So You Want To: Write a Yuri Manga
"Yuri", also known as "Girls Love", is a manga and anime genre about romantic relationships between women. The following is not a general guide to writing Lesbian Romance fiction, although some advice offered here may be helpful in writing both it and other forms of romance. It is recommended that you read Write A Story, Write a Love Story, and, optionally, Write A Romantic Comedy guides before starting on this one.
Necessary TropesYou will need a lesbian Alpha Couple. They will be the centerpiece of your story and failing to introduce them early will unnecessarily frustrate your readers. "Girl meets girl" comes first; everything else (boys, families, rivals, etc.) comes later. Note that your main girls don't have to be in a committed relationship from the start. You can do that, of course, but simply introducing them and dropping a few hints at a future Romance Arc does just as good a job of setting them up.
Target DemographicThe original yuri mangas of The '70s were all targeted at the Shoujo demographic, but the genre has since expanded to appeal to older demographics of Seinen and Josei, as well. Shōnen yuri is nigh non-existent, owing to the demographic's traditional disinterest in relationships.
- Shoujo yuri tends to be drawn in the distinct thin-lines-big-eyes-impossibly-perfect-bodies style and to feature setups similar to the much more prominent (in that demographic) Boys Love Genre — but that is in no way a universal rule.
- Seinen yuri tends to feature more Bishoujo-style art and to become Long Runners with complex plots and Loads and Loads of Characters — but, again, works on the other ends of artistic and narrative spectrum have been published for this demographic.
- Josei yuri tends to be the most experimental and, simultaneously, most realistic when it comes to lesbian relationships and culture (for example, it's the only yuri category where you will likely find genuine Butch Lesbians, as opposed to Bifauxnen).
Tone and MoodThe first thing to do before starting on a manga concept is to determine your personal preference in tone and mood in yuri. In the wake of the classical "Write What You Know" maxim, the equally important "Write What You Like" tends to be forgotten. In fact, the number of successful male writers of lesbian fiction can be seen as a testament of the precedence of WWYL before WWYK (and, accidentally, of how much the Yuri Genre has to do with lesbian relationships in Real Life). So, writing in the tone and mood of yuri that you prefer to read yourself is the best starting point. There are three main axes along which each yuri story can be situated. Before you begin, you should decide where you and your story are placed on them, according to your personal preference and the expectations of your readership. They are:
- Drama. This axis is characterized by the prominence of Gayngst, Dark Secrets, Dark and Troubled Pasts, societal barriers and stigmas, UST, personal and external differences, etc. In short, everything here is Played for Drama.
- Comedy. This axis is dominated by Romantic Comedy tropes, wacky everyday hijinx, Super-Deformed panels, Innocent Sexual Innuendos, Obliviousness to Subtext, etc.. In other words, what the Drama axis takes seriously, this one Plays for Laughs.
- WAFFnote . This axis is defined by feel-nice, trouble-free romance with lots of hugging (but rarely kissing — too dramatic), quality time together, Sleeping Cute, etc. This axis is responsible for most of the "Healing" Manga (and not only in yuri).
- Drama as the dominant axis tends to overshadow the other two. If Comedy moments are present in a dramatic series, they should become rarer towards the end. WAFF is easier to sneak in, particularly as heartwarming Woobie moments.
- Comedy as the dominant axis mixes well with WAFF but it is equally possible to keep hugging-and-cuteness to the minimum. Unless you are really subtle, mixing equal doses of Comedy and Drama is likely to produce epic Narm.
- WAFF as the dominant axis mixes well with Comedy but can also be spiced up with Drama. The trick to the latter is to never let your readers doubt even for a moment that a good, well-timed hug won't solve everything.
SettingBecause of its cultural roots in the pre-World War II Japanese education system (see Class S), a lot of yuri mangas produced in Japan these days are set in an Elaborate University High or a One-Gender School. Consequentially, a vast majority of lesbian couples in yuri manga are in their late teens to mid-twenties. While you are in no way bound to this setting and age range, you may find it easier to come up with subplots and reach your readers if you stick to the classics. Other popular settings, especially for adult heroines, include their professional environments (office, or wherever their job usually takes them) and outright Fantasy settings. For some reason, Science Fiction yuri mangas are few and far in-between, which may or may not have to do with the belief that science is inherently "male" and thus has no place in a story about females.
Alpha CoupleThe main girls. Yuri mangas tend to be heavily character-driven, so the success of your story largely depends on how believable your leads are and how cute and/or hot they appear as a couple. The first thing to know is that yuri couples are defined by their contrasts. In any form of romance fiction, couples that are perfectly attuned to each other and share same interests and outlooks on life are the most boring thing ever. Therefore, a good fictional (!) romance is the one fraught with differences, misunderstandings, and clashes. In the classical vanilla romance, the good ol' gender contrast is responsible for more than enough tension between lovers. Lesbian romance doesn't have such an easy way out, so the contrast between the female leads should be very carefully considered and balanced out to both keep them apart and, paradoxically, keep them together in the end. On the other hand, your main couple does need some things in common. The second important thing to remember is that while the opposites do attract, it's the similarities that create lasting bonds. Keeping your story's positioning on the three axes in mind, a rule of thumb is that the more Comedic and/or WAFFy a yuri story is, the more alike the female leads will be; conversely, the more Dramatic the story, the larger their differences (and the bigger the payoff). The following list offers a limited selection of common contrasts in yuri manga:
- Physical appearance:
- Reserved brash
- Detached empathetic
- Collected airheaded
- Level-headed passionate
- Stoic lively
- Dutiful egoistical
- Elegant klutzy
- Concentrated easily distracted
- Determined unmotivated
- Easygoing perfectionist
- Aggressive passive
- Dominant submissive
- Manipulative trusting
- Possessive possessed
- Protective defenseless
- Extraverted introverted
- Self-confident insecure
- Perverted innocent
- Open about her love ignorant of it
- Promiscuous chaste
- Comfortable with sexuality afraid of sex
- Sexually liberated easily embarrassed
- Sexually promiscuous committed to monogamy
- Light feminine dark feminine
- Social standing:
- Mental capacities and abilities:
- Straight-up (though not that kind of "straight") Girl Meets Girl. The leads meet without previously knowing each other. In school settings, one of them is usually a New Transfer Student in the other's class. Otherwise, they Meet Cute at work or under more unusual circumstances. Optionally, they have had fleeting contact before but only now get to know each other for real.
- Just Friends, one of whom suddenly realizes she is falling in love with the other or was secretly in love with her for some time when the story begins. Since this is, at least initially, an Unrequited Love, much angst can be expected, especially if the other girl does not swing that way or does, but is not into her best friend's type.
- The leads are already committed to each other in a romantic way from the onset. This setup lends itself best to Comedy and WAFF-style stories and Beta Couples (see below). In a more Dramatic variation, the girls have dated each other before but dismissed it as mere Romantic Two-Girl Friendship and "moved on" to heterosexual relationships, only to discover that they are still in love with each other.
When it comes to Love Triangles in yuri, pretty much every kind of Triang Relations (see reference chart on the right) is acceptable... as long as the third wheel is another girl. If it is a guy, the relationship must feature a strong attraction or even commitment between the lead girls; otherwise, the story runs a high risk of turning into vanilla romance, which is a no-no. Here is a rough breakdown:
- Type 2 always works, regardless which corner of the triangle is male.
- Type 8 never works with a guy involved.
- Types 1, 3, and 7 don't work if A is male, since there is no lesbian attraction in those cases. All other permutations are workable. Ditto types 4 and 5 if B is male.
- Type 6 is tricky: it works if A is male or a bisexual girl. The latter is a very gray area unless her attraction to the other girl (B or C) is much stronger than to her boyfriend.
- Likewise, type 9: it doesn't work if A is male, and when A is a girl, the other girl (B or C) should be considerably more successful in her advances towards her than her boyfriend.
- Type 10 only works if A is male.
- Type 11 is very tricky since it is so close to type 8. Any permutation of it can theoretically work but it's definitely not for a beginning writer to tackle.
- Type 12 works unless B is male. In that case, while technically yuri, the story no longer has the lesbian couple's relationship in the focus.
- Type 13 works unless C is male, in which case A's unrequited crush on B may not be sufficient to make it a yuri story.
Beta CoupleThe Beta Couple in the yuri genre is a supporting lesbian couple, usually slightly older than the lead girls and much better adjusted both to each other and to their sexuality. They are introduced fairly early on and represent what the alpha couple will become in due time. Additionally, in this particular genre, they serve the unique purpose of showing the leads that happy lesbian romance is possible, despite what everyone would have them believe. Their second, less obvious purpose is to reassure all the Yuri Fans who live in constant fear of Bait-and-Switch Lesbians Syndrome that yes, your manga is, indeed, bona fide yuri and is not about Romantic Two-Girl Friendship. When writing the beta couple, have them largely mirror the leads' relationship, traits and contrasts, only projected a few years into the future. It is OK if they don't have the same edge and depth—they are not the main characters, after all.
Explicit ContentIn Real Life, neither "All Women Are Prudes" nor "All Women Are Lustful" is true. In fact, between these two extremes, the vast majority of women are neither sex-obsessed nymphomaniacs, nor absolutely asexual—but a healthy, fulfilling sexual life is desirable for both heterosexual and homosexual women alike, especially young women who love and are loved. On the flip side, very few readers (and certainly none among the Yuri Fans you are writing for) would object to the notion that Girl-on-Girl Is Hot, so a tastefully done lesbian lovemaking scene will be a great treat for both your characters and your readership. There are a few examples where it was done right. However, there are so many ways in which a sex scene can go wrong, that you should only attempt it if you are really, really certain you can pull it off (goes double for male authors). Be sure to read Write A Sex Scene and to familiarize yourself with Common Hollywood Sex Traits if you still want to try. If not, a suggestively framed Sexy Discretion Shot (possibly focusing on their Intertwined Fingers) often works just as well.
- Rule Number One for modern yuri mangakas: Do NOT kill off one of your main heroines in the end, no matter how tragic and dramatic such ending may appear to you. It has been done so often over the years that nowadays it's just tasteless. If you really, really want a Downer Ending, kill both of them, but let them be Together in Death.
- Rule number two: Do NOT make them break up in the end and have happy vanilla marriages. While it certainly defuses the challenge to heteronormativity posed by your work, it somewhat misses the point of the genre and is usually treated as a cheap-ass way around breaking the first rule above (heaven help you if you break both). If you want a Bittersweet Ending that badly, please take the Star-Crossed Lovers route with an unspoken promise of the leads getting back together in undefined future.
- Make it look like you are building up to a Dead Lesbian Syndrome or Bait-and-Switch Lesbians ending, then subvert it in the last moment, preferably in an Earn Your Happy Ending way.
- The ways you can subvert the reader's expectations by mixing and matching the main couple's traits (as outlined above) are infinite.
- Introduce an openly-lesbian violently-insane character whose insanity turns out to have nothing to do with her sexuality, and, in fact, a fulfilling lesbian relationship is the one thing that can keep her stable.
- A Coming-Out Story needs not to be climatic: after all the secrecy and Gayngst, the actual coming-out can be met with a Shrug Take or a Milholland Relationship Moment from every character who matters.
Suggested Themes and Aesops
- The Power of Love is always a good choice, as well as its derivatives: Love Hurts and Love Heals (the latter being particularly favored in lesbian romance), Love Makes You Evil (but beware of the Psycho Lesbian trope here, as well as in Love Makes You Crazy) and Love Redeems, Love Makes You Dumb, etc..
- Flower Motifs. The original meaning of "yuri" in Japanese is "lily", so white lilies are a instantly recognizable motif in yuri manga. You don't have to stop there: many great yuri series used flower symbolism extensively, with roses being close seconds.
- Meaningful Names, especially of Floral Theme Naming variety. Playing on the lily symbolism, names like Yuu, Yuria, Yuri, Juri, Julia, etc. are popular for Japanese girls. Lily, Lillian, Lilith, etc. are equivalents for Westerners.
Suggested PlotsGenerally, refer to Romance Novel Plots and Romance Arc pages. A lot of yuri mangas out there are either short (one-shot to a single volume) single-arc pieces or longer (multi-volume) episodic or arc-based works.
- As been mentioned above, there aren't many Science Fiction yuri mangas, so why not try your hand at Girls Love IN SPACE! (well, not literally in space) or Macross WITH LESBIANS!? An aspiring Starfighter Ace Pilot is taken POW by a Green-Skinned Space Babe enemy captain but accidentally freed by a wacky Space Pirate Girl. Foe Yay and Planetary Romance Across Battlelines ensues. Or opt instead for a more Star Trek plot or Mobile Suit Gundam or what have you. Ilivais X or Iczer are examples on this wiki you can look for.
- A girl going Sweet Polly Oliver at an all-boys school to find her love discovers that her mysterious Bishōnen crush is a cross-dressing girl, as well. Hilarity Ensues (or drama, however you want to play it).
Set Designer / Location ScoutIf you are going for a high school setting, you will need an Elaborate University High with all the trappings that usually come with it. Otherwise, consider the lead characters' homes (home, if they are already living together) and everyday workplace, e.g. the Office Ladies' Office, the Teen Idols' agency, etc., etc.. In a fantasy setting, let your imagination run free and use whatever epic and romantic landscapes come to mind.
Props DepartmentWhat props you will need depends largely on what kinds of subplots and arcs you are planning to write, such as chocolate hearts for the Valentine's Day arc, gowns and lanterns for the festival arc, presents for the Christmas arc, etc., etc.. And just in case you have decided to write a lovemaking scene and wonder what kind of "props" your girls should use, there are much better specialized educational websites out there for such questions than This Wiki. Our Super-Strict Language Policy doesn't allow such details, anyway.
Costume DesignerAgain, if you are going for a high school setting, you have to design relatively unique yet appealing uniforms for your female characters. Just like your main couple themselves, their clothes should be instantly recognizable by your fans. That said, make sure that the entire female cast wears clothes that emphasize their beauty, even at the cost of some practicality. It doesn't have to be Pimped Out Dresses for everyone, but the general impression should please the reader's eye.
Casting DirectorThis part is only relevant when you've made it all the way to an animated adaptation.
Stunt DepartmentUnless you are doing an epic fantasy or sports series, you won't see many stunts being done.
- Shiroi Heya no Futari. The manga genre launcher.
- Kannazuki no Miko. While a bit heavy-handed and often confusing, the anime adaptation was among the first openly yuri televised series and highly influential on all that followed.
- Girl Friends is a reference for Drama-style yuri.
- Ditto Strawberry Shake Sweet for Comedy-style yuri.
- Ditto Wife and Wife for WAFF-style yuri, as well as Miyabi Fujieda's yuri mangas.
- Aoi Hana is another, generally well-received, example of Drama-style yuri.
- Sasameki Koto provides an excellent example of how to mix Drama- and Comedy-style yuri without Narm or Mood Whiplash.
- Hanjuku Joshi is a dramatic love story with a not-so-subtle criticism of the Class S idea.
- Love My Life is a good example of "realistic" yuri, painting a sweet, funny and honest picture of what it's like to be a lesbian in Japan. It's Josei.
- The Feelings We All Must Endure is a good example of how make the female leads' sexuality and sexual exploration the driving force of the plot rather than just fanservice.
- ICE. The yuri feels tacked-on, and yet the plot and setting feel like they were mutilated to accommodate it. In any case, it manages to blend Cliché Storm and Mind Screw and should not be emulated.
- Kuttsukiboshi. The characters behave irrationally, the plot twists come out of nowhere with absolutely no foreshadowing, and a plot point that may have been used in an interesting way is instead used to invoke a Gainax Ending. It's confusing, and a good example of what you must not do if you want to make a good story.