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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#38776: Mar 7th 2024 at 12:22:15 AM

  • GraphicAudio Marvel Comics adaptations:
    • Daredevil: The Man Without Fear:
      • Wilson Fisk, the Kingpin, is a rising crime lord who schemes to take over all of New York. Serving at the side of Don Rigoletto for years, Fisk tires of Rigoletto's honorable aversion to the dirtier aspects of crime, so he snaps the old man's neck then wipes out his many loyalists to take over the organization for himself. Flooding New York with a new, more vile wave of crime than ever before, Fisk begins dealing in human trafficking and snuff films that primarily feature children who are tortured to death. When the dozens of children he has kidnapped are rescued, Fisk has any of his partners who could link him to the snuff ring immediately assassinated so he can get away scot-free.
      • Larks is a self-described sociopath whose only real joy in life is watching people die. Introduced needlessly stabbing a security guard through the eye, Larks serves as Fisk's triggerman who kills dozens of people in the name of their crime syndicate. Larks loves using a fishing knife to slowly murder his victims, and kills everyone from cops, to witnesses, to his own minions when they fail him. Tasked by Fisk to eliminate Rigoletto's loyalists, Larks tortures one to death for information, assassinates others, then burns down an entire casino of people to eliminate the few remaining. Larks then tries to protect the interests of the child snuff ring, and kidnaps a teenage girl to use as a hostage against Daredevil; even when Daredevil surrenders himself, Larks gleefully plans to torture the girl to death anyway.
    • Daredevil: Guardian Devil: Mysterio, Quentin Beck, is a master of illusion who is determined to cement his legacy of supervillainy. Diagnosed with cancer due to the chemicals he has used in his criminal career, Mysterio decides to utterly ruin Daredevil so as to go down in infamy. Drugging and artificially impregnating a teenage girl, Mysterio waits until she gives birth, then murders her parents, tricks her into handing the baby over to Daredevil, then kills the girl as well. Using a variety of disguises and trickery, Mysterio convinces Daredevil that the baby is the Antichrist and nearly drives the hero into killing the infant; to further Daredevil's downward spiral, Mysterio murders Foggy's girlfriend and frames him for it, then convinces Karen Page she has AIDS. After he massacres his dozens of henchmen, Mysterio hires Bullseye and has him murder a church full of nuns, kill Karen, and kidnap the baby so Mysterio can use it as a hostage to set the stage for a final showdown with Daredevil.

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#38777: Mar 7th 2024 at 1:57:08 AM

[tup] Mundus

Abstain on Pappu. Thing with chili is horrible, but I am not sure its enought next to rest of operation.

Not fan of San Francisco images. If I had to pick I would say first works best, but shot and not seeing victim’s face makes it sloppy.

Edited by EmperorGeode on Mar 7th 2024 at 1:59:46 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#38778: Mar 7th 2024 at 2:01:32 AM

Leaning yes to Pappu.

Yes to Mundus. What happens to him?

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
TheGrayFox ...Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
...Phenomenal
#38779: Mar 7th 2024 at 2:08:24 AM

[tup] for Pappu and Mundus.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
AutumnLeaves Since: Mar, 2014
#38780: Mar 7th 2024 at 3:18:56 AM

[tup] Theron, Overgirl, Veronica, the Shadow, Pappu.

I've just found a delightful guy in Beyond This Horizon: McFee Norbert (for whatever reason, people in the future have adopted the Hungarian-style tradition of last name coming before first).

The Work

Beyond This Horizon is a novel by Robert A. Heinlein. Some plot-relevant worldbuilding:

In a distant future, genetical engineering has reached amazing heights, but there's a firm rule of not adding anything to human DNA except what already belongs there. The children are genetically selected, but only in the sense that they are selected among the combinations that this particular couple can produce. Moreover, there's a group of "control naturals" that conceive children without selection, for comparison, just in case some of the "selected" genes turn out to be detrimental after all.

The Character

And, well, some people disagree with the above.

McFee Norbert is the highest-ranking member we (and the main character) learn about in the Survivors' Club, an organization planning to overthrow the government and create a new order of things. He is certain that Genetic Engineering Is the New Nuke. (That's despite two Genetic Wars having proven the concept wrong, when the LEGO Genetics chimeras were absolutely crushed, so he can't even be excused by ignorance).

When Hamilton, the main character, infiltrates the Survivors' Club, McFee shows him what's already being done in their underground labs: there are many barely alive genetically-modified children. For example, there is a baby with ninety-six chromosomes, described by the narration as "an obviously sick child with a head much too big for it", and by McFee as "the most stimulating exhibit": a failed attempt to create a hyperbrain. Hamilton asks why they can't give it a Mercy Kill, but McFee explains that it's kept alive for studies and experimentation, like the rest of it. But he also makes clear that even when successful cases of genetic modification appear, they will be treated as "quite useful supporting types" rather than humans.

Oh, in case you wonder where the children come from? "The male plasm" is supplied by members of the Survivors' Club, and the eggs come from captured "barbarian" women: "barbarians" are the people in Eurasia and Africa who still haven't recovered from the Genetic Wars and are just barely recovering civilization. McFee states that some of the barbarians will be "saved for experimentation", and the rest will be liquidation.

As for the "control naturals" I mentioned above, McFee intends to give them a choice of getting sterilized or becoming a Human Popsicle.

As a cherry on top, he is a Bad Boss in the true Grand High Witch style, burning down (well, with weapons) his underlings for mistakes.

McFee is most likely killed along the rest of the Survivors' Club when they finally do attempt a takeover.

Mitigating issues?

None known.

Heinousness standard?

You'd bet. In that culture, Duel to the Death is permitted and sports with fatalities are encouraged (Hamilton finds football, described by a Human Popsicle time traveler, boring because it doesn't result in deaths), but all of the above has strict rules. Children and parental love, however, are cherished (it's possible to leave a child to be raised entirely in the "development center", but it's proved it has a negative effect).

Hamilton (who is very cynical, especially in the beginning) wants to cut McFee's ears off a bit at a time when he sees the modified babies and learns about his plans of genocide of the "barbarians".

We don't know if there was anyone superior to McFee in the Survivors' Club, but even if there was, McFee is clearly in full agreement with its ideas himself.

Conclusion?

Keeper.

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#38782: Mar 7th 2024 at 3:47:55 AM

What exactly is Norbert's endgame? Like, what exactly is this new order he wants?

Edited by ACW on Mar 7th 2024 at 6:52:48 AM

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
AutumnLeaves Since: Mar, 2014
#38783: Mar 7th 2024 at 4:51:31 AM

A "scientific" state, as he calls it; with the “natural” leaders (himself included, of course) sitting on top and the rest of the population genetically modified to serve them in various ways.

WilyGryphon Since: Apr, 2023
#38784: Mar 7th 2024 at 4:54:30 AM

[tdown] to all of the proposed images

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Libraryseraph Showtime! from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Showtime!
#38786: Mar 7th 2024 at 5:58:27 AM

[tup] To Mcfee and Mundus and tentatively for Pappu

Absolute destiny... apeachalypse?
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#38787: Mar 7th 2024 at 6:30:20 AM

Can we trim Bishop and Dancing Joker? I've got work related stuff to do.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
NicMasterTrope (Newbie)
#38788: Mar 7th 2024 at 7:35:15 AM

Is proposal on Admiral Zhao from Netflix series has been made? I'm asking because I'm preparing to propose him

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#38790: Mar 7th 2024 at 7:36:28 AM

The show is reserved and just because they didn't post anything the moment midnight rolled around doesn't mean it's up for grabs

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
#38791: Mar 7th 2024 at 8:07:05 AM

Also please stop asking questions about whether someone has been proposed or not, 99% of the time it can be answered with a less than 30 second google search.

[tup]Norbert, Mundus, Pappu

In honor of Akira Toriyama
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#38792: Mar 7th 2024 at 8:48:35 AM

[tup]norbert

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ErikModi Knight Bachelor from Where ComStar can't find me. Since: Mar, 2012 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Knight Bachelor
#38793: Mar 7th 2024 at 8:48:49 AM

@ACW: Trimmed Dancing Joker in drafts. Sad to lose some of the info, but it is what it is.

KazuyaProta Shin Megami Tensei IV from A Industrial Farm Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Shin Megami Tensei IV
#38794: Mar 7th 2024 at 8:59:10 AM

[tup] Mc Fee Norbert

[tup] Mundus

[tup] Shadow

[tup] Veronica Cale

[tup] Buddy Winston

Watch me destroying my country
TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#38795: Mar 7th 2024 at 9:05:10 AM

[tup] for Pappu Thekedar, Mundus and Mc Fee Norbert.

Eggy0 Wizards Don't Own Cats (she/her) (Not-So-Newbie) Relationship Status: Faithful to 2D
Wizards Don't Own Cats (she/her)
#38796: Mar 7th 2024 at 11:37:46 AM

[self redacted]

Edited by Eggy0 on Mar 7th 2024 at 8:10:34 PM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#38797: Mar 7th 2024 at 11:38:18 AM

Movie is already reserved and you can't reserve specific characters

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Atlantis1930 from Wessex (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
#38798: Mar 7th 2024 at 11:40:55 AM

I have returned after being MIA. Here are my long overdue writeups. Sorry for the massive delay. Adding to drafts.

  • The Bill: Series 15 "Age Of Chivalry": Craig Sutton is an animalistic Serial Rapist. Terrifying even his own mother with his vicious misogyny, Craig grew to hate women at a young age to due to percieved social rejection. Befriending a man named Murray at a restaurant the two both work at, Craig manipulated him into aiding him in brutally raping a woman. Making Murray his driver, Craig went onto rape a further 3 women at knife point with his brutality even disgusting hardened officers and causing one of his victims to commit suicide. When the police began to suspect him after a victim identifies him, Craig bludgeoned Murray Watkins to death in order to cover up his tracks. Despite his low victim count, Craig stood out as one of the most brutal rapists in the entire show.
  • The Foreigner(2017): Hugh Mcgrath is the one responsible for the IRA's brutal bombing campaign of London. A bloodthirsty IRA terrorist with a reputation for brutality even among his organization, Mc Grath grew enraged at Liam Hennessy brokering peace with the British government. After Hennessy decides to run a fake bombing campaign with dud bomb in order to gain pardons for IRA members, Mc Grath hijacks the plan and arms the bombs with his own semtex. Personally directing the bombers and encouraging them to massacre as many civilian targets as possible, Mcgrath has the rogue cell bomb a shop and a packed bus, killing dozens including women and children. Directing the cell to take down the British prime minister on board her own plane, Mc Grath planned on framing Hennessy to ensure his full cooperation.

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#38799: Mar 7th 2024 at 11:42:12 AM

[tup] Mcfee, Pappu

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Atlantis1930 from Wessex (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines

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