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Out of all of Captain Dynamo/William Warner's illegitimate children, <- comma she was the one most interested in using her powers for her own gain rather than helping Tower City. With It is implied that she and her mother were taking advantage of Captain Dynamo/William Warner's death to impersonate him to increase their power base.

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Father Gideon/Michael. <- no space The son of Maddie and her former fiance Tom, <- comma from when their relationship fell apart and Maddie left Tom two weeks before their wedding. While Maddie wanted to be in Michael's life, Tom sued for full custody, and after a ugly custody battle, <- comma Maddie backed off. According to Maddie, <- comma Michael was a troubled child in boarding school who did horrible things to the other children. He was angry at Maddie for abandoning him and blamed her for his father's death because Tom became an alcoholic and his liver gave out. He takes the alias Father Gideon to get close to Cynthia, <- comma restore her memories, <- comma seduce her to get her to work together with him to kill Dynamo 5 and his mother while promising to help free Cynthia's mother, <- comma which he does not plan to do.

According to Chrysalis, <- comma Captain Dynamo/William Warner was close to Cynthia and [[strike he]] told her that flying with her was one of the happiest times of his life. Cynthia outright questions if Dynamo 5 is worthy of inheriting their father's name and points out that she was the one he raised.

Dynamo 5 is a group of five young people who learn that the superhero Captain Dynamo is their father. Four of them were unknowingly born out of wedlock and unknowing raised by step fathers who did not know they were not their biological children because Captain Dynamo used his shape shifting power to impersonate them in order to to sleep with their wives. While The fifth mother was abandoned after he slept with her, <- comma not knowing he fathered a child. Despite their flaws and mistakes as superheroes, they show themselves to be good young people who want to protect Tower City.

Out of all of Captain Dynamo's numerous illegitimate children, the one he personally raised <- no comma and the one that inherited all his powers became a super-villain, while the ones who never knew him and only got one of his powers became heroes.

Chrysalis was never caught by Captain Dynamo because of their affair before the series, <- comma though he did try to stop her crimes. In the series, <- comma after her plan with her daughter to take advantage of Captain Dynamo's death to impersonate him to increase their power base failed, <- comma she and her daughter were captured. She was finally sent to jail and separated from her daughter, <- comma who had the memory of her mother wiped from her mind.

Captain Dynamo/William Warner was not only was cheating on his wife Maddie Warner with one of his enemies (Chrysalis), <- comma but he had a daughter with Chrysalis named Cynthia. He had a second life behind his wife's back as he helped to raise Cynthia with Chrysalis. He was there at Cynthia's birth while missing Maddie Warner's award. He and Chrysalis exposed Cynthia to the same radiation that he used to gain his superpowers and he trained Cynthia to use her powers.

Captain Dynamo, <- comma the world's greatest hero, <- comma did not die heroically in some battle or while saving the world. He died in bed, <- comma poisoned by the woman he was sleeping with. His body was left with his superhero costumes so people could identify him. Luckily for Captain Dynamo, <- comma details of his death were kept secret from the pubic.

Edited by Arivne on Jan 30th 2019 at 5:01:18 AM

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This goes under the Nightmare Fuel page for The Flash (2014) under the season 5 episode Memorabilia.

• And what's worse is that among those threats is mentioned The Red Death. An evil Flash who was the herald of Barbatos. What this means is rather... unsettling.

• Dynamo5
• Asshole Victim: Zigzagged. The more we learn about Captain Dynamo/William Warner, the more despicable he appear to be. It was revealed in the series that he was a habitual womanizer who cheated on his wife, Maddie Warner, even when it compromised his crime-fighting duties. He also was not above using his shape shifting power to impersonate marry women's husbands in order to sleep with them. Had a affair with one of his enemies, a supervillain named Chrysalis, and had a daughter with her named Cynthia, and lead a second life to help raise her. The worse thing he did was when he father a child with an alien woman that he had met in outer space, after coming to the aid of her malfunctioning starship. When the mother give him the child because she can't rase him herself, he left the infant at a F.L.A.G. research facility, where the child grew up without parents. And when one of the scientists bond with the child and beg Captain Dynamo to free him Captain Dynamo refuse. However his wife Maddie Warner, and best friend Augie Ford still very much respect his memory and miss him despite learning about his faults. And it implied that Captain Dynamo/William Warner truly did love his wife Maddie Warner and his best friend Augie Ford and aside from the cheating and womanizing, he took his crime-fighting duties as protector of Tower City seriously.
• Even Evil Has Loved Ones: Female supervillans Chrysalis and Synergy appear to be close to each other. And Chrysalis claim to have been in love with Captain Dynamo the father of her daughter.
• It's All My Fault: In Dynamo 5 #17 it is reveled thought Scatterbrain enters Maddie Warner’s unconscious as she lies comatose, that Maddie Warner tends to accept a disproportionate amount of responsibility for various unfortunate events in her life, and harbors guilt over those incidents. Be it when a supervillain escape, when Captain Dynamo is unable to save peoples lives, or her personal relationships like when her relationship with her former fiance Tom fall apart because of her secret life and she could not tell him she a agent of F.L.A.G., a U.S. government organization that deals with threats posed by superhuman beings, though she used the cover of an award-winning investigative journalist. Or when her marriage to Captain Dynamo/William Warner become strain because of his Dynamo's career as a costumed crimefighter often kept him away from home for extended periods of time, and unknown to her Dynamo's absences were partially due to the numerous extramarital affairs that he had. It was in Scatterbrain convincing Warner of her need to move beyond her guilt that Scatterbrain was able to bring her out of the coma.
• Jealous Parent: Downplayed. According to Scatterbrain (Gage Reinhart) supervillain Chrysalis is afraid that her looks are fading and she can't attract men anymore. He said that she jealous of her daughter Cynthia because of her looks and that she probably can attract men. How every it appear that Chrysalis does not let her jealous effect her relationship with her daughter and they appear to be close.
• Karmic Death: For years Captain Dynamo/William Warner was a habitual womanizer who cheated on his wife, Maddie Warner, even when it compromised his crime-fighting duties. He also was not above using his shape shifting power to impersonate marry women's husbands in order to sleep with them. So his death of him in bed by being poisoned by the woman he was sleeping with can be seen as his cheating and sleeping around finally caught up to him.

@Hero Seeker

And what's worse is that among those threats is mentioned The Red Death: <- colon an evil Flash who was the herald of Barbatos. What this means is rather... unsettling.

@Amazing Cartoon Hero

The more we learn about Captain Dynamo/William Warner, the more despicable he appears to be. It is revealed in the series that he was a habitual womanizer who cheated on his wife, Maddie Warner, even when it compromised his crime-fighting duties. He also was not above using his shape shifting power to impersonate married women's husbands in order to sleep with them. He had an affair with one of his enemies, a supervillain named Chrysalis, and had a daughter with her named Cynthia, and led a second life to help raise her. The worst thing he did was when he fathered a child with an alien woman that he had met in outer space, after coming to the aid of her malfunctioning starship. When the mother gives him the child because she can't raise him herself, he leaves the infant at a F.L.A.G. research facility, where the child grows up without parents. And When one of the scientists bonds with the child and begs Captain Dynamo to free him, <- comma Captain Dynamo refuses. However, <- comma his wife Maddie Warner <- no comma and best friend Augie Ford still very much respect his memory and miss him, <- comma despite learning about his faults. And It is implied that Captain Dynamo/William Warner truly did love his wife Maddie Warner and his best friend Augie Ford and aside from the cheating and womanizing, he took his crime-fighting duties as protector of Tower City seriously.

Female supervillains Chrysalis and Synergy appear to be close to each other, <- comma and Chrysalis claims to have been in love with Captain Dynamo, <- comma the father of her daughter.

In Dynamo 5 #17, <- comma when Scatterbrain enters Maddie Warner’s unconscious as she lies comatose, it is revealed that she tends to accept a disproportionate amount of responsibility for various unfortunate events in her life <- no comma and harbors guilt over those incidents. Be it when a supervillain escapes, when Captain Dynamo is unable to save people's lives, or her personal relationships fail, <- comma like when her relationship with her former fiance Tom falls apart because of her secret life and the fact that she could not tell him she was an agent of F.L.A.G., a U.S. government organization that deals with threats posed by superhuman beings, though she used the cover of an award-winning investigative journalist. Or when her marriage to Captain Dynamo/William Warner became strained because of his Dynamo's career as a costumed crimefighter often kept him away from home for extended periods of time, and, <- comma unknown to her, <- comma Dynamo's absences were partially due to the numerous extramarital affairs that he had. It was by Scatterbrain's convincing Warner of her need to move beyond her guilt that he was able to bring her out of the coma.

According to Scatterbrain (Gage Reinhart), <- comma the supervillain Chrysalis is afraid that her looks are fading and she can't attract men anymore. He said that she is jealous of her daughter Cynthia because of her looks and that she probably can better attract men. However, <- comma it appears that Chrysalis does not let her jealousy affect her relationship with her daughter, <- comma and they appear to be close.

For years Captain Dynamo/William Warner was a habitual womanizer who cheated on his wife, Maddie Warner, even when it compromised his crime-fighting duties. He also was not above using his shape shifting power to impersonate married women's husbands in order to sleep with them. So his death of him in bed by being poisoned by the woman he was sleeping with can be seen as his cheating and sleeping around finally catching up to him.

Edited by Arivne on Jan 31st 2019 at 3:58:58 AM

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This run-on sentence followed by an empty one would never pass anyone's approval on the Nightmare Fuel cleanup thread, especially when you try to shoehorn the word "unsettling" and nothing else as to why you think it sends shivers down the spine of anyone watching the show. You could try correcting as much as you can, the intent behind your wording makes it clear you don't grasp what constitute a valid NF entry.

Edited by AnoBakaDesu on Jan 31st 2019 at 2:17:32 PM

"They played us like a DAMN FIDDLE!" — Kazuhira Miller, Metal Gear Solid V: The Phantom Pain

Game: Agarest: Generations of War

• Last of His Kind: Murmina is the last survivor of her tribe after the forces of darkness wipe them out. While she is not the last of the harpuia species, she is likely the last one of the kind that has black colored wings.

Murmina is the last survivor of her tribe after the forces of darkness wipe it out. While she is not the last of the harpuia species, she is likely the last one of the kind that has black colored wings.

^ As per Examples Are Not Arguable, you should not say that a work has an example of a trope unless you're sure that it does. Using the phrase "...is likely the last one..." indicates that you're not sure.

Edited by Arivne on Feb 1st 2019 at 2:47:38 AM

Could someone put this in https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/Spacelords

Aneska

• Ace Pilot: Of her Mech, which she brought down and captured the Axe-Crazy, Lycus Dion in.

• Creepy Souvenir: Carry's the still living Head of her Hades C.O. He talks too, though it's mostly shouting and profanity. Luckily there's a mute button.

• Defector from Decadence: Was Hades Division's top enforcer before being defeated by the Raiders. She ironically joined them when she had no where else to go.

• Even the Girls Want Her: Upon her arrival at the Raiders HQ, both Harec and HIVE, note her beauty. Harec's comes off as just an observation of a Worthy Opponent, HIVE's isn't.

• Ms. Fanservice: As detailed above, she's captivating to both sexes, one of whom isn't even fully humanoid anymore.

• Promoted to Playable: Went from a boss to a raider, by popular demand.

• Peak-a-Bangs: Post boss fight. To cover her bandaged eye.

• The Dragon: To General Krausher of Hades Division.

• The Dreaded: Her showing up for her Boss battle is considered a "Pants To Be Darkened" moment for Cortez.

• The Red Baron: Is nicknamed: The Scourge of Phobes.

• You Gotta Have Blue Hair: Green in her case.

Edited by Avenger09 on Feb 7th 2019 at 5:42:06 PM

Game: Dishonored 2

• Infernal Retaliation: Using incendiary attacks on a Clockwork soldier is useless due to its mechanic nature. However, thanks to the wooden components of its build, it does set it on fire, so now there is a giant robot on fire trying to kill you. Strangely enough, you do not seem to be damaged by the flaming frame of the Clockwork soldier.

Hey, I wanted to know what kind of assignments the mods can give me to convince them to lift my edit ban?

~Blackbison01: As you were told already, you need to post trope examples that you want to add to the wiki. Others here will proofread them.

"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"

Kingdom Hearts 3:

• Reality Ensues: In regards to Kairi's development as a professional Keyblade Wielder. Even with her training, Kairi is still the least experienced fighter of the Guardians of Light, and the love of Sora's life, which Terra-Xehanort, Xemnas, and Xehanort easily exploit with tragic results.

• Recess

Characters / Recess The Main Six Ashley Spinelli

• Pet the Dog: In episode "Don't Ask Me," when Spinelli took over Guru Kid job of giving kids advice, Spinelli give Randall advice on how to defend himself. It may not seem much since she took over Guru Kid job, but Spinelli has a huge dislike for Randall and you except her to refuse to help him, sabotage the advice she give him or at least grudging help him. Instead she give him advice to help him no problem, which he successfully use.

Recess Other Students Randall Weems

• Pet the Dog: While Randall may be a jerk and a snitch, but he is not that bad deep down. And has moments of kindness
  • Played With in Season 2 episode The Breakup. Randall is only nice to TJ in this episode because he wants to write about him for the essay, since TJ is the most likable person in the school. He does show where the gang is, however, and does make a point by telling TJ that he has to do something.
  • In Season 4 episode Rumor Mill were a rumor of Mikey throwing a boy into the girls Bathroom. The Recess gang investigate the rumor and the start lead to Randall. Randall claims he did not start the rumor that a mystically voice off a pay phone told him the rumor. The Recess gang did not believe him and angry decide to throw him in the girls room, Mikey step (he was the one to start the rumor to get respect for himself) in and stop his friends and let Randall go. Randall was so grateful that he told everyone that Mikey was nice and repair his reputation.
  • Randall whole friendship with Miss Finster is this. He consider her his best friend and is willing to stand by her when no one else will. This was best show in Season 4 The Fuss Over Finster. When Miss Finster broke her leg and taken away in an ambulance, he beg to stay by her said saying he was all she had. Which the people of the ambulance let him come.
• Throw the Dog a Bone: There are moments were Randall get a lucky break.
  • In Season 1 episode Randall's Reform. Randall temporary become popular and accepted by the other kids. While he enjoy he new popularly and acceptant he miss his friendship with Miss Finster, so he choose to go back to being a snitch.
  • In Season 3 episode Buried Treasure Randall was one of the kids that was in on discovering the treasure. When the treasure was revealed to be a bunch of toys and the kids decide to play with them before burieding them with there favorte toys, it implied that Randall play with the toys and other kids.
  • In Season 3 episode The Ratings Game when The Ashleys started a rating system were 1 the lowest and 10 the highest Randall got a 1. Those to be fair Mikey got a 1 and Gus got a 0. In the end of the episode were the Recess gang give everyone 10 cards, Randall sit along implying he will be the only one not getting a 10 card, Mikey give him a 10 card.
    Randall: *After Mikey has just given him a ten while he was depressed* But...how? Why?
    Mikey: Because you're really good at being you!
  • In Season 4 episode The Biggest Trouble Ever. Randall happy plays in a pile of leaves with other kids.
  • In Season 4 episode Some Friend. It is revealed that Randall is invited to Menlo's birthday party and he is seen enjoy himself with the other kids in the party.

Edited by AmazingCartoonHero on Feb 2nd 2019 at 10:51:04 AM

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Using incendiary attacks on a Clockwork soldier is useless due to its mechanical nature. However, thanks to its wooden components of its build, it will be set it on fire, so now there is a giant robot on fire trying to kill you. Strangely enough, you do not seem to be damaged by the flaming frame of the Clockwork soldier.

Edited by Arivne on Feb 3rd 2019 at 2:34:36 AM

@jahman

In regard to Kairi's development as a professional Keyblade Wielder. Even with her training, Kairi is still the least experienced fighter of the Guardians of Light <- no comma and the love of Sora's life, which Terra-Xehanort, Xemnas, and Xehanort easily exploit with tragic results.

@Amazing Cartoon Hero

Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

According to How to Write an Example - Emphasis For Work Names, titles of short works (like TV episodes) are put in quotes.

In the episode "Don't Ask Me," when Spinelli takes over Guru Kid's job of giving kids advice, Spinelli gives Randall advice on how to defend himself. It may not seem like much, <- comma since she took over Guru Kid's job, but Spinelli has a huge dislike for Randall and you expect her to refuse to help him, sabotage the advice she gives him or at most grudging help him. Instead, <- comma she gives him advice to help him with his problem, which he successfully uses.

While Randall may be a jerk and a snitch, but he is not that bad deep down <- no period and he has moments of kindness. <- period

Played With in the Season 2 episode "The Breakup".

In the Season 4 episode "Rumor Mill", <- comma there was a rumor of Mikey throwing a boy into the girls' bathroom. The Recess gang investigates the rumor and the clues (?) start to lead to Randall. Randall claims he did not start the rumor but that a mysterious voice on a pay phone told him the rumor. The Recess gang does not believe him and angrily decides to throw him in the girls' bathroom. <- period Mikey steps in (he was the one who started the rumor to get respect for himself), <- comma stops his friends and lets Randall go. Randall is so grateful that he tells everyone that Mikey is nice and repairs his reputation.

Randall's whole friendship with Miss Finster is this. He considers her his best friend and is willing to stand by her when no one else will. This was the basis of the best show in Season 4, <- comma "The Fuss Over Finster". When Miss Finster breaks her leg and is taken away in an ambulance, he begs to stay by her, <- comma said saying he is all she has. Which The people in the ambulance let him come along.

There are moments where Randall gets a lucky break.

In Season 1 episode "Randall's Reform". Randall temporarily becomes popular and is accepted by the other kids. While he enjoys his new popularity and acceptance, <- comma he misses his friendship with Miss Finster, so he chooses to go back to being a snitch.

In the Season 3 episode "Buried Treasure", <- comma Randall is one of the kids that is in on discovering the treasure. When the treasure is revealed to be a bunch of toys and the kids decide to play with them before burying them with their favorite toys, it is implied that Randall plays with the toys and other kids.

In the Season 3 episode "The Ratings Game", <- comma when The Ashleys start a rating system where 1 is the lowest and 10 is the highest, <- comma Randall gets a 1. Though, <- comma to be fair, <- comma Mikey gets a 1 and Gus gets a 0. At the end of the episode, <- comma where the Recess gang gives everyone 10 cards, Randall sits alone, <- comma implying he will be the only one not getting a 10 card, but Mikey gives him a 10 card.

In the Season 4 episode "The Biggest Trouble Ever". Randall happily plays in a pile of leaves with other kids.

In the Season 4 episode "Some Friend". It is revealed that Randall is invited to Menlo's birthday party and he is seen enjoying himself with the other kids at the party.

Edited by Arivne on Feb 3rd 2019 at 3:17:41 AM

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/ScoobyDoo

Red Herring

Catchphrase: "That's not very funny", Said whenever he tries to pull something mean and it backfires on him in some way causing the others to laugh at him. Not that he doesn't deserve it.

Kingdom Hearts 3 - Fridge Brilliance:

• The Path of Sora's Future Growth:

If Sora is seeing Hercules being prepared to lose his life for Meg, Eugene being ready to sacrifice himself for Rapunzel, and Anna willing to sacrifice herself for Elsa is any indication, it is foreshadowing a critical moment for Sora's growth. When Sora emerges from the Reaper's game victorious, he'll be a wiser, stronger and much more balanced and complete person than ever before, having learned that "With great power comes great responsibility," and the true meaning of being a Keyblade Master. Sora will also know how to be a man who will no longer coax through life and indeed become more active in making a better future, not just for the sake of the worlds, but also for his and Kairi's as well. With their destinies now intertwined, Sora must be willing to commit to her and do a far better job of not dying on her or the countless people he befriended.

I believe the Master of Masters could be an adult version of Sora, twisted by his dark experiences and loss, lacking the current Sora's will and heart because that could be a major wake up call for Sora to commit to his growth for Kairi and everyone he holds dear.

Not only that, this, in turn, will help Kairi grow as well, regarding being a capable young woman, a princess of heart and as a Keyblade Wielder. In a way, she can be just as reckless as Sora, which I feel they need to work on together.

Edited by jahman on Feb 4th 2019 at 11:47:06 AM

Takeru Homura

Takeru is a 1st year student at Den City high school. In LINK VRAINS he is known as Soulburner and just like his anime counterpart he runs a a Salamangreat deck, an archetype of FIRE Cyberse-Type Monsters focused on a Beatdown strategy.

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• Armor Piercing Slap: Soulburner gives a hilarious one to Igor after she accidentally bite his hand.
• Adaptational Early Appearance: In the anime, Takeru was introduced in season 2. Here, he first appears at the beginning of Chapter 1.
• Adaptational Dye-Job: In the anime, as Soulburner his scarf is red but orange in the manga.
• Adaptational Personality Change: Takeru is still polite and cheerful, but unlike his anime counterpart he's a Blood Knight and is obsessed with dueling strong opponents.
• Adaptational Superpower Change: In the anime, he is Hopeless with Tech and a terrible hacker. In the manga, he is a very skilled hacker and programmer.
• Blood Knight: Soulburner enjoys dueling against strong opponents and loves when they give him a good challenge to him.
• He Knows Too Much: After witnessing Specter creating "Judgment Arrows", he was imprisoned and banished from the Cyberse World by the latter so that his plans could continue uninterrupted.
• Nice Guy: Takeru is kind, polite and selfless who thinks more about his friends well-being.
• Online Alias: He is known as Soulburner in LINK VRAINS.
• Undying Loyalty: Just like his anime counterpart, Takeru is very loyal to Yusaku and his Ignis Flame.

Naoki Shima

Naoki is Yusaku's classmate and in LINK VRAINS he is known as Brave Max, and uses a Metal Baboon deck.

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• Adaptational Badass: In the anime, he is a terrible duelist and doesn't know the basic rules of dueling. In the manga, he is shown to be a fairly decent duelist and was extremely close to defeat Blue Angel.
• Because You Were Nice to Me: Naoki first started hanging out with Jin in Middle School after some boys stole his stuff toy, and Jin threatened them into giving it back.
• Book Dumb: His grades are horrible according to Takeru and for the national exam he scored 15 percentile which makes him disqualified to enter university.
• Fan Boy: Just like the original, Naoki is a crazy fan of Playmaker and Blue Angel.
• Gonk: Just like his anime counterpart, Naoki has a odd looking design.
• Nice Guy: Despite Jin being unfriendly and their are rumors about him being a backstage Boss, Naoki has no problem greeting him or trying to invite him to karaoke.
• Online Alias: He is known as Brave Max in LINK VRAINS.
• Satellite Character: Subverted. Unlike his anime counterpart, he has more meaningful interactions with Yusaku and Aoi.
• Stalker with a Crush: Naoki was initially suspected to be Miyu's stalker. It's however subverted in that he's not interested in Miyu, nor is he a stalker as he wanted to approach Aoi but had trouble doing so.
• Thinks Like a Romance Novel: He sees Aoi's interactions and situations with Jin and Takeru with romantic undertones even though it's only about Jin joining the Duel Club. He's not that far off since everything they do does sound like love problems.

I am a female and I was born on April 2nd 1998

• Harbinger (Finmonster)
• Adaptation Origin Connection: In the movie Mitch and Courtney meet for the first time. In this story they are childhood friends.
• Adaptation Relationship Overhaul:
  • In the movie while Mitch did not heavily dislike Norman and was not mean to Norman directly, however he disapproves of his brother's friendship with Norman and advises him not to hang out with Norman because of his reputation. In this story he approve of Norman friendship with Neil.
  • In the movie Courtney was at first uncaring and aloof to Norman and was not above mocking him or trying to prove he a lier. In this story she is much kinder to him and is upset when everyone, including her boyfriend Dash, ridicules Norman.
• Innocently Insensitive: Dash unattainably make Courtney uncomfortable by calling Norman weird in chapter 6. And again when Dash try to defend Mitch and Scott from a group of homophobic jerks. He said that Courtney twice as hot as there girlfriends.

• Nightmare in Arkham a A Nightmare on Elm Street and Batman crossover.
• Everyone Has Standards:
  • When Batman was investigating Scarecrow death Alfred while pointing out that while his death was tragic, as is any death, this will make his work a little easier with one less fiend to worry about. Batman said while it true, he point out his goal isn't just to save Gotham from these crazed madmen; I'm also trying to save the crazed madmen from themselves. If I took pride in Scarecrow's death, as I'm sure he would have done with mine, I'd be the same masked criminal that he was.
  • Batman who deal with crazy madmen on a daily basics is complete horrified and disgusted with Freddy Krueger crimes when he learn of them. That he was a child murderer who murder and mutilation hundreds of children and his crimes were the most horrible he even heard. When he read a report of a police officer that almost shoot Krueger and his wife ask what stop you, Batman almost agree with her, and when Batman learn how Krueger was burn alive by Springwood residents, he wonder if he would have stood alongside the Springwood residents as they sent this unholy abomination to Hell where he belonged. The only villain that got Batman this angry was the Sewer King and he even admit that The Joker hadn't even displayed the amount of sadism as Fred Krueger.
• Eviler than Thou:
  • One fascinating truth about Batman and the "villains" inside it is that there really are no bad guys, per say. Yes, there are people who do evil deeds but all of them were also victims of society themselves once, just like Batman. And that's another important connection that links them all together. Freddy Krueger, on the other hand, chose to be evil from the start. And the twisted methods he uses to kill the "villains" of Arkham by targeting their tortured pasts really highlights how human they really are. And when Batman goes up against him, he actually proves to be just as vulnerable as the rest of his victims because of his relatable flaws and fears and the tragic events that molded him into what he was. But then Freddy comes face to face with the Joker.
  • The only villain in the Batman universe that actually deserves the title of "villain" is the Joker. The Joker has no credible backstory, no clear motivation, no reason in his decision making, he is the complete embodiment of pure insanity, which is actually way worse than the embodiment of fear/evil like Freddy. The main difference is, evil is predictable. People who are evil have clear motivations and will stop at nothing to carry them out no matter who or what has to suffer for it. And fear can easily be overcome by a willing victim. But insanity is a whole different story. There is no predictable pattern when it comes to insanity and sometimes not even a motivation. Insanity can sometimes be treated but it can never be fully cured or even completely understood. And this is how the Joker is able to turn the tides against Freddy. With absolutely nothing to exploit from the Joker, Freddy's power of fear and evil is rendered completely useless against the Joker's chaotic, twisted mind.
• Irony: As Batman noted the Springwood citizens had done the one thing Batman had sworn he would never do and they killed a person who probably deserved it more than anyone he had ever encountered and it had supposedly lead to the same results as the ones that forbade Batman from going to such extreme measures: the creation of an even greater evil.
• Not So Different: Having been victimized by Freddy Krueger in the past Alice shares the connection of loss with Batman, who also tragically saw the death of the ones closest to him. In the beginning however, Alice actually sides more so with the people considered "villains" in this story, mostly because she almost went down the same path and would have possibly become one of them. At the same time, being among them allowed her to see a more human side to them and she connects with all of them because they too have experienced pain, loss, betrayal, etc. What sets Alice apart from them is that she was actually able to see them, as well as see herself, as all victims of the world. Batman has also come to this conclusion but his method of approach initially comes off as extremely hypocritical to Alice because he seems just as insane as the rest of them and yet he seems to view himself as more noble. In these ways, Alice and Batman are both in the same mind and the opposite mind.

Edited by AmazingCartoonHero on Feb 4th 2019 at 11:43:07 AM

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"That's not very funny", said whenever he tries to pull something mean and it backfires on him in some way, <- comma causing the others to laugh at him. Not that he doesn't deserve it.

Edited by Arivne on Feb 5th 2019 at 4:05:32 AM

x 4 @jahman

If Sora is seeing Hercules being prepared to lose his life for Meg, Eugene being ready to sacrifice himself for Rapunzel, and Anna willing to sacrifice herself for Elsa is any indication, it is foreshadowing a critical moment for Sora's growth...Sora will also know how to be a man who will no longer coast through life and indeed become more active in making a better future, not just for the sake of the worlds, but also for his and Kairi's as well.

x 4 @Blue Red

Takeru is a 1st year student at Den City high school. In LINK VRAINS he is known as Soulburner and, <- comma just like his anime counterpart, <- comma he runs a Salamangreat' deck, an archetype of FIRE Cyberse-Type Monsters focused on a Beatdown strategy.

Soulburner gives a hilarious one to Igor after she accidentally bites his hand.

In the anime, as Soulburner his scarf is red. It's orange in the manga.

Takeru is still polite and cheerful, but unlike his anime counterpart, <- comma he's a Blood Knight and is obsessed with dueling strong opponents.

Soulburner enjoys dueling against strong opponents and loves when they give him a good challenge to him.

After witnessing Specter creating "Judgment Arrows", he was imprisoned and banished from the Cyberse World by him so that his plans could continue uninterrupted.

Takeru is kind, polite, <- comma and selfless and thinks more about his friends' well-being.

Naoki is Yusaku's classmate. <- period and In LINK VRAINS he is known as Brave Max <- no comma and uses a Metal Baboon deck.

In the manga, he is shown to be a fairly decent duelist and came extremely close to defeating Blue Angel.

Naoki first started hanging out with Jin in middle school after some boys stole his stuffed toy <- no comma and Jin threatened them into giving it back.

His grades are horrible (according to Takeru) and for the national exam he scored 15 percentile, <- comma which disqualifies him from entering university.

Despite Jin being unfriendly and their being rumors about him being a backstage Boss, Naoki has no problem greeting him or trying to invite him to karaoke.

However, it's subverted in that he's not interested in Miyu, nor is he a stalker, <- comma as he wanted to approach Aoi but had trouble doing so.

He sees Aoi's interactions and situations with Jin and Takeru as having romantic undertones, <- comma even though it's only about Jin joining the Duel Club. He's not that far off, <- comma since everything they do does sound like love problems.

Edited by Arivne on Feb 5th 2019 at 4:31:27 AM

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Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

In the movie, <- comma Mitch and Courtney meet for the first time. In this story, <- comma they are childhood friends.

In the movie, <- comma while Mitch does not heavily dislike Norman and is not mean to Norman directly, however he disapproves of his brother's friendship with Norman and advises him not to hang out with Norman because of his reputation. In this story, <- comma he approves of Norman's friendship with Neil.

In the movie, <- comma Courtney is at first uncaring and aloof to Norman and is not above mocking him and trying to prove he's a liar. In this story, <- comma she is much kinder to him and is upset when everyone, including her boyfriend Dash, ridicules Norman.

Dash innocently makes Courtney uncomfortable by calling Norman weird in chapter 6, <- comma and again when he tries to defend Mitch and Scott from a group of homophobic jerks. He says that Courtney is twice as hot as their girlfriends.

When Batman is investigating the Scarecrow's death, <- comma Alfred while points out that while his death was tragic, as is any death, this will make his work a little easier, <- comma with one less fiend to worry about. Batman says that while it is true, he points out that his goal isn't just to save Gotham from these crazed madmen; it's also trying to save the crazed madmen from themselves. If he took pride in the Scarecrow's death, as I'm sure the Scarecrow would have done with his, he'd be the same masked criminal that the Scarecrow was.

^ If you're going to quote a character, you need to put quotes around the character's words so the reader knows what you're doing.

Batman, <- comma who deals with crazy madmen on a daily basis, <- comma is completely horrified and disgusted with Freddy Krueger's crimes when he learns of them: <- colon that he was a child murderer who murdered and mutilated hundreds of children, <- comma and his crimes were the most horrible he ever heard of. When he read a report of a police officer who almost shot Krueger and his wife asked "What stopped you?", Batman almost agrees with her. <- period When Batman learns how Krueger was burned alive by Springwood residents, he wonders if he would have stood alongside them as they sent this unholy abomination to Hell where he belonged. The only villain that got Batman this angry was the Sewer King, <- comma and he even admitted that The Joker hadn't even displayed the amount of sadism that Fred Krueger had.

One fascinating truth about the Batman comic and the "villains" inside it is that there really are no bad guys <- no comma per se. Yes, there are people who do evil deeds, <- comma but all of them are also victims of society themselves once, just like Batman. And That's another important connection that links them all together. Freddy Krueger, on the other hand, chooses to be evil from the start, <- comma and the twisted methods he uses to kill the "villains" of Arkham by targeting their tortured pasts really highlights how human they really are. And When Batman goes up against him, he actually proves to be just as vulnerable as the rest of his victims because of his relatable flaws and fears and the tragic events that molded him into what he is. But then Freddy comes face to face with the Joker.

The only villain in the Batman universe that actually deserves the title of "villain" is the Joker. The Joker has no credible backstory, no clear motivation, and no reason in his decision making. <- period He is the complete embodiment of pure insanity, which is actually way worse than the embodiment of fear/evil like Freddy. The main difference is, evil is predictable. People who are evil have clear motivations and will stop at nothing to carry them out, <- comma no matter who or what has to suffer for it. Fear can easily be overcome by a willing victim, <- comma but insanity is a whole different story. There is no predictable pattern when it comes to insanity, <- comma and sometimes not even a motivation. Insanity can sometimes be treated, <- comma but it can never be fully cured or even completely understood. This is how the Joker is able to turn the tide against Freddy. With absolutely nothing to exploit from the Joker, Freddy's power of fear and evil is rendered completely useless against the Joker's chaotic, twisted mind.

As Batman noted, <- comma the Springwood citizens had done the one thing Batman had sworn he would never do: <- colon and they killed a person who probably deserved it more than anyone he had ever encountered and it had supposedly led to the same results as the ones that forbade Batman from going to such extreme measures: the creation of an even greater evil.

Having been victimized by Freddy Krueger in the past, <- comma Alice shares the connection of loss with Batman, who also tragically saw the death of the ones closest to him. In the beginning, <- comma however, Alice actually sides more so with the people considered "villains" in this story, mostly because she almost went down the same path and could have possibly become one of them. At the same time, being among them allowed her to see a more human side to them, <- comma and she connects with all of them because they too have experienced pain, loss, betrayal, etc. What sets Alice apart from them is that she is actually able to see them, as well as see herself, as all victims of the world. Batman has also come to this conclusion, <- comma but his method of approach initially comes off as extremely hypocritical to Alice because he seems just as insane as the rest of them and yet he seems to view himself as more noble. In these ways, Alice and Batman are both in the same mind and the opposite mind.

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Whenever you have extremely long Wall of Text examples that read more like essays, like several of the above, you should follow How to Write an Example - Keep it Brief.

Go through each example and cut it down to what you actually need to say, getting rid of all of the unnecessary opinions and commentary.

Edited by Arivne on Feb 5th 2019 at 5:37:39 AM