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The criteria for Unintentionally Unsympathetic says:

"When a character's supposed insecurities or embarrassing quirks are supposed to inspire sympathy, but fail to impress the audience because they're mishandled or plain written badly. It can be made even worse if they have to learn a lesson. Without being at least somewhat invested in the characters, the audience might have passed the point of caring when the character finally comes around."

This is the basic criteria of the trope. There is more after but I am not sure what was present from the start and what was edited in afterwords to expand the definition. This trope is becoming more popular, with the page starting to be split-off into sub pages and such. And like all popular YMMV tropes this is causing an influx of bad examples that are probably just one-sided complaining, shoehorning, and bashing which is not in the spirit of this wiki. You can see this is causing issues just by looking at the pages discussion thread. I felt that the trope needed a dedicated cleanup thread. This way edits can be done without causing edit wars and getting people banned.

Some guidelines if a character or event is Unintentionally Unsympathetic.

1. It has to be unintentional on the authors part. It is in the title. All examples that were intentional on the author's part are disqualified by definition.

2. The example should state exactly why the author or narrative intended the subject to have been sympathetic and why it failed to resonate with the audience. If the example can not clearly state these two points, it is a bad example and needs to at minimum be rewritten.

3. Neutral tone: No insults. I know it is fun to complain about stuff but complaining is not in the spirit of the wiki. So long as one side isn't promoting hate speech examples should be written without taking a side. Examples that are heavily favoring one side or insulting the other side are probably not valid examples.

4. There should be a wide accepted disagreement between the audience and the author to be a valid example. By that I mean that there should be large consensus in the audience disagreeing with the author over why the character is unsympathetic instead of sympathetic. If the audience is too divided and one section thinks agrees with the author and the other doesn't, the example could be a pet peeve of a single person, which isn’t noteworthy.

Lastly, always consider Square Peg, Round Trope and be mindful if the example may fit better under a different trope such as Base-Breaking Character, Broken Base, and The Scrappy. Please visit other cleanup threads if you have questions about tropes that do not involve Unintentionally Unsympathetic.

Feel free to help if you spot some bad examples or can point out more rules for the trope. Or argue with me over the definitions, this is a cleanup thread after all.

MOD NOTICE: As of October 26, 2022, this thread now covers Unintentionally Sympathetic as well.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Oct 26th 2022 at 8:15:48 AM

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#576: Oct 5th 2020 at 7:10:23 PM

Not to mention Monk is supposed to be sympathetic, given that he's the main character and his symptoms, while often Played for Laughs, are both tied to trauma and sometimes beneficial to the mission. This reads like a poor attempt to get around the Hilarious in Hindsight cleanup.

EDIT: Well, I was part right - it was a cut Values Resonance entry. Should probably send that troper a notifier.

Edited by mightymewtron on Oct 5th 2020 at 10:11:51 AM

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FernandoLemon Nobody Here from Argentina (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: In season
#577: Oct 14th 2020 at 3:47:41 PM

I found this one on UnintentionallyUnsympathetic.Anime And Manga while cleaning wicks to Het Is Ew, how do we save it?

  • Shitsurakuen ends on the note that most of the boys in the story were just as victimized by the sexist and patriarchal system at the story's foundation as the girls, and with most of them being apparently paired up with the girls they used to be with. Except in the actual story, the girls's role in the system consisted of being turned into slaves, frequently physically, sexually, and emotionally abused, treated like objects, tortured, and trapped in these relationships for use as magic weapon fuel. The boys's role in the system was... doing all that stuff, often happily, with no justification for all the bad things they do besides, at most, peer pressure and ambition, and yet they claim they were hurting just as badly and the girls should have thought more about their feelings. Claiming they were equally victimized comes across as a baffling invocation of Both Sides Have a Point in a situation where they flatly did not, with a side of Victim-Blaming in a story that'd previously been about how abuse and bullying were bad. Not to mention that there were a number of boys in the story who didn't become psychopaths when the opportunity to own women presented itself, yet this is still all blamed on the system. Needless to say, readers had reasons besides Ship Sinking and Het Is Ew to be horrified at the implication that these boys would be getting back together with their old paramours...

Edited by FernandoLemon on Oct 14th 2020 at 7:47:59 AM

I'd like to apologize for all this.
WarJay77 Bonnie's Artistic Cousin from The Void (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
Bonnie's Artistic Cousin
#578: Oct 14th 2020 at 3:55:58 PM

There's a better-written version on the work's YMMV page.

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FernandoLemon Nobody Here from Argentina (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: In season
Ferot_Dreadnaught Since: Mar, 2015
#580: Oct 15th 2020 at 11:14:26 AM

YMMV.Kamen Rider Build

This fails to explain why they were supposed to be not in the wrong in those cases and lacks objective reasons why it was too much. Cut?

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Goku Black
#581: Oct 15th 2020 at 11:23:06 AM

Sento is an Insufferable Genuis and him being rude is intentional. He's also a genuinely good person though who risked his life to save the world and citizens because it was the right thing to do. So not an example in any way.

Also what does that entry mean aspects of a Jerk with a Heart of Gold . He risks his life over and over across the entire show to do the right thing because it was the right thing.

Edited by miraculous on Oct 15th 2020 at 11:25:24 AM

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MatthewLMayfield What, me worry? from wherever he damn well pleases (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded)
What, me worry?
#582: Oct 17th 2020 at 9:30:51 PM

The Fairly Odd Parents S 5 E 10 Its A Wishful Life

  • It's easy to not laugh at Jorgen's usual violent sense of humor considering the premise of the episode.

Considering Jorgen is someone who flat out admits, (even in this episode), the misery of others makes him laugh and how it doesn't say why he's supposed to be sympatheitc, seems like something that should be cut, right?

Edited by MatthewLMayfield on Oct 17th 2020 at 12:31:15 PM

WarJay77 Bonnie's Artistic Cousin from The Void (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
Bonnie's Artistic Cousin
#583: Oct 17th 2020 at 9:34:59 PM

TBH, it's such a weird, nonsensical episode that it's hard to tell if Timmy or Jorgen are meant to be seen as sympathetic. But considering Jorgen's the one trying to make Timmy end his existence and fall into Hell, I think we're not really meant to side with him.

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mightymewtron Angry babby from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Angry babby
#584: Oct 17th 2020 at 10:22:19 PM

EDIT: NVM, somehow misread that as a Sympathetic entry. Agreed that he's not really meant to be sympathetic so much as symbolize Timmy's karma, though Timmy may qualify as Unintentionally Sympathetic nonetheless.

Edited by mightymewtron on Oct 17th 2020 at 1:23:26 PM

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MatthewLMayfield What, me worry? from wherever he damn well pleases (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded)
What, me worry?
#585: Oct 17th 2020 at 11:18:54 PM

Timmy does all these favors for his parents for his parents, his teacher and AJ, with none of them showing him any appreciation for him. Something that understandably upsets him and makes him wish he was never born. And Jorgen shows him that life would be a lot better had he never come along. Sure there was the fact he needed to learn the lesson of not expecting anything in return for the good deeds, but to do them because it's the right thing to do, but I feel for Timmy in this episode. Where would the "unintentional" part come to play here?

WarJay77 Bonnie's Artistic Cousin from The Void (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
Bonnie's Artistic Cousin
#586: Oct 17th 2020 at 11:20:02 PM

Because the episode apparently expected us to side against Timmy. Why? I don't know. But it did by making him learn the lesson at the end, instead of being treated with any sort of respect for his hard, selfless work. We were apparently expected to see Timmy as being in the wrong.

Edited by WarJay77 on Oct 17th 2020 at 2:20:38 PM

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mightymewtron Angry babby from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Angry babby
#587: Oct 17th 2020 at 11:30:04 PM

I think tropers need to learn that just because one character is Unintentionally Sympathetic doesn't mean the character opposing them is automatically Unintentionally Unsympathetic. Sometimes both characters can be intended as unsympathetic in a work one way or another.

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MatthewLMayfield What, me worry? from wherever he damn well pleases (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded)
What, me worry?
#588: Oct 17th 2020 at 11:31:18 PM

Hmm, interesting points you make. Definitely makes me wonder they could have delivered these lessons if it were more competently written...

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#589: Oct 19th 2020 at 7:09:38 AM

UnintentionallyUnsympathetic.Live Action TV has plenty of natter where people comment that the characters are actually meant to be unsympathetic (Friends, Beverly Hills, 90210 and Everybody Loves Raymond). In cases like these, do we just delete the natter or the entire entry? I'm not familiar with any of the work to rewrite it properly.

The entry for Ripper Street also reads more like Evil All Along than this trope (there's not enough context to know if the character is meant to be sympathetic after being involved in those evil acts).

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Goku Black
#590: Oct 19th 2020 at 7:16:57 AM

Pretty sure in the case of 30 rock. Liz is an Unsympathetic Comedy Protagnist for one.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
WhirlRX Since: Jan, 2015
#591: Oct 19th 2020 at 7:34:36 AM

[up][up]On the Raymon example, Debra can be kept. The Raymond one could be removed since he almost always in the wrong and the third point is confusing.

Anddrix Since: Oct, 2014
#592: Oct 22nd 2020 at 5:09:38 AM

Found this example on The Haunting of Bly Manor which is violating our rules about trope slashing:

  • Unintentionally Unsympathetic / Unintentionally Sympathetic: It can be very hard to sympathize with Viola/The Lady in the Lake as much as the show wants the audience to at the same pace it can be very easy to sympathize more with Perdita. Viola's background of wealth, emotional and even physical domestic abuse of her own sister (when the latter takes care of her while she's ridden with tuberculosis, putting herself at risk of catching it) doesn't endear her to many audiences, while Perdita suffering under said endear her. Viola being essentially the person responsible for all the story's woes via her refusal to let go, leading to the very Bittersweet Ending can only make things worse. With that said, the narrative is clearly meant to be morally ambiguous, so how much of that is "unintentional" is unclear.

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Goku Black
#593: Oct 22nd 2020 at 5:26:43 AM

So....not an example then. Cut it.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
PurpleEyedGuma Since: Apr, 2020
#594: Oct 22nd 2020 at 6:03:32 AM

How can someone by sympathetic and unsympathetic at the same time?

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#595: Oct 22nd 2020 at 6:27:02 AM

[up] It's not that, the entry's just lumping two entries together for different characters.

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Goku Black
#596: Oct 22nd 2020 at 6:31:32 AM

But if it's supposed to be morally ambiguous who you root for. I don't think you can call it an example of either.

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#597: Oct 29th 2020 at 10:44:54 PM

Uh, so this is up on Blood of Zeus.

  • Unintentionally Sympathetic:
    • Hera. While she is the Big Bad of the show, it's hard to not see her point in how she's being constantly humiliated by her husband, who is more willing to spend time with his mistress and bastard son than doing his job of ruling the world and she has to pick up the slack and make him respectable at all. This is not helped by the massive adaptation-induced nicety of Zeus, in which he seems uncharacteristically nice, sweet, and loving to his mistress and son, a nicety hardly extended to Hera.
      • While this is true, most of the goodwill the audience may have felt towards her is likely to take a swift dive after watching her smirk with glee at Electra's death (not to mention playing a large hand in said death), and her willingness to slaughter thousands of people who had nothing to do with her own suffering.

Not only is it a bad example clearly arguing with itself somewhat, with the first part leaving out some key details, such as Hera's willingness to murder countless people and the second part violating Repair, Don't Respond, it also strikes me as more as a misplaced Unintentionally Unsympathetic example for Zeus. (Which I think would actually be a good idea, as the show glosses over some of his worse qualities.)

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#598: Oct 30th 2020 at 12:39:43 AM

[it also strikes me as more as a misplaced Unintentionally Unsympathetic example for Zeus. (Which I think would actually be a good idea, as the show glosses over some of his worse qualities.

Worse qualities in the show or in mythology? Because if it's the latter they aren't super relevant.

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RIP Akira Toriyama
#599: Oct 30th 2020 at 9:45:11 AM

In the show, Zeus is constantly cheating on his wife, pulls a Bed Trick that the show really goes out of its way to try and convince you isn't rape, not to mention trying to exempt himself from the rules he himself set.

My issue would be that I think it might be intentional considering how his story ultimately goes, but I'm not sure.

I think the entry on Hera should definitely go though. The potential sympathy does kinda evaporate when she's willing to murder innocent people just to spite him.

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#600: Oct 30th 2020 at 12:39:34 PM

Found this on RoboCop 2. Seems like an example that's arguing with itself:

  • Unintentionally Unsympathetic: A lot of people were confused or even annoyed when it came to the death of Hob. He acts like a dying child—which of course he is—and Robocop obviously treats him with some measure of implied sympathy, particularly since he was murdered by his old boss Cain. The problem is that Hob is a really, really evil dying child, who was involved in Murphy's dismantling, shoots two police officers and we've spent the movie watching him establish himself as an extremely ruthless Manipulative Bastard and aspirant drug lord. Basically the problem is, if he wasn't a kid, the audience probably would have been cheering. It has also been said, according to some fans, that Hob brought his death on himself. Hob was the one who made the decision to leave Cain for dead, which likely factored into Robo-Cain killing Hob, and there was the glee he took in damaging Robocop and trying to garrote Officer Lewis (even taunting her about it: "You're looking a little out of breath, bitch).

    Though it could be argued that Hob being a child makes him more sympathetic in spite of his sociopathic tendencies because, unlike an adult, it's implied that Hob had little choice in being a gangster. Hob was by all indications most likely an orphan and when your father figure is someone like Cain it's hard to see how Hob could have turned out any other way (Hob was in fact deeply troubled and disgusted by Officer Duffy being vivisected and Cain held his face toward the screaming man being cut up). Keep in mind to that Hob is still a child and hasn't experienced anything beyond his violent upbringing which means it's all he know so even when they have to leave Cain and he still acts like a criminal, it's because it's all he has to fall back on.


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