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For Woobie, Destroyer of Worlds: Blade from Red Earth. He was originally Leo's personal bodyguard and best friend. When Leo defeated Hauzer, his advisors told him that one of his guards was captured by Scion, this bodyguard in question was Blade. As Leo knew this he went into the search of blade, only to discover that Blade was turned into Scion's bodyguard via brainwashing, and had no choice but being forcedly to put an end to his friend's life. Finally, when he won the fight, Blade's possesion went off, and as he gained consciousness he felt remorse of the evil actions that he did, then he revealed Scion's fortress, and finally he vanished from existence. Leo was mourning at Blade's death, after the death of his friend, he went to kill Scion as a form of revenge

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edited 31st Jul '17 7:31:01 PM by Caripija_XXX

Katsugeki/Touken Ranbu

• Nightmare Fuel:
• In the fifth episode, "The Fires of War", after the Revisionst army succeed destroying Edo and sending the entire town on fire. This makes it feels like for once, the villains won instead of the heroes.

Funny page: "What I Wanted to Protect":

• After Konnosuke create an pocket watch for the Second Unit, Mutsunokami and Horikawa thought he also made it for everyone in the team to used for there mission, but sadly, Konnosuke can only make one.

edited 1st Aug '17 11:53:49 AM by AzuraBlu22

@ Azura Blu 22

• It was a hint that something bad was about to happen. ->
  • It is a hint that something bad is about to happen. (How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense)
• It is confirmed in the episode 5 -> It is confirmed in the episode 5
• where the Revisionists came up another plan and succeed of ->
  • where the Revisionists come up with another plan and succeed at

This violates Example Indentation. Since the items are two parts of the same example, they should be merged together.

• after he made a pocket watch is pretty funny, but it also ->
  • after he makes a pocket watch is pretty funny, but it also

Because you started off the sentence with "Although", the "but" is unnecessary.

• it also put the other members at the disadvantage -> it also puts the other members at a disadvantage

• It meaning that would hard time for everyone of not knowing

I'm not sure what you meant to say here. I think you meant:

• This means that everyone else will have a hard time because of not knowing
• the time where the Revisonist will make -> the time when the Revisonists will make
• who is charge -> who is in charge
• this end ups becoming an Downer Ending -> this ends up becoming a Downer Ending
• where the Second Unit were forced -> where the Second Unit is forced
• The history been alter greatly, many lives were lost ->
  • The History has been altered greatly, many lives have been lost
• half of the Second Unit, horribly injured -> half of the Second Unit has been horribly injured

@AzuraBlu22

• after the Revisionst army succeed destroying Edo and sending the entire town on fire. ->
  • after the Revisionst army succeeds in destroying Edo by setting the entire town on fire.
• This makes it feels like -> This makes it feel like

• After Konnosuke create an pocket watch -> After Konnosuke creates a pocket watch
• Mutsunokami and Horikawa thought he also made it for everyone in the team to used for there mission ->
  • Mutsunokami and Horikawa think he also made one for everyone in the team to use for their mission

Thank you, Arivne. I'll try to be more careful next time.

Touken Ranbu Character page: Nikkari Aoe:

• Mismatched Eyes: Subverted in his Kiwame form. It implied that the reason why his right eye is red was because a ghost possess his sword since both of his eyes are gold in his awaken sprite.
• Our Ghosts Are Different: A malevolent woman ghost can be seen behind Nikkari in his Kiwame awaken sprite.

Namazuo Toushirou:

• Hair Decoration: He wears a longer red cord after his Kiwame training.

edited 2nd Aug '17 4:42:58 PM by AzuraBlu22

• It implied that the reason why his right eye is red was because a ghost possess his sword since ->
  • It implies that the reason why his right eye is red is because a ghost possessed his sword, since

The first two changes are because of How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

edited 3rd Aug '17 3:02:10 AM by Arivne

Touken Ranbu Character Page: Izuminokami Kanesada

• Roaring Rampage of Revenge: In Katsugeki, Izuminokami is greatly horrify after the destruction of Edo cause by the Revisionist. Blind by rage, he takes out his anger on them and attempt to kill all of them without coming up with a strategy.

Mouri Toushirou:

• Last-Name Basis: Inverted. His first name comes from the Mouri Clan.

edited 4th Aug '17 8:25:58 PM by AzuraBlu22

I am thinking of creating a page for pre-retcon Beyonder. Just need to know a few things to avoid confusion for people not familiar with the character.

It says the beyonders powers are "vaguely unlimited" and have no clearly defined extent. But i can't understand the difference between "vaguely unlimited" and "vaguely limited". To me both appears to mean the same thing. Thank you.

I'm not sure that "vaguely unlimited" has any syntactic meaning whatsoever, so I'd go with the latter. "Vaguely limited" should mean, if read literally, that the limits themselves are vague — that is, that they are not clearly defined and may change as the story requires. "Unlimited" is an absolute; it cannot be modified.

@AzuraBlu22:

• Izuminokami is greatly horrify after the destruction of Edo cause by the Revisionist. ->
  • Izuminokami is greatly horrified after the destruction of Edo caused by the Revisionists.
• Blind by rage, he takes out his anger on them and attempt to ->
  • Blinded by rage, he takes out his anger on them and attempts to

edited 5th Aug '17 6:38:32 AM by Arivne

Katsugeki/Touken Ranbu Awesome Page: Citadel

• The Saniwa uses special white talismans to save Tonbokiri's life and restore the blade of his spear in the repair room.

Funny Page: Citadel

• The seven Konnosukes were taking about fried tofu instead of discussing important events first.

• Tonbokiri wakes up from his coma after the Saniwa heal his wounds. The Second Unit (except Izuminokami) and Konnosuke is glad to see him alright.

Tearjerker Page: Citadel

• This episode ends up becoming a Bittersweet Ending for the Second Unit. With everyone in the Unit make it out alive, Tonbokiri woke up from comatose state and history hasn't been altered, but Izuminokami suffer from Heroic BSOD after the destruction of Edo. He becomes guilty of unable to protect the town and innocent people forever lost, desperate to get stronger in his current injured state and secretly blames himself for Tonbokiri's injuries.

edited 5th Aug '17 9:20:23 PM by AzuraBlu22

• The seven Konnosukes were taking about -> The seven Konnosukes were talking about

• Tonbokiri wakes up from his coma after the Saniwa heal ->
  • Tonbokiri wakes up from his coma after the Saniwa heals
• is glad to see him alright. -> is glad to see that he's all right.

• With everyone in the Unit make it out alive -> With Everyone in the Unit makes it out alive,
• Tonbokiri woke up from comatose state and history hasn't been altered ->
  • Tonbokiri wakes up from a comatose state and history isn't altered

How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense

• but Izuminokami suffer from Heroic BSOD -> but Izuminokami suffers from a Heroic BSoD
• He becomes guilty of unable to protect the town and innocent people forever lost ->
  • He feels guilty about being unable to protect the town and the innocent people who are forever lost
• desperate to get stronger -> is desperate to get stronger

edited 6th Aug '17 2:13:52 AM by Arivne

For Bridge to Terabithia

For Jesse Aarons Jr:

• Adaptation Dye-Job: Is blonde in the book, but has black hair in the film.
• Middle Child Syndrome: Has two older sisters and two younger ones.
• Mistaken for Gay: In the book (It's from the 70's), since his only friend is a girl, his parents are at first afraid that he might be gay.
• Precocious Crush: Has a crush on his music teacher Ms.Edmunds <—Also, please remove the Teacher/Student Romance since it's a one-sided crush, so it doesn't fit the trope.
• Took a Level in Kindness: Downplayed, he has always been nice, but at first he was mean with his younger sister May Belle.
• "Well Done, Son" Guy: He really wishes to get his father approval, but the latter is always cold and distant to him. In the end, his father helps him to overcome the trauma of Leslie's deaht.

For Leslie Burke:

• Adaptation Dye-Job: Like Jesse, only that her hair is black in the book, while is blonde in the movie.
• Cloud Cuckoo Lander: A mild example, but her imagination is always active.
• Girliness Upgrade: When you're played by a young Annasophia Robb, you cannot be mistaken for a boy like in the book.
• Manic Pixie Dream Girl: She raises Jesse's morale and life with the creation of Terabithia. Her death brings him in an Heroic BSoD.
• MsImagination: She's the one who imagine Terabithia.
• Tomboy: Moreso in the book, while in the movie she gets a Girliness Upgrade.

If someone, after the correction, could edit, they would do a big favor. Also, put a big spoiler warning on the top of the page.

Since it has a lot of sentences to edit, I just can't risk myself.

For PlayingWith/ComeAlone:

Basic Trope: A person tells another person from an opposing side to meet up at a location alone, with a clear implication that it would have an ambush.

• Straight: Emperor Evulz tells Hiro to meet him at Evul Island and tells Hiro not to bring anyone with him, in order to lure him into an ambush. Hiro obligates, only to reveal that Evulz has brought his own army to take down Hiro.
• Exaggerated: Emperor Evulz tells Hiro to meet him at Evul Island, and Evulz himself is standing on the island alone to pretend he didn't set up an ambush, only to reveal that he has set up a Kill Sat at the outer space to shoot down Hiro.
• Justified: Emperor Evulz believes that Hiro is too innocent to suspect anyone.
• Inverted: Emperor Evulz tells Hiro to bring as many people as he can, and gloats that he would come alone and wipe out all of them on his own.
• Subverted:
  • It turns out Evulz does fulfill his promise, both Hiro and Evulz are alone.
  • It turns out Evulz fulfills his promise and meets Hiro alone, however, Hiro doesn't, as he have brought his entire team to take down Evulz. Needless to say, it ends with a Curb-Stomp Battle.
  • Both side fully expect their opponents would break their promise and bring their own men.
• Double Subverted:
  • However, their men break the promise without their leaders' acknowledgement.
  • It turns out to be a fatal mistake, as Evulz plans to take every last one of Hiro's men with him. As Evulz detonates the bombs planted on the island, he mocks Hiros for breaking their promise.
  • And then Hiro and Evulz order their men to back off so they can initiate an honorable duel.
• Zig Zagged: ???
• Parodied: Hiro fulfills the promise to come alone, with a bit of twist: Since his pet dog doesn't count as a "person"...
• Averted: Evulz doesn't tell Hiro to have any meeting, or at least doesn't insist the latter to come alone.
• Lampshaded:
  "What? Did you literally expect me to come alone?"
• Invoked: Hiros outright ask Evulz whether he should come alone.
• Exploited:
  • Evulz fully expects Hiro to bring his allies, as his real motive is to sabotage Hiro's home when everyone's gone.
  • Hiro fully expects Evulz would bring his men, so he straps a bomb onto himself to take down every last one of them.
  • Alternatively, Hiro has his own Thanatos Gambit in mind.
• Defied:
  • When Evulz attempts to contact Hiro, Hiro outright shoots Evulz before he can initiate the meeting.
• Discussed: ???
• Conversed: ???
• Deconstructed: ???
• Reconstructed: ???
• Played For Laughs: ???
• Played For Drama: ???

edited 7th Aug '17 2:26:59 AM by Mhazard

@simonsolly

• Downplayed, he has always been nice, but at first he was mean with his younger sister ->
  • Downplayed. He has always been nice, but at first he was mean to his younger sister
• He really wishes to get his father approval -> He really wishes to get his father's approval
• Leslie's deaht -> Leslie's death
• Like Jesse

Don't leave out information and use a reference to another example. See How to Write an Example - Remember That This Is A Wiki.

• only that her hair is black in the book, while is blonde in the movie. ->
  • only that her hair is black in the book and blonde in the movie.
• Cloud Cuckoo Lander: A mild example, but her imagination is always active.

This is a Zero-Context Example. How does she act like a Cloud Cuckoo Lander?

• She raises Jesse's morale and life -> ??? You can't raise someone's life.
• Her death brings him in an Heroic -> Her death causes him to suffer a Heroic
• She's the one who imagine Terabithia. -> She's the one who imagines Terabithia.
• Tomboy: Moreso in the book, while in the movie she gets a Girliness Upgrade.

See above. What about her makes her a Tomboy?

@Mhazard

• Hiro obligates, only to reveal that Evulz has -> Hiro obliges him, only for Evulz to reveal that he has
• to pretend he didn't set up an ambush...at the outer space ->
  • to pretend he hasn't set up an ambush...in outer space
• and gloats that he would come alone -> and gloats that he will come alone
• It turns out Evulz does fulfill his promise, both Hiro and Evulz are alone. ->
  • It turns out Evulz does fulfill his promise: both Hiro and Evulz are alone.
• Hiro doesn't, as he have -> Hiro doesn't, as he has
• Both side fully expect their opponents would -> Both side fully expect their opponents will
• he mocks Hiros for breaking their promise -> he mocks Hiros' men for breaking their promise
• with a bit of twist -> with a bit of a twist
• Evulz doesn't tell Hiro to have any meeting, or at least doesn't insist the latter to come alone. ->
  • Evulz doesn't invite Hiro to a meeting, or at least doesn't insist that the latter to come alone.
• Lampshaded:
  "What? Did you literally expect me to come alone?"

The moderators have stated that just a line of dialogue is a Zero-Context Example. Please add enough context to make it clear that it fits the trope.

• Hiros outright ask Evulz -> Hiro outright asks Evulz

Correction

For Bridge to Terabithia

For Jesse Aarons Jr:

• Adaptation Dye-Job: Is blonde in the book, but has black hair in the film.
• Middle Child Syndrome: Has two older sisters and two younger ones.
• Mistaken for Gay: In the book (It's from the 70's), since his only friend is a girl, his parents are at first afraid that he might be gay.
• Precocious Crush: Has a crush on his music teacher Ms.Edmunds <—Also, please remove the Teacher/Student Romance since it's a one-sided crush, so it doesn't fit the trope.
• Took a Level in Kindness: Downplayed. He has always been nice, but at first he was mean to his younger sister May Belle.
• "Well Done, Son" Guy: He really wishes to get his father's approval, but the latter is always cold and distant to him. In the end, his father helps him to overcome the trauma of Leslie's death.

For Leslie Burke:

• Adaptation Dye-Job: Like Jesse, who's blonde in the book and has black hair in the movie, only that Leslie's hair is black in the book and is blonde in the movie.
• Cloud Cuckoo Lander: Has a vivid imagination, and is constantly "playing" Terabithia, even at school.
• Girliness Upgrade: When you're played by a young Annasophia Robb, you cannot be mistaken for a boy like in the book.
• Manic Pixie Dream Girl: After meeting Leslie, Jesse's life becomes more colorful. Her death causes him to suffer a Heroic BSoD.
• MsImagination: She's the one who imagines Terabithia.
• Tomboy: She dresses with masculine clothes and has a Boyish Short Hair, moreso in the book, while in the movie she gets a Girliness Upgrade.

If someone could edit, they would do a big favor. Also, put a big spoiler warning on the top of the page.

Touken Ranbu Character page: Mouri Toushirou

• Rare Random Drop: Like his other brothers, Hakata and Hirano, he is more difficult to find compared to his brothers. Since his first debut in limited event that lasted late July to early August 2017, he can only be recruited (sorry about that) in the 50th floor.

• Height Angst: Implied, The reason Mouri doesn't like to talk about his height is because he either he doesn't want people to mistaken or treat him like a child even though he looks like one.

• Character Development: He travels wandering around in the night to search for his former master for his Kiwame training. Through his letters, he currently stays at the Kyougoku clan, who been taking good care of him. He learns the head of the household, Takatsugu, was being gossiped about and insulted behind his back as someone who came to power only because of the influence of his master. He knows that Takatsugu fought valiantly at Sekigahara, he gained a foothold to bring about the restoration of the clan. He says if other people say anything, then all he need to do is to prove them otherwise. He asks them how far they far will go on their journey, but he decides to help them answer the question once he returns from his training.

Horikawa Kunihiro

• Character Development: Horikawa infiltration into the Shinsengumi and work side by side by his former master, Hijikata Toshizou during his Kiwame training. Through his letters, he ask the Saniwa about Izuminokami if he been doing alright since his absent. After the Samurai Era come to the end, Horikawa gain new found determination to fight with all his might.

Koryuu Kagmitsu:

• Hair Decorations: He wears black barrettes both sides of his hair that gives a symbolic representative meaning.
• Tarot Motifs: The Strength. If you add XI(9) with II (2) and equal eleven since it makes since it's representative creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized. However, on left side of his hair, XII (12) representative "The Hanged Man" meaning self-sacrifice or stages in life.

edited 8th Aug '17 10:36:07 AM by AzuraBlu22

• Like his other brothers, Hakata and Hirano, he is more difficult to find compared to his brothers.
  • He is more difficult to find than his brothers Hakata and Hirano.
• Since his first debut in limited event that lasted late July ->
  • Since his first debut in a limited event that lasted from late July
• he can only be obtained in the floor 50. -> I have no idea what this means. Maybe some more explanation?
• Implied, The reason Mouri -> Implied. The reason Mouri
• because he either he doesn't want people to mistaken ->
  • because he either he doesn't want people to mistake

• He travels wandering around in the night -> He travels, wandering around in the night
• Through his letters, he currently stays at the Kyougoku clan

This doesn't make any sense. How can you stay somewhere through your letters?

• who took good care of him. -> who take good care of him.
• He learns the head of the household, Takatsugu, was being ->
  • He learns that the head of the household, Takatsugu, is being

"Took" and "was" are changed as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

How is this an example of Character Development? How has his character changed?

• Horikawa infiltration into the Shinsengumi and work side by side by ->
  • Horikawa infiltrates the Shinsengumi and works side by side with
• Through his letters, he ask the Saniwa about Izuminokami if he been...since his absent. ->
  • Through his letters, he asks the Saniwa if Izuminokami has been...since his absence.
• After the Samurai Era come to the end, Horikawa gain ->
  • After the Samurai Era comes to an end, Horikawa gains
• He wears black barrettes both sides of his hair that gives a symbolic representative meaning. ->
  • He wears black barrettes on both sides of his hair that have a symbolic representative meaning.

What symbolic representative meaning do they have?

• If you add XI(9) with II (2) and equal eleven -> XI(9) added to II (2) equals eleven
• since it makes since it's representative creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized.
  • which represents creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of a desire to be recognized.
• However, on left side of his hair, XII (12) representative "The Hanged Man" meaning ->
  • However, on the left side of his hair, XII (12) represents "The Hanged Man", meaning
• stages in life -> stages in his life

Ah, so that's the symbolic representative meaning you were referring to?

• have a symbolic representative meaning. -> have a symbolic representative meaning based on Tarot Motifs.

edited 8th Aug '17 5:35:37 AM by Arivne

I'm sorry, Arivne. Let me explain for Tarot Motifs that I was explaining about the roman numerals and kind of forgot. XII symbolize as "The Hermit" means isolated or alone and II symbolize as "The Priestess" as quiet, reserved, hardworking, and very intelligent. (That Tarot are usual for women).

I tried my best to fixed and to explain what I mean for character development for Nikkari Aoe and Horikawa Kunihiro page.

edited 10th Aug '17 7:39:27 AM by AzuraBlu22

I have to make this question in a forum, and I want to be sure it's written correctly (It's a bit long), also, if you want, you can already answer too.

I'm writing a very, very long story with Loads And Loads Of Characters (I like creating characters, thankfully they're divided into groups so I can easily keep track on them), and one of them happen to be transexual (biologically female, but identify as male).

Just to be clear, I didn't create him just for the sake of a Token Minority but a friend of mine one day asked me to draw an androgynous character, so I drew it and I liked it, but I wanted to give him a gender, and in the end I decided to make him a ftm transgender (To be precise, a trans male vampire butler). Also, since in Italy transexuality is a heated topic to say the least, there will be only a few criptic hints that he's biologically female (the setting is a medieval fantasy, so no sex-change operation) like the uniform being tight around his chest.

Then I gave him a personality, a fighting style and a role in the story, the only missing thing was a name. I've decided to give him a name wich sounds gender-neutral, tough leaning toward feminity since he was born female and, and I came up with Frannie. However, after a while, I realized it sounds similar to "trannie" which, if I'm not wrong, is a bad term, so, do you think it's better if I change the name?

edited 9th Aug '17 10:00:50 AM by simonsolly

Thank you, Arivne for those edits a page back. I have this somewhat long one for Rick and Morty:

• Jerkass Woobie: Jerry also counts; it’s undeniable that his life is utterly miserable. Even ignoring his massive insecurities and overall lack of his success he has to live with a Mad Scientist Father-in-law who openly mocks and belittles him every at every attempt he gets, with it being blatantly obvious the whole family like (or at least respect) Rick more than him meaning he has to bare the dangers and discomforts of all the problems Rick brings, with no else agreeing that Rick makes their lives harder. He has also spent seventeen years in an unhappy marriage to Beth who regularly (sometimes intentionally) makes him feel inferior, his own children barely respect him, he loses his job early in the first season and spends most of the show unemployed, and is easily the shows biggest Butt-Monkey, to point that in season three that the wind itself calls him a “loser”. However, he is also a cowardly idiot whose nearly always makes things worse due to his own stupidity or headstrong refusal to back down. Exploited his own daughter for money. Has a habit of letting even the most minor successes go completely his head, and can be incredible selfish at times, to the point that he’s ignored his own families obvious problems, has willingly endangered four million innocent lives, and even his own son just as long as he benefits.

A couple of tropes for My Hero Academia - Other Heroes

For Ryukyu

• Non-Mammalian Hair: She keeps her hair even when trasformed into a dragon.
• Non-Mammal Mammaries: In her dragon form, you can see she still has a prominent chest under her qipao.
• Scaled Up: With her quirk she can transform in a dragon.
• Super-Strength: When transformed into a dragon, she easily matches villain whose quirk is really Super-Strength.

edited 10th Aug '17 12:27:44 AM by simonsolly

@MGD 107

• overall lack of his success he -> overall lack of his success, he
• Father-in-law -> father-in-law
• who openly mocks and belittles him every at every attempt he gets ->
  • who openly mocks and belittles him every at every opportunity
• blatantly obvious the whole family -> blatantly obvious that the whole family
• the whole family like (or at least respect) Rick more than him meaning ->
  • the whole family likes (or at least respects) Rick more than him, meaning
• he has to bare the dangers and discomforts -> he has to bear the dangers and discomforts

This sentence is way too long and needs to be broken up.

• (sometimes intentionally) -> (and sometimes intentionally)
• and is easily the shows biggest -> and is easily the show's biggest
• to point that in season three that the wind itself -> to the point that in season three that the wind itself

I was tempted to try to break up that second long sentence, but you did it correctly. It's mostly a list, so being longer than usual is O.K.

• he is also a cowardly idiot whose nearly -> he is also a cowardly idiot who nearly
• Exploited his own daughter for money. -> He exploited his own daughter for money.
• Has a habit of letting -> He has a habit of letting
• go completely his head -> go completely to his head
• his own families obvious problems -> his own family's obvious problems
• and even his own son just as long as he benefits. ->
  • and even his own son's life just as long as he benefits.

edited 10th Aug '17 6:22:08 AM by Arivne

@simonsolly

• trasformed -> transformed
• With her quirk she can transform in a dragon. -> With her quirk, she can transform into a dragon.
• she easily matches villain -> she easily matches a villain

edited 10th Aug '17 6:24:53 AM by Arivne