YMMV / My Brave Pony: Starfleet Magic
aka: My Little Unicorn

YMMV tropes for Dakari-King Mykan's My Brave Pony: Starfleet Magic, the My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic fanfic.


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  • Accidental Innuendo:
    A mare was being attacked by a mysterious figure; a pale grey Earth pony. He wore a black suit with a red cape and a high collar, a black top hat atop his head, and an evil looking mask across his eyes. “Quit fussing!” he roared “Give me what I want and I won’t hurt you.”
    (...)
    The girls all nodded. They then decided to bring the mare into the shop with them, not wanting to leave her lying in the streets alone after what they just saw, but as they moved in closer to help her up, they couldn’t help but notice the side of flank peeking through her skirt, and what the girls saw turned their bloods cold.
    • The human Rhymey's real name is "William Stirskewer III". No wonder why he's better known by his nickname.
  • Alternative Character Interpretation:
    • The Grand Ruler: benevolent king, or racist tyrant?
    • Unicornicopia: a utopian paradise, or autocratic dystopia?
    • Titan: a villain with no redeeming qualities at all, or a bitter old man who lost his mind because no one ever gave him a chance, leaving turning to the dark side as his only option?
    • Starfleet in general, with its tendencies to act as a multiversal police force and army, can seem like an evil overlord's armed force, making sure that everyone obeys the whims of the Unicornicopian overlords.
      • And even then, the only Starfleet people shown to be any effective at that are Lightning Dawn and co. (Seriously, was there ever a Starfleet Red Shirt that showed their prowess in battle at any point in the series?)
    • For that matter, Ace Ray. Is he a bitter washout who badmouths the people who saved his life? Is he going through a hard time in his life and looking for some form of solace when no one will support him? Or is he being unfairly persecuted for daring to speak the truth about the regime?
    • The mysterious future voices (Future Castor and Lelliani) in Starfleet Magic IV. Helpful guides or sociopaths looking to torment Cadance?
    • Brass Bolt: an eventual wannabe terrorist, who will be rebuked or shot by Starfleet in the end, with a possibility he could end up in a worse position than Ace Ray...
      • Or a young naive freedom fighter who actually had the guts to act with haste instead of feeling indifferent like Ace Ray.
      • Or the initiate of actual substance in terms of plot and characterization. Doubtful, but his realistic reaction to the setting gives us a whole new perspective towards the fic...
    • As a meta interpretation, are we seeing through the eyes of happy content citizens and heroes of the greater good...
      • Or a brainwashed and indoctrinated society where tyranny rules over their lives without them noticing it? After all, we are always seeing it in the perspective of Lightning Dawn in the lessons he learned which praise Starfleet's methods. The Badfic itself could be inverse propaganda intended for children and the next generation of Unicornicopians. A true Antithesis to MLP FiM's intent. There are two stories that go with this interpretation.
  • Arc Fatigue: Don't be surprised if you get bored reading any of these fics. Mykan believes that he has a word quota to fill, leading to excessive padding.
  • Archive Panic: These fanfics are long and numerous. If you want to catch up, be warned.
  • Ass Pull: Here's a short list of examples:
    • Lightning suddenly being able to summon the Uniforce because he remembers to believe, right when Titan is going to kill him.
    • In the rewrite, Nightmare Moon destroys Twilight's wings; it's never explained how she's able to do this, why she does this, why she doesn't do the same with the Pegasi or other princesses, or why she doesn't take her horn as well.
    • Brain turns out to have a spaceship in his backyard, which the others use to escape the exploding Unicornicopia.
    • Celesto and Celestia fusing and turning into the Great Celestial Ruler, who destroys Titan.
    • The MLP and Starfleet ponies being able to reconstruct a planet through the power of belief.
    • Lightning is the last of a race of creatures known as Enticorns, which, as the author confirms, is partially based off of Super Saiyans.
    • In Starfleet Humans: Starpops, Human!Grand Ruler was capable of surviving being lost in outer space while being low on oxygen.
  • Bile Fascination: There are some people out there that will read the story just to see what's so controversial about it. And sweet Twilight Sparkle, is it ever.
  • Canon Defilement: While the fic itself is often loathed for making the cast of Friendship is Magic less competent to make Starfleet look superior, Celestia in particular is given the worst of it when she blames Twilight Sparkle, her own student, for getting killed instead of blaming Raven for killing her, and pretty much acts as a Replacement Goldfish for the Element of Magic, even though Celestia would never pull this kind of thing in canon. And she (along with Starfleet) is supposed to be in the right for thinking this.
  • Captain Obvious Aesop:
    • One of the many Aesops given out by the Grand Ruler can be summed up as "There are different ways to solve problems."
      • Doubles as Broken Aesop, considering that throughout the fanfic, the Unicornicopians are portrayed as always being right and those who have different solutions are always wrong.
    • Another one deals with how nightmares are frightening.
  • Cliché Storm:
  • Critical Research Failure: Has its own page.
  • Crowning Moment of Awesome:
    • A rare, non-Equestrian example from Lightning Dawn, of all ponies, in the pilot. After Starfleet is captured and rendered helpless as Titan drains their magic, Lightning mans up and starts effortlessly dodging his attacks, before delivering a jump kick to Titan's chest, which actually made him emit sounds of pain. Granted, it was a magic clone of Titan, and he may have only won using the Uniforce, but still; where the HFIL was this version of Lightning before, and where did he go since?
    • Twilight going after Raven in order to protect Celestia. She may have been blamed for her own death afterwards and Starfleet acts like she was in the wrong for trying to protect someone she cared about, but there is no denying that seeing Twilight take action when Starfleet wouldn't but could easily have done so is a treat to watch.
    • Brass Bolt gets one when he manages to free all the prisoners, all of whom are mistreated in what could be seen as violations of the Geneva Convention to hell and back, being held in one of Starfleet's prisons. Actually, this guy could be considered a walking, talking COMA for his completely realistic reaction to Starfleet's actions, the fact he actually decides to do something, even if he is supposed to come off as insane when he hallucinates Lightning Dawn mocking him, but even that makes complete sense, seeing as no one else agrees with him when he brings up some very valid criticisms about Starfleet's behaviour, and the fact he was Defiant to the End when he is arrested for his actions, glaring at Celestia and asking how she of all ponies could agree with what Starfleet does. It is virtually impossible not to see him as the hero in some dystopian world.
  • Damsel Scrappy: Krysta in the earlier installments, who spent too much time playing the Damsel in Distress and stating the obvious to be of any actual use to the heroes. Even when she does try to fight, her contributions are so minimal she might as well not be there.
  • Darkness-Induced Audience Apathy: Many detractors who read it for the sake of Bile Fascination dropped the story, citing the enhanced racism and sexism, "realistic" treatment of prisoners, excessive use of Designated Hero, and the excessive Torture Porn.
  • Designated Hero: The heroes are this to some extent. As described elsewhere on this page and even the main page, their practices and beliefs can be very questionable, if not outright horrible. About the only thing that could prevent them from entirely qualifying is the fact the main villains are often legitimately evil and not Designated Villains.
    • Mykan Jaden from Dakari-King Mykan's Yu-Gi-Oh!/Totally Spies fanfics, the last of which crosses over with My Little Pony. In the "final season", in spite of being a "master duelist", he makes two rookies duel brainwashed ponies despite knowing that, should they lose, they'll get brainwashed too. When the rookies triumph and Shining Armor is teleported away, Mykan gets so mad at a brainwashed Cadance for trying to brainwash and accidentally destroy his world with card games and double crossing them on a deal they made, he soundly beats her up with the power of a Millenium Item. When Mykan attempts to finish her and is stopped by his wife, he implies that it's Cadance's fault that he nearly killed her.
    • Starfleet Magic VI gives us the case of the pony counterpart of Mykan Stevens. He spends most of the season being an antagonistic Jerkass towards everybody and tries his level best to Be as Unhelpful as Possible toward Starfleet as they deal with their latest threat, and ultimately, they end up unintentionally spurring him into a Roaring Rampage of Revenge against the Arc Villain after they've already pretty much defeated said villain. This results in Mykan going out in a Senseless Sacrifice that inflicts untold amounts of gratuitous collateral damage, at which point Starfleet has him memorialized as a hero despite him never having demonstrated any sort of heroic behavior whatsoever.
  • Designated Monkey:
    • Cadance, full stop. The author hates her for being Happily Married (whereas Beast Boy and Davis Motomiya didn't hook up with Terra and Kari Kamiya, respectively; yes, really), so he makes her kill her own brother who's been turned partly mechanical and evil, suffer horrific nightmares, get beaten up by the Author Avatar, and miscarry when a pillar topples onto her. For some reason, even though he's her husband, Shining Armor doesn't get punished nearly as much...
      • Despite the "hates Cadance for being Happily Married" excuse, other relatively happy couples have shown up (Spike and Rarity, Lightning and Starla, Fluttershy and Rhymey) and haven't been been treated nearly as badly as Cadance has. Make of that what you will.
      • Shockingly, it now turns out that Cadance has been rendered infertile after that pillar thing.....and Shining Armor as well, due to his brainwashing and transformed state. Yes, neither one can ever have a kid now (adopting is out of the question for some reason), and to top it off, he has them keep a nursery in their home as well. Because they cannot bring themselves to get rid of it.
      • The only reason that Cadance hasn't been killed off like Twilight Sparkle is because, in Mykan's eyes, pretty much everyone is expendable, including himself, apparently. He can just kill off anypony he wants, if he ever sees it fit. But Cadance is a special case; he wants her kept alive just so he can punish her, all for the reason that she's married in canon.
    • Twilight Sparkle is another character that Mykan hates for utterly ridiculous reasons. Shortly after Equestria is introduced in the rewrite, she loses her wings (though at least she gets them back offscreen), the MLP cast as a whole Took a Level in Dumbass, she's called out for not following the Grand Ruler's orders no matter what, and of course she is murdered, which Starfleet and Celestia blame her for and the latter takes up her mantle as the Element of Magic.
      • This even extends to Starfleet Humans; despite chronologically taking place before the first Equestria Girls film, the human Twilight Sparkle is shoehorned in, and contributes nothing to the plot other than getting yelled at by Lightning regularly over petty things.
  • Designated Villain:
    • May not exactly be an in-universe villain so much as merely an in-universe loser, but Ace Ray can still qualify.
    • Brass Bolt for speaking out against Starfleet's draconian nature. The author tries to take sympathy away from him by having him release a bunch of prisoners, but seeing how our Designated Hero cast mistreat the prisoners, it actually makes him more likable.
  • Eight Deadly Words: Due to the "heroes" being utterly unlikable cardboard cutouts, canon characters being stripped of their likable traits, loads of racism, sexism, all-around fucked-up morality, and Cliched villains that always lose, there's no point in reading the series.
  • Ending Fatigue: Starfleet Magic VI could easily have ended after Windy Bag's defeat. Everything that comes after would, in any other installment of the series, be leading up to a climactic final showdown with the Big Bad. Except there isn't one in VI and Windy is the closest thing it gets, meaning that we instead get an anticlimactic showdown with an army of nameless mooks.
  • Ensemble Darkhorse:
    • An odd non-character example, but even though Lightning Dawn himself is disliked as a character, any reconstruction fic involving him is bound to at least keep his name even if most, if not all of the other names are changed. This is because it's admittedly a pretty cool name.
    • Ace Ray, for being a walking example of Strawman Has a Point and his Take That, Scrappy! moment against Rhymey. Mykan tries to make him come off as insane, but he really doesn't.
    • Brass Bolt as well, for much the same reasons as well as actually taking some kind of action against Starfleet.
    • Windy Bag, for pretty much the same reasons as the other two, trying to change Equestria back to the way it was, and having a vendetta against Mykan's most blatant Author Avatar.
    • Despite suffering from the same fate as her fellow Equestrians, Twilight Sparkle herself is this for at least being among the closest to her canon self, as well as gaining pity points from viewers who rightfully believe she's treated horribly by the Space Ponies. Her death at the hands of Raven has also sparked several more accusations of Starfleet being unlikable, due to them blaming her for her own death because she disobeyed Starfleet to protect those she cares about. After all that's happened, it's hard not to see her as The Woobie. Cadance is also this, for the same reasons (just replace death with having a miscarriage and her and her husband being rendered infertile for life, and you're golden).
  • Ethnic Scrappy: Dyno and Myte are basically a pair of walking Hispanic stereotypes that like blowing things up and basically nothing else. Ditto for Brain, whose main purpose seems to be rattling off Stock British Phrases and occasionally providing an invention or two while contributing virtually nothing when things get hairy.
  • Fandom Berserk Button: The death of Twilight Sparkle and her subsequent Victim Blaming have been known to cause strong negative emotions. It doesn't help that Mykan himself likes to spoil the event for unsuspecting readers.
  • Fanon:
    • It's quite common to portray certain Space Ponies as stupid, arrogant, self-righteous jerks.
    • There's a theory that the events of Starfleet Magic are actually bastardized versions of what actually happened.
    • It is often speculated that Twilight Sparkle was Raven's true target instead of Celestia and that Raven was working for Celesto the entire time. This is due to Celesto ordering everyone, including members of Starfleet, to not fight Raven despite her targeting his own wife with the excuse that her strength is unknown.
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  • Overshadowed by Controversy: Although people can find plenty to dislike about the fic itself; the fanfic is remembered more for the author's wangsting and whining about MLP:FiM and how bad it is than the fact that it's a fanfic at all. His notoriety in the Digimon and Teen Titans fandoms haven't helped.
    • The fic is also often remembered for Twilight Sparkle's untimely death at the hands of Raven. Even those who haven't read it know it happened, and are not pleased about it.
    • That's not even getting into what happened when it was revealed that Cadance would suffer a Convenient Miscarriage over her being Happily Married, which happened in season 5.
  • Padding:
    • The author outright admits to using this, as he believes he has to fill a word quota. More specifically, he believes that every chapter has to be an equivalent length to a half-hour TV episode, with no exceptions.
      • Amazingly, he complains in the author's notes of the third series about how long his fanfics are, and yet does nothing to fix this.
    • Aside from padding in-chapters, Mykan seems to have an obsession with writing 26 episodes per-season, which leads to many episodes where nothing advances the plot. The biggest offenders are in My Brave Pony: Starfleet Magic II (as one MST points out, you can reorder most of the chapters without affecting the overall plot) and Starfleet Magic VI (which doesn't have an overarching plot so much as it does a bunch of unrelated story arcs stuck together).
  • Painful Rhyme:
    • Rhymey's entire gimmick is speaking in rhyme all the time, which ends up making all of his dialogue feel clunky and unnatural. However, some of his rhymes are more questionable than others:
      • His transformation phrase is "I summon within, the Power of Wind!" The rhyme just doesn't sound right to begin with, and it's made doubly painful by sticking out like a sore thumb from the others' transformation phrases, which simply have them declaring "Power of [x]!"
      • "Wetter Works" has three of these, each worse than the last. He starts by resorting to "fella" to rhyme with "umbrella". A short time later, he follows up with the rather oblique "tongue/song". Then, after the Monster of the Week is beaten, Artie calls Brain a "genius", which Rhymey attempts to rhyme with "all of us". Ow.
      • "Double Trouble" has the doublet "cocky/quickly". Incidentally, this one also has Artie supplying the first line and Rhymey attempting to rhyme with his own.
      • In "Three to One", he gets the gem "My sword's dent/Twisted and bent". This one's made painful not by the rhyme itself, but for resorting to glaringly incorrect grammar just to try and make the rhyme work, namely using "dent" as a past-tense verb as opposed to "dented".
      • In "A Visit to Equestria", Rhymey tries to rhyme "truly" with his own name. Later he resorts to the Perfectly Cromulent Word "bite-full" to rhyme with "delightful", followed by "tradition/generation".
      • During the infiltration of the Nightmare Moon-dominated Equestria in "Reunions and Unions", he gets "wondrous/see us". Clunky as it is, the original My Little Unicorn uses the even more cringeworthy "for us/see us". Before that, he gets to rhyme "ruin" with "doin'".
      • Act 6 of Starfleet Humans has the human Rhymey butchering grammar for the sake of rhyme: "I can’t ever confess to Fluttershy/A broken mess will always be I."
      • He hasn't exactly improved in Season VII; his very first lines of the season have him scraping the bottom of the rhyme barrel with "of her/above her".
    • It's not just limited to Rhymey, either; "Careful What You Wish For" in season 3 has a genie who also speaks entirely in rhyming couplets, one of which attempts to rhyme "ago" with "go", which is just as clunky as it appears in context.
  • Strangled by the Red String: Almost every couple in the story is comprised of characters falling for each other in a very short time for the shallowest of reasons.
    • Lightning and Starla, who fall in love immediately for no reason besides that the main character needs a love interest.
    • Rhymey and Fluttershy as well, both pony and human versions.
    • Ditto the Grand Ruler and Princess Celestia, both pony and human versions.
    • Additionally, there is Sunset Shimmer and Human!Artie Bristles.
    • In addition, there is Tree Hugger and Buddy Rose.
    • Rarity and Spike, who is a baby dragon, remember, making this a much more disturbing example. Before that, Rarity fell head over heels for Thunder Cloud/Esroh Dab for no apparent reason.
  • Strawman Has a Point:
    • In My Brave Pony: Starfleet Magic II, there is an ex-Wonderbolt named Ace Ray who was kicked off the squad for badmouthing Starfleet and has become a loser who sits around stuffing his face all day. However, he accuses the Starfleet of being arrogant and lazy for not taking action against their enemies sooner and thus leading to the destruction of Equestria. He also calls them out on assuming every enemy they fight is irredeemably evil without even considering the possibility that they might have a reason for acting that way. He then accuses them of being overlords due to their species essentially taking over United Equestria, doing everything of value, and Celesto being extremely powerful, both politically and literally. The reader is clearly supposed to side with his sister Skye, who tells him he's bad for speaking his mind about Starfleet. However, he makes some very good points that were mentioned by reviewers and riffers of the original fic.
    • Twilight Sparkle protests Starfleet killing all of their enemies, Krysta and Lightning Dawn's argument can be summed up as "Starfleet is always right, everyone else is always wrong."
    • Starfleet Magic VI has Brass Bolt, who's basically Ace Ray 2.0, and makes even better points about Starfleet than Ace did. It's very hard not to agree with him, especially since his thoughts and situation read very much like a protagonist in dystopian fiction and are completely accurate to Starfleet's portrayal. To quote the story itself:
    “They come to our world, lead their enemies to us, and if that wasn’t bad enough they turned us from normal ponies into these human shaped weirdos! Oh, and to add insult to injury, they treat us all like we’re inferior and enslave us with their martial laws, and when trouble comes they just fight and kill, and they arrest creatures with no good reason…
    …They’re nothing but a bunch of silly, overbearing tyrannical dictators! Why can’t you guys see that? Why can’t anyone see that?”
  • Take That, Scrappy!: Rhymey is one of the more hated original characters because he speaks in nothing but rhymes, and unfortunately, not good ones. note  An unintentional example happens when he confronts Ace Ray in My Brave Pony: Starfleet Magic III, who is in the process of making points about Unicornicopia that are more valid than the author realizes.
  • They Copied It, So It Sucks!: There is really no easy way to put this. Mykan's tendency to outright ignore being original in any way concerning Starfleet means that he frequently will take absolutely anything he pleases from other works of fiction, with obvious examples being Today's Special and Power Rangers to the point of outright plagiarism.
  • They Wasted a Perfectly Good Character:
    • Cerise from My Brave Pony: Starfleet Magic II is a major in Starfleet, can stand toe-to-toe with Lightning and can use the Uniforce. She was a one-shot character up until Starfleet Magic VI, where her appearance consists of her completely sucking at her job.
    • Whenever Twilight's spirit shows up, she only appears to motivate the others before she's quickly forgotten about. As per usual with Mykan's hatred for the character, she's not allowed to be useful even as a ghost.
    • Brass Bolt from Starfleet Magic VI is a Suspiciously Similar Substitute for Ace Ray who wants to see a revolution overthrowing Starfleet and sets an entire prison's populace loose on them, making for a very interesting potential Big Bad who's not a completely clichéd Generic Doomsday Villain. Instead, he gets busted in the second chapter by a cheap Ass Pull. Even better, the author later complains that he's having trouble driving the story forward without a Big Bad pulling the strings.
  • They Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot:
    • It may sound far-fetched, but the relationship between Lightning and the Grand Ruler could have been quite an interesting plot arc.
    • Starla Shine's wedding with Lightning Dawn could have offered more insight into her character outside of Starfleet and her attraction to Lightning, but instead her wedding is entirely comprised of hand-me-downs from Princess Cadance's wedding. Starla's maid of honor is Twilight Sparkle, her flower girls are the CMC, and even her wedding dress is just a modified version of Cadance's wedding gown.
    • Despite the controversy surrounding it, the idea of teaching about the death of a loved one could have been a good idea had Mykan just focused on meaningful character interactions and development instead of Victim Blaming and his own hatred for the pony in question, Twilight Sparkle.
  • Trapped by Mountain Lions:
    • Goldwin's episodes solely exist to plagiarize Today's Special and add absolutely nothing to the overall plot.
    • Starfleet Humans: Starpops has a subplot involving Celesto Grandruler working on the International Space Station. This adds absolutely nothing to the main plot.
    • The Black Dragon Knight subplot of Starflet Magic V has virtually no impact on the main conflict against the Insectos.
    • Starfleet Magic VI manages to have the A-story come off as this, as Starfleet's wild goose chase after escapees is far less cohesive as a plot than the B-story involving Windy Bag and Mykan Stevens.
  • Uncanny Valley: The Unicornicopians are represented as pony heads on top of humanoid bodies, and later the Equestrians are forcibly converted into being the same thing. The result is completely unsettling, with some characters resembling colourful tikbalangs. Not helping is how obviously photoshopped the images are.
    • Probably the worst example is Brain, who's supposed to look old, but has a younger face with a balding head.
  • Unintentionally Sympathetic: Anyone who opposes Starfleet can be considered this.
    • Ace Ray: Even in the rewritten version, it is still this trope. For punching his sister upon being insulted and rejected by her, and the others who don't agree with him in making correct assumptions about Starfleet being an oppressive government, he is punished by getting his freedom taken away from him. Even though he's a clearly sane but jaded guy, he was pretty much stated to be imprisoned in an asylum for life. Wait, this sounds similar to Room 101. Seriously, read his entire chapter and see if you can deem him insane:
    No one had ever broken out from this asylum, and even If they had there was no way they could leave the planet. The warp portals that led out into Dimensional Space were inaccessible by all convicts. Any one of them who tried to enter only got tossed back out again.[...] Poor Ace, he did not take being locked up very well, and continued to insist he wasn’t insane, only to be restrained and sedated by the medical staff.
    • Human!Celestia in Starfleet Humans. It's shown at the beginning when Lightning sings and dances while in the middle of the road she is driving on, clearly stressed and upset. Granted, it's not a good idea to look at your notes while driving, but the story (and Lightning) shoehorns all the blame towards her for getting angry at him. When the fic reveals that her pet horse died, which led her into a Heroic B.S.O.D. courtesy of Sapphira, Lightning uses it as ammo against her in the aforementioned Moral Event Horizon above. We're supposed to see the attack as hers instead, as indicated by Luna calling her a 'monster' (even though, as mentioned earlier, Lightning was not hurt at all), but granted, Lightning, maybe saying that it's a good thing someone's pet is dead wasn't exactly the best course of action when you're trying to prove your friend's innocence.
    • Twilight dies and Starfleet has the nerve to blame her for her death because she disobeyed orders. Keep in mind, Twilight disobeyed orders to try and protect her loved ones from Raven, so even if you did consider her actions to be irrational, there would be a good reason for that behavior. So Starfleet, as always, just come across as assholes who only want that everyone follows what they say.
    • Brass Bolt also shares this treatment. As noted in his entry in Strawman Has a Point, he's supposed to be seen as wrong for accusing Starfleet of being evil, but the writing never gives a good enough reason as to why the reader should side against him. The closest the story gets is having him release all of the prisoners from one of Starfleet's prisons, which actually makes him more sympathetic given that Starfleet's treatment of prisoners would likely qualify as a gross violation of civil rights (and probably the Geneva Convention as well) in real life.
  • Unintentionally Unsympathetic: Practically the entire cast. The Equestria cast is simply Too Dumb to Live or too busy Character Shilling Starfleet (not to mention that they've all been reduced to one-note cutouts that hardly resemble their canon selves}. Starfleet is full of racist, sexist, and outright sociopathic "heroes" who see anyone who disagrees with them as their enemies. Our heroes, everyone.
  • Wangst:
    • Goldwin's a veritable fountain of this regarding his desire to become a normal pony and to be able to leave the palace grounds. It becomes tiresome rather quickly, especially as it contributes nothing to the main plot.
    • Human Starla bemoaning the fact that she is attracted with Lightning Dawn despite knowing that he is married can get tiring really quickly.
    • Pony Mykan Stevens is practically made of this trope. He's so adamant about refusing help from Starfleet and driving them away, firmly believing that they don't actually care about him and that they can't understand what he's going through, that it's a wonder the protagonists put up with him at all.
    • Lightning angsting over the destruction of his planet and his people is understandable. Lightning refusing to celebrate his birthday ever again because his planet happened to be destroyed on that day goes into wangsty territory.
  • What an Idiot!: Has its own page.
  • What Do You Mean, It's for Kids?: The story preaches that things like love and tolerance are actually worthless and only brute force can lead to true happiness. Characters get Killed Off for Real in rather brutal ways for little kids, and there are certain sexual innuendos to be found in the entire story. Yet the author proclaims that the fanfiction is way better entertainment for kids than the actual show it rips off.
    • The best example for it may be a chapter of My Brave Pony: Starfleet Magic II, in which Fluttershy is in the hospital to be operated on. A changeling slips in and tries to kill her by cutting her open and letting her bleed to death.
    • Chapter 13 of Starfleet Magic VI is another good example: it deals with the full ramifications of a Mayfly–December Romance, kills off the Villain of the Week via Rapid Aging, and ends on a none-too-subtly implied sex scene. Y'know, for kids.
  • The Woobie: Twilight Sparkle and Cadance both need hugs given what the story puts them through, even more so when you factor in that it's because the author just hates them for no good reason.
  • Woobie Species: The Equestrians are unintentionally made into this. They are forced to undergo mutations, are having their culture erased, and will always be passed up for promotions because they are "inferior" to Starfleet's Space Ponies.
  • WTH, Casting Agency?: The voice Mykan chose for Rhymey is based on an alien version of Muffy Mouse, and it sounds too robotic to fit his body or his species. It gets even worse considering the Mane Six somehow have to mistake him for Fluttershy with that voice.
  • WTH, Costuming Department?: Let's just say it's a wonder Rarity isn't throwing a fit over these outfits.
    • If the Space Ponies' ridiculous bodysuits didn't already fall under this category for looking like cheap Halloween costumes, the fact that they use them for casual wear definitely does. The Equestrian cast get it worse, as they wear the same bodysuits with two copies of their Cutie Marks mirrored across the chest of the suit, which looks much worse than if they only had the mark on one side. Thunder Cloud is a particularly bad case, since his outfit looks like he's going around shirtless with thunder clouds covering his nipples.
    • Whatever the hell Grand Celestial Ruler is supposed to be wearing. Aside from being looking like it was made of parts from three different outfits haphazardly thrown together into one tacky combination, one has to wonder how they fight in that dress without tripping over it.
    • Starfleet's Mega Modes basically just give them extra bits of gold armor on top of what they're already wearing. It's generally not too bad aside from making them look like Palette Swaps of each other, but on Starla and the twins, the gold clashes heavily with their existing color schemes.
    • Captain Shaina's ketchup, mustard, and peppermint ensemble. She sports bright gold centurion armor over a bright red jumpsuit along with a violet cape, and has a white coat with a green mane and tail. All of the colors are fairly loud and none of them go together particularly well.


Alternative Title(s): My Little Unicorn

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