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- Make sure that the example makes sense to both people who don't know the work AND don't know the trope.
- Wrong: The Mentor: Kevin is this to Bob in the first episode.
- Right: The Mentor: Kevin takes Bob under his wing in the first episode and teaches him the ropes of being a were-chinchilla.
- Never just put the trope title and leave it at that.
- Wrong: Badass Adorable
- Right: Badass Adorable: Xavier, the group's cute little mascot, defeats three raging elephants with both hands tied behind his back using only an uncooked spaghetti noodle.
- When is normally far less important than How.
- A character name is not an explanation.
- Wrong: Full Moon Silhouette: Diana
- Right: Full Moon Silhouette: At the end of her transformation sequence into Moon Princess Misty, Diana is shown flying across the full moon riding a rutabaga.
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Edited by Synchronicity on Sep 18th 2023 at 11:42:55 AM
Those don't look like valid examples as written to me. There's a whole lot of words, but those words don't properly establish that the parties involved are all-knowing / infallible, and it doesn't specify what actions they're taking that would be morally objectionable if they weren't all-knowing / infallible.
Agreed. The way its written doesn't seem to indicate the try.
Want to have a second opinion on this.
Since Asshole Victim seems to have some trouble examples. I wonder if this counts for Characters.Magical Girl Raising Project for Swim-Swim.
Asshole Victim: No one is mourning Swim Swim's death after Ripple puts her down for killing her best friend.
I read Asshole Victim's death cant have some type of relationship with there and is just a jerk who gets killed. If the death is some type of payback for what they did, would it be Karmic Death?
I just want to make sure on whether or not it was an example so it wouldn't be seen as rash. The answer you gave was clear.
I was thinking of adding this to Insult to Rocks. Is it an example? Better fit for something else?
Edited by Ferot_Dreadnaught on Jul 17th 2019 at 5:25:31 AM
What is the subject of the negative comparison? Is that not just a pun in a Cluster F-Bomb?
From YMMV.Young Justice
- No Yay: The season seems to be Ship Teasing Will/Artemis, which has been met with heavy backlash from the fanbase (and is also a sentiment shared by Will and Artemis themselves) due to Artemis and Wally being the Fan-Preferred Couple, as well as the weirdness of siblings-in-law getting together while their wife/sister is still alive and their relationship status with their spouse is ambiguous.
Is No Yay being used correctly or is it influenced by shipping?
If you ignore shipping, fans wouldn't want this since they are in laws and the two are still in love with their significant others.
I'm pretty sure that's being used incorrectly, since the relationship doesn't seem inherently squicky, just uncomfortable.
Edit: To clarify, a relationship that is inherently problematic, like a character and their child, can be No Yay. A relationship that fans don't like because they prefer a different one is not the trope at all.
Edited by Fighteer on Jul 17th 2019 at 2:55:06 PM
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"Not Blood Siblings is a thing, so I imagine such relationships aren't squicky enough.
Contains 20% less fat than the leading value brand!For Recap.Duck Tales 2017 S 1 E 24 The Shadow War Part II The Day Of The Ducks, I am certain this second entry is not correct.
- Took a Level in Badass:
- Donald suddenly becomes a lot more capable of effortlessly taking charge of his friends, authoritatively coordinating their attack and saying incredibly badass things practically the very second he starts talking with the smooth, dulcet tones of Don Cheadle.Don Cheadle.
- As if to compensate, this trope is inverted with Beakley, whose usual efficiency is slightly downplayed; while she's still capable of throwing down with multiple ghosts, Donald keeps stealing her thunder when it comes to the "announce the plan and make badass declarations" part of the proceedings. It's also telling that after Donald leaves her in charge of the houseboat, after confidently boasting that if he can do it "how hard can it be?", her brief tenure as captain ends with the boat on fire and sinking. Essentially, Donald and Beakley seem to briefly swap roles this episode.
Edited by LadyErinNY on Jul 17th 2019 at 2:27:06 AM
Besides, the writeup is wrong: No Yay is about creepy, not unpopular, pairings.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanFrom YMMV.Young Justice
Franchise Original Sin: Most of the more controversial and discussed aspects of Season 3 aren't new.
- The voice acting. As noted prominently in the trivia section, Young Justice has always had to employ clever audio tricks or heavily reuse voice actors, because many episodes feature so many different characters that bringing in different voice actors for each is not practical from a budget standpoint. The issues some have with the voice acting for child characters, such as Amistad and Lian, is, however, new, simply because characters of their age weren't present in prior seasons.
- Character Relationships. The show has always been weird about pairing characters, developing relationships, and teasing others, with many of the most prominent relationships being created whole cloth by the show itself, and many relationships not getting the proper development. Conner/M'gann and Wally/Artemis, as can be shown by entries covering the earlier two seasons, had some detractors because they had no basis in the original comics. Cassie/Tim are a rather infamous example of the show suddenly pairing characters with little build-up, as the two had never even been shown speaking to each other before they were stated to have gotten together, and each having more prominent love interests than each other in the comics (though they have dated in the comics, it's just not the relationship most fans of either character like). Will/Artemis, however, is controversial for
- Representation. The show has always been big on having a racially diverse cast, with characters such as Artemis getting a Race Lift, Kaldur being created to take the role of Aqualad, etc. The problem (well, one of them) with Violet, however, is that being Muslim isn't racial, though that is a very common mistake many make, and her appearance (dark skin, headscarf) fits the stereotype of what a Muslim woman looks like. A Muslim is a follower of Islam, no different than a Christian is a follower of Christianity, which are religions, not races, thus they require more than most race changes require to fully represent. And Young Justice, much like most popular entertainment, has skirted around religion, with none of the characters ever referencing it, or claiming belief or disbelief. It's obvious why the creators would want to specifically represent Muslims (as opposed to other religions) given topical events, but Violet was never a good fit given her origin of being the spirit of a Motherbox, an extraterrestrial pseudo-mystical object/being that would have no concept or connection to a human religion.
Im doubtful if any of these are true issues from the first season that became more noticeable in later season. Especially the two last bullets on relationships and representing that goes on a long rambling.
^ The troper who posted the Franchise Original Sin entries has added even more to it. It's now this (apologies for the wall of text):
- Franchise Original Sin: Most of the more controversial and discussed aspects of Season 3 aren't new.
- The voice acting. As noted prominently in the trivia section, Young Justice has always had to employ clever audio tricks or heavily reuse voice actors, because many episodes feature so many different characters that bringing in a different voice actor for each is not practical from a budget standpoint. This is usually mitigated by the talent of the voice cast (Bugg is voiced by the same actor as Wally, but you'd be hardpressed to mix them up), there being in-universe reasons for characters having similar voices (Superboy is a clone of Superman; M'gann based herself after Marie Logan) as well as the fact that most of the main characters are all voiced by different voice actors, but with each actor doing several smaller roles; but each season adds more and more characters meaning more and more roles to voice in addition to the ones that already exist, so some of the voice actors end up voicing many, many roles. The issues some have with the voice acting for child characters, such as Amistad and Lian, is, however, new, simply because characters of their age weren't present in prior seasons, and can probably be explained by the fact that they are young children being voiced by adults, with Lian being voiced by the same actress as both Jade and Paula.
- Character Relationships. The show has always been weird about pairing characters, developing relationships, and teasing others, with many of the most prominent relationships being created whole cloth by the show itself, and many relationships not getting the proper development. Conner/M'gann and Wally/Artemis, as can be shown by entries covering the earlier two seasons, had some detractors because they had no basis in the original comics. Cassie/Tim are a rather infamous example of the show suddenly pairing characters with little build-up, as the two had never even been shown speaking to each other before they were stated to have gotten together, and each having more prominent love interests than each other in the comics (though they have dated in the comics, it's just not the relationship most fans of either character like). Will/Artemis, however, is controversial for unique reasons that go beyond the usual. There are the usual shipping reasons, Artemis/Wally is arguably the most popular (canon) relationship the series has, so any teasing of pairing Artemis with someone else after Wally's death (real or not) was going to be controversial, but the fact it's with her own brother-in-law adds an extra Squick, with romantic relationships between in-laws being something that isn't really well-regarded, even if it's not actually incest, particularly when said sibling/spouse is still alive, though absent.
- Representation. The show has always been big on having a racially diverse cast, with characters such as Artemis getting a Race Lift, Kaldur being created to take the role of Aqualad, etc. The problem (well, one of them) with Violet, however, is that being Muslim isn't racial, though that is a very common mistake many make, and her appearance (dark skin, headscarf) fits the stereotype of what many assume a Muslim woman looks like. A Muslim is a follower of Islam, no different than a Christian is a follower of Christianity, which are religions, not races, thus they require more than most race changes require to fully represent. And Young Justice, much like most popular entertainment, has skirted around religion, with none of the characters ever referencing it, or claiming belief or disbelief. It's obvious why the creators would want to specifically represent Muslims (as opposed to other religions) given topical events, but Violet was never a good fit given her origin of being the spirit of a Motherbox, an extraterrestrial pseudo-mystical object/being that would have no concept or connection to a human religion.
None of these seem like examples of Franchise Original Sin. It's definitely way too long and rambley. If these are examples, they should be condensed.
Edit: Just so you know, No Editor 234 (Edit history here) edited it again.
Edited by EmeraldSky on Jul 17th 2019 at 6:06:04 AM
Found this on YMMV.Bloodstained Ritual Of The Night:
- Fandom Rivalry: With the ill-received Mighty No. 9, which has largely been seen as how not to make a Kickstarter-backed video game. Mighty No. 9 was often compared to Bloodstained before release, which fans felt had a higher chance of success due to the developers' higher degree of communication and transparency with its fans. Now that Bloodstained has been released to good critical reception from reviewers and fans alike, the rivalry has only grown more heated.
Does Mighty No. 9 even have a fandom? I'm being serious, I haven't seen a single person say that they like that game, let alone like it enough to argue with people over how it's better than another game.
That looks like a fan just talking about their favorite show.
That looks like an excuse to complain about a work.
I think both could be cut, but I'm bad with fan reaction tropes. Link to TRS threads in project mode here.
That's just an excuse to complain about Mighty No. 9, so it should be cut. That game doesn't even have a fandom as it's widely considered a disappointment. This is not the first time I've seen Fandom Rivalry used insert complaints about works.
Edited by ADrago on Jul 17th 2019 at 10:52:33 AM
It's gone.
- Sequel Displacement: A lot of fans are still unaware there was a Star Fox before 64. And this game and story didn't have many of the things the series became known for later. No Great Fox. No ROB 64. No Star Wolf. No Krystal. And no Aquas, Area 6, Bolse, Fichina, Katina, Sauria, Solar or Zoness. But there was Papetoon and Fortuna, while the Venom orbital stages and Space Armada were similar in comparison to Area 6. The stages that did exist also look significantly different. The fact that 64 was an abnormally early reboot of the franchise doesn't help matters either.
Star Fox was a killer app for the SNES, so does it still count?
Wouldn't that just be Early-Installment Weirdness?
It may have been a killer app at the time, but it's barely remembered now compared to 64. I'd say the example is valid.
This was deleted from Ambiguous Gender Identity:
- Alluka is referred to as a girl by Killua and dresses like a shrine maiden. The rest of her family (who, tellingly, don't treat her as a full person the way Killua does) refers to her as male and in a flashback it's shown she wore more androgynous clothes as a little kid, but she also uses the feminine personal pronoun "atashi" suggesting she identifies as female.
Can it be added back? She's heavily implied to be a trans girl, but it's technically never clarified so it's still ambiguous.
I wouldn't agree. Its graphics make it a stand-out SNES title and it get referenced in a lot of Nintendo media.
Does Dr. Euphemism from The Petri Dish count as a Dr. Genericius since his first name is Thaddeus? He's a goofy scientist, but he's not evil.
For every low there is a high.Whould this count for As Longas It Sounds Foreign for How Heavy Are the Dumbbells You Lift?.
There's a Russian character named Zina Void. Zina is a actual name but it doesn't seem to be Russian in origin. Void is also a word but not something you use for a last name.
Edited by WhirlRX on Jul 18th 2019 at 5:56:15 AM
Doesn't Too Cool to Live only apply to characters that have limited screen-time? Because YMMV.Mobile Suit Gundam Iron Blooded Orphans lists basically every major character death.
- Too Cool to Live:
- Crank, an honorable soldier who felt genuine sympathy for Tekkadan. Mikazuki kills him without a second thought.
- Biscuit, who averted the stereotypical Fat Best Friend and was Tekkadan's moral compass. His death caused the group to go on a Roaring Rampage of Revenge.
- Gaelio is one of the few Gjallarhorn officers who's aware how corrupt the organization with hopes of reforming it. Then, his treacherous scumbag of a friend kills him and takes his beloved little sister as his wife. However, Season 2 shows that he's Not Quite Dead.
- Naze and Amida, the head honchos of the Turbines. They took in "unwanted" women and pretty much set up one of the most valuable transport networks on the solar system. Also a couple of the few people who didn't treat Tekkadan like space rats. Iok Kujan kills them both (along with a few transport ships' worth of Turbine girls) with illegal weaponry.
- Lafter counts as well, considering that she has not just provided majority of the Fanservice for the Turbines in Season 2 and had her growing relationship with Akihiro fleshed out, but also the fact that she got the Bridge Drop on the episode following Naze and Amida's deaths.
- As of Episode 45, Shino joins this list. He was basically one of the hammiest Tekkadan members; he had impeccable taste for his MS's color schemes (to the point of having a Gundam painted pink with the signature diamond eyes); and his Ship Tease with Yamagi managed to claw in a lot of Yaoi Fangirls into the fold. Too bad it had to go the Negated Dying Moment of Awesome route thanks to a timely interruption from Julietta.
- As of Episode 48, Orga, the leader of Tekkadan himself joins the list. He's been portrayed throughout the series as a selfless person who genuinely treats his subordinates as his family members, refusing to sacrifice anyone in Tekkadan to reach his goals, and being so desperate for Tekkadan to survive to the point he literally begs for Rustal to spare them, even willing to give himself up just so his family can live, only to be refused by the latter. When Tekkadan is being ambushed by a group of assassins, he dies Taking the Bullet for Ride.
I'm pretty sure the only that actually counts is the first one, Lieutenant Crank, who dies in the third episode.
I think you're looking for Pay Evil unto Evil instead. Ripple kills Swim-Swim (paying evil) because Swim-Swim kills X (evil).
Reposting previous question; I'm not certain that this trope applies, but since the examples were terribly long and conversational, I've tried revising them. Are they appropriate to the trope, or should they be deleted?
Edited by crazysamaritan on Jul 16th 2019 at 7:27:50 AM
Link to TRS threads in project mode here.