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edited 7th Nov '17 9:59:04 AM by Fighteer

G-Editor Hobbs & Shaw from Skewl Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Jul 10th 2018 at 10:59:32 PM

[up] Say since you were planning to EP The Radiance, do you want to create her write-up?

Edited by G-Editor on Jul 10th 2018 at 8:00:49 AM

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MahStache from Old Jersey, not the bad new one Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
Jul 10th 2018 at 11:35:46 PM

Whoa that's super nice of you. I appreciate it very much [tup] i can do that when she gets a few more votes.

Jul 11th 2018 at 1:12:12 AM

Well, time to discuss FNAF The Fourth Closet.

Since we all know about Afton at this point, I'll cut to the chase, yes he still qualifies. Elizabeth makes her appearance in the book, and it is made explicit that, at least in this continuity, he never truly loved her. He neglected her in life and spent more time with his animatronics than her. She actually believed that he loved Circus Baby more than he loved her, which caused her to wish she could become her, although, even after dying and coming to possess her, she is still neglected by him. He never abused her in any way, but he neglected her and never truly loved her. In the book, she is trying her best to please him so he can finally come to earn his affection, while he treats her as a minion and nothing more.

In the book, William has set up base at Circus Baby's Pizza after escaping at the end of the second book. It's revealed that Charlotte is actually an android. It was not Henry's son Sammy that William killed all those years ago, but Charlie. After Charlies murder, Henry created four android versions of her that contained her memories (just like Astro Boy with Dr. Tenma or Android 16 with Dr. Gero). Each of the models were supposed to be made to represent different stages of Charlies life, allowing her to age by downloading the memories of the previous model into the next. She was raised to believe that Sammy was killed in the incident instead so she didn't know she was an android (it's not revealed what actually happened to Sammy in between Charlies murder and her original android body being activated, but it's mentioned that Henry's wife divorced him in between the incidents, so it can be assumed she took Sammy with her).

William's Springtrap body is falling apart with age, so he has removed his endoskeleton body holding his corpse and soul from it, and he now plans to find a way to keep himself from just rusting away. He has kidnapped several children to use them for an experiment to try and help him preserve his undead immortality, while also planning to get back at the kids who have caused him so much trouble in the past two books. He sends Elizabeth to kill Charlies final model after her memories were transferred to it following her apparent death at the end of the second book. In the meantime, he plans on continuing his plans for immortality. It's also revealed that he mashed the endoskeletons of several of the Freddy Fazbears animatronics together to create Enard, with the souls of the children being in terrible pain from the condition Enard is in. William finally dies for good when he's shoved into a furnace, allowing all of the souls to finally move on as the man who killed them has finally been put down for good. Elizabeth dies when Charlie unleashes the robot Henry created to kill him when he committed suicide, with the robot killing them both.

So, yeah, he still counts. Not much to add. Some mention of how he neglected his daughter in this continuity and what he did with Enard would be nice.

Bullman Relationship Status: Abstaining
miraculous The Wizard from south africa
The Wizard
Jul 11th 2018 at 2:12:25 AM

[tup]predator, Megatron , Du-jum, and the Radiance.

[tdown] the Emperor and Starscream

"They could kill me, but they couldn't have me. I was my own"
ACW Complete Monster Editor from Arlington, VA (outside of DC) Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Jul 11th 2018 at 2:39:37 AM

If Randall's Freudian Excuse isn't played sympathetically, I'll give him a [tup]

I've not seen the work, and could go either way on the Emperor. Just put me as an abstain.

[tup] Megatron; Du-Jum; Radiance (Barely).

Kazuya, I've put your name for Hector and Nessiah.

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DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Relationship Status: In my bunk
Jul 11th 2018 at 3:38:08 AM

New proposal, from The Slaughter.

Who's the candidate?

The Lsdy of Darkness, a demon from prehistory.

What does she do?

100 years ago, a Satanic cult summoned the Lady, awakening her via Human Sacrifice. She repayed them by slaughtering the survivors when their leader tried to control her. She lies in wait in rhe house where the sacrifice was made, waiting for the ritual to be finished so she can bring Hell on Earth. The cult's spirits are trapped in the house, stuck in eternal torment as the Lady's servants.

60 years later, a single mother has moved into the house. The Lady torments her with nightmares for a couple of nights, before going on the attack. She then killed the woman's daughter, who is later stated to be 8, with an axe. After the woman finds her daughter's body, the Lady tosses her down the stairs, causing her to be impaled on a coat rack. Their spirits are also trapped in the house to act as a bridge between the worlds.

40 years after that, a group of college students show up at the house to fix it ip for later sale. Two of the students have sex, awakening the Lady to continue the ritual. She immediately gets to work, dragging a stoner into a pit in the basement, mutilating him the whole way. She then tried to drown one of the coiple who awakened her, but she escapes.

After our victim pool discovers that they're trapped in the house until the ritual is complete, a jock decides to leave. While he's trying to escape, the Lady summons a gale force wind that pins him to a wall. The wind is so strong that the debris im the room chops the Lady's victim to pieces. She then dragged the woman she tried to drown earlier into the bwthtub again, succesfully offing her.

Some of our heroes try to burn their way out of the house, but the Lady has a counterplan. You see, the last three kills? Were meant to correspond with the four elements, respectively earth, air and water. Now she needs fire. She lights the turoentine before the trap is fully set, agonizingly burning a guy alive. These kills make the spirit flesh, which she celebrates by slicing a businessman's throat, using his blood to awaken her elemental victims, along with the businessman, as her undead slaves.

After a sequence of desperately trying to escape the undead, they manage to get a kill in the form of the businessman's assistant. Eventually, our surviving heroes confront the Lady, who offers them rulership over the living and the dead by her side. When they resist, she tries to kill them both, but they manage to destroy the book which magically that keeps her on this plane, banishing the Lady of Darkness forever.

Except no.

You see, the final requirement for the ritual is for somebody to make the "Ultimate Sacrifice," suicide. And Dana did just that to blow up the Lady's book. Having taken over Dana's body, the Lady rips off the sple survivor's head. As the sky turns red, the Lady of Darkness prepares to bring about the end of days...

Yep. Karma Houdini and Downer Ending.


Big Bad, sets it. As for the horror movie baseline, she meets it with her And I Must Scream acts, which include trying to trap the whole Earth in eternal torment.

Mitigating factors?

While the Lady is a demon from a prehistoric time of darkness, there's no evidence she lacks agency. In fact, she's described as the most evil woman in her species.

Aa for redeeming qualities? None, she's a sadistic demon.



Ongoing Projects
Jul 11th 2018 at 5:10:22 AM

[tup] to the Predictor, Megatron, Du-Jum, The Radiance and The Lady of Darkness.

KazuyaProta I warned you, Human!! from A dying Earth Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
I warned you, Human!!
Jul 11th 2018 at 5:11:21 AM

[tup] The Lady of Darkness. I love that name.

Watch me destroying my country
miraculous The Wizard from south africa
The Wizard
Jul 11th 2018 at 5:20:19 AM

[tup]Lady of Darkness

"They could kill me, but they couldn't have me. I was my own"
ACW Complete Monster Editor from Arlington, VA (outside of DC) Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
MenInGreyToBlak V Relationship Status: Too sexy for my shirt
Jul 11th 2018 at 6:11:31 AM

[tup] Lady and Radiance, I've been looking forward to the Radiance EP.

Jul 11th 2018 at 6:41:26 AM

[tup] Lady of Darkness, even for a horror villain I find her ridiculously vile and the fact she is a KH pisses me off.

Beast from Ontario, Canada Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
Jul 11th 2018 at 6:48:19 AM

[tup] Lady.

Now we can do this the easy way or we can do this the hard way.
Tyk5919 The Smug One. Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
The Smug One.
Jul 11th 2018 at 7:11:18 AM

[tup] for Lady of Darkness. Yay standard horror Diabolus ex Machina cliche.

Also here's Max's write-up. Surprisingly, someone already made a page for the film.

Crocodile 2: Death Swamp: Max is the leader of a gang of trigger-happy bank robbers. After robbing a bank and killing several police officers, Max and his gang board a plane to flee to Mexico. When the pilot is forced to deviate from the flight path, Max and his minions hijack the plane, inadvertently crashing it and killing most of the passengers in the process. Once everyone has recovered, Max forces the survivors to haul his suitcases of money to his destination or else he'll kill them all. When a crocodile starts killing the survivors one by one, Max continues to put the survivors and even his own gang in harm's way, not caring in the slightest as more of them perish. After Sol becomes fed up with Max's schemes and tries to leave, Max shoots him in the back and leaves him to die. Even with a crocodile terrorizing the survivors, Max shows that he's an even bigger threat than the actual monster.

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.
Bullman Relationship Status: Abstaining
Lightysnake Thanks a lot.
Thanks a lot.
Jul 11th 2018 at 7:40:20 AM

Yes to the Lady

Edited by Lightysnake on Jul 11th 2018 at 7:40:24 AM

The oracle, the seer, the wit. No question that I am it.
ACW Complete Monster Editor from Arlington, VA (outside of DC) Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Jul 11th 2018 at 8:09:34 AM

Slow week this week. Well, I should have the 24 ones for the merger, plus I should be able to read Armageddon Force and I'll have a rewrite.

  • Armageddon Force, by Adam Gratteau: In a world ravaged by fear and war, Dr. Edgar Malbarn is one of its biggest threats. He runs the secret organization the Carvina Corporation, which takes wounded soldiers off of battlefields and sends them to Malbarn and his doctors, where they torture them while reconstructing their bodies with mechanical replacements and prosthetics, planning on creating mechanically modified soldiers that they can brainwash and use to spread chaos across the world. Protagonists Jon and Yui fall into Malbarn's clutches after losing limbs on the battlefield, and Malbarn begins torturing them by not sedating them while performing surgery, pouring acids on their open wounds, and heating the metal and screws before attaching the pieces to their bodies. Malbarn taunts Jon, and tells him about each death that occurs during procedures. He lashes out at Jon when he gets angry, smacking him or stabbing him with a screwdriver. When Jon and Yui are saved by a freedom force, Malbarn fights back and loses his arm in the process. He has his doctors give him a prosthetic one similar to Jon's metal arms, then kills them all. He hunts Jon and his friends down, causing chaos to drive them out. When he finds them, he gathers an army of Carvina guards, bombs the freedom force's headquarters, drugs force member Adam, and sends the army to kill the force. During the fight, Jon gets away and fights Malbarn, who beats Jon down. Jon retaliates and manages to cripple, then kill the doctor. The army is defeated, but Jon and Yui still have nightmares about Malbarn after his death.

First off, the book's like under 220 pages; nowhere NEAR long enough for that long an entry (260+ words). There's also the pothole-first name-pothole thing. And factually, it's Carvina Cooperation, not corporation. I hope to read the book by Saturday, then create a page and rewrite that day.

BTW, turns out the author was only a high school senior at the time the book was published. Is that one of the youngest to create a CM (not counting actors)?

Edited by ACW on Jul 11th 2018 at 11:20:11 AM

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HamburgerTime All things pure and good. from Garamsythe Sewer Relationship Status: I know
Tyk5919 The Smug One. Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
The Smug One.
Jul 11th 2018 at 9:08:59 AM

[up][up] I believe so. Although publishing books on Kindle is on the rise lately, so could be wrong.

Also I'm binge-watching Season 3 of 24 now. I'll let everyone know how I feel about Salazar later or tomorrow.

[down] Also Cheng Zhi. I think his is fine too. I may tweak Phillip's entry a bit though.

Edited by Tyk5919 on Jul 11th 2018 at 12:22:56 PM

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.
ACW Complete Monster Editor from Arlington, VA (outside of DC) Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Jul 11th 2018 at 9:17:36 AM

Excellent. I dunno if Nina, Fayed, or Phillip—who do indeed count—need expansions or not (the final 2 are okay).

[up] By final 2 I meant Cheng's and Juma's.

Edited by ACW on Jul 11th 2018 at 12:35:41 PM

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Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
Jul 11th 2018 at 9:45:28 AM

[tup]The Lady.

Why so serious?
Tyk5919 The Smug One. Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
The Smug One.
Jul 11th 2018 at 9:47:08 AM

[up][up] Oh right yeah, Juma. If anything else from the franchise comes up (there's still expanded novels I haven't read yet, and I maaaaaaaaaay rewatch Season 7 and reevaluate Alan Wilson) I'll let you know.

[down] Yeah, Offstage Villainy is mostly why he doesn't count, last I recall. Like I said, if I come across anything or if something new comes up, I'll bring it up.

Edited by Tyk5919 on Jul 11th 2018 at 1:02:49 PM

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.
ACW Complete Monster Editor from Arlington, VA (outside of DC) Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Jul 11th 2018 at 9:53:00 AM

Ah right, Alan Wilson. I'm just wondering if too much of his acts are offscreen (though considering he's in charge of, like, freaking EVERYONE, he just may count).

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Jul 11th 2018 at 10:03:07 AM

Alright, so the current tally is a unanimous 13 [tup] for Megatron and a unanimous 9 [tdown] for Starscream. So, here's Megatron's write-up.

  • Transformers: The Game (DS): Megatron lacks his film counterpart's nobler traits and replaces it with raw brutality. Having plunged Cybertron into civil war after killing his own father, Megatron tore out Bumblebee's vocal processor when he launched the Allspark into space. He followed the Allspark to Earth, but wound up frozen in the Arctic Circle. After being thawed out by his followers, Megatron's murderous rage was only tempered when they planned to blow up Hoover Dam and drown thousands of people. In Autobots, Megatron used the Allspark to terrorize the city of Tranquility and mortally wounded Create-A-Bot while trying to kill his own brother, Optimus Prime. In Decepticons, he tracked down and murdered Jazz after he foiled his plot to destroy Hoover Dam. After terrorizing Tranquility, Megatron killed Optimus and hunted down his traitorous lieutenant Starscream. Create-A-Bot was gravely wounded after helping him defeat Starscream, and Megatron chose to kill him rather than waste resources trying to repair him. Megatron showed no remorse for the Decepticons who gave their lives for him and believed that the weak were only meant to serve the strong.

On a side note, I believe this the first time Frank Welker has voiced a Complete Monster. For someone who has voiced hundreds, if not thousands of characters, it's a bit surprising it's taken this long for him to do so.

[down][down] Ah, my mistake. I was bound to miss some characters he's voiced.

Edited by chasemaddigan on Jul 11th 2018 at 1:26:56 PM

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