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#17677: Apr 2nd 2018 at 5:45:11 PM
Done to here.
Primis
Since: Nov, 2010
#17678: Apr 2nd 2018 at 9:50:38 PM
Franchise.Deus Ex has been moved to Franchise.Deus Ex Universe, so could someone please update the Deus Ex entry in Monster.Video Games A To K?
#17679: Apr 3rd 2018 at 2:21:36 AM
Done.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
ACW
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Since: Jul, 2009
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
#17680: Apr 3rd 2018 at 4:08:54 AM
Rewrite for James Bond:
- GoldenEye: Xenia Onatopp, a psychotic Russian assassin working for the Janus Syndicate, has the dubious honor of being the most depraved Femme Fatale Bond has ever come across. Initially seen as a charming, elegant woman, Xenia reveals her true nature when, in bed with her target, she kills him by crushing him between her thighs to suffocate him, getting clear sexual ecstasy from the murder; she later tries to kill Bond the same way. She steals his security clearance and murders several innocent sailors before eluding Bond. Later, when Xenia arrives in a Russian facility, she massacres all the techs with machine gun fire, getting very visibly aroused by the killings; even her partner for the mission looks a bit stunned at this. Xenia has one of the largest body counts for a Dragon in the franchise, and unlike the majority of her male counterparts, Xenia is in it for money and thrills. She has no issue helping to use the GoldenEye satellite to plunge England into the dark ages as long as she gets rich from it. The fact that this gives her the ability to express her sexualized love for killing is just a bonus.
edited 3rd Apr '18 6:12:30 AM by ACW
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#17681: Apr 3rd 2018 at 4:11:14 AM
![[up]](https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/smiles/arrow_up.png "[up]"){kind=icon}
There should be a "for her" after perk, I think.
ACW
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Since: Jul, 2009
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
#17682: Apr 3rd 2018 at 4:57:06 AM
Try it now.
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miraculous
Goku Black
(Apprentice)
Goku Black
#17683: Apr 3rd 2018 at 5:36:30 AM
In Kamen Rider in the entry for Tenjuro Banno please change Gold Drive to Kamen Rider Gold Drive. Thats the full name.
"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
hegelvonaxel
Since: Feb, 2018
#17684: Apr 3rd 2018 at 7:46:54 AM
At Tortall Universe, please cut from Vinson of Genlith's entry this:
"so we know just what he did to them."
At Gundam/Monster cut this from Decil's entry
A seven-year old Sociopathic Soldier and Vagan Ace Pilot when first introduced, the psychotic Decil sees war as a game, and his victims as nothing more than expendable toys.
edited 3rd Apr '18 7:54:04 AM by hegelvonaxel
ACW
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Since: Jul, 2009
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
#17685: Apr 3rd 2018 at 1:31:45 PM
Season 1
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Please replace the contents of Ripper Street with this (mainly just formatting):
Ripper Street
"That man...the Ripper! His brutality. How many? Seven? At most? And his name all set to haunt this city for thousand years. I have already tripled his score. Think how long they'll talk of me!"
—Claxton, "The King Came Calling"
Ripper Street, taking place soon after the rampage of Jack the Ripper, shows that he wasn't the only monster lurking in the streets of Whitechapel.
Season 1
- Sir Arthur Donaldson, from the series premiere "I Need Light", first shows up mere months after Jack's rampage, yet manages to be a depraved monster in his own right. He was a Serial Rapist who abducted women by drugging them, then he would take them to a secret location where he would rape them before strangling them to death. Next, to remove suspicion from himself, he would mutilate them so they would appear to be new victims of Jack. His monstrous nature also extends to his lone servant, whom he would force to film him commit his atrocities all so he could watch them in his spare time. The abuse that Donaldson gave to his servant was so bad that the servant eventually killed himself. In the end, while Donaldson was only the first felon Detective Inspector Edmund Reid encountered since his search for The Ripper, it was this case that convinces Reid to let go of his pursuit, so he can find other criminals lurking in the streets of Whitechapel.
- Claxton, from "The King Came Calling", is the manager of a Whitechapel bakery, where he uses his position to contaminate the bread with lethal poison before distributing them to the commonwealth. This was done in a manner that would looked like an outbreak of cholera, and results in dozens of deaths of men, women, and children in a matter of days, with Detective Reid's wife Emily nearly another victim. When Reid finally captures Claxton and ask him why he did all this, Claxton's response was that Jack took attention he felt was deservedly his and by killing many people, even bragging of tripling The Ripper's total, he would finally regain all that fame.
- Sir Victor Silver, from the season finale "What Use Our Work?", may look like a gentle man but in truth he is anything but. Long ago, he was suspected of being Jack, but the issue was dropped when he thought to have died in a boat accident. However, he managed to survive, and continued his business in kidnapping women and having them shipped to South America as sex slaves, using his superficial charm to gain their trust before luring them to his family's estate, where he would shackle them to a bed for days before drugging them and locking them in small boxes to be sent overseas. Overall, while only just one of many Ripper suspects, he was evil enough to match Jack's himself.
Season 2
- Dr. Charles Broadwick, from "Dynamite and a Woman", despite knowing how unstable and dangerous direct current is compared to alternating current, wants to have the entire city of London use the former, just so he could profit off of it, completely uncaring how many people could get killed because of these currents. In an effort to hide the truth from the public, he frees Aiden Galvin, while killing the police officer transporting him. He then has Galvin plant a bomb at one of his colleague's room, before framing the Irish Republican Brotherhood for this. Once this succeeds, Broadwick send him to place a bomb at Whitechapel University, where all of his colleagues will be in one place for him to kill. It was also revealed that this was not only time Broadwick collaborated with Galvin, as he did so a couple years ago where he had 12 innocent people killed, then pinned all the blame on his cohort, while he walked free. While Galvin has a daughter whom he genuinely cares for, Broadwick has no such qualities, and is solely define by his Greed, which to satisfy he has killed many and would kill many more.
- Gabriel Cain, from "A Stronger Loving World", was a member of the Hermetic Order of the Golden Dawn, before he was kicked out for his radical beliefs that the world is corrupt. He then formed a cult solely based around his ideology. He brainwashes all of his followers to carry out suicide attacks to spite those whom he believed had wronged him. These tactics included having one of them to burn himself alive in a Catholic Church full of innocents, framing the Hebrews of Whitechapel for it; to having another slit his own throat in front of the detectives investigating him. He also has his daughter, Bella, marry Detective Inspector Drake Bennet, so that he could recruit him into the cult in the near future. When Drake discovers the cult as well as the revelation that Cain had manipulated Bella, his own daughter, into have sex with him to impregnate her with his child, Cain captures him and attempts to have him as well all of his followers—including Bella—die by drinking poisoned wine as a way to destroy the evidence against him, at which point he could form another cult in hiding. Ultimately, his depraved acts prove that Cain himself is just as morally corrupt, if not more so, as the world he is claiming to be fighting against.
Season 3
- Ronald Capshaw, the head of Obsidian Estates, serves as the Arc Villain of the season's first half, where he, along with co-conspirator Susan Hart, organize a plan to rob the latter's father of his cargo train, carrying $350,000 in unclaimed bearer bonds. The plot worked but resulted in an accident killing 55 innocents, with Capshaw only concerned if he could profit from this travesty or if he might get caught. He has his accomplices meet him in a warehouse, only to betray them, only keeping Hart because she is useful. When hearing of Edmund Reid still investigating the incident, Capshaw finds out about Reid's long-lost daughter, Mathilda, goes to her location, kills one of her caretakers, and manipulates Reid into killing the other caretaker by lying that they killed her, when the truth is that he'd kidnapped her. He also tries to kill Mathilda himself, only for Hart to intervene and try to send her away from Whitechapel, only for her to escape from both of them. Furious, Capshaw sends his men to find and kill her while he threatens to expose Hart's part in the train incident if she ever disobeys him again. Through this blackmail he forces Hart to attempt to kill Reid. While Susan Hart had plans to use the stolen money to gentrify Whitechapel and was morally appalled on what she had done, Ronald Capshaw had no such reason or remorse for any of his actions and was just a greedy sociopath more than happy to cause the deaths and misery of many if he could benefit from it all.
Season 4
- Cornelius Wilde, from "Some Conscience Lost", is the director of a hospital in Whitechapel that supposedly takes care of ill children and cures them of their diseases. In truth, however, he has them killed, either by lethal injection or suffocation before hiding their bodies under the hospital floors. He has done this ever since the Ripper's killing spree, only being caught now when a patient of his escaped the facility and survived long enough for Detective Reid to spot him before he dies from his uncared-for illness. When Reid arrives at the hospital and has the floors removed he see corpses of numerous children, and confronts Wilde about this, the latter refuses to own up to any of his wrongdoings, even saying it was the childrens' fault they were sick in the first place, and that he cannot be bothered to cure them, much to the detective's fury.
Silverblade2
Since: Jan, 2013
#17686: Apr 3rd 2018 at 1:38:39 PM
At Film A To C for Basic Instinct, could you please pothole "Years later in London" with Basic Instinct 2?
buckmana
Since: Jan, 2014
#17688: Apr 4th 2018 at 12:11:21 AM
Why was the Sunny Day page locked? I intended to correct a redlink and possibly add a new trope about Dick Dastardly Stops to Cheat (as the character Lacey employs this tactic in every competition), but then discovered it had been locked.
Reviewing the page history, I did see an edit war relating exactly to the link I did intend to correct. So now I am uncertain if I should correct that link, given the controversy it triggered.
But I still want to write the Lacey trope addition, if that is possible/permitted.
hegelvonaxel
Since: Feb, 2018
#17689: Apr 4th 2018 at 1:14:39 AM
You deleted wrong part of Desil's entry.
ACW
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Since: Jul, 2009
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
#17690: Apr 4th 2018 at 4:13:57 AM
Here, for Desil, just copy and paste this whole thing:
- Mobile Suit Gundam AGE: Desil Galette, a seven-year old Vagan Ace Pilot when first introduced, sees war as a game, and his victims as nothing more than expendable toys. As the pilot of the Zedas, he spearheads genocidal attacks on colonies, and is implied to be the one who orphaned Yurin L’Ciel. He subsequently hijacks the AGE-1, and tests out its capabilities by butchering his own allies. He later captures Yurin, puts her inside of a remote-controlled mobile suit, and forces her to attack her Love Interest, Flit. When Yurin tries to fight off his control, Desil kills her, while laughing about how she was "just a plaything." That’s all in the First Generation. By the Second Generation, he’s thirty-three years old and has, if anything, gotten worse. Deeply resentful of his younger brother Zeheart for having been promoted past him, he takes more and more insane risks. This ultimately leads to his getting most of the Magicians Eight killed as a part of a grudge match against Flit and murdering Flit's friend, and Flit's son Asemu's mentor, Woolf. It gets to the point where Zeheart, realizing what his brother has become, leaves Desil to die at Asemu’s hands in the aftermath of a losing battle.
And another rewrite for James Bond:
- Licence to Kill: Franz Sanchez can be charming, but he's also uncommonly brutal and ruthless in dealing with his enemies or those he perceives as disloyal to him. He brutally whips his mistress, Lupe Lamora, with a stingray-tail whip as a punishment for infidelity, and also orders his top henchman Dario to remove the heart of the man she has slept with. He feeds Bond's best friend, Felix Leiter, to a shark (he had his newlywed wife raped and killed right before), and he kills one of his collaborators, locking him in a decompression chamber, believing he stole his money. Towards the climax, he also decides to start "cutting overhead" and shoots his financial advisor. While lacking the body counts of other villains that Bond has faced, Sanchez makes up for it by having a visceral cruelty that is unmatched.
edited 4th Apr '18 7:50:28 AM by ACW
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ACW
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Since: Jul, 2009
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
#17691: Apr 4th 2018 at 8:09:42 AM
From here:
- Ross, Uryuu rewrite, and the next 8 entries (up to and including Marcus Octavius) all go to Anime And Manga A To J.
- Next 2 trees (the second one replacing the current entry) go to Anime And Manga K To Z.
- Evans goes to Comic Books.
- Next 2 entries go to Film A To C.
- Next 7 entries (up to and including Anton Montay) all go to Film D To J.
- Next 2 entries go to Film K To R.
- Patrick & Werewolves entry go to Film S To Z.
- "The American" goes to Jack Reacher, after Make Me.
- Jack Angel, the following tree, Bayaz rewrite all go to Literature A To F.
- Ithaqua goes to Literature M To Z.
- Etienne goes to Live Action TVM To Z.
- Frankie goes to Video Games A To K.
- Next 2 entries, as well as the Syndicate rewrites, go to Video Games L To Z.
- Showtime writeup & David King rewrite go to Web Original.
- Dickson rewrite goes to Xeno.
- SQUIP (Theatre) & Miro (Other, before Milo) go to Other Media.
- Next entry (including the header) goes to Fire Emblem, between the Jugdral & Tellius games.
- Next entry (including the header) goes to Highlander, before John Hooke.
- Final tree & header replaces the current stuff at Kamen Rider.
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Morgenthaler
Since: Feb, 2016
#17692: Apr 4th 2018 at 1:36:31 PM
Film K To R: Please change Ravenous to Ravenous (1999).
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
Theatre_Maven_3695
(4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#17693: Apr 4th 2018 at 2:58:15 PM
WesternAnimation.The Lego Movie needs a revert and lock (Voldemort again, surprisingly sans death threats and punchings).
mightymewtron
Lots of coffee
from New New York
Since: Oct, 2012
Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Lots of coffee
#17694: Apr 4th 2018 at 7:50:52 PM
This is more suggestion than a demand so I understand if this doesn't qualify, but for My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic:
"In the episode "Stranger Than Fanfiction", Rainbow Dash and Quibble Pants come across a body pillow that features Daring Do tied up. Rainbow cringes upon seeing it."
I don't like how many people have reached to put dirty subtext in this show but considering the context- the episode is one big Shout-Out to fandom culture, the pillow is given specific focus for those few seconds, the fact Daring's essentially in bondage and Rainbow's uncomfortable reaction coupled with Quibble's "eh what are ya gonna do" face- really pushes this over the edge IMO, given that a few of the examples that are on the Radar page (like Bulk Bicep's wings) are way more subtle.
I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.
#17695: Apr 5th 2018 at 5:38:12 AM
- 17688: Provide your suggested edits, please.
Does the Mobile Suit Gundam AGE thing look right now?
edited 5th Apr '18 5:38:23 AM by nombretomado
hegelvonaxel
Since: Feb, 2018
StFan
Since: Jan, 2001
#17697: Apr 5th 2018 at 7:57:30 AM
On Wick Namespace Migration, please add:
Complex section:
- Doctor Who - Franchise/, Series/, Pinball/ or VideoGame/
- The Pillars of the Earth - Literature/ or Series/
No-so-complex:
- Doctor Who - Series/
- Inside Out - WesternAnimation/ (Film/ is misused)
- My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic - WesternAnimation/ (Series/ is misused)
- SCP Foundation - Wiki/
- Yu-Gi-Oh!The Abridged Series - WebVideo/
#17698: Apr 5th 2018 at 5:56:57 PM
OK, we're done to here.
HeatEdgeSword
Since: Dec, 2017
#17699: Apr 5th 2018 at 10:54:31 PM
I would like to make an entry removal request from Avatar as the page is still locked. The entry in question isn't a YMMV trope, so it doesn't belong here, simple as that.
- Motive Decay: Over the course of the movie, Quaritch goes from being paid to keep people alive to a psychopathic and genocidal quest for revenge.
ACW
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Since: Jul, 2009
Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster
#17700: Apr 6th 2018 at 2:13:50 AM
This somehow got deleted from Jack Reacher. It goes between the Duncans and Night School:
- Make Me: The man with the jeans and the hair lures suicidal people to the town of Mother's Rest, by offering them an illegal assisted suicide service which he advertises on the Deep Web. On the website he guarantees his client a completely painless death. However, once the clients are there, he and his goons capture them, and then murder them in front of the camera. It's a pay-per-view operation, and with extra charge customers are allowed to write their own script. Anyone snooping in their business would be murdered, either by themselves or by a gang of assassins on their payroll, who also go on to murder the snoopers' families to be certain nothing leaks. It is stated that he and his gang are responsible for 209 snuff videos, with titles such as Starved to Death, Pregnant and Bayoneted, Gut Shot, and Thin Man All Ribs Broken First. Categories included "Male victim, female victim, couples, young, old, black, white, cutting, stabbing, beating, power tools, extreme insertion, medical experiment, electricity, drowning, and shooting."
Total posts: 34,184
Please replace Snuff Film with the content on Sandbox.Snuff Film and cutlist the sandbox. I've used the wiki tool to add collapsible folders.
ETA: In fact, please do the same for Sandbox.False Rape Accusation and Sandbox.Rape Discretion Shot.
edited 2nd Apr '18 5:27:47 PM by Morgenthaler
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"