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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM

Melinda Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: Puppy love
#10001: Feb 22nd 2021 at 9:31:45 AM

@ Mad Money

  • Secret Test of Character: Bridget does a version of this seeking bad character when she asks a potential accomplice for her robbery scheme if a bill on the ground is his. To her chagrin, he says it isn't and turns it in to Lost and Found.

Edited by Melinda on Feb 23rd 2021 at 5:33:36 AM

domino710 Since: Nov, 2020
#10002: Feb 22nd 2021 at 9:37:32 AM

Deadpan Snarker Western Animation

  • The Mask:
    • Stanley Ipkiss has his moments when he deals with people who are idiots, jerks or cowards. But The Mask is this a lot more since he is a lot more confident than Stanley, and shows expressions of annoyance, as he has to play the role of being the Only Sane Man when he's dealing with people who are ignoring the signs of something bad happening.
    • Dr.Neuman as usual when played by Ben Stein, but his masked self takes this Up to Eleven as he keeps up his deadpan demeanour even when he's insane.

Edited by domino710 on Feb 22nd 2021 at 1:20:34 AM

Melinda Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: Puppy love
#10003: Feb 22nd 2021 at 12:08:29 PM

At the most I'll only make a couple of other posts about this long (not counting the copied and pasted song lyrics) for today.

@ Reader Rabbit

  • Minion with an F in Evil Vermina's song about how much she loves sailing.
    Vermina: I could ride all over the town in grand and glorious style
    I would be seen in a big limousine delighting in every mile
    But give me a boat and send me afloat out on the open sea
    Wind in my hair, the fresh morning air, this is the life for me!

Edited by Melinda on Feb 22nd 2021 at 6:25:42 AM

ElJuaco Since: Aug, 2019
#10004: Feb 22nd 2021 at 12:16:04 PM

Hi guys. It's me, once more. Let's have another try.

Some Headscratchers for The Tale of Despereaux:

  • Why exactly the Queen of Dor died? It's commonly assumed that she suffered a heart attack because of Roscuro's ugly appearance and presence on her soup, but others argue that she drowned due to faceplanting on her soup after fainting. However, in case of the latter, why didn't the King think on lifting up his wife's head from the soup?
  • How was Miggery Sow able to kidnap Princes Pea without getting caught by anyone? Yeah, the King was depressed on his room and didn't do anything due to his wife's death, but whatabout the other knights or servants of the castle? No one saw or heard Princess Pea screaming for help?
  • How Roscuro managed to lock up Miggery Sow in a dungeon? He's just a rat and she is a human woman capable of running away from him. Or did he somehow knocked her into the cell and closed the door?
  • Why wasn't Miggery Sow arrested at the end for kidnapping and locking up Princess Pea at the castle's dungeons? Taking the princess hostage is a serious crime, after all...

For a potential Headscratchers page of Eye for an Eye:

  • How is even possible that Robert Doob was able to sneak into Megan's school without being spotted by any kids or teachers? What's more, he even shoved a kid who was teasing Megan away so he could talk with her, shouldn't that kid warn the teacher that a grown up man pushed him during recess?

And for a potential Headscratchers page of I Care a Lot:

  • What happened with Roman's female assassin, the one who killed Dr. Karen Amos? After murdering Dr. Amos, she appears in another scene and then vanishes from the film into thin air...
  • When Marla tricks Jennifer Peterson into attacking her so she could commit her to a psychiatric ward as a retribution for Dr. Amos' death, why didn't Marla defend herself from Jennifer? Yeah, Jennifer's an old woman and Marla didn't do anything so the security camera could record the whole scene, but Jennifer is a woman who deals with Russian mobsters, so what if Jennifer ended up snapping Marla's neck?
  • Why instead of leaving Marla and Fran unconscious, didn't Roman have her men to kill them immediately? In Marla's case, Roman could have asphyxiated her with the plastic bag and then throw her to the river, so there would have been no way to prove that she didn't drown. And in Fran's case, Roman's henchmen didn't even consider the possibility that Fran could regain her consciousness and crawl away from the building?
  • How did Marla pay for her purchases after surviving Roman's assassination attempt? If she was wearing her wallet when the car was thrown into the river, all her money and her credit card would be wet and thus it would no longer serve to buy anything.
  • Why didn't Mr. Feldstrom shoot Fran at the end along with Marla? Even if Fran didn't lock up her mother in the assisted living residence, she fully knew what Marla was doing and didn't do anything to stop her.

domino710 Since: Nov, 2020
#10005: Feb 22nd 2021 at 1:29:13 PM

Ax-Crazy Western Animation The Mask: Masked Dr Neuman is this as he is genuinely insane, but unlike The Mask is psychotic and delusional. He does keep his insanity in control most of the time, except when Charlie mentions Stanley to him, and it causes him to lost complete control which causes him to nearly perform lobotomy on Charlie, though he regains control of himself when his appointment alarm went off. After hearing from Pretorius how he's going to destroy Edge City is by using a nuclear missile on the city, Masked Dr Neuman shows joy and glee at the thought of it to be destroyed, since he thinks in his delusional mind that it will bring an end to the outbreak of Ipkissa Maskosis once and for all. He also brings out a Slasher Smile as he is about to kill Stanley with a power cable, showing that he is more insane than The Mask ever is.

Edited by domino710 on Feb 23rd 2021 at 1:30:52 AM

domino710 Since: Nov, 2020
#10006: Feb 22nd 2021 at 1:35:17 PM

Sanity Has Advantages

Western Animation The Mask: The Mask despite being a Cloudcuckoolander is a lot more sane than he appears to be, as he saves Edge City along with the people living there, and his friends. The other mask personas do not have that unfortunately as Eve is a lot more love-crazy than The Mask is, but she does have her moments of being sane as well, Masked Dr Neuman is delusional, psychotic and is in denial that he is insane and Masked Peggy Brandt is a lot more egotistical than The Mask is, as she tends to go check on her makeover instead of rescuing someone in trouble, though she is good-hearted like The Mask is as well.

Edited by domino710 on Feb 22nd 2021 at 5:19:28 AM

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#10007: Feb 22nd 2021 at 2:08:37 PM

Melinda: You misunderstand what Prefers Rocks to Pillows is about. That trope is only about places to sleep, not about people prefering a rugged existence in general.

domino710 Since: Nov, 2020
#10008: Feb 22nd 2021 at 2:38:00 PM

Evil Counterpart

Western Animation

The Mask: Masked Dr Neuman is this to The Mask as he is polite, funny and wearing the same coat with same colour scheme as The Mask's along with having a bow tie that also has the same colour scheme as The Mask's tie, though however while The Mask is harmless and tends to not taking things too seriously, while Masked Dr Neuman takes himself very seriously. The Mask is a Cloudcuckoolander but Masked Dr Neuman is Ax-Crazy, their moral centers are different as well, with The Mask not willing to hurt or kill people, but Masked Dr Neuman is willing to do that. The Mask will not team up with anyone who is willing to hurt people or kill them, though Masked Dr Neuman has no problem doing that.

Edited by domino710 on Feb 22nd 2021 at 3:14:55 AM

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#10009: Feb 22nd 2021 at 3:42:25 PM

For Unholy Blood

  • Dirty Cop: Large portions of the Korean police are secretly minions of the Big Bad God and are helping him with his illegal activities.

  • Mind Rape: The ability to violate the mind is the special ability of the vampire Sahan. Sahan torments his victims using visions of personal figures to them to mess with them psychologically.

  • One-Man Army:
    • Hayan is a pure blood vampire and hence one of the strongest of her kind. It allows her to effortlessly take down hundreds of mixed blood vampires in her fights.
    • The generals of the Big Bad, the "Angels of Death" are each able to take down hundred of other vampires themselves. In fact to become an "Angel of Death" requires a vampire to be the strongest of his region.

  • Psycho Psychologist: Sahan works as a school therapist. He uses this position to take in abused and neglected teenagers and then warp them into bloodthirsty vampires by preying on their insecurities.

  • Psychic-Assisted Suicide: The vampire Sahan when cornered attempts this by forcing a crowd of hundreds of people to rip their own hearts out if the heroine Hayan does not surrender to him.

Edited by miraculous on Feb 22nd 2021 at 3:47:43 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
domino710 Since: Nov, 2020
#10010: Feb 22nd 2021 at 4:17:44 PM

Reality Ensues

Western Animation

The Mask: Though the cartoon is known for breaking the laws of physics, there are still several times that this will occur no matter what.

  • The Mask may be the city's famous superhero, but he does have to pay up for the food and drinks he brought, along with making sure to have a credit card as well though he maxes them out one at a time which Stanley comes up being Crazy-Prepared by getting more so that The Mask doesn't end up having to pay the charges for buying them.
  • Stanley ends up dealing with Dr Neuman's masked self as he holds a power cable to kill him with, so he tries to use reverse psychology on him but it does not work as Masked Dr Neuman is a trained psychotherapist insane or not, which causes Stanley to find another way to stop him.
  • Stanley dates a young woman named Evelyn who accidentally wears the Mask of Loki, and becomes a very beautiful, superpowered, Amazonian woman named Eve, which after getting used to her and seeing that she is a nice girl like Evelyn, Stanley starts to wonder if he should let her be around for a while, but then realises that it's not right as Evelyn will be trapped inside if he does that. The other reasons also is that the Mask of Loki must be used for good, he will grow old and die while Eve stays the same being beautiful and young, thanks to the mask, Eve is insane and unpredictable so things will be too hard for Stanley to manage on his own with having to keep her under control and, making sure no one finds out that The Mask as the people call him is living with him, and also the last thing is what their children will look like, along with the possibility of them having powers and abilities inherited from their mom Eve, so Stanley decides to take her face off no matter what even if he feels guilty about doing it.

Edited by domino710 on Feb 22nd 2021 at 4:59:50 AM

Avenger09 Since: May, 2014
#10011: Feb 22nd 2021 at 5:33:05 PM

Diablo II

  • Video Game Remake: At Blzzcon 2021, it was announced that it would be receiving one titled; Diablo 2 Resurrected. Now featuring full 3d gameplay (though with great effort done to keep the presentation of the original just with additional detail. Much like what was done in the Age of Empires Definite Edition's) updated player character models, and shot for shot redo of cinematic's.

What does Diablo fall under with the genres listed on the Video Game Remake folders? I don't see Dungeon Crawler.

Edited by Avenger09 on Feb 22nd 2021 at 2:16:09 PM

Melinda Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: Puppy love
#10012: Feb 22nd 2021 at 6:24:25 PM

Thanks for clarifying the Prefers Rocks to Pillows meaning, Michael. I fixed that and added a link to the song.

Melinda Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: Puppy love
#10013: Feb 22nd 2021 at 8:48:28 PM

Here's the last of my posts for today. Added together they're longer than I would have preferred, but not unreasonably so. At least, I hope not unreasonably so. If I'm wrong please tell me. I'm not on this thread to put you through an exhausting or unfair amount of work.

@ Reader Rabbit It is Pirats and not pirates.

@ American Dragon: Jake Long - Friends and Allies Adding a sentence to a Demoted to Extra entry. Ironically, despite having far less screen-time in season 2, the twins make a brief appearance in the season's new opening credit sequence.

Edited by Melinda on Feb 23rd 2021 at 5:37:45 AM

Minorica Rhythm Heroine from Earth Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: It's so nice to be turned on again
Rhythm Heroine
#10014: Feb 23rd 2021 at 1:12:06 AM

For O2Jam:

Edited by Minorica on Feb 23rd 2021 at 10:24:09 PM

"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."
MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#10015: Feb 23rd 2021 at 1:17:36 AM

  • Alternate Company Equivalent: BeautifulDay's "V3" is the answer to Pump It Up's "Beethoven Virus". Both songs are remixed versions of the third movement of Beethoven's "Pathetique Sonata".

Edited by MichaelKatsuro on Feb 23rd 2021 at 10:17:51 AM

Minorica Rhythm Heroine from Earth Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: It's so nice to be turned on again
Rhythm Heroine
#10016: Feb 23rd 2021 at 1:35:03 AM

Thanks, Michael Katsuro.[tup]

Edited by Minorica on Feb 23rd 2021 at 4:35:14 PM

"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."
domino710 Since: Nov, 2020
#10017: Feb 23rd 2021 at 2:05:02 AM

Evil is Cool

Western Animation

The Mask: Masked Dr Neuman is terrifying, scary, psychotic and delusional, "but that’s what viewers love about him", and because he represents what will happen if The Mask decides to become a supervillain instead of superhero. It also helps that his actor does a brilliant job of playing an evil mask persona.

Edited by domino710 on Feb 23rd 2021 at 2:59:47 AM

domino710 Since: Nov, 2020
#10018: Feb 23rd 2021 at 2:10:09 AM

Stan Lee YMMV

First Installment Wins: While all the other Marvel superheroes have been defined by other writers making them My Real Daddy, some of them such as Spider-Man and the Fantastic Four are still seen as being at their best when written by Stan Lee, along with those who worked alongside him.

Edited by domino710 on Feb 23rd 2021 at 2:52:18 AM

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#10019: Feb 23rd 2021 at 2:31:00 AM

  • First Installment Wins: While all the other Marvel superheroes have been defined by other writers making them My Real Daddy, some of them such as Spider-Man and the Fantastic Four are still seen as being at their best when written by Stan Lee, along with those who worked alongside him.

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#10020: Feb 23rd 2021 at 2:33:22 AM

The Mask: Masked Dr Neuman is terrifying, scary, psychotic and delusional, but he is well-liked because of all these things, and because he represents what will happen if The Mask decides to become a supervillain instead of superhero. It also helps that his actor does a brilliant job of playing an evil mask persona.

(Your phrasing is a bit clunky. Instead of saying "but he is well-liked because of all these things", you can say "but that's what viewers love about him".)

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#10021: Feb 23rd 2021 at 4:17:29 AM

From page 400 and 401 @Melinda

A 2007 high school Christmas...use the secret Santas they draw to pursue...

Lily's boyfriend dumps her via email for a girl he met at camp.

When Charlie and Noelle were in elementary school, he stood up to a boy who hit her for using the monkey bars because she was a girl.

By the time she realizes that...she also realizes that...

Shawna notes that while high-heeled boots "made her legs look great," but they "weren't made for walking for hours."

...talking about science fiction and fantasy movies...

...only tolerates her because she throws good parties <- no comma and her...

When Freddy realizes his crush (and gift recipient) Celia likes Jake, <- comma he...

Bridget does a version of this seeking bad character...in to Lost and Found.

I also found errors in your introductory material in a post:

Added together, <- comma they're longer than I would have preferred...

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#10022: Feb 23rd 2021 at 4:32:56 AM

[up] x 18 @ElJuaco

Why exactly did the Queen of Dor die? ...presence in her...think of lifting...

Yeah, the King was depressed in his room...but what about the...or castle servants?

How did Roscuro manage to...somehow knock her into the cell and close the door?

...for kidnapping and locking up Princess Pea in the castle's dungeons?

...talk with her, wouldn't that kid warn the teacher that a grown up man...

...attacking her so she can commit her to a psychiatric ward as retribution for...

Why, <- comma instead...men to kill...then thrown her into the...regain her consciousness...

If she was carrying her wallet when the car was thrown into the river, all of her money and credit cards would be wet and couldn't be used to buy anything.

^ Both money and credit cards can be used to buy things, even if they're damp.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#10023: Feb 23rd 2021 at 4:38:27 AM

[up] x 14 @miraculous

Sahan torments his victims using visions of figures personal to them to mess with them...

The generals of the Big Bad, the "Angels of Death", <- comma are...In fact, <- comma to...

When cornered, the vampire Sahan threatens to force a crowd of hundreds...

Edited by Arivne on Feb 23rd 2021 at 4:38:42 AM

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#10024: Feb 23rd 2021 at 5:04:52 AM

Thank you arivne.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Melinda Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: Puppy love

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