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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#5176: Apr 11th 2018 at 9:21:12 PM

[up] - Maybe implied just because Magical Eye is a trope that exists? It's more clearly Exotic Eye Designs, though?

Eye Beams would be Discussed, given that laser question was asked.

edited 11th Apr '18 9:21:57 PM by Malady

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#5177: Apr 11th 2018 at 10:53:58 PM

I Cut both entries . Alright another question. This is on Greater-Scope Villain for Video Games.

  • In Super Robot Wars V, if it wasn't for the Crossover nature of the game, Embryo would have been the Big Bad. He orchestrates almost everything that happens between the two worlds and is responsible for accelerating the fusion of the three worlds the heroes are trying to save. And even then, it's implied that there's someone even higher than him who orchestrates everything: Black Noire who claims to not just have set up everything that happens in the Anno Domini j, but did it For the Evulz.

Isn't Embryo the Big Bad of this game for real though. Hrs the driving force and and main villain and saying because its a crossover and hence that makes him a Greater-Scope Villain is a bit weird as that seems to imply that every bad guy whoose the main villain of a crossover is a GSV. So is it correct ?

edited 11th Apr '18 10:54:24 PM by miraculous

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sgamer82 Since: Jan, 2001
#5178: Apr 12th 2018 at 6:07:20 AM

[up][up]I went ahead and popped it into Exotic Eye Designs, with the possibility of a Magical Eye being mentioned.

MagBas Mag Bas from In my house Since: Jun, 2009
#5179: Apr 12th 2018 at 12:19:46 PM

[up][up] Considering this description he is the Big Bad, not the Greater-Scope Villain.

Question: are the following Trolling Creator examples correct?:

  • Trolling Creator: Game Freak for mostly the same reason as their nickname.
    • What can you say when they made Levitate Flying Rotom, and Insomnia Delibirdnote Delibird has acces to Vital Spirit, which does exactly the same thing as Insomnia, or Event Only Heatran with Eruption and Quiet Nature?note Probably the best example is Shedinja, who can learn Final Gambit and Sandstorm.note Final Gambit faints your Pokémon and does the same amount of damage as your Pokémon's current HP. Sandstorm is a weather condition that removes a bit of HP if it's not Rock-, Ground-, or Steel-type. When you put either of them on the One-Hit-Point Wonder Bug/Ghost that is Shedinja, well...
      • Then Inversed Battle comes, and that Rotom is the only Flying-type that's still immune to Ground-type.
    • How about making a set of games called Pokémon Sun and Moon, but don't have Solrock and Lunatone (who are shaped like a sun and moon respectively) available for capture. Or how about basing it on Hawaii but not have Bellossom (partially based on a Hula dancer) available either. Pokémon Ultra Sun and Ultra Moon has Bellossom belonging to NP Cs... but they're still not available for capture.

edited 12th Apr '18 12:20:03 PM by MagBas

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#5180: Apr 12th 2018 at 12:52:25 PM

[up]The second example sounds weird with lunatone, solrok and bellosom as it kinda sounds like streching and brigning fanon.. So I dont think that one is right.

edited 12th Apr '18 12:54:00 PM by miraculous

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#5181: Apr 12th 2018 at 8:02:41 PM

    Feminist Frequency 
From WebVideo.Feminist Frequency, this is Conversational Troping, right... Wait, no, this is not idle chatter, so these are all Discussed Trope, then?

Also, how do I make it neater? ... Should I just summarize the quotes, or keep the quotes?

  • Hyperactive Metabolism: From the transcript of Are Women Too Hard To Animate? Female Combatants:
    To participate in the worlds games create, we happily accept time travel, superpowers, ancient alien civilizations, the ability to carry infinite items, the idea that eating a hot dog can instantly heal your wounds, and a million other fictions. It’s certainly not too much to ask that these fictional worlds give us believable female combatants too.
  • Time Travel: From the transcript of Are Women Too Hard To Animate? Female Combatants:
    To participate in the worlds games create, we happily accept time travel, superpowers, ancient alien civilizations, the ability to carry infinite items, the idea that eating a hot dog can instantly heal your wounds, and a million other fictions. It’s certainly not too much to ask that these fictional worlds give us believable female combatants too.


And this is under Invoked, but, it's called Discussed... Which one's right? Or can it be both?

* Men Use Violence, Women Use Communication: Discussed in her videos about True Grit and Veronica Mars. Anita appears to believe that women using violence makes a work not feminist, just by definition.

    Conversational Troping 
From Conversational Troping, the following seems wrong:

* In Steven Universe, When discussing the ending of The Spirit Morph Saga in "Open Book" Connie talks about how she thought the book series was, in her own words, "subverting these witch tropes", and was really self aware, only for none of that to seemingly matter in the end.

Should that be Discussed Trope? Because that page says

Of necessity, almost all criticism involves the twilight realm between Conversational Troping and Discussing the trope; as a rule, TV Tropes errs on the side of calling them "discussed", because the trope is directly relevant to the "plot" at hand,"

edited 12th Apr '18 8:10:40 PM by Malady

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#5182: Apr 13th 2018 at 1:42:31 AM

Okay another example I wanted to ask about. This time from Kamen Rider Build.

Ambiguously Evil: There was still good in Katsuragi, as evidenced in how he became Sento when freed of his memories and given a new face, but it was buried deep under his grief, and perhaps a push from the Pandora Box. Driven by his fury, he would do so many horrific things that he became known as the Devil's Scientist for his willingness to sell his soul for the sake of research, but eventually his better nature won out enough for him to try and quit. In the end, Katsuragi was indeed a monster, but not one beyond salvation.

Does this fit here or would it work better under Anti-Villain considering he did plenty of unambiguously bad things albeit for a greater good.

edited 13th Apr '18 1:42:56 AM by miraculous

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Zuxtron Berserk Button: misusing Nightmare Fuel from Node 03 (On A Trope Odyssey)
#5183: Apr 13th 2018 at 11:57:37 AM

From Player Unknowns Battlegrounds:

  • Unusual Euphemism: The phrase "Winner Winner Chicken Dinner" pops up when you win a match. This is a Running Gag that dates back to previous Battle Royale-style games that PlayerUnknown has worked on (which will also give you the same quote for winning).

"Winner Winner Chicken Dinner" is neither unusual (the phrase has been commonly used for decades) or an euphemism (it's more of a funny chant than an attempt to be less explicit). Should I just cut this?

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#5185: Apr 13th 2018 at 12:29:59 PM

Yeah Author Catchphrase would be it, last week they announced they are suing a mobile battle royal game over using it.

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#5186: Apr 13th 2018 at 4:09:02 PM

From YMMV.Atlantis The Lost Empire:

Are any of these Ensemble Darkhorses? They're all major characters , aren't they?

AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
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#5187: Apr 13th 2018 at 4:13:30 PM

Way too many of them, unless there's like a hundred of them. There's nothing that states how prominent the characters are relative to others, since that's one of the main criteria for the trope (being popular outside their weight class).

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#5189: Apr 13th 2018 at 6:09:25 PM

Is Arm Cannon one of the Disability Tropes, if it doesn't actually require a disability?

edited 13th Apr '18 6:09:38 PM by Malady

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#5190: Apr 14th 2018 at 12:40:46 AM

Disability Tropes is an index, not a supertrope. As such tropes that are connected to disabilities, whether always or frequently, can also go on it.

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#5191: Apr 14th 2018 at 1:38:45 AM

Uh guys could you answer my question on the Ambiguously Evil entry

edited 14th Apr '18 1:39:00 AM by miraculous

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Merseyuser1 Since: Sep, 2011
#5192: Apr 14th 2018 at 2:17:50 AM

Would this example from Secret Wars (2015) fit the trope it's describing, or is it another trope entirely:

  • Loose Canon: This event like DC's Convergence allowed Marvel to publish books with the same character in a variety of stories. Some journalists are referring to this combined effort between the two publishers as the possible start of a "Prismatic Age of Comics", where the same character can exist in multiple contexts. The difference in approach, thus far, is that DC seems to have multiple versions of the same person running around (such as two versions of Superman running around) while Marvel is allowing multiple different characters to use the same name, such as two different Spider-Men, Spider-Women and Hawkeyes.

Also, from BAT Corps: (I know it's a Darth Wiki page, but I'll treat it as if it were a work page anyway, even though Darth Wiki isn't a works page anyway, just to ensure tropes are used properly).

From Kings Quest (2015):

  • Broad Strokes: The events of the old games did happen (in some form), but certain details and sometimes entire events are recalled or referenced differently than how they happened.
    • The press release comments for Chapter 3 state that we as fans are to essentially see the original games as simply 'fairy tales' and 'legend', and that the new series shows 'what' really happened, the 'truth'. In regards to events of KQ2, for example, the choice of princesses in Chapter 3 determines the personality and appearance of Valanice in the present.
    • Alternatively Graham is portrayed as an Unreliable Narrator and maybe lying, embellishing, telling tall tales in his old age, using "creative licensing", and even being influenced to some degree by Gwendolyn.
    • Even the Magic Mirror may be changing aspects of historical past as the stories are retold.

From ''Rayman Origins':

  • Broad Strokes: The game applies some visual and story Retcons to the first game to fit in with the rest of the franchise, as well as bits of 2 and 3, such as 3's Land of the Livid Dead looking much less peaceful, but things seem to have largely happened in the same way as they did in the previous games, aside from the Rabbids, whose entire presence are completely ignored.

Checking these fit the tropes described!

edited 14th Apr '18 2:25:42 AM by Merseyuser1

Anddrix Since: Oct, 2014
#5193: Apr 14th 2018 at 5:07:31 AM

Are the following examples from YMMV.Titans 2018 being used correctly:

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#5194: Apr 14th 2018 at 5:12:33 AM

Those all seem okay to me. "More darker" is grammatically incorrect though.

SamCurt Since: Jan, 2001
#5195: Apr 14th 2018 at 8:39:43 PM

I have noticed the following in a character sheet:

  • Becoming the Mask: Tsubasa has a very active imagination and enjoys acting out her characters in order to write their dialogue.

This "Tsubasa" is a Sequential Artist. I know what Becoming the Mask means, but does a creator acting out like their characters really count as that trope?

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#5196: Apr 14th 2018 at 9:21:15 PM

Pretty sure that's a shoehorn. Or just plain misuse.

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#5197: Apr 14th 2018 at 9:50:49 PM

It would only count if Tsubasa's "default" personality starts to resemble the character's.

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#5198: Apr 15th 2018 at 5:21:39 AM

Is this an example of Harsher in Hindsight? From YMMV.Steven Universe:

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#5199: Apr 15th 2018 at 6:55:02 AM

So uh on the ymmv page of Dmc Devil May Cry. Somone changed this Strawman Has a Point entry :

To this Designated Hero entry :

Is this right as I'm not sure this a right use of this.

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#5200: Apr 15th 2018 at 2:42:56 PM

It's not Strawman Has a Point if the creator isn't presenting the villain as a strawman who's there to be wrong. If the hero's goal isn't clearly much better (as assumed by the story), then it's not a strawman. If the villain's point is a workable, if oppressive, option, then it's not a strawman.

A Designated Hero is someone who's arguable a villain, or at least a Jerkass, but are presented a shining moral pillar (or at least in that general direction). If they are heroic, or if they're not presented as heroic, then it's not a Designated Hero. I'm not familiar with the series, but I was under the impression that Dante's more of an Anti-Hero.

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