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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

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A Girl, Just One of Many Kinds
#26127: Sep 18th 2023 at 11:46:15 AM

It seems this candidate was rejected a few years ago, but I think he can be reaxamined a bit more.

What’s The Work?

Oldboy (2013) is a thriller created by Spike Lee in 2013, based on the famous South Korea movie in 2003 directed by Park Chan-woo (which is self loosely based on a manage series by Garon Tsuchiya). Centering around Joe Doucett, an alcoholhic executive and kinda deadbeat dad being kidnapped and held hostage in solitary confinement for 20 years, and being released he goes on an hunt on who kidnapped him in the first place. Now the main villain for the movie, named Adrian Pryce (based on the original movie version Lee Woo-Jin) definitely doesn’t count for his tragedy and sympathetic qualities (possibly even more now). But there’s also this guy.

Who is Arthur Pryce? What Does He Do?

The Greater-Scope Villain who died decades before the movie, Arthur is the father of Adrian. Unlike the original movie, where Lee Woo-Jin had a consensual relationship with his sister. However, in this movie, turning up the Squick factor, it’s revealed that Arthur Pryce has frequently sexually abused the young Adrian and his sister, Amanda, for years, all the while Arthur manipulated the two into thinking it was simp,e unconditional love on both parts. One night, a teenage Joe discovers Arthur having relations with Amanda in the greenhouse.

Starting the rumor about Amanda having relations with an older man, until it spreader like the plague and eventually Arthur’s actions were exposed. Quickly moving his family to Luxembourg, and scared of the consequences of his actions, he uses a shotgun and murders his family, before turning the gun on himself. However, Adrian survived the massacre and his abuse twisted his mind into swearing vengeance against Joe for spreading what he saw, kickstarting the plot years later.

Mitigating Factors?

Despite Arthur being flat due to only appearing in two flashbacks (speaking in one) and being long dead, his disgusting actions paint the entire movie, and it’s made clear by the narrative that he was a lecherous manipulator who made his children think his actions were love, which is made pretty clear that isn’t the case, especially when he murders his family in the end. So the story makes it very clear that Arthur is simply a manipulative and even cowardly sexual abuser who preyed on his own children and killed them (seemingly) and himself when his secretes were discovered.

Heinous Standard?

While his son Adrian is a special kind of evil himself (especially for the infamous part of getting Joe to have sex with his own daughter), however for his lack of screentime, Arthur created the monster Adrian is and kickstarted the plot. molesting his two young children for years (so much that when he so much comes into the room the two are ready to well uh, get started) and manipulating them into thinking it was love, before he proceeds to murder his daughter, wife and seemingly their son, which turns his son into a vengeful maniac who wanted to get vengeance on Joe for spreading the rumor that “ruined” his family.

Verdict?

Gonna lean yes to Arthur.

Keep Fighting. Keep Loving.
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#26128: Sep 18th 2023 at 11:55:37 AM

[tup] to Arthur.

I have a quote to propose about Smaug from The Hobbit:

"The King Under the Mountain is dead! I took his throne, I ate his people like a wolf among sheep! I kill where I wish, when I wish!"

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#26129: Sep 18th 2023 at 12:09:04 PM

Wasnt pryce shot down. He has zero character. check 3:30-4:00. He doesn't emote, talk or even react.

All we get is crazy speculation from his son.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
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#26130: Sep 18th 2023 at 12:09:57 PM

Oh, if that is the case, then yeah... [tdown] for no characterization.

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#26131: Sep 18th 2023 at 12:10:53 PM

No to Arthur based on the lack of characterization.

Feels good, don't it?
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#26132: Sep 18th 2023 at 12:11:57 PM

[tdown] to Arthur

Smaug quote sounds good.

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#26134: Sep 18th 2023 at 12:36:56 PM

I will say that his other scene where Joe finds him and his daughter does have him talk, but either way the story does portray Arthur with some personality, clearly portraying him as a creep who manipulated his children and conditioning them

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#26135: Sep 18th 2023 at 1:00:37 PM

Haven't we voted up candidates before who have had little or no screentime/characterization? We just go by hearsay based on how their actions affected current-day events? I swear this has happened many times before but the person gets up-voted because "there's enough evidence" and whatnot.

Also at this point, since more people are doing it, everyone please stop asking about people leaving the forum(s) or the about the protests or whatever. You can send messages to people privately about it. This isn't the forum to discuss this.

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#26136: Sep 18th 2023 at 1:05:03 PM

Mmm... if he does have some personality, then I guess he's okay then?

Like I think there's a difference between a character who is flat and has a simple personality/motives vs. total enigma. Looking back at the discussion, looks like he lacks even the smallest of being onscreen. Like his actions are heinous, but can't really say if he appears adequately enough.

But there have been changes to things like that, so...guess he's fine. Unless he's actually just defined by the crimes he committed is what it sounds like in the original discussion.

Edited by AustinDR on Sep 18th 2023 at 1:39:28 AM

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#26137: Sep 18th 2023 at 1:15:18 PM

[up][up] Agreed, the current situation is NOT a topic to be discussing on a thread.

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#26138: Sep 18th 2023 at 1:39:17 PM

[up][up][up] Yeah I feel like there is just enough to show Arthur’s character through his actions and what he left behind in his minimal scenes

Edited by MermaidEyes15 on Sep 18th 2023 at 4:39:26 AM

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#26139: Sep 18th 2023 at 1:40:28 PM

Abstaining. Leaning towards a slight yes after reading a little more.

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#26140: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:22:13 PM

Him speaking is enough characterization IMHO, don't see the problem with him going up—leaning [tup] on Pryce.

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#26141: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:24:20 PM

I'll give a [tup] for Arthur Pryce, especially since he seems to have some characterization….. Doesn't make him less of a disgusting bastard though.

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#26143: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:26:43 PM

[tup] Arthur Pryce

Edited by Siegfried1337 on Sep 18th 2023 at 2:26:57 AM

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#26144: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:27:05 PM

[tup] to Arthur.

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Tyk5919 Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
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#26145: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:31:29 PM

Yeah, if Arthur Pryce shows up enough to show some characterization, then [tup] for him.

We've approved villains who were only onscreen for a few seconds and in some cases said only three words and approved multiple villains who said nothing at all.

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#26146: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:32:54 PM

Who was the GOT villain?

Sure to Arthur I guess.

Nobody counts from Payback in Death. Only 1 murder and 1 attempted. Doesn't pass baseline, much less the standard for the series.

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#26147: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:36:52 PM

Sure to Arthur, based on what personality he apparently shows.

Feels good, don't it?
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#26148: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:42:10 PM

[up][up] The Mad King, I believe. Hell, one of my own candidates, Col. Sadick, has zero voice lines.

Edited by TheMadCr0w on Sep 18th 2023 at 6:42:21 AM

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#26149: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:43:24 PM

[up][up][up] Areys Targaryen. He only says "Burn them all!" on camera.

Sure to Arthur.

Edited by Beast on Sep 18th 2023 at 2:43:46 AM

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#26150: Sep 18th 2023 at 2:55:55 PM

[tup] Arthur. As far as I can tell, characters with few lines or screen time can still qualify if they show personality through their actions.

[tup] to the Parallel as well now that I played the game, since we approved candidates before who showed a bit of mercy for entirely selfish reasons.

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