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• Shin Megami Tensei: Calling himself a part of YHVH that was discarded, Lucifer, King of the Abyss, under the alias of Louis Cyphre, was behind Lilith's actions thought the game in an attempt to convince the reincarnation of Adam to follow the violent Darwinist path of Chaos, helping and congratulating him if he does and trying to trick him to his death if he doesn't, completely avoiding direct confrontation in all the routes. Several years later, while watching Aleph in his disguise, Lucifer prepares for the rebirth of his hated enemy Satan in an attempt to save his realm from its annihilation at orders of YHVH. Failing to prevent Satan's rebirth, Lucifer intends to use the dragon Kuzuryu, given to him by YHVH Himself, to destroy the highly populated Tokyo Millenium and its new Eden, partially doing it in the Chaos route before fighting against Satan and YHVH Himself, freeing humanity and demonhood from His rule after destroying the biggest human population centers of the post apocalyptic world. More affable than in the past, Lucifer sought to protect his people as its affable king while still carrying his ideology of freedom over all.

• Shin Megami Tensei II: Zayin was created artificially as part of the Project Messiah in order to be the Messiah's bodyguard, but his destiny was to be much more. Introduced as a loyal Temple Knight working for the Center, capital of the totalitarian and hypocrite Tokyo Millennium, Zayin eventually discovered their murderous corruption thanks to his time with Aleph and decided to rebel against it, broadcasting the truth and gaining a loyal following in the religious district of Holytown. Forced for The Elders—actually corrupt archangels—into going to the Center after they threatened Holytown, Zayin is captured and then freed after Aleph defeats them. Building a new Eden—filled with people whose "knowledge" was erased—alongside the archangel Gabriel, Zayin is revealed to be actually a part of Satan, God's instrument to judge all creatures. Embracing his role, Satan prepares to destroy both the human and demon worlds, leaving only the peaceful people of Eden to build the Millennium Kingdom, managing to doing it in the Law route before ending his judgement by judging his creator, God Himself. Having finished his holy duty, Satan leaves the future to Aleph and Hiroko before returning to the soil from where he was created.

Edited by KazuyaProta on Jan 21st 2019 at 9:01:52 AM

, @ Kazuya Prota

If you want to make a second post before I've responded to the previous post, you can just edit the previous post to add the new information. It makes it easier to respond.

Willing to sacrifice and risk his allies if needed, Yamato eventually reveals his goal: to survive Polaris's trial and ask her to rebuild the world into his ideal meritocracy, where class, race and gender would be ignored in favor of merit. Yamato also tries to convince The Protagonist to follow him while allowing him to choose otherwise. Sacrificing himself to save the protagonists—including his ideological rival Ronaldo—after acknowledging their merit in Ronaldo's route and committing suicide after losing in Anguished One's, Yamato always fights until the very end. If the protagonist joins him, Yamato successfully leads his team to victory, creating a world where merit rules, the so-called useless ones are discriminated against and Yamato and his retinue rule over all.

Lucifer, King of the Abyss, under the alias of Louis Cyphre, calls himself a part of YHVH that was discarded. He was behind Lilith's actions throughout the game in an attempt to convince the reincarnation of Adam to follow the violent Darwinist path of Chaos, helping and congratulating him if he does and trying to trick him to his death if he doesn't, completely avoiding direct confrontation in all the routes. Several years later, while watching Aleph in his disguise, Lucifer prepares for the rebirth of his hated enemy Satan in an attempt to save his realm from its annihilation at the orders of YHVH. Failing to prevent Satan's rebirth, Lucifer intends to use the dragon Kuzuryu, given to him by YHVH Himself, to destroy the highly populated city Tokyo Millenium and its new Eden. <- period He partially does so in the Chaos route before fighting against Satan and YHVH Himself, freeing humanity and demonhood from His rule after destroying the biggest human population centers of the post apocalyptic world. More affable than in the past, Lucifer seeks to protect his people as its affable king while still carrying out his ideology of freedom over all.

I broke up several sentences in the above paragraph because they were so long and hard to read.

Zayin was created artificially as part of the Project Messiah in order to be the Messiah's bodyguard, but his destiny was to be much more. Introduced as a loyal Temple Knight working for the Center, capital of the totalitarian and hypocritical Tokyo Millennium, Zayin eventually discovered their murderous corruption thanks to his time with Aleph and decided to rebel against it, broadcasting the truth and gaining a loyal following in the religious district of Holytown. Forced by The Elders—actually corrupt archangels—into going to the Center after they threatened Holytown, Zayin is captured and then freed after Aleph defeats them. Building a new Eden—filled with people whose "knowledge" was erased—alongside the archangel Gabriel, Zayin is revealed to be actually a part of Satan, God's instrument to judge all creatures. Embracing his role, Satan prepares to destroy both the human and demon worlds, leaving only the peaceful people of Eden to build the Millennium Kingdom, managing to doing it in the Law route before ending his judgement by judging his creator, God Himself. Having finished his holy duty, Satan leaves the future to Aleph and Hiroko before returning to the soil from where he was created.

Edited by Arivne on Jan 22nd 2019 at 6:03:08 AM

Thanks you!!. And sorry, I was writing on the "Add post" section to use the Preview but I accidentally posted it, so I decided to left it there.

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Yomo

A large sheep mink and one of the Musketeer Squad. He's friends with Nami, who likes sleeping on him.

• Gentle Giant: He's one of the largest minks, so big he stands out in every crowd shot, and the quietest musketeer. He's also gentle enough to allow Nami to sleep on him.
• Interspecies Friendship: During their time together in Zou, Nami bonded with Yomo, to the point he wants to follow the Straw Hats because Nami likes sleeping on him.
• Meaningful Name: Naturally, a sheep mink is called Yomo, which means "wool".
• The Quiet One: Most of the musketeers are quite loud and hot-blooded while Yomo rarely, if ever, speaks.
• Tummy Cushion: Yomo is huge and covered in wool, making him a perfect giant pillow for Nami a-la Totoro.

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For Tonoyasu

• Gonk: Sure, he's so poor he probably doesn't take much care of his appearance, but even so, he's quietly goofy, with a large and round head.
• Pauper Patches: He is from Ebisu, a very poor town where inhabitants cannot afford the necessary food to sustain themselves, so it seems natural that he cannot buy a new kimono to replace his patched one.

For Absalom

• Expy: With his devil fruit power and his body parts' transplant, he's a mix of the invisible man and Frankenstein's monster

For Hogback:

• Expy: He's a Mad Doctor who makes corpses ready to be revived into zombies, do we need to add more?

For Kuroobi:

• Combat Pragmatist: The first thing he does during his battle with Sanji is to move the battlefield underwater, where he has a clear advantage, then he hits Sanji to make him release more air and would've won had Sanji not bitten Kuroobi's gills. Once the two are out of water, Sanji wins easily.
• Uncertain Doom: After being arrested, it's not clear if he's still in prison or has been executed. It doesn't help that Luffy doesn't see him in Impel Down.
• Underestimating Badassery: Mocks Sanji saying he's too weak to defend Nami, only to be on the receiving end of a No-Holds-Barred Beatdown at the end of the fight.

For Black Beard

• Badass Beard: One of the most straightfoward example of this trope. True to his epithet, he has a black beard which gets longer in every appearance, reflecting his current status and power. In his first appearance, when he's still a noone, he has barely a Perma-Stubble, then, after he becomes a Warlord, he has a short black beard. After the two year time-skip, during which he has become one of the Four Emperors, he has a long braided beard, just like the real life Blackbeard.

Edited by fishysaur on Jan 23rd 2019 at 2:34:48 AM

Some more tropes and characters

for the Straw Hat grand fleet

• A Day in the Limelight: Each of the captains stars in a short story in The stories of the self-proclaimed Straw Hat Grand Fleet, showing what they do once they've become allies with the Straw Hats.

For Orlumbus

• Face of a Thug: His face is really scary looking, and his imponent body doesn't help, but he's actually the nicest of the Fleet captains.
• The Pirates Who Don't Do Anything: Literally. After becoming an ally of the Straw Hats, he has officially become a pirates, however, in his first mission as a pirates, after plundering the inhabitants of an island, he feels so sorry he ends up giving back the loot and his own treasure. Orlumbus himself comments his first mission has been a failure.

Edited by fishysaur on Jan 23rd 2019 at 2:23:55 AM

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He's friends with Nami, <- comma who likes sleeping on him.

He's one of the largest minks, so big he stands out in every crowd shot, and the quietest musketeer. He's also gentle enough to allow Nami to sleep on him.

Sure, he's so poor he probably doesn't take much care of his appearance, but even so, he's quietly goofy, with a large and round head.

He is from Ebisu, a very poor town where inhabitants cannot afford the necessary food to sustain themselves, so it seems natural that he cannot buy a new kimono to replace his patched one.

With his devil fruit power and his body parts' transplant, he's a mix of The Invisible Man and Frankenstein's Monster.

^ Just doing some Blue Linking.

After being arrested, it's not clear if he's still in prison or has been executed. <- period It doesn't help that Luffy doesn't see him in Impel Down.

^ This was a run-on sentence connected together by a comma splice.

True to his epithet, he has a black beard which gets longer in every appearance, reflecting his current status and power. In his first appearance, when he's still a nobody, he has barely a Perma-Stubble, then, after he becomes a Warlord, he has a short black beard. After the two year time-skip, during which he has become one of the Four Emperors, he has a long braided beard, <- comma just like the real life Blackbeard.

His face is really scary looking, and his impotent (?) body doesn't help, but he's actually the nicest of the Fleet captains.

Literally. After becoming an ally of the Straw Hats, he has officially become a pirate. <- period However, in his first mission as a pirate, after plundering the inhabitants of an island, he feels so sorry he ends up giving back the loot and his own treasure. Orlumbus himself comments that his first mission has been a failure.

^ The first sentence was a run-on sentence connected together with a comma splice.

Edited by Arivne on Jan 24th 2019 at 4:57:46 AM

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For Blackbeard:

• Dressed to Plunder: He's one of the characters who best represents the stereotype of the pirate: it helps that he's based off of the real-life Blackbeard. His ugly face is like the "brute" type of pirate and he wears a bandana since the beginning. While he mostly averts it in his first appearance, following his joining of the Seven Warlords of the Sea, he starts wearing a trenchcoat and a bicorn hat over his bandana, which become even more luxurious after he becomes an Emperor.

some tropes for Orlumbus

• Badass Mustache: His face wouldn't be as intimidating without his Hulk Hogan-style mustache, which is very befitting for a pirate admiral.
• Dressed to Plunder: He's dressed like a stereotypical pirate with a bicorn hat, a long trenchcoat (albeith with nothing underneath) and has braided hair. Ironically, at first he's an adventurer, and becomes a pirate only after becoming an ally of the Straw Hats.
• Muscles Are Meaningful: He's exaggeratedly muscular and his whippings can break a stone arena or can launch a man at great speed to the other side of an island.
• Top-Heavy Guy: Not that his legs are skinny, but the top half of his body is huge and his arms are twice as long as the legs.

for Columbus (yeah, like Christopher Columbus)

Orlumbus's Number Two and the second in command of the Yonta Maria fleet. In contrast to Admiral Orlumbus, she's a short girl with a very bad temper.

• Huge Guy, Tiny Girl: An extreme case, as she's a very short girl while Orlumbus is more than twelve feet tall and nearly as wide.
• Neat Freak: Just like Orlumbus, but even more extreme in her case, since she even beats those who doesn't do well the cleaning performances.
• Nice Hat: Like her admiral, she wears a bicorn hat.
• No Historical Figures Were Harmed: Downplayed, but she too takes some inspirations from Christopher Columbus, and even has the same name.
• Number Two: She's Orlumbus's second in command and they contrast with each other, with one being big and, overall, nice, andthe other being tiny and short-tempered. Their names are also a pun on their sizes.
• Punny Name: Made evident with her commander. Orlumbus is very big, and his name is a combination of Columbus and "O" which, in Japanese, means "big", while "co/ko" means "small".
• Sword and Gun: Her weapons are a large gun and a sword almost as long as she's tall.
• Tiny Tyrannical Girl: She's a short girl, as her name says, and the second in command of the Yonta Maria fleet, but while Orlumbus is a Gentle Giant, in her only appearance she's seen beating a man for not having properly cleaned the deck.

Edited by fishysaur on Jan 27th 2019 at 8:14:33 AM

Trope: Third Eye

• Agarest Series: The Agarest games have an entire race who are born with a third eye on their foreheads, the Oneltes. It is representative of how most of them have powers to see the future. However, many Oneltes hide their third eye in order to blend in with humans and avoid prosecution. Every Agarest game has one such character: In the first Agarest, it's Vira-Lorr, in Agarest: Zero, it's Cal-Vina, and Agarest 2 has Li Ra-Lua.

@fishysaur

He's one of the characters who best represents the stereotype of the pirate: <- colon it helps that he's based off of the real-life Blackbeard. His ugly face is like the "brute" type of pirate and he wears a bandana. While he mostly averts it in his first appearance, following his joining of the Seven Warlords of the Sea, he starts wearing a trenchcoat and a bicorn hat over his bandana, which become even more luxurious after he becomes an Emperor.

The "His ugly face" part was awkwardly shoved into a sentence, so I removed it and made it a separate sentence.

He's dressed like a stereotypical pirate with a bicorn hat, a long trenchcoat (albeith with nothing underneath) and has braided hair. Ironically, at first he's an adventurer, and becomes a pirate only after becoming an ally of the Straw Hats.

He's exaggeratedly muscular and his own whippings can break a stone arena or can launch a man at great speed to the other side of an island.

Not that his legs are much skinny, but the top half of his body is huge and his arms are twice as long as his legs.

In contrast to Admiral Orlumbus, she's a short girl with a very bad temper.

An extreme case, as she's a very short girl while Orlumbus is more than twelve feet tall and nearly as much as wide.

Just like Orlumbus, but even more extreme in her case, since she even beats those who don't clean things well.

Like her admiral, she wears a bicorn hat.

She's Orlumbus's second in command <- no comma and they contrast with each other, with one being big and, overall, nice, and the other being tiny and short-tempered.

Orlumbus is very big, and his name is a combination of Columbus and "O" which, in Japanese, means "big", while "co/ko" means small.

She's a short girl, as her name says, and the second in command of the Yonta Maria fleet, but while Orlumbus is a Gentle Giant, in her only appearance she's seen beating a man for not having properly cleaned the deck.

@Ruben Ferro

The Agarest games have an entire race who are born with a third eye in their foreheads, the Oneltes...Every Agarest game has one such character: In the first Agarest <- no comma it's Vira-Lorr, in Agarest: Zero <- no comma it's Cal-Vina, and Agarest 2 has Li Ra-Lua.

Dynamo5

• Cuckold: A rare Gender Inverted. It is implied that thought out there relationship up to when they started dating until his death Captain Dynamo/William Warner constantly cheated on his wife Maddie Warner, with Maddie being in the complete dark until after his death. Chrysalis also counts. For years she had a affair with Captain Dynamo/William Warner even having and raising a daughter with him. She thought they were in love and was told that Captain Dynamo/William Warner plan to leave Maddie Warner for her. She was shock to learn that she was not the only woman he was sleeping with and that Dynamo 5 are his illegitimate children.
• Dating Catwoman: Deconstruction. Captain Dynamo had an affair with one of his enemies, a supervillain named Chrysalis. And had a daughter with her who he help rase While Chrysalis herself said that they were in love, that did not stop her and her daughter for taking advantage of his death to Impersonation him to increases there power base. Untimatelly Chrysalis a amoral and ruthless criminal who is willing to murder anyone in her way who only escape justice because of her affair with Captain Dynamo.
• Everyone Has Standards: Captain Dynamo/William Warner despite never trying to catch Chrysalis because of his afair with her still try to stop her crimes, as Chrysalis noticed, despite there relationship were she claims they were in love, she could never turn him to her side and he did everything to stop her criminal career.
• Jerkass: This series does not paint a good picture of Captain Dynamo/William Warner. It was learn thought the series that he was a habitual womanizer who cheated on his wife, Maddie Warner, and fathered numerous children, even when it compromised his crime-fighting duties. Use his shape shafting power to impersonated women husband to sleep with them. Had a relationship behind his wife back with Chrysalis one of his Arch-Enemy even fathered a daughter with her, Cynthia, who inherited all of Dynamo's powers, and goes by the code name Synergy. According to Chyrsalis, Dynamo was a presence in Synergy's life, and led a second life behind Warner's back as he helped to raise her. And unknown to Chrysalis he was cheating on her as well. Finally we learn that he fathered a child with an alien woman that he had met in outer space, after coming to the aid of her malfunctioning starship. Because of the taboo of raising a half-breed on her world, she came to Earth to give custody of their son to Dynamo. Because he viewed the child as a threat to his marriage, he left the infant at a F.L.A.G. research facility, where the child grew up without parents. When he began to bond with Dr. Bridges, one of the scientists there, the two were separated, and Dynamo refused Bridges' pleas to free the boy from the facility.
• Jerk with a Heart of Gold: However despite his faults it was implied in the series that Captain Dynamo/William Warner truly did love his wife Maddie Warner and his best friend Augie Ford. Care for his former superhero partner Quake. And aside from the cheating and womanizing took his crime-fighting duties as protecter of Tower City seriously.
• Plot-Triggering Death: The thing that start off the series Captain Dynamo/William Warner death and his window Maddie Warner discovering his black book of women he cheat on her with. Realizing Tower City still need a protecter she use the book to locates five young people she believes could be his illegitimate children, Warner exposes them to the same radiation that Dynamo had been exposed to forty years earlier, unlocking their own latent superhuman abilities, with each one manifesting one of the five powers that their father possessed. Warner train the five young people not only into a team, but into a family as well.

Edited by AmazingCartoonHero on Jan 25th 2019 at 11:46:35 AM

Game: Agarest: Generations of War

And Then What?: When you defeat one of the (otherwise redeemable) villains, one of your party members, Murmina, wants to finish him off. However, the protagonist stands between them to stop Murmina and asks her what exactly she plans to do after her revenge. He is trying to see whether she truly only lives for vengeance and whether she is as consumed by hate as she claims.

@Amazing Cartoon Hero

A rare Gender-Inverted. It is implied that throughout their relationship, <- comma from when they started dating until his death, <- comma Captain Dynamo/William Warner constantly cheated on his wife Maddie Warner, with Maddie being in the complete dark until after his death. Chrysalis also counts. For years she had a affair with Captain Dynamo/William Warner, <- comma even having and raising a daughter with him. She thought they were in love and was told that Captain Dynamo/William Warner planned to leave Maddie Warner for her. She was shocked to learn that she was not the only woman he was sleeping with and that Dynamo 5 are his illegitimate children.

Captain Dynamo had an affair with one of his enemies, a supervillain named Chrysalis, <- comma and had a daughter with her, <- comma who he help raise. <- period While Chrysalis herself said that they were in love, that did not stop her and her daughter from taking advantage of his death to impersonate him to increase their power base. Ultimately, <- comma Chrysalis, <- comma a amoral and ruthless criminal who is willing to murder anyone in her way, <- comma who only escapes justice because of her affair with Captain Dynamo.

Despite never trying to catch Chrysalis because of his affair with her, <- comma Captain Dynamo/William Warner still tries to stop her crimes, as Chrysalis noticed. <- period Despite their relationship were (she claims they were in love), she could never turn him to her side and he did everything to stop her criminal career.

This series does not paint a good picture of Captain Dynamo/William Warner. It was revealed in the series that he was a habitual womanizer who cheated on his wife, Maddie Warner, and fathered numerous children, even when it compromised his crime-fighting duties. He used his shape shifting power to impersonate women's husbands in order to sleep with them. He had a relationship behind his wife's back with Chrysalis one of his Arch Enemies, <- comma and even fathered a daughter with her, Cynthia, who inherited all of Dynamo's powers, and goes by the code name Synergy. According to Chrysalis, Dynamo was a presence in Synergy's life, and led a second life behind Warner's back as he helped to raise her. And Unknown to Chrysalis, <- comma he was cheating on her as well. Finally, <- comma we learn that he fathered a child with an alien woman that he had met in outer space, after coming to the aid of her malfunctioning starship.

However, <- comma despite his faults, <- comma it was implied in the series that Captain Dynamo/William Warner truly did love his wife Maddie Warner and his best friend Augie Ford <- no period and cared for his former superhero partner Quake. And aside from the cheating and womanizing, <- comma he took his crime-fighting duties as protector of Tower City seriously.

The thing that starts off the series is Captain Dynamo/William Warner's death and his widow Maddie Warner discovering his black book of women that he cheated on her with. Realizing Tower City still needs a protector, <- comma she uses the book to locate five young people she believes could be his illegitimate children. <- period Warner exposes them to the same radiation that Dynamo had been exposed to forty years earlier, unlocking their own latent superhuman abilities, with each one manifesting one of the five powers that their father possessed. Warner trains the five young people not only into a team, but into a family as well.

Edited by Arivne on Jan 26th 2019 at 2:07:27 AM

@Ruben Ferro

When you defeat one of the (otherwise redeemable) villains, one of your party members, Murmina, wants to finish him off. However, the protagonist stands between them to stop Murmina and asks her what exactly she plans to do after her revenge. He is trying to see whether she truly only lives for vengeance and whether she is as consumed by hate as she claims.

I can't see anything wrong with the English in that example.

Here's another example to proofread:

For Release the Spyce:

• Evil Is Sexy: Kurara Tendo a.k.a. The Sparrow Woman has a beautiful design due to her sultry black and red kimono dress, cute face and blonde hair. However, she is Tsukikage member's most personal foe as she is one of the Higher-ups of an organization known as Moryo that operates on Sorasaki City, a Bad Boss towards her subordinates as she has no hesitation to punish them when they failed her and tries to brainwash people on a Global Scale so that she could rule them easily.

Game: Suikoden I

• Gravity Is a Harsh Mistress: When your party reaches the end of Dragon's Den the cave suddenly widens and the party walks off a cliff. However, they do not fall down until one of your party members points out that they are standing in the middle of nothing.

@Elfen Lied Fan 90

Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

Kurara Tendo, <- comma a.k.a. The Sparrow Woman, <- comma has a beautiful design due to her sultry black and red kimono dress, cute face and blonde hair. However, she is the Tsukikage members' greatest (?) foe, <- comma as she is one of the higher-ups of an organization known as Moryo that operates on Sorasaki City, a Bad Boss towards her subordinates (she does not hesitate to punish them when they fail her) and tries to brainwash people on a global scale so that she can rule them easily.

Edited by Arivne on Jan 27th 2019 at 3:53:56 AM

@Ruben Ferro

When your party reaches the end of Dragon's Den, <- comma the cave suddenly widens and the party walks off a cliff. However, they do not fall down until one of your party members points out that they are standing in the middle of nothing.

• Ambiguous Situation: While we can see the reason why Hiro and Naomi failed to connected in their Franxx due to him tainted with Zero Two blood, some fans theorize the reason why they can't connected because Naomi sexuality. It's never stated if she was a lesbian or a bisexual and we never know how her relationship with Hiro or if she ever develop some one-side love to him. After she freed from cryogenic sleep, she shown become close with Ikuno and probably become a girlfriend to her. Which it can strengthens this theory.

Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

While we can see the reason why Hiro and Naomi failed to connect in their Franxx is due to him being tainted with Zero Two blood, some fans theorize the reason why they can't connect is because of Naomi's sexuality. It's never stated if she is a lesbian or bisexual and we never know how her relationship with Hiro ended (?) or if she ever developed a one-side love for him. After she is freed from cryogenic sleep, she is shown to become close with Ikuno and probably becomes a girlfriend to her, <- comma which it can strengthens this theory.

Edited by Arivne on Jan 29th 2019 at 2:56:02 AM

Some tropes for Holdem

• Astonishingly Appropriate Appearance: Holdem's name comes from the card game "Texas Holdem Poker" and Kamjiro's mane (the lion in his belly), fittingly, resembles a poker chip.
• Tattooed Crook: Both his shoulders are tatooed and he's a nasty pirate who doesn't have any problem with hurting a little girl.

for Dobon

• Astonishingly Appropriate Appearance: Although it's possibly an effect of his hippo SMILE, his wide mouth and nose make his face similar to that of an hippo.
• Wardens Are Evil: Well, when you work for Kaido you can't be a good guy, and Dobon is the deputy warden of the prison mines, where he constantly overworks the prisoners and mutilates anyone who attempts to rebel.

P.s. SMILE is written all capital

Edited by fishysaur on Jan 28th 2019 at 8:49:22 AM

The Wizard of Oz

Mordor: The region of Oz that the Wicked Witch rules as her domain has this vibe to it during later parts of the movie; Dark,cloudy skies, high mountains, dangerous creatures such as the flying monkeys, and the Witch's castle on a mountain the center of it all.

This is a more improved version to my recent edit in The Wizard of Oz. I'd be greatful someone can please fix any mistakes I've made and insert the edit.

Edited by Rippingtons60 on Jan 28th 2019 at 9:01:34 AM

@fishysaur

Tattooed Crook: Both his shoulders are tattooed, <- comma and he's a nasty pirate who doesn't have any problem with hurting a little girl.

@Rippingtons 60

The region of Oz that the Wicked Witch rules as her domain has this vibe to it during later parts of the movie: <- colon Dark, <- space cloudy skies, high mountains, dangerous creatures such as the flying monkeys, and the Witch's castle on a mountain at the center of it all.

This is a more improved version of my recent edit in The Wizard of Oz. I'd be grateful if someone could please fix any mistakes I've made and insert the edit.

• Dynamo5
• Bastard Bastard:
  • Cynthia. Out of all Captain Dynamo/William Warner illegitimate children she was the one more interested using her powers for her own gain then helping Tower City. With it being implied that she and her mother were taking advantage of Captain Dynamo/William Warner death to impersonate him to increase their power base.
  • Father Gideon/ Michael. The son of Maddie and her former fiance Tom. When there relationship fall apart and Maddie left Tom two weeks before there wedding. While Maddie want to be in Michael life, Tom sue for full custody, and after a ugly custody battle Maddie back off. According to Maddie Michael was a trouble child in boarding school to do horrible things to the other children. Angry at Maddie for abandoning him and blaming her for his father death because Tom become alcoholic and his liver gave out. He took the alias Father Gideon to get close to Cynthia. Restore her memories. Seduce her to get her to work together to kill Dynamo 5 and his mother while promising to help free Cynthia mother which he does not plan to do.
• Daddy's Girl: Implied with Cynthia. According to Chrysalis Captain Dynamo/William Warner was close to Cynthia and he told her that flying with her was one of the happiest times of his life. Cynthia outright question if Dynamo 5 were worthy of inheruting there father name and pointed out she was the one he rasie.
• Heroic Bastard: Dynamo 5 are a group of five young people who learn that the superhero Captain Dynamo was there father. Four of them were unknowing born out of wedlock and unknowing rase by step fathers who did not know they were not there biological children because Captain Dynamo use his shape shifting power to impersonate them to sleep with there wives. While the fifth mother was abandon after he sleep with her not knowing he father a child. Despite there flaws and mistakes as superheroes, they show themselves to be good young people who want to protect Tower City.
• Irony: Out of all of Captain Dynamo numerous illegitimate children, the one he personally raised, and the one that inherent all his powers become a super-villain, while the ones that never know him and only get one of his powers become heroes.
• Karma Houdini Warranty: Chrysalis was never caught by Captain Dynamo because of there affair before the series those he did try to stop her crimes. In the series after her plan with her daughter to taking advantage of Captain Dynamo death to impersonate him to increase their power base failed. She and her daughter were capture. She was finally send to jail and serrate from her daughter who had the memory of her mother wipe from her mind.
• Secret Other Family: Captain Dynamo/William Warner was not only was cheating on his wife Maddie Warner with one of his enemies Chrysalis but he had a daughter with her name Cynthia. Captain Dynamo/William Warner had second life behind his wife back as he helped to raise Cynthia with Chrysalis. He was there at Cynthia birth while missing Maddie Warner award. He and Chrysalis exposed Cynthia to the same radiation that Captain Dynamo/William Warner use to gain his superpowers and Captain Dynamo/William Warner train Cynthia to use her powers.
• Undignified Death: Captain Dynamo the worlds greatest hero did not die heroic in some battle or saving the world. He die in bed be poison by the woman he was sleeping with. His body was left with his superhero costumes so people can identify him. Luckily for Captain Dynamo details of his death was keep secret from the pubic.