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They consist of the two rulers of the Mink Tribe and samurai strong enough to compete with the strongest members of an emperor's crew.

He's both the unnamed figure that is seen with Momonosuke and his group before they are sent to the future by Toki and the mysterious prisoner who Luffy sees before being sent to his own jail. However, it takes a few chapters before both of these figures are revealed to be both the same character: one of the missing retainers mentioned by Kin'emon.

For Ashura-doji, however, his loyalty stops with Kozuki Oden, <- comma and, after the latter's death, he goes back to his bandit lifestyle.

The logical result when a young child assists at the death of her parents <- no comma and suffers the disappearance of her brother and most of her bodyguards <- no comma and the destruction of her castle. Thankfully, Kawamatsu takes care of her and cheers her up.

She's presented as a greedy and manipulative woman, <- comma but then reveals some depths at Orochi's mansion, where she protects Toko from the shogun's wrath.

...Hiyori says she remained mute for a long time. Thankfully, Kawamatsu cheers her out of it.

Upon learning that her brother Momonosuke is still alive, she's very happy, <- comma but, as the daughter of a samurai, she claims she must not cry, making in a very goofy face while containing her tears.

Takes care of a very young Hiyori to the point he starves himself just to feed her, and cheers her up after she is traumatized by Kaido's invasion.

Even in his old age...

Queen sends both him and Madilloman to fight Luffy and Hyogoro during the Great Sumo Inferno Tournament.

While fighting Hyogoro and Luffy <- no comma he uses two swords, <- comma in contrast to Madilloman's two guns.

He can rotate his swords to make many quick attacks in a row.

Queen sends both him and Alpacaman to fight Luffy and Hyogoro during the Great Sumo Inferno Tournament. By contrast, Alpacaman fights using two swords, while Madilloman uses two guns. <- space During the fight, they even use a combined attack.

He fights wielding two guns. <- period Unfortunately for him, they can't land a hit on Luffy.

He can curl himself up like a real armadillo and then roll over his enemies in the form of a large sphere.

Edited by Arivne on Apr 13th 2019 at 5:04:54 AM

Some tropes for my fanfic. I'm planning on writing an entry for Neolation, a comic, but will need time to process it.

• Writing by the Seat of Your Pants: The author admits he writes this way. When he had to retire from the story due to a personal project, he needed to read the previous chapters because he forgot of the content.
• What Could Have Been: Some ideas were considered for the story but were dropped due to Creator Breakdown.
  • The line "she may be a girl" was gonna be added into the text, but was scrapped as its a Pet-Peeve Trope of the author.
  • Evaprimolca was originally going to be named Choco, to combine with Cacao' Edible Theme Naming, but this was scrapped.
  • Esparra was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting Pirina as a giant Namekian (with the author comparing him to Ridley from Metroid), but the author thought the story was too packed so it was made anticlimactic on purpose.
  • Taura and Cabba were meant to fight outside the Tree of Might while a war happened in the background. The author didn't think it was thematically appropriate, and couldn't see Cabba winning against her in that scenario.
  • Taura was meant to transform during her final confrontation, in either a plant monster or a female Namekian, but the author thought it would betray Turles biggest appeal of never needing a transformation, so this was scrapped for her remaining a Saiyan.

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some tropes for

Karasu

• Creepy Good: He's a pale, bald man with a dark cloak that can turn into crows, and his gaze is so frightening it scares some of Pinkbeard's pirates. Despite all these traits that make him appear like a villain, he's a revolutionary who helps the people and opposes the corrupted World Government.
• Dark Is Not Evil: Wears a black cloak that can become a storm of crows, but he's a heroic character.

Belo Betty

• Cool Shades: Wears a pair of dark shaded glasses and is a revolutionary who inspires the people to revolt.
• Red Is Heroic: Her main clothing color is red and she is one of the major opponents of the World Government.
• You Gotta Have Blue Hair: She has purple hair cut in a bob.

and this one

for the Black Cat Pirates

• Animal Motifs: Cats, obviously. Kuro, the captain, has a pair of gloves with a long sword on each finger, and even slashes Merry simply for the thrill of it, just like real cats do. Sam and Butchie are also very similar to cats and fight with clawed gloves, while the rest of the crew wear a bandana with cat-like ears. The only exception is Jango, who doesn't have anything cat-related.

for Kuro

• Lack of Empathy: While working for Kaya and her family for years, he has never grown attached to her nor to his colleague Merry, and even attempts to kill the latter without any regret. He doesn't even care for his crew, which he plans to kill after inheriting Kaya's fortune.

[[folder:Merry]]

Merry

Kaya's loyal butler and the one who designed the Going Merry, which he gives to the Straw Hats after they save Kaya from Captain Kuro.

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• Animal Motif: Sheep. Has a sheep-like hairstyle and, like sheep, he's nice and loyal to Kaya. Even his ship, which he gives to the Straw Hats, is sheep-themed.
• Battle Butler: Downplayed. For the most part he's a Non-Action Guy, but he's seen fighting against Kaya's many suitors.
• Funny Afro: Has a white afro that resembles a sheep's wool, complete with horns.
• Not Quite Dead: After Kuro reveals his true colours he slashes Merry, leaving him presumably dead, but turns out the wound is not fatal, and Merry survives.
• Sweet Sheep: Merry is sheep themed, with an hairstyle that is similar to a sheep's wool, and is a very nice man, even if a bit too protective.

[[/folder

Edited by fishysaur on Apr 16th 2019 at 4:20:09 AM

@Tomodachi

When he had to retire from the story due to a personal project, he needed to read the previous chapters because he had forgotten the content.

The line "she may be a girl" was going to be added into the text, but was scrapped as it's a

Esparra was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist, <- comma who would mutate while fighting Pirina as a giant Namekian (with the author comparing him to Ridley from Metroid), but the author thought the story was too packed, <- comma so it was made anticlimactic on purpose.

Taura was meant to transform into either a plant monster or a female Namekian during her final confrontation, but the author thought it would betray Turles's biggest appeal of never needing a transformation, so this was scrapped for her remaining a Saiyan.

Edited by Arivne on Apr 16th 2019 at 3:28:24 AM

@fishysaur

Wears a black cloak that can become a storm of crows, but he's a heroic character.

Wears a pair of dark shaded glasses and is a revolutionary who inspires the people to revolt.

Her main clothing color is red and she is one of the major opponents of the World Government.

Sam and Butchie are also very similar to cats

While working for Kaya and her family for years, he has never grown attached to her

Kaya's loyal butler and the one who designed the Going Merry, which he gives to the Straw Hats after they save Kaya from Captain Kuro.

Has a sheep-like hairstyle and, like sheep, he's nice and loyal to Kaya.

For the most part <- no comma he's a Non-Action Guy,

After Kuro reveals his true colours <- no comma he slashes Merry,

Edited by Arivne on Apr 16th 2019 at 3:40:06 AM

A trope for the Roboutian Heresy's main page

Beyond the Impossible: After being forced to kneel before Guilliman, the sheer rage inside Titus allowed him to overcome the holds enforced by Guilliman’s genetic code and khornate blessings.

After being forced to kneel before Guilliman, the sheer rage inside Titus allows him to overcome the holds enforced by Guilliman’s genetic code and Khornate blessings.

^ Changed "allowed" to "allows" as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

Khorne is a proper name, so the adjective Khornate based on it is also capitalized. If you type in "Khornate" on Google, you will see that almost all examples are capitalized.

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this new folder

[[folder: Ninjin, Piiman and Tamanegi]]

Ninjin, Piiman and Tamanegi

Three kids from Syrup Village who are part of the Usopp Pirates. They are very loyal to Usopp and are saddened when he decides to leave. After their "captain" departs with the Straw Hats, they keep his tradition of yelling "Pirates are coming!".

• Astonishingly Appropriate Appearance: Each of them resembles their named vegetable: A tuft of hair pops out of Ninjin's bandana, making him appear like a carrot; Piiman wears a pepper-shaped hat and Tamanegi's haircut resembles the shape of an onion, with a lock like a onion's bud.
• Blinding Bangs: Ninjin's eyes are covered by his hair.
• Edible Theme Naming: Ninjin, Piiman and Tamanegi, respectively, mean "carrot", "pepper" and "onion", each a kind of vegetable. Naturally, their appearances match those of said vegetables.
• Hidden Depths: Being kids, each of them has an ambition for when they become adults: Ninjin wants to open a bar and Piiman and Tamanegi want to become a carpenter and a writer, respectively.
• Kid Sidekick: All of them are this to Usopp, following him in every misadventure, and prove to be useful helping him to save Kaya.
• Offscreen Teleportation: Tamanegi has the habit of disappearing only to reappear out of nowhere screaming.
• One-Steve Limit: Ninjin's name is the same as that of Carrot, the rabbit mink who follows the Straw Hats after leaving Zou. However, his name is written in kanji, and therefore isn't translated, keeping the names different.
• Passing the Torch: Not directly, but, after Usopp leaves, they mantain his tradition of yelling "pirates are coming!" every day.
• She's All Grown Up: Downplayed, since they only go from 9 to 11 years old, but it's evident they've started to hit puberty during the timeskip.
• You Gotta Have Blue Hair: Ninjin has light purple hair.
• Youthful Freckles: Ninjin has freckles and is a young kid.

[[/folder

for Usopp

• Crying Wolf: In his debut, he runs through the village yelling that "Pirates are coming", something the villagers are used to hearing every day. Naturally, when pirates really come, no one believes him. Later, it's revealed he started this habit as a kid to cheer his sick mother because his father left to join a pirate crew.
• Laser-Guided Karma: Whenever he cowardly retreats from a fight and then calls all of his courage to go back and fight, he always receives a beating, almost as a punishment for his cowardice and boasting. He still manages to win these fights, though.
• Token Adult: He starts as the captain of the Usopp Pirates, whose other members are three kids: Ninjin, Piiman and Tamanegi.

Edited by fishysaur on Apr 18th 2019 at 6:07:33 AM

Three kids from Syrup Village who are part of the Usopp Pirates. They are very loyal to Usopp and are saddened when he decides to leave.

Each of them resembles their named vegetable

Hidden Depths: Being kids, each of them has an ambition for when they become adults: Ninjin wants to open a bar <- no comma and Piiman and Tamanegi want to become a carpenter and a writer, <- comma respectively.

Tamanegi has the habit of disappearing, <- comma and only to reappear out of nowhere screaming.

Ninjin's name is the same as that of Carrot, the rabbit mink who follows the Straw Hats after leaving Zou. <- period However, his name is written in kanji, and therefore isn't translated, keeping the names different.

Not directly, <- comma but, after Usopp leaves, they maintain his tradition of yelling "Pirates are coming!" every day.

In his debut, he runs through the village yelling that "Pirates are coming", something the villagers are used to hearing every day. Naturally, when pirates really come, no one believes him. Later, it's revealed he started this habit as a kid to cheer his sick mother <- no comma because his father left to join a pirate crew.

Whenever he cowardly retreats from a fight and then calls all of his courage to go back and fight, he always receives a beating, almost as a punishment for his cowardice and boasting. He still manages to win these fights, though.

Edited by Arivne on Apr 18th 2019 at 3:40:51 AM

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some tropes

for Tonoyasu

• Good Samaritan: He cares for and does his best to help everyone in Ebisu Town, even if he can only do little. The inhabitants love him back and even call him a "saint".

for Toko

• Shared Family Quirks: She clearly got her constant smile from her father, Tonoyasu, who believes humans should always smile and laugh.

for Patty and Carne (they're in the same folder)

• Badass Beard: Patty has a small beard and is a Chef of Iron like everyone working at Baratie. Carne grows a beard as well after the Time-Skip.
• Bash Brothers: They often argue and quarrel with each other, but whenever there is a common enemy, they join forces and fight together. During the assault of Krieg's Armada, they take down multiple pirates.
• Innocently Insensitive: Patty is very nice to the customers (as long as they pay). However, he unknowingly insults them when he greets them with a big smile.
• Lennon Specs: Carne always wears a pair of dark shaded glasses with round lenses.
• Older Than He Looks: Patty is in his late twenties but looks more like a man in his forties.

for Zeff

• Good Is Not Nice: He willingly sacrificed his leg to help a kid to survive and is always willing to feed whoever is starving, but is also a very rude and grumpy old man.
• Honor Before Reason: When Don Krieg comes to the restaurant asking for food for him and his crew, every chef refuses to provide any because of Krieg's reputation as a ruthless pirate, fearing he would turn on them after being fed. Zeff doesn't care and gives them a load of food anyway. Unfortunately, his cooks were right about Krieg.

Edited by fishysaur on Apr 20th 2019 at 9:55:27 AM

He cares for everyone in Ebisu Town, and does his best to help everyone in Ebisu Town, even if he can only do little.

They often argue and quarrel with each other, <- comma but <- no comma whenever there is a common enemy, they join forces and fight together.

Patty is very nice to the customers (as long as they pay). <- period However, he unknowingly insults them when he greets them with a big smile.

Patty is in his late twenties, <- comma but looks more like a man in his forties.

He willingly sacrificed his leg to help a kid to survive and is always willing to feed whoever is starving, but is also a very rude and grumpy old man.

When Don Krieg comes to the restaurant asking for food for him and his crew, every chef refuses to provide any because of Krieg's reputation as a ruthless pirate, fearing he would turn on them after being fed. Zeff doesn't care and gives them a load of food anyway. Unfortunately, his cooks were right about Krieg.

Edited by Arivne on Apr 20th 2019 at 4:36:13 AM

An addendum to this section of the Roboutian Heresy's character page.

• Outside-Context Problem: While Corax is considered to be a primarch of Chaos Undivided, The Chaos Gods didn't want him or his legion to reach whatever they found at the center of the Eye of Terror.

Addition:

• This also applies to the Unkind. They’re from the warp, but their nature is different of the rest of the Daemons, and they’re only related to the Raven Guard.

Edited by neosspeer on Apr 20th 2019 at 1:55:57 PM

...the Chaos Gods

They’re from the Warp, but their nature is different from the rest of the Daemons...

Also, the addition is by itself on the second level of indentation. If a work has two or more examples, each gets its own entry. This is a rules violation that can result in being suspended from editing, so you should avoid doing it.

You should split off the first example, the one on the line with the trope title, onto the second level of indentation, like this:

• Outside-Context Problem
  • While Corax is considered to be a primarch of Chaos Undivided, the Chaos Gods didn't want him or his legion to reach whatever they found at the center of the Eye of Terror.
  • This also applies to the Unkind. They’re from the Warp, but their nature is different from the rest of the Daemons, and they’re only related to the Raven Guard.

Edited by Arivne on Apr 21st 2019 at 3:37:09 AM

hi, i have a WMG for Gintama and need help proofreading it.

Oni and other supernatural entities exist in the world of Gintama. It's easy to forget about them because they are not the part of the manga's main plot, and because of this we don't have many examples of humanoid oni, but let's take a look at the one example we do have: Gedomaru.
She has Monstrous Strength, a penchant for violence, is an extreme sadist, and have red eyes. we have yet to see her being wounded, but we can only assume that her endurance and healing abilities are also superiors to theses of humans. Of course, Gedomaru is a special case, but others oni might share these traits to an extent.
Now let's compare with Gintoki. Strong enough to fight toes to toes with aliens from the strongest race in the universe, can get very violent in combat and his rage on the battlefield got him the nickname White Yaksha, occasionally show a sadistic side, have red eyes... The traits are downplayed in him compared to a complete oni but still there. All of this because he is actually the son of a human and a silver-haired Oni, or the descendant of one. This is why he get back up so quickly after being severely wounded. This is also why he was able to survive on his own before Shoyo found him, he was no normal child.
Others potential descendants of oni include:

• Jirocho: for the same reasons as Gintoki, really. Same hair color, eye color, super strong, used to be very violent and still is when he fights. By extension, Is daughter, Chin Pirako is one: red eye (drawn without the highlight, just like Gedomaru's!), and a taste for bloodsheds.
• Okita: Huge sadist, enjoy violence and killing, his brown eyes take a red tint when he gets serious...Really, this guy is a demon.
• Nobume: Red eyes, killing proficiency that rival Okita's, sadistic tendencies, and was already one of the best assassins of the naraku as a child.
• Oboro: Probably descended from the same kind of Oni as Gintoki hence the wavy grey hair. But have inherited less oni traits because he is a more distant descendant.
• Hijikata: Very tough, fierce and ruthless in battle, used to have bouts of Unstoppable Rage when younger,... The nickname "oni vice-captain" might be more literal than it seems. He might also be a more distant descendant, hence why he doesn't have red eyes.

It's easy to forget about them because they are not the part of the manga's main plot

She has Monstrous Strength...and has red eyes.

We have yet to see her being wounded, but we can only assume that her endurance and healing abilities are also superior to those of humans.

Of course, Gedomaru is a special case, but other oni...

Now let's compare her with Gintoki. Strong enough to fight toe to toe with aliens...occasionally shows a sadistic side, has red eyes...The traits are downplayed in him compared to a complete oni, <- comma but are still there. This is why he gets back up so quickly after being severely wounded. This is also why he was able to survive on his own before Shoyo found him: <- colon he was no normal child.

Other potential descendants of oni include:

By extension, his daughter, Chin Pirako is one: red eye (drawn without the highlight, just like Gedomaru's!), and a taste for bloodshed.

Okita: Huge sadist, enjoys violence and killing, his brown eyes take on a red tint when he gets serious

Nobume: Red eyes, killing proficiency that rivals Okita's, sadistic tendencies, and was already one of the best assassins of the Naraku as a child.

Oboro: Probably descended from the same kind of Oni as Gintoki, <- comma hence the wavy grey hair. However, he inherited fewer oni traits because he is a more distant descendant.

Edited by Arivne on Apr 22nd 2019 at 4:02:42 AM

some Shout-Out for one piece

Art

• When Jora uses the Art Art fruit to turn Nami, Brook, Chopper, Momonosuke and the Thousand Sunny into pieces of art, they become similar to paintings such as those of Picasso and Salvador Dalí. Brook, in particular, is very similar to Munch's "The Scream".
• Before Block D's fight at the Corrida Colosseum starts, Cavendish comes into the arena riding his horse, Farul, in a pose similar to Napoléon Bonaparte in the painting "Napoleon Crossing the Alps".
• Zunisha is a large elephant who walks on the ocean's floor using its very long legs. Resembling the subjets of Salvador Dalí's painting "The Elephants", in which said elephants have abnormally long legs. Just to reinforce it, his name, if read backwards, can be interpreted "looks like Dali's painting".
• When approaching Wano, the Thousand Sunny comes across a very rough sea, and a splash page is drawn exactly like Hokusai's "The Great Wave off Kanagawa", with a very similar artstyle. At the same time, when sailing near Wano, a large octopus gets on board. Said octopus resembles the one seen in "The Dream of the Fisherman's Wife", another of Hokusai's paintings. The reference to the latter is reinforced by a second appearance of these octopus in the hot springs, cleaning up Nami, Robin and Shinobu.
• In her first appearance, O-Tsuru resembles a woman in a famous Ukiyo-e painting, right down to the same pose and art-style.

Edited by fishysaur on Apr 23rd 2019 at 6:51:20 AM

^

When Jora uses the Art Art fruit to turn Nami, Brook, Chopper, Momonosuke and the Thousand Sunny into pieces of art, they become similar to paintings such as those of Picasso <- no comma and Salvador Dalí. <- period and Brook, in particular, is very similar to Munch's "The Scream".

Before Block's fight at the Corrida Colosseum starts, Cavendish comes into the arena riding his horse, Farul, and is in a pose similar to Napoleon Bonaparte in the painting "Napoleon Crossing the Alps".

Zunisha is a large elephant who walks on the ocean's floor using his very long legs. He looks like the subjects of Salvador Dalí's painting "The Elephants", in which said elephants have abnormally long legs. Just to reinforce it, his name, if read backwards, can be interpreted "looks like Dali's painting".

At the same time, <- comma when sailing near Wano, a large octopus gets on board. <- period Said octopus resembles the one seen in "The Dream of the Fisherman's Wife", another of Hokusa's paintings. The reference to the latter is reinforced by a second appearance of the octopus in the hot springs, <- comma cleaning up Nami, Robin and Shinobu.

In her first appearance, O-Tsuru resembles a woman in a famous Ukiyo-e <- no comma painting, right down to the same pose and art-style.

Edited by Arivne on Apr 23rd 2019 at 2:53:34 AM

I need help with grammar and formatting. This is for the mexicians love speedy gonzles

One would think the song " Fujiyama Mama" by rockabilly legend Wanda Jackson; with its opening line being "I've been to Nagasaki, Hiroshima too! The things I did to them baby, I can do to you!". However, Oddly enough it was a number one hit in Japan! It was such a hit in fact that Wanda did a tour in Japan becuse of it. This is might have to do with Japanese's love for rockabilly.

Is there anything wrong with this? It's for the Hades Contingency's main page

La Résistance: The Nulorian are a Vitakara terrorist group working againist the Collective and the Aui'Vitakar.

Edited by neosspeer on Apr 23rd 2019 at 9:22:42 AM

The Nulorian is a singular terrorist group, so you should use "is" instead of "are".

Edited by shadowmanwkp on Apr 23rd 2019 at 8:28:08 PM

@Nerdy D Ffoal

Mexicans Love Speedy Gonzales

One would think the song no space -> "Fujiyama Mama" by rockabilly legend Wanda Jackson, <- comma with its opening line being "I've been to Nagasaki, Hiroshima too! The things I did to them baby, I can do to you!", <- comma would count. However, oddly enough, <- comma it was a number one hit in Japan! It was such a hit, <- comma in fact, <- comma that Wanda did a tour in Japan because of it. This is might have something to do with the Japanese love of rockabilly.

Edited by Arivne on Apr 24th 2019 at 2:47:28 AM

some tropes

for Holdem

• Astonishingly Appropriate Appearance: His name is Holdem, from the card game "Texas Holdem", and Kamjiro's mane resembles a poker chip.

for Zoro

• Not Distracted by the Sexy: He's one of the very few to not fall for Hiyori's beauty, and doesn't even care when she's sleeping on his lap.

for Tonoyasu

• Funny Afro: When unkempt, his hair takes the form of a large and bushy Afro.
• Go Out with a Smile: As expected from someone who constantly smiles, even when ready to be executed, he says he's going to leave a final speech before dying with a smile.
• Messianic Archetype: He's an All-Loving Hero who helps everyone in Ebisu town, to the point that they call him a saint. To make this trope even more evident, during his execution he's tied up for a Crucified Hero Shot.

Edited by fishysaur on Apr 25th 2019 at 7:59:11 AM

His name is Holdem, from the card game "Texas Holdem", and Kamjiro's mane resembles a poker chip.

When unkempt, his hair takes the form of a large and bushy Afro.

He's an All-Loving Hero who helps everyone in Ebisu town, right down to the point that they call him a saint.

(Sorry, I didn't know that this is a grammar correction group)

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Apr 26th 2019 at 3:33:10 AM

I just need help with the corrections, the WMG entries were written by someone else.

Edited by neosspeer on Apr 26th 2019 at 12:48:09 PM