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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

AmbarSonofDeshar Since: Jan, 2010
#59976: May 29th 2016 at 8:42:58 AM

A friend of mine and I have a running joke that if the inversion really did invert all morals, than Iron Man should have become a celibate, humble, teetotaling, Well-Intentioned Extremist.

Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Since: Dec, 2015 Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
#59977: May 29th 2016 at 8:59:40 AM

Is anyone going to comment on Mr. Gryle?

Why so serious?
kirbystarwarior Since: Apr, 2011
#59978: May 29th 2016 at 9:45:14 AM

[tup] To Adam.

And on a side-note, I graduated from high school yesterday.

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#59979: May 29th 2016 at 9:51:06 AM

Congratulations, Kirby. Abstaining from Gryle, mostly because I'm unfamiliar regarding the Discworld series.

edited 29th May '16 9:53:03 AM by AustinDR

LargoQuagmire Since: Jan, 2010 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
#59980: May 29th 2016 at 9:59:47 AM

I have no idea on Gryle. I'm leaning downvote, bc more of the summary given seemed to be about his employer's actions. I'd vote yes for the employer, if that's up for debate.

[tup] Black Adam.

Also, the person asking about Heinrich Zemo - there were definitely Captain America Omnibus editions, but I have NO CLUE where they left off or what decades they cover. I'll look around for you.

LargoQuagmire Since: Jan, 2010 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
#59981: May 29th 2016 at 10:06:24 AM

Holy god that Captain America Omnibus is selling for 225 dollars US on Amazon. surprised I assume a local college library may have it in a reference section? My university had large comic collections for research purposes. That may be your best bet.

HamburgerTime The Merry Monarch of Darkness from Dark World, where we do sincerely have cookies Since: Apr, 2010 Relationship Status: I know
The Merry Monarch of Darkness
#59982: May 29th 2016 at 10:07:52 AM

[tup] Black Adam. Never thought I'd see a version of him here in a million years.

The pig of Hufflepuff pulsed like a large bullfrog. Dumbledore smiled at it, and placed his hand on its head: "You are Hagrid now."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#59984: May 29th 2016 at 10:15:13 AM

[up] Original Black Adam loved his family and had the occasional Anti-Hero role. This Black Adam isn't anything even resembling that.

I think I'll have to [tdown] Gryle.

edited 29th May '16 10:17:52 AM by Scraggle

lrrose Since: Jul, 2009
#59985: May 29th 2016 at 10:16:00 AM

[tdown]Gryle. He's just a creepy hitman.

Irene Siiiiiiiiiiiip from Digital World Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: The Skitty to my Wailord
Siiiiiiiiiiiip
#59986: May 29th 2016 at 10:19:08 AM

[tup] Black Adam

...It's weird having so many websites and no way to properly display now, lol.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#59987: May 29th 2016 at 10:58:56 AM

  • The Hidden One from season 3 was a cruel, arrogant, hot-tempered deity, driven by lust for power and a hatred of mankind. Ten thousand years ago, due to his evil nature his fellow gods banished him to the Catacombs, where he seduced Pandora, promising he would make her his wife if she freed him. Giving her a box which could steal a god’s power, he sent her to slaughter his fellow deities, leaving him as the one all-powerful god. However, using a mystical artifact to strip him of his power, the humans imprisoned him in the Catacombs. In the present, Pandora managed to free him, however due to Abbie Mills his power source was lost. Obsessed with restoring himself, his minions summoned monsters from all over world to Sleepy Hollow so he could feed off them, causing many deaths. When The Kindred and Kindress instead fell in love, the furious Hidden One murdered them. Despite initial appearances the Hidden One proved too only care about power, mistreating and berating Pandora. Attempting to kill the witnesses the Hidden One trapped himself in the same spell that originally defeated him, where he learned that acting in good faith Pandora had told the original humans of its existence. Not caring that she saved him for a second time, the Hidden One proceeded to torture his wife. When Jenny Mills tried to stop him from restoring himself, The Hidden One cursed her boyfriend Joe Corbin to become a Wendigo, forcing Jenny to kill Joe. Finally regaining his former powers, the Hidden One imprisoned Pandora then bragged how he would wipe mankind out gradually, so he could bask in their fear and suffering.
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  • Artificial Maiden: Kai is a 240-year-old alchemist who runs a business that specializes in cloning. Kai places the clones in a virtual paradise before harvesting their bodies for his clients. Realizing that his assistant had given a clone of Satonaka to a married couple, he murders him, and sends the Crow to retrieve the body; the Crow murders Musumi's parents, and reduces him to a brain. Learning that Musumi was still alive, he kidnaps him, and implants a parasitic plant inside Nakahara, stating that she would die if her brain isn't transferred to a clone's body. An apathetic man, Kai isn't above murdering his own Jinzous if they were to inconvenience him, and not even Satonaka is immune to his wrath; he tricks Satonaka into releasing him from a trap by appealing to his sensitive nature, only to stab him to death. Desiring only to make a profit, Kai cares nothing on the effect his illegal acts have on those whose lives he creates.
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  • Dragon Prince:
    • High Prince Rolestra is a petty, cruel Evil Prince with a very high level of depravity. After murdering his father at the tender age of eight, he ascends to Princemarch's throne and used his position to play other princes against each other for his own amusement, nearly causing several wars. When his request for a Sunrunner was refused he trapped and addicted one to drugs, then slowly cut off the Sunrunner's supply of drugs when he ceased to be useful. He then attempted to use these drugs to enslave and rape another Sunrunner, Sioned, and when he fails burns his mistress Palila alive and banishes two of his children, one being a newborn. When we next hear about him he has cornered the market on the only medicine to a plague and only supplies it when enough of his rivals have died of it. When he enters a war with his greatest rival left alive, Rohan, he salts a battlefield after losing a battle out of spite.
    • Princess Ianthe, Rolestra's daughter, is a cruel and heartless woman, and just as vile as her father. She causes several of the events that lead to Palila being burned alive and her sisters being exiled simply because she didn't like them. She then concocts a plan with her father to kidnap, drug, and rape Rohan to make her son heir to the Desert. When his wife, Sioned, comes to rescue him she locks her in a lightless room and has her guards rape her for a month straight. When she finally lets them go, she releases them into the desert with only a little water and no food.
    • Mireva, a sorceress from the mountains, is a bitter and power-hungry woman. Prior to the events of the story, she introduced drugs to Palila that kickstarted several of Rolestra's villainous acts. She helps Ianthe's sons escape the fire she dies in and trains them into her tools to try to conquer the world with. While orchestrating these plots, she enslaves a princess with a mirror, forcing her to raise an army to try to invade Princemarch, which would cause the death of hundreds of people, if not more. She kidnaps a princess named Ruala with latent sorcerer powers to use as a power source and tries to blackmail another prince to do the same to him. As part of this plot she also impersonates a princess and rapes Rohan's son Pol, then has one of Ianthe's sons nearly rape the princess disguised as Pol. She also threatened to murder two children due to wanting revenge on a Sunrunner.
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edited 31st May '16 7:09:58 AM by ACW

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bobg Since: Nov, 2012
#59988: May 29th 2016 at 11:29:59 AM

[up] Do pedophilic serial killer Jerry the fiddler and General Ripper Sergeant Atkin stay on the literature?

jjj
username2527 Since: Nov, 2013
#59989: May 29th 2016 at 11:50:53 AM

[tup]Adam

[tdown]Grytle, doesn't do enough

MiraiYuji Since: Dec, 2015
#59990: May 29th 2016 at 12:07:23 PM

Reading tropes to search for a CM candidate, I've noticed someone from Rosario Vampire: Brightest Darkness. Her name is Falla Cii, the original one (the other is a much more sympathetic counterpart). The one I'm talking about is Falla CII. I'll admit that I didn't read the fic. But if her tropes are anything to go by, here is a list of her misdeeds :

  • Disgusted by Complica's nice Girl attitude, she sent her to death, deeming her a disgrace to their species, and she's happy about her death. She was her younger sister, mind you.

  • She killed her parents, destroyed her hometown, and wiped out the entire chronofly race (with the exception of herself and Luna) simply because she was jealous that Luna was chosen to be the next queen over her. Judging by her words to her Good Counterpart in Act V chapter 37, she actually seemed to be proud of having killed her own family and entire species.

  • In an effort to get Luna to finish the spell and restore her magic, she fakes wanting to reform through several acts of kindness... and in chapter 11, as soon as Luna truly believes that Falla can change and restores her magic, Falla promptly bisects her in cold blood and then proceeds to rub it in the gang's faces that it was all an act.

Falla: You seem so surprised. Surely you didn't truly believe that I had any intention of remaining here at this filthy school, being denied my magic and crown, being forced to remain by her side as an equal? You filthy worms, why would I ever choose family over power?

Shortly after, she tells Tsukune that when she's finished killing them, she'll visit Tsukune'smom and cousin and show them just "what kind of friend she really is".

  • In Act V chapter 35, she gleefully tears her Good Counterpart's wings, arm, and leg off and crushes her ankle.

Kyouko: You... how could you? Evil!Falla: Very easily, actually.

  • Shortly after, she openly urges Kyouko to scream and beg for her lives before she kills her. Fortunately, after being reconstructed by Ceal, her good counterpart saves Kyouko from death at her hands and attacks her.

  • A minor one compared to the others, but it's revealed in Act VI that the reason Luna could never get a date is because Falla lied to all of her potential suitors that their father would execute any of them who tried to approach Luna without hesitation, for no reason other than to be a Jerkass.

Heinous standard : as I didn't read the fic, I don't know about it's heinous standard. However, I'm pretty sure that being a smug, sadistic, genocidal sociopath who doesn't care about anyone other than herself (not even family is an exemption) and never felt any remorse about her actions, put her definitely among the most heinous villains at very least.

Other characters's reaction :

  • If it takes forcing yourself to pretend to reform as a good person to get your own sister to trust you again, you know that you are bad.
  • As you can guess with the two quotes above, the others characters are horrified by her actions.
  • Her good counterpart thinks that she deserves to die.
  • No tears were shed at both of her deaths.

Redeeming factors : As far as I know, there was no redeeming factors. Even without reading the fic, I can tell that she doesn't. Why ?

Freudian excuse ? I can't think of any backstory horrible enough to excuse the fact that you cares more about yourself than your own family, (and brag out it, for that matter), to the point of actually killing them, destroying your hometown and your race.

  • Loved ones ? She doesn't even love her own family. I wonder if she even know what love is.

  • Standards ? She had no qualms to commit genocide because things weren't going her ways, nor dismembering her good countertpart just to make her suffer. The only standards I can think of would be about rape (because it's often considered a special kind of evil), but being more interrested in power than anything else, I wouldn't be surprised if she was asexual.

Verdict : well, if no more information is gathered by someone who actually read the fic, I think she's an easy keeper.

edited 29th May '16 2:05:44 PM by MiraiYuji

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#59991: May 29th 2016 at 12:07:41 PM

[up][up][up] I would say so, since they're book-exclusive.

edited 29th May '16 12:08:01 PM by ACW

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DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#59992: May 29th 2016 at 12:16:39 PM

[up][up] I'm not comfortable [tup]'ing a character from a work the proposer didn't check out before proposing.

MiraiYuji Since: Dec, 2015
#59993: May 29th 2016 at 12:40:59 PM

I've at least checked the tropes applying to her. I'll check the rest later to cement her statut as a CM.

zcooper95 Since: Oct, 2014 Relationship Status: And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson
#59994: May 29th 2016 at 12:43:06 PM

The whole reason I posted this was to see if there was someone who HAD read the book and could give a second opinion.

edited 29th May '16 12:43:16 PM by zcooper95

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#59995: May 29th 2016 at 12:56:44 PM

I have read it but I can't quite remember Gryle doing much onscreen. Let me go through it again later and I'll give some more detailed thoughts, ok?

zcooper95 Since: Oct, 2014 Relationship Status: And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson
#59996: May 29th 2016 at 2:05:49 PM

Thank you. I'm just going off what I know of him since I have only seen the movie but don't have the book on me at the moment.

MrThorfan64 Since: Oct, 2015
#59997: May 29th 2016 at 2:45:06 PM

Euron Greyjoy for the ASOIAF section? The Damphair chapter the GRRM Reaper read out has Euron claim to have killed three of his brothers, Euron raped his brother Aeron, and continues to perform atrocities across the world, such as his treatment of the warlocks he captured. Or should we wait till the Damphair chapter is available?

doineedaname from Eastern US Since: Nov, 2010
#59998: May 29th 2016 at 2:56:31 PM

Huh. I'd expected it to take longer before someone brought that sample chapter GRRM read up, at least long enough for someone say not to bring it up.

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#59999: May 29th 2016 at 3:02:26 PM

@Mr Thorfan: Wait till Euron's arc is done.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#60000: May 29th 2016 at 3:04:17 PM

Euron should not be discussed or proposed seriously until Winds of Winter is out and we have closure on him.

Now, regarding the Dark Souls 3 villains...if it's all the same, I was going to ask if I could try the writeups there? The current ones...I feel they're a bit lacking.


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