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- Wrong: The Mentor: Kevin is this to Bob in the first episode.
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- Wrong: Badass Adorable
- Right: Badass Adorable: Xavier, the group's cute little mascot, defeats three raging elephants with both hands tied behind his back using only an uncooked spaghetti noodle.
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- Wrong: Full Moon Silhouette: Diana
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Edited by Synchronicity on Sep 18th 2023 at 11:42:55 AM
The Social Expert doesn't mean the character is necessarily manipulative, so calling it a subversion is wrong. A subversion of that trope would be someone who's one way or another implied to be able to figure out the social workings of people, but turns out to be crap at it. This a dead straight example (assuming it's accurate to the character).
Check out my fanfiction!"Subverted" is one of the most misused words on the wiki. I admit that I used to have trouble with it myself, until I got into the habit of challenging myself every time I was tempted to use it.
A huge number of examples which claim to be "subverted" should really be edited to say "played with". (A few too many of the remainder simply aren't examples of the tropes they claim at all.)
As for the Cunning Linguist example, that sounds right to me. The only other possibility I see is Omniglot, and your description sounds more like the former.
Aside: while your use of the word "epithet" is technically correct, the word has acquired some generally negative connotations. People "hurl epithets" at people they don't like. It might be better/clearer to use another word, like "sobriquet" or "moniker". But that's totally up to you.
Speaking words of fandom: let it squee, let it squee.In Lilo & Stitch: The Series, Lilo and co. travel around Hawaii to catch Jumba's experiments on the loose. These aliens come in tiny balls, are assigned a number, and are eventually nicknamed and trained to be good. While this makes a passing resemblance to the Pokémon series, it wasn't until 13 years later that players can travel around a Hawaii-based region to catch Pokemon.
Is this Hilarious in Hindsight?
"Rarity, are you okay? We gotta get you and your friends outta here soon!"Reposting so it doesn't get lost.
Do video games provide Knife and Sword Fight examples if there's no theatrical Flynning or other dramatics, just that two opposite sides/combatants are wielding knives/swords?
Mainly for 2D RPGs like of RPG Maker, or Final Fantasy.
Disambig Needed: Help with those issues! tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=13324299140A37493800&page=24#comment-576I feel like the simple availability of swords or knives as weapon choices in a video game is not interesting enough to function as a trope. What would you put as example context? "Knife Fight: You can equip knives and fight with them." Boooooooooring. The tropes seem intended to represent when some narrative significance is made of a particular fight with knives or swords — and in particular, when both (or all) combatants are using the same weapons. Example: Tommy Lee Jones and Steven Seagal in the climactic battle of Under Siege.
While it might count as a Shout-Out or something if done intentionally, there is nothing about that example that strikes me as particularly funny. Anyway, the description specifically states, "This is not merely when something predicts something else."
edited 8th Oct '16 5:55:08 AM by Fighteer
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"& : My impression from reading the lead of The Social Expert is that it must necessarily overlap with being manipulative.
Scientia et Libertas | Per Aspera ad Astra NovaThose tropes would probably have been named Sword Duel and Knife Duel if the pages were made today (even if they also include melees), but the names they have are what Hollywood generally uses, I believe. In live action, they have to be specifically choreographed, rather than "this could happen", which is more how it is in games with general weapon choices. The way I see it, any "this could happen" example is a generic "example", which means it should be deleted.
I'd draw the limit where it's specifically coded one way or another. Let's say it's the final boss fight, and that boss uses a sword. You can use any weapon you want to. If that's all there is to it, I wouldn't count it. However, if there's an achievement for only using a sword in that fight, or if there's a unique response from the boss if you do, or if it's considered the canon way it happened, or something like that, then I would count it.
Tropes could probably use some cleanup.
The trope says it's a prerequisite for several manipulative tropes, but it only describes itself as the ability to detect the social workings of people, not to act on them. Some of the specific tropes you mentioned are even mentioned on that trope as being what it's about.
edited 8th Oct '16 8:28:52 AM by AnotherDuck
Check out my fanfiction!Reposting these from the previous page so they don't get lost:
- "Funny Aneurysm" Moment: One of the lyrics of the song that plays in the dance scene is "work your fingers to the bone". Later when Caleb watches the video Jade banging her arms on the door, her fingers are the first to disintegrate. Additionally, her arms worked to the bone.
- Narm: Hazel's infinity quotenote might lose its impact and become laughable when you learn that it's mathematically incorrect. While some infinities are bigger than other infinities - the set of all rational numbers is for instance smaller than the set of all real numbers - the intervals [0, 1], [0, 2] and [0, 1000000] actually contain the same amount of real numbers.
- Revisiting the Roots: The Hanna-Barbera action hero lineup note has spent many more years as parodies of themselves than they spent as actual action heroes. This comic is possibly the most notable return to the characters' original premises in over two decades.
The Revisiting the Roots example seems fine to me. Are you seeing something I'm not? It can really help to mention why you're asking. Because I honestly have no idea.
As for the other two, I consider YMMV to be the site's Wretched Hive, and avoid it as much as possible, so I'm probably not the best person to comment.
Speaking words of fandom: let it squee, let it squee.'A huge number of examples which claim to be "subverted" should really be edited to say "played with".'
I would disagree. Saying something is played with doesn't say how it's played with. If it's not played straight it is subverted, inverted, etc. If you can't say how it's played with then it should be left off the page.
Actually, that appears to be Zig-Zagging Trope.
"Played with" is a rhetorical cop-out that you use when you can't find an actual Playing with a Trope category and just want to insert some mindless Word Cruft.
Zig-Zagging Trope is when multiple forms of Playing with a Trope are used in the same example.
edited 8th Oct '16 9:51:38 PM by Fighteer
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"It's been 4 days, could someone take a look at the YMMV.Ex Machina and YMMV.The Fault In Our Stars examples I posted above
YMMV.The Phantom Menace has Vindicated by History listed. I think it's bullshit.
Opinions? *cough* Fighteer *cough*
edited 14th Oct '16 9:52:50 PM by Karxrida
If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?What does that even mean in the context of the prequel trilogy? Oh, I see. I consider both examples under that entry to be bullshit, but it's obviously at least slightly a matter of opinion. Especially the idea that TFA is worse than TPM is not anything that is even remotely supported by the weight of opinion that I've seen.
edited 14th Oct '16 9:54:03 PM by Fighteer
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"Holy shit that was quick.
Um... I dunno? I'm just pretty sure that it's a Contested Sequel (or prequel, w/e) at best because I'm pretty sure opinions of it have gone down since its release (especially because of the Plinket review).
If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?I have not read "the Plinket review", so I am not one to offer an opinion on its validity. Contested Sequel seems like the best option there, and that does not in any way allow for TPM to be "vindicated".
TFA's main sin is its relative lack of originality, which may or may not make it "better" than the other films depending on what you expected to get out of it in the first place. TPM's "originality" seems mainly devoted to Lucas writing fanfic about his own universe, including the risible "midichlorian" concept. The idea that there is any objective way to measure quality in this respect is baloney.
edited 14th Oct '16 9:57:51 PM by Fighteer
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"The Plinket review is that famous RedLetterMedia video review about TPM. If you haven't seen it (which I'd be pretty surprised about since you're a Star Wars fan), go watch it; it's very in-depth about why the movie doesn't work.
I'll nuke it, but I probably won't be able to make a good Contested Sequel write-up.
edited 14th Oct '16 10:00:53 PM by Karxrida
If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?Is the Superpowered Evil Side of a character considered to be separate from them?
edited 15th Oct '16 9:31:42 AM by TroperNo9001
"Rarity, are you okay? We gotta get you and your friends outta here soon!"Same character, somewhat different personality. It's not the same thing as a possession, and not exactly like a split personality (though there could probably be overlap).
edited 15th Oct '16 9:42:41 AM by AnotherDuck
Check out my fanfiction!... A Superpowered Evil Side is by definition always a Split Personality, since it's a subtrope of Enemy Within and Superpowered Alter Ego, both of which are subtropes of Split Personality.
Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.I find that like saying if you're drunk you've got a split personality.
Check out my fanfiction!Would a god of minions count as a case of Odd Job Gods?
In Spells, Swords, & Stealth the main god that the protagonists have dealings with is Grumble, god of the minions, thanks to his being the god worshiped by ex-henchman and current Paladin of Grumble, Thistle the gnome.
I would say yes.
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What about the other examples?