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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
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#41201: Apr 8th 2024 at 6:28:43 AM

[up][up] We have Trigon, who is the amalgamation of the expelled evil of thousands, but still counts for this trope because his daughter/other demons like Etrigan manage to be heroes.

And like I said in the proposal, the ultimate embodiment of evil in DC, the Great Darkness, is actually a neutral force whose villainy stems from other villains trying to exploit it. Anti-Life is way more arrogant and needlessly antagonistic in comparison.

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#41203: Apr 8th 2024 at 7:02:05 AM

It’s unclear if there’s one witch or multiple tormenting the family.

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#41204: Apr 8th 2024 at 7:02:12 AM

Got a new EP to share. Really happy with this find!

What is the work?

Certain Death is a book from the Poppy Fields series by Tanya Landman - a rather grim series of kids' mystery books that nearly all revolve around murder schemes. This particular book sees Poppy and her friend Graham attending a traveling circus in their town, where an elderly local woman named Ana Kotromanik is shot dead during a trapeze performance. Peepo, a circus clown, is later found dead in his caravan, seemingly having killed himself out of guilt for accidentally killing Ana while trying to shoot his ex-wife, one of the acrobats.

Who is Drago Mehic and what has he done?

- Drago Mehic is the identity of the circus's knife-thrower, The Dashing Blade, the brother of Yuri, another worker at the circus. While Drago initially seems harmless and senile, his true nature as a mass-murdering war criminal becomes apparent in the story's denouement.

- The Mehic brothers and Ana were all from the fictional village of Stoljina in Yugoslavia, where a massacre had taken place during the Bosnian War. Both brothers, were soldiers in the military and were among those ordered to kill their own neighbours. Drago was an obedient soldier, and partook in the slaughter, being indicated to have personally killed Ana's children when Yuri was unable to after hearing her beg for their lives, with the latter deserting the army and seeking refuge in England.

- Drago expresses nothing but pride in his actions during the war, referring to his victims as filth because they were Muslim and insisting he had done nothing criminal. - Escaping to England himself to avoid being persecuted for war crimes, Drago forced Yuri to get him a job in the circus, with the arrangement working for several years until the day Ana Kotromanik, who by coincidence had also settled in Poppy’s town in England as a war refugee, came to visit the circus when it stopped there.

- Yuri immediately recognised Ana and was overcome with guilt, pleading with Drago that they needed to turn themselves in. However, Drago instead stole Yuri's gun and used it to murder Ana during the show, allowing her to see him and realise what was going to happen out of sadism.

- When Peepo learned of the crime and attempted to blackmail Drago, the war criminal mercilessly killed him too, while also expressing plans to kill Yuri too to cover up the last loose end, referring to it as an "execution" as justice for Yuri not participating in the village massacre.

- In the climax of the book, Drago corners Poppy and Graham, two pre-teens. Wanting to silence the children, Drago reveals he plans to beat them to death and make it seem as if they were crushed by falling circus equipment. Drago is completely committed to murdering the children, only being stopped when Yuri arrives on the scene and shoots his evil brother dead.

Heinousness Standard

This series has a few pieces of work amongst the villains, but most of them are simply greedy bastards willing to kill for money or are genuinely mentally ill. Drago is a virulent monster who helped slaughter a village with pride, shot a helpless old woman without hesitation, framed another man, and has no qualms about murdering his brother or two innocent children.

Mitigating Factors

Zilch, this guy is scum.

Final verdict?

Easy yes.

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#41207: Apr 8th 2024 at 7:14:32 AM

[tup] Anti-Life, Philip, Trigon, our old friend Palpy, and Drago

Edited by LoadsAndLoadsOfFreeTime on Apr 8th 2024 at 8:36:25 AM

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#41208: Apr 8th 2024 at 7:15:30 AM

Yes to Drago, Anti-Life, Palps, and Phillip (I honestly thought we got him up a while ago)

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#41209: Apr 8th 2024 at 8:11:51 AM

[tup] for the Anti-Life Equation, another Palpatine (shocking), Black Philip (weird, I was actually wondering about him the other day lol), Trigon, and Drago.

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#41210: Apr 8th 2024 at 8:16:20 AM

@acw: I have not clue on cosmic beings in general in DC. But embodiments of death can have human morality (which is why Sandman Death is Nice Girl and Nekron is pure evil). So I kinda assume this would be true for Erebus too

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#41211: Apr 8th 2024 at 9:42:57 AM

  • The Underground: The Essex Scalper is a sadistic Mad Artist who is obsessed with women’s hair. Before the events of the story, The Scalper had already murdered over 17 women and his own son, Samuel Jenkins, stuffing their bodies in a wall within Kong Studios, with their souls stuck inside the studios as deformed monsters. Gaining an obsession with Stu “2D” Pot’s hair, The Essex Scalper begins stalking them and brutally assaults the band members to get 2D’s hair, from shooting Russel’s kneecap, stabbing Murdoc in the back, forcing Noodle to jump from an elevator shaft and almost freezing 2D to death in a freezer.

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#41212: Apr 8th 2024 at 10:01:05 AM

Drago sounds like a simple keep.

Edited by Starkrafty on Apr 8th 2024 at 11:01:46 AM

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Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#41213: Apr 8th 2024 at 10:02:54 AM

[tup] Drago, and oh yeah Palpatine too, I missed him earlier

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#41214: Apr 8th 2024 at 10:05:41 AM

[tup] Drago

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#41215: Apr 8th 2024 at 10:18:38 AM

[tup] Erebos, Palps, Phillip, Trigon and Drago

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#41218: Apr 8th 2024 at 10:39:46 AM

[tup] for Drago Mehic.

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#41220: Apr 8th 2024 at 12:08:41 PM

[tup]To the Anti-Life equation, Palpatine, Black Philip, Trigon, and Drago

What is the work?

Kingdom Come is a famous DC Elseworld written by Mark Waid and impeccably drawn by Alex Ross. It centers around a conflict between the idealistic and noble old generation of superheroes, led by Superman, and the cynical and violent new generation, led by Magog. This conflict was started by the actions and death of a certain Clown Prince of Crime.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

The Joker, evidently having gotten bored of wreaking havoc in Gotham, comes to Metropolis. Going on a killing spree, Joker eventually comes to the Daily Planet, massacring 93 of the staff, including Lois Lane, with his infamous laughing gas. After getting caught by the cops, Magog executes Joker right there and then, causing the Thou Shalt Not Kill Superman to take him to court, where public opinion sides with Magog, triggering Superman's self-imposed exile.

Mitigating Factors?

Nothing personality-wise, it's the Joker.

Now, since the story is only told through two pages, there could be visibility issues. However, we explicitly see when Joker slaughtered the Daily Planet staff, and, more importantly, Joker's actions are the catalyst for the events of the book. His rampage weighs heavily on both Superman and Magog.

Also, Superman was outraged by Joker's death at Magog's hands. However, this just to show how strong his vow to hold all human life as sacred is.

Heinousness?

Now, the heinous standard is pretty high. Magog's generation causes rampant chaos and destruction in their disregard for civilian lives, eventually leading to Kansas becoming a nuclear wasteland. Lex Luthor and his circle of supervillains also brainwash Captain Marvel in an attempt to get rid of superheroes so they can take over the world. Finally, the world governments drop super-nukes in a desperate attempt to stop the superhuman war.

However, Joker is just a very twisted, man with no scientific equipment more advanced than gas that causes people to laugh to death and no plans other than causing destruction.

Verdict

I think he's a keep, but it's for you guys to decide.

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#41221: Apr 8th 2024 at 12:14:39 PM

Even with fewer resources, not sure if Joker's bad enough here.

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#41224: Apr 8th 2024 at 1:16:19 PM

If I'm not mistaken, isn't this all there is to Joker in Kingdom Come?

https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/jokerkc1.png

https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/jokerkc2.png

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