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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#8351: Mar 18th 2023 at 8:02:24 PM

[up] You're gonna wanna wait for the next page for that EP since that makes 5 on this page.

I did ask feedback for this quote on the cleanup thread but I forgot to check if there was any so might as well do it here. How's this quote?

"And now... put this slave boy and his father into chains and throw them to the UgliThug slavelands, never to return. Put the mark upon the father too, as a sign of how he betrayed his own people. Friends, barbarians and vikings, let me tell you what king I am going to be! I have not come to set your dragons free. From now on, I declare war of the most dreadful and bloody kind on all wild dragons. All wild dragons must be killed on sight! With our North Bows and our axes and the most fanciful instruments of human ingeniunity, we will seek out their nests, set fire to their habitats, destroy their eggs and their hibernating young! And as for the domestic dragons... dangerous times call for drastic measures. All domestic dragons shall be chained at all times unless they are doing a job for a human. They shall spend their nights in cages. Any hint of rebellion and they will be killed on the spot."
Alvin The Treacherous, How to Train Your Dragon

Edited by WetFlannels on Mar 18th 2023 at 3:02:49 PM

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
Zerukin Ninja Gamer Writer from Palmtree Panic Since: Dec, 2016 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Ninja Gamer Writer
#8352: Mar 18th 2023 at 8:04:52 PM

[up] Thanks. Who would have thought your response would create the next page though. Anyway, moved proposal to this page.

Dragon Ball. Let's begin.

What's the Work?

Dragon Ball: The Path to Power is an anime movie retelling of the original Dragon Ball.

Who is Commander Red? What Has He Done?

Commander Red. Leader of the Red Ribbon army. You may know him as a short guy who wanted to use the dragon balls to become taller. That holds true here. However, while he was already pretty bad in canon, he is a lot worse in this movie. He orders his men to hunt the dragon balls and to kill anybody who gets in the way.

The army hunts down the dragon balls on his orders, attacking Goku and Bulma at Muscle tower for their Dragon Balls. However, this backfires with Goku destroying Muscle Tower and taking the dragon ball held there. A majority of soldiers are lost in Goku's attack with Android 8 even siding with Goku after being ordered to kill. Commander Red finds out about this and sends General Blue to get the Dragon Ball back, even ordering him to kill and/or capture those who took his balls.

Blue succeeds in getting back the stolen dragon balls along with most of the dragon balls Bulma had. Blue even captures the party (except Goku whom was assumed to have been killed) and has them imprisoned. In spite of this, Red deems him to have failed anyway, because there was one more dragon ball in the area, and he sadistically orders for Blue to be executed with Staff Officer Black backing him up on the order.

However, Goku lives and starts laying waste to the Red Ribbon Army. Noticing this, Commander Red begins to run off with Black. On the way to the escape pod, he complains about not getting his wish to be taller, which Black becomes disgusted by. Black details how Red jeopardized the army all for the sake of being taller, having sent many of their men to die for something so meaningless. Red doesn't care as he demands blind obedience from Black and the entire army, making it clear that the entire army can perish for all he cares as long as he gets his wish to be taller.

Needless to say, Black was not only bigger, but also had a gun and shoots Red in the chest, causing Red to fall to his demise.

Heinousness Standards

Dragon Ball has high standards, but due to this movie being in its own little continuity with not even a mention in other alternate continuities, it doesn't have to follow those standards. No Cell, no Frieza, no Dr. Gero (who as a member of the red ribbon army could have been utilized), none of the usual heavy hitters that Dragon Ball is known for. Staff Officer Black is the only competition Red has here, and Black still had the standards he had in canon.

Red passes the standards for having his men ruin many innocent lives and throwing his own men under the bus regardless of the situation all for his self-centered wish to be taller.

Redeeming Qualities

Red shows none of the redeeming qualities he had in canon. With Tao being Adapted Out, he doesn't throw a feast to honor anybody. Unlike in canon, where he gives Blue chances of redemption after Blue genuinely fails him, here, Blue is actually successful in delivering on the orders he is given, and Red still declares him a failure on the excuse of not bringing all the dragon balls (missing one that Blue couldn't have known about at the time) and has him executed immediately.

Also the destruction of Muscle Tower, Red is more concerned about the dragon ball than the loss of any soldiers, considering them nothing more than cannon fodder.

Verdict

Yes

Edited by Zerukin on Mar 18th 2023 at 9:10:04 AM

carduinal-cyn Quite unpredictable (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
Quite unpredictable
#8353: Mar 18th 2023 at 8:04:57 PM

[tup] Sure to King Byogen and Commander Red.

The Alvin the Treacherous quote is... OK, I guess? I'm neutral on it.

Edited by carduinal-cyn on Mar 18th 2023 at 8:09:01 AM

"I don't have the power to reverse my destiny. [...] But I'm not going to turn away from my fate anymore." — Kiriya
Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#8354: Mar 18th 2023 at 8:47:36 PM

Commander Red...does the destruction of Muscle Tower, like, explicitly kill anyone? The EP's extremely vague on that and the only other qualifying deed he seems to have is executing Blue (not caring about your men dying doesn't make you heinous, it just makes you an emotionally-detached dick).

Like, even if we split technicalities and measure this based on its own standard rather than the gargantuan standard of the rest of the franchise, this seems to be barely even kissing the baseline.

Edited by Scraggle on Mar 18th 2023 at 9:48:47 AM

Zerukin Ninja Gamer Writer from Palmtree Panic Since: Dec, 2016 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Ninja Gamer Writer
Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#8356: Mar 18th 2023 at 8:52:35 PM

Okay, so the only person he directly kills is Blue? No innocents are dying?

Sorry, but I'm a "no" to Red then. Again, not caring about your men dying isn't really a huge qualifying detail and it seems like the EP is mostly banking on that plus the one actual You Have Failed Me moment he has otherwise for qualification.

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MasterJoseph Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object from Not telling. Since: Mar, 2018
Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#8359: Mar 18th 2023 at 9:05:42 PM

Abstain on Red. Is he like, deliberately sending his men to die or something?

  • The Stupendium: William Afton, appearing in Fazbear Family, Back Together, and A Pizza The Action is an egomaniacal sadist who once used the Fazbear food chain to murder several children; luring his victims to the safe room and killing them. Eventually, Afton would design the Funtime animatronics and becomes the monsterous Springtrap. Together, he and the Funtimes would murder children at a new Fazbear Location while trying to kill the manager. After being burnt to death, William would return as Glitchtrap within a video game, murdering or body-jacking those who played it. Afton would then take over the Pizzaplex Mall, turning the Glamrocks into murderers. At one point he dispatches Glamrock Freddy in front of the child Gregory before taking over Freddy's body to attack him.

Unwrapped.

  • Music/TheStupendium: William Afton, appearing in [[https://youtu.be/ipWQgYDSOwA Fazbear Family]], [[https://youtu.be/eGDDc6Q_cYE Back Together]], and [[https://youtu.be/gjgM4K5U3uU A Pizza The Action]] is an egomaniacal sadist who once used the Fazbear food chain to murder several children; luring his victims to the safe room and killing them. Eventually, Afton would design the [[RoboticPsychopath Funtime animatronics]] and becomes the monsterous Springtrap. Together, he and the Funtimes would murder children at a new Fazbear Location while trying to kill the manager. After being burnt to death, William would return as [[VirtualGhost Glitchtrap]] within a video game, murdering or body-jacking those who played it. Afton would then take over the Pizzaplex Mall, turning the Glamrocks into murderers. At one point he dispatches Glamrock Freddy in front of the child Gregory before taking over Freddy's body to attack him.

Edited by Snoketrope on Mar 18th 2023 at 9:09:11 AM

The First man
Zerukin Ninja Gamer Writer from Palmtree Panic Since: Dec, 2016 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Ninja Gamer Writer
#8360: Mar 18th 2023 at 9:08:38 PM

Yeah. Black even calls him out on this once it is revealed that he was doing it for something as meaningless as to be taller.

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#8361: Mar 18th 2023 at 9:15:47 PM

[tdown]Red

"No running in the halls!"
Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#8362: Mar 18th 2023 at 9:18:47 PM

I'm also gonna say "yes" to Byo-gen from the last page. Venus, have any particular thoughts on Daruizen himself qualifying (who was just proposed but voted down on account of the OP not having seen the full series)?

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#8364: Mar 18th 2023 at 9:25:23 PM

Yes to Byo-gen, no to Red.

Echidna from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#8366: Mar 18th 2023 at 11:05:02 PM

[tup] Byo-gen

"No running in the halls!"
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#8367: Mar 18th 2023 at 11:06:30 PM

[tdown] Red

Also just a heads up, there's been two new IP Threads made for Daredevil and Legend Of Zelda respectively. Just thought I'd link the thread since the O Ps haven't.

FWIW these weren't ones I was planning to visit in the bad image purge.

Edited by WetFlannels on Mar 18th 2023 at 6:15:06 PM

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#8368: Mar 18th 2023 at 11:32:02 PM

Daruijzen himself could count. Not on grand villain but personal.

I’m plotting my schemes wherever I go! They’re perfect in every way…
RWBYraikou888 The Undercover Troper from The Kingdom of Atlas Since: Aug, 2020 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
The Undercover Troper
#8369: Mar 19th 2023 at 12:24:02 AM

Suggesting this for the quotes page.

"Everything was my design! On this planet, all was mine!
You have taken everything! You have ruined space and time!
Do you have a reason why you all think you can decide
Whether cattle has the right to choose if it lives or dies?!
I've seen fallen gods and kings, I've been here for everything
In your planet slumbering; in your world a waking dream,
Thus, you think I have to die?! You live without knowing why!
If this is what you decide, I shall take back what is mine!"

Edited by RWBYraikou888 on Mar 19th 2023 at 3:24:22 PM

Orcus on His Throne will always be my pet peeve.
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#8370: Mar 19th 2023 at 1:09:49 AM

[tup] to Thieves and King Byogen

[tdown] to Commander Red

emperors Messenger from another dimension. Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: It's complicated
Messenger from another dimension.
#8371: Mar 19th 2023 at 1:15:31 AM

Yes to Largo, Strong Thieves, and King Byogen.

No to Commander Red.

Welcome to the world of greatest media!
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#8372: Mar 19th 2023 at 1:17:05 AM

[tup]largo and thieves

[tdown]Red.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#8373: Mar 19th 2023 at 1:54:27 AM

Sure to the King.

Snoketrope: It's close enough if you wanna do your other Stupendium writeup.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
Snowy66 Since: May, 2012
#8374: Mar 19th 2023 at 5:13:25 AM

[tup]King

As for Red… I am going to do some background checking on him first before I vote on him.

EDIT: Okay affirming a [tdown] on Commander Red. He had no involvement in the Muscle Tower stuff at all, his only crime is executing Blue.

Edited by Snowy66 on Mar 19th 2023 at 5:29:38 AM

Fireball246 Since: Jan, 2023
#8375: Mar 19th 2023 at 5:57:06 AM

Yeah, [tdown] to Red. He himself doesn’t do anything too outwardly heinous in the film onscreen besides executing General Blue which still isn’t heinous enough.

Btw, guys my pet guinea pig might be on the verge of dying as my sister told me so me and her are getting prepared for her sad, but inevitable demise.

Edited by Fireball246 on Mar 19th 2023 at 5:58:28 AM


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