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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#52551: Feb 13th 2016 at 11:05:01 AM

  • Azumi: Bijo(u)maru/Bishamonten, named after the War God, is the leader of the "nobuseri," or masterless samurai-turned-bandits who have taken to preying on the populac. Occupying a post town, Bishamonten massacres whoever stands against him and makes the town his personal kingdom where women are regularly raped or kept as sex slaves for him and his men. One son of a former samurai, who attempts to kill Bishamonten for raping his sister, is easily disabled by Bishamonten, who then thanks the man for his sister's body before killing him and having his corpse defiled. Kidnapping high ranking officials in the province, Bishamonten uses them as hostages after slaughtering most of the province's military, and has said hostages dropped onto sharpened bamboo stakes later. When he captures Azumi's comrade, a transwoman named Kiku, upon discovering Kiku is biologically male, Bishamonten breaks his word to not harm Kiku by allowing one of his lieutenants, Seiryu, to rape and beat Kiku to death.
  • GARO: The Animation: Priest Mendoza is the mastermind behind the misfortunes befalling the kingdom of Valiante. A former Alchemist of the Makai Order, Mendoza was expelled from the Order for sacrificing humans to enable himself to control the monsters known as Horrors. After marrying, Mendoza's child was born with the same curse the Order had placed on him, and in response, Mendoza murdered both his wife and baby, swearing vengeance on the Makai Order in the process. Using the Horrors to murder numerous innocents, Mendoza blames the Horrors' appearance on the heroic Makai Knights, who are forbidden from taking human life, and, under this pretense, leads purges against the knights resulting in them being tortured, killed, or, in the cases of the Priestesses, raped, while Mendoza has one of the most powerful members burned at the stake in public view. When confronted by León Luis, Mendoza mentally forces him to relieve his own mother's burning at the stake, causing the boy to go on a rampage that decimates a nearby village. Having survived his near-death, Mendoza uses the tormented souls of hundreds of Makai Knights and Alchemists to summon an ancient Horror that, after consuming numerous innocents, Mendoza uses to give himself incredible power, at which point he proclaims himself the new god of humanity. Spiteful, cruel, egotistical and petty, Mendoza aimed at nothing less than utter domination and destruction to avenge his wounded pride.
    • Alicization Arc: Quinella is the ruler of the Underworld server and High Minister of the Axiom Church. In an effort to obtain immortality, she fused herself with the Cardinal System of Underworld. After her success, she began corrupting the souls of the Underworld nobility by separating the nations and spreading ignorance and fear among the populace. After making the populace believe that she was a goddess, she created the Axiom Church and named herself the Highest Minister. Quinella brainwashed every rebel fighting against her government and the Champions of the Four Empires Unity Tournament. She also performs fatal experiments on innocent people in order to learn the secrets of the human units. After realizing the invasion of the Dark Territory was inevitable, Quinella confiscated every line of defenses from Human Empire in order to make the people more dependent on the Axiom Church. When faced with possible defeat by the Dark Territory, Quinella transforms thousands of people into a sword for her to wield, her victims conscious in their new form. She claims this action was for the safety of these people, but it's clear she shows no remorse for trapping these people in such a state. A narcissistic sociopath and a selfish woman, Quinella only wants to control everything in her reach, killing and torturing anyone who dares to challenge her or "her" empire.
  • Batman: The Cult: Deacon Joseph Blackfire is a cult leader who believes humanity is a lost cause and deserves to be purged. Establishing his cult by kidnapping, torturing, and brainwashing homeless people into becoming his followers, Blackfire uses them to begin butchering criminals across Gotham, from entire crime gangs to petty pickpockets. Brainwashing Batman into assisting him, Blackfire assassinates numerous politicians across the city and kills dozens of police officers and soldiers before seizing control of Gotham City. Blackfire then allows crime and anarchy to run rampant throughout the streets, along with holding mass lynchings and executions regularly and displaying the bodies for all to see. Claiming to be immortal, Blackfire regularly bathes in a huge cauldron of human blood, having used the blood of hundreds of innocents for his baths. When confronted by Batman, Blackfire tries to force him to kill him in order to make himself a martyr and convince his followers to carry on his human-purging quest. Whether he is truly thousands of years old or just a petty con man is left ambiguous, but regardless, Deacon Joseph Blackfire was a narcissistic and misanthropic psychopath who stood out as one of the few villains Batman nearly killed due to his depravity.
  • Lab Rats: Victor Krane was the worst in a show filled with dangerous people. A diabolical power-hungry billionaire, he initially worked with Douglas Davenport to brainwash Adam, Bree and Chase, also upgrading Douglas’s technology to granting him vast powers. After Chase manged to resist, Krane immediately attempted to force his siblings to kill him. Krane, unable to cope with any rivals, then planned to murder Adam, Bree and Chase causing Douglas to betray him. Krane kidnapped and locked Leo and Tasha in a giant oven to try and force Donald to give him the Lab Rats. His attempts failing, Krane was revealed to have been secretly building himself a bionic army, growing around a hundred kids—mostly teenagers, but a few preteens—in his lab, brainwashing and depriving them of any individuality, and experimenting upon them to give them bionic abilities. Krane constantly experimented on S-1, leaving her traumatized when she was liberated. Convinced that his powers made him superior, he tried to conquer the earth and brainwash all humanity. After his seeming death it was discovered that, refusing to allow them to live any life that didn’t benefit him, he had installed a virus within all his former soldiers so that in the event he died they would also die. In “Space Colony”, it’s revealed that he survived and was rescued by Dr. Gao. Infiltrating Donald’s colony, they begin kidnapping and brainwashing the fifty colonists, along with Donald and Tasha, to turn them into a new army of mindless bionic soldiers; they also launched a missile that would wipe out all life on Earth so that Krane could rebuild everything in his own image. Once thwarted, Krane hijacked a space pod and attacked the Lab Rats and colonists' ship declaring "If I can't have my bionic army then I’m taking you out with them."
  • The Divine Move: Sal-Soo, known as "Killer," is a ruthless underground Go player who opens the film by punishing two men who attempt to cheat in a game with him by torturing one and forcing his brother, Tae-Seok, to play for the other's life, even having Tae-Seok force-fed Go stones. Once Tae-Seok's brother fails to win, Sal-Soo murders his victim and frames Tae-Seok for the crime. Sal-Soo takes as a captive a young girl who is a Go prodigy to cheat his way through his own games, and frequently shows enjoyment in brutalizing others. When Tae-Seok is out of jail, Sal-Soo ends up eventually kidnapping his friend Cheater and tortures Cheater brutally, even forcing him into a game and breaking his fingers at the wrong moves before playing Cheater's mentor Drinking Christ and eventually stabbing the old man to death. When one of his own men loses a game, Sal-Soo cuts his tongue out. In the final confrontation with Tae-Seok, Sal-Soo makes a "point" to him by stabbing his love interest before attempting to kill him, too.
  • Five Element Ninjas: Cheng Yun Mudou is the teacher of the titular Five Element Ninjas, and wishes to be the ruler of the martial arts world. Seeking to wipe out the competition, Cheng Yun Mudou collaborates with Chief Hong to defeat Yuan Zeng's class. Mudou kills Zeng's class before burning Zeng to death, with Tian Hao being the only survivor. Mudou then betrays Hong and murders him and his class to take their place as well. When Hao escapes from Mudou's clutches, he has his female spy, Shenji, threatened with execution before sentencing her to hard labor. He later battles Hao and his new martial arts students, and succeeds in killing Hao before his own death.
  • The Taking Of Tiger Mountain: The bandit lord Hawk rules his stronghold atop Tiger Mountain with an iron fist, ruling those that may defy him with the threat of extermination and death. Hawk punishes his own men who go against his wishes by using his pet hawk to tear out their eyes after stripping them down in the freezing cold; he also sends his men to wipe out a village when the Chinese army's soldiers are stationed there. Hawk forces one of his men to kill his own sworn brother, even telling him he "owes him" afterward, and keeps a woman he abducted from a raid as his forced "wife," only to use her as a Human Shield when things get tough.
  • Trancers: Martin Whistler is a man with Psychic Powers, which he uses to enslave the weak-willed and make them into the universally Ax-Crazy Trancers. After Jack Deth defeats him, he decides to use Time Travel in order to kill ancestors of the leaders of the society of his time, which would make the world retain its former post-apocalyptic status, all so he can Take Over the World. He successfully kills two of the ancestors. When he finds the final one, he threatens to massacre an entire hobo camp if they don't turn him over, then has his goons fire on the entire group. After Jack makes a false deal with Whistler to let him have the future for his Love Interest, Whistler drops her off the building anyways, intending for Jack to "witness his own death."
  • Would You Rather: Shep Lambrick is a seemingly-philanthropical corporate executive who invites people in financial trouble to his dinner parties so that he can make them perform unpleasant acts for his entertainment. Determined that Every Man Has His Price, Lambrick offers his guests money to play a game of "would you rather?" with every choice being a sadistic one. He has one man slowly beaten to death over a stress-induced outburst at Lambrick's son, makes another slice his eyeball open, causes a third man to die of a heart attack after having his hand blown off by an M-80 firecracker, and has a woman's head held underwater until she drowns. While Lambrick does make good on his promise to the eventual winner, it's made perfectly clear that she's been badly traumatized by his "game," something he is apathetic to. Though he claims to be sympathetic to the financial plights of others, it is painfully obvious that Lambrick is just a sadistic sociopath who takes advantage of the less-fortunate in order to amuse himself.
  • The Witches: The Grand High Witch is the ruler of all the witches, and the most malevolent of them all. Holding a hatred of all children, the Grand High Witch has spent decades teaching her followers ways to dispose of them. At her meeting with the witches of England, she wastes no time berating them for only getting rid of one child per week, and reveals a plan to wipe out every child in England. When one witch gives a shocked exclamation of how impossible that is, the Grand High Witch incinerates her, a practice she makes a habit of at every meeting she attends to cow the other witches into submission. The Grand High Witch's plan is to utilize a potion to transform every child in England into mice, and trick their parents and teachers into killing them. She demonstrates by transforming one hapless boy into a mouse, and soon afterwards abducts the main character and does the same to him. When he enters her room to steal the potion, he encounters several frogs, and realizes that they were children that the Grand High Witch had transformed. She later makes plans to feed the children to seagulls. Among a Child Hater race, the Grand High Witch surpasses the other witches in sheer cruelty, and everyone who meets her, from the young hero, to his retired witch-hunter grandmother, to her fellow witches, are absolutely terrified of her.
  • Mega Man Star Force: Gemini, from the first game, is a wicked FM-ian who despises all other forms of life, both organic and EM-based. A destruction-loving sadist and advisor to King Cepheus, he took advantage of the king’s paranoia by convincing him to destroy Planet AM, their neighboring world. When they discover Omega-Xis stole the key to activating Andromeda, their planet-destroying superweapon, to Earth, Gemini was among the FM-ians sent to reclaim it, secretly plotting to destroy Earth and take down Cepheus. He finds a compatible human in Patrick Sprigs, a boy abandoned as a baby who suffers from a violent split personality named "Rey." He takes advantage of this, manipulating Pat’s feelings and other half, convincing him to destroy humanity by merging with him to form Gemini Spark and use Andromeda themselves while using their powers to make humans attack each other. When one of his allies, Queen Ophiuca, is defeated by Mega Man and begs him for help, Gemini responds by killing her on the spot. He’s eventually defeated, but his manipulations of Pat and Geo convince the latter to abandon everyone in his life for a time. He’s later revived when Cepheus decides to use Andromeda, putting Gemini in charge of stopping Mega Man. He attempts to destroy the machinery needed to help Mega Man reach Cepheus, suggesting he’s fine getting himself killed to destroy the Earth. Upon his defeat, he asks Cepheus to destroy the planet to avenge him. Loyal only to himself and his love of destruction, Gemini is Star Force’s poster child for Aliens Are Bastards.
  • Shadow the Hedgehog: Black Doom is the leader of the Black Arms and a completely humorless Evilutionary Biologist. Having visited the Earth for thousands of years, he made contact with Gerald Robotnik 50 years prior to the series, agreeing to a deal where a creation using Black Doom’s cells, the future Shadow the Hedgehog, would deliver the Chaos Emeralds so that the Black Arms can use Chaos Control to arrive on Earth and bring prosperity to humanity. Gerald realized once Doom left that he was lied to, as Black Doom intended to enslave the human race and use them as a food source. During the events of the game, he preaches about the evils of humanity and how they don’t deserve to be free, claiming they would be better served as a food source for the Black Arms, all while showing he has no regrets killing his own men or throwing away his “son” when everything is finished. During the game, he sends his army to kill millions, manipulated Shadow by forcing him to relive Maria’s death, destroys an entire city—and most of his army—with the Eclipse Cannon, and spreads a gas that paralyzes Sonic and friends to make it easier for his offspring to eat them. Hypocritical, ruthless and uncaring to even his own, Black Doom is among the worst the world of Sonic the Hedgehog has to offer.
  • Sonic the Hedgehog (2006): Mephiles the Dark is the malignant conscience of Solaris taken physical form and the one responsible for arranging most of the events of the game. Accidentally created during the Solaris Project alongside Iblis, the raw physical strength of Solaris, Mephiles was sealed within a scepter that landed in the hands of Dr. Eggman. Upon breaking out, Mephiles orchestrated a gambit which involved inflicting pain and suffering on Princess Elise, causing her to cry, release the Flames of Disaster, and in doing so would reunite him with Iblis to become Solaris, allowing him to destroy everything in existence. To do this, Mephiles manipulates Silver into attempting to kill Sonic, and later cold-bloodedly kills Sonic himself—temporarily— to goad Elise into crying over him. Mephiles manipulates everyone he can for the purpose of his ultimate goal and takes a sadistic glee in watching people suffer; unlike the mindless Iblis, Mephiles is fully aware of the scale of his atrocities and does them for no other reason than to see the world decay around him. A being that craved destruction alone, Mephiles's actions heavily damaged the space-time continuum and brought a darkness to the franchise seldom seen prior.

edited 15th Feb '16 7:01:33 AM by ACW

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username2527 Since: Nov, 2013
#52552: Feb 13th 2016 at 11:20:00 AM

The problem with Krane's write-up is that he got such a long laundry list that I find it hard to condense it without leaving out important details to his actions.

Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Since: Dec, 2015 Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
#52553: Feb 13th 2016 at 11:31:24 AM

Before I forget, where do I propose this image for Frieza. I tried to propose it at the image pickin' morgue, but I couldn't.

Why so serious?
Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#52554: Feb 13th 2016 at 11:36:45 AM

[up][up][up] There's a few stickling things in Mephiles' writeup I'm noticing.

"Mephiles the Dark is the utterly insane malignant conscience of Solaris taken physical form and the one responsible for arranging most of the events of the game..."

Just "malignant" is fine. Also, I don't really think that "physical form" needs a pothole to Eldritch Abomination; he's the mind of one, sure, but he doesn't really fit that description until he actually becomes Solaris.

"...later cold-blooded temporarily kills Sonic himself..."

Wording here is awkward. "cold-bloodedly" would make it much better to read.

[down] Thank you.

edited 13th Feb '16 12:16:50 PM by Scraggle

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#52555: Feb 13th 2016 at 12:14:33 PM

I tweaked Mephiles's and added Mendoza.

edited 13th Feb '16 12:17:33 PM by ACW

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Godzillawolf Since: Jul, 2010
#52556: Feb 13th 2016 at 12:25:51 PM

Okay, I have one question involving Kai that to me is a big deciding factor:

Is stealing an imprisoning someone's soul as a living battery WORSE than killing or not?

Because let's look at this factor: a portion of Kai's victims were ALREADY in the afterlife and had already passed on, including Oogway himself.

This means Kai is effectively robbing people of their after life. And FULLY intended to finish what Shen started and finish off the Panda's in this way, for LESS of a reason than Shen had (Shen was basically trying to avert a prophecy directed at himself, Kai is just a power hungry beast).

We also know from Kai being five hundred years old and his own words Kai is immortal, meaning they would have been like that as long as Kai lived, with neither the ability to die and move on nor do anything for that matter, or in the case of those who he captured in the afterlife, having their final rest denied them to serve as a battery for a demon like Kai.

At least Shen's victims passed on to the after life, which this movie fully established exists as an actual place. Given Kai SPECIFICALLY said that he stole the Chi of EVERY Kung Fu Master in the Spirit World, that would include Master Rhino who Shen killed.

If Kai steals your chi and enslaves you to his will, there's no heaven, no hell, no other form of afterlife, no reincarnation, no anything. Just being his slave for as long as he's still around, which would likely be an eternity.

For me personally, I'd say Kai is [tup] because to me, his methods are WORSE than killing people because he doesn't just kill you, he takes away your afterlife.

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#52557: Feb 13th 2016 at 12:36:06 PM

What about Amon (Starcraft Legacy of the Void) and Quinella (Sword Art Online) they been voted unanimously [tup] by the forum but they have yet to have to have a write up or mention these couple of days, when will they get write up so they can get properly introduce to the CM system.

In case I haven't voted [tup] to both Amon and Quinella.

nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#52558: Feb 13th 2016 at 12:44:51 PM

[up]I already responded about Amon - I would prefer that someone else do an example writeup.

(Which reminds me, I still need to do an effortpost on Narud/Duran).

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#52559: Feb 13th 2016 at 12:56:55 PM

Hey, NJ, can you PM me his crimes or an effortpost link, and I'll be glad to do it?

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#52560: Feb 13th 2016 at 1:02:30 PM

If we don't create a subpage (I'm fine either way), or even if we do, should we move Burgess and Daun to Comics and Lit, respectively?
P.S. Lighty, you can take the Deadpool effortpost, but w/o spoilers: How is it?

edited 13th Feb '16 1:41:20 PM by ACW

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nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#52561: Feb 13th 2016 at 1:44:05 PM

[up][up]This was my effortpost for Amon. A fair amount of it can be pared down since it was meant to be intelligible to people who knew nothing about the setting.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#52562: Feb 13th 2016 at 1:50:08 PM

Okay, after FINALLY having read the effortpost (or at least skimmed) to get a clear picture, I think I'll vote [tup] for Amon.

  • As you said "it's a space opera RTS series, so planetary populations being destroyed and the like is fairly common among the villains...", but it seems he does more than just one. Seems like he's basically responsible for much of the conflict in the series.
  • As for him being a potential WIE: Seems like we can take Rohana's word that he isn't. Although, could it be possible that, even if he isn't a WIE, maybe he's deluded himself into thinking he is that he can't see what he's actually become?

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MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#52563: Feb 13th 2016 at 2:05:01 PM

Okay, I've managed to slim down the Victor Krane write up a bit, and made several changes as I was a bit unhappy with how the initial write up turned out, how this:

Lab Rats: Victor Krane was the evilest villain in a show filled with dangerous people. A power-hungry billionaire, he initially worked with Douglas to brainwash Adam, Bree and Chase. Krane also upgraded Douglas’s technology granting him vast powers. After Chase manged to resist, Krane immediately attempted to force his siblings to kill him. Krane then planned to murder Adam, Bree and Chase unable to cope with any rivals to his power existing, causing Douglas to betray him. Krane kidnapped and locked Leo and Tasha in a giant oven to try and force Donald to give him the Lab Rats. His attempts failing, Krane was revealed to have been secretly building himself a bionic army, growing around a hundred kids—mostly teenagers, but a few were preteens—in his lab and experimenting upon them to give them bionic abilities. He brainwashed and deprived them of any individuality. Its revealed Krane even tormented S-1, constantly experimenting on her, leaving her traumatized when liberated. Convinced his powers made him superior he tried to conquer the earth and brainwash all humanity. After his seeming death it was discovered he had installed a virus within all his former soldiers so that in the event he died they would all die to, refusing to allow them to live any life that didn’t benefit him. In “Space Colony”, it’s revealed he survived and was rescued by Dr. Gao. Infiltrating Donald’s colony, they begin kidnapping and brainwashing the fifty colonists, along with Donald and Tasha, to turn them into a new army of mindless bionic soldiers and launching a missile that would wipe out all life on earth so Krane could rebuild everything in his own image. Once thwarted, Krane hijacked a space pod and attacked the Lab Rats and colonists ship declaring "If I can't have my bionic army then I’m taking you out with them."

edited 13th Feb '16 2:44:32 PM by MGD107

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#52565: Feb 13th 2016 at 2:18:08 PM

Well 321 now.

Really I'm not sure what else I can cut.

chasemaddigan I'm Sad Frogerson. Since: Oct, 2011
I'm Sad Frogerson.
#52566: Feb 13th 2016 at 2:23:23 PM

I noticed a spelling error on the Mephiles write-up. It says "upon breaking own" when it should say "upon breaking out".

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Since: Dec, 2015 Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
#52568: Feb 13th 2016 at 2:33:30 PM

Speaking of typos in write-ups, I was surfing through Monster.X Men, and I noticed this in Apocalypse's entry.

"...and effecting killilng Stryfe by bodyjacking him."

That should be killing. Yeah, call me a Grammar Nazi, but that just doesn't look right in the entry.

Why so serious?
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#52569: Feb 13th 2016 at 2:50:20 PM

Okay I've now managed to get Krane down to 313 words, is that enough?

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#52570: Feb 13th 2016 at 2:54:00 PM

[up][up] That one's a mess. (G)enetecist should be geneticist, while technoorganic, metaplague, and likeminded should all be hyphenated. I requested the changes.
[up] Maybe. Please add it to YMMV.Lab Rats (with the potholes) and I'll look at it tomorrow (along with the Judge Cal effortpost).

edited 13th Feb '16 2:58:21 PM by ACW

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MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#52571: Feb 13th 2016 at 3:18:40 PM

Thank you, but I'm afraid I'm temporarily unable to make edits. Could someone else please add this write up:

Victor Krane was the worst in a show filled with dangerous people. A power-hungry billionaire, he initially worked with Douglas to brainwash Adam, Bree and Chase. Krane also upgraded Douglas’s technology granting him vast powers. After Chase manged to resist, Krane immediately attempted to force his siblings to kill him. Krane then planned to murder Adam, Bree and Chase unable to cope with any rivals to his power existing, causing Douglas to betray him. Krane kidnapped and locked Leo and Tasha in a giant oven to try and force Donald to give him the Lab Rats. His attempts failing, Krane was revealed to have been secretly building himself a bionic army, growing around a hundred kids—mostly teenagers, but a few were preteens—in his lab and experimenting upon them to give them bionic abilities. He brainwashed and deprived them of any individuality. Its revealed Krane even tormented S-1, constantly experimenting on her, leaving her traumatized when liberated. Convinced his powers made him superior he tried to conquer the earth and brainwash all humanity. After his seeming death it was discovered he had installed a virus within all his former soldiers so that in the event he died they would all die to, refusing to allow them to live any life that didn’t benefit him. In “Space Colony”, it’s revealed he survived and was rescued by Dr. Gao. Infiltrating Donald’s colony, they begin kidnapping and brainwashing the fifty colonists, along with Donald and Tasha, to turn them into a new army of mindless bionic soldiers and launching a missile that would wipe out all life on earth so Krane could rebuild everything in his own image. Once thwarted, Krane hijacked a space pod and attacked the Lab Rats and colonists ship declaring "If I can't have my bionic army then I’m taking you out with them."

edited 13th Feb '16 3:40:32 PM by MGD107

Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Since: Dec, 2015 Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
#52572: Feb 13th 2016 at 3:21:32 PM

[up]"Evilest villain" sounds somewhat awkward. Maybe "the worst in a show full of dangerous people" would look better.

Why so serious?
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#52573: Feb 13th 2016 at 3:43:53 PM

[up] Yeah your right, I implemented the change. Plus that brings it down to 312 words.

You couldn't add it to the Lab Rats YMMV page for me, could you?

Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Since: Dec, 2015 Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
#52574: Feb 13th 2016 at 3:47:14 PM

[up]I think ACW will do that.

Why so serious?
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#52575: Feb 13th 2016 at 3:49:55 PM

[up] Well he asked me to, and as I presently can't edit, I was hoping some one else would.


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