This thread is for general discussion of page quotes, whether to change, move or remove them.
Unused quotes should be put on a Quotes Wiki page (just replace the namespace in the URL of the wiki page you are making a quotes page for with Quotes/) or, if they don't have an article, on Quotes Looking for an Article.
Image captions are discussed elsewhere and have their own thread in the Image Pickin' forum.
Edited by Tabs on Jul 15th 2023 at 2:40:54 AM
So, I reported this issue to moderators before I knew this forum existed, but since it has been brought to my attention:
I recently launched Shared Fate Ultimatum, and discovered that shortly after launch, someone changed the page quote.
I believe the original quote was more concise and to the point of the trope, while I believe that the new quote was selected based more on a preference for the source.
I believe that the original quote should be restored but I don't want to start an Edit War so I believe that having a proper discussion about it in the forum will be a better and more permanent resolution.
You gonna eat that?In favor of the original quote,they didn't even use an edit reason
New theme music also a boxThe quote on Doppelgänger Replacement Love Interest is not only really long, it doesn't really describe the trope at all. Cut?
I agree. Looking at the page, I found this from the examples that could maybe replace it? The example does not specify the episode, unfortunately. Maybe someone here is more familiar with the series and knows it off the top of their head? E: Thanks Mrph for the episode!
Pete Tyler: My wife died.
The Doctor: Her husband died. Good match.
I'm wondering if the quote for Being Watched can be improved. The current quote is
Which is good... i'm familiar with the episode it comes from, so I know the scene is an example, but the quote by itself doesn't quite get that across so someone not familiar with the source might question it a bit. I was thinking being more obvious with the quote with one of these two suggestions:
Somebody's watching me
And I have no privacy
Edited by Hello83433 on Sep 29th 2023 at 12:23:59 PM
CSP Cleanup Thread | All that I ask for ... is diamonds and dance floorsThe Doctor Who one is "Doomsday"
Edited by Mrph1 on Sep 29th 2023 at 12:30:20 PM
Why was the Quotes page for Clucking Funny never cut?
Silver and gold, silver and goldBecause no one got around to it
New theme music also a boxI mean...that's kind of my point lol
Like no one talked about it or anything? It's not a big deal but I'm curious
Silver and gold, silver and goldI cutlisted it now.
The current quote on Quoting Myself is fine, but I have one from Game of Thrones that might be better as it's a funny lampshading of the concept:
Daenerys Targaryen: Which wise man said this?
Tyrion Lannister: I don't remember.
Daenerys Targaryen: Are you trying to present your own statements as ancient wisdom?
Tyrion Lannister: I would never do that... to you.
Which one of these works better for HoYay.Film:
Then I felt his magic, and my heart began to dance.
I was always frightened, fraught with worry, 'til him...
I was going nowhere in a hurry, 'til him...
He filled up my empty life, filled it to the brim.
There could never ever be another one... like him!
Edited by Bullman on Oct 1st 2023 at 11:21:29 AM
Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup threadI like it.
First one, perhaps? The Producers lines look like Homoerotic Subtext.
Okay added the first one.
Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup threadCurrent on Revealing Cover Up doesn't show the "revealing" part:
Flambeau: But what other plan is there?
Father Brown: There is only one... to make sure that everybody is looking at something else.
Some from the quotes page:
Shortened version:
I lean toward either the Freefall quote or the shortened version of the hbomberguy quote.
From Quotes.The Nineties, this quote is mostly complaining about modern music:
Anything salvagable? I was thinking it could be cut down to:
but I wouldn't be opposed to just cutting it.
Edited by Twiddler on Oct 3rd 2023 at 5:07:12 AM
Not too big on the quote for The Beatles, it's funny and it fits with for the band's sometimes nonsensical vibe, but I don't think it really works as a good quote to summarize them. Especially with the rest of the context being lost.
I feel this might be better.
Maybe cut it down to this.
Edit: Removed pothole.
Edit 2: Made it the caption instead, just gonna leave the quote as is.
Edited by Tylerbear12 on Oct 3rd 2023 at 5:11:38 AM
For Ain't Slayed Nobody, it occured to me that the disclaimer "Ain't Slayed Nobody is a produced actual-play podcast intended for adults, and may contain material that some people find disturbing. Please see the episode notes for content warnings, and listen with care." would work better for a new page quote, while the "Push the roll..." quote would work better as a caption under the image than at the top of the page.
I like the second one, but without the pothole. Quotes shouldn't have potholes in them.
x4 I'm partial to the Freefall quote since I think it draws the most attention to the revealing part. As for the 90s quote, eh, I don't feel too strongly about it. It's hard to sum up the culture of an entire decade in one short quote. Probably best to just axe it.
Any thoughts on potential replacement for Being Watched suggested here? CSP Cleanup Thread | All that I ask for ... is diamonds and dance floors
x I prefer it just cut.
Re Revealing Cover Up: The Freefall one works the best, I think.
Alright, swapped that in and cut the quote on Quotes.The Nineties
I know I am a broken record at this point but I want to kindly ask what we should do with Japanese quotes that are not even translated. This cant be kosher, people shouldnt google translate to get a page quote.
Discord: Waido X 255#1372 If you cant contact me on TV Tropes do it here.Examples? Might be easier to judge with specifics.
There's a couple non-English quotes that have the translation in a labelnote (Carmen, The Chorus), which I think is an acceptable compromise. (Particularly because 1) in at least one of those cases, the quote is untranslated within the work itself 2) they're lyrics, and directly translating messes with the meter and rhyme.)
If part of the quote is in English and part not, then putting a note in parentheses after the non-English part might also work.
Edited by Twiddler on Oct 3rd 2023 at 7:12:34 AM
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/TigerMask Doesnt even bother with a translation and https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Anime/CreamyMamiTheMagicAngel does but the unromanized Japanese is uneeded.
Discord: Waido X 255#1372 If you cant contact me on TV Tropes do it here.
Crown Description:
What should be the page quote for Monster.Fan Works?
Hahaha, perfect. Move the Grandpa quote to the Quotes page is my suggestion.