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@andrew369, post #2823. Hi.

Gear Xrd due to —> Gear Xrd, due to.

the story progress —> the story progresses.

was imprison —> was imprisoned.

Noted and edited. Can anyone help me post it if the sentences' correct?

@MDG107 Post 2825. Let's see.

Optional comma after Generally under Hair Trigger Temper.

The Shrink: Before the series, Frasier was a practicing psychiatrist , ; however, upon moving to Seattle, he got a job as and spent the series working as a radio shrink. However, towards the end he began to realise he missed being able to do more for his patients.

Bunny-Ears Lawyer: Niles suffers from many neuroses of his own, ranging from eccentric, like his germaphobia, to serious, such these the many scars his marital problems have left him with over the years. Nevertheless he is an accomplished and quite capable psychiatrist.

The rest seems error free.

edited 23rd Jun '16 6:31:25 PM by war877

Before I do, What did you mean by "see Corrupt Corporate Executive"? If you meant that there is another trope example, with more details on this, it needs to be clarified.

Because there is a trope called Corrupt Corporate Executive in Gregory Graham character with more details on how he causes the robot rampage. Not to repeat the same wordings, this is why I added "See Corrupt Corporate Executive for more details"

• Ferrothorn is notoriously known in competitive scenes for being ridiculously annoying to deal with and being awfully common. For starter, Ferrothorn’s amazing defensive typing and its insanely bulk makes it hard to KO. It can learn several useful supporting move such as the ever dreaded Stealth Rock, Spikes, Thunder Wave, Toxic and Leech Seed as well as its useful ability, Iron Barbs will hurt any Pokemon that uses a contact move on it, which cripples most physical attacker. Iron Barbs happen to stackable with Rocky Helmet, dealing more damage upon contact. Ferrothorn does have flaws such as being extremely weak to Fire-type and it’s ridiculous slow, but its benefits outweigh its flaws.
• Mega Charizard X, in stark contrast to regular Charizard in previous generations. Mega Charizard X receives a nice boost to both its Attack and Defense stat along with a slight boost to its Special Attack and it has an excellent Fire/Dragon typing, both offensively and defensively. That's not even factoring its ability Tough Claws, which boosts the power of contact moves by 33%. Mega Charizard X happens to learn diverse set of attacks as well as amazing status move such as Dragon Dance, Swords Dance and Roost. Making Mega Charizard X a really solid powerhouse. While some players have called for a Mega Charizard X suspect test a few times, it never really materialized due to the fact that it's never been as overcentralizing as other Mega Evolutions that were banned from the tier.
• Mega Salamence is a ridiculously scary Lightning Bruiser. Upon Mega Evolving, its Defense stat receive a gigantic boost, making it as bulky as [[Stone Wall‘’Skarmory’]]’. along with a nice Speed boost. And then there’s Mega Salamence’s ability, Aerilate, not only it makes Normal-type moves Flying-type, but also gives them a 30% power boost before STAB, with the most prominent Aerliate-boosted moves being Return/Frustration, Double-Edge and Hyper Voice. And it can learn Dragon Dance and Roost. Its only measurable flaws are a 4x weakness to Ice and a Stealth Rock weakness, but that doesn’t stop Mega Salamence to tear anything apart. Just to drive the point home, Mega Salamence becomes the first Pokemon to be banned in both single and Double OU by Smogon. Even in Uber, it’s still a horrifying offensive threat.
• Xerneas instantly becomes one of the best Pokemon in Uber as soon as XY was released, due to its signature move, Geomancy, which sharply raises its Special Attack, Special Defense and Speed. With the combination of Power Herb that instantly executes a two-turn moves once, Xerneas can demolish an entire party without too much effort. While there are several ways to deal with its Geomancy before it could act, Xerneas can still pull off a variety of trick in its sleeves with the aid of its all-around excellent stats and its ability, Fairy Aura that the power of boost Fairy-type attack by 30%.
• Back then, Azumarill is a really bulky Water-type Pokemon and it has Huge Power, which doubles its current Attack stat. But that’s it. This all changes in Generation 6 for two major changes, Azumarill gaining an additional Fairy type with the ability to learn Play Rough. The second being the changes made for egg moves allow Azumarill to have both Aqua Jet and Belly Drum, which it previously can’t have both at the same time. These changes alone easily make Azumarill easier to sweep an entire team and becoming more common in competitive battles.
• Upon Mega Evolving, Mega Sableye’s defensive stats is increased by an insane amount at the cost of its speed. Its ability, Magic Bounce, reflect most of its opponent’s status move back to it, Sableye happens to weak only one type, Fairy and it learn several excellent status moves with some good offensive moves to hit back, making it a perfect staller. In addition, regular Sableye has Prankster, which allows Mega Sableye to patch its speed issue by using status move even if for just one turn. Eventually, a suspect test was hold for Mega Sableye. But it evades the ban hammer treatment.
• Knock Off instantly becomes the next Scald. Not only the Power of Knock Off is increased from 20 to a respectable 65 in Generation VI, its power is now increased by 50% if the target is holding a removable item. Which is nearly 100. Most Pokemon happen to hold item in competitive battle, with some Pokemon being nearly completely useless if Knock Off removes its item as well as most Pokemon can learn Knock Off.
• Regular Kyogre used to be one of best Pokemon in Uber. Until ORAS is released which introduced Primal Groudon and Primal Kyogre. Primal Groudon becomes one of the best Pokemon in Uber. While regular Groudon still has some niche, Primal Kyogre basically outclasses every role that regular Kyogre can do. To illustrates how regular Kyogre has fallen, its viability ranking went from a S ranking in XY to a D ranking in ORAS.

Here are some examples for Tier Induced Scrappy.

Okay it is done. Please look it over to make sure it went through properly.

I also added two words of clarification.

edited 23rd Jun '16 10:36:29 PM by war877

• Ferrothorn is notoriously known in competitive scenes -> is notorious in competitive scenes
• For starter -> For starters
• several useful supporting move -> several useful supporting moves
• several useful supporting move -> moves
• which cripples most physical attacker. -> attackers
• It can learn several useful supporting moves such as the ever dreaded Stealth Rock, Spikes, Thunder Wave, Toxic and Leech Seed as well as its useful ability, Iron Barbs will hurt any Pokemon that uses a contact move on it, which cripples most physical attackers.

This should be broken up into two sentences.

• Iron Barbs happen to stackable -> Iron Barbs happens to be stackable
• it’s ridiculous slow -> it’s ridiculously slow

• That's not even factoring its ability -> That's not even factoring in its ability
• Mega Charizard X happens to learn -> Mega Charizard X learns
• learns diverse set of attacks -> learns a diverse set of attacks
• amazing status move -> amazing status moves
• Mega Charizard X happens learns a diverse set of attacks as well as amazing status moves such as Dragon Dance, Swords Dance and Roost. Making Mega Charizard X a really solid powerhouse.

The second sentence is a sentence fragment. These should be merged into a single sentence.

• its Defense stat receive -> receives
• [[StoneWall‘’Skarmory’]]’ -> [[StoneWall ‘’Skarmory’']]
• . along with a nice Speed boost. -> Another sentence fragment. Change the period to a comma.
• not only it makes -> it not only makes
• And then there’s Mega Salamence’s ability, Aerilate, it not only makes Normal-type moves Flying-type, but also gives them a 30% power boost before STAB, with the most prominent Aerliate-boosted moves being Return/Frustration, Double-Edge and Hyper Voice.

This is a run-on sentence that should be split up into separate sentences.

And then there’s Mega Salamence’s ability, Aerilate. It not only makes Normal-type moves Flying-type, but also gives them a 30% power boost before STAB, with the most prominent Aerliate-boosted moves being Return/Frustration, Double-Edge and Hyper Voice.

• And it can learn Dragon Dance and Roost. -> Yes, another sentence fragment. :)

• to tear anything apart. -> from tearing anything apart.
• Mega Salamence becomes the first Pokemon -> became

• instantly becomes -> instantly became
• With the combination of Power Herb that -> When using it in combination with Power Herb it (?)
• Xerneas can demolish -> allowing it to demolish
• before it could act -> before it can act
• a variety of trick in its sleeves -> tricks up its sleeves
• Fairy Aura that the power of boost Fairy-type attack by 30%. -> Fairy Aura, with the power of boosting Fairy-type attacks by 30%.

• Back then -> back when?
• Azumarill is -> was
• and it has -> and had
• which doubles -> doubled
• But that’s it. -> Another sentence fragment. Add it to the previous sentence. -> , but that's it.
• for two major changes, -> Time for a sentence split again. with two major changes.
• Azumarill gaining an additional Fairy type with the ability to learn Play Rough. The second being the changes made for egg moves allow Azumarill to have both Aqua Jet and Belly Drum, which it previously can’t have both at the same time.

• These changes alone easily make Azumarill easier -> These changes alone make it easier for Azumarill
• becoming more common -> and cause it to become more common

• Mega Sableye’s defensive stats is -> Mega Sableye’s defensive stat is
• Its ability, Magic Bounce, reflect -> reflects
• Sableye happens to weak only one type, Fairy -> Sableye weakens only one type, Fairy,
• and it learn -> learns
• Its ability, Magic Bounce, reflects most of its opponent’s status move back to it, Sableye weakens only one type, Fairy, and it learns several excellent status moves with some good offensive moves to hit back, making it a perfect staller.

This is a run-on sentence and should be split into two sentences.

• Eventually, a suspect test was hold -> held
• But it evades -> evaded
• Eventually, a suspect test was held for Mega Sableye. But it evaded the ban hammer treatment.

Yet another sentence fragment. These should be combined into one sentence.

• Knock Off instantly becomes -> became
• Not only the Power of Knock Off is -> Not only is the Power of Knock Off
• Which is nearly 100 -> Which is nearly 100% of the time (?)
• if the target is holding a removable item. Which is nearly 100% of the time.

2nd sentence is a sentence fragment, please combine with the previous sentence.

• Most Pokemon happen to hold item -> Most Pokemon hold an item
• competitive battle -> competitive battles
• some Pokemon being nearly completely useless if Knock Off removes its item -> removes their item
• as well as most Pokemon can learn Knock Off. -> This isn't really an example of the trope so I would delete it.

• Until ORAS is released -> Until ORAS was released
• Regular Kyogre used to be one of best Pokemon in Uber. Until ORAS was released which introduced Primal Groudon and Primal Kyogre.

Another sentence fragment that should be combined with the previous sentence.

• Primal Groudon becomes -> became
• While regular Groudon still has some niche -> still has a niche

edited 24th Jun '16 4:04:35 AM by Arivne

I meant to say ''is weak to" rather than "to weak". As for Knock Off, it's nearly 100 Power, not 100%.

Thank you, and as always here it is once more to ensure their are no errors.

Also thanks for the comment, I changed the article as I wasn't trying to suggest his marital problems caused his neuroses, just a few of the worse ones.

• Cool Loser: Despite all the bad luck he suffers from and his slightly eccentric hobbies, Frasier is a charming, highly intelligent, cultured and reasonably wealthy man.
• Gentleman and a Scholar: While Frasier certainly can be arrogant and snobbish, he is nevertheless a well-intentioned and caring man. Even going as far as missing out on a ceremony to honour him, just to help a man he had just met cope with his ex-wife getting remarried. He’s also well-educated and very well read.
• Hair-Trigger Temper: While not aggressive, Frasier isn’t a hard man to irritate or anger. Generally, annoyances mounting up on him will cause him to suddenly explode and start ranting about every little thing that annoys him.
• Missing Mom: Frasier’s mother has been dead for several years by the time the series starts.
• The Shrink: Before the series, Frasier was a practicing psychiatrist; however upon moving to Seattle, he got a job as and spent the series working as a radio shrink. However, towards the end he began to realise he missed being able to do more for his patients.

• Bunny-Ears Lawyer: Niles suffers from multiple neuroses of his own, ranging from eccentric, like his germaphobia, to serious, for example the many scars that his marital problems have caused. Nevertheless he is an accomplished and quite capable psychiatrist.
• Gentleman and a Scholar: Just like his brother, while Niles can be arrogant and elitist, he is both highly educated and well-read, but also very caring and compassionate towards his patients.
• The Shrink: Niles is a well-respected psychiatrist, even Frasier once acknowledges he might be the better of the two.

• The Lad-ette: While certainly not un-feminine, Roz has a strong masculine side. It’s revealed in one story that she is not only one of Martin’s poker buddies, but she apparently knows more dirty jokes than the rest of them.

• Spoiled Brat: Maris is of a very rich family, she likewise displays multiple signs of arrogance, selfishness and entitlement throughout the series.

• Brainy Brunette: Lilith is an accomplished researcher and psychiatrist, as well as being a very well read woman, who has long dark brown hair.

• Sharp-Dressed Man: His wardrobe consists of an array of expensive suits.

I think I missed two:

The Shrink: Niles is a well-respected psychiatrist, even Frasier <— replace with period or add the word and.

Spoiled Brat: Maris is of a very rich family, she likewise <— replace with period or add the word and.

Thank you.

Okay here is the next few edits I would like to add to the pages How to Get Away with Murder and How to Get Away with Murder respectively.

• Beard of Sorrow: Grows one in the second half of Season Two to signify the he’s not dealing with the trauma of: discovering that Rebecca's dead, him shooting Annalise and the revelation that Annalise knew his mother.
• Protectorate: Annalise does what she does in order to protect him in particular, revealed in season two to be because she was involved in the case that drove Wes's mother to suicide.

• The Alcoholic: Starting 'What Happened to You, Annalise?’ Asher begins noticeably drinking more and getting drunk more often, using the alcohol to help him come with his father’s suicide and his murder of Emily Scinclair. He even admits to Wes when discussing what they’ve been through that ‘whiskey helps.’
• Bunny-Ears Lawyer: Almost literally being a law student. Despite Asher’s arrogance, immaturity, ignorance and gullibility, whenever he seriously puts his mind towards something he proves that he is honestly quite sharp and observant. He is likewise just as knowledgeable on the law as the rest of the K5 are. Annalise even lampshades it 'There's My Baby' telling him that he’s a lot smarter than most people believe he is.
• Innocent Bigot: Asher often says things that end up offending people and comes across as quite intolerant at times. However it’s repeatedly shown that the majority of this stems not from malice, but simply cause his life has been so sheltered he honestly doesn’t grasp what he’s saying is offensive. A good example of this is his speech to Oliver after he discovers he’s HIV positive. His knowledge of what this means is quite shallow and he completely misses how inappropriate it is for him to talk about it with someone who is basically a stranger, however his sentiment is entirely caring and supportive.
• Sharp-Dressed Man: In contrast to the other members of the K5’s normally more laidback attire’s Asher wardrobe is formal, smart and expensive; he commonly wears a suit even when not at work or in class.

• Pet the Dog: Despite not really liking Asher, he is the most supportive member of the K5 towards him following his breakdown even letting him stay with him and Oliver while he recovers and indulging his growing need for alcohol.
• Screw This, I'm Outta Here: He makes it known several times that he won't hesitate to jump ship in Season 2. When Annalise, Bonnie, and Asher show up with Sinclair's body, he and Michaela both refuse to assist disposing of the body and try to leave.

• The Chessmaster: It’s not demonstrated often, but in ‘Meet Bonnie’ it’s revealed he expertly crafted a false trail as a countermeasure on the off chance anyone investigated into him disposing of Rebecca’s body. With a little prompting his plan goes off without a single hitch and not only permanently removes Levi from the picture, but destroys the others faith and interest in Wes investigation, all the while keeping the fact that Rebecca's dead secret.
• The Gadfly: In ‘Hello Raskolnikov’ he takes a lot of pleasure out of leading Asher along with an obviously fake story of his relatives ordering a hit on a guy and it happening right in front of him when he was a child. All because Asher both ignorantly and innocently asked, as an Italian-American, if he had any relatives in the Mafia.

• Bait the Dog: In his first appearance he comes across as arrogant and snobbish, but still appears to be a caring father and an overall reasonable man. As his appearances continue it becomes more and more clear just how unpleasant a human being he truly is.

• Odd Friendship: She and Lila Stangard are probably the last two characters you would have expected to be friends, but the brief scenes we see of them interacting suggest that they genuinely enjoyed hanging out together. Subverted, as it turns out while Rebecca liked her, Lila was a False Friend towards her.

• Blackmail: Uses footage of the K5 at the Hapstall house the night Analise was shot, and sends it to Connor, threatening to send it to police unless they produce one million dollars by a set time.
• The Cracker: Philip is accomplished at computer hacking, good enough to rival Oliver. He uses this first to catch Oliver when he tries to hack him, and later in his attempts to blackmail the K5. It’s through this talent that he manages to prove his half-brother is the real murderer.
• Stalker without a Crush: Upon his return, he begins stalking members of the K5 and filming them, then sending them the videos to show that he’s not messing around.

• Ensemble Dark Horse:
  • Asher became very popular with the audiences during the second half of Season One due to his Character Development and reveal of his multiple Hidden Depths, changing him from an immature arrogant fratboy, into a complex and ignorant but well-meaning young man. It’s helped by the near universal agreement that Matt McGorry nails the role.
  • Eve received a huge fanbase after her first appearance, due to Famke Janssen’s stunning performance, and being an interesting and likeable Badass Gay Lawyer. It’s also much helped by her relationship with Annalise which is both complex and sweet with Eve being more or less the only person who can easily make Annalise happy. It’s not uncommon to see fans wishing that she will return in the future, or that Annalise had taken her offer to live together in New York.

Are their any errors?

edited 27th Jun '16 1:13:25 AM by MGD107

Adding new words for Video Games folder in Drunk with Power.

• A similar case also happened to Kurome Ankokuboshi in its sequel, Megadimension Neptunia VII. After she receives the aforementioned Rei's CPU Memory from Croire, she proceeds to speed up the fusion between Zerodimension and Hyperdimension. Then, before the Final Battle ensues, she fuses all of Dark CPUs which contains all the powers of CPUs she stole into one ultimate Dark CPU, alongside with her negative energy. As a result, she becomes more powerful, although she loses her calm demeanor and become unhinged.

Adding a new trope for Megadimension Neptunia VII character page.

• World's Strongest Woman: She is arguably the second strongest character in the Neptunia series. Although not as powerful as Rei from Victory, she nonetheless capable to pull the same trick as Rei does, even though she spends most of her time as a wandering spirit. Coupled with her cunning and deceitful nature, she's capable to show herself as the most dangerous main antagonist in the franchise.

edited 27th Jun '16 6:50:38 AM by Strafe2409

Hi MGD107.

Oops, looked like I missed seeing that today. I will review it now.

• Beard of Sorrow: Grows one in the second half of season two to signify the he’s not dealing with the trauma of: discovering that Rebecca's dead, him shooting Annalise and the revelation that Annalise knew his mother.

• The Alcoholic: Starting in 'What Happened to You, Annalise?’ Asher begins noticeably drinking more and getting drunk more often, using the alcohol to help him come cope with his father’s suicide and his murder of Emily Scinclair...

• Bunny-Ears Lawyer: Almost literally, with him being a law student... Annalise even lampshades it in 'There's My Baby', telling him that he’s a lot smarter than most people believe he is.
• Innocent Bigot: ...However, it’s repeatedly shown that the majority of this stems not from malice, but simply because his life has been so sheltered he honestly doesn’t grasp that what he’s saying is offensive... His knowledge of what this means is quite shallow and he completely misses how inappropriate it is for him to talk about it with someone who is basically a stranger , . However, his sentiment he is entirely caring and supportive.
• Sharp-Dressed Man: In contrast to the other members of the K5’s normally more laidback attire’s, Asher's wardrobe is formal, smart and expensive; he commonly wears a suit even when not at work or in class.

• Pet the Dog: Despite not really liking Asher, he is the most supportive member of the K5 towards him following his breakdown, even letting him stay with him and Oliver while he recovers and indulging his growing need for alcohol.

• The Chessmaster: It’s not demonstrated often, but in ‘Meet Bonnie’, it’s revealed he expertly crafted a false trail as a countermeasure on the off chance anyone investigated into him disposing of Rebecca’s body. With a little prompting his plan goes off without a single hitch and not only permanently removes Levi from the picture, but destroys the others faith and interest of the others in the Wes investigation, all the while keeping the fact that Rebecca's is dead secret.
• The Gadfly: In ‘Hello Raskolnikov’, he takes a lot of pleasure out of leading Asher along with an obviously fake story of his relatives ordering a hit on a guy and it happening right in front of him when he was a child...

• Bait the Dog: ...As his appearances continue With more appearances, it becomes more and more clear just how unpleasant a human being he truly is.

• Blackmail: [Put a pronoun or name here] Uses footage of the K5 at the Hapstall house the night Analise was shot, and sends it to Connor, threatening to send it to police unless they produce one million dollars by a set time.

• Ensemble Darkhorse:
  • Asher became very popular with the audiences during the second half of Season One due to his Character Development and reveal of his multiple Hidden Depths, changing him from an immature arrogant fratboy, into a complex and ignorant but well-meaning young man...
  • ...It’s not uncommon to see fans wishing that she will return in the future, or that Annalise had taken her offer for them to live together in New York.

Note: You should be using double quotes for episode titles.

Note: using 's as a contraction for is is technically allowed. But normally, it is written out, except for it's, he's, and she's.

Questions and comments welcome.

edited 27th Jun '16 9:25:47 PM by war877

Thank you War 877, and don't worry, I can wait and you are the one whose doing me a favour here after all.

Also thanks about the whole double/single quotation marks, I've got it now.

Okay here is the corrected version, any other errors?

• Beard of Sorrow: Grows one in the second half of season two to signify the he’s not dealing with the trauma of: discovering that Rebecca's dead, him shooting Annalise and the revelation that Annalise knew his mother.
• Protectorate: Annalise does what she does in order to protect him in particular, revealed in season two to be because she was involved in the case that drove Wes's mother to suicide.

• The Alcoholic: Starting in 'What Happened to You, Annalise?’ Asher begins noticeably drinking more and getting drunk more often, using the alcohol to help him cope with his father’s suicide and his murder of Emily Scinclair. He even admits to Wes when discussing what they’ve been through that ‘whiskey helps.’
• Bunny-Ears Lawyer: Almost literally, with him being a law student. Despite Asher’s arrogance, immaturity, ignorance and gullibility, whenever he seriously puts his mind towards something he proves that he is honestly quite sharp and observant. He is likewise just as knowledgeable on the law as the rest of the K5 are. Annalise even lampshades it in “There's My Baby”, telling him that he’s a lot smarter than most people believe he is.
• Innocent Bigot: Asher often says things that end up offending people and comes across as quite intolerant at times. However, it’s repeatedly shown that the majority of this stems not from malice, but simply because his life has been so sheltered he honestly doesn’t grasp that what he’s saying is offensive. A good example of this is his speech to Oliver after he discovers he’s HIV positive. His knowledge of what this means is quite shallow and he completely misses how inappropriate it is for him to talk about it with someone who is basically a stranger. However he is entirely caring and supportive.
• Sharp-Dressed Man: In contrast to the other members of the K5’s normally more laidback attire, Asher’s wardrobe is formal, smart and expensive; he commonly wears a suit even when not at work or in class.

• Pet the Dog: Despite not really liking Asher, he is the most supportive member of the K5 towards him following his breakdown, even letting him stay with him and Oliver while he recovers and indulging his growing need for alcohol.
• Screw This, I'm Outta Here: He makes it known several times that he won't hesitate to jump ship in Season 2. When Annalise, Bonnie, and Asher show up with Sinclair's body, he and Michaela both refuse to assist disposing of the body and try to leave.

• The Chessmaster: It’s not demonstrated often, but in “Meet Bonnie”, it’s revealed he expertly crafted a false trail as a countermeasure on the off chance anyone investigated into him disposing of Rebecca’s body. With a little prompting his plan goes off without a single hitch and not only permanently removes Levi from the picture, but destroys the faith and interest of the others in the investigation, all the while keeping the fact that Rebecca is dead secret.
• The Gadfly: In “Hello Raskolnikov”, he takes a lot of pleasure out of leading Asher along with an obviously fake story of his relatives ordering a hit on a guy and it happening right in front of him when he was a child. All because Asher both ignorantly and innocently asked, as an Italian-American, if he had any relatives in the Mafia.

• Bait the Dog: In his first appearance he comes across as arrogant and snobbish, but still appears to be a caring father and an overall reasonable man. With more appearances, it becomes more and more clear just how unpleasant a human being he truly is.

• Odd Friendship: She and Lila Stangard are probably the last two characters you would have expected to be friends, but the brief scenes we see of them interacting suggest that they genuinely enjoyed hanging out together. Subverted, as it turns out while Rebecca liked her, Lila was a False Friend towards her.

• Blackmail: Philip uses footage of the K5 at the Hapstall house the night Analise was shot, and sends it to Connor, threatening to send it to police unless they produce one million dollars by a set time.
• The Cracker: Philip is accomplished at computer hacking, good enough to rival Oliver. He uses this first to catch Oliver when he tries to hack him, and later in his attempts to blackmail the K5. It’s through this talent that he manages to prove his half-brother is the real murderer.
• Stalker without a Crush: Upon his return, he begins stalking members of the K5 and filming them, then sending them the videos to show that he’s not messing around.

• Ensemble Dark Horse:
  • Asher became very popular with the audience during the second half of Season One due to his Character Development and reveal of his multiple Hidden Depths, changing him from an immature arrogant fratboy, into a complex and ignorant but well-meaning young man. It’s helped by the near universal agreement that Matt McGorry nails the role.
  • Eve received a huge fanbase after her first appearance, due to Famke Janssen’s stunning performance, and being an interesting and likeable Badass Gay Lawyer. It’s also much helped by her relationship with Annalise which is both complex and sweet with Eve being more or less the only person who can easily make Annalise happy. It’s not uncommon to see fans wishing that she will return in the future, or that Annalise had taken her offer for them to live together in New York.

@ Strafe2409

• A similar case also happened to -> happens (as per How to Write an Example - Write in Present Tense)
• all of Dark CPUs which contains all the powers of CPUs -> all of the Dark CPUs which contain all the powers of the CPUs
• alongside with -> along with
• she loses her calm demeanor and become unhinged. -> becomes

• She is arguably the second strongest -> She is the second strongest (as per Examples Are Not Arguable)
• she nonetheless capable to pull -> she is nonetheless capable of pulling
• she's capable to show herself -> she's capable of showing herself

edited 28th Jun '16 2:36:56 AM by Arivne

I have another tropes to add in for the Awesome moments in the Overlord Light Novel:

• In Volume 5, when a knight by the name of Climb happens to see Sebas' powers after Sebas rescued a boy from being beaten up, he decides to ask Sebas to teach him to be strong. Due to a lack of time, Sebas decides to test him by attacking Climb with one punch and a very powerful bloodlust. At first Climb couldn't move a step fearing of death, even Brain Unglaus who happens to be watching their training. However when Climb thinks of Princess Renner, Climb manages to move and evade Sebas' punch, impressing Sebas in the process. That kid's will is very strong.
• In Volume 6, The entire battle between Sebas and members of the Six Arms, except Succulent, who was taken out by Climb and a nameless rogue. Lets just say Sebas manages to Curb Stomp all 5 members with a single hit! They should have listened to his warning:
  Sebas: [To the 4 members of the Six Arms] Don't try to annoy me by attacking me one at a time. If all of you come at once, you might last 10 seconds. [He manages to take them out in just 20 seconds.]

edited 10th Jul '16 6:20:00 PM by andrew369

As no one's replied in two days, I'm going to take it their are no more errors and I can add them to the respective pages.

Thank You.

hello, andrew369.

The first half has no errors.

• In Volume 6, The entire battle between Sebas and members of the Six Arms, except Succulent, who was taken out by Climb and a nameless rogue... They should have listened to his warning:
  Sebas: [To the 4 members of the Six Arms] Don't try to annoy me by attacking me one at a time. If all of you come at once, you might last 10 seconds. [He manages to take them out in just 20 seconds.]

Okay here are some edits I wish to add to Grimm and Grimm respectively.

• An Ax To Grind: His preferred weapon in the promotional materials. He finally starts wielding it in the season five finale, using it to kill multiple Black Claw soldiers.
• Character Development: With each passing season Nick gets more confident and used to his life as a Grimm and more willing to embrace his heritage. This also has the side effect of making him more ruthless, he goes from having trouble killing in self-defence during the first season to almost choking an evil Wesen to death while interrogating him in the fourth. By the fifth season Nick has fully embraced his Grimm nature, and lost any hesitation to killing evil Wesen when he knows the law can’t punish them.
• I Just Want to Be Normal: His immediate reaction to learning of his inheritance is to ask how he can stop it. By Season Four he’s grown out of this.
• Nerves of Steel: Has yet to seriously lose his cool and is essentially never flustered or indecisive. He finally does snap in “Cry Havoc”, after his mother is murdered; however even then he only needs around five minutes before he’s back in control and plotting his vengeance.
• You Killed My Parents: To Kimura. In truth, his mother was alive and it was a friend, who was mistaken for her, who died in the crash.
  • After his mother really is murdered, he turns this on Kenneth and kills him within barely an hour of her death.

• The Lancer: As his partner Hank is this to Nick when involving crime scenes, criminals and police matters. As learns more about what’s out there and what Nick is, he also shares this role with Monroe about Wesen matters as well.

• Story-Breaker Power: Eve has telekinesis strong enough to lift a grown human off the ground, has the ability to basically rewrite someone's anatomy (removing a guy's mouth, ears and eyes by doing little more than touching him for a few seconds) and force someone into a coma and subsequently bring them back and that's just scratching the surface of what it's implied Hexenbiests are capable of. She's easily one of the most powerful characters in the show. Subverted, however when she tries to take on the dangerous Zauberbiest Conrad Bonaparte. While she gives a good fight, Conrad proves to be not only just as powerful but more skilled and fatally wounds her.

• Used to Be a Sweet Kid: Adalind admits when asked about her teenager years that she used to be a shy nerd who never got involved in any form of teenage rebellion. She also admits that she initially went into law to prove that she was different from her mother. Initially though, it didn’t work.
• Single Woman Seeks Good Man: Adalind’s attraction towards Nick stems in a large part from her admiring as well as benefiting from his chivalry, mercy and compassion. After a life time of virtually all her relationships (not just romantic, but platonic and even family) being people who were using her for either her powers or her body, having somebody in her life who not only forgives her and supports her attempt for redemption, but also voluntarily cares for her when she’s at her most vulnerable, with no strings attached, really matters to her.

• Bad Boss: Bonaparte causally sacrifices his loyal followers to further his plan, including purposely setting up several agents to die just to provide a distraction for his real plan. Truthfully he doesn’t care how many dies, just as long as their death serves his agenda.
• The Chessmaster: Everything from: the leaving behind and subsequent deaths of three of his operatives at the safe house Diana was kept at, Zuri’s capture and breaking for information and Hank’s kidnapping, were all part of his plan to lure the three greatest threats (Nick, Trubel and Eve respectively) away from Hadrian’s Wall’s base so it would be vulnerable to an attack by his soldiers.
• Diabolical Mastermind: Being one of the leaders of Black Claw, Bonaparte has incredible resources under his control including an army of Wesen fanatics, several assassins and multiple agents who have infiltrated virtually every major government and civil organisation.
• Evil Sorcerer: Bonaparte is a pureblood Zauberbiest and one of the most powerful magic users to appear, possessing powers that go beyond what most Hexenbiest’s and Zauberbiest’s are capable of. He was even able to beat Eve in a magical duel. Bonaparte uses his vast powers solely to further Black Claw’s, and thus his own, agenda.
• Fantastic Racism: Being a Wesen supremacist, Bonaparte holds a dislike for humans; when Renard offers Meisner a place in Black Claw, Bonaparte says "There are no exceptions" and starts choking Meisner.
• Faux Affably Evil: Always sauvé and soft spoken, conversations with Bonaparte normally start off friendly and end with him threating to murder your children all without ever changing the tone of his voice. However when too many things go wrong for him the entire act goes straight out of the window.
• Lack of Empathy: Bonaparte doesn’t even pretend to possess a single drop. Not just towards humans but also towards other Wesen, including his own loyal followers. When Diana kills Rachael, his only response is to be impressed she was able to at such a young age.
• Torture Technician: Bonaparte uses his vast magical powers for amongst other things to torture people for information. When searching for the volume of Grimm’s linage, he tortures Nick with a combination of extreme physical pain and nightmarish hallucinations of his son Kelly for its location.
• Virtue Is Weakness: Dismiss Renard’s mercy towards Meisner as “weak” and a danger to their cause.
• Villain Respect: Acknowledges he underestimated Nick, after Nick singlehandedly kills Conrad’s entire army, before immediately trying to kill him himself.

Rachel Wood Played By: Anne Leighton

• Cats Are Mean: Rachel is a Lowen, and likewise a firm supporter of Black Claw’s agenda.
• Evil Redhead: Rachel is a murderer, conspirator and a Wesen supremacist who also has long red hair.
• Character Death: At the hands of Diana.
• Cruel and Unusual Death: Diana kills her, by having her own bedding slowly wrap around her, until it covers her whole body and suffocates her; with Rachel awake and begging for her life the whole time.
• Dark Chick: She fulfils this role for Black Claw operations in Portland, and especially for Conrad Bonaparte.
• Fantastic Racism: Just like other members of Black Claw, Rachel sees Wesen as the Master Race, and believes they should rule the world.
• Girl Friday: Subverted, she appears to be this to Andrew Dixon and later Sean Renard, being their media relations agent. However she is truly loyal to Black Claw, and directly involved in Dixon’s murder.
• Smug Snake: She greatly underestimates the danger she is in from Diana, right up till she kills her.
• The Vamp: Forms a relationship with Renard to help convince him to join Black Claw. Potentially Subverted, as it’s implied she genuinely did have some feelings for him but valued the organisations agenda over them.

edited 1st Jul '16 6:52:43 AM by MGD107

• This also has the side effect of making him more ruthless, he goes from having trouble killing in self-defence during the first season to almost choking an evil Wesen to death while interrogating him in the fourth.

Either the comma should be a colon or this should be broken up into two sentences.

• and lost any hesitation to killing evil Wesen -> Either in killing OR any reluctance to kill

This violates Example Indentation. It should be:

• As his partner Hank is this to Nick when involving crime scenes, criminals and police matters.

The word "As" is unnecessary. -> "His partner Hank is this..."

The second "has" is unnecessary as the first "has" can apply to subsequent examples. Also needs some more commas to separate clauses.

The following isn't strictly speaking improper English, but the change makes it easier to read and less likely to be misunderstood.

• Adalind admits when asked about her teenager years that she -> When asked about her teenager years, Adalind admits that she

• Bonaparte causally sacrifices his loyal followers -> casually

• Truthfully he doesn’t care how many dies, just as long as their death serves his agenda. -> how many die, as long as their deaths serve

• has incredible resources under his control including -> has incredible resources under his control, including

• what most Hexenbiest’s and Zauberbiest’s are capable of. -> Hexenbiests and Zauberbiests

• Always sauvé and soft spoken -> suave

• end with him threating to murder -> threatening

• However when too many things -> However, when too many things

• for amongst other things to torture -> for amongst other things, torturing

• Grimm’s linage -> Grimm’s lineage

Again, the following isn't strictly speaking improper English, but the change makes it easier to read and less likely to be misunderstood.

• he tortures Nick for its location with a combination of extreme physical pain...

• the organisations agenda -> the organisation's agenda

edited 2nd Jul '16 4:29:49 AM by Arivne

Thank you Arivne, okay so here is the corrected version, any more errors?

• An Ax To Grind: His preferred weapon in the promotional materials. He finally starts wielding it in the season five finale, using it to kill multiple Black Claw soldiers.
• Character Development: With each passing season Nick gets more confident and used to his life as a Grimm and more willing to embrace his heritage. This also has the side effect of making him more ruthless: he goes from having trouble killing in self-defence during the first season to almost choking an evil Wesen to death while interrogating him in the fourth. By the fifth season Nick has fully embraced his Grimm nature, and lost any reluctance to killing evil Wesen when he knows the law can’t punish them.
• I Just Want to Be Normal: His immediate reaction to learning of his inheritance is to ask how he can stop it. By Season Four he’s grown out of this.
• Nerves of Steel: Has yet to seriously lose his cool and is essentially never flustered or indecisive. He finally does snap in “Cry Havoc”, after his mother is murdered; however even then he only needs around five minutes before he’s back in control and plotting his vengeance.
• You Killed My Parents:
  • To Kimura. In truth, his mother was alive and it was a friend, who was mistaken for her, who died in the crash.
  • After his mother really is murdered, he turns this on Kenneth and kills him within barely an hour of her death.

• The Lancer: His partner Hank is this to Nick when involving crime scenes, criminals and police matters. As learns more about what’s out there and what Nick is, he also shares this role with Monroe about Wesen matters as well.

• Story-Breaker Power: Eve has telekinesis strong enough to lift a grown human off the ground, the ability to basically rewrite someone's anatomy (removing a guy's mouth, ears and eyes by doing little more than touching him for a few seconds), the power of forcing someone into a coma and subsequently bringing them back, and that's just scratching the surface of what it's implied Hexenbiests are capable of. She's easily one of the most powerful characters in the show. Subverted, however when she tries to take on the dangerous Zauberbiest Conrad Bonaparte. While she gives a good fight, Conrad proves to be not only just as powerful but more skilled and fatally wounds her.

• Used to Be a Sweet Kid: When asked about her teenager years, Adalind admits that she used to be a shy nerd who never got involved in any form of teenage rebellion. She also admits that she initially went into law to prove that she was different from her mother. Initially though, it didn’t work.
• Single Woman Seeks Good Man: Adalind’s attraction towards Nick stems in a large part from her admiring as well as benefiting from his chivalry, mercy and compassion. After a life time of virtually all her relationships (not just romantic, but platonic and even family) being people who were using her for either her powers or her body, having somebody in her life who not only forgives her and supports her attempt for redemption, but also voluntarily cares for her when she’s at her most vulnerable, with no strings attached, really matters to her.

• Bad Boss: Bonaparte casually sacrifices his loyal followers to further his plan, including purposely setting up several agents to die just to provide a distraction for his real plan. Truthfully he doesn’t care how many die, as long as their deaths serve his agenda.
• The Chessmaster: Everything from: the leaving behind and subsequent deaths of three of his operatives at the safe house Diana was kept at, Zuri’s capture and breaking for information and Hank’s kidnapping, were all part of his plan to lure the three greatest threats (Nick, Trubel and Eve respectively) away from Hadrian’s Wall’s base so it would be vulnerable to an attack by his soldiers.
• Diabolical Mastermind: Being one of the leaders of Black Claw, Bonaparte has incredible resources under his control, including an army of Wesen fanatics, several assassins and multiple agents who have infiltrated virtually every major government and civil organisation.
• Evil Sorcerer: Bonaparte is a pureblood Zauberbiest and one of the most powerful magic users to appear, possessing powers that go beyond what most Hexenbiests and Zauberbiests are capable of. He was even able to beat Eve in a magical duel. Bonaparte uses his vast powers solely to further Black Claw’s, and thus his own, agenda.
• Fantastic Racism: Being a Wesen supremacist, Bonaparte holds a dislike for humans; when Renard offers Meisner a place in Black Claw, Bonaparte says "There are no exceptions" and starts choking Meisner.
• Faux Affably Evil: Always suave and soft spoken, conversations with Bonaparte normally start off friendly and end with him threatening to murder your children all without ever changing the tone of his voice. However, when too many things go wrong for him the entire act goes straight out of the window.
• Lack of Empathy: Bonaparte doesn’t even pretend to possess a single drop. Not just towards humans but also towards other Wesen, including his own loyal followers. When Diana kills Rachael, his only response is to be impressed she was able to at such a young age.
• Torture Technician: Bonaparte uses his vast magical powers for amongst other things, torturing people for information. When searching for the volume of Grimm’s lineage, he tortures Nick for it’s location with a combination of extreme physical pain and nightmarish hallucinations of his son Kelly for its location.
• Virtue Is Weakness: Dismiss Renard’s mercy towards Meisner as “weak” and a danger to their cause.
• Villain Respect: Acknowledges he underestimated Nick, after Nick singlehandedly kills Conrad’s entire army, before immediately trying to kill him himself.

Rachel Wood Played By: Anne Leighton

• Cats Are Mean: Rachel is a Lowen, and likewise a firm supporter of Black Claw’s agenda.
• Evil Redhead: Rachel is a murderer, conspirator and a Wesen supremacist who also has long red hair.
• Character Death: At the hands of Diana.
• Cruel and Unusual Death: Diana kills her, by having her own bedding slowly wrap around her, until it covers her whole body and suffocates her; with Rachel awake and begging for her life the whole time.
• Dark Chick: She fulfils this role for Black Claw operations in Portland, and especially for Conrad Bonaparte.
• Fantastic Racism: Just like other members of Black Claw, Rachel sees Wesen as the Master Race, and believes they should rule the world.
• Girl Friday: Subverted, she appears to be this to Andrew Dixon and later Sean Renard, being their media relations agent. However she is truly loyal to Black Claw, and directly involved in Dixon’s murder.
• Smug Snake: She greatly underestimates the danger she is in from Diana, right up till she kills her.
• The Vamp: Forms a relationship with Renard to help convince him to join Black Claw. Potentially Subverted, as it’s implied she genuinely did have some feelings for him but valued the organisation’s agenda over them.

edited 2nd Jul '16 12:34:28 PM by MGD107

Nerves of Steel: ... He finally does snap in “Cry Havoc”, after his mother is murdered; however, even then he only needs around five minutes before he’s back in control and plotting his vengeance.

Story-Breaker Power: ... Subverted, however, when she tries to take on the dangerous Zauberbiest Conrad Bonaparte...

The Chessmaster: Everything from All of :  the leaving behind and subsequent deaths of three of his operatives at the safe house Diana was kept at, Zuri’s capture and breaking for information and Hank’s kidnapping, were all part of his plan to lure the three greatest threats (Nick, Trubel and Eve respectively) away from Hadrian’s Wall’s base so it would be vulnerable to an attack by his soldiers.

Virtue Is Weakness: Dismisses Renard’s mercy towards Meisner as “weak” and a danger to their cause.

Girl Friday: ... However, she is truly loyal to Black Claw, and directly involved in Dixon’s murder.

Thank you War877.

I think I was wrong with the removal of that "The". It is a tricky sentence. The removal of the colon is still necessary.