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Jojo Rabbit's YMMV page

• Spiritual Adaptation: Some watchers may consider this film as the closest thing to be a film adaptation of Calvin and Hobbes.

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Sep 26th 2019 at 2:01:21 AM

Ultraman Taiga's YMMV page

• Unexpected Character: The fans didn't expect Ultraman Ribut (A Malaysian-made Ultra) to make a brief appearance since his debut in the Upin & Ipin crossover.

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Sep 24th 2019 at 7:08:39 PM

Gundam Battle Gunpla Warfare's YMMV page

• Demonic Spiders: Oh boy. The enemy Gunplas in this game is considered as broken & unfair.

• Spiritual Adaptation: Judging by the premise, this game is basically Love Live! but with Gunpla over School Idols.

NOTE: No need to respond this since it was rejected due to Square Peg, Round Trope

JJBA's YMMV page

• Memetic Badass:
  • Speedwagon, despite being a Badass Normal, has a massive following within the fandom who like to portray him as all-powerful god who an defeat any character in and out of the franchise.
  • The entirety of the franchise is also considered as the strongest/godly (populairty-wise) piece of Anime media ever made since Dragon Ball Z.

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Sep 27th 2019 at 8:58:09 PM

LL's Memetic Loser page

Love Live! School Idol Festival ALL STARS

• Since the reveal of the erroneous preview image for µ's◊, The fans had a field day on seeing Umi as completely non-existent or as another Kotori Minami clone.

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Sep 27th 2019 at 12:29:22 AM

For Hate Sink:

• Mobile Suit Zeta Gundam:
  • Bask Om, the second-in-command of the Titans, is introduced beating war-hero Bright Noah for opossing a dangerous order. Favouring brutality in his army, Bask takes Kamille Bidan's mother as hostage to retrieve the Gundam MK-II before lying to his soldier to shoot at her capsule, killing her in front of her son. Using the Titans to commit multiple attrocities against them, the Titans use nerve gas against whole Space Colonies—-killing all their inhabitant—and experiment on teenagers to create Cyber Newtypes, unestable soldiers in semi-perpetual agony. Murderous and hateful, Bask's brutality made him stand as the worst of the leadership of the Titans, leading to their outlawing and eventual downfall.
  • Yazan Gable is a sadistic warmonger that joined the Titans to be able to kill people legally. Uncaring for the rules of war, he participates on a attempted Colony Drop to a populated city and later, Yazan arranges the death of a officer trying to prevent unnecessary bloodshed. Joining Paptimus Scirocco after he takes over the Titans, Yazan kills many heroes from the Anti Earth Union Group and even killing his own ally while showing no concern at the deaths of his most friendly subordinates. Defeated by Kamille, Yazan survives the battle and several days later, Yazan persuades a group of poor teenagers to infiltrate the Argama to steal the Zeta Gundam, taking the opportunity to kill another AEUG soldier before failing. Pathetically trying several attempts to steal the Zeta Gundam, Yazan joins Neo Zeon's soldiers, betraying the very purpose of the Titans in first place. A beast in the skin of a man, Yazan earned the hatred of both Kamille and Judeau.
  • Kamile's father, Franklin Bidan was a negligent and abusive workaholic that cheats on his wife. Taken as a hostage for the Titans and saved for the AEUG, Franklin betrays them and tries to escape back to the Titans even after them killed his own wife, wanting to continue his work creating Mobile Suits and being willing to shoot at his own son. A man without concern for anything or anyone but his work, his only passion in life, Franklin is the main reason behind Kamille's notorious anger issues.

Edited by KazuyaProta on Sep 24th 2019 at 9:32:09 AM

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Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

Bask Om, the second-in-command of the Titans, is introduced beating war-hero Bright Noah for opposing a dangerous order. Favouring brutality in his army, Bask takes Kamille Bidan's mother as hostage to retrieve the Gundam MK-II before lying to his soldier to get him to shoot at her capsule, killing her in front of her son. Using the Titans to commit multiple atrocities against them, the Titans use nerve gas against whole space colonies—-killing all of their inhabitants—and experiment on teenagers to create Cyber Newtypes, unstable soldiers in semi-perpetual agony. Murderous and hateful, Bask's brutality makes him stand out as the worst of the leadership of the Titans, leading to their being outlawed and eventual downfall.

Yazan Gable is a sadistic warmonger who joined the Titans to be able to kill people legally. Uncaring about the rules of war, he participates in a attempted Colony Drop on a populated city and later, Yazan arranges the death of a officer trying to prevent unnecessary bloodshed. Joining Paptimus Scirocco after he takes over the Titans, Yazan kills many heroes from the Anti Earth Union Group and even kills his own ally while showing no concern at the deaths of his most friendly subordinates. Defeated by Kamille, Yazan survives the battle and several days later, he persuades a group of poor teenagers to infiltrate the Argama to steal the Zeta Gundam, taking the opportunity to kill another AEUG soldier before failing. Pathetically trying several attempts to steal the Zeta Gundam, Yazan joins Neo Zeon's soldiers, betraying the very purpose of the Titans [in first place. A beast in the skin of a man, Yazan earns the hatred of both Kamille and Judeau.

Kamile's father <- no comma Franklin Bidan is a negligent and abusive workaholic who cheats on his wife. Taken as a hostage by the Titans and saved by the AEUG, Franklin betrays them and tries to escape back to the Titans even after they killed his own wife, wanting to continue his work creating Mobile Suits and being willing to shoot at his own son. A man without concern for anything or anyone but his work, his only passion in life, Franklin is the main reason behind Kamille's notorious anger issues.

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• You Wouldn't Shoot Me: In Season 3 episode 16, Michelle threatens the infected patient at gunpoint if he tries to leave the quarantine area. When the infected claims she would wouldn't pull the trigger, Michelle ends up gunning him down when the latter tries leave the building.

Edited by trainhobovegas on Sep 25th 2019 at 5:27:56 AM

LLSS' YMMV page

• Hilarious in Hindsight:
  • In the November 2017 issue of Dengeki G's magazine, an illustration of Chika had the "Aqours" being written as "Aquors" on the sign. On September 25, 2019, Dia's voice actress, Ariya Komiya, miswrote "Aqours" as "Auours" on one of her tweets, which is ironic considering the character she voiced reacts to someone who mispronounced "µ's" as "U's"

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Sep 26th 2019 at 5:07:58 PM

@trainhobovegas

In Season 3 episode 16, Michelle threatens the infected patient at gunpoint if he tries to leave the quarantine area. When the infected claims she would wouldn't pull the trigger, Michelle ends up gunning him down when he tries to leave the building.

^ "...Michelle threatens the infected patient at gunpoint if he tries to leave the quarantine area."

I realize that Michelle is threatening to shoot him, but when you write it this way, you need to say what Michelle threatens to do. It isn't bad English, but it is awkwardly written.

You could change it to:

• ...Michelle threatens the infected patient at gunpoint when he tries to leave the quarantine area.
• ...Michelle threatens the infected patient at gunpoint when he says he's going to leave the quarantine area.
• ...Michelle threatens to shoot the infected patient at gunpoint if he tries to leave the quarantine area.

I haven't watched the show, so I have no idea which would be correct.

Edited by Arivne on Sep 26th 2019 at 3:26:41 AM

• Shin Megami Tensei I: Ozawa is a Yakuza punk who extorts money from the townspeople and is introduced beating the Chaos Hero before working with General Gotou's millitary coup to become powerful. After the thirty-year Time Skip, he grows from an asshole teenager to an asshole middle-aged man ruling Shinjuku with a iron fist, making a pact with Minakata, to be able to do those same deeds on a wider scale. Visionary Items reveals that he also betrayed his original boss before taking over Shinjuku. Ruling using fear and braiwashing against dissidents, Ozawa was hated for almost everyone who met him.

• Shin Megami Tensei: Strange Journey:
  • Mitra is An Evilutionary Biologist trying to find a way to induce the perfect insanity in humans. Experimenting on multiple human soldiers in front of Zelenin and the protagonist, Mitra also keeps them as decorations in his room. After the protagonist reject working for him, Mitra says that humans should be grateful to him for his attempts to "reshape them" and declares that humans are pointless creatures, promising to reshape the world instead. Returning from death to work for Mother Tiamat, Mitra declares that human experimentation it's over and that "Now, It's time for atonement and death". A particularly nasty demon even among the misanthropic demons of the Schwarzwelt, Mitra was the main reason behind Zelenin's hate towards demonhood.
  • Captain Jack is a mercenary whose purpose in the story is to bring attention to the potential for humans to be just as depraved as demons, if not moreso. Introduced as a uneasy ally, it's later revealed that like Mitra, Jack conducts a variety of unethical experiments on living beings; in Jack's case he tears demons apart and tries to fuse them together, the results not only being horribly painful but also ineffective. Once he catches Jimenez, a longtime ally of the protagonist, Jack tortures him and his demon partner Boogaloo before fusing them, intending to use the creature as his slave. When finally confronted by the protagonist and Jimenez, Jack's only action is to scold them for costing him valuable men and equipment before engaging them in a final battle. A man that is commit any crime for money and earns Jimenez' utter hatred, Jack was the catalyst for Jimenez' alliance with demonhood.

Alfred J Kwak

• Animated Adaptation: The series is an animated adaptation of both the 1987 comic series by Harald Siepermann, which was also a comic adaptation of the one-man musical starring Herman Van Veen.

• Ascended Extra: In the original musical, Henk was a minor character who only showed up in the beginning of the first act and doesn't return until the final act when Alfred becomes king. In the comic and animated series, Henk is a supporting character who becomes a new father to Alfred.

@Kazuya Prota

Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

Ozawa is a Yakuza punk who extorts money from the townspeople and is introduced beating the Chaos Hero before working with General Gotou's military coup to become powerful. After the thirty-year Time Skip, he grows from an asshole teenager to an asshole middle-aged man ruling Shinjuku with a iron fist, making a pact with Minakata <- no comma to be able to do those same deeds on a wider scale. Visionary Items reveals that he also betrayed his original boss before taking over Shinjuku. Ruling using fear and braiwashing against dissidents, Ozawa is hated by almost everyone who met him.

Mitra is an Evilutionary Biologist trying to find a way to induce the perfect insanity in humans. Experimenting on multiple human soldiers in front of Zelenin and the protagonist, Mitra also keeps them as decorations in his room. After the protagonist reject (???) working for him, Mitra says that humans should be grateful to him for his attempts to "reshape them" and declares that humans are pointless creatures, promising to reshape the world instead. Returning from death to work for Mother Tiamat, Mitra declares that human experimentation is over and that "Now, it's time for atonement and death". A particularly nasty demon even among the misanthropic demons of the Schwarzwelt, Mitra is the main reason behind Zelenin's hate towards demonkind (???).

^ It's either protagonists reject or protagonist rejects.

^ "Demonhood" is a quality that a creature could have. For example, "After great sacrifice, he achieved demonhood." "Demonkind" refers to a community of demons.

Captain Jack is a mercenary whose purpose in the story is to bring attention to the potential for humans to be just as depraved as demons, if not moreso. Introduced as a uneasy ally, it's later revealed that like Mitra, Jack conducts a variety of unethical experiments on living beings. <- period In Jack's case, <- comma he tears demons apart and tries to fuse them together, the results being not only horribly painful but also ineffective. Once he catches Jimenez, a longtime ally of the protagonist, Jack tortures him and his demon partner Boogaloo before fusing them, intending to use the creature as his slave. When finally confronted by the protagonist and Jimenez, Jack's only action is to scold them for costing him valuable men and equipment before engaging them in a final battle. A man who will commit any crime for money and earns Jimenez's utter hatred, Jack is the catalyst for Jimenez's alliance with demonkind.

^ The sentence that started "Introduced as a uneasy ally..." was a run-on sentence.

Edited by Arivne on Sep 27th 2019 at 2:30:29 AM

I wrote "The fans didn't expect Ultraman Ribut, a Malaysian-made Ultra, to make an appearance."

Also, you can't really call a series a Memetic Badass. That doesn't fit the trope, for multiple reasons.

• Shin Megami Tensei IV: Tayama controls the post-apocalyptic Tokyo through blackmail and threatening to stop producing Red Pills, a drug demons can feed off of instead of eating humans, if his authority is ever challenged. However, he also runs a human farm where Magnetite is extracted directly from the brains of people he has kidnapped and children he has breeded for that purpose after forcing their mothers, which is the secret ingredient of the pills and an NPC implies he engages in Wife Husbandry on top of that. Disgusting and horrifying everyone that discovers his secret, Tayama tries to claim that he's trying to protect the peace between humans and demons in Tokyo but his obvious ambition and Lack of Empathy make obvious that he's just trying to preserve his power at all costs.

• Persona 3: Shuji Ikutsuki uses the player as his personal pawn for reviving Nyx. To make matters worse, once the party catches on to the truth, he forcibly takes control of Aigis and crucifies the party with the intent of sacrificing them to Nyx. Mitsuru's father then shows up to confront him, and in the ensuing confrontation, both men end up dead. His crimes get even worse in the Persona 4: Arena duology, in which it's revealed that Ikutsuki was responsible for experimenting on Sho Minazuki, so much of the hardship and tragedy in the games involving the P3 cast is his fault.

• Persona 4: The highly unstable and insane Mitsuo Kubo murders Mr. Morooka and took credit for two prior murders, merely to get attention. Once confront by the Investigation Team on his supposed crimes, he gloats and laughs himself, completely disgusting the main cast. The anime adaptation expands on his character more, showing Mitsuo going a power trip after killing Mr. Morooka, and threatening harm upon Nanako.

Edited by KazuyaProta on Sep 27th 2019 at 11:41:29 AM

JJBA Battle Tendency's YMMV page

• Memetic Loser: Here lies Speedwagon: He never scored. ^note This may overlap with Memetic Badass as the majority of the fans believe that Speedwagon doesn't need to marry a woman in his life.

Added Memetic Loser: Here lies Speedwagon—he never scored.

I skipped the note, because it felt a bit nattery.

Ace Combat 7: Skies Unknown

Edited by Avenger09 on Sep 27th 2019 at 4:04:36 PM

x 7 @brb1006

The series is an animated adaptation of both the 1987 comic series by Harald Siepermann, which was itself a comic adaptation of the one-man musical starring Herman Van Veen.

^ "...both the 1987 comic series by Harald Siepermann, which..."

Both the 1987 comic series by Harald Siepermann and what? Does the "both" not belong there, or is there something missing?

In the original musical, Henk is a minor character who only shows up at the beginning of the first act and doesn't return until the final act, <- comma when Alfred becomes king.

^ Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

x 5 @Kazuya Prota

Tayama controls the post-apocalyptic Tokyo through blackmail and by threatening to stop producing Red Pills, a drug demons can feed off of instead of eating humans, if his authority is ever challenged. However, he also runs a human farm where Magnetite is extracted directly from the brains of people he has kidnapped and children he has bred for that purpose after forcing their mothers, which is the secret ingredient of the pills. <- period On top of that, an NPC implies he engages in Wife Husbandry. Disgusting and horrifying everyone who discovers his secret, Tayama tries to claim that he's trying to protect the peace between humans and demons in Tokyo, <- comma but his obvious ambition and Lack of Empathy make it obvious that he's just trying to preserve his power at all costs.

^ "after forcing their mothers, which"

After forcing their mothers to do what?

Shuji Ikutsuki uses the player as his personal pawn to revive Nyx. <snip> His crimes get even worse in the Persona 4: Arena duology, in which it's revealed that Ikutsuki is responsible for experimenting on Sho Minazuki, so much of the hardship and tragedy in the games involving the P3 cast is his fault.

The highly unstable and insane Mitsuo Kubo murders Mr. Morooka and takes credit for two prior murders <- no comma merely to get attention. Once confronted by the Investigation Team about his supposed crimes, he gloats and laughs himself, completely disgusting the main cast. The anime adaptation expands on his character more, showing Mitsuo going on a power trip after killing Mr. Morooka <- no comma and threatening harm against Nanako.

^ ^^ Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

Edited by Arivne on Sep 28th 2019 at 1:48:51 AM

Kibutsuji Muzan and the Twelve Demon Moons Kokushibou Big Brother Worship: In his final moments, all he wanted was to be like his twin brother and live a long life to be his successor. Heel Realization: When he looked at his reflection from Sanami’s swords he realizes what a monster he had becomes even though he tries to retain his human appearance. He decides to died in shame what a hideous beast he had become.

Big Brother Worship: In his final moments, all he wants is to be like his twin brother and spend a long life as his successor. Heel Realization: When he looks at his reflection in Sanami’s swords, he realizes what a monster he's become despite trying to retain his human appearance. He decides to die in shame of turning into such a beast.

My MB entry that soon gets posted:

• Last Scenario: Augustus worked himself to the top so he could become the Empire's minister and seeks to prove that even commoners can get the throne. He effortlessly manipulates Felgorn to murder the Emperor so that the Spoiled Brat princess Helga could take over, then let her run the Empire into the ground so that when he covertly assasinated her, everyone rejoices and appoints him Emperor. And when Felgorn finally wises up and turns on him, Augustus allows him to kill him, stating before dying that he was content and that, with his desire fulfilled, he had already won.

I said someone else could do that, but this could do as well.

^

Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

Augustus works himself to the top so he can become the Empire's minister and seeks to prove that even commoners can achieve the throne. He effortlessly manipulates Felgorn into murdering the Emperor so that the Spoiled Brat princess Helga can take over. <- period He then lets her run the Empire into the ground so that when he covertly assassinates her, everyone rejoices and appoints him Emperor. And When Felgorn finally wises up and turns on him, Augustus allows Felgorn to kill him, stating before dying that he is content and that, with his desire fulfilled, he has already won.

^ I broke up a long, complicated sentence into two separate sentences so it would be easier to understand.

"everyone rejoices and appoints him Emperor"

How does "everyone" appoint him Emperor?

Edited by Arivne on Oct 4th 2019 at 4:08:51 AM