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As Someone Else pointed out, we're not very keen on approving this as a standalone story at all. I'm willing to see if I can implement the concept as a subplot for Lines of Chaos if it is approved, but as a separate Tale, not so much.
Camilla, you still added the entire house under "The Scrappy" in the main tropes page, and the YMMV page for the whole Alternate!Gentaro arc was exploited to keep attacking the House of Prophecy, and your words here contradict your edits to other pages. Safind has already proposed on making a subplot in one of his tales over Prophecy's inability to prevent disasters on Discord, so it will be addressed in some way.
You need to be careful now with your tales for now on, since we have plenty in store for quite some time, and we're mainly focusing on lesser-used characters. Do you see me continue to propose ideas on the Princesses of Heart (original and new) being captured again and again? It gets annoying after awhile, and they have a strong risk of becoming snark baits from the others.
Edited by MysteriousZorua1994 on Jan 11th 2019 at 4:44:34 AM
My incomplete Tale of Ascension for Nine-Ball is available here. Any constructive criticism is appreciated.
@Safind, you can make your story. PFAP is going to be a side-story here as opposed to a full story. And yes, I'm giving you the green-light to do Daughters of Data and Revival of Aku.
Edited by HotmanX32 on Jan 10th 2019 at 12:23:36 PM
After some thought, the PFAP concept is being moved to Daughters of Data. LOC was getting overstuffed with plot points, while it has more room to breathe in DOD. I plan to have Neo and the Oracle be the ones discussing it.
@Camilla: Remember, we have to finish Shattered Illusion soon. I'll do my part as well.
@Hotman: I know I'm at a terrible standing with you, but I got these things I don't believe can be resolved in singular trivia bullets. Or maybe they can, if I could just receive feedback that's more than just a succinct refusal.
Camilla and I are at work on Phantom Thieves stories to cover these if they cam be made into stories after all. Of course, we'll have to complete them first before they can be properly judged. But you can by accessing the links in my Sandbox 3.
Edited by nightelf37 on Jan 12th 2019 at 4:01:58 AM
These do not need to all be four separate stories. One, two tops.
I agree, you run the risk of overusing the Phantom Thieves.
Which almost was another issue i had with the scrapped world of light story. Which in hindsight it's funny
, Well, I'm all ears for trivia bullet-only alternatives. If it can be done that way, I'll do it. Preferably Akechi's eventual "reunion".
Okay, here's the thing.
Also, to Camilla. Penny for a Prophet is 100% NOT going to be accepted in the Pantheon as a standalone story, so if you wanna keep writing it as such, that's your prerogative. Its plot points will be adapted into other works, and right now I'm trying to figure out how that would play out based on everything I'm seeing both of what you're putting on the page and what myself and others have pointed out and concluded. Here's some examples of what I think is probably gonna happen.
To make a wrestling reference since you and I are bringing that up a lot, there's a Vince Russo effect at work here. The plans you want to push forward do contain some good material, but if the whole is allowed unchecked it will most likely cause unnecessary chaos that does not mesh with future story plans and thus will force the rest of us to work around things that should not be there. So instead of giving carte blanche to those plans, we're going to filter, scatter, and adapt them to where they can function within everything we're already doing. If you want to be trusted to lead new works again, you're going to have to understand this and be willing to work with us.
Edited by SomeoneElse17 on Jan 12th 2019 at 10:33:25 AM
Actually, I was just going to have the overall Pantheon file the PAG arc away as another incident, albeit one that might have some members try to study the Pantheon's reciprocity with The Multiverse at large. And as for DOD and LOC, which use it as springboards due to deliberate Sequel Hook within that story, none of the characters involved care about 'Prophecy' or 'Destiny', since it's never really factored into their lives.
Well, except for Neo, since I plan for him to have some misgivings about it during DOD, which, while in progress, will include Lain Iwakura, thus making it somewhat plot relevant, or at least, something of an angle for the characters to investigate out of caution.
But an actual mob-fueled backlash against the House? No. Just Neo discussing it with the Oracle, and maybe Lain.
That actually sounds a bit more interesting. In any case, I didn't even guarantee that that mob scenario would even take place. I just stated what would happen if it does. Notice the wording: any call-outs will be met with this response here. If there are no call-outs…
@Someone Else: Well, in the stories I was writing...
But like I said, if it can be done in trivia bullets only, that would be very preferable, especially given my current standing with HotmanX32. After finishing the Shattered Illusion rework with Camilla, no more "official" Pantheon stories for me.
So, here's what I got so far in regards to the "Heist on Ghetsis Harmonia" mini-plot. Only the barest possible essentials.
The next part, the "Heist on Klaus Wulfenbach" will be covered here.
And that's all I got.
Edited by nightelf37 on Jan 28th 2019 at 8:49:34 PM
When it comes to stories, I'd sort of love to see the "after effects" with Shantae being forced into a Zero Suit Samus body by Galeem.
The Shattered Illusion rework is almost done. Just letting you know, because I'll be retconning the profiles that are most affected by that story (as well as the Persona Overhaul): Nanako and Ryotaro Dojima.
I've already written profiles treating that as canon, such as Sho Minazuki.
A thing I'd find intriguing as a story is that Galeem and Dharkon start trying to take over the Pantheon after the Trollkaiger (specifically Yuuki and Izaya) broke the seal on their temple in an attempt to "have fun" with the Overdeities. As a result, the Pantheon is now orbited by the Lord of Light and Embodiment of Chaos and Darkness as far as they can possibly be, resulting in the vast majority of the Pantheon (aside from the Main House) being shrouded in an intense, burning light and a deep, cold shadow, respectively. Mario, Link, and the Smash Bros fighters, as well as everyone else opposing the two beings mobilizes to face off and stop them from destroying the Pantheon. All the meanwhile, the two pick off easy targets who'd make for powerful footsoldiers, starting with Yuuki and the Trollkaiger.
I'm sure Izaya's the reason why the Trollkaiger keeps getting their butts kicked.
BTW, does the Pantheon group have a Discord?
Edited by SundownLiterati on Feb 17th 2019 at 5:01:31 AM
They did try to do an attack once after ascending. It ended on a Mutual Kill, so i don't think we are in any danger from Galeem and Dharkon.
That's because they were too close together. Keep them apart and they can do quite a bit of damage
And No double-posting
Edited by nightelf37 on Feb 18th 2019 at 10:30:27 PM
I smell War of Light and I came... not that way
Surrrreeee you did.
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