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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Remnant43 The Salesman’s Stolen Mask from In Your Walls Since: Sep, 2020 Relationship Status: Star-crossed
The Salesman’s Stolen Mask
StalkerGamer Memetic Loser Mother Since: Dec, 2021 Relationship Status: Love is an open door
#36428: Feb 2nd 2024 at 5:22:09 AM

[tup] to Grigori. Never expected a CM from The Asylum

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
TurlesTheVegan Mr. House from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
Mr. House
Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Since: Dec, 2015 Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
#36431: Feb 2nd 2024 at 9:17:38 AM

[tup]Grigori.

Why so serious?
moctezuma2000 Since: Sep, 2018
#36432: Feb 2nd 2024 at 10:08:14 AM

[tup] Jahandar, Langston and ̶A̶l̶l̶i̶e̶d̶ ̶M̶a̶s̶t̶e̶r̶c̶o̶m̶p̶u̶t̶e̶r̶ AM

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#36433: Feb 2nd 2024 at 10:56:19 AM

[tup] Grigori

Reserving Imaginary (2024).

Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#36434: Feb 2nd 2024 at 11:02:17 AM

Yes to Grigori

  • 101 Dalmatian Street: Cruella de Vil, the one and only Devil Woman, returns in this series to seek revenge on the descendants of Pongo and Perdita. Decades since the original movie have turned Cruella into a harridan by harridan's standards who now acts with full regard to the Dalmatians' sapience. Cruella plans to mince all ninety-nine of the puppies in her very own skinning machine, intending to force their parents Doug and Delilah watch the entire macabre process before turning them into "matching luggage." Cruella is also hideously abusive to her grand-nephew Hunter, at one point leaving him locked in a shipping container for six months with only dog food to eat, resulting in the poor kid undergoing Sanity Slippage. When he finally snaps under her abuse, Cruella callously orders him caged up with the puppies.

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#36435: Feb 2nd 2024 at 11:26:18 AM

Animated Canon, Other Canon Works & Multimedia?

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
Troperuser21 Since: Jan, 2024
#36436: Feb 2nd 2024 at 11:28:20 AM

  • Five Nights at Freddy's: Fazbear Frights: William Afton was a notorious Serial Killer who murdered several children at Freddy Fazbear's Pizza by dressing up as an Accessory-Wearing Cartoon Animal to gain their trust. Eventually, Afton would be horrifically burnt in a fire, only kept alive by Andrew, one of his victims torturing him for revenge. Afton would then trick Arthur Blyth and the hospital staff into bringing him to a Fazbear Distribution Center to free him of Andrew, spreading Agony across the city to infect and corrupt countless toys, mascots, and animatronics, indirectly causing many incidents where the corrupted mascots would attack people. Afton himself would end up possessing the Stitchwraith with Andrew and Jake, discretely using the animatronic to kill several people and pinning it on Andrew. When Jake tries to help Andrew ascend to the afterlife, Afton tries to stop them out of spite, and when that fails, proceeds to viciously maul Jake in rage. Leaving Jake for dead, Afton, empowered by Eleanor, would then fuse all the corrupted toys and mascots with him, to create Afton's Amalgamation, with the fusion causing the sentient toys and mascots constant pain. Afton's rampage would've eventually endanger the entire city, where he intended to kill even more children to satisfy his never-ending need to inflict pain and suffering onto others.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#36437: Feb 2nd 2024 at 11:36:37 AM

Please add to the Drafts. I got it from your Sandbox. Before or after Eleanor? I'm thinking after.

Edited by ACW on Feb 2nd 2024 at 2:39:43 PM

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#36438: Feb 2nd 2024 at 12:30:21 PM

Uh. Dunno Afton is The Heavy but she's the Big Bad but she also appears less prominelty than him. So uh....

By the way im done with Hazbin Hotel if anykne is curios about my thoughts pm me.

Edited by miraculous on Feb 2nd 2024 at 12:31:06 PM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#36439: Feb 2nd 2024 at 12:33:03 PM

@ACW: Yep exactly, just the latter two.

Now for this, a re-evaluation of my very first CM to ever come through this thread:

What's the work?

Tom Sawyer (2000) is an Anthropomorphic Animal Adaptation (they got tropes for everything!) of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, retelling the classic Twain tale with more singing and a lot more furries.

Who is Injurin' Joe? What has he done?

He's a cold blooded killer
He'll break you in half,
You can beg for mercy
But he'll just laugh!
When it comes to evil, he's a pro
Watch out, for Injurin' Joe!

Now don't let him getcha
'Cause he'll sure do you harm
He'll gouge out your eyes
He'll tear off your arms!
And He'll steal anything that ain't nailed down
Lord have mercy, Injurin' Joe's in town!

  • A massive bear known and feared through the state, Injurin' Joe makes his first appearance in the opening of the film, smashing through a church's walls in the middle of service and scaring the crowd into submission while he steals the collection box meant to be given to the poor. Sheriff McGee openly notes this kind of robbery is common for Joe, but he nor anyone else will do anything about it for fear of their lives, which chafes his right hand Deputy Bean.
  • Late one rainy night, Joe forces the dimwitted, mentally slow Mutt Potter to laboriously dig up a grave where treasure is hidden. When Deputy Bean, nearby leaving flowers at his wife's grave, overhears the commotion, he shows up and tries to claim the treasure for the county as Joe was graverobbing; Joe proceeds to grab Bean and fling him so hard into a nearby tombstone that Bean dies on impact. Y'know, for kids!
  • Positioning things to frame Mutt for the crime, Joe realizes he's being spied on by someone (Tom and his friend Huck) and captures their beloved frog pal Rebel as a hostage, taunting the fleeing youths "You forgot somebody!"
  • Keeping Rebel captive just to let him loose so he will unintentionally lead Joe to Tom and Huck, Joe tries to murder the boys with gleeful relish to silence what they know about Bean's death. Tom and Huck barely escape with their lives but Joe thinks they have fled out of fear for their lives, and so on the day Mutt Potter is slated to be hanged for murdering Bean, Joe eagerly shows up to watch the execution with a smile on his face.
  • Luckily, Tom and Huck return and reveal the truth about Joe, saving Mutt. Joe promises "Them's gon' be your last words, boys!" and tries to kill them, but in the chase he falls down a waterfall to his seeming death.
  • Buuuut that doesn't last, as Tom and his Love Interest Becky Thatcher find themselves lost in an underground cave system while exploring. They find the treasure Joe graverobbed, and realize this was where he hid it after murdering Bean—but Joe reveals himself to be alive in the cave and tries to kill both Tom and Becky out of spite, promising to "tear them to pieces!"
  • But Huck and the townsfolk come to the rescue, and though Joe tries to murder the kids in front of the entire town with a smile, Huck and Tom toss a torch at a swarm of bats, and they attack Joe which leads him to being crushed by falling debris, tripping off a cliff and falling far into a body of water; his corpse is then shown just to verify to both the audience and the kids "He can't hurt us anymore."

Mitigating features?

Not a one, he's a murderous and downright cruel crook who wants money and to silence children from exposing his latest murder. And though the film is a lighthearted musical most of it, Joe darkens the tone immensely in every scene he's in, and has no humorous qualities at all.

Heinousness?

He was cut around a year (by me!) after my initial proposal of him because I figured since Tom was a main character, Joe targeting him and his friends wasn't too notable; but I think with everything in account and recent clarifications of animated film baselines, Joe should pass pretty decently. He murders Bean in a nasty way just for trying to claim gold that rightfully belongs to the county, frames his mentally-stunted packmule Mutt to hang for it with relish, tries to murder Tom and Huck to silence what they know, then tries to kill the duo and Tom's Love Interest Becky—all 3 of them kids—out of sadistic spite.

Targeting the kids alone wouldn't be enough, but Joe commits a very dark, cruel murder and frames a handicapped man to die for it, and it's established time and time again that Joe committing murder or other crimes is pretty routine for him—even stealing a church poor box and threatening the crowd in the process.

Also, even if it doesn't tie directly to onscreen heinousness, come on, a kids' movie song detailing that the villain will "break you in half" then laugh as you beg for mercy; or is known to "gouge out your eyes and tear off your arms" really gives a bounty of detail as to the kind of person Joe is [lol]

Final Verdict?

I think Joe's good to go back up.

Edited by Ravok on Feb 2nd 2024 at 12:34:10 PM

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
Flowman Since: Dec, 2021
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#36442: Feb 2nd 2024 at 12:39:31 PM

I'll give a weak yes.

Mir: If Eleanor's behind everything, I'll put her first.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#36443: Feb 2nd 2024 at 12:39:57 PM

[tup] Joe

"No running in the halls!"
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#36444: Feb 2nd 2024 at 12:42:21 PM

[tup] Joe

Finished Hazbin Hotel as well and looking forward to disscusion.

Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#36446: Feb 2nd 2024 at 12:50:02 PM

[tup]Joe.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
jlvs200s Jogo from The Netherlands (Troper in training) Relationship Status: At the center of everything that happens to me
Jogo
#36447: Feb 2nd 2024 at 12:58:32 PM

I think I can give a weak [tup] to Injurin' Joe, him trying to frame a mentally handicapped man for his crimes (which would lead to him getting executed), brutually murdering someone who tries to stop him and then trying to murder three kids makes him juusssttt bad enough my book to qualify as a CM.

"Stand proud, Sukuna, you are strong." | He/Him
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TurlesTheVegan Mr. House from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
Mr. House
Idisagree Since: Jun, 2011
#36450: Feb 2nd 2024 at 1:12:58 PM

[tup] to Injurin Joe.

I also saw Hazbin Hotel (including the season finale) and think we might actually have a candidate (even if you take Helluva Boss' high heinous standard into the equation).


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