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So this is a place for people who are interested in helping out, or getting help with, wick checks. Maybe you just want people to double-check your work before you submit it to the TRS, or maybe you have a big project in mind and can't tackle it on your own. Either way, you've come to the right place!

Remember to check out How to Do a Wick Check for a run down, and feel free to browse Tropes Needing TRS if you need ideas for what trope to do a wick-check for.

For the list of current and completed projects, see Wick Check Project. Once your wick check is done and ready to go to a TRS thread, see the TRS Queue.

Edited by WarJay77 on Nov 4th 2022 at 11:55:13 AM

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#1: May 5th 2020 at 7:31:35 PM

So this is a place for people who are interested in helping out, or getting help with, wick checks. Maybe you just want people to double-check your work before you submit it to the TRS, or maybe you have a big project in mind and can't tackle it on your own. Either way, you've come to the right place!

Remember to check out How to Do a Wick Check for a run down, and feel free to browse Tropes Needing TRS if you need ideas for what trope to do a wick-check for.

For the list of current and completed projects, see Wick Check Project. Once your wick check is done and ready to go to a TRS thread, see the TRS Queue.

Edited by WarJay77 on Nov 4th 2022 at 11:55:13 AM

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jandn2014 Very Spooky from somewhere in Connecticut Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Hiding
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#2: May 5th 2020 at 7:40:16 PM

Sounds good. I’d be willing to help, but I have two questions:

  1. I know the main problems with Adorkable are ZCEs and gushing, but how do we differentiate gushing from valid usage?

  2. How is Deadpan Snarker being misused? I know there’s a problem with ZCEs, but I don’t know what kind of misuse is occurring.

Edited by jandn2014 on May 5th 2020 at 10:40:22 AM

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#3: May 5th 2020 at 7:43:35 PM

[up] People are using deadpan snarker for anytime a character says something sarcastic or even things that are just straight insults. The trope is supposed to be about a sardonic character who has a lot of their dialogue filled with snark/sarcasm.

On another note, is the deadpan part of the trope still relevent or is it just The Snarker now? Deadpan and snark dont always go together and most people use DS for characters that are prone to sarcasm? So if Deadpan Snarker is potholed like this from Cat Girl:

  • Kansuke from Cat Paradise is a normal cat who can transform into a Catboy whenever he puts on one of his owner's goofy costumes. He retains his claws, ears, tail, some of his fur, and his snarky personality.

Is that correct use?

Edited by MacronNotes on May 5th 2020 at 10:46:59 AM

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jandn2014 Very Spooky from somewhere in Connecticut Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Hiding
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#4: May 5th 2020 at 7:49:40 PM

[up] Oh, I see. Looking at the Adorkable wick check sandbox, I assume for an entry to be valid, a character’s adorkableness needs to be regarded and/or have an impact in-universe? How many more wicks do we need to check for it, anyway?

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#5: May 5th 2020 at 8:01:35 PM

Right.

  • Adorkable is being used for literally any character the audience deems cute and dorky. I'm genuinely unsure of what constitutes a valid example of the trope though- should we go for the in-universe factor? Or is it more about how when a character is made more endearing because they're so dorky?
  • Deadpan Snarker is just used for literally any character who has ever said a sarcastic line. While I can go either way on whether or not the examples need to be "deadpan" or just generally snarky, it's misuse to label any character who occasionally makes a snarky joke as a Deadpan Snarker; it should ideally be more of a major aspect of the character.

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#6: May 5th 2020 at 9:49:41 PM

I could have sworn Adorkable was made YMMV at some point like Moe but I guess I am misrembering. Either way, I don't think this is going to be easy to sort when we have a trope that accepts objective and subjective entries. But that's for TRS to decide whether to keep as either and audience reaction, an objective in-universe trope or both.

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#7: May 6th 2020 at 3:31:52 AM

[up] There was only talk about making Adorkable ymmv. Once quite seriously in Trope Repair Shop, but it was shot down pretty quickly in the page-action crowner. People obviously liked that they can gush and project their dorky interests on other characters. The TRS kinda fizzled out without any proper cleanup, too.

I think the idea of making it an audience reaction resurfaced at least two other times in Trope Talk or Ask the Tropers.

And I remember from that TRS that some people obviously thought it already is a YMMV-trope because it was put on YMMV tabs. But those were moved to the main work pages, mostly.


Personally I don't think making it YMMV is the way to go. Because the problem will remain the same — gushing, projecting and shoehorning.

Another problem contributing to the ZCE issue is that the portmanteau word is now used quite casually, and people substitute the use of the word with context. Alice is called this in many reviews of "Alice and Bob". Used verbatim to describe Charlie in promo of "Charlie's Choice".

Also what I noticed in the wick check is that people use the trope to mean adorable and they just feel the need to pothole it. Even though it does nothing special to the example write-up, which would be more readable without the pothole/sinkhole.


I'm pretty sure it also came up on the fixing ZCE thread, but I can't find the posts.

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#8: May 6th 2020 at 3:49:01 AM

Adorkable used in-universe isn't too different from Nerds Are Sexy to me. Granted sexiness isnt the same as cuteness and dork and nerd arent synonymous but its almost ways linked to attractiveness when it is mentioned.

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#9: May 6th 2020 at 4:06:08 AM

I'm too late for Adorkable, but I'll probably check 24 wicks for Deadpan Snarker (I think it's a valid trope, but perhaps too many characters who only say one line). That'd leave 144 wicks for others.

Though where I'd put cases where there are several not really counting examples and only one or two that really count, like on Characters.The Lion King 2019? Just want to make sure.

On second thought, I don't know if I want to. There are so many pages on the related page it makes the browser lag. I'll do what I can, but the admins should really split them someday as detailed here. Just a warning for the future - I ain't checking anything with 30000+ wicks, may drop to 20000+ depending on the performance here.

Edited by Piterpicher on May 6th 2020 at 1:38:11 PM

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#10: May 6th 2020 at 4:14:42 AM

Well things that don't count go in the "Misuse" folder and correct use goes in that folder. But I suppose I can make "Other" for grey area things.

Edited by MacronNotes on Nov 7th 2022 at 8:55:14 AM

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XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
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#11: May 6th 2020 at 7:37:55 AM

[up] I indeed ended with "murky" folder for the adorkable wick check.

For some examples, it was impossible for me to decide — it looks almost correct, but not quite. Something feels absolutely right but not complete. Or something feels missing from being a clear cut example. Many examples have the frustrating amount of half-context that could go either into almost-correct or straight up misuse.

It's also hard to say what Adorkable is even supposed to mean at this point, too. After reading those examples, I feel like anything and anybody can be called cute and dorky.

A character loves and appreciates classical music? Ooh, so cute and geeky. He squees over his favourite musical interpreters? Ooh, such a dork. He loves his cute dog? He's so very cute. Loves his husband? Cute! Never mind that he's a no-nonsense badass cop Bald Black Leader Guy most of the time. Yes, Captain Holt from Brooklyn Nine-Nine can be adorable despite first impressions and his "robot" persona. Yes, he has some high brow interests that he treats like serious business (not unlike many Holywood Nerds treat comic books and popculture)... but does that make him Adorkable? I'd say no, but I don't know anymore.

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#12: May 6th 2020 at 8:15:28 AM

So, just to be clear, Deadpan Snarker is not just "character makes sarcastic comments a lot", right? Does the example need to list what the character's love of sarcasm says about their personality to be valid?

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#13: May 6th 2020 at 8:19:20 AM

[up] “Character makes sarcastic comments a lot“ is what Deadpan Snarker is; it’s just that the snarkiness needs to be a major trait of the character, not just “character makes a snarky joke occasionally”.

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#14: May 6th 2020 at 10:17:54 AM

Right; Deadpan Snarker should ideally be more along the lines of "This character makes sarcastic jokes a lot, to the point where it's a recurring and well-known trait of their character". Nowadays almost everyone is being snarky at some points, so the line is drawn based on how often a character does it.

Bummed I couldn't add anything to the Adorkable wick check, but whatever...Deadpan Snarker it is.

Edited by WarJay77 on May 6th 2020 at 1:21:34 PM

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#15: May 6th 2020 at 10:22:41 AM

The problem may be that XFllo works too much, too fast? I don't know, she has already covered 30 wicks for Deadpan Snarker and pretty much singlehandedly did Adorkable, and she just makes dozens of edits in a row, rather than in one go like I intend to. Let others work sometimes.

By the way, I've done 8 out of 24 target and have it in a Notepad++ file. Blame the big-ass Related page and my procrastination.

Edited by Piterpicher on May 6th 2020 at 7:24:14 PM

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#16: May 6th 2020 at 10:24:25 AM

Yeah, Xfllo I'm stunned at how much work you're doing, but the rest of us want to check some wicks as well. That's the entire reason for this thread's existence, so please let us finish Deadpan Snarker as a collective.

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#17: May 6th 2020 at 10:26:13 AM

Two more quick questions about Deadpan Snarker:

  1. Should I file sinkholes to it under misuse or ZCE?
  2. I'm seeing a lot of examples that just say "this character makes a lot of sarcastic comments" without elaborating further or giving any examples of snarky comments they made. Is that enough context?

WarJay77 Big Catch, Sparkle Edition (Troper Knight)
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#18: May 6th 2020 at 10:30:06 AM

[up] Personally:

  • I'd file that under a ZCE. It's too context-light to tell if it is misuse or not.
  • Hmmm...it's a bit skimpy on the context, but might be passable. It's really a judgement call.

Anyway, I'll try and get about 15-20 wicks done soon.

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#19: May 6th 2020 at 10:46:05 AM

I hope I don't need to apologize for doing tedious cleanup work and TRS stuff. :-D

I didn't know you planned to do a wick check for Adorkable. I've wanted to try to open a TRS discussion for this trope for about a year, and recently, I've reached a point when I couldn't take the constant misuse and ZCE anymore. And I happened to have some time on my hands yesterday (and today, too). So there's that.

So the first post for TRS for Adorkable is done. Fingers crossed for it being opened soon.


As for Deadpan Snarker — I really, really don't plan to do the whole wick check. 170 wicks is a lot. But almost no work was done on the Sandbox besides three initial examples, so I wanted to contribute just a bit. And I kinda got to that flow state, you know?

Btw, a second opinion is always welcome, so if you feel like some "murky examples" (both on adorkable or on deadpan snarker) are actually okay for you, or if you think it's clear misuse, or if it's clearly insufficient context, feels free to move it.

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#20: May 6th 2020 at 10:48:13 AM

Nah, I'm not upset, like I said I'm amazed and impressed by how much you've done...I'm just bummed because I thought we'd all end up contributing smaller-scale wick checks to the larger project and then by the time I wake up...the TRS thread was already made. [lol]

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#21: May 6th 2020 at 10:53:40 AM

[up] OK, that I understand. And honestly, now I'm bummed how much time I wasted on TV Tropes. :-D Yet again.

Btw this flow will not last, I'm sure, so all this energy can be done during cleanup. It will need massive manpower, if only for tackling all the ZCE. And if we end up removing vague almost-zce examples like "Bob is dorky but adorable", it'll be never-ending.

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#22: May 6th 2020 at 10:56:05 AM

Fair enough ~

Anyway, once I'm done crosswicking my new trope I'll tackle some wicks.

Yes, that was a plug :P

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#23: May 6th 2020 at 11:02:33 AM

I usually put sinkholes in the "Misuse" catagory because we aren't supposed to be doing them to begin with according to Administrivia.Sinkhole.

I have been busy on a million other things on the wiki so I only started 3 examples just to have something. Will try to check at least 30 later.

Edited by MacronNotes on May 6th 2020 at 2:06:09 PM

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#24: May 6th 2020 at 11:17:50 AM

Hmmm... that's why I usually make a "Misc" category for my wick checks.

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#25: May 6th 2020 at 11:36:23 AM

    My 20 Wicks, to-be-added to the Sandbox 
  • "Open!" Says Me: 2 Wicks:
    • In Atlantis: The Lost Empire, the mercenary team blows up the door to the throne room with dynamite, after which demolitions expert Vinnie says "Knock, knock." Pothole that doesn't tell me much. Can't tell if it's misuse or not.
    • Optimus Prime himself got in on this in "Day of the Machines", along with a rare moment of Deadpan Snarker. If it's a rare moment, Optimus Prime doesn't qualify, but it seems to just be saying he was snarky here, which is rare. Misuse either way.
  • Surfer Dude: "Seth has an IQ of 193, is shirtless only briefly if at all, and never uses the surfer dialect." A meaningless sinkhole in an example full of sinkholes.
  • Characters.Beast Wars Maximals: This show has a pretty witty cast, so many of them fit this trope. However, there are episodes where this is all Rattrap does. It has 5 wicks, but this one seems to explain the page's problem in a nutshell. Not only is this low on context, but it seems less like a stand-out trait and more like World of Snark. If everyone is a Deadpan Snarker...nobody is.
  • Characters.Facade: Two wicks:
    • "She can see right through Trip's arrogance and regularly makes snarky comments about it." This one, though light on context, seems valid enough. It's written as though this is a main character trait of her's.
    • "You certainly can play as one." This one, however, is meaningless. Everything the character does is open to interpretation, apparently, so you can put anything in this wick and it'll fit.
  • Characters.Red Lightning: "Is painted this way in every way." ZCE. If it's accurate, then the example qualifies, but the example is also unhelpful; this is all it says.
  • Characters.Teen Wolf Werewolves: Of all four wicks on the page, only one of them qualifies as a proper and well-written example. That one will be posted first, followed by the other three.
    • Peter has perfected the sarcastic remark to an art form, and uses it at every possible moment to mock those around him.
    Peter: It's quite a situation you've got yourself in here, Derek. I mean, I'm out of commission for a few weeks and suddenly there's lizard people, geriatric psychopaths, and you're cooking up werewolves out of every self-esteem deprived adolescent in town.
    • " It runs in the family." The only thing that makes this slightly more contextual is that this character is related to Peter from the first example. Otherwise it's useless and meaningless and unhelpful.
    • "Not a-lot but he does have his moments of snark" ZCE and misuse
    • After watching Possessed!Kira fling Scott across a hallway, she just dryly asks, "...a friend of yours?" Impossible to tell if this is a one-off comment or a recurring character trait.
  • Characters.Total Drama Stranded: Three examples, all are ZCEs, two of which don't have anything but the trope name. The only one that doesn't just says "Especially around Rusty." This is for a character who apparently hates everyone, so maybe it's valid, but I refuse to give it the benefit of the doubt.
  • Characters.The World Of Narue: "Has shades of this, especially whenever Kazuto's fantasies pop up." "Shades of this" usually means it's not a main character trait and is instead just the character occasionally being sarcastic.
  • Fanfic.Compass Of Thy Soul: Neither of the two examples seem to qualify; both lack context and imply the sarcasm isn't that often.
    • Kita just a little, mostly in narration.
    • The Hatake clan as a whole are low-key snarkers.
  • Fanfic.Hunters Of Death: Literally just a quote that implies the correct trope is World of Snark.
    John Shepard: "... You know, I'm starting to realize I have a team made up of smartasses."
  • Funny.Rosario To Vampire: The example, posted below, includes a snarky line potholed to Deadpan Snarker. Impossible to tell if it's correct usage or not.
    • "A bit of dark humor, from chapter 64, the Outer Moka returns and hugs Tsukune, Tsukune then says that he's happy that she's back, and then Masked King appears behind them."
    Tsukune: “Moka-san I'm so happy!”, “You got your rosary back!”.
    Masked King: *appears behind them* “Yeah, I'm happy too!”
  • Funny.Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles 1987: One of Raph's quotes is potholed to Deadpan Snarker. Knowing the character he's a valid example, but that doesn't mean potholing every sarcastic line to the trope is a valid move. Could just as easily be misuse, if I didn't know the context.
  • Literature.Demon Squad: "Frank loves making fun of his relatives." So light on context, it barely seems to be a Deadpan Snarker example at all; could just as easily claim it's Jerkass or something. The example implies that this is a recurring character trait and that his mockery is sarcastic in nature, but none of that comes through in the actual text, so I could be completely wrong.
  • Literature.Jingo: "Vetinari is on particularly good form here, especially in the early stages." ZCE; requires knowing the character to know if the example is accurate or misuse.
  • Quotes.Fallout New Vegas: Sarcastic line pothole misuse
Cass: (discussing the NCR's over-expansion problem) No one's dick is that fucking long. Not even Long Dick Johnson, and he had a fucking long dick. Thus, the name.
  • Recap.Triptych Continuum A Total Eclipse Of The Fun: Tad light on context, but based on what's there it seems to be valid.
    • "Firmly establishes this for Luna, and gives more than a hint of Twilight's capabilities in the category."
    • Luna at the press conference:
    "Incidentally, if I could enthrall ponies and make them do whatever I wished, a number of you would be asking much more intelligent questions..."
  • Series.Pair Of Kings:
    • Mikayla. Lanny isn't too bad himself. Both ZCEs
    • Boz also has traces of this: "Wow, tough childhood. When I was five I was naked and living in a tree." "Traces of" is another form of "Shades of"; Boz doesn't appear to do it often enough.
  • SuspiciouslySpecificDenial.Video Games: Another potholed quote example, posted below. Barely scrapes out of misuse territory only because I know Sonic is a very sarcastic character. If I didn't though...well, that'd be a problem, since there's no actual context in the quote itself.
    Eggman: (part of recorded announcement) "This amusement park has been constructed entirely out of a sense of remorse for my past transgressions and is in no way associated with any sort of evil plot or premeditated misdeeds."
    Sonic: ... Well, that's a relief.
  • VideoGame.The X Files Game: "The protagonist of the story is Deadpan Snarker Seattle FBI agent named Craig Willmore." There's no extra context in the examples section to tell me how this character is snarky; there's a good chance that this isn't misuse, but with no context it's impossible to know for sure.
  • VisualNovel.Culinary Kakkoii: "Bruce is like this towards Marly" ZCE, I'll assume misuse since it implies the character is only like this around the other character.

This is an in-progress post that will be updated as I check the wicks.

Edited by WarJay77 on May 6th 2020 at 3:13:42 PM

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