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Useful Tips:
- Make sure that the example makes sense to both people who don't know the work AND don't know the trope.
- Wrong: The Mentor: Kevin is this to Bob in the first episode.
- Right: The Mentor: Kevin takes Bob under his wing in the first episode and teaches him the ropes of being a were-chinchilla.
- Never just put the trope title and leave it at that.
- Wrong: Badass Adorable
- Right: Badass Adorable: Xavier, the group's cute little mascot, defeats three raging elephants with both hands tied behind his back using only an uncooked spaghetti noodle.
- When is normally far less important than How.
- A character name is not an explanation.
- Wrong: Full Moon Silhouette: Diana
- Right: Full Moon Silhouette: At the end of her transformation sequence into Moon Princess Misty, Diana is shown flying across the full moon riding a rutabaga.
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Edited by Synchronicity on Sep 18th 2023 at 11:42:55 AM
Reposting from the previous page so it doesn't get lost:
From Recap.Fairy Tail Sun Village Arc:
- Karmic Butt-Monkey: As payback for her vile actions against Lucy, Milliana, and Kagura, Minerva's played as something of a pushover when Erza accidentally rips off her skirt during their rematch, and again when she falls victim to her guildmate's de-aging spell due to Power Incontinence.
Does this example count?
Edited by gjjones on Jan 23rd 2024 at 3:04:41 PM
He/His/Him. No matter who you are, always Be Yourself.I didn't get a response to this.
id say rework that entry to Trans Audience Interpritation
delete
It's not an audience interpretation though, the text explicitly says "Male to female" it's more an audience interpretation to say she's not trans
REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her^ If all the information presented is accurate, it sounds like there is conflicting information on whether the character is trans. I think the example is fine, although I'm not familiar with the work so there might be other context I'm missing.
Edited by IronAnimation on Jan 23rd 2024 at 11:46:36 AM
Found this on Characters.Adventure Time Multiverse (Fionna)
- Ms. Fanservice: And how! In her first appearence, Fionna takes off her pants revealing her panties. Later on, she takes off her shirt and spends a good chunk of the 2nd half of the miniseries in just her shorts and sports bra.
Speaking as someone who watched the show, Fionna doesn't seem like one. She does wear revealing outfit but the cartoony style doesn't make her "sexy" and there are no Male Gaze shots of her body. She's just a curvy cartoon character. Would like more thoughts because my mind doesn't register her as sexy.
She/Her | Currently cleaning N/AThe "and how" clause is Word Cruft and should be removed. I can't speak to the rest of the example.
Edited by Fighteer on Jan 23rd 2024 at 11:15:09 AM
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"Fanservice tropes at this point have gone through so much trope decay I don't think it's worth trying to fight to limit it to examples where the camera emphasizes the character sexually. I think the example should be toned down, and it mentioned that the camera doesn't really emphasize her body. But I think listing her is fine because the work does think she's beautiful.
Edited by IronAnimation on Jan 23rd 2024 at 8:50:11 AM
That feels defeatist. Ms. Fanservice registers differently to me than just any character who's treated as attractive in the narrative.
I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.Does Fandom Rivalry have to be caused by the work themselves or can it also have offscreen drama listed? For example, Lady Emily has accused Quinton Reviews, and more recently Chuggaaconroy of sexual harassment. One glance on Social Media shows devoted fans of both are keen to call Emily a liar or manipulator (even after Chugga confessed to it in his case) and pledge their support for Quinton and Chugga respectively.
Edited by Mariofan99 on Jan 24th 2024 at 9:52:29 AM
In France, the film poster for Dream Scenario makes it look like a straight comedy.
So this might count as an example of Covers Always Lie, but in the context of a localization. So is this an example?
yup, as long as it specifies which poster its talking about
Agreed. All countries are treated equally for the purposes of examples like that.
Found these on Characters.Yakuza Like A Dragon The Heroes Of Tomorrow
- Jerkass Has a Point: While grabbing Ichiban by the collar and telling him to "shut the fuck up" was a bit much, he was completely in the right to chew him out for giving their fellow homeless false hope and acting like their problems are so easy to fix, and Ichiban sheepishly apologises once Nanba lays out just how dire their situation really is.
In my entire playthrough of LAD, I never thought Nanba was a jackass and this feels more like Brutal Honesty than anything. Would like more opinions.
- "The Reason You Suck" Speech: He gives one to Ichiban after he's had just about enough of the latter's inability to understand what it means to be homeless. However, it's actually inverted overall, as while Nanba calls out Ichiban for his naivety, the speech at its core is him standing up for his fellow homeless, making it more of a "Reason We Don't Suck" speech.
Nanba: Do you seriously think we're all here because we want to be?!Ichiban: Nah, you said everyone has their reasons and I get that, man. But you still gotta try, don't you?! Better than living like this! A little effort can land you a job, even if you have a criminal record!Ichiban: Why not?Nanba: First of all, only a few of us have criminal records. Most of us didn't do anything wrong.Ichiban: Then why...?Nanba: For some, all they did was co-sign a bad loan. Others worked hard for their families, who abandoned them when they couldn't pay the bills. Nobody lives this way by choice. This isn't somewhere you choose to be, it's somewhere you end up. Do you know what that's like? To end up that broken?Ichiban: ...Nanba: And some of us have families who are out there looking for us. Parents and kids hoping we'll come back. And for as much as some of us would love to go back, we can't! Not when we're still so broken! And you think you can fix that with a quick trip to Hello Work? They get back on the grid, then all the problems and enemies from their old lives are gonna pop right back up. Did you ever think of that?! You think we're just too lazy to work? We all want a job and a living, man. But we can't just erase all the things that keep us from having them! So it might not look like much to you, but they're trying!
I'm unsure of this one tbh.
Edited by Ayumi-chan on Jan 24th 2024 at 7:52:22 PM
She/Her | Currently cleaning N/A@ 30461: I think it's hard because in those fandoms, the fandom is for the person themself and their content primarily involves their public persona, but examples like that can become quite controversial.
I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.After finishing watch Hilda, I’ve been thinking about adding an Arc Villain trope there
Season 1: Marras
Season 2: Erik Ahlberg and Two-Headed Troll
Movie: Trundle, aka the Mountain King, while Erik serves as The Heavy
Season 3: The Fairy Entity Am I right with this trope?
Edited by NicMasterTrope on Jan 25th 2024 at 11:16:41 PM
We can't tell as these have zero context.
TroperWall / WikiMagic CleanupCan you explain how should I drive my point then?
See Zero-Context Example. Describe the characters to someone who has never seen the show. For each character, write 1-3 sentence paragraphs regarding their status in series, so others (and you) can summize from the text given if they are Arc Villain or not.
TroperWall / WikiMagic CleanupThank you
Could I get a reply to this, please?
PS I removed entries from the earlier post.
Other opinions on here?
She/Her | Currently cleaning N/AId say based on the usual standards of the trope Hulk and maybe Thanos are the only ones who qualify
Can you use Once More, with Clarity to describe a case where something that had previously been basically a Noodle Incident gets a fuller explanation later in the work?
On Alien under Common Knowledge
First,that line says "no indication of suppressed trauma related to gender alteration" and it doesn't say the sex change was at birth, just saying she was Despin Convert at birth. This just seems like an excuse to claim a character isn't trans, can I just cut this?
REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her