During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.
Specific issues include:
- Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
- A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
- Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
- Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
- Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.
It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.
Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:
Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.
IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.
When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. " to everyone I missed").
No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.
We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.
What is the Work
Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.
Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?
This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.
Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?
Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.
Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?
Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard
Final Verdict?
Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.
Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM
Looking good at Web Original there. That's a total swap of the page
32 Footsteps's proposal needs some namespacing, but otherwise it's fine.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanActually, the big question I have about what I did, above, was something that was driving me nuts while compiling it...
Just what is the division between Web Original and Fan Works? A few of the examples up there are crossovers (like Super Mario Bros Z) or filmed fanfic (like The Legend of Zelda: The Sage of Darkness). Should we be moving more of the examples to Monster.Fan Works? Should we just take both pages and lump them together under Monster.Web Original? Should works that are completely original only go into Monster.Web Original?
I honestly don't have a satisfactory answer; I'd like one before doing the swap.
edited 16th Jan '13 1:57:49 PM by 32_Footsteps
Reminder: Offscreen Villainy does not count towards Complete Monster.I am not 100% sure, but if it's a work that is derived from another akin to fanfiction, it goes on Fan Works.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanHmm, mentioned it before, but I voted to remove Mechakara from Web Original, on the basis he isn't played seriously by the story. Linkara does a whole review of a comic book while bound and helpless, at Mechakara's mercy, and he even makes some snide comments towards Mechakara.
Don't take life too seriously. It's only a temporary situation.He's played seriously in the non-review bits and in To Boldly Flee, so I'd say one single episode is not enough to discount him.
A couple crime show examples I'd like to discuss...
From Cold Case:
- George Marks. He's one of the show's very few recurring villains, and his MO is pure Nightmare Fuel, but an entire episode is devoted to his absolutely horrifying Freudian Excuse, and he gets Sympathy for the Devil after he dies.
- Moe Kitchener. I actually added him, but I've come to regard him, under the new guidelines, as basically a near-miss. There's not a decent bone in the guy's body, but he never actually kills anyone, and while we do see him act as an accessory to murder in a flashback, the Mind Screw twist of the episode is that the flashback is itself happening in a hallucination of another character, so we don't know for sure if his role in the crime really did play out like that.
- Lauren Williams. She's the episode's victim, is most likely mentally ill, and seems to show remorse when her "ghost" appears at the end (though whether this disqualifies her is pretty much down to individual opinion of how real you think the "ghosts" actually are).
From CSI:
- The gang from "Fannysmackin'". They're a group, though I suppose it could be kept if the entry was rewritten to just focus on the leader.
- The Collins family. Again, a group, could possibly be kept if rewritten to focus on the dad (the mom and brothers are just accessory to his crimes).
- Nate Haskell. Mentioned him before.
- Lou Gedda. He sounds like one of these from hearing other characters talk about him, but we never actually see him do anything beyond some routine murder-for-hire, which is hardly unusual in his line of work.
From Law And Order:
- Jenny. Haven't seen this episode, but the entry itself mentions a pretty nightmarish-sounding Freudian Excuse.
Also, I don't watch Bones, but there's a character named Gormogon mentioned who the entry says almost never actually appears. Does anyone know what, if any, onscreen villainy he has?
- Kendra. She didn't say a single word about the Necromorphs despite the fact that as a government agent she surely knew more about what was going on than Isaac or Hammond. Then she manipulated Isaac into doing most of the work and isolated Hammond so he couldn't communicate with Isaac. Then she killed Doctor Kyne and left Isaac to die onboard the Ishimura, and then tried to leave him again on Aegis VII after showing him the entire video of Nicole committing suicide just to prove to him that he was insane. Then there's Mercer, who experiments on splicing necromorph and human DNA together, and believes that nercomorphs are the next step in human evolution.
Mercer doesn't seem as heinous as Kendra.
This Lawless example seems fine, but I thought I'd bring it up just in case.
- Rakes is without redeeming qualities, and deals out brutal beatings and mutilations to get the bootleggers to submit. He is fully confirmed as this when he kills Cricket because he's mad about Jack calling him a "nance".
EDIT: The Moral Event Horizon entry says Cricket is a crippled boy.
Also, the Collector from Bonkers is listed with no context.
edited 16th Jan '13 8:15:51 PM by TVRulezAgain
"She didn't say a single word about the Necromorphs despite the fact that as a government agent she surely knew more about what was going on than Isaac or Hammond. Then she manipulated Isaac into doing most of the work and isolated Hammond so he couldn't communicate with Isaac."
This part makes me think this is probably one of those misogynistic examples, as nothing in at least those sentences sounds particularly heinous (the first sentence seems to be speculating about the character's motives). Also, I'd need context of why showing someone a video was a terrible act.
Edit- Sorry, misread the Justified example- I see the victim wasn't the person who insulted the killer. Would probably help to give some more context of who the victim was/the general situation.
edited 16th Jan '13 8:14:50 PM by Hodor
Edit, edit, edit, edit the wikiAssuming those descriptions are accurate, cut the ones you wanted to cut.
I could still use some feedback on my Norman Osborn rewrite. In the meantime, another entry that needs cleaning.
- The Red Skull, aka Johann Schmidt, arch-enemy of Captain America and former second-in-command to Adolf Hitler in the Marvel Universe. He's so evil that even fellow supervillains like Dr. Doom and Magneto despise him. Though given that Magneto's family were Jewish (and all but him died in the Holocaust) and Doom's family were Romany, it's not surprising that they would dislike the Skull.
- Just to point out: the Skull isn't a Nazi anymore. It's not that he's got anything against Nazis either. He just thinks he's superior to them. Yes, he's even more arrogant than a group of people so narcissistic they called themselves the "Master Race". And the scary thing is he's only become even MORE evil since renouncing the Nazi cause, not less. The guy didn't just go past the Moral Event Horizon — he IS the Moral Event Horizon. Even sadistic mind rapist Dr. Faustus is disgusted by him. In a cross-over with DC, he disgusted even the Joker.
- There's also the way he treated Mother Night, the only woman who actually loved him. He treated her like crap and usually just thought of her as another henchman. In a lot of ways, it's like the Joker and Harley Quinn relationship, but Skull is far more abusive. Red Skull once even started flirting with Viper right in front of her just to make her suffer (he slept with Viper, too). What Mother Night sees in him is a mystery, though she also considers Crossbones to be a close friend, so she isn't a good judge of character. Mother Night isn't a saint herself.
- However, another minion of the Red Skull, Arnim Zola, seems like a complete monster in his own right. He was a Swiss scientist who chose to work for the Nazis to get funds and "test subjects" for his genetics research. Now, that's pretty bad, but it went From Bad to Worse. He put his mind into a genetically altered body that allowed him to survive into modern times. So now he does things like make Hitler clones and kidnap orphans in order to turn said orphans into genetically altered monsters. Also, he revived the Red Skull after he died, by transferring his mind into the body of a Captain America clone, ensuring the Skull's evil would continue.
- It seems to run in the family, as Red Skull's daughter Sin is one as well. She's just as vicious as her father, although significantly more Ax-Crazy. Although she does wear her father's Nazi attire (and sports matching facial scars), she seems significantly less interested in the Nazi philosophy and more interested in just killing as many people as possible For the Evulz.
- Crossbones is another one; understandable, considering that he had to meet Sin's standards to be her boyfriend...which didn't stop him from torturing her to remove the brainwashing she was subjected to. He was recently put in the Thunderbolts. Not because anybody has delusions he deserves a chance to redeem himself, quite the opposite - he was added to the team because he is so irredeemable and disgusting that other members are more willing to cooperate, as trying something would put them on the same side as him. It got to the point where he killed a police officer and was booted off the team.
- Crossbones actually managed to start up a Real Life racism and sexism controversy when an issue of Spider-Man depicted him, a Neo-Nazi rapist, apparently killing the superheroine Sabra, a Jewish single mother, by shooting her In the Back while nonchalantly munching on a sandwich. The writer actually had to get on Twitter and confirm he'd just grazed her, things got so bad. Still an excellent window into the kind of guy he is, nevertheless.
- Yet Even Evil Has Standards as there was one individual that was too Axe-Crazy even for him: his one time partner and lover Viper, a.k.a. Madame Hydra. She is the former head of HYDRA, a Southeast Asian dictator, and an all-around mass-murdering terrorist mastermind. She is so evil that even other supervillains team up with heroes to take her down. Skull was the only one she would even work for, but after he saw all the damage she did with his resources, it was discovered even the Red Skull had his limits and he turned on her. Though it was less a case of morals than it was of efficiency: Viper was wasting the Red Skull's resources to cause pointless destruction. The Red Skull might enjoy petty sadism, but he's not about to bankroll someone else's petty sadism.
This is bad. It contains factual inaccuracies (the Skull goes back and forth on being a Nazi), and relies more on Even Evil Has Standards then actual atrocities to justifiy his placement. If Crossbones, Viper, etc, qualify they need their own entries. Here's a rewrite for the Skull, focussing solely on his crimes.
- Johann Schmidt, alias The Red Skull, archenemy of Captain America and Bastard Understudy to Adolf Hitler himself. Once a bitter, psychotic street kid, Schmidt began as a petty criminal with a violent streak. After having his romantic advances rejected by a Jewish girl named Esther (who had otherwise been nothing but nice to him), Schmidt flew into a rage and murdered her; in doing so he discovered an appreciation for murder, and set to find ways to do it again. Convincing his friend Dieter to try and assassinate Hitler, Schmidt stepped in and saved Der Fuhrer's life, convincing the Nazi dictator to take him in as his protege in the process, swiftly going From Nobody to Nightmare. Donning a Skull-shaped mask, Schmidt took on the role of Hitler's spymaster, responsible for running terrorist campaigns, infiltration, and sabotage across Europe. He also operated at home, working to do away with anyone who Hitler depended on more than the Skull himself, furthering his goal of one day taking Hitler's place. Tasked by Hitler with creating five superweapons with which to destroy the world in the event of a Nazi defeat, the Skull was interrupted by Captain America and trapped in suspended animation, though not before setting in motion events that would result in the apparent death of both Cap and his partner, Bucky. Awakened in the modern era, the Skull resumed his old ways. He made several attempts at gaining World Domination through the use of the Cosmic Cube (killing thousands of people every time), attempted to transplant Adolf Hitler's brain into Captain America's body, and fought the Kingpin for control of the New York drug trade. He has made repeated attempts to bodyjack Captain America, among others, manipulated the Scarlet Witch as part of a plan to exterminate the world's mutant population, and has been the mover and shaker behind countless Neo-Nazi movements, fascist governments, and terrorist cells, most notably Hydra and AIM. In a Bad Future he became God-Emperor and spent his time triggering natural disasters, then showing up to inform people that he would not be saving them. And this is all without getting into his treatment of those closest to him. When the Skull's daughter, Sin, was born, he planned to kill her for the crime of being a girl. When he was in a relationship with supervillainess Mother Night, he let out his internal Domestic Abuser, brutalising her constantly. Firmly convinced that everyone needs somebody to bully and torment, the Skull is a firm proponent of Dystopia Justifies the Means, and has committed every crime from the petty (eating an apple in front of starving Africans) to the horrendously grandiose (mass murder, ethnic cleansing, and full-on genocide). With an end goal of reducing society to its most primitive, dog-eat-dog levels, Schmidt is the worst that Marvel has to offer, and his fellow supervillains either give him a wide berth, or despise him completely.
I know it's long, but I had trouble figuring out which crimes I should mention, and which ones I should not. Thoughts?
I also think that we likely have to cut Crossbones and Sin as they only ever appear as adjuncts to the Skull's will. Arnim Zola and Viper have had independent careers so I could see keeping them.
EDIT: On second thought, Viper/Madame Hydra needs to go. She has a history of actually caring about the Silver Samurai, among others, and seems to have had real feelings for (of course) Wolverine at one point. The woman is completely Axe-Crazy, but I don't think she's this trope.
edited 17th Jan '13 12:31:40 PM by AmbarSonofDeshar
Actually, Sin manages to become the second Skull, while Crossbones....well, he's an unrepentant monster when left to his own devices.
and Hodor, as for Kendra: Kendra shows the hero, Isaac, a video she had previously edited of his girlfriend committing suicide, and she's quite gleeful about it.
Trying to think how to phrase this- what would the video have showed if it wasn't edited (like did this Kendra kill the hero's girlfriend? Did aliens do it or something?)? I also gotta comment that generally, its a sign of a bad example when it focuses on the villain doing something "gleefully".
Edit, edit, edit, edit the wikiI know about Sin's evolution into the second Skull, but even then, I've got to say having The Red Skull for a father is a pretty big Freudian Excuse in and of itself. As for Crossbones, his rather intense loyalty to the Skull makes me wonder, since he seems to be loyal to the man himself, rather then to say, the Nazi ideology (which I would not qualify as a good trait).
Sorry, my mistake. Kendra edited it to cut out the nasty part to manipulate Isaac and later reveals the final bit just to twist the knife and prove he's insane.
Crossbones...I'm unclear if that loyalty is a good trait...he seems to worship Schmidtt, but he seems to channel this into being worse and worse.
edited 16th Jan '13 8:41:48 PM by Lightysnake
How does showing/editing the video relate to proving the character is insane?
Edit, edit, edit, edit the wikiIsaac had been seeing Nicole (the woman in the video) throughout the game. Even though she was dead at her own hand before he even arrived, which Kendra concealed to better manipulate him.
I'm not sure I'd list this as misogyny,given Kendra's rather impressive list of crimes for a normal human in the Dead Space 'verse
Still not completely following how that works, but oh well.
Well, this part "She didn't say a single word about the Necromorphs despite the fact that as a government agent she surely knew more about what was going on than Isaac or Hammond. Then she manipulated Isaac into doing most of the work and isolated Hammond so he couldn't communicate with Isaac."- sounds like one of those "she's a huge bitch" examples absent some more context
Also, the first sentence speculates on her motives (did she actually know more? If not, the example shouldn't be assuming she did, and even if she did, why is that bad?)
Edit- There might be some chicken-egg here in that female villains tend to be written as manipulative, but it does seem like a lot of the "misogynistic" examples place a lot of emphasis on how the female character was mean (see above) and manipulative toward the male character(s), and typically, this example places a lot of emphasis on those things as proof of Complete Monsterdom.
edited 16th Jan '13 8:51:09 PM by Hodor
Edit, edit, edit, edit the wiki@7015
I think that under the circumstances, it is a good trait, as it differentiates Crossbones from the Skull himself, who has no loyalty to anybody. Crossbones cares about somebody, even if the somebody in question is a CM. To me, that makes him better then the Skull, and since the two of them usually appear together, and are involved in the same sorts of activities, that makes him unworthy of this list.
I'm not so sure it's misogyny per se, as much as it is Protagonist-Centred Morality, with people having a bad gut reaction to someone who so thoroughly manipulates and leads on a main character. They take it personally, and then to demonstrate their hatred, try to add the character here.
edited 16th Jan '13 9:04:48 PM by AmbarSonofDeshar
To speak on the Kendra example, I'd sum it up as being the latest in a string of misogynistic examples where female villians are being held to a lesser standard of heniousness. As someone versed in Dead Space, let me debunk her inclusion thoroughly.
First off, she doesn't really do anything beyond withholding the truth from you and possibly keeping Isaac and Hammond from talking with each other (Hammond was pretty fucked up about halfway through the game from toxic gas, so he may have just found a hole to hide in until he could breath again). She may have manipulated a doctor into helping her get the shuttle with the marker, but then again he was already insane from the Marker's influence. Granted, she did shoot him, but that's about it.
As for hiding the second half of the message from Nicole, that would better be chalked up to her employers rather than her, since she's just one woman and would lack the ability to intercept messages by herself, what with being a field agent.
And despite what Lightysnake says, her list of crimes is actually pathetic when compared to other humans in the Dead Space Universe. The founders of the Church of Unitology took Ultman's work and manipulated it so they could create a scientology-rip off and make lots of money whilst using his research to build more fake markers (alien devices that reanimate dead tissue into necromorphs. Think space zombies, but worse), and then threw him into a cage with a huge necromorph armed only with a spoon, whilst telling him that his girlfriend was dead and that they were going to use his name to create an organisation to further research into the things he tried to destroy. That's pretty damn sadistic.
Moving along, we have Mercer, who built up a modest body count in the first game to try and make more powerful necromorphs, but by that point he's quite insane from the Marker's influence so he lacks Moral Agency, we have the nameless organisation which, through one member of another:
- Attempted to kidnap a woman and her unborn child to experiment on her immunity to the Marker's worst effects.
- Lobotomised a woman who knew the truth about the Ishimurra incident (aka the first game) whilst she was conciouss, then framed her for said incident (these guys seem to enjoy twisting people's legacies to be the exact opposite of what they wanted)
- Experimented with Marker technology on a very heavily populated space station, then when the predictiable necromorph outbreak happened had standing orders to shoot down all civillian escape pods regardless of wether or not there were any necromorphs onboard (an order which the human antagonist of the game thought was stupid and blatantly defied).
- Kept a ship of marines on standby in the first game to kill any survivors of the Ishimurra (besides Kendra).
So compared to that, Kendra's not that bad. Hell, the only bad thing she did was murder one doctor and try to steal the marker instead of taking it back to it's pedistal (which would instantly cause all Necromorphs to cease functioning). The rest of her manipulations with Isaac are more or less in line what any sane person would do (stop the ship they're in from crashing, keep a stable amount of oxygen on hand, attempt to summon the ship full of marines then warn them of the necromorph hiding in that escape pod).
Does anyone from The Princess Bride qualify? Personally, I think the Count may... uh... count.
Why should he count?
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanThe whole "Making a machine that tests the human threshold for pain For Science!" thing, and killing Domingo Montoya simply because he didn't like the sword that took MONTHS for Domingo to make.
Both he and Film!Humperdinck are listed on the YMMV page.
The count is cited for Villainous Friendship in the movieverse page. So he doesn't qualify.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanFootsteps, calling you "overly strict" was not meant to be offensive. It is a simple fact. You yourself admitted it. Now, I am going to tell you something; for me it is kind of annoying because while this trope is in fact supposed to be very strict, you go over the edge with it.
edited 17th Jan '13 8:02:42 AM by Krystoff
I'm somewhat giddy that I'm described as "overly strict" regarding this trope. Mind you, the context of Krystoff's comment makes it sound like he thinks less of me because of it; I'm instead quite pleased that someone would call me that. It's the first time that I've even considered breaking out my Wiki Cleaner badge.
Also, if I'm allowed to indulge in overly strict behavior, using my alias as a possessive should involve an apostrophe, and it's improper to use a hyphen after an adverb that's modifying an adjective.
Anyhow, an update on the proposed redo of Monster.Web Original, correcting in a couple spots. This also includes the proposal to move two items that were on said page to Monster.Fan Works (as listed below):
Also, entries that should be moved to Monster.Fan Works:
This has admittedly been a while; hoping to finish this off ASAP.
EDIT: Correcting some formatting issues.
edited 16th Jan '13 2:02:54 PM by 32_Footsteps
Reminder: Offscreen Villainy does not count towards Complete Monster.