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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#54276: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:04:22 PM

@papyru Oh more than that. I count 8 yes, 2 no, 5 abstain/wait.

@Bull Oh you [nja]. Haha.

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Jul 29th 2021 at 4:04:51 AM

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
#54277: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:11:26 PM

Here's the vote count for Sonia

Yes (9): futuremoviewriter, amanofmanyinterests, g-editor, bullman, mgd, satoshi, tellall, Demonduck, Lore

No: (2) Papyru, Klavice

Abstain: (5) purpleeyedguma, 43, jjj, ravok, skycat

[down]sorry for the mix up, thanks for pointing that out

Edited by papyru30 on Jul 29th 2021 at 5:26:45 AM

Hope your prepared for an unforgettable luncheon
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#54278: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:15:15 PM

[up] TellAll111 vote yes to her on last page. Right here.

future where did you get the eighth from.

Edited by Bullman on Jul 29th 2021 at 6:16:20 AM

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43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#54279: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:17:21 PM

Future you have a tendency to get way too excited. Recheck your numbers there, I’m more inclined to trust papyru.

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#54280: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:20:37 PM

I'll vote yes to Sonia too if that will solidify things.

Should I do a count on Wrip as well? She wasn't unanimous either.

Think you're tough because you made it through Lord of the Rings? Real men survive The Silmarillion.
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#54281: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:20:57 PM

Edit: Wrong thread.

Edited by Bullman on Jul 29th 2021 at 6:21:29 AM

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futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#54282: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:21:14 PM

Demon Duck. It was Demon Duck.

So with Lore being a yes and Bull clarifying TellAll said yes, that's 9-2-5 now.

Yes (9): futuremoviewriter, amanofmanyinterests, g-editor, bullman, mgd, satoshi, tellall, Demon Duck, Lore

No: (2) Papyru, Klavice

Abstain: (5) purpleeyedguma, 43, jjj, ravok, skycat

papyru corrected the count above before I posted it here too.[nja]

[down][down]I combed through. TellAll voted once and said yes.

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Jul 29th 2021 at 4:32:53 AM

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#54284: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:28:44 PM

Edit: papyru it's cool. It's easy to miss count things like this.

Edited by Bullman on Jul 29th 2021 at 6:30:24 AM

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#54285: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:32:30 PM

[tup]Woe

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#54286: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:35:27 PM

Thanks papyru.[tup]

Anybody else have thoughts on the updates to the entry for Darius here?

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Jul 29th 2021 at 4:37:17 AM

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#54287: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:37:20 PM

I think Wrip and the wolf king (the name I'd use) are both good to go.

jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#54288: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:54:56 PM

For Wrip I count 12-2:

Yes: Lore, nwot, Satoshi, Smiley, Hamburger, Emerald, 43, Guma, Bull, Tellall, Demon, manyinterests

No: me, Library

I think you're good to go there Lore.

Edited by jjjj2 on Jul 29th 2021 at 8:37:02 AM

You can only write so much in your forum signature. It's not fair that I want to write a piece of writing yet it will cut me off in the mid
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#54289: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:55:48 PM

Wait... what does Darius do that's worth putting in for MB in the second film? Your addition is just standard Guile Hero stuff.

PurpleEyedGuma Since: Apr, 2020
#54290: Jul 29th 2021 at 4:59:26 PM

Using the dub name for continuity with the main work page.

  • Ringing Bell: The Wolf King routinely slaughters other animals to preserve the laws of nature. The Wolf attacks a sheep pasture, targeting the lamb Chirin specifically, but only succeeds in killing his mother. When a vengeful Chirin repeatedly pesters the Wolf to train him in a wolf's ways, he sends Chirin through grueling training that hardens the lamb until adulthood—growing attached to him all the while. With the Wolf having molded Chirin into a monster of a sheep, he plans an attack on Chirin's old pasture, then fights Chirin to the death when the latter refuses to kill the other sheep. Graceful even after Chirin lands the killing blow, the Wolf expresses his pride in his disciple for finally becoming stronger than him and upholding his philosophies.

Edited by PurpleEyedGuma on Jul 29th 2021 at 8:00:25 AM

futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#54291: Jul 29th 2021 at 5:01:46 PM

[up][up]Then I'll keep the entry as is then. Not a problem.

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Jul 29th 2021 at 5:08:10 AM

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#54292: Jul 29th 2021 at 5:02:56 PM

Oh yeah, I forgot to switch to [tup] Wrip.

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#54293: Jul 29th 2021 at 5:06:13 PM

I mean you're welcome to ask other opinions, I'd just first like to know what the addition adds for his criteria. I don't mind a one off note like when mir did Artemis Fowl and just ended it with a quick line about him continuing to operate smoothly even after becoming a good guy but such things should be very general and really only saved for very long running characters imo.

futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#54295: Jul 29th 2021 at 5:08:50 PM

@43 He's probably good as is.

Shall I draft everything now?

[down]Exactly. I agree.

EDIT: Alright drafted. All done.

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Jul 29th 2021 at 6:17:09 AM

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
#54296: Jul 29th 2021 at 5:20:24 PM

Personally I don't think an expanded entry for Darius is needed, he doesn't do anything really stand out and isn't really a bastard in the 2nd film.

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#54299: Jul 29th 2021 at 6:28:23 PM

[tup] Wolf king.

This, surprisingly enough, isn't my longest EP.

A Practical Guide to Evil is a web serial set in a fantasy world where tropes and story elements are laws of the world that can be manipulated. Black-and-White Morality is an objective reality here. Individuals, species and nations can be clearly Evil and Good. People can gain superhuman powers and a degree of in-universe Plot Armor by embodying certain archetypes, which leads to gaining a Name. The majority of Names have a definitive association with either Good or Evil, a la the Dread Empire of Praes almost always having a Dread Emperor, a Black Knight, and the Chancellor. Named individuals are naturally more important in terms of fate (i.e. the plot).

The series follows the exploits of 16-year-old Catherine Foundling, an orphan born a few years after her homeland, The Kingdom of Callow, was annexed for about the millionth time by Praes. Though she resents the greed and corruption of the imperial governor of her home city, she is cynical about the prospects of rebellion, instead planning to join the Imperial Legions of Terror in order to improve the system from the inside. However, when she manages to impress the current Black Knight she is offered a chance to join the ranks of the Named by taking the role of The Squire.

There are a few major factions:

  • Evil:
    • The Dead King, a millennia old undead sorcerer.
    • The Dread Empire of Praes, led by Dread Empress Malicia and her Black Knight.
    • The League of Free Cities, a collection of differently-aligned city-states that spend most of their time squabbling.
  • Good:
    • The aforementioned Kingdom of Callow.
    • The nominally allied nations of the Dominion and Procer, who launch a Crusade against Praes.
    • The Wandering Bard, an agent of Above whose mastery of stories allows her to orchestrate everything from minor character interactions to full on wars.

Again, this is a long series, so... sorry.

The candidate

    The Reforms (Before the Story) 
  • Amadeus is the current Black Knight, a childhood friend of Dread Empress Malicia and her Dragon-in-Chief, who teamed up with her to take over from the previous Emperor before annexing Callow. He's spent the years since then reforming the Empire, doing away with the needlessly evil practices; lowering taxes and improving living conditions in Callow, generally trying to make it so that the citizens don't see any reason to rebel; and turning their army into a competent fighting force, allowing orcs, ogres and goblins into positions of power when they're normally used as fodder. He's incredibly popular in the armies, many of his supporters and generals quietly but actively hoping he dethrones Malicia to become Emperor. Black shows no interest in this.

  • He controls everyone of importance Callow, from the people who run Catherine's orphanage to those running the illegal fighting rings. This allows him to control the criminal underworld (as it's stupid to think you can wipe them out completely, better to let them exist and make them pay you) and put people on the watch for potential Heroes, killing them before they can gain a Name. That was what he was going to do to Catherine, before he found her about to die in the alley and decided to choose an alternative.

  • When rebels pop up he sends his "Eyes" to gather info. Supposedly they have a tattooed eye on them, but such an obvious sign is stupid. He lets resistance movements become content catching a few shady tattooed guys every year or so, ignoring the waitress close enough to eavesdrop on their conversations. Black heavily dislikes the treacherous Praes nobility, having argued to Malicia that they slaughter them all when they came to power. He's not exactly a politics guy, eventually realizing that doing so likely would have destabilized the Empire, and while he lost that argument he still engages in petty harassments/the occasional attempted murder of them.

    Book 1 
  • Black is introduced saving Catherine from two murderers, prodding Catherine into demanding a harsher punishment than jailtime before handing her a knife. Black is in town to kill the incredibly corrupt and hated governor. He has him dragged to the gallows and offers Catherine the Name of his Squire. He doesn't threaten her, and has absolutely no intention to lie or deceive her — less out of altruism but more because it would assuredly backfire and she'd betray him. She accepts.

  • He introduces her to the chain of command and warns her about the other claimants to the Squire Name she'll need to kill before truly taking her Role. He sends her to infiltrate a local resistance group, where she kills the claimants...

  • ... and intentionally lets a Hero go. This is pretty stupid for Villains, as she's ensured he'll be a recurring nemesis that could very well end her. To ensure she learns from this experience, he forces her to watch as the resistance fighters she caught are put to death. It's not too much of a hitch in their relationship, but Cat always remembers that just because he's likable doesn't mean he isn't a monster. He sends her to train in the War College, where she finds loyal soldiers and amasses her own personal Legion.

    Book 2 
  • When a full-on rebellion does manifest (something he acknowledges was inevitable, and a destined part of the plot after Cat let that hero, William, escape) he sends her and her new Fifteenth Legion to crush it, content that she'll learn from it and blood her troops on a real battlefield. He notes that he could have ended the rebellion when it first began, but is deliberately dragging the threat out for Cat's benefit. It goes a bit further than that, though: Black is trying to manipulate the narrative of Callow, whether it follows William's revolution or Cat's appropriation of the system. And when she wins, no Heroes will rise in Callow to oppose her.

  • While she deals with William, he takes care of the larger rebellion on the other side of the country by offering all of its soldiers the chance to go home with no punishment, on the condition they give him their leaders. Through the sheer power of his reputation, they comply and he wins without a single life lost. Besides the rebel leaders.

  • Black tells Cat he recruited her to be his successor, knowing that because of this mentor role he will eventually die. He's fine with that, as he reasons he's nearing his expiration date anyway.

  • Another Villain named Akua releases a demon to fuck with Cat. Everyone knows she did it, but she's covered up her tracks well enough that Black can't get permission to kill her:
"You've been very careful to toe the line of the law," Black said. "It seems you believe this affords you a degree of protection."
His eyes turned cold.
"I am a villain, child," he hissed. "The appearance of the rule of law is useful to me, so I have allowed it. Do not mistake this for true fettering. Should you ever inconvenience me again, I will Speak three words and you will slit your own throat."
The intensity vanished out of him as swiftly as it had appeared, replaced by a pleasant smile.
"In happier news, you and your mercenaries have been attached to the Fifteenth as auxiliaries for the next part of this campaign," he informed her. "Congratulations, you’ve been granted the equivalent of a commander’s commission."
"Thank you, lord," Heiress murmured.
Black drummed his fingers against the table and there was a long moment of silence.
"Well?" he asked. "What are you still doing here?"
Lack of understanding flickered across the aristocrat’s face.
"A mere commander is not cleared for this kind of meeting," Black explained patiently. "You are dismissed."

  • He later explains his motivations for all that he's done: the pragmatism, the fighting for a country he doesn't even care for.
"Oh, if the heroes deserved their victories against us, I would make my peace with it. But they don’t, do they? Your sullen little nemesis gets to swing an angel’s feather, while you make do with steel and wiles. That’s always the way of it. At the last moment they’re taught a secret spell by a dead man, or your mortal weakness is revealed to them or they somehow manage to master a power in a day that would take a villain twenty years to own. Gods, I’ve even heard of Choirs stepping in to settle a losing fight. The sheer fucking arrogance of it. None of it is earned. It is handed to them, and this offends me. You asked me what I want. This once, just this once, I want us to win. So that five hundred years from now, a band of heroes shiver in the dark of night. Because they know that no matter how powerful their sword or righteous their cause, there was once a time it wasn’t enough. That even victories ordained by the Heavens can broken by the will of men."
I sat in my rickety chair, and thought. A long moment passed.
"Monster," I finally said.
His lips twitched into something almost a smile. "The very worst kind," he replied.
Dude's pissed that Villains never win, and wants to spit in the face of fate itself. Fucking amazing. I know I'm kind of rambling, but he is goddamn awesome!

    Book 3 
  • He later goes to support the Tyrant of Helike, Kairos Theodosian, in his civil war in the League of Free Cities. He does well fighting Heroes and hampering the progress of the Good cities, but things backfire when the Tyrant betrays him (expected) and the Wandering Bard has a Hero kill one of his Villain allies/oldest friends (less expected).

  • Black recognizes the danger of the Bard and realizes that he has become too arrogant and content — admittedly a natural state to be in, having ruled longer and more effectively than any other Dread Emperor in history. He pops back up to help Cat kill Akua, congratulating her on declaring herself Vicequeen of Callow like he "suggested" earlier, and cautions/encourages her on the treason she's barely edging into.

  • Black assists Cat in assaulting Akua's fortress, letting the noble think she's captured him when in reality he sent the shapeshifting and pretty much unkillable Assassin in his place, killing Akua's father to unbalance her and allow Cat to win.

  • He owns up to his mistake in allowing Akua to live even when he didn't have permission to kill her, and is fully aware Malicia funded her horrific doomsday weapon (as a deterrent for Procer). Angered at Malicia's desire to keep said weapon (a doomsday weapon is the kind of thing that would attract crusaders rather than scare them away, after all; and despite Malicia's beliefs, war is inevitable), he destroys it instead.

  • Cat, annoyed at him for not trusting her with his plans, leaves and declares herself queen.

    Books 4- 7 
  • His relationship with Malicia now shaky, Black nevertheless goes to war with the Tenth Crusade. He ends their first fight by demolishing their path to Callow, protecting Cat from having to deal with more enemies while opening his own forces up to raid and torch Procer itself.

  • While Black and his Legion make a good few months, burning whatever they come across, they're ultimately done in when the Grey Pilgrim unleashes a plague that kills all of his forces. Black himself is captured, and loses the Name of Black Knight due to his recent actions (ie. his opposition to the Dread Empress). For simplicity's sake, I'll keep calling him Black.

  • Long story short, but Cat gets the Pilgrim to free Black. He gives her advice on her "Accords" (basically a Superhero Registration Act to reign in the chaotic Named), before taking time to gloat to the Pilgrim about how the "Age of Order" Cat is building will belong to the Villains.

  • Another long story short, but Malicia has allied with the Dead King in her efforts to keep war away from Praes. Black, utterly disgusted with the sheer escalation, challenges her claim as Dread Empress. He leaves with his old lover, the Ranger, and heads to Praes.

  • He's not really that present for most of the rest of the story, working in the background. While Cat goes to confront the Dead King he and Ranger cause chaos in Praes — they're not doing anything as blatant as assembling their own army, rather subtly manipulating events. Notably, due to Ranger being hunted by elves, Black uses her as bait so they massacre a key stronghold. With it gone, the orcs can now raid into the capitol city of Ater.

  • Once Cat begins her siege of Ater, Black finally makes his move, releasing the several-hundred-years worth of monster spiders from underneath the city. Thousands will die, many innocent civilians, but the High Lords of Praes will sit in their castles and only protect what belongs to them. "Before the eyes of all Praes, the High Seats have abdicated their right to rule."

  • Black has been killing Praes by breaking its stories: the story that Pares is one nation (he's helped keep their civil war ongoing), the story of the Legions of Terrors (who recently saw mass desertions after a particularly bloody and futile battle), and the story of the High Lords (see above).

  • When Malicia abdicates he arranges for the throne to be burned, while he forces the nobles into electing him Chancellor-without-Emperor. He also refuses to give Cat Malicia, whom she very much wants to kill, and attacks her. Cat is forced to kill him, which has three effects:
    • 1. It kills Praes' self-destructive system of death and horror and Evil backstabbing for good. And I don't mean "there's hope for the future," I mean they have Fae magic literally telling them its metaphysical spirit is dead.
    • 2. It buys Malicia, Black's oldest and most cared for friend, eight more years of life as she becomes Chancellor in his stead.
    • 3. It solidifies Cat's new Name and prevents her from falling into the Bard's trap — she's the Warden of the East, keeper of all Villains. She doesn't bargain, she takes.

  • He spends his last moments telling Cat how proud of her he is, confident that a villain will finally win.

Is he magnificent?

Black is a mastermind who has expertly mastered the stories that govern this world. His and Malicia's reign is one of the longest in Praes' history due to their pragmatism. The backstory alone pretty much solidifies him as an MB, as he not only manages to squash rebellions but also people's interest in rebelling — Callow has never been better off, and the only reason people do rebel is because of nationalistic pride.

Even then, he practically hands Callow to Cat to rule, subtly helping her along but giving her enough room to grow and develop into a terrifying Villain on her own. He truly loves his "daughter," and his death is designed to finally complete the whole Mentor Occupational Hazard thing she needs to go through to ensure she fulfills her own destiny.

Is he a bastard?

Dude's epithet is the Carrion Lord. While he's nowhere near the most horrible person in the series, he's explicitly and consistently described as a monster. Cat loves her "father," but is under no delusions about the atrocities he's committed and has absolutely no regrets about.

Verdict

Christ, that was just a rough summary. I only got into, what, 70% of what he's done?

If he were more well known, I'd argue that he's one of the Crowning Examples for the Magnificent Bastard trope. And yes, I know what the competition is, but I'll stand by that statement nonetheless.

No ifs, ands, or buts. [tup] for the Carrion Lord; the Black Knight of Praes; Amadeus of the Green Stretch.

Edited by EmeraldEmperor on Jul 29th 2021 at 6:32:15 AM


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