkin, the former immediately murders the latter and flays his corpse, leaving it for Ysabelle's friends to find. His Hobbers later attack and destroy a stronghold full of warriors; while fleeing with Ysabelle's group, he finally reveals his identity and gloats how Ysabelle and her friends are doomed, and nonchalantly taunts Giraldus over Tysle's death. Even after Wendel dies, he reappears as a ghost just to kill Vesper out of spite and to fulfill a curse he placed on him earlier.
      • Thomas: The unnamed High Priest of Sarpedon is the leader of the Scale, which longs to resurrect the serpent god Sarpedon, also known as Suruth Scarophion and Gorscarrigern. Seeking nine fragments of a jade egg, the high priest and his vast Scale army scourged the world and killed anyone in their path. After running into the Calliope, he capsizes the ship and kills hundreds onboard before heading to the Temple of the Twelve Maidens and massacring everyone in and around the temple, leaving their defiled corpses to be found later. After acquiring the seventh fragment, the high priest and his army head to Hara, where he attacks the city and slaughters thousands in hopes of finding another fragment. Once the high priest steals the last two fragments from Thomas, Woodget, and Simoon, he takes them all to the Black Temple so he can resurrect Sarpedon and offer them to the god as a sacrifice. When Thomas and his friends greatly damage the high priest's army, he chases after Thomas's crew using a statue possessed by Sarpedon's spirit, longing to kill them out of spite.
  • Life with Father, by Bentley Little: The titular Father is a repulsive recluse obsessed with recycling everything he can to become a "self-sufficient" entity never needing to leave his home. To this end, Father forces his two daughters into absolutely dreadful conditions, with no toilets, clean water, or normal, healthy food provided to them. Father regularly rapes and impregnates his eldest teen daughter, keeping the resulting infants as "pets" that he keeps locked in a pen. In his prime moment of depravity, Father cooks up and one of the babies, forcing his daughters to do the same, and proclaims that henceforth, he will rape his daughters until they have children, which they shall then eat as sustenance. When his eldest daughter screams at him for his evil, Father brutally beats her bloody, then prepares to begin raping his youngest daughter before being murdered.
  • Room: "Old Nick"—the otherwise-unnamed man who garners his appropriate title from a title of Satan—kidnaps and locks away a young woman in the titular “Room,” using the woman as a means of pleasure by raping her almost every night on end for seven years. Old Nick accidentally impregnates Ma and forces her to give birth right in front of him without the use of painkillers or any medical equipment whatsoever, leading to the baby's death. Once Ma gives birth to Jack, the young narrator of the novel, Nick keeps them both as his prisoners with threats to leave them both to starve to death if they ever try and escape, acting good on his threats by cutting the power and heat to the Room once Jack obliviously wanders outside.
  • Very Bad Deaths: Allen is a wealthy hyper-sadist who considers himself an artist and a scientist, specializing in human pain. With an encyclopedic knowledge of the most horrendous and painful ways to kill a man, Allen carves a legacy of torture, rape, and murder of the most twisted kinds over years, leaving at least 150 victims behind him. Allen considers it a test to keep his victims as alive as long as he can—his personal record being twenty-two days—and devises a variety of drugs ranging from those that promote fear and panic to those that amplify pain far beyond the usual, planning to continue murdering until he's able to catalog an entire book on the ways he's killed people. Allen's intended masterpiece is his intended fate for a happy family of four in Heron Island, BC: Allen intends to torture each member of the family to death over a course of days one at a time, the children included, before rendering the wife permanently aphasic and paraplegic, sending her off to an institute and visiting her regularly to continually remind her of what he did to her. Allen captures the protagonist, Russell Walker, and puts him through a round of torture to extract information from him, planning to visit as much of a month of torture on his associate Nika, and responds to the information that Russell's friend Zandor is psychic by gleefully sending unspeakably horrible mental images towards him and planning to keep him as his own pet, forcing him to bear the agony of every victim Allen murders for the rest of his life. A "one-in-a-billion freak" and a madman more vile than any other serial killer or sociopath the world has ever seen, Allen cheerfully admits he's a sociopath and revels in every minute in the marathons of agony he orchestrates.
  • Cast a Deadly Spell:
    • Amos Hackshaw, the Big Bad, is a wealthy Evil Sorcerer who plans to summon the Outer Gods so he can sell out his world for them to turn into "a world of the unburied dead" in exchange for godhood. To do this, he focuses decades of his life, including marriage and having a child, to making sure he has the perfect circumstances for the ceremony. Using the masquerade of being an Overprotective Dad to keep his daughter a suitable Virgin Sacrifice, he then goes about acquiring the Necronomicon. After the book is stolen to prevent the Apocalypse, he simultaneously hires private eye Phil Lovecraft and mob boss Harry Borden, the latter of whom he promised lordship over the post-apocalyptic world, to retrieve it. Creating a gargoyle servant to tail Lovecraft, he ends up using the creature to eliminate the book's thief and a few other loose ends. After Borden captures Lovecraft, Hackshaw decides that he should be Forced to Watch as he offers his daughter in sacrifice to Yog-Sothoth.
    • Harry Bordon, the ex-partner of detective Lovecraft and a mobster and co-conspirator of the aforementioned Evil Sorcerer, introduces himself having his own right-hand-man Tugwell cut apart a man named Locksteader who brings him a phony copy of the Necronomicon apart by means of a whirlwind of paper. Bordon has Tugwell pursue and murder Lovecraft once he becomes an obstacle, regardless of the collateral damage, and simply has his zombie bodyguard drown Tugwell once it's revealed Tugwell murdered Locksteader before he could impart vital information. Bordon gloatingly reveals in the climax he's sold out the entire world to Hackshaw, willingly dooming the entire human race to a horrible extinction at the hands of the Old Ones to rule over the remainder as an immortal.
  • Iron Man: Steel Terror, by Dean Wesley Smith: Ultron, the Robotic Psychopath who was created by Henry "Hank" Pym but who turned against him and wants to Kill All Humans, is the Big Bad of this "Super Thriller" for young adults. He starts off by having a reprogrammed Tess-One steal synthetic vibranium, a substance which could theoretically make any other substance indestructible. He uses the vibranium on himself and Tess-One, as well as on robotic copies of himself. This is only a precursor to his ultimate plan: He has androids steal nuclear ore—other thefts are only stopped due to The Avengers note —and have his robotic clones use Neutron Bombs to destroy humanity while leaving everything else intact, leaving Ultron and his clones in control; throughout the book, we get a glimpse of Ultron's thoughts, and he relishes the idea of humanity being wiped out. While he seems to care about his clones, this may in fact be merely narcissism, as once the Avengers manage to destroy them, Ultron, with what would be his final words, declares himself merely "annoyed...a great deal", before taunting Iron Man about destroying him, the rest of the Avengers, and humanity itself.
  • Spider-Man: The Manga (1970-1971, illustrated by Ryoichi Ikegami): Kangaroo, from issues 7-9, is a bloodthirsty, brutish American wrestler with super strength that he abuses with absolute glee. After being blacklisted by his home country's wrestling association for the way he'd horrifically brutalize his opponents, Kangaroo travels to Japan to extend his special brand of cruelty to the locals. Landing on Spider-Man's radar by brutalizing four Japanese wrestlers, Kangaroo proceeds to cause chaos all over the city by assaulting people, stealing, and inciting panic among the masses. After stealing a canister of highly lethal bacteria with the power to kill thousands of innocent people should it go airborne, Kangaroo uses it as a shield to gain an edge over Spider-Man in combat. Once bested by Spidey, a smug Kangaroo decides to fling the canister to the ground which, had it not been for Spider-Man's intervention, would have condemned thousands to die, purely out of rage and spite towards the masses for hating him. Despite appearing before the comic's infamous Darker and Edgier tone shift, Kangaroo stands out as being among the most heinous foes that this incarnation of Spider-Man has fought, even causing Spidey to temporarily quit crime-fighting out of fear of becoming as bad as Kangaroo.
  • Spider-Man J: In this 2004-2005 manga by Yamanaka Akira, General Wasperus is the vicious, arrogant second-in-command of the mysterious Lord Beastius's forces. Tasked with enslaving millions of Tokyo's citizens, Wasperus uses creations of his own, called Stealth Bees, which latch on to their hosts and turn them into prisoners of their own mind, aware and helpless while Wasperus is free to use them as soldiers and as slaves to carry out his bidding. He demonstrates this on Detective Flynn, a friend of Spider-Man's who he forces to fight to the death, smugly mocking Spider-Man about his predicament while stating that he picked this method of fighting Spider-Man solely for the sake of the look on his face when forced to kill a close ally. When Spidey hesitates to hurt Flynn, a bored Wasperus tries to butcher Spider-Man's young friends Harold and Jean-Marie before threatening to hurt other innocent civilians as well. After freeing Flynn from Wasperus's control and chasing him to his lair, the general fights the heroes himself and states that he intends to keep Spidey alive just long enough to live with the guilt of not saving millions of innocents from enslavement before squashing him like a bug. A dark, serious foe in an otherwise-lighthearted and funny comic, Wasperus proves to be this continuity's nastiest villain by far.
  • Metroid Prime series:
    • Dark Samus, the psychotic-yet-cunning Arc Villain of the main trilogy, is a recurring boss in the second game and the Big Bad in the third. Starting off as the titular Metroid Prime in the first game, a Metroid vastly mutated by the substance Phazon, it is defeated by Samus Aran and apparently killed. But it uses one of her suits and DNA to reconstruct itself in her form with sentience. Now known as Dark Samus, she travels to the planet Aether to consume the Phazon on the planet and physically stabilize herself. She raids a Space Pirate colony on the planet and kills those in her way, and when Samus arrives on the planet, she tries to have her killed at every given opportunity. Defeated and left for dead in a collapsing dimension, she still survives and reforms in a Space Pirate ship, killing a third of the crew and forcing the rest under her control. She raids the G.F.S. Valhalla, kills its entire crew, and steals Aurora Unit 313 to control Phazon and the planet Phaaze. She infects three planets with Phazon and almost infects a fourth, only stopped by Samus and three other bounty hunters. Dark Samus takes the opportunity to plant Phazon seeds inside the four of them, leading to the corruption and deaths the other three. Samus herself almost succumbs to corruption while trying to defeat Dark Samus.
    • Metroid Prime: Hunters: Gorea, the Big Bad of this Gaiden Game, is a formless, ancient alien that millennia ago crashed on Alinos within the Alimbic Cluster. In the form of a perverse imitation of the Alimbics themselves, Gorea sets about massacring the entire race to drain their life energy and empower itself, scouring entire planets of life, turning the Alimbics' own weaponry against them, and devastating the Cluster. Fully intending on continuing its rampage to the rest of the galaxy for the sole sake of power, Gorea's actions wipe out the Alimbics before it's finally sealed away in the Oubliette. Craving freedom, Gorea initiates the entire plot of the game by tempting bounty hunters into the ruins of the Alimbic Cluster towards its seal—and, upon breaking out, drains the power out of all the other bounty hunters before turning its attention to Samus Aran.
  • Vampire: The Masquerade:
    • Sascha Vykos, born Myca Vykos, is a monster whose legacy dates back to 11th Century Constantinople. Sired by the Tzimisce Symeon, Vykos eventually destroyed his sire by repeatedly consuming and regurgitating him before a final act of draining him to death. Changing his gender and taking the name "Sascha," Vykos became a major figure in the monstrous Sabbat, feared even by its monstrous Clan. Vykos invents new tortures, having perfected them upon countless unwilling victims whose agony it can prolong for years to centuries, alternating it with incredible pleasure to make the victim unsure if it is experiencing torture or rape. In modern times, Vykos plays a major role in the war for the United States East Coast, using its fellow Sabbat as Cannon Fodder or torture victims when it's bored. One luckless failed assassin is reshaped to its servant, tortured and broken so she may experiment with how loyal it has made him. With a thousand-year reign of horror, an insatiable hunger for knowledge and an unspeakable appetite for torture, Vykos is the one who shows the rest of the Sabbat what it truly means to be a monster.
    • Augustus Giovanni, the Giovanni Antediluvian, is the most selfish and monstrous of his clan and family. A mortal merchant sired by the Antediluvian Cappadocius, Augustus masterminded the Conspiracy of Isaac to create enough chaos to murder and Diablerize his own sire before exterminating the entire Cappadocian clan. Using his own family to become new members of the Giovanni clan, Augustus left the mortal bloodline intact, crafting his family into incestuous, cannibalistic necromancers who regularly enslave the dead and scheme and backstab for his favor and the honor of being Embraced (turned into a vampire). Desiring to supplant God himself, Augustus enslaves countless wraiths to eventually destroy the Shroud and cause the world to be utterly overrun by the dead so he can enslave so he can enslave both the living and the dead and become the unquestioned master of everyone.

edited 21st Aug '17 7:51:43 AM by ACW

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#92753: Aug 20th 2017 at 3:59:05 PM

Yeah I'll give a [tup] to the Collector. Not only is he unique, but he easily created one of the worst dystopians in the entire show, (Skteosk didn't even mention about the caste system where people are branded at birth with only the highest level being allowed to actually walk on the surface of the planet, or how the punishment for any infringement that doesn't warrant death is to be sent to the "Correctional Centre").

Demon Duck: Not a lot is revealed about the Usurian Company (the collector keeps nearly all the humans in the dark that they exist, the Doctor only finds out about them near the end by hacking the Collectors files), their described as ruthless greedy plutocrats, but its never revealed what is the standard procedure for them other than to make as much money as possible.

Either way the Collector is constantly portrayed as ruthless, greedy, sadistic and completely void of empathy. And he clearly enjoys his job quite a lot.

edited 20th Aug '17 4:00:15 PM by MGD107

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#92754: Aug 20th 2017 at 4:28:06 PM

@Filitt: Destroying the planet wasn't strictly intentional, but they seemed to know it was a possibility or likelihood, considering the hesitation his second in command showed in giving the order. It also showed that they had scanned the planet for life forms, and Filitt had recorded there was no advanced life despite picking up on the civilization there (saying something like "a band of savages will not stand in the way of history"), so it came across as a calculated sacrifice.

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#92755: Aug 20th 2017 at 4:28:17 PM

[up][up][up][up] He knew it would wipe out the pearl species, IIRC, but viewed it as an acceptable loss in order to win the (frustratingly not elaborated on) war.

edited 20th Aug '17 4:30:01 PM by LordXavius

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#92756: Aug 20th 2017 at 4:29:53 PM

[tup] The Collector.

Agreed on leaving Doctor Who alone unless someone finds something really special.

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#92757: Aug 20th 2017 at 4:33:11 PM

[up][up] and [up][up][up]: Alright, works for me. I'm still not sure he counts, but he has plenty of votes, so I've added him to the batch.

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#92758: Aug 20th 2017 at 5:15:18 PM

Alright, [tup] the Collector. Seems like the same scenario as many CM's where they're somebody's subordinate, but the bosses are non-entities.

However, I am gonna say that if there are any more keepers in the Whoniverse, it's not gonna be in the main series. Expanded Universe, maybe, but the cards are currently stacked against them.

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#92759: Aug 20th 2017 at 5:47:48 PM

[tup] With the Collector. I'm fine with leaving Doctor Who alone for a while, but I must say I really thought Solomon did enough to qualify back then.

[up][up] Since Manga is just Japanese comics you can just put the Spider Man candidates in the Spider Man Comic Book Monster page

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#92760: Aug 20th 2017 at 7:25:27 PM

Seeing an error with Gorea there... "Gorea's actions wipe out the before it's finally sealed away in the Oubliette" should be "Gorea's actions wipe out the Alimbics before it's finally sealed away in the Oubliette."

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#92761: Aug 20th 2017 at 8:12:19 PM

Also, Father's entry says he tries to escape the "flash" lol

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#92763: Aug 21st 2017 at 2:39:37 AM

Alright, I fixed Gorea and Father. Also, the Spidey duo's going to both the Spidey page and the AniManga page.

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#92764: Aug 21st 2017 at 3:52:35 AM

Alright. I'll try to re-modify Yuto's write up. I'm still crap at doing this :/

  • Twin Star Exorcist: Yuto Ijika turned out to be the one who masterminded a tragedy by tricking most of the innocent students by corrupting them into a mindless Impurity which ended up Rokuro forced to killing them and ended up set the dormitory ablaze. This inflicts so much trauma that Rokuro gave up his dreams being the greatest exorcist. When Rokuro met again with him, Yuto manages to taunts Rokuro about what he has done in the past. When Benio found out the truth and refused to accept it, Yuto broke Benio's spirit by revealing that his care towards his little sister was just a mere act. When Yuto makes his second appearance, He corrupts Rokuro's childhood friend, Mayura, into a mindless impurity which not only angers Rokuro, But also Mayura's father Seigen. When they fight with each other, Seigen ends up almost losing his arm and quitting his job as an exorcist while his daughter was unconscious after the damage that Yuto caused. Yuto's third battle against the two exorcist is where he shows his sadistic streak in the battlefield by wounding Benio's leg and sadistically stomping on it. He also took Benio's precious hairpin that he gave in the past and then smashed it. Even after being defeated for the time being, It was revealed that Yuto worked for another big bad and then backstabs him by absorbing him. When the Twin Star Exorcist met with Yuto again, he then proceeds to taunt the two that he killed the founder of exorcist union, Abe no Seimei when he was recovering. Not only that, But he also traps Benio in a barrier and nearly killed her just to taunt Rokuro so that Yuto could see Rokuro's true Impurity form. When Yuto asked Rokuro for a final battle, He threatens to destroy the world if Rokuro doesn't met with his demands and this also resulted him break his partnership with Benio. When Rokuro almost defeats Yuto and refuses to kill him, Yuto then pulls his last trick by threatening Rokuro and tries to launch an attack into the human world. This resulted with Rokuro going insane and ends up transformed as the Harbinger of Destruction. Even with his last breath,Yuto manages to taunt Rokuro by congratulating him becoming the Harbinger of Destruction who will bring the end of the world. A sadist who loves to inflict misery towards others, Yuto stands out as Rokuro's most personal foe.

Thoughts on the writeup? If it's still too long then I don't know what to do :/ I think I'm still fine if people try to do his writeup

edited 21st Aug '17 4:00:50 AM by ElfenLiedFan90

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#92766: Aug 21st 2017 at 4:11:31 AM

I see :/ Welp.........It's pretty hard to make a write up for him. Well at least for me.

Feel free to see my EP of Yuto in page 3708....Since I'm still unsure how to do his writeup

Also, I say late [tup] to the Collector I guess. I'm not familiar with the universe of Dr. Who but I'll ditto what Lighty says regarding Dr. Who examples needs to take a break right now

edited 21st Aug '17 4:17:14 AM by ElfenLiedFan90

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#92767: Aug 21st 2017 at 5:42:13 AM

Maybe take out some of the more unnecessary parts (like any minor Kick the Dog moments)? A writeup doesn't need to list every single act that the character did; at most, the most significant ones should stick out.

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#92768: Aug 21st 2017 at 5:58:17 AM

[up] Hmmmm........I think I could PM you regarding that. But thanks anyway

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#92769: Aug 21st 2017 at 7:43:02 AM

@92512, @92608 Ah, thanks.

Hrm... it all reads a bit murky. From what I gather, that's in no small part due to the fact that the film itself has issues. I don't like that much uncertainty; I'm inclined to vote no on Arun Filitt.

@92615 I will cut a bit of slack based on the fact that it's an older film and had more limits as to what could be shown in a movie back then. Keep.

@92618 That quote doesn't make it sound like he doesn't love his "children. I mean, he doesn't treat them as disposable; he doesn't like that the heroes apparently did. I vote cut.

@92633 I mean, go ahead and take a stab at Bateman if you really want, but he's long been one of the most difficult to write up, and one of the most contentious candidates to actually pass (I called him a Heads, Tails, Edge case in the past). I've got the personal feeling that there will never be a truly satisfactory entry for him.

@92659 Well, that first entry is just horribly written, period. I vote to cut that until someone actually breaks the character down.

The second one sounds mostly like his actions are focused on the protagonists... that said, maybe there's something there with that bit about the army. Cut for now; let's get a breakdown.

That third one sounds closest to being legit, but that also could simply be a Generic Doomsday Villain. Again, cut and await a breakdown.

@92665 I'd change that last line of Augustus Giovanni's writeup to "... so he can enslave both the living and the dead and become the unquestioned master of everyone."

@92666 I don't think that we're organizing individual entries in any way. Technically, though, if we're organizing by either publication or canon, Vykos comes first. They were fleshed out in canon a couple years before Augustus was, and in-universe, Vykos was born and turned into a vampire a couple centuries before Augustus was.

@92671 As several others have noted, if you're concerned about whom the fandom hates, you want to look at either The Scrappy (for fan-hated characters that the author doesn't want the audience to hate) or Hate Sink (for when the author does want everyone to hate them). Neither impact Complete Monster in any way.

@92677 First things first, I feel like we're looking at someone's Captain Ersatz fanfiction of Werewolf: The Apocalypse. Go ahead, compare the nameless company trying to raise Tiamat with Pentex trying to empower the Wyrm.

Ultimately, though, this reads a bit like Evil Versus Evil, and even the "good guys" are extremely dark and brutal. I vote nothing stands out; cut.

@92744 Eh... I'm not saying that the guy is any stretch of nice, but there's seriously such a high standard for Doctor Who that I don't get the feeling that this guy clears it. Cut.

edited 21st Aug '17 7:43:34 AM by 32_Footsteps

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#92770: Aug 21st 2017 at 7:49:21 AM

No issue with that change to Augustus. Mind incorporating that, ACW?

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#92771: Aug 21st 2017 at 7:53:35 AM

[up] Done. See how it looks now.

[up][up] As for Ultron (speaking of whom, care to vote on him Lighty?), I dunno, considering that he merely declared himself "greatly annoyed" and then goes on to taunt Iron Man about destroying humanity, I'm not inclined to see it as disqualifying.

BTW, I just tallied up Fillit, and he still has enough votes even if I changed from abstain to no.

edited 21st Aug '17 7:56:57 AM by ACW

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#92772: Aug 21st 2017 at 7:56:16 AM

I have a question for you guys. What's the maximum word for a CM writeup? Just saying. And do the title of the writeup counts or no?

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#92773: Aug 21st 2017 at 7:58:12 AM

For Ultron...TBH? I vote nay. That one bit with his 'kids' is more than most Ultrons get and it seems just a bit disqualifying.

As far as length goes...I think we like to keep it under 300 words?

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#92774: Aug 21st 2017 at 7:59:00 AM

[up][up] Title doesn't count. And the length should typically be no more than around 300, MAYBE up to 325 or so, but preferably no longer (and yes, I realize there may be a few that exceed even that (Haazheel & Skull come to mind)).

Hmm. Ultron's still at 8-2 (including my own vote and Scraggle's "weak" yes). When I get home, there's a good line that shows Ultron may indeed see the robots as extensions of himself.

edited 21st Aug '17 8:09:32 AM by ACW

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#92775: Aug 21st 2017 at 8:11:30 AM

@ACW Alright, I just retry my writeup for Yuto again for the third time. This time it's around 304 words. But if you don't count the title then it's around 301 words:

  • Twin Star Exorcist: Yuto Ijika turned out to be the one who masterminded a tragedy by tricking most of the innocent students and corrupting them into a mindless Impurity which ended up Rokuro forced to killing them and ended up set the dormitory ablaze. This inflicts Rokuro so much trauma that he ended up abandoned his dream. When Rokuro met again with Yuto, He manages to taunts Rokuro about what he had done in the past. When Benio found out the truth and refused to accept it, Yuto broke Benio's spirit by revealing that his care towards her was just a mere act. Yuto makes his second appearance by corrupting Rokuro's childhood friend into a mindless impurity which not only angers Rokuro, But also her father. Yuto shows his sadistic streak in the battlefield when he fought the Twin Star Exorcist for the third time by wounding Benio's leg and stomping on it. He also took her precious hairpin that he gave and then smashed it. Even after being defeated for the time being, It was revealed that Yuto worked for another big bad and then backstabs him. After Yuto woke up from his recovery, he traps Benio in a barrier and nearly kills her so that Yuto could see Rokuro's true Impurity form. When Rokuro almost defeats Yuto and refuses to kill him in the final battle, Yuto then pulls his last trick by threatening Rokuro and tries to launch an attack into the human world. This resulted with Rokuro going insane and ends up dealing Yuto with a fatal blow. Even with his last breath, Yuto delivers his last taunt by congratulating Rokuro becoming the Eldritch Abomination who will bring the end of the world. A sadist who loves to inflict misery towards others, Yuto stands out as Rokuro's most personal foe.

Here's the last write-up for Yuto I guess. I'll try to continue trim it again if it's still too long

And P.S. Please spoil-tag Yuto when you edit his write-up since in my original EP I forgot to spoil-tag him given that his first appearances was in the flashback that make him look like a caring brother towards Benio and the sole reason why Benio was motivated to become a stronger exorcist. However, When Yuto made his real first appearance, He sheds those redeeming traits and the reveal of the one who caused the tragedy was a huge reveal after all that kept spoiled.

And I also just checked how long Hazheel's and Red Skull's writeup is.......The former was around 385 words and the latter was around 340 words

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