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"The world is full of bad books written by amateurs. But why settle for the merely regrettable? Atlanta Nights is a bad book written by experts."
Teresa Nielsen Hayden, book critic, editor for Tor Books, and one of the authors
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Once upon a time, authorities of PublishAmerica, a print-on-demand publishing company based in Frederick, Maryland, distributed a pair of articles on their AuthorsMarket website containing derogatory comments about the science fiction and fantasy genres. This was perhaps unwise, with the company already having to contend with accusations of Vanity Publishing despite protests to the contrary (such as claiming to filter out the majority of the 70 manuscripts they receive every day). Naturally, authors from both genres didn't take it well.

Thus, led by James D. Macdonald, a group of sci-fi and fantasy authors decided to retaliate (as well as test PublishAmerica's claims) by producing the most unreadable, incomprehensible trainwreck of a book they could conceive, all under the collective name of "Travis Tea". They would create it, submit it, and see how PublishAmerica would react. Atlanta Nights is that book, and guess what? Come December 7, 2004, PublishAmerica did take the bait. At least until the authors revealed the hoax on January 23, 2005, after which PA very quickly retracted their offer after "further review" the next day.

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As for the book itself, well, it's a plotless, rambling pile of nonsense, riddled with inconsistencies and typos. It focuses on a group of wealthy, good-looking Atlanta socialites who sleep around with each other. Buried underneath it all is a vague storyline: software developer Bruce Lucent accidentally kills businessman Henry Archer in a car collision, and promptly tries to make up for it by courting Callie, Henry's widow, while Detective Andrew Venice attempts to determine whether there's foul play. Beyond that, however, virtually nothing about the plot can be determined that is consistent from one chapter to the next, due to the absolutely staggering number of internal inconsistencies in the plot.

A Dramatic Reading can be accessed right here, or you can download the actual manuscript right here.

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On February 12, 2011, Brenda Clough, one of the authors, announced that some lucky person had optioned the film rights, though the film was ultimately passed on.

Compare Naked Came the Stranger, a novel written with similar intent, to show that Sex Sells even if the remainder is a rambling pile of nonsense contributed by multiple authors.


This deliberate trainwreck provides examples of:

  • Abusive Parents: Bruce's mother. Or maybe she's a long-lost founder of a woman's beauty products company. See Plot Hole.
  • All Just a Dream: For exactly one chapter toward the end. And then it isn't anymore.
  • Anachronic Order: This, combined with the constant continuity errors, makes for a (deliberately) very confusing read.
  • Artistic License – Geography: As with everything associated with this book, it's surely intentional.
    • The cover of the Lulu paperback edition alone drives the point home by depicting palm trees and a beach — a totally alien scene for a city hundreds of miles inland. The fact that it is clearly an ocean sunset means it can't even be the distant Georgia coast, as that faces east.
    • Also, when Irene recalls her vacation with Henry...
      "He took me to Rome where we stood in the light of the Eiffel Tower."note .
  • Artistic License – University Admissions: Somehow, Arthur Nance went straight into medical school after graduating from high school. Valedictorian or no, that's extremely implausible.
  • As You Know: Between the doctor and the nurse on the first page.
  • Back from the Dead:
    • Rory Edwards, with no explanation. At first, the reader might think that this is just the Anachronic Order at work, but then, there is absolutely no way that this chapter is set before the one where he died. Just to make things even more ridiculous, he dies again in his final appearance. Whether he actually survived the first attack or is just another of the novel's deliberate goof-ups is unclear.
    • Steven Stuffern dies from blood loss after being shot by Isadore Trent in chapter 33, but then comes back from the dead in chapter 35 to try to blackmail Richard Isaacs.
  • Beige Prose
    "They had wild sex."
  • Big Eater: Everyone in the cast. Most of the chapters involve the characters eating vast amounts of food at expensive restaurants. In Chapter 6, for instance, Bruce and Isaac Stevens share an appetizer of foie gras, crackers, mushrooms, truffles, artichoke hearts, and pickled eggs. Then Isaac orders half a pound of steak covered in mushrooms and onions, corn on the cob, a loaded baked potato, and steamed carrots while Bruce orders stuffed chicken with truffle and cranberry dressing, baby back ribs, and a loaded baked potato. And yet, the two of them still have room for dessert.
  • Bigger Is Better in Bed: Every male character apparently has a larger-than-average penis.
  • Bishie Sparkle: Henry had one, according to Irene.
  • Bizarre Taste in Food: During a business lunch Bruce and Isaac discuss ways to improve/ruin a single malt; Isaac likes Pepsi whilst Bruce favors Mountain Dew or prune juice when he wishes to be healthy. Irene has hers with root beer but she's "weird".
  • Bloody Hilarious:
    "[He] splattered it with his blood and ichor, all kinds of body fluids, all more or less foul and sticky."
  • Brother–Sister Incest: Due to a plot hole. Callie Archer is mentioned as being Bruce Lucent's younger sister in chapter 22, but is his new wife in every other chapter.
  • Butter Face: According to Irene, Bruce has a "studly body" but "the face of a turnip."
  • Buxom Is Better: Irene Stevens, Callie, and Margaret Eastman are very well-endowed.
  • Character Tics: Isaac Stevens rubbed his pepper and salt beard, then brushed backs his close trimmed hair.
  • Chocolate Baby: In one chapter, it's stated than Bruce's parents were White, but he's Black.
  • Comforting the Widow: Bruce's romance with Callie, after her husband was killed in a car crash.
  • Cool Guns: An unnamed old man owns a Desert Eagle .44 magnum.
  • "Dear John" Letter: Shortly before his death, Henry wrote one to Irene informing her that he was leaving her for Margaret Eastman. But only in one chapter: in the others, he was planning to divorce Callie so he could marry Irene.
  • Delusions of Eloquence: Particularly abundant in Chapter 13, which opens thus:
    The Atlanta rain came down hard and glitzy-blue and transparent in a gorgeous murky haze over the bustling city, as the popular and highly exclusive café reposed in its cozy yet diffidently a corner nest along the posh avenue lined with trees and littered with pedestrians and people walking and their various and sun-dried pets.
  • Department of Redundancy Department
    • Chapters 4 and 17 are the same thing, almost word for word. There are also two chapter 12s, though they have different contents. The second chapter 12 and the only chapter 15 also contain similar content, and were written from the same outline by two different writers.
    • Also, because none of the authors knew where in the story their chapter would go, the same sketchy character descriptions are repeated ad nauseam.
  • Disproportionate Retribution: Constantly.
    • Yvonne gets extra vodka she didn't ask for at a restaurant, so she pours it all over a plant.
    • Bruce steps on an old woman's foot at another restaurant and she yells at him, so he threatens to have her arrested and the waiters give her a No-Holds-Barred Beatdown.
  • Driving Question: Who killed Henry Archer? In one chapter, it was Irene Stevens. In another, it was Isaac Stevens, Rory Edwards, and Isadore Trent.
  • Embarrassing Nickname: Irene's nicknames for Henry Archer were "Daddy Hank", "Bluebeard", and "Bluebird."
  • Erotic Eating: Yvonne Perrin with a Hardee's hamburger and Callie with a cherry.
  • Every Car Is a Pinto: The car accident(s) in the backstory seem to have been unusually explosive.
  • Everybody Has Lots of Sex: Seldom does a chapter go by without someone either having sex or talking about having had sex.
  • Everything's Better with Penguins: Apparently, penguins are vicious, burrowing predators that live in the Sahara and howl at the moon.
  • Gratuitous Japanese: Irene in one chapter where she calls someone's shirt "kawaii" and thinks that her father is a "baka."
  • Happily Married: Callie and Henry, except in the chapters where they were about to get divorced.
  • Hell-Bent for Leather:
    • Henry Archer; he bought Irene leather carpets, chairs, manacles, mattresses, sofas, underwear, and whips.
    • Irene, too, though she prefers penguin leather.
  • Heroes Want Redheads: Penelope Urbain and Yvonne Perrin are both red-haired women, although only Penelope hooks up with Bruce, who is probably the closest thing to a hero in the story. Also, Henry had a red-haired mistress.
  • Homoerotic Subtext
    • Callie and Yvonne enjoy some very sexy Food Porn in Chapter 26
    • Steven Suffern exits Bruce Lucent's hospital room thinking about Bruce's "nice, tight ass." Steven is canonically supposed to be bi.
  • Hypocritical Humor: One character notes that in bad novels set in Atlanta, everything is named after a peach tree. This book is as guilty of that as you can get. To be fair, this isn't that far from the truth.note 
  • IKEA Erotica: At times. Sometimes it's Purple Prose, Depending on the Writer.
  • Imaginary Friend: Either that, or it's Henry's ghost.
  • Improbable Age: Bruce is a millionaire software developer at eighteen.
  • Kaleidoscope Hair:
    • Bruce's hair constantly changes from brown to blond.
    • Callie is usually a brunette, but inexplicably becomes a blonde in chapter 27.
  • Kudzu Plot: It's hard to tie threads when there's a different writer for each chapter, and the authors have no idea what's happening beyond a sketchy outline.
  • Lampshade Hanging: Penelope thinks to herself that she looks like the heroine of a tawdry romance novel.
  • The Law of Conservation of Detail: Completely averted. The narrative stops dead at several points to inform the reader of irrelevant details like which president founded EMS, the kind of stone used in Bruce Lucent's shower, the color of Yvonne's pupils, and the inner thoughts of a cat and an apartment doorman.
  • Likes Older Women: Bruce gets married to Callie. She's in her forties and he's eighteen. He also had sex with Margaret Eastman at his high school prom when she was in her twenties.
  • Metaphorgotten:
    "The waitress jotted down Isadore's order, then looked at Isaac with the patience of a saint who has to work tables in order to support a family and possibly just a writing habits, not to mention, pay bills and federal taxes."
  • Making Love in All the Wrong Places: Yvonne and Isaac get it on under the table at a wedding reception.
  • Malaproper: Everyone, though Callie's use of phrases like "dingo-eat-dingo world" and "I heard through the cherry vine" stand out.
  • The Mistress: Irene Stevens was Henry Archer's mistress, and seems both emotionally and financially uncertain what to do following his death
  • Most Writers Are Human: Averted by Chapter 34, which was written by a computer program.
  • Naughty Nurse Outfit: Implied with Margaret Eastman. It's clear that her nurse's uniform is very flattering on her, from the reactions of the other characters
  • No Sympathy: After accidentally shooting Steven Suffern, Isadore Trent tells him to go out on the porch because he's getting blood all over the kitchen floor.
  • One Steve Limit: Averted with Richard Isaacs, Isaac Stevens and Steven Suffern. And as if to demonstrate why this trope exists, the novel gets these three characters mixed up several times.
  • Out with a Bang: Rory Edwards has a heart attack after getting jerked off and then hearing about Irene having sex with Bruce before he can recover.
  • Plot Hole: Since the authors had a very rough outline and didn't read each other's chapters, this occurs every few sentences.
  • Plot-Triggering Death: Henry's death is what sets the whole plot in motion... assuming it ever has.
  • Posthumous Character: Henry Archer died in a car crash. This is one of the few things that is consistent across the entire book. Whether it was the same car crash in which Bruce was injured is extremely inconsistent
  • Police Are Useless: Venice gets dick-all done.
  • Punny Name: The book was published under the name "Travis Tea".
  • Purple Prose: Depending on the Writer. Here's a particularly florid excerpt from Chapter 10:
    The floors were polished white marble, with veins of luminous color running through them, and you can see your countenance in them because they polished every morning. A commodious, confident cloak room was standing discretely behind the double door, for coats, but was empty on this lovely, gorgeous, beautiful morning. There was an elegant, gracious, wide stairway to the second floor that had gilt on the black iron railing.
  • Quote Mine: One of the blurbs suggest this:
    "...this... book... makes... for... wondrous... reading..."
  • Race Lift: In one chapter, Bruce and Callie are black and speak in Jive Turkey, and Bruce is trying to find his long-lost mother. In every other chapter, Callie, at least, is white (her pale skin is explicitly brought up on several occasions), and this subplot is never heard from again. Bruce is also Asian briefly.
    • Gender Flip: Isadore Trent is a woman in one chapter, but a man everywhere else. Presumably, his original character sketch didn't specify and one of the writers was unaware that 'Isadore' is normally a male name. This gets what may be a Lampshade Hanging later when he is described as "gender-confused".
  • Rail Enthusiast: Henry Archer collected model trains, if only for one chapter.
  • Random Events Plot: The entire book was written with only a vague idea of the plot and a list of character names available to the authors (see "One Steve Limit" and "Significant Monogram" for the significance of the latter). Each author, in turn, wrote their chapters without ever discussing it with each other. Some authors missed the deadline, so those chapters were left out. Two chapters were written from the same piece of outline. Then, to make sure it would never make any sense, one chapter was created entirely by a computer making randomly-constructed sentences.
  • Raven Hair, Ivory Skin: Callie is repeatedly said to look like this, in all but two chapters: one in which she has blonde hair, and another in which she is black.
  • Really Gets Around: Every character. See Everybody Has Lots of Sex, above.
  • Rouge Angles of Satin: Pretty frequently. For a particularly blatant example, one of Henry's remote control airplanes is called a "Commie Causie plane".
  • Round Robin: There was absolutely no attempt made to tie any of it together between the authors, but that was the point.
  • Said Bookism: Absolutely rampant, though the amount varies by chapter.
  • Self-Made Orphan: Irene Stevens kills her father toward the end.
  • Serial Killer: Henry Archer, with Irene sharing in the Mad Love. But only in one chapter. And then it's never mentioned again.
  • Shout-Out: To Dallas, Doctor Strangelove, Looney Tunes, Moby-Dick...
  • Ships That Pass in the Night: In-Universe. Andrew Venice and Margaret Eastman, who up to that point had never appeared in the same chapter, elope in Chapter 36. In the final chapter, Richard Isaacs contemplates suicide over his unrequited love for Margaret, to whom he has never spoken in the entire novel.
  • Significant Monogram: If you take all the named characters' initials and arrange them properly, they spell out a Take That!.
    • Penelope Urbain + Bruce Lucent + Irene Stevens + Henry Archer + Margaret Eastman + Richard Isaacs + Callie Archer + Isaac Stevens + Andrew Venice + Arthur Nance + Isadore Trent + Yvonne Perrin + Rory Edwards + Stephen Suffern = PublishAmerica is a vanity press.
  • Southern Belle: Arguably all the female characters count, given that they are all Georgia natives.
  • Stealth Insult: This blurb:
    "[ATLANTA NIGHTS will] draw readers like a magnet draws hungry flies!"
  • Straw Vegetarian: Penelope, Callie, and Arthur Nance, though Penelope eats a rare steak, Callie Swedish meatballs and slices of ham, and Arthur a ham sandwich before their vegetarianism is mentioned. At one point, Callie turns down an offer of dessert on the grounds that she is a vegetarian... after eating some ham.
  • Stylistic Suck: Deliberately designed to be as grammar-deficient, incoherent and inconsistent as possible...
  • Take That!: ...as a subtle potshot against PublishAmerica, accusing it of Vanity Publishing.
  • Textual Celebrity Resemblance: Andrew Venice looks like George Clooney on good days and Rowan Atkinson on bad days.
  • Torture Cellar: Henry Archer had one in the chapter where he's stated to have been a Serial Killer.
  • Trivially Obvious: Some of the blurbs.
    "Maybe once in a lifetime, there comes a book with such extraordinary characters, thrilling plot twists, and uncanny insight, that it comes to embody its time. ATLANTA NIGHTS is a book."
    "Only a sequel could follow this!"
  • Troll Fic: Could be the Trope Codifier for how it was executed. In this case, it wasn't meant to troll the reader; it was to troll the publisher.
  • Uninstallment: See Unusual Chapter Numbers below.
  • Unusual Chapter Numbers: There are two Chapter 12s, and no Chapter 21.
  • Unusual Euphemism: "Cowfish udders" for breasts.
  • Wanton Cruelty to the Common Comma:
    "All dead guys are irregardless of how they lived their rotten, two-timing sadistic, pathetic, discombobulatedly senseless, irreligious, unthinking, flakes, debauched, foulmouthed, obnoxious, deviant, gross, adulterous, murderous, gluttonous, alcoholic, lazy, indolent, filthy, grotesquely indecent, lunatic, lives", "She preened. He turned away with me! Quickly! Inside!"
    "It's full of sick, people!"
  • Word Salad Lyrics: Chapter 34 was generated entirely by computer, namely the Bonsai Story Generator, which was used on the contents of the other (wetware-spawned) chapters.
    "I know I was hungry, and impelling him lying naked. She slowly made for a man could join you I know what I ought to take you probably should have. He wants it worriedly. About think what to wear?"
  • Yandere: Irene in one chapter, where she killed Henry before he could leave her and then put his ashes in a jar of alcohol so they can always be together.


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