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Welcome to the Magnificent Bastard proposal thread! This is the thread where new Magnificent Bastard examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential mitigating features will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the MB subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite MB" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from other parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for MB equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, their goals and methodology, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some characters, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

How are they Magnificent?

This is the point where you highlight the character's brilliance. How to they convey their intelligence and charm to the audience? What makes them stand out among the crowd? What are their goals and how do they go about accomplishing them? This part welcomes a lot of creative thinking — not everyone has to be a Machiavellian Diabolical Mastermind to be worth considering here! This is also the time to showcase how the character can think on their feet if it's necessary.

How are they a Bastard? How are they not too bad?

What kinds of moral lines is this character willing to cross for the sake of their goal? Are they willing to let innocents die? Start wars? Commit crimes? The character has to show some kind of unscrupulousness in order to count as a "Bastard". Notably, this character does not necessarily have to be the villain, and an Anti-Hero can cross the line if they're immoral enough, but they have to be immoral somehow.

This is also the section where you then state your case for why they're not too bad. Perhaps their good intentions help mitigate their crimes. Perhaps others are shown to be much worse than them. Perhaps they're prone to Pet the Dog moments or are even fighting on behalf of loved ones. Whatever the case, there are certain lines that an MB can't cross, but as long as their villainy is reasonable for their goal, they can be considered.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:40:56 AM

therealjackieboy Carrot Clone from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Carrot Clone
#12151: Mar 26th 2024 at 9:32:02 AM

Hey guys, been a while since my last proposal. Figured I'd return here with a candidate from a crazy game.

What’s the Work?

Takeshi's Challenge is an insane and very difficult Famicom/NES game from 1986 by the one and only Takeshi Kitano, who created the game as one massive middle finger to gamers and video games in general. While the game never left Japan, there exists an English fan translation online.

The game concerns a nameless salaryman who can do whatever he wants. You can drink, you can sing karaoke, you can take guitar lessons, you can kill your wife and kids, it's basically proto-GTA. But there is a plot to this game, which is impossible to find out how to progress unless you have a guide; which was Kitano's intention. You only get one life, and when you lose it, you're going all the way back to the beginning. And did I mention this game is hard?

To progress, the player must quit their job, get drunk, divorce your wife, find secret stashes of money, take Shamisen lessons, waste more money playing pachinko, and sing three songs at karaoke bar. All while defending yourself from Yakuza thugs who won't leave you alone, and can drain your health in seconds. And we haven't even gotten to the hardest part of the game yet.

Everything changes though when this man shows up.

Who is He?

The nameless old man is a supposedly wise fellow who hands the salaryman a treasure map after defeating some Yakuza thugs at a karaoke bar.

What does he do?

With the map being a blank piece of paper, the old man is nevertheless confident that the salaryman will "solve the map’s riddle". This requires the player to do some crazy shit to reveal the map’s true contents (like either soak it in water between 5-10 real life minutes and "cry" into the second controller microphone/press the A button, or leave it in the sun without touching the controller for an hour).

But the true motives of the old man aren’t revealed until literally the end of the game. After going through so much torment getting to the treasure, the old man appears before you at the very last second revealing that he was actually after the treasure as well, and that he was just following the player all this time in order to find it. The old man then kills the player and successfully claims the treasure for himself, netting the player a game over and requiring them to play through the entire game all over again.

So to get around this kaizo trap, the player has to actually beat the old man to death at the karaoke bar before venturing off to the island.

Is he charming? Intelligent? Able to think on his feet?

The old man appears to be a wise sage type who promises the salaryman treasure, but really is just using him to reveal the contents of the map, and secretly follows him all the way to the treasure in order to steal it all for himself. And he succeeds, too. Well, if you don't kill him before heading to the island, but that requires hindsight to have known to do that. When you think about it, the old man was the first Kaizo Trap in gaming.

It helps too that the salaryman, canonically, is a piece of shit. Considering he literally gets drunk, divorces his wife (possibly beats her and his kids), and quits his job just to hunt for treasure. Honestly, the old man did us a favor for beating him to the treasure and killing him.

Is he a bastard? Too much of one?

The old man is willing to trick the salaryman into going on a dangerous adventure to uncover the treasure for him, and then goes so far as to kill him and claim the treasure for himself when he succeeds. The old man is one of the only antagonistic figures in the game aside from the Yakuza and island tribesmen, and easily the most cunning of them all (which isn't saying much for a game as weird as this, but still).

But again, he's still a better person than the salaryman.

Verdict?

We've gotten keepers up from equally crazy circumstances, and I think the old man is no exception.

Edited by therealjackieboy on Mar 26th 2024 at 9:42:43 AM

"It doesn't matter anymore. You win. It is Duck Season."
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
jlvs200s from The Netherlands (Troper in training) Relationship Status: At the center of everything that happens to me
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#12155: Mar 26th 2024 at 10:24:35 AM

[tup]old man

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Owlorange1995 from Pennsylvania Since: Oct, 2016
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#12157: Mar 26th 2024 at 11:59:15 AM

[tup] Old man

For a moment I thought this was gonna be someone from the show.

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
LoadsAndLoadsOfFreeTime from Newfoundland Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In bed with a green-skinned space babe
StalkerGamer Hi! :3 Since: Dec, 2021 Relationship Status: Love is an open door
Hi! :3
#12160: Mar 26th 2024 at 3:51:58 PM

[tup] to Zhen, Luis Lopez, and Alice May.

About Robbie Rotten: Maybe ? Should we put on Music subpage since it is a music, despite being a memetic parody ? If not, then Fan Works crossover subpage

Edited by StalkerGamer on Mar 26th 2024 at 7:52:31 AM

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#12161: Mar 26th 2024 at 3:57:21 PM

It would go under Music.[down] Fan songs go to Music.

Edited by AustinDR on Mar 26th 2024 at 4:37:25 AM

Rhino8888 Since: Mar, 2020
#12162: Mar 26th 2024 at 4:31:51 PM

My problem with putting it in Music is that person who made it did not really make a new song, they just grabbed the original Big Iron and edited it so it would have different lyrics, it's really just a meme edit/video. Would still rather have it in Fan Works.

LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
#12164: Mar 26th 2024 at 5:06:44 PM

[tup] Alice May

We put songs under music, I don’t see why this would be any different just because it’s a remix.

In honor of Akira Toriyama
AutumnLeaves Since: Mar, 2014
#12165: Mar 26th 2024 at 6:13:17 PM

[tup] Luis, Alice May, the Old Man.

Got some comedy here. Pansy Parkinson from a fanfic in Russian called Madame Malfoy Or A Forced Marriage.

The Work

In this Harry Potter/Don Quixote remix, Lucius Malfoy goes crazy and thinks that he is a knight and Pansy is both his fiancee and his squire.

The Character

In postcanon, Pansy is Draco's Gold Digger mistress, and Narcissa has died. One day, when Pansy is visiting, it turns out that Lucius, whom she thought long dead or imprisoned, is very much alive but a Madman in the Attic. Thanks to Draco's oversight, Lucius bursts out of his room, sees Pansy and declares her to be his bride.

As Lucius is still formally the head of the family, Draco can't call the house elves to subdue him. He first begs and then orders Pansy to play along with Lucius's antics while Draco goes to call the healers.

At first Pansy is frightened. Lucius orders a house elf to officiate a marriage between them, and that's when Pansy forms a plan.

She plays along with Lucius's Don Quixote-style ravings as he drags her around Magical Britain, and manages to explain things to everyone they meet, sometimes with a couple of gestures. Finally, when Lucius gets to Gringotts, Pansy manages to convince him that the goal to their quest lies at St. Mungo's and gets the goblins to make them a Portkey on one of their carts.

Lucius is subdued and gets treatment, but the mediwizards say the case is hopeless. Three days later, Draco tells Pansy he'll pay her for helping him get his father back under control…

Only for her to tell that a) since he kept his father hidden and never bothered to declare him insane, he was still a capable adult legally at the time of his marriage to Pansy, which is therefore valid b) since now Lucius is declared insane, Pansy as the wife is entitled to everything he owns. She tells Draco she'll leave him the manor, but has taken all the money and jewelry and has already bought an estate on the Canary Islands, which is where she'll be leaving in an hour.

Is she magnificent?

At first she is frightened when she sees Lucius's madness and then when Draco bullies her into helping him, but then she quickly devises a plan to use the former for getting her revenge on the latter and obtaining a fortune for herself. She still feels afraid of Lucius during their "quest" across Britain (it involves declaring Rosmerta the fairest of all, duelling Hagrid, and saving Molly from the garden gnomes), but she hides it well and is ready to play along with whatever Lucius cooks up, until finally she figures out how to lure him to St. Mungo's.

Is she a bitch?

She regularly sleeps with Draco (for his money) though he's married with children, and she is perfectly ready to take advantage of Lucius's disability once she realizes what's in it for her.

Conclusion?

You decide.

Edited by AutumnLeaves on Mar 26th 2024 at 5:45:51 PM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#12166: Mar 26th 2024 at 6:18:43 PM

Hilarious [tup] to Pansy Parkinson

Edited by EmperorGeode on Mar 26th 2024 at 6:19:26 AM

DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Woagh
#12167: Mar 26th 2024 at 6:30:51 PM

Sure to Pansy.

  • Giga Bash (Pipijuras Campaign): Pipijuras is a taunt-happy alien tasked by his race to deliver a beacon to earth that'll teleport it to them, only to end up being captured by the government and brainwashed into a weapon. Breaking free after a fight with Gorogong, it beats him using the artifact he was attracted to and escapes to repair the beacon. Outwitting and outmaneuvering everything the G.T.D.I throw at it, utilizing its long-range attacks and the environment to its advantage, it eventually repairs the beacon and reaches the Giga Core, first by evading a nearby S-Class Yeti by tiring it out and then using the Giga Energy against the Core's guardian. Attaching the beacon to the core, it successfully teleports Earth right to his people, leaving it ripe for an invasion.

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jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#12168: Mar 26th 2024 at 6:42:44 PM

One last point on Oberon, it's directly due to his machinations that Albert kills him, because Albert directly fears his powers and what he can do. That is not magnificent at all. So sticking with my [tdown].

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TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
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I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
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Buzz
#12171: Mar 27th 2024 at 2:53:22 AM

Does anyone think that Machiavellian from Megamind Rules! could count? Looking at his character folder and the work page, he seems to meet all the requirements

Image Pickin' Backlog
TrippEverett Since: Feb, 2023
#12172: Mar 27th 2024 at 6:30:23 AM

Having watched the show (yeah) he is very intelligent and has the fits, so he may have a chance.

YorkobeShounen Since: Dec, 2022
#12173: Mar 27th 2024 at 7:32:17 AM

Yeah he counts apparently but good luck finding someone who wants to EP him

LoadsAndLoadsOfFreeTime from Newfoundland Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In bed with a green-skinned space babe
OldMcBrother from Earth Since: Sep, 2021
#12175: Mar 27th 2024 at 10:27:51 AM

  • Like a Dragon: Ishin!: Kondo Isami is the cunning chief of the Shinsengumi. Planning have the Emperor of Japan and the country's capital move from Kyo to Edo by setting fire to Kyo so that the Tosa Loyalists have less power, Sakamoto Ryoma hears of his plans and rejects in taking part, after which Kondo baits him into fighting him by implying he may be his adoptive father's murderer. When Ryoma's impostor attempts to spark a civil war by taking advantage of the Satcho Alliance, after hearing a suggestion from the real Ryoma, Kondo writes a letter for the shogun containing his ideas for a Great Restoration, which he eventually receives, agrees to and accepts. When Kondo is fatally attacked by Loyalist Okada Izo in his party's plan to cause a civil war, Kondo initiates his "final move", which is to have his deputy chief Hijikata Toshizo host a meeting in the Shinsengumi, in which Ito Kashitaro, who is clearly a power-hungry traitor, outs himself by accidentally revealing he was aware that Kondo was murdered. After this, it is revealed that Kondo further outplayed Ito by having Todo Heisuke get close to Ito in order to find out what his true motivations are and who he is affiliated with, which ends up being Ryoma's impostor, who plans to meet with Saigo Kichinosuke and Katsura Kogoro, meaning that Ryoma and his allies know of all the players all thanks to Kondo's planning.

Is that good or is it still too long?


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