Subpages cleanup: Complete Monster

@Erazor: Given that it's again written by Shiro Amano and he's no stranger to Adaptational Villainy for the Big Bads, it wouldn't surprise me if Master Xehanort gets hit with it (we have no BBS or 3D manga adaptations, so Amano might feel free to do whatever with the character). On the other hand, my upvoted manga proposals might get the ax if anything mitigating for Ansem and Xemnas gets adapted...

Edited by ANewMan on Apr 26th 2019 at 8:40:59 AM

I have returned from Endgame. People cheered. People were silent.

I can't answer any questions till morning, because it's late and I'm trying to compose myself.

Edited by Beast on Apr 25th 2019 at 11:43:35 AM

Hey guys, i just got back from seeing Avengers Endgame. It was amazing and emotional. Feel free to PM if you want to ask me if anybody counts from the film.

Ootakemaru and Robert.

To everyone I missed.

I wonder if there was ever a time you actually felt bad for a CM or a possible CM candidate? That's a weird thing to think about since we should never feel bad for them.

I felt Bad for Hunter Zoloman from the Flash Tv show when his backstory was revealed.

Adam Tauras from RWBY...an Abusive, sadistic, Genocidal, narcissistic BASTARD for certain. But his FE mixed with his Fallen Hero past. And the fact he couldn't Accept that he was the one who Ruined his own life, and his Death scenehttps://m.youtube.com/watch?v=dijRhX9ANcU all Made him Surprisingly Pitable. For me at least.

There's also Jerome Valeksa from Gotham Who's a sadistic Monster for certain, Aside from a heavily Abusive background, Season 4 Reveals it went even further then that- https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=3nU45-hVqsM.

Still dosent make Him less of a CM. But man....

So, Miraculous is okay, but he won't be active on the thread for a few days (he gave me permission to tell everyone). He let me know from his university's wi-fi, as his own wi-fi and phone connection were knocked out by...well by this. And judging by that article, he's LUCKY he only lost his phone connection

Edited by ACW on Apr 26th 2019 at 4:31:11 AM

Hope Mir is okay.

Yes to Robert BTW.

to King Robert.

So sorry to hear about Mir, thoughts and prayers to all those people caught in the disaster.

Damn, I really hope Mir is ok.

BTW, this isn't a spoiler, but do a Google search for Thanks and click on the Gauntlet

Yes to Ootakemaru and Robert.

My thoughts and prayers are with Mir.

I hope Miraclous and everyone around him is okay. I'd make a pun about his handle but that'd be in bad taste considering how bad the situation really is.

I guess I'm ready for Endgame P'M's.

Edited by Beast on Apr 26th 2019 at 7:33:26 AM

My condolences for Mir... Hopefully he's okay.

I hope Miraclous is okay.

Has anyone done a proposal for Nimue from Hellboy (2019) yet?

Speaking of Nimue, I think there's a typo in her entry:

• Complete Monster: Nimue is the Queen of Blood, and is also also known as Vivienne or The Lady Of The Lake. Once a mighty sorceress who betrayed the great Wizard Merlin and imprisoned him to live eternally in his own grave, Nimue was imprisoned for 1,500 years by the witches of Britain. Upon her revival to lead the Wild Hunt, Nimue destroys the other witches of Britain and sets about marshaling an army of the Fae. When one ambassador comes to her to say his king will stand with her, Nimue forces him to murder his king, come out his heart and forge her a new crown with it. Nimue launches vicious purges to ensure there is no threat to her rule, intending to exterminate humanity to the last man. When defeated and being dragged to hell by the witches she'd murdered, Nimue spitefully tears out Hellboy's heart to ensure she won't face damnation alone.

Lighty's got it.

Whoops, you are correct. That should be CUT out his heart. Let me request the fix.

Speaking of typos:

• Skullmaster was always a terrifying villain whenever he appeared. Skullmaster overthrew his previous master and took control of his subterranean kingdom from where he plots world domination. Skullmaster is a sadist, reveling in physical and psychological torture, and engages in both short term brutality and long term gambits. One of his most vile acts was vowing to save an ancient civilization from sinking beneath the sea, lying about it and trapping their souls as his slaves before in present day, sending them after Max's head "attached to the body or not." Responsible for the deaths of multiple heroes throughout the story, Skullmaster even attempted to blackmail Max for his mentor and friend Virgil's life by surrendering his magical cap. When Max turned it over, Skullmaster brutally killed Virgil anyways.

Also, after killing Virgil, should we put in a You Have Outlived Your Usefulness, since he killed Warmonger shortly after?

Let me de-pothole and clean it up a bit:

• Skullmaster overthrew his previous master and took control of his subterranean kingdom from where he plots world domination. Skullmaster is a sadist, reveling in physical and psychological torture, and engages in both short term brutality and long term gambits. One of his most vile acts was vowing to save an ancient civilization from sinking beneath the sea, lying about it and trapping their souls as his slaves, in the present sending them after Max's head, "attached to the body or not." Responsible for the deaths of multiple heroes throughout the story, Skullmaster even attempted to blackmail Max for his mentor and friend Virgil's life by surrendering his magical cap. When Max turned it over, Skullmaster brutally killed Virgil, killing Warmonger soon after.

Also:

• Marvel's Spider-Man: The City that Never Sleeps: Hammerhead is a sadistic Maggia don who yearns for the "good old days" where mobsters like him ruled New York City with an iron fist, and the police knew to look the other way. When Sable International leaves their dangerous technology behind after the Devil's Breath incident, Hammerhead arms his men with as much as he can find and tears up the streets of New York with a brutal gang war against the other Maggia families so he can seize power from them, all the while attempting to have numerous civilians killed for crossing him. When Spider-Man and his cop ally Yuri Watanabe attempt to stop him, he successfully provokes Yuri into getting fired for crossing moral boundaries in her crusade against the Maggia by forcing her to watch him murder her fellow officers one by one, and slaughtering a bunch of other cops while stealing the dangerous Project Olympus armor. After securing the armor, he has the Maggia dons slowly drowned in cement and tries to broadcast their deaths across the city to scare it's population into submission. When that fails, he goes into hiding and has himself converted into a Cyborg monstrosity while coercing an Oscorp scientist into helping upgrade his men with cybernetic enhancements by threatening to kill him, completely uncaring when some of his men would die due to flaws in the procedure. When he resurfaces, he kidnaps Silver Sable and has his men torture her with a power drill until she gives him the most dangerous Sable Tech in her arsenal.

Oh, if you want to be possessive, it’s just "its," but if it’s supposed to be a contraction, then it’s "it’s," scallywag.

That's one of those that got a rewrite with this current week's batch (see Spider-Man (PS4)), so that's fine.

Btw, Just a note...I'm gonna do an EP and rewrite on this dude from Heaven's Lost Property at a later future:

"Minos, the master of Synapse, refers to humans as "downers" and "bugs". He also beats Nymph whenever she fails her orders (or when he feels like it) and constantly threatens to destroy her. It's likely that he also treats the other angeloids that way, threatening destruction if they don't provide entertainment for him. This "entertainment" includes such things as ordering Ikaros to annihilate the Tower of Babylon and the surrounding city, which would kill countless people, and placing a bomb around Nymph's neck, triggered to explode if she again failed to bring Ikaros back to Synapse. The worst personal and petty thing he did was probably the time he ordered Nymph to call on her pet bird and prove her loyalty to him by crushing it to death. After she did so, he stomped her face into the ground while laughing about how "That was pretty fun. I'll save scrapping you until next time." Nymph goes on to thank him for not destroying her, which in all those cases, can easily be interpreted as "Thank you for not destroying me today." He does all this while smiling evilly the entire time, and does these sorts of things after the series fully establishes that the angeloids have feelings and emotions despite their artificial natures. Both of the angeloids in question cry their hearts out after recalling what they were ordered to do. The sections that have him in it are when the plot shows its dark and serious side."

Now, the writeup is actually pretty decent. (I believe Lighty did it and this is understandable because he was written before EP existed). But I have a feeling that the writeup itself? Kind of glosses his much more heinous crimes after skimming the Heaven's Lost Property wiki page of him. This is going to be one of my future EP at a later time just like Scraggle will do TAO at a later future. I've already add it on my to-do list so yep.

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Apr 26th 2019 at 9:24:21 PM

So, I am kind of confused as to how the Complete Monster operates in Fan Works. The description on the Fan Works page seems to imply that you either need an OC villain who is worse than villains from the original or you need a character to be rewritten into being far worse than in the original. But where does that leave villains who are Complete Monster both in the original work and the fan story? Because I see quite a few of those while browsing through the examples.