Sandbox / RJ Reworks

Here I work on reworks and tune-ups. It's also where I develop drafts for my main sandbox since I try to keep this not at cluttered. Go here for some salvaged deleted profiles, in case you're ever interested in retooling them. RJ Drafts are for simple drafts before I move them onto the main page

Reworks and Tune-ups(0/10)

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• Reworks(3/10)
  • Cynthia, Goddess of Studious Badasses: a rework
  • Rassilon, God of Scientific Emperors (Hall of Royal Activities)-a rework
  • The Cybermen, Godly Representativees of Highly Mechanized Sovieties: a rework. Sailor Venus 372 has given me their blessing to rework them

• Series I feel need a lot of reworks: Pokémon, Batman, Disney, Harry Potter, A Song of Ice and Fire, Classical Mythology

• Operation: Condense and expand
  • Some time ago it was suggested to me that rather than try to get Jumba and Pleakley up on their own, I could have them and Nani merge in a rework of the Lilo and Stitch profile, but still under True Companions. Should I do that or not?
  • Some time ago it was suggested to me that the Experiments could have a merged profile of Instant Mass: Just Add Water!; they were all dehydrated into small balls for convenient travel, and will be reactivated the moment even a drop of water gets on them. If you agree with the reasoning and think a lot of my profiles could be condensed, how should I go along with it. Thinking mainly focus on the ones with profiles in the character page. I'm wondering if some of the experiments like Reuben and Angel should be set aside because of their much large narrative importance
  • I am wondering if there's majorly exposed series who have many entries that could easily be grouped into a multi-profile like the Phantom Thieves. I was suggested this about the Smith family, The Simpsons have had occasional talk about Couch Gag, ect
  • I want to rework Tiamat to be more than just her FGO self, but a Composite Character of all versions meant to be the Mesopotamian goddess. There are two tropes I want to retool her under her current trope Mother of a Thousand Young; the primordial goddess Tiamat gave birth to at least 11 entire races of monsters, including "ferocious dragons," "virulent" and "horned serpents," mushussu-dragons, various demons, scorpion-men, and rabid dogs. Do you agree with my decision. Do you think there's a better trope or is this fine

• Rework and restore ideas
  • The Planet Express Crew, Divine Representatives Of Series Coming Back From Cancellation: A rework and merger of the main crewmates...also adding Scruffy (the Janitor). Futurama is kind of famous for how many times it has come back. It was cancelled in four seasons but brought back for four TV movies...then revived proper on Comedy Central. And ten years after its supposed last episode ended, it was brought back on Hulu. That's what, three to four runs?
  • Golden Freddy, God of Teleporting Offscreen: a rework. With Cardboard Bot retiring from the Trope Pantheon, I would like to complete his rework. Golden Freddy is unique as the only pure ghost of the original five, can instantly warp in your office when "summoned" and generally teleport when you aren't looking. And not being a physical entity it's easy for him to do
  • The Marionette, Goddess of Being Soothed By Music: a rework. Her current profile is underdeveloped and was made some time before the revelation she is Henry's daughter. The Marionette is a puppet animatronic that can only be pacified by playing the refrain from "Grandfather Clock". Lefty, an animatronic with the Puppet inside it, follows similar rules and it is how Lefty caught her
  • Jake the Dog, God of Canine Companions: a rework. Jake's current profile suffers from a number of thing paragraphs, and now that the show's over and he's dead by Fionna and Cake I felt that his profile could do with some sprucing up. Jake the Dog is, well, a dog and the shapeshifting talking dog of Finn. What's interesting is that Ooo being what he is, he is not only seen as an equal to Finn but he's his adoptive big brother.
  • Euron Greyjoy, God of Accursed Kinslaying-a rework. I feel a number of his paragraphs could do with some condensing and needs more development. Kinslaying Is a Special Kind of Evil feels more appropriate to me; Euron Greyjoy is an Ax-Crazy maniac with a penchant of killing his siblings. He plans to murder Aeron, his own pregnant lover and has both Balon and another brother dead because of him. While applicable across all of Westeros, the Iron Islands are the worst culture of the seven kingdoms and even they oppose kinslaying. The fact that his brothers uphold the taboo is the only reason they never killed him for his crimes
  • Ser Jaime Lannister, God of Kingslaying (Hall of Royal Activities)-rework. Jaime's current profile is outdated and could benefit from some condensing and expansion. Jaime Lannister is infamous in-universe for being a kingslayer; he committed a Bodyguard Betrayal on mad king Aerys. Despite everyone recognizing Aerys deserved it Deliberate Values Dissonance means he will always have his reputation stained for breaking his oath. Never mind Aerys' last act was to try and blow up the city, though he never spoke up because Honor Before Reason meant he was already judged.
  • Azathoth, Emperor of Nebulous Cosmic Beings (Hall of Otherness)-another rework. I reworked Azathoth years ago and I find it pretty out of date by modern stands, along with being a weak profile. So I want to rectify that. Azathoth is the Top God of the Cthulhu Mythos and source of all the eldritch beings. It lives in the The Exact Centre Of Everything and is an Almighty Idiot that is an inconceivable Mad God of Primordial Chaos
  • Yog-Sothoth, He Who Transcends Space-Time (Hall of Dimensional Areas)-another old rework of mine I feel Creator Backlash to because of how underdeveloped it is. A contender with Azathoth for "most important entity in-universe", Yog-Sothoth is an abstract entity that is the space-time continuum. It is the Key and the Gate. It would normally be The Omnipresent by virtue of being time and space, but he is locked out of reality. Perhaps its more accurate the say space-time is part of him, and the rest is something far more complex and beyond space-time. Relatively-speaking it's a Benevolent Abomination, but still operates on Blue-and-Orange Morality and will do some nasty things
  • Yamcha, God of Memetic Losers (Hall of Memes)-a rework. His current profile is pretty underdeveloped and I want to rectify that. While many Dragonball characters have been mocked by the fanbase for being overshadowed or worfed, Yamcha is the reigning king. His most famous moment is being killed by a Mook and he was the usual victim of The Worf Effect back when he had credibility. It's even been acknowledged in-universe. He's still got a lot of fans, manly because he's seen as the lovable loser
  • Whis, Divine Keeper Of The Reset Button: a rework. Whis's current profile is underdeveloped and also outdated since it was made by Super, and the revelations of both him being an angel and the enforced All-Powerful Bystander status. Whis has many spectacular powers, being a Reality Warper who dwarfs even Beerus in power, but his and presumably other angels' signature move is the Temporal Do-Over. He can turn time back by three minutes, avoiding any split timeline consequences. He does this mainly to fix Beerus' mistakes and in Resurrection F he undoes Frieza blowing up the Earth so Goku can kill-steal from Vegeta finish him off
  • Nack the Weasel, God of Kiddified Guns: Nack's current profile is underdeveloped and somewhat inaccurate (I don't recall him and Eggman being buddy-buddies). Originally he was going to have a straight up revolver but since Sonic is a kids game and they want to save guns for Shadow the Edgehog his gun is a popgun that shoots corks
  • Sir Alister Gordon Lethbridge-Stewart, God of Brigadiers: a restoration. One of the most important and long-lasting companions, the Brigadier is exactly what the name suggests. He's a military personell and works for UNIT, dealing with alien incursions. He was great help for the Third Doctor during his exile to Earth, and his daughter takes up his legacy
  • Harry S. Plinkett, God of Creator's Apathy (Hall of Workmanship, Chaotic Evil)-a rework. Plinkett's current profile as is comes off as underdeveloped. He was given Creator's Apathy. He's a Caustic Critic that, often to reflect how he thinks what he's reviewing is bad, he often seems so genuinely uninterested in actually reviewing his movies, that sometimes he doesn't even care to finish words or to enunciate them whatsoever properly.. That said if you think he fits a better trope I'd like to hear it
  • Luna, God/dess Of The Moon: a restoration. Luna is the goddess of the moon and the second greatest of the Incarnae, after the Unconquered Sun. Her chosen Exalted, the Lunar, are associated with shapeshifters and were-creatures. Her changing, fickle nature is a reflection of the different phases of the moon

• Possible artifact restorations (check if already restored) from Wayback Machine
  • My own: Captain America's shield, Sword-Chucks, The Stone MaskThe Staves of Life
  • A vial of Chemical X: a restoration to the Grand Treasury
  • The Earth Dragonballs: a restoration to the Grand Treasury
  • Others: The Dragonslayer, The Elder Wand, The Skywalker lightsaber, The Chaos Emeralds, The Stand Arrow, The Infinity Gauntlet and Infinity Gems (might want to approach it differently), The Green Lantern rings (expand to the other six), Pieces of Kryptonite

• Possible dominion restorations (check if already restored from Wayback Machine)
  • My own: The Elizabeth Arkham Asylum For The Criminally Insane (Bedlam House), The Phantom Zone, Krypton (Phantom Zone, Sacrificial Planet), Holy Terra (Planet Terra), Band Land (Band Land), The Source Wall (Wall Around the World)
  • Hell, Unholy Seat of Enjoyable Damnation
  • The Room of Spirit and Time, Divine Blank White Void
  • Other: Atlantica (Under the Sea), Halloween Town (Halloweentown, Metropolis (Shining City, City of Adventure), Springfield (Where the Hell Is Springfield?), Toontown (Toontown), Casino Park (Casino Park), Freddy Fazbear's Pizza (Suck E. Cheese's), The Anur System (Home of Monsters), the Moon (Detonation Moon)

• Reworks taken by other people of note
  • Aj Wargo: Gyro Zeppelli, "Josuke Higashikata" (also says they're adoptable)
  • Azure Legacy: Leia (under Politically-Active Princess), the Fiends, Hogwarts, The Death Star, Davy Jones (guess what trope), Coruscant, Tatooine
  • Bazzardreturns Workshop: The Regis (under Guide Dang It! and Moon Logic Puzzle (if finished frees up Golem, considering The Golem of Prague)), Littlefinger, Ned Stark
  • Crimson Shark: Neville Longbottom (under Cowardly Lion), Son Goku, Bruce Wayne, Alice Liddell, Kara Zor-El, Luke Skywalker, Ra's Al Ghul, Jotaro Kujo
  • Dood Slayer 136: SCP-173
  • Excessive-Menace: Ariel, The Minions, The Hetalia main characters under Nations as People, The Puppet, Pikachu, N, Yoshikage Kira
  • Hamana Hamana Hamana: Neon Genesis Evangelion, Neo, Agent Smith, Terminator, Warhammer 40000
  • Muundeis Adoptables Dos (can PM if intereseted): Da Rules, Soul Dew, Holy Grail, Bikini Bottom, Toontown, Zootopia, The Empty, the Speed Force, the Phantom Zone
  • Necromancer 10: The Flying Dutchman
  • Tropers/nightelf37: Sandy, Hyperbolic Time Chamber, Freddy Fazbear's Pizza
  • Sailor Venus 372: Cletus Kasady (under Freudian Excuse Denial), Eggman, Eggmanland, Death of the Endless (adoptable), the Cybermen, Dr Wily, Mojo Jojo
  • Shinobi: Alice, the Demi-Fiend, the Divine Powers, Jack Frost, Mara, Stephen (Ambiguous Innocence, No Canon for the Wicked or Superboss, The Old Gods, Mascot Mook or Breakout Mook Character, Gag Penis, No Celebrities Were Harmed), Alessi, J.Geil (Death by De-aging or Fountain of Youth, Mirror Monster), (reworks and restorations)
  • The Wikia Editor: The Supernatural Archangels
  • Weird Warrior: Lucario
  • Yugi 195: Revan, Metropolis, Htrae, Krypton, Gotham City

• Pokémon rework plot
  • Profiles I'd be fine if they dropped: Rhydon, Lunatone and Solrock, Oshawott, Ferrothorn, Beeheyem, Meowstic, Klefki, Gourgeist Zygarde, Poppilo, Vikavolt, Palossand (for a domain instead), Silvally, Sabrina, Maxie and Archie, The Unova Elite 4
  • Profiles I'd consider fusing/someone else fusing: Kanto fossils and Rampardos (if all the non-Galar fossils were in one big profile under Prehistoric Animal Analaogue or Fossil Revival), the legendary birds and tower duo (under Divine Birds), Misty and Brock (under Adaptational Protagonist)
  • Pokemon species: Miltank, Drapion, The Legendary Musketeers (format into members becoming more distinct), Bewear
  • Humans and individual Pokemon characters: The Team Rocket Trio, Nurse Joy and Officer Jenny, Red, Wally, N, Lysandre

• Feel these need rework by series
  • Cartoon Network: Princess Morbucks, Ed, Edd and Eddy, Kevin Levin, Ben and Gwen Tennyson, Charmcaster, The Delightful Children From Down The Lane, The KND, Courage, Eustace Bagge, Muriel Bagge, Billy, Mandy, Dexter, Dee Dee, Mandark, Lazlo, Raj and Clam, Cow and Chicken, The Imaginary Friends, Madame Foster, Powerpuff Girls
    • Adventure Time: BMO, Princess Bubblegum
  • DC Comics: Krypto, Conner Kent, Swamp Thing, Jon Osterman, Dollar Bill, Madame Xanadu
    • Batman (would prefer Crimson to do it): Tim Drake Talia al Ghul, Garfield Lynn, Alfred Pennyworth, James Gordon, Edward Nigma, Oswald Cobblepott, Bane
    • The Sandman: Dream, Desire, and Delirium of the Endless
    • Teen Titans: Koriand'r, Rachel Roth, Garfield Logan
  • Disney
    • Movies: The Magic Mirror, Judge Doom, Jessica Rabbit, Snow White, The Evil Queen, Aurora, Milo Thatch, Hans Westergard, Elsa, Monstro, Jiminy Cricket, Cinderella, Iago, Mulan, Shan-Yu, Mushu, The Enchantress, Ralph, Vanellope, Felix, Seargent Calhoun, The Queen of Hearts, Dr. Facilier, Melody, Lewis Anthonio
    • Pixar related: AUTO, The Toys from Toy Story, The Parr Family, Carl Frederickson
    • Shows and other: Pete, Ron Stoppable, Heinz Doofenshmirtz, Phineas and Ferb
  • Dragon Ball: Son Chi-Chi, Krillin, OG Broly, Bulma, Yamcha
  • Harry Potter: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Draco Malfoy, Cedric Diggory, Luna Lovegood, Minerva McGonagall, Horace Slughorn, Madame Pomfrey, Cornelius Fudge, Alastor Moody, Bellatrix Lestrange, Lucius Malfoy, The Dursleys
  • Jojos Bizarre Adventure: Jonathan Joestar, William A Zeppeli, Jean-Pierre Polneraff, Johnny Joestar
  • Mega Man: Mega Man, Gyro Man, Grey, Lurerre the Abysroid (considering a group profile with her)
  • Nickelodeon: Eliza Thornberry, Spongebob Squarepants, Patrick Star, Jimmy Neutron, Catdog, Mr.Blik, Gordon Quid and Waffle, Sam Manson, Danny Fenton, Tucker Foley
  • SCP Foundation: The SCP Foundation, SCP-079, SCP-261, SCP-169, SCP-633, SCP-1048, SCP-2295, Mr Deeds
  • The Simpsons: Ralph Wiggum, Ned Flanders, Moe Syzlack
  • Star Wars: Jabba the Hutt, Jar Jar Binks (re-do), The Sarlacc, Han Solo, C-3PO and R2-D2
  • Real Life (really needs a list somewhere for me to use to find them): Steve Irwin, Theodore Roosevelt, Leonidas
  • Other: Seras Victoria, Wyldstyle, Agatha Trunchbull, Noah Kaiba, Doc Brown, Alex Louis Armstrong, Hastur, Roger Smith, Kuriboh, Exodia, Betilla (might consider combining with the other fairies), The Teensies
  • On hold: The Crew of Planet Express (for post-Hulu revival), Hol Horse (until the new spin-off manga is finished), Moana (need to actually watch the movie), Aphrodite (on hold until Palutena is reworked with God of Light, considering Hot God for her rework), Ahsoka Tano (on hold until after the Ahsoka series)