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• Distant Finale: After Rambler finally accepts Clover to come traveling with him. The story then transitions to a few years later where we see Clover now as a young adult who visits Crescent Forest since she hadn't been then since she was a little. We also get to see her friends as parents and Hickory now babysitting Kale,Shallot and Mallow's babies.

• "Where Are They Now?" Epilogue:The last entry to "Clover's Fun Doodle Pad". Shows what the citizens of Crescent Forest had been up to after Clover became an explorer and traveler with Rambler.

• Recovery Sequence: After Clover saves Crescent Forest from an oncoming Forest Fire in the final story. We get to see Clover relearning how to walk on her two feet again. While there are no signs of pain or injury from her. This might have to do with how long Clover lasted as a fish which resulted in her forgetting how to walk.

edited 9th Feb '17 8:43:09 PM by brb1006

• finally accepts Clover to come traveling with him. -> finally accepts Clover's traveling with him.
• The story then transitions to a few years later -> The story then transitions to a few years later,
• we see Clover now as a young adult who -> we see Clover (now as a young adult) who
• hadn't been then since she was a little. -> hadn't been there since she was little.
• and Hickory now babysitting -> and Hickory babysitting

• "Where Are They Now?" Epilogue:The -> "Where Are They Now?" Epilogue: The
• "Clover's Fun Doodle Pad". Shows what -> "Clover's Fun Doodle Pad" shows what
• had been up to -> have been up to (How to Write an Example - Write in Present Tense)

• an oncoming Forest Fire -> an oncoming forest fire
• feet again. While there are no signs of pain or injury from her. -> feet again without any signs of pain or injury.
• how long Clover lasted as a fish -> how long Clover existed as a fish

@Arvine, you forgot to correct me in the page 134.(the second one, not the wrong first one)

You made the corrections I suggested and it's fine.

@Arvine

Perfect!. So, can I edit again?

edited 11th Feb '17 6:55:27 AM by Caripija_XXX

Got a slightly long one for Open All Hours.

• Awful Wedded Life: Just about every single couple who live in the area, recounts of the arguments, infidelities and miseries make up a large part of the shows humour in both the original and revival.
• Chick Magnet: In contrast to his father when he was his age, Leroy is considerably more successful with women (to the point he borders on being The Casanova), normally having a new date or two every episode, somehow he even manages to convince two of them to help him out with his delivers. Mrs Hussain barely makes any effort to hide her interest. The trouble is most of the women turn out to much larger boyfriends who want to kill him when they find out.
• Chuck Cunningham Syndrome: Despite being the third main character in the original series, and a major character for the first two seasons, Nurse Gladys Emmanuelle disappears without mention in season three of the revival.
• Dirty Old Woman: Mrs Featherstone in the revival. While to all her husbands and to Mr Newbold she is a practical picture of ice, she is always throwing herself at Granville to his obvious displeasure.
• The Ditz: Wavy Mavis, when asked why she married her ex-husband when she knew he was terrible from the start, she revealed that he told her she was pregnant.
• Gasshole: Gastric, has an easily upset stomach causing him to often belch, especially when he has eaten for a while, hence his nickname. The actual effect is downplayed, compared to most examples, but it is still there.
• Mars and Venus Gender Contrast: Much like Roy Clarke’s other series, Last of the Summer Wine, this makes up a lot of the shows humour in the revival, benefited from its much larger recurring cast.
• Not So Above It All: Nurse Gladys Emmanuelle maybe the most sensible character, but even she can’t stop herself from taking some joy out of Arkwright’s more comedic gambits.
• Out-Gambitted: Only once. Arkwright tried to swindle a seemingly naïve Indian shopkeeper into buying useless wooden clothes horses. However the man revealed to be playing him and made the fact his shop still stocked wooden clothes horses a big part of his advertising, claiming he had the most traditional shop in all of Yorkshire; thus forcing Arkwright to buy several back.
• The Pollyanna: Mavis, while mocked by a lot of people for her low intelligence and optimism, she is almost certainly is the most cheerful character in the series and overall is the most happy.
• Positive Discrimination:
  • Played mostly straight in the original series, with the only person to ever outsmart Arkwright was of Indian decent. Buy played with slightly in that the man wasn’t presented as better than Arkwright, rather Arkwright was so used to dealing with idiots he slipped up dealing with a genuinely intelligent person for a change.
  • Subverted in the revival. At first glance Cyril (who’s black) appears smarter than Eric and more sceptical towaeds Granville’s cons. However he is truthfully just as gullible as Eric. Likewise he and Mrs Hussain aren’t presented as overall any different from anyone else in the area.
• Took a Level in Kindness: Mrs Featherstone in the revival, while still a stern, unyielding, cold and terrifying woman, she is very much a member of the regular female ensemble and often hangs out with them. While in the previous series she didn’t seem to like anyone, and was equally disliked in return.
• Took a Level in Jerkass: Downplayed. Granville is certainly more manipulative and greedier in the revival. However he is still considerably more cheerful and laid back than his uncle ever was.
• Only Sane Woman: Nurse Gladys Emmanuelle, undisputedly the most down to earth and reasonable character in both series, she is also one of the few who isn’t fooled by Arkwright’s tactics.
• Only Known by Their Nickname: Gastric, to the point his actual name hasn’t been revealed yet.
• The Scrooge:
  • Arkwright’s love of money is practically an obsession; spending money not only causes him noticeable strain, at times it seems to make him physically ill and even he admits his products are notoriously overpriced. The one time he allowed a customer a refund spread through the community like wildfire and led to people believing he was going daft. It’s perhaps best demonstrated in one episode, while at a funeral for a friend due to having no change he is forced to give up a pound to the collection. However he honestly can’t stop himself from taking change moments later.
  • Downplayed, with Granville in the revival. While he’s certainly picked up a lot of his uncles business sense and cunning, and has a reputation for being a bit of a cheapskate. He’s overall far more relaxed and generous than Arkwright ever was.
• Those Two Guys: Cyril and Eric in the revival, they are nearly always seen together and often part of the others hair brained schemes.
• Women Are Wiser: Played With. On average the women are brighter than men; however they are still just as easily duped and outsmarted by Arkwright and Granville. Who in turn are presented as sharper and quicker than nearly everyone.

edited 11th Feb '17 3:04:45 PM by MGD107

@Caripija_XXX

You need to improve your English skills to the point that you can write correctly on your own.

Once you have done so, you can ask the moderators to restore your editing privileges.

@ MGD 107

• every single couple who live in the area -> every single couple who lives in the area
• the shows humour -> the show's humour

I would re-write this as follows:

• help him out with his delivers -> help him out with his deliveries
• Mrs Hussain -> Mrs. Hussain
• to hide her interest. -> to hide her interest in him.
• The trouble is most of -> The trouble is, most of
• the women turn out to much larger boyfriends -> the women turn out to have much larger boyfriends

This is a run-on sentence. Whenever you have a really long sentence like this, try to see if it can be broken up into smaller sentences. Your readers will thank you.

• she is a practical picture of ice -> While this technically isn't bad English, it's not a normally used phrase. "She is the very picture of ice" would be better.
• throwing herself at Granville to his obvious displeasure. -> throwing herself at Granville, to his obvious displeasure.

• Wavy Mavis, when asked -> When Wavy Mavis was asked

• Gastric, has an easily upset stomach causing -> Gastric has an easily upset stomach, causing
• belch, especially when he has eaten for a while, -> belch (especially when he hasn't eaten for a while),

• Last of the Summer Wine -> Last of the Summer Wine
• the shows humour -> the show's humour
• benefited from -> benefiting from (How to Write an Example - Write in Present Tense)

• Nurse Gladys Emmanuelle maybe the -> Nurse Gladys Emmanuelle is maybe the

• However the man revealed -> However, the man was revealed
• the fact his shop -> the fact that his shop

Yet another really long sentence that should be broken up.

• Mavis...and optimism, she is almost -> Mavis...and optimism, is almost

• outsmart Arkwright was of Indian decent-> outsmart Arkwright being of Indian descent
• Buy played with slightly in that -> But played with slightly, in that
• towaeds -> towards
• However he is truthfully -> However, he is truthfully
• Likewise he and Mrs Hussain -> Likewise, he and Mrs. Hussain

• Mrs Featherstone in the revival, while -> Mrs. Featherstone in the revival. While
• While in the previous series -> In the previous series

• However he is still -> However, he is still

• in both series, she is also -> in both series, is also
• demonstrated in one episode, while -> demonstrated in one episode: while
• while at a funeral for a friend due to having -> while at a funeral for a friend, due to having
• However he honestly -> However, he honestly
• a lot of his uncles business sense -> a lot of his uncle's business sense

• Cyril and Eric in the revival, they are -> Cyril and Eric in the revival. They are
• and often part of the others -> and are each often part of the other's

• the women are brighter than men; however -> the women are brighter than men. However,
• Arkwright and Granville. Who in turn -> Arkwright and Granville, who in turn

edited 13th Feb '17 5:51:38 AM by Arivne

Thanks.

For One-Punch Man: Others

Choze. A martial artist and user of the Voter's Fist.

• Arrogant Kung-Fu Guy: Choze is an arrogant man that looks down at others. He thinks that his masterpiece genetic material and careful genetic breeding practice of his clan can make him and his clan superior to others normal and feeble population of the earth.
• Curb-Stomp Battle: Get defeated with one punch by Saitama, who finds him very annoying.
• Empowered Badass Normal: Easily kill Rosie, another participant becomed a monster, and eats one of the monster cells to becomes a monster himself.
• Jerkass : During combat, he is quite vicious and bloodthirsty since he often beat his opponent to the verge of death.
• Revenge: As monster he vows to kill Saitama for humiliating him.
• Sadist : He is shown to be extremely sadistic, to the point where the screams and tears of his opponent is merely "fun" for him.
• Spikes of Villainy: In the monster-form, he grows spikes on his shoulders and his head seems to start to blend in with his attire. His hands become spiked and black.

I'm going to add Fridge Brilliance entries for The LEGO Batman Movie:

Fridge Brilliance

• "Iron Man sucks!" actually makes sense in this movie. Considering DC and Marvel has Lego sets of their own, it's safe to say that the kid acting out the story really doesn't like the Marvel Lego sets, or at least prefers DC over Marvel.
  • It also makes sense why Marvel has no Lego sets appearing in the movie and its prequel, since that line implies the kid, or his dad, has a distaste towards Marvel Lego sets to the point he doesn't want to even buy them.
• It's pretty clear that this movie sets place in a different world because the kid moves to a different place to make his story after his sister ruins his story in the last movie.

edited 14th Feb '17 6:06:43 PM by kennydarmawan13

@rafi

• looks down at others. -> looks down on others.
• and careful genetic breeding practice -> and the careful genetic breeding practices
• others normal and feeble population of the earth. -> other normals and the feeble population of the Earth. (I can't be sure what you meant - this is my best guess)
• Get defeated with one punch -> Gets defeated with one punch
• Easily kill Rosie -> Easily kills Rosie
• another participant becomed a monster -> another participant who became a monster
• to becomes a monster himself. -> to become a monster himself.
• he is quite vicious and bloodthirsty since he often beat ->
  • he is quite vicious and bloodthirsty as he often beats
• As monster he -> As a monster, he
• the screams and tears of his opponent is -> the screams and tears of his opponent are

@kennydarmawan13

• Considering DC and Marvel has -> Considering that DC and Marvel have
• It also makes sense why Marvel -> It also makes sense that Marvel

This violates Example Indentation. It needs to be changed as follows:

• this movie sets place in a different world because -> this movie takes place in a different world, because

edited 15th Feb '17 1:06:14 AM by Arivne

Okay I have an edit I would like to add to Franchise Original Sin/Television.

• Sherlock:
  • With the idea of bringing Sherlock Holmes into the 21st Century the first two seasons were praised for their clever writing, shocking twists, willingness to play with the source material, interesting character relationships and fascinating larger than life personalities. However, by Season Three and carrying on into Season Four it was felt these elements had grown out of control. The shocking twists which had originally captured the audiences got more and more elaborate until they pushed suspension of disbelief. With the attempt for them to be surprising led one’s that the felt like had no purpose in the story other than to be surprising, or were introduced out of nowhere. The character relationships ended up taking more and more of the screen time until fans complained it led to the mysteries being short changed. The larger than life characters ended up either distracting from the actual plot or underused. And by the end many stories were more or less new one’s all together, which bore only the barest resemblance to what they were supposedly based upon.
  • Another problem fans have with Season Three and four was the feeling that events had simply gotten to unrealistic. Overall the series has always sallied the line of plausibility, the seemingly impossible mysteries and sheer brilliance of Sherlock Holmes being one of the main draws; Mycroft presentation of being more or less an all-powerful shadowy figure in government capable of sending messages through ATM’s being another example. Nevertheless the first two seasons managed to stay relatively down to earth, with more unrealistic ideas being revealed to have mundane explanations. For example in the season two finale Morality claims to have a code that allows him to hack any computer regardless of its security level, which he uses to simultaneous hack prisons, banks and even the tower of London. However the entire code is revealed to be ploy and him simply bribed or threatening key members of staff. Season Three however went on to reveal Watson’s wife Mary to secretly be a ex-special forces agent of the Jason Borne variety, and the King of Blackmail had no physical copies of his information. Season Four simply took the idea further, introducing Eurus Holmes Sherlock’s even more brilliant sister, who could just waltz out of the most secure prison in Britain, anticipate events to the point of near-precognition and even brainwash people by having a simple conversation with them.

edited 15th Feb '17 9:46:44 AM by MGD107

• into the 21st Century the -> into the 21st Century, the
• it was felt these elements had grown out of control. -> "it was felt" by who?
• With the attempt for them to be surprising led one’s that the felt like had ->
  • The twists appeared to have
• The character relationships ended up -> Character relationships ended up
• taking more and more of the screen time -> taking up more and more screen time
• until fans complained it led -> until fans complained that it led
• or underused. -> or being underused.
• And by the end many stories -> Sentence fragment. - By the end, many stories
• new one’s all together -> new ones all together

• Another problem...was -> Another problem...is
• simply gotten to unrealistic -> simply gotten too unrealistic
• Overall -> Overall,
• always sallied the line of plausibility -> always straddled the line of plausibility
• Mycroft presentation of being -> Mycroft's presentation of being a
• more or less an -> a more or less
• being another example. -> is another example.

This is a run-on sentence and needs to be split up into two smaller sentences.

• For example in the season -> For example, in the season
• tower of London. -> Tower of London.
• However the entire code -> However, the entire code
• revealed to be ploy -> revealed to be a ploy
• and him simply bribed or threatening -> with him simply bribing or threatening
• Season Three however went on -> Season Three, however, went on
• Jason Borne -> Jason Bourne

edited 16th Feb '17 1:14:40 AM by Arivne

For Spider-Man: Daily Bugle (to integrate in Joseph "Robbie" Robertson folder)

• Arch-Enemy: He a long conflict with the villain Tombstone, with whom he attended high school where he was a bully.
• Black Best Friend: Close friend and confidant of J. Jonah Jameson, acting as a voice of reason in Jameson's campaign to discredit Spider-Man.
• The Lancer: To Jonah. Robbie serves as publisher when Jameson temporarily steps down.
• Old Shame: In-Universe. In the past, while working as a reporter in Philadelphia, Robbie witnessed Tombstone murder one of Robbie's contacts. Tombstone threatened Robertson, and the journalist fled to New York City and began working for the Bugle. He told no one of the murder he witnessed.
• Reasonable Authority Figure: Robertson is the editor-in-chief of the Daily Bugle. Unlike Jonah, Robbie tries his best to remain objective towards Spider-Man. Robbie is also the only Bugle employee who does not fear the wrath of his boss and is ready to stand up to him on editorial matters.
  • He try also with Dexter Bennett, who turns the Bugle into a scandalous, muck-raking rag. After learning the DB was indirectly responsible for the death of several people shown on their paper from one of their scandals, he quit. Robertson becomes the editor for Ben Urich's newspaper, Front Line theat later become the new Daily Bugle.
• Token Minority: He was one of the first African-American characters in comics to play a serious supporting role, rather than act as comic relief.

edited 16th Feb '17 3:46:55 AM by rafi

• He a long conflict with the villain Tombstone -> He has a long conflict with the villain Tombstone
• where he was a bully. -> where Tombstone was a bully. (Because you're referring to multiple characters, it's not clear which character the "he" refers to)

• He try also with Dexter Bennett -> He tries also with Dexter Bennett
• for the death of several people -> for the deaths of several people
• shown on their paper from one of their scandals ->
  • whose scandal was exposed by the paper
• Front Line theat later become -> Front Line, that later becomes

This violates Example Indentation. If a trope has more than one example then each example gets a separate bullet point below. Like this:

edited 18th Feb '17 1:53:52 AM by Arivne

I'll try again by adding a Hilarious in Hindsight entry in DEATH BATTLE!:

• Hilarious in Hindsight:
  • Fans of Super Power Beat Down can finally see whether Wiz and Boomstick has anything that can prove that SPBD's episode of Lara Croft vs Nathan Drake was wrong or not. Wiz and Boomstick pretty much agrees with SPBD's result.

Rafi - Your entries don't sound like examples, specifically Black Best Friend, The Lancer, and Token Minority. On the plus side your English looks good.

@Arvine Eh... Okay?

For Interrupting Meme

@kennydarmawan13

• whether Wiz and Boomstick has -> whether Wiz and Boomstick have
• that can prove that SPBD's episode of Lara Croft vs Nathan Drake was wrong or not. ->
  • that can prove whether SPBD's episode of Lara Croft vs Nathan Drake was wrong or not.
• Wiz and Boomstick pretty much agrees with -> Wiz and Boomstick pretty much agree with

@Caripija_XXX

Trying to evaluate your post from the viewpoint of proper English is pretty much pointless since it's written to be Self-Demonstrating.

The only mistake I don't think you intended is "dont", which should be "don't".

edited 18th Feb '17 1:56:54 AM by Arivne

@Arvine Ok... here you have a Non-Self-Demonstrating Article

For Mega Man X2 (YMMV)

Hilarious in Hindsight: A Manchild sponge and a greedy crab? unfortunately, we didn't have the opportunity to see ever again a concept like that... Or do we?

edited 18th Feb '17 7:41:01 AM by Caripija_XXX

I'm going to add a Not-So-Harmless Villain entry in the League of Super Evil page:

• Not-So-Harmless Villain: The titular L.O.S.E. looks and is incompetent, but they can actually be the reason why the Earth is in peril from time to time. One episode has them creating clones that easily dethrones Skullosus and nearly conquers the world, only to be stopped by their lifespan. Another episode has them gaining Glory Guy as their Arch-Enemy, which indirectly causes Skullosus to nearly destroy Earth by throwing it to the Sun.

edited 18th Feb '17 7:33:00 AM by kennydarmawan13

For Spliced

Remove This......

Spliced provides examples of:

• Adobe Flash

and add this........

Spliced provides examples of:

• Toon Boom

is Basically an Information Mistake