Locked Pages: Lock, UnLock and Edit requests

~infernape612: Per discussion among the staff, I have created Sandbox.Monster Video Games A To F and Sandbox.Monster Call Of Duty; you can do your edit there and ask next Thursday to have it swapped in.

I'll go and spread the information about this rule a bit.

Whoa, Thursday? I was thinking Tuesdays.

I've done the changes in the Call of Duty sandbox, and Torres is getting a rewrite anyway.

Edited by ACW on Sep 11th 2020 at 6:35:54 AM

Requesting additions to the UsefulNotes.Microsoft Windows page:

• In the Windows 8 section, I'd like to add this after "Windows 8 was tailored to touch devices, not keyboards and mice."

• In the Windows 10 section, after "a combination of the older style Start Menu as well as Windows 8 Style apps.", add:

Edit: Replaced "along with" with "alongside".

Edited by Medinoc on Sep 11th 2020 at 5:38:09 PM

Can I do Wednesdays instead? It's the only weekday I don't work out on after work so it would just be easier.

Please create Worlds End with this sandbox.

Thank you.

More recreate-and-cut requests to remove ghost wicks:

• Graffiti On The Sun
• Chaotic Neutron
• Rhi Panda
• Under Capricorn
• SLS Today
• Alice Munro
• Very Bad Deaths
• How I Met Your Mother S 7 E 01 The Best Man

All right, I understand. I'm probably just going to request a little light touch-up on the Straub entry to make the sentences flow a little better. See you on... (checks calendar) the 17th.

Edited by infernape612 on Sep 11th 2020 at 5:44:45 AM

Add this to the PRLC:

• Crappy Games Wiki: Was filled to the brim with complaining and drama importing and was cut, but was recreated.

"Was filled to the brim with complaining and drama importing. It got cut, but was later unilaterally recreated." Sounds more grammatically correct.

Requesting to add this, was approved by Writing Pitfall Index cleanup

• Pacing Problems: When writing a story, make sure that the story does not go too fast or too slow, or else the reader may either have a hard time recollecting the events or get impatient with the length.

@ACW: I started from the first day of the sandboxes' existence, the 3rd September, which was a Thursday. Tuesday was (see below) for Magnificent Bastard.

@Medinoc: Did the Microsoft Windows edits, but I'll say, that page looks more than a little opinionated.

@43110: Sure, I'll put that in the rules.

@Primis and @Tabs: Done and cut the sandbox/pages.

@Kappaclystica: Please link to the pages you want to make the edits on. I've done them anyway, but the rule is in the header instructions.

@Siegfried 1337: Same as with Kappaclystica, also which section should it be added to?

Poor plotting.

Edited by Siegfried1337 on Sep 12th 2020 at 5:59:34 AM

Please add this in Gratuitous Rape, Video Game folder:

• The DX version of MGCM is chock full of this. The enemy demons unnecessarily rape the magical heroines (with their "extra" tails) in some of the main story episodes, and even in limited time event episodes and possibly the dress stories. Because some rape scenes occured after they fatally ambushed the heroines but before the heroines die and in some cases, are corrupted into demons after they died, many players who only play the DX version think that demons corrupt the magical heroines by raping them. Thankfully, the SFW version has all the NSFW scenes, including the rape ones, removed without affecting the plot of the game.

Edited by Minorica on Sep 12th 2020 at 11:42:45 PM

Done and done but please remember the page link.

"Is chock full of this" is Word Cruft. All it says is "this example is an example," it's redundant.

Rephrase to launch right into the context:

• In the DX version of MGCM, the enemy demons unnecessarily rape the magical heroines (with their "extra" tails) in some of the main story episodes, and even in limited time event episodes and possibly the dress stories. Because some rape scenes occured after they fatally ambushed the heroines but before the heroines die and in some cases, are corrupted into demons after they died, many players who only play the DX version think that demons corrupt the magical heroines by raping them. Thankfully, the SFW version has all the NSFW scenes, including the rape ones, removed without affecting the plot of the game.

Edited by HighCrate on Sep 12th 2020 at 3:07:06 AM

Administrivia.Auto Erotic Troping should mention that it is unrelated to Auto Erotica, which is about sex in a car.

It really shouldn't.

- Shouldn't it explicitly say that DX is the NSFW version instead of potholing that?

- I'm not a mod. At least I don't think I am...

Edited by Malady on Sep 12th 2020 at 8:14:37 AM

MaLady, you can change it into NSFW version instead of DX version.

Ok.

There’s a pothole to Copycat Sue on Sonichu under the Generation Xerox bullet point that needs stripped. The underlying text can remain unchanged.

So Tuesdays for CM, Wednesdays for MB it looks like?

Any progress on giving us the ability to edit locked pages?

There's also God-Mode Sue under the MacGuffin example on Sonichu.

Edited by ccorb on Sep 14th 2020 at 8:03:31 AM

On Monster.Video Games A To F, please change the Black Best Friend pothole to Token Black Friend.

When he first encounters two of his former soldiers, Sergeant Rex "Power" Colt and Lieutenant T.T. "Spider" Brown

EDIT: The Real Life Section Maintenance thread has consensus to PRLC ParanoiaFuel.Other for basically being a Real Life subpage with Flame Bait political topics.

Edited by ccorb on Sep 14th 2020 at 6:55:34 AM

I would do that in the Sandbox, though I don't think the token part is accurate.