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Edited by Synchronicity on Sep 18th 2023 at 11:42:55 AM

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#10776: Jan 5th 2020 at 2:45:33 PM

[up][up] I put it on Rooting for the Empire, and found the name of the webcomic.

  • A comic strip by artist Mallorie Jessica Udischas, author of Manic Pixie Nightmare Girls, presented the artist Self-Insert laughing about a "millionaire gamer-bro douchebag" getting robbed (a reference to PewDiePie, who was robbed in early December, 2019). Her co-worker, a stereotypical skinhead looking male character whose nametag reads "New Guy", calls her out on this, asking her "Hey, how'd you like it if you were robbed?". Mallorie self-insert then sarcastically tells the guy they could be friends only to later remark "Hell no". Due to the protagonist being unlikeable for being a spiteful jerk with an agenda of the dehumanization of people due to their wealth, many people ended up agreeing with New Guy, who the comic didn't present as anything but some reasonable guy with empathy. Starting in 2020, New Guy was taken by Twitter users as a symbol of "empathy", even trending on the site. The artist made her account private after supposed harassment.

I think it sounds too biased or anything. What do you think?

To win, you need to adapt, and to adapt, you need to be able to laugh away all the restraints. Everything holding you back.
gjjones Musician/Composer from South Wales, New York Since: Jul, 2016
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#10777: Jan 5th 2020 at 3:35:25 PM

Reposting from the previous three pages so that it doesn't get lost again.

From VideoGame.Shin Sakura Wars:

  • Casting Gag:
    • Shinichiro Ota voices the commentator for the World Combat Revue War tournament. This is not the first time Ota has done this before, as he previously served as the floor reporter for the Iron Chef TV series.
    • One of Arthur's attacks is Overlord Excalibur, a massive Sword Beam similar to Saber's Excalibur. Nobunaga Shimazaki is a big Fate Series fan and voiced the male character of Fate/Grand Order.

The Casting Gag trope is where an entire role mirrors or parodies an entire previous role or real-life situation of an actor. Do either of the above entries count as true examples of that trope? If not, would a different trope (i.e. Actor-Shared Background) apply here or should they be removed?

Edited by gjjones on Jan 5th 2020 at 6:38:03 AM

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HighCrate Since: Mar, 2015
#10778: Jan 5th 2020 at 3:44:45 PM

[up][up] I agree that it's an example of Rooting for the Empire, but I suggest a couple of minor wording changes, partially for content, partially to streamline the text:

  • A comic strip by artist Mallorie Jessica Udischas, author of Manic Pixie Nightmare Girls, presents the artist's Self-Insert character laughing about a "millionaire gamer-bro douchebag" getting robbed (a reference to PewDiePie, who was robbed in early December, 2019). Her co-worker, a white male character whose nametag reads "New Guy," asks her, "Hey, how'd you like it if you were robbed?" Mallorie's self-insert sarcastically tells the guy they could be friends only to say "Hell no" when he asks for confirmation. Many people wound up sympathizing more with the New Guy's empathy than the ostensible protagonist's schadenfreude and sarcasm. Starting in 2020, "New Guy" was taken by Twitter users as a symbol of empathy, even trending on the site.

Edited by HighCrate on Jan 5th 2020 at 3:45:20 AM

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#10779: Jan 5th 2020 at 4:50:47 PM

[up] Thank you! I didn't even know schadenfreude was a word.

Updated. Thank you, my previous edit felt like it was taking sides or even attacking the girl, which is why I came here first.

To win, you need to adapt, and to adapt, you need to be able to laugh away all the restraints. Everything holding you back.
HighCrate Since: Mar, 2015
#10780: Jan 5th 2020 at 5:33:44 PM

Leave it to the Germans to come up with a word describing the pleasure you feel in the misfortune of others. (-:

Merseyuser1 Since: Sep, 2011
#10781: Jan 6th 2020 at 3:29:17 PM

I added this to WesternAnimation.Peter Pan And The Pirates, checking it fits:

  • Adaptational Nice Guy: Although it's a stretch to call Hook "nice", in this continuity he's been given some redeeming features, and is more of a Friendly Enemy to Peter Pan than the usual hero-and-villain dynamic. But, this is more downplayed, as he still has elements of his core persona, despite the Darker and Edgier setting.

Serac she/her Since: Mar, 2016 Relationship Status: Oh my word! I'm gay!
she/her
#10782: Jan 6th 2020 at 5:58:43 PM

From YMMV.Baba Is You:

  • Unwinnable by Insanity: In older versions of the game, by going well out of one's way to ignore the puzzle and assemble contradictory rules, it was possible to create an unresolvable loop that crashed the game in Chasm-3, "Broken". Later versions patched this out by recognizing the loop and making it an in-universe Reality-Breaking Paradox that can be backed out of normally.

Things that only crash the game don't count as unwinnable, right? As far as I know, it doesn't corrupt your save file or anything like that.

XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
There is no Planet B
#10783: Jan 7th 2020 at 1:53:41 AM

Proper Lady in Professional Wrestling. See also here.

I think all the examples in the folder are misuse. Asking you to evaluate all examples at once is probably too much (it's a Wall of Text).

So just one example.

Ivory often referred to herself as a lady, even wearing purple and sometimes even a purple scarf for extra Kicking Ass in All Her Finery points, in contrast to her rivals, whom she viewed as beneath her. She called Barbara Bush and Tori a "skank" and a "slut" outright, their very presence being offensive to her. And that was tame compared to when she joined Right to Censor, a Power Stable of Moral Guardians, in which she dialed up that attitude Up To Eleven as part of their crusade to censor anything they didn't deem proper, and dressed in the stable's uniform of a white shirt, black tie and long black skirt (later switched to slacks for more freedom of movement), which made her look like a schoolmarm.

  • referring to oneself as a lady doesn't make one a lady, let alone a Proper Lady
  • slut-shaming and name-calling other women who are supposed to be her opponents is not very demure and lady-like
  • her costume (wearing purple, scarves, white shirt + black tie + long black skirt) might signify a proper lady, but it's the problem most personal appearance/costume tropes have — it can be used to strengthen the trope visually, but it can't be the only defining trait

So is she an example? Personally I think it's misuse. note 

Edited by XFllo on Jan 10th 2020 at 12:14:50 PM

Tabs Since: Jan, 2001
#10784: Jan 7th 2020 at 3:25:05 PM

[up] I'd say OK to delete. Strays too far from Proper Lady

XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
There is no Planet B
#10785: Jan 9th 2020 at 2:06:08 AM

[up] Thanks you very, very much for your feedback. [awesome]

Ferot_Dreadnaught Since: Mar, 2015
#10786: Jan 9th 2020 at 12:58:35 PM

YMMV.South Park

My impression is that this that it's about targets audiences find acceptable. But the entry is about the show finding them assertable which doesn't sound YMMV. ALL the Acceptable Targets entries I've seen are written as the work treating them as assertable, not audiences.

Is there some element that makes this YMMV I'm missing? (Is it because audiences would object to this if not for their being acceptable? None I've seen are written that way. That seems like chairs and speculating how audiences would have reacted differently seems too contentious even for YMMV.

I'm considering taking this to TRS per ATT, but want to be sure there's something we're missing.

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#10787: Jan 10th 2020 at 1:30:36 AM

Found this on Film.No Tears For The Dead. For now it's commented out. Does it fit either of these two tropes? Obviously I can't let it stay as-is...

  • Earn Your Happy Ending/"Ray of Hope" Ending: Even though Chaoz had an opportunity to shoot Mo-gyeong, he spares her and leaves the Ventura Holdings building with a severely wounded Gon in tow while the major bad guys are dead.

Current Project: Incorruptible Pure Pureness
XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
There is no Planet B
#10788: Jan 10th 2020 at 8:17:37 AM

[up] I'd leave it commented out, with fixed example indentation.

  • Earn Your Happy Ending: Even though Chaoz had an opportunity to shoot Mo-gyeong, he spares her and leaves the Ventura Holdings building with a severely wounded Gon in tow while the major bad guys are dead.
  • "Ray of Hope" Ending: Even though Chaoz had an opportunity to shoot Mo-gyeong, he spares her and leaves the Ventura Holdings building with a severely wounded Gon in tow while the major bad guys are dead.

Are these tropes mutually exclusive? It seems like it should at least from the perspective of one character, so only one of those trope should be used. It's a bit weird, though — it explains what happens in the story, but it isn't clear how and if the tropes applies. For instance, for Earn Your Happy Ending, the hero(ine) is supposed to work hard on their happily-ever-after and it should feel like they really deserved it. It's impossible to tell from this context.

Perhaps it would be okay to remove it from the page and move it to the discussion page.

Octoya Since: Jul, 2014
#10789: Jan 10th 2020 at 11:03:59 AM

Is a character still a Child Hater if they don't hate children, but hate babies specifically? Is there a Baby Hater trope? After asking on Ask The Tropers, I've added the trope for Nimrod from Children of the Lamp and said it was downplayed since he really only hates babies and gets along fine with his (almost teenaged) niece and nephew, but someone also directed me to this thread so I wanted to be sure.

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#10790: Jan 10th 2020 at 11:07:01 AM

[up][up] See, that's what I would do if I believe any of the tropes actually fit the example. I'm asking because I don't know if the tropes are being used properly.

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Pichu-kun ... Since: Jan, 2001
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#10791: Jan 10th 2020 at 11:11:34 AM

Are these misuse of Adaptational Attractiveness? According to the troper who deleted them, Adaptational Attractiveness is for when a character is made more attractive in-universe, not just from a fan's POV.

From Characters.Harvest Moon Mineral Town:

XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
There is no Planet B
#10792: Jan 10th 2020 at 2:27:37 PM

[up][up] at War Jay 77 re those ending tropes:

Me not knowing the work, I can't offer a better feedback. Just deleting it seems okay. Nothing wrong with that — with an edit reason, it'll be clear it's done with best intentions; and moving the example(s) to the discussion page is even better than just removing them because someone might see it and move it back with better context if it actually fits (even considering that the discussion pages are rarely used now).

[up] Seems like misuse to me, too. Especially if it's adaptation from literature/animation to live-action format. Adaptational attractiveness is almost universal in this case, and being slightly prettier or a bit tidier in appearance is actually standard/not that relevant. My two cents.

Edited by XFllo on Jan 10th 2020 at 11:31:09 AM

XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
There is no Planet B
#10793: Jan 10th 2020 at 2:37:50 PM

Is a character still a Child Hater if they don't hate children, but hate babies specifically? Is there a Baby Hater trope? After asking on Ask The Tropers, I've added the trope for Nimrod from Children of the Lamp and said it was downplayed since he really only hates babies and gets along fine with his (almost teenaged) niece and nephew, but someone also directed me to this thread so I wanted to be sure.

As far as I know, we don't have a Baby Hater trope. That would be too specific and too narrow.

That case is almost certainly an example of Child Hater. (Only if the character hates onl one particular baby, then I guess it will not count.) Tropes Are Flexible. Hating babies, or being uncomfortable around babies and disliking them because of it is very much in the spirit of the Child Hater.

Teenagers are more grownup and almost adults, so that's fine in my book.

(Perhaps we might have a separate trope for characters who are nervous and uncomfortable around babies because they are so vulnerable and fragile and they are worried they might hurt them. Not irrational hatred, just some fear and awkwardness. That might make sense.)

Edited by XFllo on Jan 10th 2020 at 12:12:22 PM

Merseyuser1 Since: Sep, 2011
#10794: Jan 10th 2020 at 3:03:46 PM

Is this the correct usage of Canon Foreigner, or is it Square Peg Round Trope for this example from WesternAnimation.Harvey Street Kids, of which I'm only vaguely familiar with:

  • Canon Foreigner: Bobby, The Bow, Fredo, Frufru, and Pinkeye were characters created for the show. Also played with, since the "Audrey", "Lotta", and "Dot" of this show are not the originals, but original characters that just happen to have the same names and similar looks.

Shouldn't it be a different trope for original characters with same name and similar looks, and just the first list for Canon Foreigner?

HighCrate Since: Mar, 2015
#10795: Jan 10th 2020 at 3:07:31 PM

[up][up][up] Seconded. I don't believe Adaptational Attractiveness necessarily needs to be commented on in-universe, but those seem pretty iffy and subjective.

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#10796: Jan 10th 2020 at 3:35:08 PM

Came across this in I Know Madden Kombat

  • Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire: Harry uses his Quidditch skills to help him win the first task in the Triwzard Tournament. He uses his masterful flying to avoid the dragon and his flames, the Wronski Feint (a complicated technique which he had only learned a few months earlier) and seeker skill to scoop up the egg the moment the dragon moved away from it.

Harry isn't really fighting the dragon though, he's just luring it away from the egg. I don't think this actually counts, does it?

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#10797: Jan 10th 2020 at 10:56:50 PM

[up][up]The description of Adaptational Attractiveness doesn't say it needs to be acknowledged by characters, but those Harvest Moon examples lack context.

Keet cleanup
Merseyuser1 Since: Sep, 2011
#10798: Jan 11th 2020 at 4:44:22 AM

This example from Captain Ersatz is one I'm not sure about, even if Tropes Are Flexible, should it go on No Celebrities Were Harmed or be cut entirely.

Here's the entry:

  • In the late 80s and 90s, every major US city that didn't air The Howard Stern Show had a Howard Stern Imitator at some point. Mark & Brian (LA), Lex & Terry (Dallas), Paul & Young Ron (Miami), and Opie and Anthony(Boston) were the biggest. When the Stern Show would enter their markets, very often locals listening for the first time thought he was the imitator of them and just had a black (or female, since not everyone realized Robin Quivers is Black) sidekick.

Edited by Merseyuser1 on Jan 11th 2020 at 12:44:43 PM

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#10799: Jan 11th 2020 at 8:11:03 AM

Does this count? The current version has a "Standard" difficulty, with an Easy of "Elementary", and a Hard of "Graduate".

"Graduate" was the original difficulty... I suppose it counts as a rare form of Played With only possible through Updated Re Release?

Easier Than Easy:

  • After complaints that the initial release of Science Girls! was Nintendo Hard, an update added two more difficulty levels: one adjusting the amounts of damage done to make things a bit easier, and one which on top of that refills your health at the end of every combat as well as adding regeneration during combat.

Edited by Malady on Jan 11th 2020 at 8:16:46 AM

Disambig Needed: Help with those issues! tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=13324299140A37493800&page=24#comment-576
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#10800: Jan 11th 2020 at 8:25:32 AM

[up][up] Sounds like a case of Examples Are Not General, since it's about multiple different shows.

[up] I think it could count.


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