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A work of blood, sweat, and tears in trying to repair a show with infinite potential left to squander in a desert of idiocy.

Fixing RWBY is a video series by Celtic Phoenix Productions on YouTube. As the title suggests, the videos have him air his grievances with the web cartoon series RWBY, and give his thoughts on how he would have tackled the series if he could.

As such, the series is essentially a Fix Fic without the actual fanfic. Instead, the fixing is done in more of a brainstorming/story outlining format, with each video consisting of him going over lore, revamped character arcs/backstories, and major story beats.

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Fixing RWBY can be seen using this playlist.

Spoilers for RWBY are untagged below. Read at your own risk.


Fixing RWBY provides examples of:

  • Adaptational Angst Upgrade: Naturally since this version is a Darker and Edgier version of the original show.
    • In season 1 team RWBY has a much harder time getting along and it isn't until the season finale do they become a cohesive team.
    • Nora seems to have self-worth issues that manifest as jealousy towards Pyrrha. She never got to talk or apologize to Pyrrha about their fight before Pyrrha's death.
    • Arslan also has self-worth issues, constantly trying to prove her worth against Pyrrha to show that her own prowess was from hard work instead of nepotism.note  Losing to JNPR causes Arslan to go through a total breakdown.
    • Things got even worse during the fall of Beacon:
      • Penny is infected with a virus that allows Cinder to control her; during the PvP round, Penny is fully aware that she is being controlled but can do nothing about it. It's also clear that there's a real chance Penny can't be rebuilt because the chip that contains her memories and personality was heavily damaged.
      • Ciel is present when Penny died and is shown mourning over her.
      • By the end of the fall Roy is presumably killed by a Nevermorenote , Fox is gravely injured by Adam, Cardin loses an eye, Velvet's ear is partially cut off, and Neptune is bound to a wheelchair from being impaled in the spine by a Paladin mech.
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    • Roman Torchwick is revealed to have one by being the Sole Survivor of the Apathy-induced death of Brunswick Farms.
  • Adaptational Badass: Changes to Volume 1 and 2 make the Creatures of Grimm a far more serious and dangerous threat, one that team RWBY are only barely able to fight against.
  • Adaptational Early Appearance:
    • Neo, Tukson, and Team CFVY debut in Volume 1 instead of Volume 2.note 
    • Ciel debuts, and Scarlet and Sage are properly introduced, in Volume 2 instead of Volume 3.
  • Adaptational Jerkass:
    • Weiss' initial Fantastic Racism is turned up to the point where she says Faunus are naturally subservient to humans. She also states that it's childish to think that Faunus on the same level as humans. It's so offensive a rant that all her teammates get mad at her. She is also much more of an Alpha Bitch initially, actively defying Ruby's orders because she wanted to be the team leader, always pushed the blame onto her teammates, and refused to interact with them unless she was required to, and tried to transfer into another team.
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    • Downplayed with Nora. While she's still just as sweet and bubbly as her original counterpart, she harbored intense jealousy towards Pyrrha because Pyrrha always gets the praise from the crowd when JNPR appears. She straight-up tells Pyrrha that she must be addicted to the attention and that Nora is better than Pyrrha. She also lashes out at Jaune, claiming the only reason Jaune is any good as a huntsman is because Pyrrha helped him and he wouldn't have done it on his own.
    • Team ABRN are more vindictive in this version instead of the blank slates that they were in the original. Special mention goes to Arslan who doesn't believe Ren, Nora, or Pyrrha are "true Mistralians" because of their backgrounds being different ethnics groups that were absorbed in Mistral.
  • Adaptational Species Change: Faunus are not considered a single species, rather a blanket category for many different species.
  • Adaptational Wimp: Ruby's abilities are toned down at the start for realism.note  This is done in order to make Grimm more intimidating and show that Ruby is still just at a beginner's level.
  • Adaptation Name Change: Though the spelling of SSSN remains the same, it's now pronounced "season" rather than "sun".
  • Age Lift: Cinder is more obviously older than most other characters. Instead of being disguised as a student when she infiltrates Beacon, she's disguised as a teacher.
  • Alternate Universe Fic: RWBY is rewritten from the ground up with the basics kept intact.
  • Ascended Extra:
    • Instead of being a sign of Early Installment Weirdness and being a bit gag, Yang's friends in episode 2 have designs and have plot relevance.
    • CVFY are introduced in Volume 1 and act as mentors to team RWBY.
    • Neo is a reoccurring villain from Volume 1.
    • Tukson makes an appearance in Volume 1 and works as part of an underground railroad system for anyone trying to leave the White Fang.
    • Cardin's role is increased in both of the first two volumes.
    • The White Fang Lieutenant serves as The Heavy for Adam Taurus in Volume 2.
    • Ciel becomes a reoccurring character in Volume 2.
  • Blackmail:
    • In the rewrite, instead of threatening Junior with a Groin Attack, Yang threatens him with blackmail. She has a picture of him talking with Roman that she's more than happy to let slip to the police and media.
    • Cardin blackmails Jaune into doing stuff for him in exchange for not telling that Jaune faked his way into the school. Later Jaune gets back at Cardin by blackmailing him with Blake's help.
  • Bully Brutality: Cardin's bullying goes as far to cause Velvet physical harm. This is Blake's last straw. She stands up to Velvet against Cardin.
  • Composite Character: Yang takes up Sun's role in Volume 1.
  • Darker and Edgier: In canon, Volumes 1 and 2 are pretty tame. Fixing RWBY adds more drama and darker themes to them.
  • Early-Bird Cameo: A sick in bed Neo appears as a cameo in the third episode.
  • Eureka Moment: As the Lieutenant keeps fighting during the Breach, he bellows out that humanity will fall against the White Fang. This inspires Ruby to call for the team attack "Forever Fall" to launch the Lieutenant over the blockades and into a horde of Grimm who finish him off.
  • Fantastic Slurs:
  • Fantastic Racism:
    • The speciesism between Faunus and humans originates both from jealousy of each other's traits and because they were rivals during early history. Speciesism against Faunus also differs from region to region and sub-species to sub-species.
    • Pyrrha, Nora, and Ren suffer from discrimination by Mistralians because they're not "pure" Mistralian. They're descended from ethnic groups that were dissolved into Mistral.
  • False Flag Operation: Roman gets the idea to use the White Fang as a scapegoat for his own crimes, hiring Faunus to help in his latest heist and providing them fake uniforms to pass them off as White Fang members. This lands him in hot water when the real White Fang surround him after Season 1.
  • Fix Fic: To the point where he has two videos tackling the revised mythology and history of the new story alone.
  • Foreshadowing:
    • Cardin telling Jaune that he can't protect his friends forever in Volume 1 foreshadows Pyrrha's death in Volume 3.
    • One of the stories Ruby and Pyrrha discuss while researching their history paper foreshadows the climaxes of Volumes 2 and 3.
    • Arslan's obsession with beating the "invincible" Pyrrha in early Volume 3 foreshadows Pyrrha's death several episodes later.
  • Hard-Drinking Party Girl: One change is that Yang's Hard Drinking Party Girl image isn't completely for show. For example, after she gets formally initiated into Beacon she gets drunk and ends up hangover the next day. It borderlines on alcoholism and Yang drinks to deal with her abandonment issues. Coco calls her out on this when Yang decides to drink rather than try and help with the problems Team RWBY are currently facing.
  • Heel–Face Turn: Cardin, unlike his canon counterpart, grows to respect the Faunus after being chewed out for his bullying numerous times. During the Fall of Beacon, he goes to look for Velvet on the basis that he feels indebted to her, and protects her and Fox from Adam.
  • Internal Reveal: Blake being a cat Faunus is changed into one of these. She doesn't have her bow in the Black trailer, so viewers know she's a Faunus passing as a human from the get-go.
  • Know When to Fold 'Em: When Bolin realizes most of his team were knocked out of the ring and JNPR outnumbering him, he quietly drops his staff and surrenders.
  • Little Bit Beastly: Faunus evolved from a common ancestor of humans and are still closely related enough to interbreed. Most faunus are mammalian Faunus. Faunus have quirks that differentiate them from humans, such as improved senses and estrus cycles. The concept of "Faunus" is a relatively recent creation as historically it was deemed a slur. Faunus traditionally saw each other as different species so they rejected the term.
  • Meaningful Name: Remus's name refers to Romulus's brother and co-founder or Rome. It makes sense then how it becomes a Meaningful Rename to Roman Torchwick, as in torching his past as a Brunswick.
  • The Mentor: Professor Ozpin assigns Team CVFY to mentor Team RWBY after realizing the direction they were going. Coco is especially keen on mentoring Ruby as they're both responsible as team leaders.
  • Mix-and-Match Critter: Dangerous squirrel/monkey (or squirrel/ape) hybrids are mentioned in the third episode. They attack the characters.
  • No Body Left Behind: Averted. Unlike in canon, the Grimm leave behind skeletons when they die, their flesh dissolving off of their bones. Scientists study the remains to try and learn about the Grimm and Huntsmen use the bones to prove the worth of the creatures they killed for bounty payments.
  • No-Sell: Sun gets knocked to the ground and kicked repeatedly by some human crewmembers of the airship he stowed away on. But because they are normal people while Sun has Hunstman training, his aura's so powerful that their kicks do absolutely no damage. He keeps up his casual banter while they futilely try to hurt him.
  • Not So Different: Roman used to be similar to Ruby, but something in his Mysterious Past changed him.
  • Nothing Is Scarier: Invoked by Cinder in-universe and without by Phoenix. Rather than a lengthy Breaking Speech after Penny's death, Cinder plays a garbled message as if she were being hunted for trying to reveal some dark truth, leaving the terror to people's imaginations.
  • The Scapegoat: In Volume 4, Sienna Khan as only recently become the new High Leader of the White Fang. Her predecessor, Kin Onyurio, was deposed and handed over to the authorities for the White Fang's involvement in the Fall of Beacon.
  • Spanner in the Works: Zwei ends up literally derailing the White Fang's plans with the train by unintentionally speeding up the train, causing it to crash into the battering ram engine in front of it and sending everything careening out of the subway into Vale proper, further from the heart of the city as they intended.
  • The Speechless: Neo is mute.note 
  • Street Smart: Yang is portrayed as streetwise, which is implied in canon but isn't given much emphasis.
  • Sue Donym: Cinder Fall's pen name "Ash Autumn" when she's pretending to be a journalist to spread more division.
  • Wham Line: Throughout Volume 4, we focus on Remus Brunswick. At first, this seemed like a story that would set up the Apathy arc in Volume 6 until we see him running away from home and beating up a group of teens. When he's asked who he is, he answers:
    "My name is Roman. Roman Torchwick."
  • Wouldn't Hurt a Child: Subverted with Roman. He doesn't want to kill a fifteen-year-old like Ruby, but he will if he thinks he must.
  • Wrecked Weapon: In the rewrite for Volume 4, we see why Jaune had his sword and shield reforged by a blacksmith, as both were heavily damaged in a battle with a group of Beringel Grimm at a train station.

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