Also known as "whump", a Hurt/Comfort Fic is a Fan Fic about comforting one who is hurt. Usually based on either Break The Stoic or Break the Cutie, often to the point of Woobiefication: a regular character is damaged, either emotionally or physically, and another character (usually the character's partner, love interest, or a teammate) must comfort them. This comfort can become… intense. Alternatively, the author can create a Sympathetic Sue to get damaged so the author's favorite canon character can comfort them. A story can take place after specific episodes or installments of canon, or else the writer creates a new predicament.
Vice versa, the above methods are often used by fanfiction authors as a way to pair up two characters that would otherwise be at each others' throats or have nothing to do with one another. Maybe the characters don't know each other too well, or maybe they wouldn't get along well under normal circumstances, but once they see that poor kid bleeding on their doorstep there isn't much alternative to taking them in and nurturing them back to health…
Often used as part of Shipping. Sometimes, Ron the Death Eater is responsible for the "hurt" part and Draco in Leather Pants is responsible for the "comfort" part. (In fact, the derivation implied by those Trope Namers is quite common, typically with Hermione on the receiving end.) At other times, the characters stick to canonical roles (if not canonical characterization). In cases of physical hurt, it may be accidental or deliberately inflicted, but almost always there's some reason given why the injured cannot be taken to get medical attention (at least at first), which would involve them being cared for by mere strangers (with medical training) rather than someone who cares.
Fanwriters love this device because it gives the characters a situation which they both must struggle to overcome, without having a lot of other characters or outside obstacles intruding. These types of fanfics will often be either sweet and fluffy or dramatized scenes in which the injured character lays out their entire tragic past for their rescuer to sympathize with, and more often than not transforms the characters' relationship from strained to romantic in ways that would not always fit with canon.
Can be done well, if the affliction is realistic and the story is well-written. Done especially often in medical show fandoms and buddy shows.
Often effective when combined with the Morality Pet, but ineffective when combined with Ukefication. Compare After Action Patch Up.
Common setups
- Abusive Parents: Often the cause of some bad trauma that the caretaker needs to help the character through.
- After Action Patch Up: Usually the job of the caretaker, which sometimes turns into After-Action Healing Drama if things are serious enough.
- Caretaker Reversal: Sometimes in these fics, someone you'd normally expect to be a caretaker for someone has to be taken care of themselves, usually by the person they usually take care of, after getting hurt or "whumped".
- Cold-Blooded Torture
- Comforting the Widow
- Drug Withdrawal: It tends to be written as platonic or just open to interpretation—probably because the sufferer would be severely ill-equipped for typical romance, and the whole "needing a substance so much that it makes you violent towards your own True Companions" part. Almost always leads to Sleep Cute (or My God, What Have I Done?) situations after the worst of the symptoms leave.
- Freakiness Shame: Giving a character visibly non-human traits, then finding another who sees this as beautiful. Wingfic is a common form of this.
- Heartwarming Orphan
- Intimate Healing
- Love Martyr: Abusive relationships.
- Mind Rape
- No-Holds-Barred Beatdown
- Parental Abandonment
- Post-Victory Collapse
- Rape as Drama
- Rape as Backstory
- Sick Episode
Examples
- "Tails Returns": Cosmo is hurt and Tails is the healer.
- The Naruto/One Piece fic "Fly Free" is built up around a lot of things, but the cornerstone is Robin playing the role of a comforting adult to a lot of the messed up kids in Konoha... and beyond.
- The Naruto fic Blind Vision
is an unfinished fanfic where Sakura helps nurse Neji, emotionally and physically, after he's blinded on a mission.
- The Attack on Titan fanfiction, Passionate Pragmatism has a lot of this (which is somewhat to be expected, considering the nature of the series and all the awful things that happen to the characters). In it, Erwin is filled with guilt for everything he's done while Hange tries to convince him that he's a good person.
- The Light Within Us Black Bullet fanfic has some moments of this.
- In the My Hero Academia fanfic Quirk: Incubus, the premise of the fic involves Izuku being the victim of his sexual predator teacher and the fallout that comes after he is caught, complete with Bakugo becoming less of a Jerkass in the process.
- This
fic has Harley Quinn and Abel from The House of Secrets acting both as victim and comforter to each other.
- "An Evening at the Airport
", a long Tintin fanfic, has a scene of this between Tintin and Martine. However it is a more subtle version of this as it is pretty understated and Martine's problems are shown as being more existential than the result of some trauma.
- Underneath the layers of religious conversation and fight scenes, Angel of the Bat is mostly a story about Cassandra Cain trying to overcome her own self-hate and struggle to view herself as a complete person worthy of love, as opposed to a weapon. She ends up finding that comfort through her newfound faith and her family. Also, Stephanie Brown's entire subplot is focused on trying to overcome the pain of Batman attempting to make her an Unperson, and is only resolved when he acknowledges his fault.
- Anglerfish: Jason interrupting a fight with bullets is the reason Tim ends up so badly injured at the start of the story, and he spends the rest of it caring for Tim.
- In Now That You're Bleeding, after years of self-hatred, Self-Harm, and depression, Elsa has to learn to break down her barriers with the help of her sister Anna.
- To a Merry Christmas is a Slash Fic where Belle comforts Aurora about her traumatized past at a Christmas party. It quickly turns less platonic than Belle had intended.
- "The Rehabilitation Of Dawn Bellwether", focuses on Bellwether getting paroled after 4 years in prison, trying to clean up her act, being on the receiving end of scorn from all of Zootopia, being haunted by her worst actions in the past, and, throughout all of it, forming a bond with a wolf OC named Vernon Hunter, who also has his moments of being comforted himself, like when Bellwether goes with the ZPD after being suspected of a local terrorist act, and then when she performs a Heroic Sacrifice to save the city.
- The Bolt Chronicles:
- In “The Blood Brother,” Bolt eventually realizes how callously he has been treating Mittens, following which he tearfully apologizes to the cat. Mittens forgives him.
- In “The Kippies,” Mittens gradually comes to the realization that she will never have kittens, being greatly saddened by this. Bolt tries to comfort her with a spooning hug, telling her that he won't have offspring either and to be happy for the advantages she has. He eventually succeeds.
- The "Springsteen Trilogy" by Ars Longa is a Star Wars example. Callista just left Luke and Kyp heals him. But Kyp was molested on Kessel so now he's bi and Luke is the healer. It just gets weirder from there.
- Another example of Star Wars fanfiction of this genre is "As One"
by Shy Snootles. It's an Alternate Universe of Return of Jedi, where Luke seduces Darth Vader/Anakin to the Light Side, making him face his scars and inner demons in process. This fic is notable for being written as a counterpart to many fics where either Vader or Palpatine suceed in seducing either Luke or Leia to the Dark Side.
- Another example of Star Wars fanfiction of this genre is "As One"
- This
fancomic for Sherlock Holmes (2009). Notable because both characters know perfectly well that they're in a Hurt/Comfort fanfic. Holmes isn't too pleased about always having to be the sick one.
- A lot of Captain America: The Winter Soldier fanfic focuses on Bucky coping with the psychological trauma of seventy years of brainwashing and memory erasure from HYDRA, usually with Steve as the main comforter. miles to go before i sleep
is one such example.
- A lot of Maleficent fanfic is about this, as the movie itself is about Maleficent being hurt and comforted. Some fanfic focuses more than the movie on the relationship with Diaval, like for example "Aftermath"
- Your servant, Mistress has this in spades, as Maleficent really, really needs some comforting. (Though in that fic, Diaval also needs comforting.)
- The MCU fic Born of the Same Impulse
combines this with Peggy Sue. Tony Stark is sent back in time and manages to prevent Ultron, Sokovia, and Civil War. But he is left to deal with the lingering PTSD and trust-issues that were a consequence of the events that he's undone, plus the paranoia that some other disaster might take their place. The Avengers spend the majority their time trying to cheer him up and get him out of his shell, even though Tony can't really tell them about his issues, because they technically don't exist anymore. Tony himself plays the role of comforter in his interaction with his fellow time-traveller, Stephen Strange, who has now lost his powers, and struggles with existential crisis as he relives his accident and the long road to recovery.
- A Girl vs. Monster oneshot, Girl VS Abuse
focuses on Skylar going to Sadie to escape her abusive relationship with Ryan.
- Missing (Sherlock Holmes): While many of the early segments are devoted to the mystery, the drabbles after the storming of the gang's headquarters edge increasingly into Holmes attempting to help Watson deal with the physical and emotional hurt endured during his captivity, and receiving some comfort in return.
- Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation: Mo Dao Zu Shi / The Untamed
- The Beast Of Gusu, a Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation: Mo Dao Zu Shi series, has its moments, especially at the end of Chapter 3 and the beginning of Chapter 4 of “Unstoppable” during Wei Wuxian’s missing months under the influence of the Wen drug and while Lan Wangji looked for him.
- Gold Poisons: The portion centered on Xichen, who spends much of the fic on death's door, then recovering from a poisoning that nearly destroyed his golden core, is this.
- Harry Potter:
- "Yellow Submarine
" is a Harry Potter Hurt/Comfort fic. In an interesting variant, not only does the rescuer immediately find the rescued a doctor rather than trying to physically heal her himself, the story only really starts years later, as they both begin to heal the emotional wounds of the other.
- Torn Apart World is about Snape comforting Harry as he recovers from being abused for years by the Dursleys.
- "Yellow Submarine
- The London Syndicate is listed as one, and has its moments.
- A Song of Ice and Fire fanfic Safe Anchorage revolves around Theon Greyjoy and Jeyne Poole looking after each other in the wake of their canon abuse and torture.
- The Friendship Song has in-universe examples. Harper and Rawnie are fond of these sorts of scenarios, with Ty usually saving Nico from some kind of trouble, or both of them dying together but being comforted with their unbreakable friendship.
- "Memories That Haunt
", a Firefly Maliver fic (Captain Mal Reynolds and River aka Break the Cutie). Warning, lemon, rape (as drama), and angst. Good fic if you like that particular pairing.
- Doctor Who New Adventures
- Chapter 15 of the novel Set Piece by Kate Orman is actually called "Hurt/Comfort". In fact most of Orman's Doctor Who novels (NAs and EDAs) have at least one chapter like this.
- Chapter 5 of the NA Human Nature, by Paul Cornell, is titled "Hurt/Comfort".
- A number of Star Trek: The Original Series fics, such as "Perdition's Flames" and "Memories Born of Fire" center around the aftermath of "Amok Time", with Kirk helping Spock recover from the emotional trauma.
- iCarly:
- This applies to a recurring plot in the Carly/Freddie fic fandom in iCarly, that involves having Freddie hooked up with Sam, then playing Sam's violent and abusive tendencies from the show straight, without any of the Rule of Funny that it has on the show itself. An example can be found here: Candles
.
- In the Sam/Carly story iFreak Out
, Carly convinces her girlfriend to see a gynecologist for her heavy periods. To help build up her nerve, Sam asks Carly to see them too. As it turns out, Sam is fine, but Carly has uterine cysts. Carly needs surgery, but she's scared and needs Sam for support. She's especially freaked out because her mother died of ovarian cancer and she worries she might die the same way.
- This applies to a recurring plot in the Carly/Freddie fic fandom in iCarly, that involves having Freddie hooked up with Sam, then playing Sam's violent and abusive tendencies from the show straight, without any of the Rule of Funny that it has on the show itself. An example can be found here: Candles
- Horatio Hornblower:
- A ship manifesto "Horatio Hornblower/Archie Kennedy (Hornblower)"
by tanacawyr argues that Horatio Hornblower and his Heterosexual Life Partner Archie Kennedy are an ideal Fandom for shippers who like their Slash Fic and enjoy Hurt/Comfort fics. The series has got it all, in the author's opinion: "Beauty, war, danger, drama, fits (Archie's epileptic seizures), hysteria, (almost) canon sexual abuse, swashbuckling adventure, explosions, loyalty, delicious dialogue, devotion, tender midnight confessions, hurt and comfort by the bucketloads." The episode "The Duchess and the Devil" has Horatio sitting by Archie's bedside as Archie catapults himself up in a nightmare, and Horatio gives him a drink of water. Horatio is terrified that he might not be able to save his friend's life. There's intense hurt/comfort like that in canon. It's no wonder that fans like to elaborate on this subject matter.
- Much Ado About Shakespeare: Love's Labours Won: Archie's trauma of past rape and panic attacks appear in full force. Horatio is only happy he can assure him that he's his best-est, closest friend and most competent-est officer. And they have a Relationship Upgrade: they go from friends to boyfriends.
- Harboured & Encompassed: Hurt and comfort is present in almost every chapter. There's Archie's epilepsy, his PTSD, his frequent panic attacks and his sleeplessness, then there's Horatio's fear of heights and a subsequent panic attack, and also Jack's attack of Horatio... lots of time is devoted for them to worry over their boyfriend, to comfort him and make it all better.
- A ship manifesto "Horatio Hornblower/Archie Kennedy (Hornblower)"
- NUMB3RS:
- Dont Stay Away From Home For Too Long, Don is infected with a virus and Charlie and Alan try their best to be there for him as he fights the virus.
- The 1977 Starsky & Hutch fanfic Mojave Crossing is an early and influential example of the genre.
- Supernatural:
- Maybe Sprout Wings has as human Castiel rescuing Dean from slavery, which is used as a metaphor for rescuing him from Hell and features many scenes of Castiel comforting Dean as the latter recovers from his ordeal.
- This
The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess fic focuses on Telma the bartender comforting Link after the events and ending of the game.
- The Ace Attorney fandom is a hurt/comfort goldmine, in part because the "hurt" part is as easy as trapping Edgeworth in an elevator or earthquake. One popular example of the genre is a (clean) Kink Meme fill called Sleepless
.
- The Walking Dead fanfic Old Scars follows the stories of Clementine and an Original Character as they both struggle to cope with their traumatizing pasts with the help of their new companions.
- "Force Of Good
", a Tomb Raider fanfic that has Lara visited by an angel-like being after the death of her mother in Legend.
- The Super Mario fanfic "A Sick Day", where Luigi catches a cold. Hilarity Ensues as Mario (and a friend) nurse him back to health.
- From the same author, there's "Helpless"
, in which Mario's allergies get the best of him.
- From the same author, there's "Helpless"
- Let Me Float
, from the creator of Freedom Dies With Me, is a very...interesting take on this. Partly from the fact that the Hurt and the Comfort are the same character from two different timelines. One is a Sash Lilac who drowned and returned as a sort of water spirit, the other is also a Sash Lilac that was rescued by the No-Zone after her Carol betrayed her. The former appears one day while the latter is having a swim, and they set about dealing with the former's hydrophobia.
- Abandoned Heroism
, a later fic from the author, is very similar if not an outright Spiritual Successor; only instead of a normal Lilac and a wraith-like Lilac bonding, it's a depressed, homeless Lilac getting some comfort from an asexual, Red-Scarf-aligned Millanote .
- Abandoned Heroism
- Her Fractured Spirit is a fanfic where Callie suffers PTSD after the events of Splatoon 2's single-player campaign. Her cousin Marie tries to help her recover.
- Touhou: Kogasa Tatara is a youkai created by abandoning an umbrella. A disturbingly large amount of fanart and doujin applies the same abandonment issues to her human-looking body, and only sometimes with a happy ending.
- Dead by Daylight: This trope is the bread and butter of the game's fanfiction community, primarily regarding the Survivors (Dwight and Quentin are especially popular choices), but occasionally also applied to the more sympathetic killers like the Spirit or the Nurse.
- Punch-Out!!: Home Sick (NoonboryKedabory) focuses on Disco Kid looking after a sickly Aran Ryan. Although he is typically a Combat Sadomasochist, Aran can't stand being ill, which softens him up to Disco. They end the story an unofficial couple.
- I've Got Your Back revolves around Pearl and Marina working through their past traumas and growing to trust each other, with some lighthearted moments sprinked throughout to ease the tension.
- Hetalia: Axis Powers fanfic Gankona, Unnachgiebig, Unità
: Even though this story's genres are romance and drama with some comedy sprinkled in, throughout the story, Germany and Japan have to comfort Italy whenever his insecurities arise, from never being able to get a lover to his inner demons...
- The Housepets! fic All Cats Go To Heaven
is about Marvin getting hit and killed by Sasha's drunk father and Zach tries his best to comfort Tiger who has become a tearful, violent, manic-depressive wreck (even moreso than usual). As Tiger opens up to Zach, we learn that he has one heck of a Tear Jerker backstory and had virtually no friends and was horribly abused by other dogs before he met Marvin.
- While the first story, First Contact, in the Golden Age series has minor shades of this, the second story, The Great Escape, is this in spades.
- This The Most Popular Girls in School fanfic A turn of events
. The setup is a Sick Episode.
- The Very Hungry Nematode
is a Spongebob Squarepants fanfiction that involves Squidward (reluctantly) taking care of a sick Spongebob, who has a bad case of the suds. A bit funnier than the usual angsty/shippy example, mainly because Spongebob is taking advantage of Squidward's hospitality so he can spend time with him, and it emphasizes the brotherly relationship between the two characters.
- My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic
- It has a lot of this type of fic. "Out in the Cold
" and "Kindness's Reward" both revolve around one of the mane six (Twilight Sparkle and Fluttershy, respectively) finding, taking in, and falling in love with The Great and Powerful Trixie, humbled and suffering after the events of "Boast Busters".
- Shut The Blinds
Following a dragon attack Rainbow Dash is stricken with blindness and must adapt to her new life without the use of her eyes, being cared for by Twilight Sparkle.
- "A Sight For Really Sore Eyes
" is a classic hurt/comfort fanfic: love, accident, guilt, comfort, and finally shipping.
- A Canterlot Wedding: Aftermath is another example.
- When Rainbows Cry
has Pinkie Pie comforting Rainbow Dash after the latter attempts suicide.
- It has a lot of this type of fic. "Out in the Cold
- "Plankton's Eye View
" is a Spongebob Squarepants fanfic that focuses on Plankton's life after ten years in prison, his hurt, bitterness, regret, and his Heel–Face Turn. The comfort character here is Howard, the Original Character who allows Plankton to experience friendship again after so many years in loneliness.
- "Fix You
" is a Superjail! fanfic that focuses on the Mistress comforting and healing the Warden while Superjail's inmates are rioting.
- The Littlest Pet Shop (2012) story "The Times They Are A-Changin' (2013)" identifies itself as one of these, but this tragic tale of the pets' relationships deteriorating when Blythe abandons them and Penny's owners move away also has strong Dark Fic elements.
- The Family Guy fanfic (and Fix Fic), "Payback from a Pipe
" acts as an epilogue to the episode "Quagmire's Dad." When Stewie finds out about what Quagmire did to Brian, he hunts him down, beats the crap out of him, tells him off about everything that's wrong with him and what he did to Brian, and lastly forces Quagmire to apologize to Brian for attacking him earlier.
- Total Drama
- A TDA Love Triangle with Betty, Cody, and Gwenny: Cody tries to help Bridgette and Gwen, both girls going through some very serious, hurting issues. Unknown to both girls, they're also giving Cody some comfort over his own insecurities and past troubles to get a girlfriend.
- Candy For Your Thoughts?: Cody comes down to the cargo hold to chat with a heartbroken Courtney after Duncan's affair with Gwen is revealed, and sympathizes with her due to his crush on Gwen. This eventually develops a full-blown romance between the two.
- Dreams Scented of Coconut and Apple: The story is this for both of the main characters in different ways. For Cody, Lindsay helps him stop being the isolated victim of bullying with her friendship. And for Lindsay, Cody helps her deal with Tyler breaking up with her.
- Predator and Prey: Bridgette is raped by Alejandro during her time as a competitor on World Tour and develops Stockholm Syndrome, which leads to her cheating on Geoff, who breaks up with her for it when she returns to the Aftermath studio. The Peanut Gallery works to have her and Geoff reunited, so that Bridgette can get the help she needs and have Geoff hear her side of the story.
- Second Chance at Love: Lindsay, Leshawna and Cody are obviously hurt over breaking up with their boyfriends (in the girls' case) and not being able to get himself a girlfriend, in Cody's case. This creates a bond between them, and soon start comforting each other.
- The oneshot Gets Wrecked features a platonic example. When Valerie suffers amnesia after a car accident, her elementary class and her sister Fiona help her try to regain her memories.
- Irrational Fear is a fanfiction of The Loud House about Lincoln comforting Lisa about her Fear of Thunder. Unlike most examples, it's completely platonic (Lisa and Lincoln are siblings, after all) and not angsty at all. In fact, it's kind of comedic.
- My Super Best Friend is a fan fiction of South Park that takes place after season 21. It focuses on Stan, Heidi, Nichole, and the boys trying their best to comfort Kyle and help him recover from his trauma developing from accidentally, and indirectly, getting Canada nuked.
- Steven Universe: The Journey to the Center of the Mind sequences in Flawed Crystals take this form. The gems are shown at their lowest, beaten down by their worst fears, traumas, and mental illnesses. Steven has to show them love, care, and real understanding in order for them to recover.