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LaundryPizza03 Maintenance? from Texas Since: Aug, 2020
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#101: Feb 20th 2021 at 11:19:50 AM

Nu Speling's Self-Demonstrating description is hard to read.

An izi wey tu sho the adiense that This Iz The Feucher iz foar on-skreen riting tu bi speld diferentli, implyeeng that ofishal speling rulz hev chanjd. Usualy the intendid implikashin iz that the speling haz bin reformd tu deel with difikolt wurdz, but sinse the set dezinerz usualy arint orthografik riform speshalists, nor hav much tym tu pondr sutltys, it ken end up luking lyk the syn riterz just kudnt spel veri wel.
Anothr putenshol prablim iz thuh Eetrnal Eenglish ishu — if yor stori is set thri thouznd yirz in the fewchur, won myt expekt that the langwij had chanjd mor then just in a fiw of the spelings.
This trohp iz waer speling riform iz usd az a wey of shoawyng that the stori iz set in a diferent tym. It dosnt covr Reel Lyf atempts tu riform the langwij, or in-stori atempts tu riform the langwij exept wer theve bekom suxesfol and the nu speling is ubikwitis. It iz allso not tu bi konfusd with Funetik Aksent.

Edited by LaundryPizza03 on Feb 20th 2021 at 1:20:07 PM

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mightymewtron Angry babby from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Angry babby
#102: Feb 20th 2021 at 11:41:27 AM

[up] I suggest we move that to SelfDemonstrating.Nu Speling and rewrite the main page with normal spelling.

I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.
bwburke94 Friends forevermore from uǝʌɐǝɥ Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: RelationshipOutOfBoundsException: 1
Friends forevermore
#103: Mar 8th 2021 at 12:02:20 PM

I agree with that idea.

I had a dog-themed avatar before it was cool.
ATricksterArtist kiby :] from in your house (Not-So-Newbie) Relationship Status: Faithful to 2D
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#104: Mar 13th 2021 at 6:10:07 PM

I could do the rewrite with normal spelling.

(Don't) take me home.
GoldenCityBird from the UK Since: Oct, 2018
#105: Apr 24th 2021 at 9:24:51 AM

Sorry for reviving this thread abrubtly, but Elisa Maza has just been created. It honestly just reads like a dull first-person character page without a unique voice, and there are multiple grammatical errors and a couple of zero-context examples.

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bwburke94 Friends forevermore from uǝʌɐǝɥ Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: RelationshipOutOfBoundsException: 1
Friends forevermore
#106: Apr 24th 2021 at 3:25:39 PM

[up] Nuke it.

I had a dog-themed avatar before it was cool.
RallyBot2 Since: Nov, 2013 Relationship Status: I-It's not like I like you, or anything!
bwburke94 Friends forevermore from uǝʌɐǝɥ Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: RelationshipOutOfBoundsException: 1
Friends forevermore
#108: May 24th 2021 at 8:14:36 PM

SelfDemonstrating.Scott The Woz is a stub.

I had a dog-themed avatar before it was cool.
mightymewtron Angry babby from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Angry babby
#109: May 24th 2021 at 8:16:28 PM

I don't think Scott has enough of a specific voice to be self demonstrating. Also he's not really a character so much as a caricature of his real life self, so it feels weird.

Edited by mightymewtron on May 25th 2021 at 11:24:34 AM

I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.
bwburke94 Friends forevermore from uǝʌɐǝɥ Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: RelationshipOutOfBoundsException: 1
Friends forevermore
#110: May 24th 2021 at 8:23:43 PM

So in other words: This page blows!

I had a dog-themed avatar before it was cool.
Blegh Since: Jan, 2021 Relationship Status: Owner of a lonely heart
#111: May 25th 2021 at 8:21:40 PM

[up] Does the page even need to exist? It doesn't really add any value. Everything could just go on the main page.

WarJay77 Big Catch, Sparkle Edition from The Void (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
Big Catch, Sparkle Edition
#112: Jan 20th 2022 at 12:06:34 PM

Found SelfDemonstrating.Alternate Sasha Waybright. It can't keep up the first person act for most of the examples, there's no voice, and the original work isn't even linked anywhere.

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VerySunshine Since: May, 2016 Relationship Status: Love blinded me (with science!)
#113: Mar 19th 2022 at 12:23:49 PM

Looks like the character is from Amphibia, but this might be related to a fan work called SashaAndTheFrogs. I added references to both in the description.

I'd be fine with doing a first-person edit if we keep the page, but do we have self-demonstrating character pages like this? Looks like a majority of the edits were made by one individual.

Edited by VerySunshine on Mar 19th 2022 at 1:30:41 PM

ShinyCottonCandy Industrious Incisors from Sinnoh (4 Score & 7 Years Ago) Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Industrious Incisors
#114: Mar 19th 2022 at 3:20:36 PM

Without a unique voice, the page has no reason to exist.

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Zuxtron Berserk Button: misusing Nightmare Fuel from Node 03 (On A Trope Odyssey)
#115: Feb 27th 2023 at 8:26:05 PM

The page for the NES Nightmare on Elm Street game has a Running Gag of adding a ™ symbol whenever Freddy Krueger™ is mentioned.

Personally, I think it's funny and not too distracting, so I'd be okay with keeping that.

rjd1922 he/him | Image Pickin' regular from the United States Since: May, 2013 Relationship Status: Love is for the living, Sal
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SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#117: Apr 30th 2023 at 5:46:13 PM

Crazy Survivalist's description is apparently written in the first person:

*CLICK-CLACK*

Don't you move a goddamn muscle. Thought you could sneak up on me, huh? Naw, I'm too sharp for that. 'Cause I've been preparing. Preparing... for them.

They're coming, but they're not gonna get me, not without a fight! Who's "they"? Doesn't matter! It could be an Alien Invasion, a Zombie Apocalypse, Black Helicopters from the gub'mint, the feral dregs of humanity, a divine being, some ancient evil or even butterflies! (Those are some nasty bastards.) But whatever they are, I'm prepared! I have me this bowie knife, tinfoil hat, good old two-barreled Betsy (plus her extended family), and a year's supply of food and water...

What? "Share"? "Help other survivors"? It's a dog-eat-smaller-yappy-dog world out there, "friend", and if ya ain't strong enough to defend yourself... Oh, I see what you're about, you want to stick a crazy dart in my neck and steal my stuff, don't you?! That's right, back away from the crazy person... Crazy-Prepared like a fox!

You want me to help you fight them? You can't fight them any more than an ant fights an elephant, everyone who tries ends up getting slaughtered! Ain't seen bloodshed like that since the war...

"Calm down"? I am calm! I am the very picture of calm! And rational, too! Wait a minute... you're one of THEM!

Don't you go anywhere, I'll go get the rest of my Untrusting Community to lynch you! No, better yet, my militia buddies! No matter how many orphans you save! I'll do what it takes to survive!

I also created SelfDemonstrating.Nu Speling per previous discussion.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Apr 30th 2023 at 8:59:01 AM

Rawr.
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#118: May 1st 2023 at 5:39:58 AM

Can someone please help rewrite the description?

[down] I suppose I could have waited longer than 12 hours.

Edited by SkyCat32 on May 1st 2023 at 1:21:58 PM

Rawr.
PhantomDusclops92 Slayer of YMMV complaining magnets from Do you even care? Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Charming Titania with a donkey face
Slayer of YMMV complaining magnets
#119: May 1st 2023 at 10:00:26 AM

[up]Seriously you can't wait for someone to help you? You should not come back to a thread 5 minutes after your first post to beg people to do the work for you.

Number one fan of characters that appear only once and ultimately were a recurring character either in disguise or trying a new image.
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#120: May 4th 2023 at 11:13:47 AM

Also found self demonstration on "Spell My Name with a Blank":

September 3rd 18––

My Dear T___ T___,

While it is no longer the current fashion in these tell-all times, in the 18th century and the early part of the 19th, it was practically de rigueur to refer to certain personages and locations merely by a single letter, or in some cases, a mere blank. This, no doubt, found its origin in the newspapers of the period, wishing to avoid suits at law when repeating gossip about public figures, from politicians to aristocrats and possibly even members of the R____ F____. The form was adopted by writers of novels, when obliquely referring to same or to entirely fictional characters, or even to fictional cities and counties. Often, stories that were based upon actual events would use a blank to avoid referring to real people. With that in mind, you will better understand when I tell you about what Mr. A____ said to the Countess of B____ in the gardens of _____ House when the Earl was not listening.

See also Year X, for doing the same thing with dates, as to obscure when the events in question took place as well as where.

Reading these works may have you wishing for the decoder key...or as Monsieur T____ of the French Lit Crit circle would say, the "Clef" of the Roman à Clef. Or look for a pulldown menu.

Sincerely,

Yr. Hmbl. & Obdt. Svt.
R____ S____

Rawr.
mightymewtron Angry babby from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Angry babby
#121: May 5th 2023 at 8:09:45 PM

The majority of the description is just a normal description bookended with some self-demonstration that also helps visualize the trope. It's fine to stay as-is.

I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#122: May 10th 2023 at 3:56:08 PM

Fair enough, Mew. I still need help reformatting Crazy Survivalist though.

Rawr.
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