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Prematurely launched pages and pages that weren't fully fleshed out at the point of launching, are a big problem. Since these usually share several problems at once, this thread is aimed at re-running them through the TLP for fixing - the usual fix - or cutting them if they are too bad.

Problems this thread deals with include bad names, not enough/bad examples, unclear description, etc.

For the interested, here's a list of recently created pages. Launches

Note: Please do not request a mod to unlaunch drafts that don't have any issues besides lacking a launch notice/24hr launch notice. While 24hr launch notices are mandatory, there are a few exceptions to the rule. If you see a draft's sponsor launch a TLP without an announcement, it's best to remind them of our TLP Guidelines first. If they continue to repeatedly launch drafts without a launch notice, you can report them on Ask The Tropers or the TLP Community Issues thread.

Edited by MacronNotes on Jun 24th 2023 at 12:24:55 PM

WaterBlap Blapper of Water Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Blapper of Water
#4876: Mar 4th 2017 at 10:52:51 AM

I have a few specific responses to works that have been brought up — before I post that big list of tallies. (I'll post it once more for January and February, then archive those resolved issues somewhere. Should the archive go on the wiki somewhere (like Keep Real Life Examples is a sort of archive)?

edited 4th Mar '17 10:54:16 AM by WaterBlap

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oneuglybunny useless legacy from Binghamton, New York, US Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: Abstaining
useless legacy
#4877: Mar 4th 2017 at 5:34:56 PM

If I may chime in:

Act Of True Love Stalemate: cut-worthy. It's one of those Trope X meets Trope Y overlaps trying to be independent, which are inherently troublesome. There's True Love, yes. There are stalemates and impasses, yes. Both at once can occur, but does it serve a story / character purpose? No.

Bust Chart: trivia. Chalo's Webcomic.Las Lindas might be the best-known one. There, it's relegated to an aside page as an addendum. I believe most other examples are likewise set-asides from any main story. Trivia, full stop.

Casual Sports Jersey: I apologize for hatting this one; I thought it could fly. But it's really an established character type (Dumb Jock, Cute Parasite) wearing a numbered Jersey. This would be an incidental at best, suitable for Trivia.

Cast From [insert stat here]: This is Cast From Hit Points, just depleting a different status bar. The principle is identical: to throw magic / kai, one must expend resources, making the PC weaker somehow. Cut-worthy as a pickaninny duplicate.

Everybody Loves / Hates [insert name here]: Cut-worthy. A powerful character, good or bad or neutral, will inherently acquire fans and detractors alike. This happens. What's its story-telling purpose? None. What's its Characterization purpose? Already covered.

Half-baked launches are bound to occur, it's an endemic hazard of TV Tropes. I think we'll be stuck with demotion to TLP / shunt to TRS / flag for ATT "laundry duty" no matter what.

WaterBlap Blapper of Water Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Blapper of Water
#4878: Mar 4th 2017 at 8:23:14 PM

@oneuglybunny: Commenting on the Everybody Hates Ares trope is best done in the TRS thread. Your voice on that trope can be heard there in an actionable way.

I don't really see this as "laundry duty" so much as acting as a filter of tropes before they become problems for TRS.

Motion to cut the following pages:

Motion to keep the following pages (and suggested actions):

Motion to send back:


[Also moved some cut works onto the resolved lists.]

[Act Of True Love Stalemate and Death Rides A Scateboard have been cut. I'll count that as a February thing (this'll be the last post with that list of resolutions). Film.Unforgettable has been resolved, as far as I can see. Other cuts: Characters.Mass Teleportation, Lasagna Cat, Danganronpa RP For Scrunts / DanganronpaRPForScrunts.Danganronpa RP For Scrunts. Nobody's responded to the other motions I made in this post (sadface). For the record, those tropes that had 5 uncontested votes were added to the cut list because, well, they had 5 uncontested votes.]

This post (after this line) is an attempt to tally everyone's votes.

If you want to be included in this tally, please use the verbiage in the folder titled "The key to the tallies" (not super formal). (This folder will be updated to reflect common sayings at some point.)

None of the following lists include "reported" tallies. They only include "primary sources," so to speak. Otherwise, we could find ourselves doubling votes very quickly. That said, please do not "re-vote." Feel free to continue the discussion and make sure your point is heard (I won't stop you). If you are unsure of whether your vote was heard, please link to your previous post.

Folderized because there are so many lines!

    open/close all folders 

    The key to the tallies 
  • c = voted to cut or said/implied this was Not A Trope, "cut for now, look into it later";note 
  • sb = send back or "cut and send back" which is the same thing as this;
  • k = voted "keep" or "I'm fine with it";note 
  • un = unsure, not I'm not sure but they aren't sure ("further discussion needed");
  • n = neutral, they expressed neutrality or abstained for some reason;
  • dv = didn't vote but commented or brought to our attention (please vote);
  • trs = they voted to bring this to TRS, they commented that this was too old for this thread;
  • ??? = I don't know how to count this one, I'm not sure what they voted;

The "dv" votes may double up for this first batch of lists. I don't have a separate "didn't vote" list and I'm not going through everything again lol.

"The Same But More Specific" and "The Same But More" don't mean cut. They could mean to send back for revision, or that you're unsure and want to know what other people think, or — yes — to cut. I ain't got time to think about what you're saying; I'm too busy countin'.

    Unresolved Issues (~30) 
Will eventually alphabetize this...

    Issues with Little or No Response 
This folder is for those recently launched tropes that were brought up but nobody has responded to yet. This is just a summary. These tropes are in the Unresolved Issues folder. Tallies shown in this folder may not be up-to-date (I just copy-pasted these items). Fewer than three votes and/or just no conflicting votes (I don't want to double-up these lists too much).

Do not look in this folder for the new stuff. This is for that which just really ain't gettin' no response.

    Almost Resolved Votes 
The list:

What this list is:

These tropes either have four or more votes or only "neutral" votes. They may also be too old for this thread.

We don't have a crowner in this thread, but I think we should only "motion to call" a resolution when it has nearly 2:1 (cut-to-keep ratio, trs-to-keep ratio, keep-to-cut ratio, etc.). Not super formal, but it's something to think of for "neutral" or "keep" decisions.

  • If the only votes are "neutral" or "didn't vote," then I think we can call it after 3. Nobody cares about it so nobody "votes". le shrug
  • This folder is also where "send to TRS" tropes go if they are demonstrably too old for this thread. Vote tallies will be included here, and such tropes will be taken off the Unresolved Issues list.
    • If the trope is both too old and clearly deserving cutting rather than sending to TRS, it may also be on this list.

    Works Brought Up with No Resolution: 
This is for non-trope pages brought up in this thread. I add items to the top of this list.

    Resolved: 

    Problem Troper Reported (for some reason, was this reported to ATT?): 
Once these are resolved, the troper names get taken off and are not archived. We don't need to gossip after the fact, and I'm pretty sure the mods have their own lists for this sort of thing.

    Other Salient Discussions You Can Participate In 
I'm not going to summarize what people are saying in these discussions, but I don't want to "overshadow" the non-voting discussions we have here either. Linked comments will be to where the discussion began, and sub-bullet links will be topics that spawned from the original discussion (if it's catching on as its own discussion). You can then work forwards if you want.

edited 9th Mar '17 1:56:07 PM by WaterBlap

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Candi Sorcerer in training from Closer to rimward than hubward Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
Sorcerer in training
#4879: Mar 4th 2017 at 8:30:47 PM

This isn't laundry duty, it's maintenance work. Stuff happens under the best of systems, and dealing with it is better then letting kindling and garbage accumulate until flashpoint.

Those of us working on this thread want to be here. If we decided we didn't want to do this, we could just walk away. As volunteering goes, it's incredibly casual.

Act of true love stalemate: cut that.

Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
princeoftetris from Massachusetts Since: Feb, 2017 Relationship Status: Giving love a bad name
#4880: Mar 4th 2017 at 8:44:36 PM

Hello! I'm sorry if I'm not supposed to post here, I've never used TV Tropes before and I'm new. I am someone from the "Danganronpa RP For Scrunts" group that got their page removed. I would like to say that I am the one that created the group, and Oggs is just the one who made the page. There seems to be a few misunderstandings here. I'll start with the easiest. First, the name "Danganronpa RP For Scrunts" isn't exactly the real name, and it's mostly an inside joke. It has nothing to do with genitalia, and is in fact a reference to a rejected Neopets character that someone from the group stumbled upon once. http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/guilds/images/9/95/Scrunt.gif/revision/latest?cb=20120205025730 Second, I would like to state the RP is not invite only. The way Discord works is that you have to get a link to the server, and then send it out to people. I can happily provide a link to the server that never expires, our only worry is that the server will get flooded. There are about 18 of us in there that actively participate in the RP and in conversations, and then a large group of inactive or silent people. We're worried if we send out a public link we'll get overwhelmed and there will be too much for us to handle. We currently only have 4 mods. Third, we are not making this page to boost our egos or brag or shove a private RP in anyone's faces. We just wanted to make page to attach tropes to our characters and share funny moments that happened in the RP. We found another Danganronpa RP on here, so we thought it'd be fine for us to make one as well. We didn't think anyone would ever end up stumbling upon it, honestly. Lastly, we do not actively participate in any vore. In the RP we have only ever jokingly referred to it. Our RP is definitely not the most Safe For Work thing out there, but it's based off the series Danganronpa which is known for its sexual themes. There have been a few lewd moments in the RP, but we promise to tone them down if that's a problem! I'm sorry for all the confusion and trouble, and I'm also sorry if this is the incorrect place to send this! Thank you grin

jormis29 Since: Mar, 2012
#4881: Mar 4th 2017 at 9:26:28 PM

Analysis.Lasagna Cat seems to be poorly formatted attempt to add examples rather then Analysis

Working on cleaning up List of Shows That Need Summary
Antwan Ramblin' Mushroom from Washington Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
Ramblin' Mushroom
#4882: Mar 4th 2017 at 10:00:50 PM

I tried my best to fix Unforgettable for you guys, but those two tropes were the only ones I'm sure it has. Hopefully the creator has more, but I doubt it since it won't even be released until April.

Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
Zzzzzzzzzz
#4883: Mar 4th 2017 at 11:58:02 PM

If it hasn't been released, the work page shouldn't have any tropes on it, unless they're related to the title. Tropes from works should not be listed on speculation that they'll be used.

...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
Candi Sorcerer in training from Closer to rimward than hubward Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
Sorcerer in training
#4884: Mar 5th 2017 at 8:41:11 PM

Princeoftetris, there's a couple problems.

Disclaimer: Not a mod.

One is that without being the average person able to trope it, it's effectively an Unpublished Work. Those go in Darth Wiki, and only get one page.

Two is we have a Content Policy and No Lewdishness No Prudishness. Even Unpublished Works need to adhere to them, including when writing examples.

"Troping funny moments" is vague. Moments inside the story are fine, but Troper Tales aren't allowed.

Your difficulty (among others) is you don't want just anyone wandering into your group -which is perfectly understandable! (Believe me, I personally understand.)

Ours here is, tropers need to be able to verify that both the work and tropes within exist, in order for it to be moved out of Darth.

Do the mods or any other tropers see anything I missed, or anything else that covers this?

edited 5th Mar '17 8:44:24 PM by Candi

Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
Fighteer Lost in Space from The Time Vortex (Time Abyss) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Lost in Space
#4885: Mar 5th 2017 at 9:10:28 PM

  • The article as it stands/stood is of extraordinarily low quality, way below what we expect of a work article on the site.
  • The article is about a work that nobody but its participants can see to verify that the tropes claimed were actually present.
  • There are suggestions that the work might contain inappropriate content.
  • We aren't here for RP'ers to keep a catalog of tropes that they use in their games. They are welcome to do that somewhere else. We are here to trope discrete works that are available to the general public. If an RP is being conducted in a publicly accessible venue and/or published as a discrete work, then it's fine to have an article for it. But your private gaming session is not suitable content for TV Tropes.

edited 5th Mar '17 9:17:08 PM by Fighteer

"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"
jormis29 Since: Mar, 2012
#4886: Mar 8th 2017 at 1:22:01 AM

Characters.Mass Teleportation seems to be a misplaced example

Quotes.Magical Girl Raising Project looks like an angry rant rather then a quote

Working on cleaning up List of Shows That Need Summary
WaterBlap Blapper of Water Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Blapper of Water
#4887: Mar 8th 2017 at 7:14:17 AM

[up] Added Characters.Mass Teleportation to the cut list, since it's a trope with a Characters/ subpage. The other page is a difficult read, but is that a misplaced review or just complaining?

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LegitimateIdiot Since: Nov, 2015
#4888: Mar 8th 2017 at 8:51:59 PM

[up] It's complaining about a certain character's in-series and fan treatment. I'll cut it.

This account is dead. I’ve said a lot of dumb things in the past and I wish to forget them. I’m sorry if I’ve ever hurt anyone.
WaterBlap Blapper of Water Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Blapper of Water
#4889: Mar 8th 2017 at 10:03:30 PM

Plasma Manipulation has some problems that were brought up in YKTTW and not resolved (link). The sponsor was Tropers/123 and it was prematurely launched by ABC.

It Needs A Better Description. Also, there comment-out markup that says there was an Image Pickin' thread for the Kirby image, but if you go to that thread, there's no obvious discussion of "plasma" or "Kirby"?

edited 8th Mar '17 10:04:24 PM by WaterBlap

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Larkmarn Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Hello, I love you
#4890: Mar 9th 2017 at 6:22:18 AM

Yeah, that desperately needs to go back. "Plasma" isn't defined in any meaningful way, the examples are pitiful (every last one of them is "this character uses plasma"). Honestly, if the examples can't have more context then this isn't a trope, just a list of people who have the word "plasma" in somewhere in their powersets.

Found a Youtube Channel with political stances you want to share? Hop on over to this page and add them.
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#4891: Mar 9th 2017 at 7:51:32 AM

Unlaunched it.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Fighteer Lost in Space from The Time Vortex (Time Abyss) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Lost in Space
#4892: Mar 10th 2017 at 7:31:02 AM

"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#4893: Mar 10th 2017 at 7:40:53 AM

Why is a vlog not tropable?

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Fighteer Lost in Space from The Time Vortex (Time Abyss) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Lost in Space
#4894: Mar 10th 2017 at 8:05:58 AM

Hmm. I find that articles about works that are not creative or that have to do with fiction in some form or another almost always devolve to troping the opinions and/or the people presented, which is not kosher.

"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"
WaterBlap Blapper of Water Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Blapper of Water
#4895: Mar 10th 2017 at 12:40:47 PM

[up] That's not the same as "not tropeable." The RL persons troping and the troping by proxy could be cleaned up without cutting the article outright.

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Theatre_Maven_3695 (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#4896: Mar 10th 2017 at 1:14:19 PM

[up] Not necessarily. If the blog is about politics or a similar hot button topic (hello, Feminist Frequency), then it would likely be almost nothing but natter and ROCEJ fun units anyway.

edited 10th Mar '17 1:14:37 PM by Theatre_Maven_3695

WaterBlap Blapper of Water Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Blapper of Water
#4897: Mar 10th 2017 at 5:58:45 PM

The Noisy Straw seems to be People Make Noise while Drinking Through a Straw. I think there's a trope here ("annoying or immature or obnoxious character intentionally makes noise for [reasons]"), but the description makes it sound like the trope is just about the act of drinking through a straw and making noise. I think it should be sent back. I'm kind of surprised that nobody commented on the description before it launched.

Look at all that shiny stuff ain't they pretty
Candi Sorcerer in training from Closer to rimward than hubward Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
Sorcerer in training
#4898: Mar 10th 2017 at 6:57:59 PM

Web Video UN Hhhh's page says they talk about whatever they like, which means some parts could be tropable and other parts not.

I'm disturbed by the tenor and tone of the description. To me, it reads as somewhat snarky and rude.

Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
WaterBlap Blapper of Water Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Blapper of Water
#4899: Mar 10th 2017 at 7:17:29 PM

Main.The Mark Side was put through TLP (link) and it's a useless (imo) disambig stub to two works by the same person (in the same namespace?) also found in WebOriginal.The Mark Side. How it got five hats with one comment, I have no idea, but it seems pretty weird.

I already put it on the cut list, since it's functionally a Main/ redirect and otherwise a redundant stub (given the work page).

edited 10th Mar '17 7:21:52 PM by WaterBlap

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mlsmithca (Edited uphill both ways)
#4900: Mar 10th 2017 at 9:50:55 PM

[up] Given the revelation in the ATT query about those pages that the creator of the TLP version of Main.The Mark Side had five accounts (one sharing its name with the work's creator) registered from the same IP address, I'm inclined to think the accumulation of five hats may not be a coincidence.

I've at least cleaned up the page's major problems with formatting (or, for that matter, using) potholes correctly; I suspect it's salvageable as a work page, but the creator of the page (and the work, assuming it's the same person) does need to have proper editing practices drummed into their head. Before foxley's frankly heroic tidying up of the page, the trope list wasn't in anything even resembling alphabetical order. (I've said it before, I'll say it again: if there isn't a notifier for ignoring alphabetisation, there ought to be. But that's one for the Tech Wishlist.)


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