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Welcome to the new Complete Monster (CM) cleanup thread! This thread is where we clean up or cut already-existing entries.

If you're looking to add new entries, please see the approval thread.

IMPORTANT: Before you begin any discussions on this thread, please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List. Here, you'll find explanations of the criteria for the trope as well as our rules/procedures for approving and cutting candidates.

What goes through this thread?

    Examples 
  • Cut requests. If you believe a CM has been approved and they do not count, this thread is where you propose their removal. To know how to go about this, please see the FAQ folder on the Administrivia page, where the process is explained in detail.
  • If we ever need to consider cutting multiple examples without individually reviewing them (e.g. if we discover widespread plagiarism with a particular troper's CMs), the initial discussion will be on this thread and we'll then escalate to the mod team (as described here) to get a formal consensus if we decide to recommend a mass cut.
  • If an entry was put on the wrong subpage/YMMV page, you may propose where they should be moved to.
  • Full rewrites of existing entries, including expansions, trims, and ground-up rewrites. If your rewrite is approved by the thread, feel free to add it to the drafts page so that other users can check grammar and the like before it is included with the rest of the weekly swaps.
  • If an entry on a work's YMMV page doesn't match the entry on the media subpage, you can bring it here to discuss which entry works better.

What does not go through this thread?

    Examples 
  • New candidate proposals - as stated before, those are done on this thread.
  • Unapproved wicks - if a Troper encounters either of these kinds of wicks, they can be cut with no approval.
    • Any CM link on a non-YMMV page - as a YMMV trope, it should not be linked on those pages regardless of any cleanup effort. The only exception is if the wick is being used within the definition of another trope.
    • If an CM link on a YMMV page refers to an unapproved character. If it refers to an approved character on any such page, the wick can stay. On the other hand, if the unapproved character being linked to sounds like they might have promise (and you don't feel like checking it out for yourself), feel free to mention it on the approval thread - someone may already know why they don't count, or it could invite a brand new discussion!
  • Proposals for images, quotes, and videos of already-approved CMs - quotes and images are proposed on the approval thread, while videos can be uploaded normally as they are screened for approval by the moderation.
  • Crosswicking examples to YMMV pages - if an example has already been approved and added to the main page, you do not require any special permission to add the example to a work's YMMV page (assuming the work has a page already). If a YMMV page doesn't exist yet, then you can make it yourself, but either way, feel free to just add the example without asking.
  • Small changes to existing entries - these can simply be done on a Troper's own prerogative with no approval.
    • Spelling and grammar fixes.
    • Pothole changes.
    • Minor rewordings.
    • Spoiler tags.

While these changes do not require any kind of approval, it is requested that should you make any of these changes, you do one of the following:

  1. Make the same changes on the relevant Sandbox page, then add the Sandbox to the list at the bottom of the drafts page. This will add the Sandbox to the weekly swaps and ensure that the edits end up on the relevant locked page. If the Sandbox is already listed, then once you make the edits, your job is already done!
  2. If you don't know how the Sandboxes work or simply don't have the time to find it, then you can simply post on the thread about the changes you made. Someone else can then make the edit on the relevant Sandbox and add it to the weekly swaps.
  3. Alternatively, you can simply request that the change be made directly to the locked page on the Locked Pages thread. Members of this thread keep track of that one, so we will ensure that the changes are made in the Sandbox so that it doesn't get deleted during the next swap.

Again, these changes don't require any approval, but we prefer to keep the entries on the YMMV pages and the locked pages the same in order to avoid any miscommunication or errors between entries, so if you do make the change, we would greatly appreciate it if you could ensure the change is made on the locked page as well.

As a final note, we do not care what other sites have to say regarding whether or not a character counts. We have our own criteria and they have theirs for their CM equivalents; while they are similar, they are not exactly the same and should not be treated as such. Another site removing a character from their equivalent should not be a reason why a cut is proposed here, and if this is the case, it will likely lead to mod intervention.

Other than this, once again, welcome to the cleanup thread, and we look forward to your contributions!


Edited by Mrph1 on Jan 14th 2024 at 11:30:03 AM

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#9651: Oct 3rd 2023 at 2:02:34 PM

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"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#9652: Oct 3rd 2023 at 2:03:46 PM

[tup] To Shang Thung expansion.

It would also help if more people would comment on Forgo Light’s query with K’Vat.

ShootingStar7X Just call me Solemn. Since: Dec, 2017
Just call me Solemn.
#9653: Oct 3rd 2023 at 2:40:04 PM

So almost everyone's in agreement to keep Bagura. That's fair; Complete Monster is a YMMV trope, after all. How about I propose a second option: Merging his writeup with his later incarnation Buggler's in the same way we handle other CMs with multiple incarnations in one series (e.g. the Shredders in Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (2003)) rather than treating them like seperate characters.

  • Bagura also named  is the Big Bad of the entire Bomberman franchise, an Omnicidal Maniac, Bomberman's most recurring enemy, and by far his widest-reaching and most vile adversary.
    • Bomberman '94 through Bomberman Hero: Bagura makes his first appearance by splitting Planet Bomber into pieces and attempting to send a comet on a collision course with it after Bomberman puts the planet back together. In Super Bomberman 3, he resurrects the Five Dastardly Bombers and uses them to take over five planets; after Bomberman defeats the Five Dastardly Bombers, Bagura attempts to destroy the planets with his Battleship. Even after he's killed, his resilience allows him to live through a Brain in a Jar. In Bomberman Hero, he is the Man Behind the Man to the Devil Bomber, and possibly the reason for his evil, including brainwashing, as he had him locked away under a planet for being "too unruly".
    • Super Bomberman R: In this reboot of the franchise, Bagura's new incarnation, Buggler, is as bad as ever. Starting off the game by performing a grandiose speech about his plans of taking control of the galaxy while also threatening the lives of all that live there, he is revealed to have brainwashed the Five Dastardly Bombers into being his slaves; forcing them against their will to serve for him, and using them as part of his Giant Mecha in the final battle. He reveals his true plans at the end of the game: Convert the sun into a black hole so that it would inhale the entire solar system, and later the universe. Vicious, manipulative, and sadistic, this new incarnation of the classic villain manages to be even worse than his origin.

What do you think? If we do go through with this, should we also use the name "Buggler" for his main name on the header, as it's his most recent English name?

Edited by ShootingStar7X on Oct 3rd 2023 at 2:57:18 AM

Otherwise known as SolemnStormcloud.
MasterJoseph Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object from Not telling. Since: Mar, 2018
Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#9655: Oct 3rd 2023 at 3:57:20 PM

Before I get to work on splitting the other MK entries, I want to get this out of the way.

So a few weeks ago, the latest installment in the Physical Exorcism Series, Case 03: True Cannibal Boy, came out, and Nya does a bit more stuff in this one.

So Nya's effects on Marty in the previous game, which turned him into an insane Yandere for his girlfriend Sally Sweet, reaches its zenith here due to Marty going out of his way to murder numerous women in order to obtain a new body for Sally, whose entire body was eaten by the spirits of cannibal children.

And what's even crazier is that Jadrienne "Jade" Lee, one of the main exorcists of the series alongside her partner Bruce "Brucie" Lyne, is revealed to be in service to Nya, who enables the exorcist to ruin many peoples' lives for the sake of amusement. Their actions lead to Jade giving in to her sadistic love of making people suffer, which we see primarily in Case 00: The Cannibal Boy and True Cannibal Boy, where she sadistically has innocents killed after manipulating them into trusting her.

It may not be much, but it's still enough for Nya's writeup to be expanded a little.

  • Nya, the Goddess of Reincarnation, is a humorous yet wicked sadist who values humans as toys meant for their own personal entertainment. Entrapping the comatose Marty in his own personal fantasy realm, Nya has sapient NPCs killed in order to keep the world in order so they can keep ruling it as a tyrant. Beaten by Marty, Nya reincarnates the defeated Gl'aki into the human realm, enabling her plan to unleash a Zombie Apocalypse by having her infect an entire hospital. Seeking to toy with Marty some more, Nya traps Marty in a "Groundhog Day" Loop where he continuously dies as he's slowly driven to insane, murderous possessiveness over his new girlfriend Sarah "Sally" Sweet. Nya also encourages the exorcist Jadrienne "Jade" Lee to indulge in her sadism by ruining the lives of many innocents.

Edited by therealjackieboy on Oct 3rd 2023 at 3:57:40 AM

"No running in the halls!"
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#9656: Oct 3rd 2023 at 4:08:51 PM

Sure to Nya's expansion.

Also, for Shang, is that last sentence MK 11, or does it include MK 1? If the latter, it should probably at the very least be potholed somewhere.

Sure to the Bagura thing.

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therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#9657: Oct 3rd 2023 at 4:10:56 PM

[up] That last sentence is about his actions in MK 1.

"No running in the halls!"
ASghhrv6ub Best Smile from Second star to the right. Since: Jun, 2020 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Best Smile
#9658: Oct 3rd 2023 at 5:07:28 PM

Yes to the expansions and merging Baura's entries(though I believe we should keep his name in the header as Bagura since it seems to have been his original name).

Abstain on T'ket.

I am the one, I am the one, the godlike terror train, superior artificial brain, feel free to call me Blaine
KazuyaProta Shin Megami Tensei IV from A Industrial Farm Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Shin Megami Tensei IV
#9659: Oct 3rd 2023 at 6:04:28 PM

To ACW: Sure

EDIT: Very important

I went to watch a walkthrought to see Ja-Mu's crimes and do a better write up but...

...I think his affection towards his boss is genuine. Even when Ja-Mu is overdosed with Larsenium/Orgone and is on his KILL KILL KILL!! mood, he is thinking on Al-Van with some fondness.

He is hypocrital for sure, as he is trying to kill Calvina, the woman that his master loved, but its because he blames her for Al-Van's misfortunes.

And when Ja-Mu dies...he gets a pretty unambiguous Alas, Poor Villain, as both Calvina/ Touya (the heroes) and his current new superior Fu-Lu are saddened at his death, where Ja-Mu screams about how he doesn't want to die, with characters commenting that is sad that a young man like him was so indoctrinated that he died like this, with his superior paying respects to Ja-Mu while she is dying.

And honestly...I know this is not relevant to Judgement, but Moon Dwellers, which gives a massive Adaptation Expansion to Judgement characters just outright shows Ja-Mu with 100% clear redeeming traits, showing that Author Intent never was to shown him as a Complete Monster. A rabid bigot and supremacist that gets even worse? Sure, but also with a degree of tragedy as he is both indoctrinated to drug himself into a genocidal mania.

Edited by KazuyaProta on Oct 3rd 2023 at 8:49:25 AM

Watch me destroying my country
DrUnknown Since: May, 2020
#9660: Oct 3rd 2023 at 7:03:45 PM

Cut Jua-Mu Dalby. Sounds like he's genuinely loyal to Al-Van to a mitigating degree.

[tup] to the Bagura merge and the Nya expansion.

Also, [tup] to Shang Tsung's expansion (thank you so much handling the split!).

That's also got me thinking that the entries of Shao Kahn, Quan Chi, and Shinnok should also be split between the original and rebooted timelines, like therealjackieboy did for Shang. Would this be a good idea?

Edited by DrUnknown on Oct 3rd 2023 at 7:04:30 AM

Mr-ex777 Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#9661: Oct 3rd 2023 at 8:17:02 PM

Has anyone talked about Saitama one Punch Man yet? Suprised that it has never been brought out, even searched it on tropes and I had not found a discusion pertaining it. I am not very familiar with the series and haven't read/watched it prior, so I cannot provide an EP. Is it because nobody can count there because the villains either have redeeming qualities or just aren't bad enough?


[down] I see

Edited by Mr-ex777 on Oct 3rd 2023 at 11:28:27 PM

ultimate_life_form resident girlfail (Searching for Spock)
resident girlfail
#9662: Oct 3rd 2023 at 8:22:18 PM

As someone who's read a lot of One Punch Man, I don't think any of the main villains could really qualify? They don't always do that much special or they don't have enough screentime, usually, to qualify, or for ones like Boros or Garou, they have way too many redeeming qualities to make them count.

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#9663: Oct 3rd 2023 at 9:37:26 PM

[up][up][up] I like that idea.

"No running in the halls!"
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#9664: Oct 3rd 2023 at 9:54:54 PM

Yes to Shang Tsung's, Bagura's, and Nya's expansions.

Any opinions on my question here? It kind of got buried.

Edited by Bullman on Oct 3rd 2023 at 11:58:49 AM

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Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#9665: Oct 3rd 2023 at 11:43:52 PM

[up][up][up] Agreed as a fan of that series, most of the antagonists fail the extremely high heinous standards where mass murdering Kill All Humans plots are the norm, closest to come is Psykos but I don't think she counts due to questionable sanity. Do-S from the manga I do wonder about but not sure if she even does enough despite her sadistic personality. So far the only two contenders now is "God" and possibly the Mad Cyborg who are wait and see on my book.

Yes to the Shang Tsung expansions and I guess sure for the Bagura one too.

[up] Eh, not sure we should make one yet.

Edited by Powermaster201 on Oct 3rd 2023 at 2:50:47 PM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#9666: Oct 4th 2023 at 12:51:07 AM

Yeah, probably no need for a Stargate page just yet.

Hmm, Jua-mu may be a cut.

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#9667: Oct 4th 2023 at 1:33:39 AM

Would anyone mind splitting the entry like this. It seems weird how the write up looks with two separate characters listed together. From a witch shall be born.

  • Complete Monster:
    • Constantius the Falcon was selected for his "utter lack of characteristics men call good" by Salome the Witch to overthrow her goodhearted twin sister Taramis, queen of Khauran. After Salome frees Constantius from the dungeons, the two quickly replace Taramis, with Constantius raping and brutalizing the queen for his amusement. Salome's only response is to gleefully tell Constantius to "tame her as he will." Under the ruling hand of the duo, Taramis's kingdom becomes depraved and dissolute. Constantius's soldiers abuse and violate the people at will with any who resist facing death or slavery. When only Conan realizes that "Taramis" is an imposter, Constantius captures him and crucifies him in the desert, leaving him in agony and to be devoured by the vultures while still alive.
    • Queen Salome takes every chance to abuse her captive sister, presenting her with the head of her faithful friend and councilor, and allowing the guards to violate her multiple times. Salome also has a demonic being named Thaug that she uses as a guard dog that she and Constantius round up people as food for. At the end, they even try to feed Taramis to it before unleashing Thaug on the populace when all is lost.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
KazuyaProta Shin Megami Tensei IV from A Industrial Farm Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Shin Megami Tensei IV
#9668: Oct 4th 2023 at 7:12:04 AM

"L-lady Shana! I-I can't believe YOU were the one that betrayed us!! Who'd actually listen to YOU, Lady Shana-Mía? I'm going to crush them with exactly the care they deserve, because of them, Lord Al-Van's been..."

That is Ja Mu when he start his last battle.

Then when he dies, his superior Fu Lu outright mourns him and tells him that she will at least go alongside him to afterlife of their religion

Watch me destroying my country
Ghal-Sur Since: Jan, 2023
#9669: Oct 4th 2023 at 1:42:01 PM

43110. Thank you very much! And thanks for your support of the rewrite. It’s very nice that someone appreciates the rewrites (I’m not saying that this is necessary, but when there are opinions, it’s always nice). Thank you very much again!

Separation from mira, rewrite of Nya, Shang Tsung, and also support similar separation of Shinnok, Quan Chi and Shao Kahn. Honestly, I still vote for cutting Bagura. There's too little detail and his comet looks more like the site of a final battle rather than a horrific event that's sure to kill a bunch of people. Good catch Shooting Star 7 X!

Honestly, don’t think the Stargate page is needed yet. 8 examples, even if they are scattered across three environments. And speaking of the Bomberman franchise, there's another guy that I think needs to be discussed. I'm not saying it should be cut or left, but feel he still needs to be discussed.

Bomberman B-Daman Bakugaiden:From Series IV, Dark Koutei, in the form of a giant eye, is the main, and worst, villain of the entire series. One thousand years ago, he and his army attempted to take over a solar system before being locked away by the Big Good; another thousand years later he reemerges. He is a truly Bad Boss: instead of just berating or even firing his minions, he locks them up in strange, inescapable domes, doomed to float around in space for all eternity. There's also the matter of how he procured his son: by kidnapping a child and corrupting him. Koutei manages to be the most despicable villain in Bakugaiden without really trying.

Um, it seems pretty standard overall? Or does the review simply not reveal the depth of his evil? The ONLY thing that makes him stand out is his terrible treatment of his subordinates and dooming them to a horrific fate, but.....is that alone enough? Yes, it has its own continuity, but not sure that the disgusting treatment of the minions is enough. Plus, not sure how much the idea of ​​fate worse than death plays out.

Again, I'm not saying cut he, but saying discuss it. Because from the recording, he seems to be a standard tyrant with one nasty aspect, namely punishing his subordinates, but again, it is not clear how clearly this is portrayed. I couldn't find the EP anywhere. If he is taken into account, then the entry needs to be rewritten.

Edited by Ghal-Sur on Oct 4th 2023 at 1:47:57 AM

MasterJoseph Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object from Not telling. Since: Mar, 2018
Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object
#9670: Oct 4th 2023 at 3:06:12 PM

Found a couple posts regarding Dark Koutei. Not sure if this could save him, but here goes.

  • 1
  • 2

    Regardless, I am awaiting for info for Dark and Max before I consider voting.

Edited by MasterJoseph on Oct 4th 2023 at 4:21:27 AM

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ShootingStar7X Just call me Solemn. Since: Dec, 2017
Just call me Solemn.
#9671: Oct 4th 2023 at 3:21:30 PM

[up][up]I've also been doubtful of Dark Koutei's qualification. Leaning cut on him until we have more information.

EDIT: And while we're at it, MA-X also seems questionable.

MAX, Mechard's final creation and also known as MA-10, manages to be nearly as bad as his creator. Willingly going along with his plan of colliding two planets, killing millions of people, he develops a strong hatred and rivalry to one of Mechard's old prototypes, MA-0. This comes to a head at the end of the series, where he abandons his creator to kill Zero. At the end of this fight, MAX performs his worst deed of his own accord: once he and Zero are dying, he writes his own data into Zero so he can hijack Zero's body, forcing Shirobon to kill Zero, one of his friends, to permanently eliminate MAX. Despite not coming close to Mechard in his resources, he makes a name for himself in the series and manages to be nearly as vile.

Here's his effortpost. While MA-X is short on resources and forcing the Kid Hero to kill his best friend is nasty, I don't think it compares to Dr. Mechard's attempted double Colony Drop—which MA-X also seems reliant on merely being complicit in to count for himself. Thoughts?

Edited by ShootingStar7X on Oct 4th 2023 at 4:24:27 AM

Otherwise known as SolemnStormcloud.
Maxide Since: May, 2023
#9672: Oct 4th 2023 at 4:16:00 PM

@ACW: What's this about Jua-Mu's entry? Did you change something or are you asking me to change it? I'm not the one who originally proposed that entry.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#9673: Oct 4th 2023 at 4:17:53 PM

I know you didn't originally propose Jua-Mu, but he needs a rewrite (if he in fact still keeps), and you seem to know the work.

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Maxide Since: May, 2023
#9674: Oct 4th 2023 at 4:33:34 PM

@ACW: I think Kazuya Prota makes a good case here. Cut him. And if not, I can't think of which part of original writeup needs an obvious change.

Also, from what I'm seeing, Gu-Landon is currently on the YMMV page of Judgment, but not on the Monsters page for Super Robot Wars.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#9675: Oct 4th 2023 at 4:49:03 PM

Gu-Landon's at the Sandbox. He'll be added to the page Monday or so.

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