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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#43951: May 10th 2024 at 3:10:27 PM

[tup]Hartwig and ogroff

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Tyk5919 Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin
#43952: May 10th 2024 at 3:10:27 PM

...Huh. Bit of an oddball given the show he's from. Still, [tup] for Irv Hartwig.

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#43953: May 10th 2024 at 3:12:33 PM

[tup] Hartwig

"No running in the halls!"
Ghal-Sur Since: Jan, 2023
#43954: May 10th 2024 at 3:17:53 PM

[tup]Ogroff and Hartwig. Like light-hearted shows with very dark villains.

Malginel:Okay, I shortened it a little.

Edited by Ghal-Sur on May 10th 2024 at 3:20:45 AM

Malginel Since: Aug, 2023
#43955: May 10th 2024 at 3:19:08 PM

That show sure can get dark. Was wondering if there was someone from if just for sheer novelty.

[tup] Hartwig

EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#43956: May 10th 2024 at 3:47:34 PM

Yes to Orgoff and Hartwig.

  • Dead Boy Detectives (2024): Esther Finch is a hilariously melodramatic and immortal Vain Sorceress who got her start with magic by murdering her cheating husband and his paramour. A consummate Child Hater, Esther has maintained her youth over the centuries by sacrificing "generations" of young girls to her magical snake, and begins a petty quest for revenge when the titular detectives save her latest victim. Initially releasing an elemental spirit that threatens to condemn every ghost in Port Townsend to oblivion, Esther then elects to lock up Charles until he goes insane while putting Edwin through unceasing torture, siphoning enough power from his pain that she can become god of the town and "take [children] in broad daylight." Esther's years of gleeful evil stomp out any sympathy afforded by her husband's betrayal, and she laughs off a nearly successful attempt to redeem her while nonchalantly killing the boys' quirky friend Niko.

How do we want to place this in relation to the Sandman? My thought was to put them under a tree like "Netflix's The Sandman Universe adaptations", or just "The Sandman Universe", but I'm not attached to those ideas if there's something better.

Edited by EmeraldEmperor on May 10th 2024 at 6:48:37 AM

Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#43957: May 10th 2024 at 3:47:52 PM

[tup] to Orgoff and Hartwig

What's The Work?

Captain Flash is another Public Domain superhero about a scientist named Keith Spencer who gained his powers of Super-Strength and durability after shielding his students from exposed radiation. Now becoming the protector of Atom City with his sidekick Ricky Davis, fighting all kinds of foes. It lasted for like 4 issues.

Now I might have a few villains to propose, I'll begin with the Starter Villain.

Who's The Iron Mask?

  • The first real villain that Captain Flash and Ricky face in the second story, as the first has No Antagonist, the Iron Mask is a supervillain with a love for Criminal Mind Games and Greek Mythology.
  • The story begins with him threatening to use a hydrogen bomb filled with radiation to destroy all of Atom City, unless Captain Flash solve a puzzle very much inspired by the story of Ulysses. He has built robots to sic onto Captain Flash to kill him.
  • This is all but a distraction for Flash, as the Iron Mask seeks to steal the radioactive Cobalt for profit, using sleep-gas on the guards. However, Captain Flash confronts the madman after deactivating the bomb, with the help of Ricky, he knocks the Iron Mask out of the window presumably to his death.

Mitigating Factor

Ditto.

Heinous Standards

Easily passes, there's not a lot of villains who try to blow up a whole city, especially with a bomb full of radiation, for a comparison on the heinous standards.

  • Conrad Krueger is an Evil Genius who captures hundreds of people to work as slaves in his city and threatened to destroy them all once his plans were foiled. But he has an army of robots at his disposal while Iron Mask only has like a few at his disposal but doesn't aim to destroy a whole city. Plus, his threat to destroy his slaves doesn't have too much weight to it compared to the others.
  • Muscles is The Brute with superhuman strength and backings of the mafia, and sabotaged a train full of hundreds of people which explicitly stated would kill them all. That's the only thing he got going.
  • Mirror Man, another recurring villain like Conrad and Flash's Arch-Enemy, is an interdimensional Serial Killer who feeds off the silicon of scientists and geniuses and seeks to destroy all the best brains Mankind has to offer.
  • Mirago seeks to Kill All Humans via using spies to sow discord and distrust until they destroy themselves and is Not-So-Well-Intentioned Extremist who only cares about having a planet to rule over. He's an alien ruler with an army at his command and has far higher resources than the Iron Mask.

Everyone else is bog standard or just doesn't do enough. Iron Mask is one of the few villains with a much higher scale of destruction than most villains and is just a minor fuck-off antagonist. He isn't an alien conqueror like Mirago, and Conrad and Muscles aren't trying to blow up whole cities (Muscles himself isn't actively trying to kill hundreds of people besides getting money anyway).

Final Verdict

I'll leave it up to you

Edited by Powermaster201 on May 10th 2024 at 6:59:15 AM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#43958: May 10th 2024 at 3:53:10 PM

[tup] Iron Mask

[up][up] I prefer former

LarryT Since: Aug, 2023
#43959: May 10th 2024 at 4:05:30 PM

[tup]Iron Mask

Edited by LarryT on May 10th 2024 at 4:05:37 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#43961: May 10th 2024 at 4:14:33 PM

[tup] Hartwig, Iron Mask

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TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#43962: May 10th 2024 at 4:14:38 PM

[tup] for Orgoff the Invincible, Irv Hartwig, Iron Mask and the Mundus image and caption.

PolarPhantom Since: Jun, 2012
#43963: May 10th 2024 at 4:29:45 PM

Sure to Iron Mask Marauder and Hartwig.

I got Mundus' quote slightly wrong, so here's the correct version (I hope people still like it):

"Fool! So sad that humans will always be humans, no more. Has the Sparda blood been spoiled over the ages?"

Oh, so we never see the cannibal cannibalise. Ah well. Still I'm looking forward to whom else is gonna maybe pop up from DMC in the future.

Edited by PolarPhantom on May 10th 2024 at 4:31:50 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#43964: May 10th 2024 at 4:31:11 PM

Yes to Iron Mask.

And...I think Hartwig JUST does enough.

Are Sandman and Dead Boy the only ones in that setting?

Edited by ACW on May 10th 2024 at 7:34:33 AM

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#43965: May 10th 2024 at 4:31:59 PM

[tup]iron mask

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#43966: May 10th 2024 at 4:34:09 PM

Another Captain Flash villain of the second to last story.

Who Is Mirago?

  • Mirago is the ruler of the planet Imago, which his family has ruled for millions of years. His world is dying due to the sun losing orbit, and as such his people seek to conquer the Earth as their new home.
  • ... Except Mirago only cares about ruling a planet, hating the fact he'll be losing a planet to rule over. So instead he'll takeover the Earth for himself, not out of the sake of saving his own people. Something he blatantly stated himself to Captain Flash.
  • His plan? Kill All Humans on the Earth for him to conquer it. Having his people shapeshift into world leaders to sow hate and distrust until the humanity decides to destroy themselves. Using Captain Flash as one of his victims, until the hero and his sidekick escapes back to Earth to warn them of the coming invasion.
  • Flash succeeds... Only to learn it's too late, one of Imagions shapeshifted into Atom City's Mayor Dalton and replaced the real mayor, paving away for the invasion... That never came to pass as by the time of the last story came, Captain Flash already ended [lol].

Mitigating Factors

Already stated that whatever good intentions exist, it's not there, he outright admits he doesn't give a damn about losing his planet, he only cares about ruling a planet.

Heinous Standards

Easily the most heinous of the villains, he plans to wipe out humanity to sow discord and hate until they eventually decided to annihilate each other. No other villains reaches to that point in the story.

Final Verdict

Easy [tup] to the alien Karma Houdini.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#43967: May 10th 2024 at 4:35:15 PM

Yes.

And please add to the pending.

EDIT: Should Doom Patrol and Lucifer go with that group?

Edited by ACW on May 10th 2024 at 7:36:38 AM

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#43969: May 10th 2024 at 4:37:46 PM

[up][up]No. Lucifer Lucifer is definetly not the same Lucifer who appears in sandman.

[tup]mirago

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
PolarPhantom Since: Jun, 2012
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#43972: May 10th 2024 at 4:39:25 PM

[up][up][up]Okay, though what about Doom Patrol. THAT seems to have some of the same characters.

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EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#43973: May 10th 2024 at 4:48:48 PM

As I said in Esther's post, all elements from the Doom Patrol's adaptation of the characters (except the actress for Night Nurse) were changed. There's no connection.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#43974: May 10th 2024 at 4:50:01 PM

Ah, so just Sandman and Boy? Alright then.

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moctezuma2000 Since: Sep, 2018
#43975: May 10th 2024 at 4:53:45 PM

[tup] Hartwig (I might vaguely remember this episode...), Captain Flash villains


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