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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#39551: Feb 28th 2021 at 8:15:54 AM

[up]Right. Of course. I mean Scheck was a learning curve, so he’s really not a good example of it actually.

There are also a few occasions when if I want to post two or three writeups at once, I’ll wait to write them all together. That’s more for the fun of it though than in any means meant to be a convenience for myself.

I can be less eager about getting my writeups in way too soon moving forward so that way there’s far less jumping the gun, even in the hopefully unlikely event that a vote ends up getting reversed.

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Feb 28th 2021 at 8:19:04 AM

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#39552: Feb 28th 2021 at 8:19:30 AM

Okay, I probably could have elaborated more on the EP, so I apologize for that, but I suppose the argument boils down to being a Butt-Monkey Played for Laughs and for being a Dirty Coward. I'll quickly address both, but after hearing the arguments, I'll understand if he doesn't go up.

In terms of being a Butt-Monkey, I feel like the argument gets blown a bit out of proportion. Those two moments are the only two moments where he's really humiliated, and they each last about three seconds at most - the "peck in the eye" scene is so fast it's practically a "blink and you'll miss it", while the glider scene only features him shouting in shock for about a second - when he pops back into frame, he's already calmed himself down.

In terms being a Dirty Coward, I'll bring up some counterpoints. Saying he just cringes in fear to Jack and Jill? The entire sequence lasts for literally three seconds - they show up, they point a gun at him, he gets shocked, and then Kitty disarms them. It's so fast that to say he even has a reaction is a bit of an exaggeration. And yes, he does a lot of shouting during the final chase, but A. He's being chased by a multi-story monster fully intending to kill him, so I'm willing to cut some slack, B. it's not any more shouting than Puss is letting out at the same time, and C. he gets progressively better as the chase goes on, and by the end of it he accepts his death with dignity. Don't get me wrong, the cowardly traits are there, but they're incredibly downplayed compared to the rest of his personality, and in the end he overcomes it completely, so I'm willing to forgive it.

Plus, saying he intends to leave the city to save his own ass is a bit of an exaggeration - that desire is a knee-jerk one that lasts for maybe a minute. All it takes is Puss slapping him and telling him to look at the people who would die to convince him to stay, meaning he makes the call almost entirely on his own terms. He clearly is scared, but he overcomes it and stays anyway, and then see above for how that goes. Its also worth pointing out that he’s the one who steals the goose in the first place, and he manages to stay relatively calm given the circumstance as he’s sneaking around a giant monster.

Tl,dr; The moments that were mentioned are present, but they are incredibly downplayed and he overcomes those flaws by the end, and through it all he still remains effective. I’m keeping my yes, but I understand if I end up an outlier.

This video covers pretty much all of the moments discussed if you’d like to watch it and judge for yourself.

Edited by STARCRUSHER99 on Feb 28th 2021 at 11:30:03 AM

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#39553: Feb 28th 2021 at 8:20:26 AM

Hey, may I suggest something added to the Shroud entry for Kamen Rider?

There's the fact that she gave her son the subtle clue he needed to completely destroy the Big Bad's plans for good in front of said Big Bad without him even noticing he did so until it was too late, making Shroud responsible for the heroes' victory in the story.

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#39554: Feb 28th 2021 at 8:28:09 AM

I'll let someone more versed in Kamen Rider comment there as there's a line we walk for entries between being too general and then not wanting everything they do in it like a plot summary. It seems like a reasonable enough request to include but I'll defer to Scraggle, Reddish, mir and Crow on that one.

As for Humpty? That's a good counter-counter. As I haven't seen it, I'll amend to an abstain here. One thing I do wanna note is that Jack Sparrow, who, while doesn't count himself, was one we determined viable prior to later films handing him the Idiot Ball and in the second film he straight up abandoned everyone on the ship before a ping of conscience finally brought him back to not let them get devoured by the kraken.

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#39555: Feb 28th 2021 at 8:36:03 AM

I likewise don't feel comfortable with outright downvoting anymore, so I'm also changing my vote to an abstain.

"For a second there, I mistook ya for a threat... but you're just a dirty little man!"
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#39556: Feb 28th 2021 at 8:40:02 AM

Also Chaos do you mind posting how your ideal Stroud entry would look, like where you'd work your suggestion in and all that so we can see?

futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#39557: Feb 28th 2021 at 8:41:11 AM

Disney I think keeps going back and forth on whether or not they’re bringing Johnny Depp back given circumstances. That’s a topic best left untouched here though regardless of which side you fall on.

I like the counterarguments on Humpty and for the time being, I’m switching back to a yes. I’d rewatch the movie myself, but for more than a few reasons, I don’t have the time right now. One is still needing to finish Spirit and do the EP for The Colonel, another is the Golden Globes are on tonight.

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#39558: Feb 28th 2021 at 8:41:22 AM

I am happy to see myself mentioned as a man who really likes to think over his votes! Anyway seeing Ravok's counterarguments and star's counter-counterarguments and having watched some of the scenes myself, I'm gonna give a weak [tup].

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#39559: Feb 28th 2021 at 8:57:42 AM

If someone doesn't mind tracking this throughout the day that would be appreciated: I think it'll take a while to get a stable number.

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#39560: Feb 28th 2021 at 9:02:25 AM

Kinda leaning yeah on Humpty, the fact that he's able to overcome said flaws is what sells it for me.

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#39561: Feb 28th 2021 at 9:03:59 AM

Yeah I'm really not sure with it: on one hand this is absolutely a trope you can grow into and it sounds like he might in the end; on the other it might be too little too late, I really can't say not having seen how it all plays out.

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#39563: Feb 28th 2021 at 9:12:30 AM

Potentially being a stickler for wording, I’d look at it less like “he grows into it” and instead say he starts as this, briefly loses it, and then comes back.

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#39564: Feb 28th 2021 at 9:29:18 AM

Totally fair, I’m gonna stay with an abstain but I do appreciate you spelling out the exact circumstance smile When little flourishes are so important I like being fully elucidated.

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#39565: Feb 28th 2021 at 9:42:57 AM

[tup] to Humpty, i think he recovers well enough from potential disqualifiers

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#39566: Feb 28th 2021 at 9:50:06 AM

You know what, I just watched his final scene again and really thinking about this I can say [tup] to Humpty Dumpty.

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#39568: Feb 28th 2021 at 11:00:35 AM

Thanks 43110, I'll try and do that in a bit.

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#39570: Feb 28th 2021 at 11:12:27 AM

Like I said, I don't deny Humpty has bravery and nobility underneath the exterior, but he's often shown to be a nervous, fearful guy when things aren't going his way, and while he's not a Dirty Coward at all, he's still actively planning on ditching the town to be destroyed until Puss calls him out, he still goes through Butt-Monkey moments that—split second or not—happen consistently enough that it's hard to come away from the movie thinking "Wow that guy was so impressive and constituted and, dare I say, magnificent!" It comes out more like "That guy was smart, but also a nervous mess at times, who had a final moment of realizing he needed to be The Atoner and so sacrificed himself."

Humpty's pretty much a prime example of a goofy villain who gets his slapstick and fear Played for Laughs several times, not even just in the climax, and while he schemed the entire movie...when things get out of hand in the finale, he starts freaking out, panicking, and would be unceremoniously dead with a look of terror on his face many times over if Puss or Kitty didn't save him last second. Yes, you can argue him sacrificing himself showcases his bravery and is an impressive act, but it feels less like the swan song of a MB...and more like a tragic, nervous, unsure-of-himself villain finally becoming The Atoner via Redemption Equals Death.

That's the sum of my arguments, pretty much, so the voting may fall where it may, and I'll by no means see this as some affront to the trope for getting listed haha, and the counterarguments are quite good...I just don't see him as this.

Edited by Ravok on Feb 28th 2021 at 11:16:50 AM

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#39571: Feb 28th 2021 at 11:24:18 AM

I might actually rewatch Puss in Boots today after all. We’ll see what happens gice I still gotta finish both my movie and the EP along with it. Not making any promises.

@Ravok I think what probably helps Humpty’s case more than hurts it is that his weaker moments are not as showcased in the work as him being a successful schemer from the sound of things. Many MB s have character flaws and with the big picture in mind, Humpty isn’t destroyed or turned into a complete failure by these things. It’s not like Jimmy "The Tulip" Tudeski who while getting over his angry moments in The Whole Nine Yards and then also pretending to have lost his mind a lot of the time in The Whole Ten Yards as part of his scheme, still ends the second movie balling happily at the news that his wife’s pregnant and becomes a joke as a result (also, part of those other bits where he was pretending may have actually not been pretending either).

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Feb 28th 2021 at 11:29:11 AM

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#39572: Feb 28th 2021 at 12:08:18 PM

Yeah, that's totally fair. It's definitely not a huge part of the character once The Reveal sinks in, but it certainly is there from the beginning. I'm still going to stick with a yes purely because I still believe his scheming outweighs his tendency to be the butt of a joke - plus, since he's masterminded the entire scheme from the beginning, how much of the fear he shows throughout the journey is actually real isn't clear when he knows Jack and Jill won't actually hurt him - but your points are valid Ravok.

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#39574: Feb 28th 2021 at 12:21:56 PM

Kind of leaning towards a slight yes for Humpty all things considered.

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#39575: Feb 28th 2021 at 12:34:39 PM

Humpty can stay in my book as his fear isn't a consistent part of his personality and his death while reluctant, sounds dignified enough.


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