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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

CapitanoNox Lord of Space from Italy Since: Oct, 2018 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
Lord of Space
#17726: Jun 18th 2023 at 11:23:02 PM

[tup] to Dr. Moreau and Carnage

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#17727: Jun 18th 2023 at 11:30:55 PM

[tup] To dr Moreau and Cowboy Carnage

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#17728: Jun 18th 2023 at 11:33:50 PM

[tup] to Burke, dr Moreau and Cowboy Carnage

Atlantis1930 Since: May, 2012
#17729: Jun 18th 2023 at 11:39:25 PM

[tup] Collier, Carnage and Moreau

futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#17730: Jun 19th 2023 at 12:35:52 AM

Based on the EP, [tup] to Moreau.

How does the 1996 film version played by Marlon Brando compare?

TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#17731: Jun 19th 2023 at 12:43:09 AM

[tup] for Yee-hawnage.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#17732: Jun 19th 2023 at 1:09:05 AM

[tup] to Billy Burke, Doctor Moreau (been wondering about him for a while now) and Cowboy Carnage.

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#17733: Jun 19th 2023 at 3:36:30 AM

[tup]Burke, moreau and cowboy carnage.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#17734: Jun 19th 2023 at 3:38:16 AM

Hmm, if that's the case, I'm more comfortable giving a yes to Billy Burke (is this the first CM that shares a name with a CM's actor? [lol]).

Yes to Moreau (Wells's first?).

Yes to Carnage. The last from this anthology?

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
Siegfried1337 Unofficial co-Wiki Curator for Magnificent Bastard from the Ashes Since: Sep, 2018 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#17736: Jun 19th 2023 at 5:05:48 AM

The last [Carnage] from this anthology?
Considering the rest are Earth-616's Carnage? Yes... unless I feel like effortposting Lucius Marius, a Roman soldier who may or may not have been Cletus Kasady's pre-incarnation... if he even existed in the first place.
  • Monster/Spider-Man
    • Carnage: Black, White & Blood:
      • "You Are Carnage": Captured by the US military, the Carnage symbiote is bonded to an unnamed soldier as a successor to Agent Venom. Should the soldier not possess the willpower to resist its sadistic bloodlust (or choose to give in), the Carnage symbiote takes control of him and gleefully goes on a feeding frenzy in the Metro-General Hospital's maternity ward, brutally slaughters a trio of Ani-Men committing a bank robbery, and/or massacres a squadron of NYPD officers. Recaptured by the military after a horrifying rampage, the symbiote consumes its host from the inside-out until nothing but bones remain.
      • "My Name is Carnage": The Carnage symbiote arrives in Nunavut, Canada in 1803 via the Halvorson Meteorite. Spending the next two centuries slaughtering and devouring everything it came across, Carnage comes to be feared as the mythological Qiqion by the local Inuit. Bonding to the Inuit guide Kalik, it uses him to slaughter his companions and then lure in new victims under the pretence of guiding explorers to the meteor. Encountering an expedition sent by H.A.M.M.E.R., Carnage uses Kalik to lure them into the wilderness and picks them off one by one until only Mr. Creary remains. Impressed by Creary's ruthless determination, Carnage tortuously separates from Kalik and bonds to him, murders its former host in cold blood, and declares its intent to use Creary to turn the rest of the world into its hunting grounds.

Edited by Arawn999 on Jun 19th 2023 at 7:04:46 AM

Snowy66 Since: May, 2012
#17737: Jun 19th 2023 at 5:13:19 AM

[tup]Moreau, Cowboy Carnage

What next? Ninja Carnage?

Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#17738: Jun 19th 2023 at 5:39:59 AM

[up] Not yet. There is a samurai Venom — two of them, actually, but neither one counts.

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#17739: Jun 19th 2023 at 6:19:04 AM

[tup] Cowboy Carnage

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Zerukin Ninja Gamer Writer from Palmtree Panic Since: Dec, 2016 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Ninja Gamer Writer
#17740: Jun 19th 2023 at 8:20:03 AM

Got my writeup for werner written. Sorry for the wait.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#17741: Jun 19th 2023 at 8:44:55 AM

Where should Werner go in the tree?

And is he from a specific event, or in multiple ones like Xenos?

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
Atlantis1930 Since: May, 2012
#17742: Jun 19th 2023 at 10:13:08 AM

EDIT: Forgot I already voted. [tup] to Burke though.

I was wondering how this quote would look as the header for The Bill CM page?

Donald Blake: I was in the park this morning to do it again. I wanted to do it again.
Sergeant Tom Penny: Do what, Donald?
Donald Blake: Take a child. Oh I know it's wrong. That's partly the reason why I do it. Because it's wrong. Because it's beyond anything normal people do. And I've always been very normal. That's partly what makes it exciting. My special thing that nobody would ever dream of. That's very exciting.

Edited by Atlantis1930 on Jun 19th 2023 at 8:14:02 PM

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#17743: Jun 19th 2023 at 10:49:51 AM

IP Thread for Inuyasha if anyone wants to comment.

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#17744: Jun 19th 2023 at 11:43:47 AM

  • Even Though I Knew the End: Zashiel was an angel banished from Heaven and forced to seek penance on Earth, only for Zashiel to lose faith on how they were to return to Heaven. For this, Zashiel would become the White City Vampire by possessing young women to murder people who were so they could steal their souls, breaking the minds of the women they possessed and rendering them catatonic. Using the souls they gathered Zashiel then abducted Helen Brandt's brother Ted to use his pure soul as a sacrifice to summon the archangel Michael to let them back into Heaven, and then tries to kill Helen and her lover Edith when they try to stop them.

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
FlowerPicking Since: Feb, 2023 Relationship Status: A heart full of love
Combogym77 Since: Apr, 2018 Relationship Status: Hiding
#17746: Jun 19th 2023 at 12:16:57 PM

Just curious. Has anyone ever proposed Ann Thomerson from Happy Birthday to Me?

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#17747: Jun 19th 2023 at 1:50:48 PM

[tup]Burke

"No running in the halls!"
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#17748: Jun 19th 2023 at 1:56:10 PM

[up][up]you can propose them if you want.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Azorius24 Accumulating Filibuster Counters from the Office of Naval Intelligence Sword Base (Troper Journeyman) Relationship Status: Non-Canon
Accumulating Filibuster Counters
#17749: Jun 19th 2023 at 1:56:14 PM

Hello, I wanted to suggest this minor character from The Peripheral as a probable candidate?

Context: The Peripheral is a 2014 science-fiction novel by William Gibson which switches between two settings, one in 2032 and the other in 2132. In the latter, a cavalcade of natural and man-made disasters known as "the jackpot" has wiped out 80% of the human population, with nanotechnology and other super-science developed just in time to prevent a total apocalypse. What's left of society is ruled over by "the klept", an oligarchy of Corrupt Corporate Executives who were rich enough to weather the Jackpot. With nearly unlimited wealth, lots of spare time, and access to super-advanced technology, members of the klept and their cronies often take up bizarre and elaborate hobbies to amuse themselves. One of which is Time Travel, or specifically use of a mysterious server which allows digital signals to be sent to and from the past. When contact is made, a new timeline known as a "stub" is created, which can be interfered with without affecting the present. People who engage in this practice call themselves "continua enthusiasts".

Who is Vespasian, and what has he done?: Even amongst the decadent and depraved klept, the German continua enthusiast known only by his username Vespasian stands out as the single most vile character in the book, despite primarily being mentioned on a single page. He is a weapons fetishist (implied to be in the disturbingly literal sense), who specialises in manipulating entire timelines into pointless, grinding Forever Wars specifically so he can salivate over whatever creative tools of destruction they come up with, condemning untold billions to misery and/or death for his own sick self-gratification. His modus operandi is to make small changes early in the timeline, then take over later on once chaos has begun to reign, making everything far, far worse. Pretty much everyone is disturbed by him, and when Inspector Lowbeer, the book's Big Good (ish) acquires the schematics of one of his weapons for her schemes, he makes an impromptu trip to Amsterdam and dies of natural causes, with the very heavy implication (confirmed in the sequel Agency) that Lowbeer found him so utterly horrible she couldn't stand to leave him alive.

"The only thing which is certain, is that something will happen".
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#17750: Jun 19th 2023 at 1:57:14 PM

Pending stuff:

I guess Satan goes to the Marvel Animation page? It was apparently part of a deal between Toei and Marvel, unlike the unlicensed Dragon Ball: The Magic Begins.

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