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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
AjWargo Lord Barglebroth, Come For Your Souls! from Westfeild, New Jersey Since: Dec, 2014
Lord Barglebroth, Come For Your Souls!
#31577: Dec 3rd 2023 at 2:15:29 PM

Did so, and added a bit to the end.

Check out my fanfiction account here!
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
Mimic45 Since: Feb, 2017
#31579: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:07:33 PM

[tup] to Pam. I was actually planning to make her an EP when I had time.

[tup] to Dudley.

Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#31580: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:26:48 PM

Now, for that Pixar one I mentioned...

What's the work?

The Incredibles: Rise of the Underminer is a fun little tie-in video game to The Incredibles, serving as an immediate sequel to the movie that was later retconned out of existence.

As we saw at the end of the first film, a new threat emerged from the bowels of Earth, and the Incredibles are ready to face it...working as a team, Mr. Incredible and Frozone will journey beneath the surface of their city to take on a villain the likes of which have never been seen. For he is always beneath you, but nothing beneath him!

Who is the Underminer? What has he done?

  • An underground mole-esque man equipped with grand technology, the Underminer has a plan to "wage war on peace and happiness!" and bring the entire planet to heel beneath his might. He begins flooding the city with his robot armies and drills, decimating swathes of it. Though Mr. Incredible and Frozone begin pushing his forces back, the Underminer has a variety of plans in mind to complete his brutal invasion of the surface:
    • The Magnomizer, "the ultimate doomsday machine", a device that will throw the Earth off its axis and "destroy everything top-side. The sky will be filled with dirt and the sun will become a distant memory." The Underminer gleefully taunts that "When your skies turn dark and this precious crust is destroyed, you will crawl to me for mercy!"
    • The Corrupterator, a toxic-sludge device that the Underminer plans to use to flood the surface with poisonous waste, turning entire oceans into toxic vats.
    • Finally, his gigantic Gilgenbot army, with which he will march on the surface and bring forth the "fall of civilization!"
  • As Mr. Incredible and Frozone fight their way to him, the Underminer cruelly demands his forces break him their "limp bodies to adorn my throne!", and regularly threatens his mooks if they fail him. After our heroes save a batch of innocent scientists kidnapped and enslaved by the Underminer, they face off against him in a final duel, in which the Underminer tries to murder them for all the world to see so as to break humanity's spirit, but he is defeated and seemingly killed by his own exploding giant mech, saving the day.

Mitigating features?

No sympathetic traits or tragedy to his character... he's just a wannabe dictator out to decimate humankind. And while he's a bit silly at times (like outright calling one of his plans "worthy of maniacal laughter!"), his threat is always present and he's got a serious menace to him.

He was brought up and shot down sever years ago on the grounds that his destruction is too much Fridge Horror, but nah, the game makes it plenty clear the Underminer's trying to destroy most of mankind and leave whatever is left "crawling in darkness, begging for my mercy!" His plans are outright said to involve destroying "everything" topside, wiping out an entire hemisphere, leveling cities...yeah, it's not like he's committing bloody executions, but the Underminer's goals are made deadly obvious.

Heinousness?

Plenty bad enough with nasty plans to decimate humanity and enslave whoever is left, while forcing captured scientists to his bidding under threat of death.

Edited by Ravok on Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:27:18 AM

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#31581: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:29:04 PM

[tup] Underminer

"No running in the halls!"
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#31582: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:29:35 PM

[tup]underminer

Is this the first for John Ratzenberger?

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#31583: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:34:47 PM

[tup] to Underminer

When you said you have Pixar villain I definetely didn’t see THIS coming. [lol]

Vrx04 Since: Jan, 2023
#31584: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:35:15 PM

[tup] to the Underminer that received insane Adaptational Villainy.

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
coolmaneditor Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: In love with love
#31586: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:37:08 PM

Lol [tup] Underminer. Depressing game btw

Evanpotter09 Since: Sep, 2023 Relationship Status: It was only a kiss
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#31589: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:45:39 PM

Fun [tup] to the Underminer.

Edited by Snoketrope on Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:47:34 AM

The First man
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#31590: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:48:05 PM

[tup] The Underminer. I remember playing the game when I was a kid. Pure nostalgia.

DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Woagh
#31591: Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:48:11 PM

[tup] to Pam, Dudley Smith, and The Underminer. I actually remember playing the shit outta that game... and by that i mean the Nintendo DS port every licensed game had for some reason lol.

Edited by DoodSlayer136 on Dec 3rd 2023 at 3:48:33 AM

NOISE IS CALLING, PICK UP PHONE
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#31593: Dec 3rd 2023 at 4:05:53 PM

[tup] Pam.

[tup] Smith.

[tup] The Underminer.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
WatTambor Since: Oct, 2020
Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#31595: Dec 3rd 2023 at 4:36:58 PM

Silverwing:

  • Cama Zotz is a monstrous bat-god who rules over the Underworld and is worshipped by the Vampyrum Spectrum—cannibalistic meat-eating bats—as their divine progenitor. Desiring to rule over everything by extinguishing the Sun—which would result in the death of all life on Earth—in the ancient past Zotz fought and killed his twin sister Nocturna, leaving him trapped in the Underworld and requiring his worshippers to sacrifice 100 victims during a solar eclipse to free him. While claiming to be benevolent and merciful, Zotz is a power-hungry tyrant who does everything in his power to prevent the souls of dead bats from leaving the Underworld via the Tree that sprang from Nocturna's corpse—setting sadistic traps for those who attempt to do so—and punishes those who displease him in the timeless acid vortex of his stomach. Selecting the Vampyrum prince Goth as his mortal champion, Zotz directs him to commit atrocities such as slavery and genocide in his name. When Goth's hatred for Shade Silverwing leads to his temple being destroyed, Zotz begins enslaving the souls of the dead—including Goth—to manually tunnel to the surface; further punishing Goth by giving him the Sadistic Choice of being devoured immediately or after the tunnel is completed. When Goth promises to restore his cult and expedite his freedom if resurrected, Zotz sends him after Shade's young son Griffin when he's sucked into the Underworld. Using fear of his wrath to keep Goth on-mission when Shade journeys to the Underworld to rescue his son, Zotz gaslights Shade with lies and half-truths in an attempt to break his spirit after capturing him.

Edited by Arawn999 on Dec 3rd 2023 at 4:40:07 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
RobertTYL Since: Oct, 2019 Relationship Status: Holding out for a hero
#31597: Dec 3rd 2023 at 4:59:10 PM

[tup] Mack, Grimthron, Carter, Widowmaker, Pam, Dudley Dursley, Don't Undermine the Miner

[down] ???

Edited by RobertTYL on Dec 3rd 2023 at 9:22:43 PM

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#31598: Dec 3rd 2023 at 5:03:19 PM

Yes to the Underminer.

Well this has to be brought up for record keeping sake. Since Lighty has been permanently banned from the forums, who can do his write ups and who wants his reservations?

Think you're tough because you made it through Lord of the Rings? Real men survive The Silmarillion.
Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#31599: Dec 3rd 2023 at 5:15:30 PM

Wait, what? O_O I was wondering why he hadn't posted Goth's writeup yet and figured something had come up, but... jeez. That's unfortunate. :(

I guess I could handle Goth if need be, but I hope Lighty's able to resolve the situation and come back. In any case, I don't think this is really the place to be discussing such matters.

Edited by Arawn999 on Dec 3rd 2023 at 8:24:11 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#31600: Dec 3rd 2023 at 5:15:56 PM

[up][up]Wait what?! When did that happen?

Edited by ForgoLight on Dec 3rd 2023 at 5:16:09 AM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"

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