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Madrugada MOD Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#76: Mar 14th 2017 at 6:12:13 PM

OK, this is a mod post:

Provide evidence that the p age is fundamentally broken ( not just that there are examples you don't agree with, but that it's broken. Wick check showing widespread misuse, evidence of repeated or ongoing edit wars, Bad examples. That sort of thing.

Simply repeating assertions that it needs to be fixed is not enough. You have 48 hours. If such has not been provided for the rest of us to see, the thread will be locked. If you do provide it, discussion may continue.

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shoboni Since: Oct, 2010
#77: Mar 14th 2017 at 6:45:10 PM

THANK YOU.

It was getting old having someone keep the thread going by asserting repeatedly there was a problem without proof so I'm glad this is clocked for a deadline now.

Memers Since: Aug, 2013
#78: Mar 15th 2017 at 12:00:14 AM

I personally don't see anything wrong but a minor rewrite to better clarify the trope couldn't hurt and I don't think we would need a crowner or anything to do that, just if someone has the time sandbox it and let's see.

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#79: Mar 15th 2017 at 1:12:04 AM

Meners, that still needs evidence that it's broken.

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#80: Mar 16th 2017 at 2:02:46 PM

Heh. I guess You Have 48 Hours is a trope.

Didn't have time to really dive into this so just getting some basic stuff out there before the deadline (which I am kind of annoyed by since it came up without a PM to me or even just a Deadlock Clock... Though that is on me for not keeping better track of my topic). So the problems with the trope are kind of in aggregate... there's a lot of little things that are worrisome to me.

  • Complaining:
    • Okay, in the description alone you've got a not-so-subtle implication that Oscar Bait is bad and referring to making an Oscar Bait movie as "Oscarbation" (a term I've never heard elsewhere). In fact, the description outright says an Oscar Bait-y movie is bad ("And they don’t even always win Oscars, perhaps because the Academy can actually tell the difference between a good, honest movie and an Oscar Bait attempt, and partly because sometimes they respect the general public’s opinion of a movie and will try to reflect that"). Examples tend to reflect that.
  • Audience Reaction: Something I noticed in the wicks that I didnt expect
    • Works may use this to sneak Award Snub into a work page.
    • Fandom Rivalry: They may also use it to take potshots at another work. This isn't technically a Flame War since its generally one-sided (and most of the affected pages don't see much traffic, anyway). Still bad.
  • Speculation: As-written, the page is requiring speculation on tropers' parts.
    • From the description: "As such, studios and producers try to engineer a film so that it can win an Oscar rather than be good in its own right." This is directly contrary to assertions that this is about "certain recurring Oscar Bait-y elements."
    • From the examples header: "Films (or otherwise) that come across as particularly obvious in their ambitions:"
  • Equality: The page is highly irregular for many reasons:
    • Much of the "definition" comes after the description, in a folder. That's just something I've never seen elsewhere.
  • Wicks: Just listing what they are. Which is all over the place.

edited 16th Mar '17 2:40:19 PM by Larkmarn

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shoboni Since: Oct, 2010
#81: Mar 16th 2017 at 3:03:51 PM

None of the spoof examples are incorrect since we include a folder on the trope page for parodies of award bait.

I also don't see any issues with your list of wicks aside from the couple cases of misuse like the one getting mixed up with Award-Bait Song

I also don't see that much that can't be fixed by cutting the misuse on some pages wicked to it.

Also, once again: snark/criticism does not equal complaining.

edited 16th Mar '17 4:23:27 PM by shoboni

pokedude10 Since: Oct, 2010
#82: Mar 16th 2017 at 4:39:08 PM

[up][up] Thank you. Ok, this might be a starting point. The wick check might be light (as I remember, guideline of sqrt(wicks) or 50, whichever is greater), but it's a place to start.

You pointed out four kinds of misuse: Treated as YMMV, used to discuss Award Snub, being a spoof, and complaining. I didn't include mistaking for Award-Bait Song because that's just poor troping, not a sign of misuse.

  • Treated as Ymmv. Unless it's listed as a main entry on the Ymmv page, that's does not mean it's being misused as Ymmv. However, the other examples like "people consider x to be Oscar Bait" might be misuse.
  • Used to discuss Award Snub. This would only be misuse if the main entry for Oscar Bait is a ZCE.
  • Being a spoof. That is not misuse. Parodied Trope is a valid way to Play with a trope.
  • "Complaining"/being Derisive. Snark does not equal complaining. Talking about reaching for an oscar is not complaining.

Description:

  • Yes, the description does have a negative implication right now. It is not inherently complaining, but it does have a negative tinge. I don't like "Oscarbation" either, but a quick google search does show other sources that use it. So it exists outside the wiki. While I wouldn't mind doing a polish, it does need some more proof that this is leading to A LOT of complaining and negative examples.

Other points:

  • I agree, the page format is wonky. I don't know what to do about the tactics folders, I feel like a lot of them are redundant to the description. However, they also expand on the concept by painting a picture how it happens that isn't necessary in the main description.
  • I'm not seeing how it requires speculation on the tropers part? Most tropes don't require clear Wordof God to exist.

This is a good start, but given the age, inbounds, and wicks, it needs a more in-depth wick check for major action (I'll leave confirming the appropriate level of evidence to the Mods). I agree that some misuse already exists, but they don't appear to show the trope is broken.

edited 16th Mar '17 4:41:54 PM by pokedude10

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#83: Mar 16th 2017 at 5:19:59 PM

Ok, given that there's been a rudimentary wick check I won't lock this. However, @Larkmarn, given that this has 500 or so wicks, we really do need a wick check of at least 50. And has been pointed out, parody is not misuse. How long will you need to do a proper one? Think carefully, because you're setting your own deadline (unless you say something ridiculously long. Then I'll cut it back.)

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#84: Mar 16th 2017 at 5:32:02 PM

Sorry if that was unclear, yes, the spoof examples are a good thing. That was my original intention back in my first post so it didn't occur to me to explain further here, but I can't expect, you guys to follow my... Admittedly random train of thought.

You keep pointing out that criticism isn't complaining, which is true... But there isn't criticism there. It's mostly complaining. Mod willing, I'll do a more thorough wick check later, but discarding all complaining as "criticism" is nonsensical.

edited 16th Mar '17 5:34:07 PM by Larkmarn

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#85: Mar 16th 2017 at 7:27:55 PM

I don't think all complaining is just criticism. Criticism, positive or negative implication, has a point. Complaining has no point beyond "x is bad" or "I don't like it."

I didn't mean to say count anything that sounds like complaining as criticism, just to take a close eye at something that seems negative. I think we just didn't want everything that has a negative implication to be counted as complaining. I really didn't expand on that, sorry.

I won't second guess your wick-check, I just wanted to see some nuance between snark, complaining, and criticism.

edited 16th Mar '17 7:34:10 PM by pokedude10

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#86: Mar 16th 2017 at 8:44:52 PM

Reasonable. I suppose I put it like this: if there's a genuine point or it seems like it's trying to be constructive, that's one thing. If it comes off as whining... Well, I'm not going to give that the benefit of the doubt.

But you're right, there is nuance.

edited 16th Mar '17 8:45:22 PM by Larkmarn

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shoboni Since: Oct, 2010
#87: Mar 16th 2017 at 9:19:34 PM

Constructive criticism doesn't have to hold your hand, it can merely point out potential problems like handling sensitive subject matter poorly.

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#88: Mar 17th 2017 at 5:49:06 AM

So then if saying "this kind of work is inherently worse" is criticism and not complaining, what ''is'' complaining?

Anyhoo, give me a week. I'll get a better look into this, thanks for your time.

edited 17th Mar '17 6:00:54 AM by Larkmarn

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#89: Mar 17th 2017 at 6:13:19 AM

"This kind of work is inherently worse" could be criticism, if it's part of a larger statement. As a stand-alone statement, it's complaining.

  • Complaining: "I don't like this.", "That sucks." "What a waste of time", "I want my two hours back." There's nothing there except the dislike.

  • Criticism: "The plot was confusing." "I didn't care about the characters." "The dialogue was really dumb." are all criticism on a very basic level. There's something more than just "Blergh," there's a "why".

edited 17th Mar '17 6:13:55 AM by Madrugada

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#90: Mar 23rd 2017 at 8:42:36 AM

So, for reasons beyond my comprehension TVT keeps giving my computer a BSOD. Given that, there is no way I can do a wick check. So if this gets closed down, I'll keep it in mind and use it as a springboard for a later TRS topic.

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shoboni Since: Oct, 2010
#91: Mar 25th 2017 at 4:35:50 PM

Are we about ready to call this one as no action?

It's been 48 hours since the last post and things had slowed to a crawl even before that

edited 25th Mar '17 4:36:29 PM by shoboni

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#92: Mar 25th 2017 at 4:42:13 PM

I'll do a wick check now in order to distract myself for an hour from my current existential crisis.

Based on:

WRONG
Complaining
Audience Reaction
Speculation
FINE
Parody

brb

edited 25th Mar '17 4:42:49 PM by WaterBlap

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shoboni Since: Oct, 2010
#93: Mar 25th 2017 at 5:11:52 PM

Complaining is iffy because there's been a lot of "all criticism is complaining" happening in this discussion thus far." S

Calling things speculation is also a loaded one that borders on calling for Word of God only.

So that one bears discussing.

edited 25th Mar '17 5:12:45 PM by shoboni

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#94: Mar 25th 2017 at 5:37:43 PM

Presentation and tone is important to distinguish the two, and when I was looking over wicks for a (abandoned) wick check I noticed an underlying layer of venom in some example writeups.

Also, I don't think a normal trope is an appropriate outlet to provide criticism; that's for reviews and YMMV.

edited 25th Mar '17 5:39:18 PM by Karxrida

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#95: Mar 25th 2017 at 5:48:02 PM

"Speculation" for me included "This should have won," "This big time," and when the example gives the sales of the work. For example, "it didn't hit American theatres until December, and it bombed there," and then the example says "December is a very tough time in America for any film that isn't either Christmasy, a planned late-year blockbuster, or Oscar Bait." How does this have to do with the applicability of the trope from the content of the trope? It is (most likely) trivia, and Not A Trope.

"Complaining" for me included examples like "the backlash became all but impossible to ignore when The Dark Knight failed to even get a nomination for Best Picture at the 81st Academy Awards." This is not criticism of the work, but of the Academy Awards — ergo, complaining.

Added percentages for "good" examples because of the high proportion of parody examples.

  • Good or Good-ish: 43.1% (22/51)
    • Good / link: 2
    • Good: 20 (39.2%)
      • Parody: 11 (55% of good examples)
      • In-Universe: 4 (20% of good examples)
      • In the description / compare / contrast: 3 (15% of good examples)
      • Actual Example: 2 (10% of good examples)
  • Misue Issues 50.9% (26/51)
  • Neutral-ish 5.9% (3/51)
    • ZCE: 2
    • n/a: 1

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    Wicks and Validity 
  1. Aamir Khan : ? Misuse
  2. Altered States : Misuse
  3. Beauty And The Beast : Misuse (Award Snug Song)
  4. Connect the Deaths : Misuse
  5. David Fincher : Speculation
  6. Death by Newbery Medal : good
  7. Dreamgirls : ZCE
  8. Dump Months : Speculation / good
  9. El Crimen del Padre Amaro : Speculation
  10. Executive Meddling : seems complainy
  11. Film 0 To L : Misuse
  12. For Keeps : Complaining
  13. Genre Turning Point : Complaining
  14. Hot for Preacher : good
  15. i am sam : Complaining
  16. Kissing Discretion Shot : good
  17. Married... with Children : good
  18. Meryl Streep : misuse
  19. Million Dollar Baby : Fandom Rivalry
  20. Never Learned to Read : good
  21. 1900 : Award Snub
  22. One Degree of Separation : Complaining
  23. Oscar Bait : n/a
  24. Pigeonholed Director : good
  25. Please Wake Up : good
  26. Randy Newman : ZCE
  27. Ratchet: Deadlocked : good
  28. Rolling Vengeance : Speculation / good
  29. Romancing the Stone : Complaining (about a song)
  30. Short Run in Peru : Speculation
  31. Sullivan's Travels : good
  32. Summer Blockbuster : good
  33. The Blind Side : complaining
  34. The Day the Clown Cried : Complaining / ZCE / Speculation
  35. The Mask : good'
  36. The Player : good'
  37. There Will Be Blood : ZCE
  38. The Soloist : good'
  39. 30 Rock : good'
  40. Toy Story 3 : Speculation
  41. [Trope Name] : good' / link as example?
  42. Tropes I to Z : good' / link as example?
  43. Tropes K to O : good'
  44. Tropic Thunder : good
  45. Vertigo : Award Snub
  46. Very Special Episode : good'
  47. Wayne's World : good'
  48. Western Animation : good'
  49. Western Animation : Speculation
  50. White Man's Burden : good
  51. Young At Heart : Speculation

    Quotations 
  1. Creator/Aamir Khan : ? Misuse : Most of his recent movies can be considered "Filmfare Bait" by most people.
  2. Trivia/Altered States : Misuse : Columbia, who had started the film, washed their hands of it and Warner Brothers picked it up. The producer was nonetheless upset that they decided to shove it into the Christmas season rush rather than wait until the spring when he there would be less competition for that kind of film.
  3. Disney/Beauty And The Beast : Misuse (Award Snug Song) : "Title Drop: For animated movies it's not as important, but for the magnificent Oscar Bait song, they use the title drop, and if you haven't figured out what the song is about yet, then think about it."
  4. Connect The Deaths : Misuse : "And the dates of the month on which the murders occur are, as the hero realizes when he sees a passing PRIME MEATS truck, prime numbers. As there are 12 that are less than or equal to 31, and 11 of them have been used on the eleven previous months, he's able to tell, which building, which floor, and which day the murder will occur. "
  5. Creator/David Fincher : Speculation : "The Curious Case of Benjamin Button was widely accused of this, a sentimental, PG-13 fantasy/drama film with heavy similarities to (and the same screenwriter as) Forrest Gump, standing in stark contrast to the dark, edgy and subversive hard-R films that Fincher was known for. For better or worse, it worked: Benjamin Button received more Oscar nominations than all of Fincher's previous films combined."
  6. Death By Newbery Medal : good : Two in description; One parody example
  7. Theatre/Dreamgirls : ZCE :
  8. Dump Months : Speculation / good : Speculation in the description. Talking about what times of the year Oscar Bait films do what.
  9. Film/El Crimen Del Padre Amaro : Speculation : "Famously, this film suffered an attempt of boycott by the Mexican Catholic Church before it was even released, which actually increased the interest of the people to see it, ending up in transforming it into a massive blockbuster and earning it an Academy Award nomination. "
  10. Quotes/Executive Meddling : seems complainy : "Imagine the compromises are somebody taking away the monster, and bringing it back, and now it has AIDS."
  11. Troubled Production/Film 0 To L : Misuse: : Same as Trivia.Altered States (literally it's that film's entry)
  12. Film/For Keeps : Complaining : "The movie is seen by many as a failed attempt by Ringwald to win more critical respect as an actress. It shows."
  13. Genre Turning Point : Complaining : "The Dark Knight is the reason that the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences now nominates as many as ten movies for the coveted Best Picture Oscar rather than the previously standard five. For that reason, it's often cited as an important contributor to the decline (though not outright death) of Oscar Bait in The New '10s. ... the backlash became all but impossible to ignore when The Dark Knight failed to even get a nomination for Best Picture at the 81st Academy Awards, despite being one of the most critically acclaimed films of 2008."
  14. Hot For Preacher : good : Parody
  15. Film/I Am Sam : Complaining : "As pointed out in Tropic Thunder, Sean Penn tried just a little too hard with this one, not to mention the creative staff behind the movie."
  16. Kissing Discretion Shot : good : Parody
  17. Series/Married With Children : good : Parody that isn't written like a parody
  18. Creator/Meryl Streep : misuse : "Now with nineteen Oscar nominations and three wins to her credit, she has tackled virtually every genre in Hollywood, including…"
  19. Trivia/Million Dollar Baby : Fandom Rivalry : "With regards to theme: Cinderella Man, a more conventional Oscar Bait boxing flick that came out in the same year, but ran out of buzz long before the awards season rolled round."
  20. Never Learned To Read : good : parody
  21. YMMV/Novecento : Award Snub : literally an Award Snub entry
  22. One Degree Of Separation : Complaining : "In Babel, connections are pretty one-way, and flimsy, but they're there, dammit, and it's meaningful. Oscar, please."
  23. Oscar Bait : n/a : I randomly collected samples. I'll do one more for this wick check
  24. Pigeonholed Director : good : In the description
  25. Please Wake Up : good : parody
  26. Music/Randy Newman : ZCE : "Played straight and subverted."
  27. Video Game/Ratchet Deadlocked : good : parody
  28. Film/Rolling Vengeance : Speculation / good : "When you make a low-budget movie where a truck driver uses a monster truck to hunt down evil rednecks, it's obvious you're not going for Oscar Bait."
  29. Film/Romancing The Stone : Complaining (about a song) : This entry was under "Real Song Theme Tune"
  30. Short Run In Peru : Speculation : "it didn't hit American theatres until December, and it bombed there … December is a very tough time in America for any film that isn't either Christmasy, a planned late-year blockbuster, or Oscar Bait"
  31. Film/Sullivans Travels : good : In-Universe
  32. Summer Blockbuster : good : Compare / Contrast
  33. Literature/The Blind Side : complaining : "Became this, though the film's producers hadn't dared initially to think that high. Indeed, it was quite a surprise that the film became the hit it became."
  34. Film/The Day The Clown Cried : Complaining / ZCE / Speculation : "Why Lewis made the film."
  35. Film/The Mask : good' : parody
  36. Literature/The Player : good' : In-Universe
  37. Film/There Will Be Blood : ZCE :
  38. Film/The Soloist : good' : An actual example. Note that the subbullet needs to be axed for complaining that it didn't get nominated.
  39. Series/Thirty Rock : good' : In-Universe
  40. Western Animation/Toy Story 3 : Speculation : This entry could be Actor Allusion or Oscar Bait.
  41. Trope Name : good' / link as example? : "A Trailer for Every Academy Award Winning Movie Ever, a Cracked video based on Oscar Bait movies where every single line is this."
  42. Cracked/Tropes I To Z : good' / link as example? : Literally the same as [Trope Name]
  43. American Dad/Tropes K To O : good' : parody
  44. Film/Tropic Thunder : good : In-Universe and Parody
  45. YMMV/Vertigo : Award Snub :
  46. Very Special Episode : good' : In description
  47. YMMV/Waynes World : good' : Under Tear Jerker: "The Oscar Bait I Never Learned To Read scene in the original movie, being fully aware of what it was."
  48. Very Special Episode/Western Animation : good' : parody
  49. Downer Ending/Western Animation : Speculation : "And of course, that's the episode that finally won the show a damn Emmy." This doesn't make it bait?
  50. White Mans Burden : good : Good in description. It's also an example of The Soloist.
  51. Young At Heart : Speculation : "Big time. For various reasons it couldn't win the Oscar or Emmy, but it did win its main target (the Palm D'or) and a slew of other prizes at film festivals, only occasionally losing to Man on Wire."

edited 25th Mar '17 6:23:30 PM by WaterBlap

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pokedude10 Since: Oct, 2010
#96: Mar 25th 2017 at 8:56:52 PM

Water Blap, thank you for doing the wick check. While I think your net for "complaining / speculation" was a bit wide, overall, I think it shows clear issues.

It looks like a good chunk of the wicks are using Oscar Bait to describe either the award show, how a movie didn't win, the history of the director, release date, etc. People also seem to be potholing it to refer to the Oscars overall. Our original point that Oscar Bait focuses on the work (topic, subject, tone, etc), does not seem to hold up in usage.

I'm going to stew on this tonight, it's been a long day. There are definitely some issues now that there's concrete evidence. If anyone wants to take a look or make some edits, I'll leave a pointer to Sandbox.Oscar Bait where I was drafting to clarify the core description. Personally, I don't think the inherent trope is negative, complaining, or Ymmv, but given the misuse I'm not sure what to do with it right now.

edited 25th Mar '17 8:58:56 PM by pokedude10

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#97: Mar 25th 2017 at 9:11:12 PM

I cast a wide net for that because it seemed that the discussion of what was complaining and what was speculation was (unintentionally) stalling the wick check. I included the quotations in part because I know that the people who were taking part of that discussion would want to see what I thought was "complaining" and what was "speculation."

My criteria for "good" was any of the following:

  • The content of the example was a spoof or parody.
    • e.g. The work (or episode as in the Married... with Children example) is a spoof or a gag on this concept ("For your Emmy consideration.")
    • e.g. The work features a spoof or gag on this concept, even though it isn't the entirety of the work (Tropic Thunder).
  • The example was an In-Universe example.
  • The wick came from a pothole in the trope's description, or the "Compare and contrast" section of the trope.
  • The wick came from an actual example where all three of the following apply:
  1. The work is the focus of the example.
  2. The work is described with context that explains the applicability of the trope, and the trope is not shoehorned or justified.
  3. Any criticism concerning the applicability of this trope directly explains something about the work. That is, the example is internally confined and does not make a statement about the Academy or other outside influences on the work as though this were a Trivia article.

I would like to clarify that the only two examples that were "Actual Examples" were for The Soloist.

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shoboni Since: Oct, 2010
#98: Mar 25th 2017 at 9:40:36 PM

That still seems like an overly broad net for complaining for me because criticism of the awards shows is STILL criticism.

pokedude10 Since: Oct, 2010
#99: Mar 25th 2017 at 9:40:39 PM

[up][up]Ok, that's fair. I think I still disagree about your net for speculation and complaining, but I understand your reasoning and many of the marked examples look more like trivia or complaining than about the work itself. I agree with you on both points. Now that that's out of the way, let's get to work on how to fix it.

Honestly, at this point given the usage, this might almost work better as ymmv or trivia. Maybe just a simple rename might help divert the issues. Again, I'll stew on it tonight.

[nja][up] Eh, except criticizing the award show is not the same as criticizing the work. If this was defined as "works which were made to win oscars," then criticizing the award show doesn't really say much about the work. Sure, it could be part of the example if there is already good context about the work, but examples which only say a work did/didn't/should/shouldn't win are not criticizing the right object.

edited 25th Mar '17 10:08:48 PM by pokedude10

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#100: Mar 25th 2017 at 9:57:38 PM

[up][up] Basically I agree with [up]. Because at that point, the example is no longer about the work. It is a poorly written example for some other reason — e.g. not explaining how this trope applies to this work.

The nuance between "criticism" and "complaint" is unneeded for why such an example is bad.

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