Fixed the capitalization and expanded the examples

In Tomboy and Girly Girl in the video game entry for Mass Effect there should be included how you yourself can be a tomboy to Liara's girly girl as Commander Shepard who can headbutt Krogans and hold her alcohol.

edited 26th Mar '15 6:54:22 AM by ConservativePip

Death Wail under Anime and Manga

• In the final episode of Wolfs Rain, Kiba lets out a truly heartbreaking one when Cheza disintegrates into seeds right in front of him and he realizes he's the last living thing in the world.

edited 1st May '15 11:58:56 PM by starkitty93

Just another animation junkie

Hello. I am Kingofsouls, a humble human whom hails from a land of the real and whom seems to have minor problems the language of my land. My language is English, and it seems to be that I have problems with the tounge I have been speaking since birth.

I assure you, my grammar is perfectly fine. It is simply a matter of how fast my fingers fly across the fickle keys.

How do I appease the grammar gods that I seemingly have offended?

In any case, I think I have to put any entries I want to put on a page. Well here are some for Ashes of the Past

Ash

• Back from the Dead: Ash died during his battle against Mewtwo. Fortunately Ash had some Sacred Ash on him for just such an occasion
• Simple Staff: Ash got the staff when he got the other parts of Sir Arron's clothing. It holds the Rainbow and Silver Feathers he received from Ho-Oh and Lugia, and it alongside the feathers serves as his Keystone

Pidgeot

• Sapient Steed: Pidgeot is often used as Ash's go-to Pokemon for high speed travel in short amounts of time.
• Super-Empowering:During the battle inside Cubone's mind, Pidgeot Mega Evolved without a mega stone. Justified as it was in the middle of a mental environment.[[/spoiler

Primeape

• Bare-Fisted Monk: His fighting style focuses on high powered Aura boosted attacks.
• Out of Focus: His last major battles were against Chuck and the battle for Altomare.

Goldeen/ Seaking

• Out of Focus: Doesn't see much screentime compared to Misty's other Pokemon.

Delia Ketchum

• Unwitting Instigator of Doom: Due to her choosing to not go to Greenfield the Unkown created a Suicune and a Raikou as well as Entei.

@Starkitty93 The spoiler tag doesn't work right if you capitalize Spoiler.

• In the final episode of Wolf's Rain, Kiba lets out a truly heartbreaking one when Cheza disintegrates into seeds right in front of him and he realizes he's the last living thing in the world.

edited 12th May '15 10:08:38 AM by Kingofsouls

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Yoko Oh No under Musicians' Love Interests

• Juliet Simms, lead singer of Automatic Loveletter and contestant on The Voice, has received this treatment for dating Black Veil Brides frontman Andy Biersack from either rabid Andy fangirls or those that preferred Andy's previous girlfriend.

edited 30th Mar '15 9:02:26 AM by starkitty93

Just another animation junkie

(this is a work in progress. I made the page a while back then well...I put it on the back burner.)

Fusion Of Destinies is a Metroid and Harry Potter crossover written by Gray-X, author of Attack Of The 100 Foot Meg Griffin. In it a mysterious woman is found on the grounds of Hogwarts an is taken in by Dumbledoor once she wakes up (with no memeory). But as Harry's fifth year occurs mysterious events behind the scenes reveal a grave threat from beyond the Earth's stars.

The sequel, Day Of Reckoning, takes place just before 'Deathly Hollows' reveals a new threat whom wishes to destroy the Muggle and Wizarding worlds and rebuild them from the ruins of the old.

edited 1st Apr '15 10:30:49 AM by Kingofsouls

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I don't have time to go through the whole thing right now but some of those need to be expanded like Evil Twin: The HP-X is this to Harry. You would say, "He wishes to destroy the Muggle and Wizarding worlds" so it's "who wishes to destroy the Muggle and Wizarding worlds..." When in doubt just use 'who'.

I need to re-read the fic in full to refresh my memory, but from what I remember the HP-X doesn't really do much besides be evil. He didn't have much of a personality.

I am a figment of your imagination

How does he "be evil"? How is he Harry's twin? Like they're literally brothers born the same day? Also there's "Berserk Button: Adam doesn't like being called a rickety plane." How does he go berserk? When is it triggered? "JB Granger full stop," is Word Cruft. Drop the 'full stop'. Badass Normal and Empowered Badass Normal need to include "He doesn't have powers, but can keep up with those who do." Neither of them indicate that. "Valencia and Snape get married," doesn't say how they're unholy or working together.

Do you see what I'm saying?

Yea I do. Hmm....let me see. For Adams case he actually is a plane thus being called a rickety one would piss him off (although he defer to Samus instead of actually doling out any hurt as they were in a civilian area at the time).

For the HP-X the more I think about it, Suspiciously Similar Substitute is a closer fit for him. His role in Fusion of Destinies is more akin to the SA-X's role in Metroid Fusion: Harass the good guys because you can.

I am a figment of your imagination

In Tomboyand Girly Girl in the video game entry for Mass Effect there should be included how you yourself can be a tomboy to Liara's girly girl as Commander Shepard who can headbutt Krogans and hold her alcohol.

In Our Dumb Century A article on one page mentions Genuine Human Hide in the form of a actress wearing a human skin gown for a movie gala premire of Psycho

In Rise of the Reds for More Dakka the Russian APC can shoot missles, tank rounds, and bullets.

edited 5th Apr '15 6:54:07 AM by ConservativePip

I would like someone to please add the following edit to the main page of Ashes of the Past:

• The Chosen Many: Since Ash is The Chosen One for several people and pokemon who are in charge of choosing the One in a way Ash's Pokemon and companions are in a sense also chosen.
  • In another regard Casey is offered an opportunity to be a Aura Guardian. She accepts.

• Pass the Popcorn: When the Legendary Beasts and their shiny counterparts come by to watch Ash battle Morty, Scuicune asks for some popcorn.

Also can someone put the following entries under the appropriate character on the Character.Ashes Of The Past page?

Bulbasaur

• Confusion Fu: Bulbasaur has a incredibly varied move pool to choose from considering his Tangled Family Tree. It's probably easier to list the moves Bulbasaur doesn't know than that ones he does know.

Brock

• Weapon Of Choice: His crowbar, which only sees combat when Brock needs to whack any unruly Unown.

edited 4th Apr '15 10:31:45 PM by Kingofsouls

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Happy Easter everyone!

So, doing a little clean-up/expansion. Those were listed as zero content, my inner fanboy had to do something with them. As always, please post after checking.

Lara Croft: Tomb Raider:

• Action Girl: Lara Croft, tomboyish Adventurer Archaeologist able to stand her ground against any and all dangers. She's the only non-extra female character in both films, which makes her actions stand out even more.
• Ancient Conspiracy: For the first film accept no substitute. The Illuminati are portrayed as an organisation old enough to be around when the previous planetary alignment happened.
• Ancient Artifact: The Triangle of Light, which dates at least back to early Bronze Age.
• Artifact of Death: The Pandora's Box in the second film, treated as a container for a superplague.
• Braids of Action: Lara is wearing her iconic braid most of the time, especially in the first film.
• Dungeon Crawling: Both films are all about searching ancient sites for equally ancient artifacts.
• Letting Her Hair Down: By the end of the first film Lara finally carries herself like a lady. Part of the new image is unbraided hair.
• Male Gaze: The Movie. There is enough fanservice thrown in to gather a... special Periphery Demographic.
• Ms. Fanservice: Lara Croft, naturally. The first film alone turned Angelina Jolie into a sex symbol.
• Role Called: A notable case, since the game series was back then simply called "Tomb Raider". When Crystal Dynamics took the franchise over, they also added the "Lara Croft:" part into the title of their games.
• Scary Black Man: The leader of Powell's Mooks is tall, silent, and black.
• Scenery Censor: Daniel Craig in the first film manages to take a naked shower on-screen with everything important always being covered.
• Scenery Porn: The Cambodian part of the first film has long shots of ruins covered with lush vegetation.
• Shower Scene: The first film has both male and female shower scenes shot with fanservice in mind.
• Smug Snake: Manfred Powell is a cunning member of the Illuminati inner circle, scheming his way to the top and not above killing his boss.
• Stripperiffic: Some of Lara's outfits barely cover her. The second film toned it down to make it easier for the make-up artist covering Jolie's tattoos.
• Temple of Doom: The final site in Siberia from the first film is ruins of the temple originally hosting the Triangle of Light, with all the six-thousand-years-old mechanisms (and traps) still in working condition, if only a bit dusty.
• Wicked Cultured: Powell is soft-spoken, well-educated and mildly mannered. He also happens to be the main villain of the first film.

edited 6th Apr '15 2:18:34 AM by rzorrz

This is missing a lot of articles (a, an, the, and so on), there is some Word Cruft (unnecessary words, especially "rather"), a few miscellaneous grammar errors, and a couple of misused tropes.

• Action Girl: Lara Croft, tomboyish Adventurer Archaeologist able to stand her ground against any and all dangers. She's the only non-extra female character in both films, which makes her actions stand out even more.
• Ancient Conspiracy: For the first film accept no substitute. The Illuminati are portrayed as an organisation old enough to be around when the previous planetary alignment happened.
• Ancient Artifact: The Triangle of Light, which dates at least back to early Bronze Age.
• Artifact of Death: The Pandora's Box in the second film, which is treated as a container for a superplague.
• Braids of Action: Lara is wearing her iconic braid most of the time, especially in the first film.
• Dungeon Crawling: Rather self-explanationary, since [B]oth films are all about searching ancient sites for equally ancient artifacts.
• Letting Her Hair Down: By the end of the first film Lara finally carries herself like a lady. Part of the new image are is unbraided hair.
• Male Gaze: The Movie. There is enough fanservice thrown in to gather rather a... special Periphery Demographic.

* Mr. Fanservice: Alex West and Terry Sheridan. Both have at least one Shirtless Scene and Alex takes rather long shower accompanied by camera.

• Ms. Fanservice: Lara Croft, naturally. The [f]irst film alone turned Angelina Jolie into the new a sex symbol.
• Role Called: A [n]otable case, since the game series was back then simply called "Tomb Raider". When Crystal Dynamics took the franchise over, they've also added the "Lara Croft:" part into the title of their games.

* Rule of Cool: The Movie. Ancient conspiracies, equally ancient and powerful artifacts, time travel, animated statues, lone action girl taking on small armies...

• Scary Black Man: The leader of Powell's Mooks is tall, silent, and black.
• Scenery Censor: Daniel Craig in the first film manages to take a naked shower on screen on-screen with everything important always being covered.
• Scenery Porn: The Cambodian part of the first film is just gorgeous with all the has long shots of ruins covered with lush vegetation.
• Shower Scene: The [f]irst film has both male and female shower scenes shot with fanservice in mind.
• Smug Snake: Manfred Powell is a cunning member of the Illuminati inner circle, scheming his way to the top and not above killing his boss.
• Stripperiffic: Some of Lara's outfits are barely covering barely cover her. The [s]econd film toned it down to make it easier for the make-up artist covering Jolie's tattoos.
• Temple of Doom: The final site in Siberia from the first film is ruins of the temple originally hosting [t]he Triangle of Light, with all the six thousands years old six-thousand-year-old mechanisms (and traps) still in working condition, if only a bit dusty.
• Wicked Cultured: Powell is soft-spoken, well-educated and mildly mannered man. He also happens to be the main villain of the first film.

edited 13th Apr '15 2:07:01 AM by rodneyAnonymous

Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.

Got more edits for Ashes of the Past. First, the main page:

• Time Police: Celibi goes back and forth in time to make sure time stays in one piece.
• Sequence Breaking:
  • When Ash made it to Pumilo Island to battle Drake, he spied May and Max in the crowd and decided restoring their memoires early was a good idea.
• Weapon Of Choice: Brock has a crowbar on hand in case he runs into Unown.

Also can someone add these to Naturalist's section on the Character.Sentinels Of The Multiverse page?

The Naturalist

An African Oil tycoon, he was cursed by Akash'Buta into different animal forms. Thankfully, the Argent Adept found him and helped him find his way. Now he can control his shapeshifting and uses it to fight for the wilds he once ravaged.

Naturalists deck relies on the usage of Form Cards: With them Naturalist can turn into either a Gazelle, a Rhinoceros, or a Crocodile. Depending on the form several of his card gain benefits if used with the correct form in play, letting him play offense, defense, or support at any time and change his forms on the fly.

Naturalist's alternate form is The Hunted Naturalist, where is shapeshifting is slowly growing out of his control.

• Animorphism: Can turn into any animal, though in the game itself Naturalist can only turn into three: Gazelle, Rhinoceros, and Crocodile.
• Attack Deflector: Inverted with Threating Stomp and Indomitable Force. Threatening Stomp damages a foe, and if Naturalist was in Rhinoceros Form when the card was played, damage from that target gets redirected to Naturalists. Indomitable Force redirects all damage to Naturalist as long as he is a Rhinoceros, though it only lasts for a turn.
• Damage Reduction: Rhinoceros form specializes in this.
• Discard and Draw: Shifter's Strength lets Naturalist discard any number of cards in his hand to draw the same amount.
• Mix-and-Match Critters: Hunted Naturalist can do this, using his base power to trigger a Form's effects while having the Form card of another animal in play.
  • He can do this without another Form, because the effect ends when his next turn ends. Hunted Naturalist can use that power one turn, then use that power during the next to change into another form while the first activation of that power is still in effect.
• Morphic Resonance: Naturalist's animal forms are a darkish grassy green on his upper body with his symbol appearing on or near his shoulder.
• Regeneration: Resilient Hide slowly heals Naturalist, though only if he is a Rhinoceros.
• Stance System: Naturalist has three different forms, with each Form changing how Naturalist plays.
  • Gazelle: Supports the team in general, but specialized in healing Naturalist and drawing cards.
  • Rhinoceros: Reduces damage dealt to Naturalist and specializes in redirecting damage to Naturalist and/or reducing damage dealt to Naturalist
  • Crocodile: Increases damage Naturalist deals, and gives Naturalist many opportunities to deal damage.
• Unstable Genetic Code: Depending on the cards in play, Naturalist's shapeshifting can get a little...weird.
  • Fixed Point, a card in the Time Cataclysm environment deck, prevents all cards other than itself from being destroyed. Each of the Naturalist's Form cards destroy all other Forms when they enter play. Thus, with Fixed Point in play Naturalist can play another Form card with one already in play and get the benefits of each form.
  • Naturalist's alternate form (The Hunted Naturalist) lets the player gain the benefits of one of the three forms until the turn ends as a Power. Since this does not prevent Naturalist from playing a Form, the player can for example turn into the Crocodile while having the Rhinoceros Form in play.

edited 5th Apr '15 7:27:00 PM by Kingofsouls

I am a figment of your imagination

I'm not sure Clock Roaches is right since it means, "Messing with the timeline causes Eldritch Abominations to come after you," but I'm not really familiar with it. You don't say, "Celibi acts as one, going back and forth..." It's just, "Celibi goes back and forth..." Weapon Of Choice is, "Characters' weapons reflect their personality and/or traits," so you need to say why he chooses it. I don't see how what Ash did is breaking the sequence.

Ashes of the Past is a Peggy Sue of the Pokemon Anime. And in the Anime Ash meets May and Max at the start of the Hoenn arc. In the fic however Ash meets May and Max in the Orange Islands they were there to watch Ash battle the Champion of the Orange Islands, a year earlier than planned.

Also Celibi's job in the fic is to keep time running smoothly and to fix the timeline in case of a Time Crash (which does happen, resulting in the Fairy Type becoming a thing). My main reasoning is what happened in a recent part: Ash meets Lance and the Elite Four, and was just about to tell them too much before Celibi pops in and tells Ash what to say (thus preventing Ash from saying too much at the wrong time and preventing time from breaking again.)

Because of that, I thought Celibi was a Clock Roach. While it's much nicer than the usual Clock Roach, Celibi is still a Legendary psychic pokemon capable of animating a forest into a giant tree creature.

I'll change it to Time Police.

Moving on, Weapon Of Choice. Brock first uses the crowbar to save Professor Ivy from some Unown. At the time it's probably an Improvised Weapon, but when Spell of the Unown happens Brock pulls out the same crowbar.

One more trope for the Characters.Sentinels Of The Multiverse page

Haka

• Walking Shirtless Scene: The only time Haka ever puts on a shirt is when he's not being a superhero.

edited 5th Apr '15 7:22:53 PM by Kingofsouls

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Done. Guess that would be it about getting closer to ban removal... Anyway - thanks for help and please post it for me

By the way - why six-thousand-years-old and not six thousand years old? I get the rest, but not this one.

edited 6th Apr '15 2:21:00 AM by rzorrz

I hear you. Only thing to do is to do your best and appease the Grammar Gods.

Moving on,I have a question: Would titles count as I Have Many Names? Because if so Haka has a few.

More additions for his section on the Characters.Sentinels Of The Multiverse page

Haka

• I Have Many Names: Haka has gone by Aata the Bold, Aata the Fierce, Aata the Mask of Death. and Ariki when he was the chief of his tribe.
• Really 700 Years Old: The exact number isn't known, but Haka is a few hundred years old at he least.
  • His Eternal version is even older, since that that time he's the only human left After the End)

EDIT: Got one for the Omnidisciplinary Scientist page under Tabletop Games:

• Tachyon, hailing from Sentinels of the Multiverse has knowledge of virtually every branch of science (some examples of her feats include cars that get 60 miles per gallon of gas and the cure for cancer). This is justified as Tachyon has Super-Speed, which let her study multiple branches of science at the same time.

edited 6th Apr '15 11:55:19 AM by Kingofsouls

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Uh, hi everybody.

I was editing the awesome music page for Ryu Ga Gotoku, and a trope that goes by the name mlsmithca told me that there's a lot of mistakes there.

I'm an Indonesian, and an autodidact thanks to decades of watching TV and films, playing video games, and reading books... but all those technicalities are lost to me. I mean, I know what to do, but the sentences aren't exactly the correct ones.

Can you help? I really want to add more to that page; that franchise has some awesome soundtrack and I've been a fan of that series since it came out in 2005, and I want to share the love, you know?

edited 6th Apr '15 2:56:12 PM by strangerthenever

A stranger is like the shadows.It is so common to the world everyone will just ignore them.

That's Yakuza. You tell us what edits you want to make and we can correct your English.

I prefer the Japanese name to be honest; not as generic as Yakuza but that's for another place.

It's getting late here, so I don't think I'll be editing much now, but I have edited in a lot of the soundtracks from Yakuza 1 to 4, including the Japanese only Kenzan. I have plans to add musics from 5, Ishin/Restoration, the PSP only Kurohyou games, and the latest game Yakuza 0.

Oh, almost forgot. This is my first time editing stuffs for this website, just so you know. Anyway, I wanted to add what I did, but I don't know how to make it similar to the previous posts above.

I'm quite sure mlsmithca had made some changes, but where did I go wrong?

edited 6th Apr '15 3:39:23 PM by strangerthenever

A stranger is like the shadows.It is so common to the world everyone will just ignore them.

for Panty & Stocking with Garterbelt The trope ladette should be listed as Panty while feminine in dress is also a slob, has been observed picking her nose, and has slept with many guys.

When the adjective phrase comes before the noun, you have to hyphenate it. When the adjective phrase comes after the noun, you just use spaces instead.

Actually, in addition to that, it should be "six-thousand-year-old mechanisms," not "six-thousand-years-old mechanisms." When we use units of measure as adjectives, another difference the placement makes is that we use the singular form of the unit when the adjective comes before the noun and the plural form when the adjective comes after the noun.

For example:

"A six-foot-tall man walked down the street."

"A man who was six feet tall walked down the street."

One last thing: When you're using a phrase of this type as a stand-alone noun, it follows the same rules as when it's placed before a noun.

"The five-year-old cried when his mother refused to buy him candy."

edited 12th Apr '15 7:30:49 PM by MrL1193

Hi everybody. So I'm planning to continue to add more links to the music page for Ryu Ga Gotoku, and here are the lines I'm planning to use. I'll be linking the songs and do what I did when I actually do so, but for now I won't do so.

• Once again, the installation screen has its own song, titled [insert link here] It's also the final boss theme.
• Yakuza 5 has yet to be released, so there is no opening for the English version yet. However, enjoy the Japanese opening, [ilh]
• With the exception of Sawamura Haruka, the other four protagonists have their own battle theme, newcomer Shinada Tatsuo has [ilh], Akiyama uses [ilh], Saejima with [ilh], and Kiryu got [ilh]
• There are two particular soundtrack used in a fight when you play as Saejima and Kiryu respectively where Saejima breaks out of prison fighting all the inmates and where Kiryu fights one hundred members of the Tojo Clan, and they're titled [ilh] and [ilh]

That's all I've planned for now, and until I buy Yakuza 5—IF it comes out on Region 3 PSN—I'll add more. Also, I plan to make a folder for all of the karaoke tracks from 3 through Zero, but all of the soundtracks in Ishin are in Japanese, so I can only link some from youtube that have English names.

So... what did I do wrong?

A stranger is like the shadows.It is so common to the world everyone will just ignore them.